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层级三文顺形范夺满分——“起承转合”有讲究“起、承、转、合”是一篇好文章的普适架构。
“起”是文章的开头，讲究简洁有力、引人入胜；“承”“转”是文章的中间部分，讲究内容充实、层次清晰；“合”是文章的结尾部分，讲究照应主题、回味深远。
一篇错落有致、行文流畅的作文不仅能从视觉上吸引阅卷老师，更能从文笔上打动阅卷老师，作文取得高分甚至是满分也就在情理之中！学案(一) 引人入胜的开头与回味无穷的结尾纵观近几年的高考英语书面表达的命题思路和趋势，均可以划分为三个部分，即开头、正文和结尾。
尤其是在近几年的高考英语书面表达已经不再给出开头和结尾的背景下，文章的开头和结尾的作用就更加明显了。
一个好的开头自然会给人留下好的印象，引起读者的阅读兴趣；而一个好的结尾就是点睛之笔，起到引发读者共鸣，升华文章主题的作用。
由此可见，文章开头和结尾的表达是否准确到位、安排是否得体，在整篇文章中具有举足轻重的作用，直接影响到整篇文章的质量。
一、引人入胜的开头一般来说，高考英语书面表达常见的开头形式大致有以下几种：1．开门见山式文章开头开门见山，用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题，使读者了解文章要谈论什么。
多见于邀请信和求助信。
①I am writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting exhibition to be held this Sunday.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)我写信是想邀请你参观本周日举行的中国剪纸艺术展。
②I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.(2017·北京高考书面表达)我很高兴收到你的来信，知道你要来中国。
2．背景介绍式这类开头多用于要求就某一社会现象进行分析的书面表达。
文章开头往往要交代事件或者社会现象发生的背景，比如网络投票、公共场所的不文明现象、环境保护、节约型社会建设活动等。
第一讲词汇升级特训【换词大法】有意识地将“第一反响词〞代替成高级单词！1 、gooda)excellent 优秀的b)outstanding 优秀的，优秀的c)terrific 优秀的d)wonderful 优秀的e)kind, patient, knowledgeable, warm-heartedf)beneficial 有益的g) amazing令人惊喜的/ amazed感觉惊喜的2 、bada)terrible 糟糕的b)tiring 令人劳累的 /tired 感觉劳累的c) disappointing令人无望的/disappointed感觉无望的d) harmful有害的3 、beautifula)attractive 有吸引力b)appealing 有吸引力c)elegant 优雅的d)gorgeous 优雅的e) of great beautyi.This picture is of great beauty.ii.I like this picture of great beauty. 4 、difficulta)challenging 有挑战性的b)of great difficultyi.Learning new words is of great difficulty for me.ii.It is of great difficulty for me to master new words. 5 、differenta)of great difference6 、 importanta)of great importanceb)vital 至关重要的c)significant 至关重要的d)essential 必要的7 、we/usa)we/us high school studentsb)we/us teenagersc)we/us Chinese young generationd) we/us modern individuals我们今世的个人e) we/us English learners同位语： A=B ， A 和 B 都是名词8 、should提建议专用句型a) ought to do sthb)be supposed to do sthc)sb had better do sthd)真的到了做某事的了：It is high time that sb did sth.〔虚气〕eg: It is high time that you got up!e)若是我是你的，我就会⋯ . If Iwere you, I would do sth.eg: If I were you, I would get up immediately.f)Why not do sth?g)Why don ’t you do sth?h)It is beneficial for you to do sth.i)It is wise of you to do sth.j)Do sth! 直接用祈使句提建9 、wanta)would like to do sthb)desire to do sth. 期望做某事c)have a great desire to do sth.有期望做某事d)be longing/thirsty for doing sth.期望做某事e)plan to do sth划做某事f)tend to do sth有向做某事g)can ’t wait to do sth.急不行待做某事10、 like/love/enjoya)be fond of sth/doing sth.b)be crazy about sth/doing sth.c)be interested in sth/doing sth.11 、 happya)joyful 高的b)delighted 高的c) of great happiness有很大幸福感的12 、sb remember stha)sb keep in mind sth.b)sth occur to sb. 某人想起了什么注意：种表达方式，属于英中的“物称主〞用法，亦称“无灵主〞用法。
学案(二) 词顺意畅的衔接衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。
在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡(连接)性词语是非常必要的。
高中阶段应该掌握的过渡(连接)性词语归纳如下：一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语①To begin with, the final exam of this term is around the corner, so I am busy preparing for it.(2017·天津高考书面表达)首先，本学期的期末考试就要到了，因此我正忙于准备考试。
②Recently, the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school, which arouses a heated debate.近来，教育部要求上学期间加强学生劳动教育，这引起了激烈的讨论。
[即时演练] 补全句子1．(2015·湖南高考满分作文)现在，我想与你们分享一下我的经历。
Now,_I’d like to share my experience with you.2．随着互联网的发展，电脑在人们的生活中起着重要作用。
With_the_development_of_the_Internet,_computers play an important role in people’s life.二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语①Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received.(2017·北京高考书面表达)几天后，当视频在毕业典礼上播放时，它受到了好评。
学案(六) 避免头重脚轻的it句式it除了用作人称代词外，还常用作形式主语或形式宾语，有时也可以用在一些固定句型中。
灵活地运用it句式可使作文更高级，结构更紧凑。
一、it作形式主语的常用句型在英语中，为了避免头重脚轻，经常运用it作形式主语，而把真正的主语后置，作真正主语的常为动词不定式(短语)或从句，有时也可用动名词(短语)。
1．It takes (sb.) some time/energy/effort ... to do sth.“花某人的时间/精力做某事”It takes me about an hour to study English every day.我每天大约花一个小时学习英语。
2．It is/was＋形容词＋(of/for sb.) to do sth.It’s necessary for you to have a good knowledge of Tang Poetry.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)对唐诗有很好的了解对你来说是很有必要的。
3．It is/was＋形容词＋that ...It is necessary that we students should get well prepared for their future.我们学生应该为将来做好准备是很有必要的。
4．It is a virtue and tradition for sb. to do sth.“做某事是某人的优良传统和美德”It is a virtue and tradition for us Chinese people to help those in need.帮助需要帮助的人是我们中华民族的优良传统和美德。
