2011年MBA联考中文写作解析及参考范文
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2011年1月MBA联考综合写作真题及参考答案四、写作:第56~57题,共65分。
其中论证有效性分析30分,论说文35分,请写在答题纸指定的位置上。
56.论证有效性分析:分析下述论证中存在的缺陷和漏洞,写一篇600字左右的文章,对该论证的有效性进行分析和评论。
(论证有效性分析的一般要点是:概念特别是核心概念的界定和使用是否准确并前后一致,有无各种明显的路基错误,论证的证据是否成立并支持结论,结论成立的条件是否充分等如果你要从股市中赚钱,就必须低价买进股票,高价卖出股票,这是人人都明白的基本道理,但是,问题的关键是在于如何判断股价的高低。
只有正确地判断股价的高低,上述的基本道理才有意义,否则,就毫无实用价值。
股价的高低是一个相对的概念,只有通过比较才能显现。
一般来说,要正确判断某一股票的价格高低,唯一的途径就是看它的历史表现,但是,有人在判断当前某一股价的高低时,不注重股票的历史表现,而知注重股票今后的走势,这是一种危险的行为。
因为股票的历史表现是一种客观事实,客观事实具有无可争辩的确定性;股票的今后走势只是一种主观预测,主观预测具有极大的不确定性,我们怎么可以只凭主观预测而不顾客观事实呢?再说,股价的未来走势充满各种变数,它的涨和跌不是必然的,而是或然的。
我们只能借助概率进行预测。
假如宏观经济、市场态势和个股表现均好,它的上涨概率就大;假如宏观经济、市场态势和个股表现均不好,它的上涨概率就小;假如宏观经济、市场态势和个股表现不相一致,它的上涨概率就需要酌情而定。
由此可见,要从股市获取利益,第一是要掌握股价涨跌的概率,第二还是要掌握股价涨跌的概率,第三也还是要掌握股价涨跌的概率。
掌握了股价涨跌的概率,你就能赚钱;否则,你就会赔钱。
【参考答案】1. “要正确判断某一股票的价格高低,唯一的途径就是看它的历史表现”,显然欠妥当,股票价格的高低由多种要素影响构成,论证者显然忽略其他影响要素。
2.“只注重股票今后的走势,这是一种危险的行为。
作文模板(社会现象)With the advent of information era, (话题) has come into our focus, which arouses an increasing amount of attention. Well, for me, I maintain that (我的观点) , the following two reasons need our attention.To begin with, it is human’s misleading behavior that leads to the phenomenon. For instance, (举例) In addition, the improper tackling measures worsen the fact. For example. (举例) And then, we have to do something to cope with the situation, such as arousing the public attention and enacting the new rules to regulate it.According to what I have discussed above, a conclusion can be safely made that a (重述观点)My view on fake CommoditiesWith the development of market-oriented economy, the increasing of fake commodities has become one of the serious social problems. It is necessary that strong actions be taken to rule fake commodities out. /On one hand, fake commodities have harmed consumers’ interests, which even have deprived consumers of their lives. On the other hand, fake commodities may damage the business prospect for producers in the long run and even throw the society and markets into disorder./( Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society. On the one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the market. On the other hand, the prevalence of such products has hindered interpersonal relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality. As a consequence, they have wasted exhaustible resources, endangered people’s precious life and health, and in the long run eroded public trust。
2011年10月MBA联考(综合能力)真题试卷(题后含答案及解析) 题型有:1. 问题求解 2. 条件充分性判断 3. 逻辑推理 4. 写作问题求解本大题共15小题,每小题3分,共45分。
下列每题给出的五个选项中,只有一项是符合试题要求的。
1.已知某种商品的价格从一月份到三月份的月平均增长速度为10%,那么该商品三月份的价格是其一月份价格的( ).A.21%B.110%C.120%D.121%E.133.1%正确答案:D解析:(1+10%)2=1.21=121%.2.含盐12.5%的盐水40千克蒸发掉部分水分后变成了含盐20%的盐水,则蒸发掉的水分重量为( )千克.A.19B.18C.17D.16E.15正确答案:E解析:设蒸发的水分重量为x千克,则3.为了调节个人收入,减少中低收入者的赋税负担,国家调整了个人工资薪金所得税的征收方案,已知原方案的起征点为2 000元/月,税费分九级征收,前四级税率如表1所列.新方案的起征点为3500元/月,税费分七级征收,前三级税率如表2所列.若某人在新方案下每月缴纳的个人工资薪金所得税是345元,则此人每月缴纳的个人工资薪金所得税比原方案减少了( )元.A.825B.480C.345D.280E.135正确答案:B解析:先计算出两种方案的区间值,见表3、表4:由新方案下每月缴纳的个人工资薪金所得税是345元,得出他的工资薪金为4500+3500=8000(元),在老方案下为25+150+450+20%×(6000-5000)=825(元),相差480元.4.一列火车匀速行驶时,通过一座长为250米的桥梁需要10秒钟,通过一座长为450米的桥梁需要15秒钟,则该火车通过长为1050米的桥梁需要( )秒.A.22B.25C.28D.30E.35正确答案:D解析:通过对比发现火车通过200米的路程需要5秒钟,则火车速度为40米/秒,火车长为40×10-250=150(米),则火车通过1050米的桥梁需要时间为=30(秒).5.打印一份材料,若每分钟打30个字,需要若干小时打完,当打到此材料的时,打字效率提高了40%,结果提前半小时打完,这份材料的字数是( )个.A.4650B.4 800C.4 950D.5100E.5 250正确答案:E解析:设这份材料的字数是x,则6.