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写作部分1.文体两篇文章A.Memo, Note, E-mail, Message. 40-50个字B.Correspondence, Report, Proposal. 120-140个字2. 5分条件A.格式:应用文固定格式;语言:避免基本错误(主谓一致、时态、单复数、简单词拼写、搭配);推荐用齐头式B. 内容:广度:涵盖提纲所有内容;深度:细节、常识C. 写作对象:不能参杂个人感情色彩D. 思维模式:观点放在最前面(中心句),开门见山(先结果再原因),形式逻辑(逻辑词E. 用词:正式。
I would like to inform you of/about sth. We appreciate your efforts.F. 整体行文,段落安排Part 1Memo; Note; E-mail; MessageMemo格式:Memo全部采用齐头式向左靠To:职位+姓名(注意男女)From:姓名Date:考试当天7 Aug.,2012Subject:名词或名词性短语Note;Message格式:有两种,一种和memo一样Date:To:Body:Yours sincerelyJudeE-mail格式:To:电子邮件抄送:空Subject:名词或名词性短语Body:Yours sincerelyJude离开类:离职、出差、请假、缺席1.I'm going to somewhere for sth/to do sth.2.I'm leaving for somewhere for sth/to do sth.3.I'm planned somewhere for sth/I'm plan to somewhere to do sth(不能用于紧急事件)前面用for后面用to do;后面用to do前面用for,避免介词重复性I'm going to Paris for business. I'm going to Paris on a business trip.I'm going to meet the sales manager in the Paris branch of our company.To: Jane,SecretaryFrom: Jude, Head of ResearchDate: 20 Apr.,2012Subject: Urgent TripI'm leaving for Paris to visit Pirre Blanco tomorrow. / I am leaving tomorrow to meet PB in the Franch branch of our company.In that case, please subscribe for me a return ticket and a single room at a hotel around the branch.Also be sure to maintain the order of all the documents and make notes of all the contacts when I'm away.逻辑词:in that case; also; besides注意语气:上级对下级,不带感情色彩be sure to do/be required to公司:group,corporation; branch; company; office; firm; department职位:board chairman; board; CEO; director; manager; assistant; staff订机票:book/reserve; return/round ticket.舱位:first-class stateroom; business class订机票:confirm the ticket 改签:change the ticket接人:take up sb 送人:see off sb酒店:Hilton Restaurant; Holiday Inn订房间:single room; standard room; double room留工作:Maintained order of the documentMake notes of the contactCall me if there is an emergency.To: John,assistantFrom: Jude, managerDate: 20 Apr.,2012Subject:business tripI'm leaving for London to negotiate/talk about an significant/key/critical contract on May 20th and I'll back three days later. Please reserve for me a return air ticket and a suite at the Hilton in that period.To: my fellow/all staffFrom: Jude, commercial managerDate: 20 Apr.,2012Subject:Transfer Notice /Temporary leavingI'm writing to inform all of you about my job transference to US office, since the company has just started up business there.I'm planned to leave on 15 April, and probably stay in the US for half a year to monitor business development there.During my absence, Assistant Ms.Chris Clinton would take my charge. It's my great pleasure to have worked with you in the past few years and I sincerely hope that you could contact me through company email.Six month= half a yearA new office=start another business.时间落实,严谨不能抄袭,paraphrase;小事往大事说for a business trip.细节化发展请假类:开门见山:I would like to request time off work to do/to attained a lecture...from...to...原因:as my job is involved with A which can be learned from BPlease carefully consider my applicationI look forward to your replyTo: Chris. Line ManagerCc:Subject: Time off workI would request time off work to attend a seminar on presentation skills on March 22th for 3 days as my current job involves frequent presentations to customers which can be learnt form the seminar.Please carefully consider my request and i'm looking forward to your favorable reply. Best,John缺席类:首先致歉:I sincerely apologize for not be able to attendPlease accept my deepest apology for原因:There is some emergency in...As a ..., I could not leave this moment but have to stay with it for the company's benefits. I sent sb in my place.销售部门:order;client (vip; key; premier )To: Erica YoungCc:Subject: MeetingI sincerely apologize for not be able to attend the meeting at the head office for the reason that there is some emergency in the process of an important export order of 10 billion. As a regional sales manager, I could not leave this moment but have to stay with it for the company's benefits. In that case, I hope that you could accept my proposal of sending Mr. Smith in my placeThanksJohn告知重大事件类:I am writing to inform you of sth/about sthI could expectTo: Project teamFrom: John, project Team LeaderDate: 19 Mar.,2005Subject:Project MeetingI'm writing to inform you about the cancellation of our next project meeting on 20 Apr., as some of our members would be abroad at the moment.In that case, I would suggest another appointment at 9:00am, 27 Apr., if there is no problem with you.Any question about the agenda feel free to contact me./Do not hesitate to contact me, and I would take full consideration of it.Radio advertising : 司机、老年人、学生I'm writing to inform you about the radio advertising campaign for the company's newly developed washing power"super white", which would begin early next month and last for 3 months.After systematic analysis, radio has been selected as the main channel for advertising, since our market survey shows most housewives, our target customers, are exposed to radio programs for 2-3 hours per day, highest among all media.The advertising campaign is supposed to enhance the new brand's publicity, and thus bringing up sales revenue above... in the coming months.Best,Kelly1.从结构上看,英语结构都是唯一不变的结构,中心句+1、2、3。