5．It’s really a good idea that ...“……的确是个好主意”It’s really a good idea that we should spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)我们应该花点时间简要了解唐朝的历史，这的确是个好主意。
学案(七) 言简意明的非谓语动词众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而作文中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。
而恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样、句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意明。
一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换，使其成为较高级的表达方式。
转换时可采用“三步法”：[示例]第一步：写出两个简单句。
①I want to improve myself by reading some books.②The books were written in the Tang Dynasty.第二步：让句①作主句，用非谓语动词改写句②。
第三步：让句②作定语，由于其动词write与主语the books之间为被动关系，故用过去分词短语作定语。
I want to improve myself by reading some books written in the Tang Dynasty.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)其他几个转换的例子如下：①Mount Tai stands in Shandong Province. It has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it.→Standing in Shandong Province, Mount Tai has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attac hed to it.(2017·北京高考书面表达)②In the newspaper of our school there is a column called “Foreign Culture”．It aims to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.→In the newspaper of our school there is a column called “Foreign Culture”，aiming to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.(2015·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)[即时演练] 用非谓语动词进行句型转换1．All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom.→All_the_people_here_like_the_novel_written_by_Tom.(用过去分词作定语)2．The boy came to school late again. This made the teacher very angry.→The_boy’s_coming_to_school_late_again_made_the_teacher_very_angry.(用动名词作主语)3．The students were making the most of time. They wanted to finish the work earlier.→The_students_were_making_the_most_of_time_so_as_to_finish_the_work_earlie r.(用动词不定式作目的状语)二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词，并把握好动词的时态和语态即可，所以只需两步。
四、高考常用写作模板及经典句型高考常用写作模板对比观点题型(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人认为……2. 另一些人认为……3. 我的看法……The topic of ——(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ——(支持A 的理由一). What is more, ——(理由二). Moreover, ——(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly, ——(支持B的理由一). Secondly (Besides), ——(理由二). Thirdly (Finally), ——(理由三).From my point of view, I think ——(我的观点). The reason is that——(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2) 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点。
Some people believe that——(观点一). For example, they think——(举例说明)．And it will bring them——(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, ——(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ——(反对的理由二)．From all what I have said, I agree to the thought that——(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述。
不落俗套的亮点词汇[课时提能训练]Ⅰ.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加彩部分1．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) S o, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class.Therefore;_make_preparations_for2．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)In order to get a better understanding of Tang Poetry, I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.acquire_3．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.various/a_range_of4．(2016·北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with5．(2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following.as_follows6．(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things ...made_up_my_mind 7．As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.are_supposed_to8．There’s no harm in your staying up late sometimes.occasionally/once_in_a_while9．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challenging10．So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model student.intends_to Ⅱ.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。
第二讲句子如何写美第1课时从形式上错落有致写作时应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、复杂句和复合句并用，还可以使用简化句等，这样可以增加文章亮点。
一、让简单句“靓”起来→扩写简单句在简单句的基础上充分利用形容词、副词、定语从句和状语从句等来充实句子，让句子体现作者较高的修辞意识。
He is sleeping.→He is sleeping in class.(添加状语)→He is sleeping in the English class.(添加定语)→He is sleeping soundly in the English class.(添加状语)→He is sleeping soundly in the English class when t he teacher calls his name.(添加when连接的状语从句)→He, who attended his friend’s birthday party till midnight yesterday, is sleeping soundly in the English class when the teacher calls his name.(添加who 引导的定语从句)注意：扩写句子时有一点很关键，即要明晰句子的主要成分，并搞清单词的词性，如：它是名词还是动词，是形容词还是副词。