若等比数列{an}满足a2a4+2a3a5+a2a8=25,且a1>0,则a3+a5=( ).A.8B.5C.2D.9E.1正确答案:B解析:a2a4+2a3a5+a2a8=25(a3+a5)2=5,由于a1>0,则a3+a5>0,a3+a5=5.7.某地区平均每天产生生活垃圾700吨,由甲、乙两个处理厂处理,甲厂每小时可处理垃圾55吨,所需费用为550元;乙厂每小时可处理垃圾45吨,所需费用为495元,如果该地区每天的垃圾处理费不能超过7370元,那么甲厂每天处理垃圾的时间至少需要( )小时.A.6B.7C.8D.9E.10正确答案:A解析:设甲厂每天处理垃圾的时间是x小时,乙厂每天处理垃圾的时间是y 小时,则8.若三次方程ax3+bx2+cx+d=0的三个不同实根x1,x2,x3满足x1+x2+x3=0,x1x2x3=0,则下列关系式中恒成立的是( ).A.ac=0B.ac<0C.ac>0D.a+c<0E.a+c>0正确答案:B解析:显然有一个根为0,不妨设x3=0,则x1+x2=0,可以算出b=0,d=0,即9.若等差数列an满足5a7-a3-12=0,则=( ).A.15B.24C.30D.45E.60正确答案:D解析:5a7-a3-12=05(a8-d)-(a8-5d)-12=0a8=3,则有10.10名网球选手中有2名种子选手,现将他们分成两组,每组5人,则2名种子选手不在同一组的概率为( ).A.B.C.D.E.正确答案:C解析:分子为:从8个人中选出4个人与种子选手进行搭配,即2×;分母为:,则概率为11.某种新鲜水果的含水量为98%,一天后的含水量降为97.5%,某商店以每斤1元的价格购进了1000斤新鲜水果,预计当天能售出60%,两天内售完.要使利润维持在20%,则每斤水果的平均售价应定为( )元.A.1.20B.1.25C.1.30D.1.35E.1.40正确答案:C解析:设一天后水果重量减少的百分数为x,定价为y元,则x=0.2=20%,则600y+400×(1-20%)y=1000×(1+20%),计算得y=1.30(元).12.在8名志愿者中,只能做英语翻译的有4人,只能做法语翻译的有3人,既能做英语翻译又能做法语翻译的有1人,现从这些志愿者中选取3人做翻译工作,确保英语和法语都有翻译的不同选法共有( )种.A.12B.18C.21D.30E.51正确答案:E解析:方法一:正面分类,按照只会法语的人是否选人分类:①只会法语的人选。
2011MBA MPA MPAcc联考写作真题及解析四、写作(本大题共2 小题,共65 分,其中第56 题30 分,第57 题35 分。
请写在答题纸相应的位置上。
)56.论证有效性分析:分析下述论证中存在的缺陷和漏洞,选择若干要点,写一篇600 字左右的文章,对该论证的有效性进行分析和评述。
如果你要从股市中赚钱,就必须低价买进股票,高价卖出股票,这是人人都明白的基本道理,但是问题的关键在于如何判断股票价值的高低,只有正确的判断股价的高低,上述的基本道理才有意义,否则就毫无实用价值。
股价的高低是一个相对的概念,只有通过比较才能显现,一般来说,要正确判断一支股票的高低,唯一的途径就是看它的历史表现,但是有人在判断当前某一股票的高低时,不注重股票的历史表现,而是注重股票今后的走势,这是一种危险的行为,因为股票的历史表现是一种客观事实,客观事实具有无可争辩的确定性;股票的今后走势只是一种主管预测,主管预测具有极大的不确定性,我们怎么可以只凭主观预测而不顾客观事实呢?再说,股价的未来走势充满各种变数,它的涨和跌不是必然的,而是或然的,我们只能借助概率进行预测,假如宏观经济、市场态势和个人股表现均好,它的上涨概率就大,加入宏观经济、市场态势和个人股表现均不好,它的上涨概率就小上涨概率就需要酌情而定,由此可见,要从股市获取利益,第一是要掌握股价涨跌的概率,第二还是要掌握股价涨跌的概率,第三也就是要掌握股价涨跌的概率,掌握了股价涨跌的概率,你就能赚到钱,否则你就会赔钱。
57.论说文:根据以下材料,自拟题目,写一篇700 字左右的论说文。
众所周知,人才是立国、富国、强国之本,如何使人才尽快的脱颖而出,是一个亟待解决的问题,人才的出现有多重途径,其中有“拔尖”,有“冒尖”,拔尖是通过提拔而成为尖子,冒尖是指通过奋斗、取得成就而得到社会公认,有人认为强国令某些领域的管理人才,拔尖的多而冒尖的少2011年MBA 管理类综合小作文论述要点:【参考答案】1. “要正确判断某一股票的价格高低,唯一的途径就是看它的历史表现”,显然欠妥当,股票价格的高低由多种要素影响构成,论证者显然忽略其他影响要素。
2011年管理类联考论说文:如何让人才“冒尖”57.论说文:根据以下材料,写一篇700 字左右的论说文,自拟题目。
众所周知,人才是立国、富国、强国之本。
如何使人才尽快的脱颖而出,是一个亟待解决的问题。
人才的出现有多重途径,其中有“拔尖”,有“冒尖”。
拔尖是通过提拔而成为尖子,冒尖是指通过奋斗、取得成就而得到社会公认。
有人认为我国当今某些领域的管理人才,拔尖的多而冒尖的少。
写作分析:拔尖和冒尖已经解释的很明白,拔尖就是提拔人才,冒尖是人才自身成长。
现状就是,我们的管理思路主要是提拔人才,而不是让人才毛遂自荐。
可以着手,从用人观念、用人制度、用人方式上,进行论说。
如何让人才“冒尖”人才出现有“拔尖”,有“冒尖”,我们如何让人才能够拔尖出现,这是如何使人才尽快的脱颖而出,是一个亟待解决的问题。
可以从以下三个方面入手:首先,不拘一格的用人观念,为人才的出现的降低门槛。
人为的设置一些过高的门槛或者不切合工作实际或者工作环境的条条框框,很容易让人才磨灭。
因为人才和普通工作者的区别就在与,人才的才能是与众不同的,多多少少会有些其他的小瑕疵,或是不善于交流,或是不善于表现,或者头脑反映迟钝等等,但是他们做出来的贡献确确实实是重大,有推动性的,那么就要以“贡献”论英雄。
而且要求人才成为一个面面俱到、样样合格的普通人。
其次,宽松灵活的用人制度,为人才的发展营造环境。
不同的工作需要不同的制度,市场部门注重业绩,科研部门注重安静,行政部门注重时间。
不同的行业同样需要不同的制度,那么宽松灵活的用人制度就要因地制宜、因业制宜。
像华为直接开出年薪500万来招聘应届博士生,可见华为的用人制度,也是十分灵活,并非从基层一步一步上升,而是直接聘用。
最后,科学合理的用人方式,为人才的冒尖提供机遇。
千里马常有,而伯乐不常有。
谁来管理人才,谁来培养人才也是重要的,人才只是在某一个领域某一方面有突出能力,而非专业的管理人才,那么谁来发现他们,谁来管理他们,谁来指导他们的人员也是十分重要,如果采取不问不顾或者时时刻刻监控,或者刻意打压人才,那么也会造成用人不当,甚至给人才造成难以扭转的创伤。
关于论说文经典语句1.牙医终于把药棉从我嘴里取出后,我才能告诉他他给我拔错牙了。
After the dentist at last removed the cotton wool from my mouth, I was able to tell him that he had pulled out the wrong tooth.2.他的话消除了我们的\'困惑。
His words blew away our confusion.3.过去两年的一切努力将付之东流。
All the efforts of the last two years will be blown away.4.那件事很快从他脑海中烟消云散了。
The matter was soon swept away from his mind.5.飞机起飞后不久便坠毁了。
The airplane crashed soon after takeoff.6.股票行情暴跌。
The stock market crashed.7.第一眼看上去这个问题似乎很容易。
At first glance, the problem seemed easy.8.以目前的发展情况,我认为这一步不可取。
In view of the recent developments, I do not think this step is advisable.9.妻子对我的投资计划持悲观的看法。
My wife takes a dim view of my investment plan.10.他们拼命向前挤,想看得清楚些。
