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集体备课专题：书面表达

课时备课一 记事类

步骤一：话题分析

近几年记事类话题成为中考热点，一般分为以下四种：以图表数据提供情景的，以图画提供情景的，以表格提示或文字提示提供情景的，以热点话题提供情景的，本课时着重从第三类入手，其他几类在下面的课时进行训练。以表格提示或文字提示提供情景的，重在“发挥”。写作时把这些提提示加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，文章要覆盖各个提示的要点。

评分说明：

要求考生能用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表达所提示的内容。分四档评分：

1、短文通顺完整, 表达清楚, 语言基本无误, 17 — 20分；

2、短文较通顺完整, 表达基本清楚, 语言有少量错误, 12 —16分；

3、能写明基本要点, 短文不够通顺完整, 语言有较多错误, 但尚能达意, 6 —11分；

4、仅能写明部分要点, 短文不完整, 语言错误多, 影响意思表达, 0 — 5分。

注意：

1、内容要点可用不同方式表达

2、对紧扣主题适当发挥的应予以鼓励

3、卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加1-2分

步骤二：例文研析

【2014年江苏省南通市中考】

假设某中学生英文报开展关于计算机与学生生活的征文活动，请你根据下表所提示的要点，以Computer in my life为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述计算机在你生活中的用途，并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。

用途 学习 搜集资料；拓展阅读（或自拟内容） 交流 传递信息；探讨问题（或自拟内容）

生活 欣赏音乐；购买商品（或自拟内容）

其他 （请考生自拟一点内容）

感受 计算机对你生活的影响（请考生自拟一点内容）

注意：

1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。

Computer in my life

The computer has become an important part of my life.

思路点拨：

• 审：

假设某中学生英文报开展关于计算机与学生生活的征文活动，请你根据下表所提示的要点，以Computer in my life为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述计算机在你生活中的用途，并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。（学生说）

二、列:

体裁：说明文

人称：第三人称

时态：一般现在时（学生说）

词汇积累：（让学生说，拼词汇）

use ，search for information ，do some further reading. With the help of ，get more knowledge ，communicate with ，by email， discuss with， enjoy

the music ，shop，make a difference to .

句子积累： With the help of computer，I can get more knowledge easily .

It brings me a ... life.

写作导图：

三、连：

恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。

not only ... but also ...，What’s more，Moreover，In a word，all in all

四、美

选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。

Computer in my life

The computer has become an important part of my life. Usually I use the

computer to search for information and do some further reading. With the

help of computer，I can get more knowledge easily in my free time. I not

only communicate with my teachers and classmates by email，but also discuss

questions with them online.【高分句型】 What’s more，I can enjoy the music

online and shopping on the Internet makes my life much easier. Sometimes

CD-ROM s help me learn English and make me relaxed. Moreover，I can take

part in some kinds of activities online.

In a word，the computer is really of great help to me. It brings me a

more meaningful and colorful life.

步骤三：背诵好词好句

步骤四：课堂实践

【2017年山东省东营市中考英语试题】书面表达满分20分 每个人都有各种各样的习惯，有些习惯能够助你成长，有些习惯会妨碍你进步。请结合个人实际情况，以“My habits”为题，写一篇短文。

内容包括：

1.你有什么好习惯，请举例说明该习惯使你得到了哪些益处；

2.你有什么不良习惯，该习惯对你有什么影响，你将如何改进。

要求： 1.100词左右； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

范文：

My habits

Habits play an important role in our life. Everybody has both good habits

and bad ones. So do I. I have many good habits. One of them is reading. It

brings me fun, opens my mind and helps me make friends. Last year, I joined a

reading club. We often shared ideas about the books we read. Later we became

friends. This makes me happy. As for bad habits, I don’t like to tidy my

room. So it’s hard for me to find my things. That brings me lots of trouble.

I’m going to put my things in different boxes. Habits can help or trouble us.

What will you do?

步骤五：模拟训练

（2017年滨州市中考题）现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦而奋斗．请根据下列图示，谈谈以下几种职业怎样做贡献的．作为学生，你又该怎么办？

要求：

1、短文需包含提示要点，并适当发挥；

2、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

3、语句通顺，结构合理，书写规范；

4、词数：80词左右．短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．

Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the

Chinese Dream．

【分析】【高分句型一】

In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants为了生产足够的水果和蔬菜，他们忙于种植．

in order to do sth为了做某事，表示目的．

【高分句型二】

I think①we should study hard ②to get rich knowledge ③so as to make contributions to our

country我认为我们应该努力学习获取丰富的知识，为我们国家做贡献．

①think后是省略了that的宾语从句，

②动词不定式作为目的状语．

③so as to do sth为了做某事．表示目的．

【范文】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and

achieve the Chinese Dream．

In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In

order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．（农民）

Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and

night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（医生）

In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）

As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and

raise our living standards．（科学家）

As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich

knowledge so as to make contributions to our country．（学生）

【点评】学生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同

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