二、让句子“瘦”下来→高级简单句有些句子过于冗长，让句子显得不够简洁，如果用单词、介词短语、非谓语动词等简化句子，可使句子变得更加优美。
1．用单词简化句子As he was tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on.→Tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on.2．用介词短语简化句子We will not finish the task if you do not help us.→Without your help, we will not finish the task.3．用非谓语动词简化句子①Mary came late, which made her teacher angry.→Mary’s coming late made her teacher angry.②Because he did not know what to do, he had to ask the teacher for help.→Not knowing what to do, he had to ask the teacher for help.4．用并列结构简化句子I am a music lover. Jack is also a music lover.→Both Jack and I are music lovers.三、交叉使用长句与短句在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好，正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短句，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。
提分秘籍十句作文法是有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高写作水平。
其基本模式为：第一段为开头，包括两句。
第一句为主题句，点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。
两者关系也可倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句点明主题。
第二段为正文，共七句。
第三句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关或一致。
第四至八句为扩展句(支撑句) ，说明和支持本段的主题。
第九句为照应句，用来回扣第二段的开头。
句与句之间要注意好过渡，以使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。
第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句，它将前面的内容总结为一个结果，表明自己的论点。
要提高语言表达的档次，在句式运用上就不能一味地使用简单句和陈述句，而应该根据实际情况灵活运用所学的各种句式。
丰富的句式有助于考生在高考中出类拔萃，赢得高分。
另外，十句和三段式书面表达方法只是一种简单实用的形式，可以有很多的变通。
例如：每一段的句子完全可以根据情况和需要进行调整，最后一段的句子完全没必要只有一句话，当然，又臭又长的结尾和云里雾里的开头都是让人讨厌和出力不讨好的事情。
一、高考英语作文的过渡及开头句1.过渡词要学会使用过渡词。
过渡词犹如桥梁”和粘合剂”恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅。
常用的过渡词有：递进型：also, besides, what' s ore, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what' w orse, worse still, to make matters/things worse, not only …butalso 等解释型：that is (to say), i n other words, or, i n fact, in reality, as a matter of fact 等转折型：however, but, yet, n evertheless, in stead, on the con trary, on the other hand 等列举型:firstly …sec on dly …fi naoy,the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for ano ther (thing)等因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result举例型：for example, for instanee, such as, that is, like, take …for example 等因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so that, so that 等让步型：though, although, in spite of, despite, even though, even if 等顺序型：first …next …athen …fin ally,first …then …aftthrat …fin ally等并歹U型：and, both …and,or, either …oras well as 等时间型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ , hardly …whenno sooner …than, beabout to do something when …be on the point of doing something when …等总结型：in a/one word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion, every coins has two sides见解型：as for me , in my opinion, person ally speak ing, as far as I am concerned , I ' imure 等条件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等2. 开头句论述的展开提出观点：No one would deny that …Now it is widely believed that …When it comes to …some think …There is a public debate today that...A is a common way of … but is it a wise one?Recently the problem has been brought into focus that+ 同位语从句……Different people hold different opinions.Opinions are divided.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …With the rapid improvement in …/growingawareness of …more and more••(e.g. With the rapid improvement in building industry, more and more structures are being erected to set the people ‘s minds at ease.) Recently, sth./the problem of … hasbeen brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern ••( e.g. Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments worldwide are committed to finding useful solutions. )In the past few years ，there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in …( e.g. In the past ten years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of species. )Nowadays, more/most important/dangerous for our society is ••(e.g. Nowadays, m ost dangerousfor our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles. )Now there is a growing awareness that+ 同位语从句...It is time we explore the truth of ...进一步提出观点：…ofthem hold the opinion that ….