They pushed forward for a better view.11.仍然有几个悬而未决的问题。
管理类综合能力考试论说文写作思路指导一、论说文写作基本思路标题:1、将立意中的关键词放到题目里2、题目要标明文章的主题(参考历年真题范文)开头(不能写出具体模板,可以总结出思路)1、分析型论说文思路:对原文的中心思想做出自己立场的判断+并提出自己立场方向上的,原话题约束下的释核心概念、明确话题、全面回应、尽量反对的`技巧寻找)2、材料立意思路:原材料的中心思想的复述+自己的立意(立意的五步:全面性、准确性、正确性、现实性)主体段落分论点(一句话)+论据的解释(一句话)+具体的论据(事实论据+理论论据或正反对比)+总结句(重复分论点那句话)综上所述(或由此可见或总之)+开头段的重复二、段落的具体安排第一段,首先,引用原文是非常必要的,作为一篇完整的文章,应该让看的人明白你的论证从何处引申和展开的,否则,好像是无病之呻吟,所以,在文章开头用100字以内简洁的引述原文,抛出自己的观点。
2011MBA综合真题及答案(管理类联考综合) 2011MBA综合真题及答案(管理类联考综合)一、综合能力在现代社会,经济全球化的发展给企业带来了新的挑战和机遇。
企业在面对日益激烈的市场竞争时,需要具备一定的综合能力,来适应并应对不断变化的环境。
本文将就2011年MBA综合真题及答案进行分析,探讨相关管理类联考的综合能力要求。
二、背景分析2011年MBA综合真题主要涉及市场营销、财务管理、组织行为学等方面的内容。
通过对这些题目进行综合分析,可以看出在现代企业管理中,需要具备的核心综合能力主要包括市场营销能力、财务管理能力和组织协调能力。
三、市场营销能力市场营销作为企业获取利润和满足客户需求的关键活动之一,对企业的发展起着重要作用。
在2011年的综合真题中,涉及了市场营销战略、市场调研和品牌建设等方面的问题。
这些问题要求考生能够针对不同的市场情况,制定相应的市场营销策略,并通过市场调研来了解消费者需求,从而实现企业的销售增长和市场份额的提升。
四、财务管理能力财务管理是企业决策的基础,能否合理地运用财务手段来支撑企业的运营和发展,对企业来说至关重要。
在2011年的MBA综合真题中,出现了财务分析、预算编制和投资决策等相关问题。
这些问题要求考生具备财务分析的能力,能够从财务报表和财务指标等方面评估企业的经营状况;同时,还要求考生能够编制合理的预算,为企业未来的发展提供有效的经济支持。
五、组织协调能力在现代企业中,高效的组织协调能力对于提高工作效率和实现组织目标起着至关重要的作用。
在2011年的MBA综合真题中,涉及了团队合作、管理排期和领导力等问题。
这些问题要求考生具备良好的沟通和协调能力,能够有效地与团队成员合作,安排工作排期,并且具备一定的领导力,能够有效地引领团队达成共同的目标。
六、答案分析通过对2011年的MBA综合真题答案的分析,可以看出,针对不同的问题,答案中所提供的解决方案多样化,多角度地进行了综合分析和评估。
2011年十月全国硕士研究生入学统一考试管理类专业学位联考写作试题四、写作:第56~57小题,共65分。
其中论证有效性分析30分,论说文35分。
56. 论证有效性分析:分析下述论证中存在的缺陷和漏洞,选择若干要点,写一篇600字左右的文章,对该论证的有效性进行分析和评论。
(论证有效性分析的一般要点是:概念特别是核心概念的界定和使用是否准备并前后一致,有无各种明显的逻辑错误,论证的论据是否成立并支持结论,结论成立的条件是否充分等等。
)我国的个人所得税从1980年开始征收,当时起征点为800元人民币。
最近几年起征点为2000元,个人所得税总额逐年上升,已经超过2000亿元。
随着居民基本生活开支的上涨,国家决定从2011年9月将个税起征点提高到3500元,顺应了大多数人的意愿。
从个人短期利益上来看,提高起征点确实能减少一部分中低收入者的税收,看似有利于普通老百姓。
但是,如果冷静的进行分析,其结果却正好相反。
中国实行税收累进率制度,也就是说工资越高所缴纳的税率也越高。
请设想,如果将2000元的个税起征点提高到10000元。
虽然,极少数月工资超过30000元的人可能缴更多的税,但是绝大多数人的个税会减少,只是减少的数额不同。
原来工资低于2000元,1分钱的好处也没有得到;拿2000元工资的人只是减轻了几十元的税;而拿8000元工资的人则减轻了几百元的税收。
收入越高,减少的越多,贫富差距自然会被进一步拉大了。
同时,由于税收起征点上调,国家受到的税收大幅度减少,政府就更没有能力为中低收入者提供医疗、保险、教育等公共服务,结果还是对穷人不利。
所以说,建议提高个税起征点的人,或者是听到提高起征点就高兴的人,在捅破这层窗户纸以后,他们也不得不承认这一客观真理:提高个税起征点有利于富人,不利于普通老百姓。
如果不局限在经济层面讨论问题,转到从社会与政治角度考虑,问题就更清楚了。
原来以2000元起征点,有50%以上为非纳税人,如果提高到3500元,中国的纳税人就只剩下20%了。
2011年MBA联考中文写作解析及参考范文论说文:根据下述材料,写一篇700字左右的论说文,题目自拟。
众所周知,人才是立国、富国、强国之本。
如何使人才尽快地脱颖而出是一个亟待解决的问题。
人才的出现有多种途径,其中有“拔尖”,有“冒尖”。
拔尖是指被提拔而成为尖子,冒尖是指通过奋斗、取得成就而得到社会公认。
有人认为,当今某些领域的管理人才,拔尖的多而冒尖的少。
解析:一、审题立意的方向1、抓关键词:本题的关键词是人才、脱颖而出、冒尖、拔尖2、找到唯一的关键词:拔尖3、找到题干中的核心问题;为使人才尽快脱颖而出,是通过拔尖的方式,还是通过冒尖的方式?4、作者自身的观点是什么,有没有隐含意义:作者自身倾向认为现在的冒尖的人才太少,应该有更多的冒尖人才。
二、写作思路根据上述分析,大体有三种写作思路:1、冒尖比拔尖更值得提倡(这是最佳也是最保险的思路)2、拔尖比冒尖更值得提倡(这种思路写起来比较困难,容易跑题,但也不是不可以写,原文根据“有人认为,当今某些领域的管理人才,拔尖的多而冒尖的少”)3、冒尖和拔尖可以有机结合(这种思路要坚持从辩证的角度去写,不能顾此失彼)三、范例也谈“拔尖”与“冒尖”有人认为我国当今某些领域的管理人才拔尖的多,冒尖的少。
我赞同这个观点。
钱老认为:现在中国没有完全发展起来,一个重要原因没有自己独特的创新的东西,老是“冒”不出杰出人才。
钱老的这段话则是对当前人才现状的精辟分析。
“拔尖”和“冒尖”二者似乎相差不大,强调的都是突出、出众的意思。
但是,深入体味二者的区别,不难发现:二者的不同之处不在于“尖”,而在于“尖”是如何出来的?这才是问题的关键。
社会的发展更需要“冒尖”管理人才。
企业管理专家、管理学者、管理精英……似乎我们并不缺少管理人才,但是看看我国的管理人才竞争力排行榜中的位置,不由我们对一些现象深思回味。
拔尖强调外力使其成为“尖”,是矮子里面“拔”将军的结果;冒尖是指通过人才自身的努力脱颖而出,比较强调内力的作用。
2011全国联考第四题真题解析华图教育孙怀龙【真题案例】2011全国联考第四题。
四、结合“给定资料”,以“家底”为题,联系实际,写一篇文章。
(40分)要求:(1)中心明确,联系实际恰当,内容充实;(2)语言通顺,条理清楚,结构完整;(3)不少于800字。
【答题思路】2011年联考申论写作是一个命题作文,注意题目要求以“家底”为“题”,不是以“家底”为“话题”。
考生只要把“家底”作为题目写上就可以了。
论点可以放在第一段中写出。
文章可以写成策论文,也可以写成政论文。
在写作之前必须弄清楚“家底”的含义,即家底在材料中以及在文章中的具体意思。
通过阅读“给定资料”可知,“家底”说的是我国人口的详细情况,包括人口数量、密度、素质、结构和居住等状况。
这就要求考生必须吃透给定资料的内容,以便顺利完成写作。
若要写成策论文,按照申论策论文写作的基本步骤:“引材料、提论点”、“进行分析议论”、“提出具体对策”、“完美结尾”展开即可。
