(一 )如何写提建议的短文
在书面表达中，经常会出现针对某人，某事提建议的写作要求。在写此类短文时，常常注意
以下几点：
① 掌握常用句型，根据提供的情景、提示等，明确需要提的建议，咱展开合理的写作
要求语气委婉、有礼貌。②在写作过程中，要先对表述的观点表达自己的看法，然后提出自己
的建议和意见，③注意所提出的建议和意见要有条理性，逻辑性。④最后还要有总结的语言
来归纳自己的观点。
提建议的常用句型 :
1.You should/shouldn't do sth你.应该、不应该做某事
2.Why not /Why don't you do sth.为什么不做某事呢？
3.Let's do sth.让我们做某事吧
4.It is a good idea to do sth. 去做某事这个主意不错
5.You'd better do sth你.最好做某事
6.What/How about doing sth.做怎么样？
7.It is +形容词 for sb. to do sth 做某事对某人来说是非常的
典例精析
假如你是李玲，是英国中学生露西Lucy 的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封
70词左右的回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，告诉她应该做什么，不应该做什
么。
Dear Li Ling,
These days Tom Cruise, the film star, always comes into my mind. I think of him night and day. I just sit in my room and watch videos of his films again and again. I 've written hundreds of letters to him and sent e-mails to his fan club,but all I get back are only photos with his names on them. I dream that some day I'll meet him and that he'll feel the same way about me . I don't want to learn my lessons any more, but I'll have final exams next month.
I'm thinking of running away to Hollywood to meet him. Can you help me with the problem?
Yours,
Lucy
范文模板：
Hi ， Lucy,
Nice to hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and there's nothing wrong with that. I understand you. But I don't think what you do is right since you are a student. You'd better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may also tell your problem to your parents and teachers. I 'm sure they'll help you. Running away to Hollywood is a wrong idea. Work hard on your lessons and get ready for the exams. Your future is in you mind.
Yours,
Li Ling
练习：
据报道，中学生的身体素质有所下降，这一情况已经引起了全社会的关注和教育部门的
高度重视。请你根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇80 次左右的短文。
要点：⑴锻炼身体的好处： to be strong, healthy ,energetic...
⑵锻炼身体的方式：playing ball games, running, swimming...
⑶ 对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议（至少写两点）
要求：⑴内容必须包括以上全部要点，课适当发挥；
⑵ 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
⑶ 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整；
⑷ 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名
Health is very important to us teenagers.
(二 )如何描写发生在我们周围的事件
近几年各地中考英语试卷中写作题材大多是比较热门的事件，其主要的特点是贴近时代，
贴近学生们的日常生活。写我们周围发生的事件的步骤。首先，要明确每个人都有可能遇到这样或那样的困难，写作时要点明是什么具体困难，产生这种困难的原因和结果；其次，要学会勇敢地面对困难，以积极的态度去克服困难，或鼓励他人勇敢地面对困难，并给出解决
这些困难的方法；最后，表达对未来的美好憧憬。
描写发生在周围事件的常用句型
1.I am sorry to hear/know ... 听到 /知道我很遗憾 /难过。
2.We will try our best to ... 我们会尽力
3.We are sure that... 我们确信
4.I believe you can overcome the difficulties with your confidence and firm will.我相信，你
能用自信和坚定的信念克服困难。
5.Best wishes to you! 祝福你们！
典例精析：
俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香” 。在我们的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，
我们会需要他人的帮助，但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。
请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：⑴无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
⑵ 文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；
⑶ 文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；
⑷词数 80 左右。
As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life ,we will meet with a lot
of trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Grade Eight. Li Hua , one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on ,whenever he had problems, he would asked me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved, too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.
练习
在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周，英国友好
学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping each other makes the word wonderful" 为题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是李智，要参加演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。提示：（1）帮助同学——友谊；（2）帮助老人——快乐（ 3）帮助病人——幸福；（4）帮助别人，体会······
要求： 80 词左右，正文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Helping each other makes the word wonderful
Hello,everyone. I'm Li Zhi. It's nice to speak about help here.