（不同观点）…ofthem are in favor of the idea that 不同观点）People who are for/against the idea think …（不同观点）However, each coin has two sides.（不同观点）Different from those … …., peoplethink ….（不同观点）On the other hand,…people object that （有些人反对道…）.（不同观点）A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...Besides, other reasons are...提出假想例子的方式：Suppose that...Just imagine what would be like if...It is reasonable to expect...It is not surprising that...举普通例子：For example（instance）,...... such as A,B,C and so on （so forth）We can take something for example.A particular example for this is...引用：One of the greatest early writers said ..."Knowledge is power", such is the remark of ...As somebody once put it, “…”"...". How often we hear such words like these.提出原因：There are many reasons for ...Why ... ? For one thing,... ; for another thing, …The answer to this problem involves many factors.Most people would agree that...Some people may n eglect that in fact...Others suggest that...Part of the expla natio n is...进行对比：The adva ntages for A outweigh the disadva ntages of...Although A enjoys a dist inct adva ntage ...In deed , A has more adva ntages tha n B whe n sth is concern ed.A maybe ... , but it has the disadva ntage that...承上启下：To un dersta nd the truth of ..., it is also importa nt to see...A study of ... will make this point clear让步：Certa inly, B has its own adva ntages, such as...I do not deny that A has its own merits.结尾：From what has bee n discussed above, we may safely draw the con clusi on that ...In summary, it is wiser of somebody to do someth ingIn short...注（图表型）According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that...As can be see n from the table/graph/figure, there is an obvious and rapid in crease/decrease/decli ne/favorable （an un favorable） cha nge in...As we can see from the table/graph/form /figure above, great cha nges have take n place in... over the period of time from... （年份）to...（年份）The table/graph shows that there is a（n） declining/increasing trend of ...from... （年份）to...（年份）Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that... 二"怎样使用较丰富的句式方法一：使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档方法二：巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力方法三：尝试多样化表达方式，包括无灵主语1. 感叹句1) How happy I was when I received your letter.2) What a kind boy he is!3) How disappointed he was!2. 强调句It was this young boy that helped the old granny.3. 倒装句1) Only in this way can you solve this problem.2) There comes the police car.3) Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4. 省略句They read while walking or riding on a bus.5. with 短语I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street, with a handbag in her hand.6. 定语从句，特别是高级定语从句，以及非限制性定语从句。
学案(四) 吸引眼球的定语从句定语从句的正确使用能够比较明显地反映出考生对于语言具有较高的掌握能力，所以建议考生一定要在写作中至少使用一个恰到好处的定语从句。
一、定语从句的类型1．关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who, whom, whose, that, which, as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。
①Secondly, you will make some good friends who are also interested in playing table tennis.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)第二，你会交到一些好朋友，他们也很喜欢打乒乓球。
②What I want to stress is that I have already been a volunteer for the 13thNational Games which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin.(2017·天津高考书面表达)我想强调的是我已成为八月底将在天津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者。
③As the old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”常言道：“熟能生巧。
”2．关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when, where, why引导的定语从句。
①We a re to meet on Sunday morning in the People’s Park, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.我们将于星期天上午在人民公园见面，那里空气新鲜，风景美丽。
②I think the reason why you are always angry may be the high pressure ofstudy.(2014·安徽高考满分作文)我认为你总是发脾气的原因可能是学习上的巨大压力。
3．“介词＋which/whom”引导的定语从句Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of eve ry aspect of school life.(2017·北京高考书面表达)搜集材料花了我们整整一周的时间，在此期间我们采访了老师并拍摄了学校生活的各个方面。
[即时演练] 用适当的关系词填空1．(2017·浙江高考应用文写作)Our science teacher will serve as our guide, whois expected to tell us something interesting about the Tiantai Shan.2．(2016·天津高考单选)We will put off the picnic in the park until next week,when the weather may be better.3．(2015·福建高考满分作文)Only those who spare no effort to confront problems can achieve what they long for.4．During holiday seasons, I will live in the countryside, where air is freshand people are friendly.5．English is a language shared by several diverse cultures, each of which uses it differently.二、定语从句的写法定语从句是比较难掌握而又是考生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句，在写作时可采用“三步法”：[示例]第一步：写出两个简单句。