进一步说,第一部分要引用典型材料,提出必须摸清我国“家底”这一论点;第二部分要议论分析摸清我国“家底”的原因和意义;第三部分要提出摸清我国“家底”的相关对策;第四部分要进行完美结尾,具体包括“呼应论点”和“上升到政策高度”两部分。
其中,第三部分即提出对策部分,可以提升文章论述的深刻性和力量,成为区分考生申论写作水平的分水岭。
【参考答案】文章脉络:第一段:利用转折型开头,引用重要材料,自然过渡到提出论点“进行人口普查,摸清家底,全面把握基本国情,是一项极为紧迫的事情。
”第二段:分析说明搞好人口普查,摸清家底的原因、意义。
第三段:利用过渡句,过渡到提出对策。
第一、着力解决我国人口普查中遇到的主要问题。
第二、科学摸清我国人口的基本信息。
第三、切实掌握我国老龄人口的状况。
第四段:完美结尾。
呼应论点,上升到政策高度。
家底改革开放以来,我国经济社会取得巨大成就,各项事业迅速发展,但是人口方面出现了一些亟待解决的问题,突出表现在:许多城市的人口规模不断扩大,加重了城市公共资源的承载负担,对城市的发展和管理水平提出了新的挑战,等等。
2011年MBA联考(综合)论证有效性分析写作万能模板__________(简单总结描述),上述计划(报告、文章、评论、建议等)的论据不足以支持其论点,论证缺乏科学性,由此而得出的结论(论证、报告、建议)是不可信的,是值得商榷的。
首先,(有他因影响类)上文中______¬¬结论_____ 是基于论据1或2 ,但是论据1或2 是否是导致结论_______ 的唯一原因呢?显然可以导致_____结论还可能存在_____ 、 ___________等诸多的影响因素。
那么,结论_______ 是否能让人们认可,能否实现预期的效果,还有待考证。
其次,(“混淆概念”类) 文中在概念的使用上也存在某些问题 /(也很模糊)。
比如,在说到事件1 时,上文中用的是概念1 ,而在说到事件2 的时候,用的却是概念2 。
这两个概念显然是前后不一致的,因为概念1或2 不仅仅只是概念2或1 。
这种概念混淆的问题,也大大削减了上文推理的严谨性和有效性。
另外,(“不当类比”类) 文中未能将(故事/寓言)和(企业经营之道/启发)进行有效的类比。
(故事/寓言)是因为原因1 ,企业/启发是因为原因2 二者的规律也许有某种共性,但也必然有本质的区别和界限,上述论证把故事/寓言,一般化为企业/启发应对不确定性的普遍性原则。
似乎有些轻率地概括,因此,不具有客观的类比性。
再者,(“以偏概全”类) 上文中对调查/个案例子的叙述也很含糊。
文中并没有提供调查/个案存在的可*依据。
就算调查/个案是真实的,读者并不知道该项调查/个案是否具有典型性。
那也无从谈起其具有“推而广之”的代表性。
综上所述,如果上述论证(分析)能进一步提供相应的数据/论据和相关信息,排除原文的_________ 论证缺陷就很有说服力了,但该文中并没有说明其他信息,所以该论证是不全面的/有缺陷的。
(由于该论证存在上述种种问题。
所以,该论证是难以令人信服的。
)备注:一、关于文章题目:1、一份难以实现(不可信)的商业计划(调查报告、改革方案)2、___________(文中的结论)难以实现(难以奏效、不可信)3、___________(文中的结论)吗?二、分析思路:第一段:__________(简单总结文中的逻辑推理关系),上述计划(报告、文章、评论、建议等)的论据不足以支持其论点,论证缺乏科学性,由此而得出的结论(论证、报告、建议)是不可信的,是值得商榷的。
2011MBA联考论说文写作万能模版第一段,(100字)首先,简略的引用原文,作为一篇完整的文章,应该让看的人明白你的论证从何处引申和展开的,否则,好像是无病之呻吟,所以,思路应该是:在文章开头用100字以内简洁的引述原文,抛出自己的观点。
第二段,(100字)破题,对材料有简单的分析和引申,强化观点。
第三段,(200字)通过正面论述,通过3个短暂的排比例子,(最好古代,近代,现代:比如论坚持和毅力,李白若没有“铁棒磨成针”的精神,何来“斗酒诗百篇”;杜蒲若没有“读书破万卷”,何来“下笔若有神”,马克思若没有四十年如一日的坚持,何来资本论之闻名与世。
再如:论修养方面,试想,孔子若不注重修身,何以成为圣人,受世代敬仰;战国四公子,若不注重修身,何以有门客四千,大家都愿意为其舍生取义。
)第四段,(200字)通过反面论证,如上面的论述展开,列举3个例子。
比如,周幽王、商纣王若不贪恋酒色,何以成为千古罪人而遭人唾齿;秦烩、高俅若不残害忠良,何以成为佞臣而遗臭万年;成克杰、胡长青若不贪欲堕落,何以成为国家的罪人而抱憾终身。
第五段,(100字)点击材料论点,展开号召和呼吁,说明这中情况既然如此重要,那么,作为我们现代化的建设者,国家的栋梁,没有理由漠然处之,我们责无旁贷,“天载其苍,地屐其荒,纵有千古,横有八荒,前途似锦,来日方长”、“自信人生二百年,会当击水三千里”、“以个人数十年必死之生命,扶中华千百年不倾之大厦”。
建议:正反面的字数和重点与否,根据自己的观点和题目要有所侧重,多用三句排比,语言尽量短小精悍,最好有时能形成对仗,多使用反问句,或者假设,比如:试想,若没有,何以。
论创新,“齐白石若没有五易画风,何以自成派系而成为画坛宗师;海尔集团若没有创新的思路,何以能冲出国门而成为世界名牌。
”2011MBA论说文例文羡鱼与结网《汉书・.礼乐志》中写道:"临渊羡鱼,不如退而结网。
"意思是说人只是站在河边,望着河中肥美的鱼,徒然羡慕,是永远得不到鱼儿的,还不如回家结张网来捕鱼。
2011年工商管理硕士MBA联考-逻辑及写作真题及答案详解26、巴斯德认为,空气中的微生物浓度与环境状况、气流运动和海拔高度有关。
他在山上的不同高度分别打开装着煮过的培养液的瓶子,发现海拔越高,培养液被微生物污染的可能性越小。
在山顶上,20个装了培养液的瓶子,只有一个长出了微生物。
普歇另用干草浸液做材料重复了巴斯德的实验,却得出不同的结果:即使在海拔很高的地方,所有装了培养液的瓶子都很快长出了微生物。
以下哪项如果为真,最能解释普歇和巴斯德实验所得到的不同结果?(A)只要有氧气的刺激,微生物就会从培养液中自发地生长出来。
(B)培养液在加热消毒、密封、冷却的过程中会被外界细菌污染。
(C)普歇和巴斯德的实验设计都不够严密。
(D)干草浸液中含有一种耐高温的枯草杆菌,培养液一旦冷却,枯草杆菌的孢子就会复活,迅速繁殖。
(E)普歇和巴斯德认为,虽然他们用的实验材料不同,但是经过煮沸,细菌都能被有效地杀灭。
答案是D。
分析:选项D描述了普歇用于实验的干草浸液的一个特征:一旦遇冷,其中的孢子就会复活且迅速繁殖。
由于海拔越高温度越低,这就很好地解释了为什么在海拔很高的地方,普歇的培养液都很快长出了微生物。
27.张教授的所有初中同学都不是博士;通过张教授而认识其哲学研究所同事的都是博士;张教授的一个初中同学通过张教授认识了王研究员。
以下哪项作为结论从上述断定中推出?(A)王研究员是张教授的哲学研究所同事(B)王研究员不是张教授的哲学研究所同事(C)王研究员是博士(D)王研究员不是博士(E)王研究员不是张教授的初中同学答案是B。
分析方法一:直接推理:首先,由于张教授的所有初中同学都不是博士,所以张教授的这一个初中同学不是博士。
其次,由于通过张教授而认识其哲学研究所同事的人都是博士,而张教授的这一个初中同学不是博士,所以张教授的这一个初中同学不是通过张教授而认识其哲学研究所同事的人。
因此,鉴于张教授的这一个初中同学通过张教授认识了王研究员,所以王研究员不是张教授哲学研究所的同事。
Section I Use of EnglishDirections:Read the following text. Choose the best word(s) for each numbered black and mark A, B, C or D on ANSWER SHEET 1. (10 points)The Internet affords anonymity to its users, a blessing to privacy and freedom of spe ech. But that very anonymity is also behind the explosion of cyber-crime that has 1 acro ss the Web.Can privacy be preserved 2 bringing safety and security to a world that seems incr easingly 3 ?Last month, Howard Schmidt, the nation’s cyber-czar, offered the federal government a 4 to make the Web a safer place-a “voluntary trusted identity” system that would be t he high-tech 5 of a physical key, a fingerprint and a photo ID card, all rolled 6 one. The system might use a smart identity card, or a digital credential 7 to a specific compu ter .and would authenticate users at a range of online services.The idea is to 8 a federation of private online identity systems. User could 9 whic h system to join, and only registered users whose identities have been authenticated could navigate those systems. The approach contrasts with one that would require an Internet d river’s license10 by the government.Google and Microsoft are among companies that already have these“single sign-on”sys tems that make it possible for users to 11 just once but use many different services.12.the approach would create a “walled garden” n cyberspace, with safe “neighborhoo ds” and bright “streetlights” to establish a sense of a13 community.Mr. Schmidt described it as a “voluntary ecosystem” in which “individuals and organi zations can complete online transactions with 14 ,trusting the identities of each other and the identities of the infrastructure 15 which the transaction runs”.Still, the administration’s plan has16 privacy rights activists. Some applaud the appr oach; others are concerned. It seems clear that such a scheme is an initiative push toward what would 17 be a compulsory Internet “drive’s license” mentality.The plan has also been greeted with 18 by some computer security experts, who wo rry that the “voluntary ecosystem” envisioned b y Mr. Schmidt would still leave much of t he Internet 19 .They argue that all Internet users should be 20 to register and identify t hemselves, in the same way that drivers must be licensed to drive on public roads.1.A.swept B.skipped C.walked D.ridden2.A.for B.within C.while D.though3.A.careless wless C.pointless D.helpless4.A.reason B.reminder promise D.proposal5 rmation. B.interference C.entertainment D.equivalent6.A.by B.into C.from D.over7.A.linked B.directed C.chained pared8.A.dismiss B.discover C.create D.improve9.A.recall B.suggest C.select D.realize10.A.relcased B.issued C.distributed D.delivered11.A.carry on B.linger on C.set in D.log in12.A.In vain B.In effect C.In return D.In contrast13.A.trusted B.modernized c.thriving peting14.A.caution B.delight C.confidence D.patience15.A.on B.after C.beyond D.across16.A.divided B.disappointed C.protected D.united17.A.frequestly B.incidentally C.occasionally D.eventually 18.A.skepticism B.relerance C.indifference D.enthusiasm 19.A.manageable B.defendable C.vulnerable D.invisible20.A.invited B.appointed C.allowed D.forced完形填空参考答案3.51-5 ACBDD 6-10 BDCBB11-15 DBACA 16-20 ADACDSection II Reading ComprehensionPart ADirections:Read the following four texts. Answer the questions after each text by choosing A, B, C or D. Mark your answers on ANSWER SHEET 1. (40points)Text 1Ruth S immons joined Goldman Sachs’s board as an outside director in January 2000: a year later she became president of Brown University. For the rest of the decade she a pparently managed both roles without attracting much eroticism. But by the end of 2009 Ms. Si mmons was under fire for having sat on Goldman’s compensation committee; how could she have let those enormous