①The foreigner is from Canada.②He visited our class yester day.第二步：在句①中找出一处要修饰的词汇：the foreigner。
第三步：用句②充当定语从句，the foreigner为先行词指人，句②中的代词he指代the foreigner且在句子中作主语，故用who或that作关系词。
The foreigner who/that visited our class yesterday is from Canada.[即时演练]用定语从句将下列每组简单句合并为一个复合句1．This is the best method. It can be used against pollution.→This_is_the_best_method_that_can_be_used_against_pollution.2．I’ve always longed for the days. I will be able to be independent then.→I’ve_always_longed_for_the_days_when_I_will_be_able_to_be_independent.3．I will go on a trip to Sichuan. There are a great number of places of interest in Sichuan.→I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places ofinterest.4．I have a friend. Her father is an engineer.→I_have_a_friend_whose_father_is_an_engineer.5．Through the course of my s chooling, I met many t eachers. Two of them influenced me greatly.→Through_the_course_of_my_schooling,_I_met_many_teachers,_two_of_whom_influenced_me_greatly.三、定语从句的常用句型1．As we all know .../As is known to all ... “众所周知……”As we all know/As is known to all, the moon travels round the earth once every month.众所周知，月球每月绕地球转一圈。
2．As sb. puts it ... “按照某人所说的……”As he often puts it, university education determines one’s future.按照他常说的，大学教育决定一个人的命运。
3．such ... as ... “像……这样的；诸如此类的……”We have found such materials as are used in their factory.我们已经找到了像他们工厂里用的那种材料。
4．the same ... as .../the same as ... “像……一样的”Her manner and attitudes towards him were quite the same as she had always been.她对他的方式和态度与以前完全一样。
5．one of the＋复数名词＋定语从句“……中的一个”As far as I know, your sister is one of the students who have passed the exam.据我所知，你妹妹是通过考试的学生之一。
6．the only one of the＋复数名词＋定语从句“……中唯一的一个”Mr. Green was the only one of the workers that was invited to Beijing.格林先生是这些工人中唯一一个被邀请去北京的人。
[即时演练] 补全句子1．(2015·福建高考满分作文)我们大家都知道，这幅画讲述的是古代中国的一个故事。
As_we_all_know,_the picture tells a story of ancient China.2．那些对世界做出重大贡献的人应受到极大的尊重。
Such people as_have_made_great_contributions_to_the_world should be greatly respected.3．长城是吸引大批游客的世界著名建筑之一。
The Great Wall is one_of_the_world-famous_buildings_that_attract lots ofvisitors.四、定语从句写作时需避免的几种情况1．误用关系词①误：I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.正：I live in Beijing, which is the capital of China.②误：I have a friend, who’s name is Liu Mei.正：I have a friend, whose name is Liu Mei.2．句子成分残缺①误：There were many students took part in the English competition.正：There were many students who took part in the English competition.②误：The last one leaves the classroom please close the windows.正：The last one who leaves the classroom please close the windows.3．有多余的代词或副词①误：As can be seen from the picture, that a sad boy stands between his angry parents.正：As can be seen from the picture, a sad boy stands between his angry parents.②误：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood.正：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up in my childhood.4．混淆定语从句与并列句①误：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, it does great harm to people’s health.正：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, which/and it does great harm to people’s health.②误：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river, it didn’t help.正：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river, which/but it didn’t help.[即时演练] 单句改错1．There are three people in my family and I’m the only one child, who is very common in Chinese families.who→which2．Travelling abroad, you should follow the customs of the country where youare visiting.去掉where或where→which/that 3．Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school students.that→which4．I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitarstore.that→which5．When you read the book, you’d better make a mark that you have a question.that→where6．On the third floor there are two rooms, one of them is used as a meeting room.them→which 7．The couple will fly to France for their honeymoon on their first stop, which they plan to stay for three days.which→where或在which前加in8．I gave that boy so difficult a math problem which he couldn’t work out.which→as。