bonus payouts pass unremarked? By February the next year Ms. Simmons had left the board. The position was just taking up too much time, s he said.Outside directors are supposed to serve as helpful, yet less biased, advisers on a fir m’s board. Having made their wealth and their reputations elsewhere, they presumably hav e enough independence to disagree with the chief executive’s proposals. If the sky, and th e share price is falling, outside directors should be able to give advice based on having weathered their own crises.The researchers from Ohio University used a database hat covered more than 10,000 firms and more than 64,000 different directors between 1989 and 2004. Then they simply checked which directors stayed from one proxy statement to the next. The most likely rea son for departing a board was age, so the researchers concentrated on those “surprise” dis appearances by directors under the age of 70. They fount that after a surprise departure, t he probability that the company will subsequently have to restate earnings increased by ne arly 20%. The likelihood of being named in a federal class-action lawsuit also increases, a nd the stock is likely to perform worse. The effect tended to be larger for larger firms. Although a correlation between them leaving and subsequent bad performance at the firm is suggestive, it does not mean that such directors are always jumping off a sinking ship. Often they “trade up.” Leaving riskier, smaller firms for larger and more stable firms.But the researchers believe that outside directors have an easier time of avoiding a bl ow to their reputations if they leave a firm before bad news breaks, even if a review of history shows they were on the board at the time any wrongdoing occurred. Firms who w ant to keep their outside directors through tough times may have to create incentives. Oth erwise outside directors will follow the example of Ms. Simmons, once again very popular on campus.21. According to Paragraph 1, Ms. Simmons was criticized for .[A]gaining excessive profits[B]failing to fulfill her duty[C]refusing to make compromises[D]leaving the board in tough times22. We learn from Paragraph 2 that outside directors are supposed to be .[A]generous investors[B]unbiased executives[C]share price forecasters[D]independent advisers23. According to the researchers from Ohio University after an outside director’s surp rise departure, the firm is likely to .[A]become more stable[B]report increased earnings[C]do less well in the stock market[D]perform worse in lawsuits24. It can be inferred from the last paragraph that outside directors .[A]may stay for the attractive offers from the firm[B]have often had records of wrongdoings in the firm[C]are accustomed to stress-free work in the firm[D]will decline incentives from the firm25. The author’s attitude toward the role of outside directors is.[A]permissive[B]positive[C]scornful[D]critical21-25 BDCAB 2Text 2Whatever happened to the death of newspaper? A year ago the end seemed near. The recession threatened to remove the advertising and readers that had not already fled to th e internet. Newspapers like the San Francisco Chronicle were chronicling their own doom. America’s Federal Trade commission launched a round of talks about how to save newspapers. Should they become charitable corporations? Should the state subsidize them ? It w ill hold another meeting soon. But the discussions now seem out of date.In much of the world there is the sign of crisis. German and Brazilian papers have s hrugged off the recession. Even American newspapers, which inhabit the most troubled co me of the global industry, have not only survived but often returned to profit. Not the 2 0% profit margins that were routine a few years ago, but profit all the same.It has not been much fun. Many papers stayed afloat by pushing journalists overboar d. The American Society of News Editors reckons that 13,500 newsroom jobs have gone since 2007. Readers are paying more for slimmer products. Some papers even had the ner ve to refuse delivery to distant suburbs. Yet these desperate measures have proved the rig ht ones and, sadly for many journalists, they can be pushed further.Newspapers are becoming more balanced businesses, with a healthier mix of revenues from readers and advertisers. American papers have long been highly unusual in their rel iance on ads. Fully 87% of their revenues came from advertising in 2008, according to th e Organization for Economic Cooperation & Development (OECD). In Japan the proportio n is 35%. Not surprisingly, Japanese newspapers are much more stable.The whirlwind that swept through newsrooms harmed everybody, but much of the da mage has been concentrated in areas where newspaper are least distinctive. Car and film r eviewers have gone. So have science and general business reporters. Foreign bureaus have been savagely cut off. Newspapers are less complete as a result. But completeness is no longer a virtue in the newspaper business.26. By saying “Newspapers like … their own doom” (Lines 3-4, Para. 1), the author indicates that newspaper .[A]neglected the sign of crisis[B]failed to get state subsidies[C]were not charitable corporations[D]were in a desperate situation27. Some newspapers refused delivery to distant suburbs probably because .[A]readers threatened to pay less[B]newspapers wanted to reduce costs[C]journalists reported little about these areas[D]subscribers complained about slimmer products28. Compared with their American counterparts, Japanese newspapers are much more stable because they .[A]have more sources of revenue[B]have more balanced newsrooms[C]are less dependent on advertising[D]are less affected by readership29. What can be inferred from the last paragraph about the current newspaper busines s?[A]Distinctiveness is an essential feature of newspapers.[B]Completeness is to blame for the failure of newspaper.[C]Foreign bureaus play a crucial role in the newspaper business.[D]Readers have lost their interest in car and film reviews.30. The most appropriate title for this text would be .[A]American Newspapers: Struggling for Survival[B]American Newspapers: Gone with the Wind[C]American Newspapers: A Thriving Business[D]American Newspapers: A Hopeless Story26-30 DBCAA6Text 3We tend to think of the decades immediately following World War II as a time of p rosperity and growth, with soldiers returning home by the millions, going off to college o n the G. I. Bill and lining up at the marriage bureaus.But when it came to their houses, it was a time of common sense and a belief that less could truly be more. During the Depression and the war, Americans had learned to li ve with less, and that restraint, in combination with the postwar confidence in the future, made small, efficient housing positively stylish.Economic condition was only a stimulus for the trend toward efficient living. The phr ase “less is more” was actually first popularized by a German, the architect Ludwig Miesvan der Rohe, who like other people associated with the Bauhaus, a school of design, e migrated to the United States before World War IIand took up posts at American architecture schools. These designers came to exert en ormous influence on the course of American architecture, but none more so that Mies.Mies’s signature phrase means that less decoration, properly organized, has more impa ct that a lot. Elegance, he believed, did not derive from abundance. Like other modern ar chitects, he employed metal, glass and laminated wood-materials that we take for granted t oday buy that in the 1940s symbolized the future. Mies’s sophisticated presentation maske d the fact that the spaces he designed were small and efficient, rather than big and often empty.The apartments in the elegan t towers Mies built on Chicago’s Lake Shore Drive, for example, were smaller-two-bedroom units under 1,000 square feet-than those in their older neighbors along the city’s Gold Coast. But they were popular because of their airy glass walls, the views they afforded and the elegance of the buildings’ details and proportions, the architectural equivalent of the abstract art so popular at the time.The trend toward “less” was not entirely foreign. In the 1930s Frank Lloyd Wright st arted building more modest and efficient houses-usually around 1,200 square feet-than the spreading two-story ones he had designed in the 1890s and the early 20th century.The “Case Study Houses” commissioned from talented modern architects by California Arts & Architecture magazine between 1945 and 1962 were yet another homegrown influ ence on the “less is more” trend. Aesthetic effect came from the landscape, new materials and forthright detailing. In his Case Study House, Ralph everyday life –few American families acquired helicopters, though most eventually got clothes dryers –but his belief tha t self-sufficiency was both desirable and inevitable was widely shared.31. The postwar American housing style largely reflected the Americans’.[A]prosperity and growth[B]efficiency and practicality[C]restraint and confidence[D]pride and faithfulness32. Which of the following can be inferred from Paragraph 3 about Bauhaus?[A]It was founded by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe.[B]Its designing concept was affected by World War II.[C]Most American architects used to be associated with it.[D]It had a great influence upon American architecture.33. Mies held that elegance of architectural design .[A]was related to large space[B]was identified with emptiness[C]was not reliant on abundant decoration[D]was not associated with efficiency34. What is true about the apartments Mies building Chicago’s Lake Shore Drive?[A]They ignored details and proportions.[B]They were built with materials popular at that time.[C]They were more spacious than neighboring buildings.[D]They shared some characteristics of abstract art.35. What can we learn about the design of the “Case Study House”?[A]Mechanical devices were widely used.[B]Natural scenes were taken into consideration[C]Details were sacrificed for the overall effect.[D]Eco-friendly materials were employed.31-35 CDCDB 6Text 4Will the European Union make it? The question would have sounded strange not lon g ago. Now even the project’s greatest cheerleaders talk of a continent facing a “Bermuda triangle” of debt, population decline and lower growth.As well as those chronic problems, the EU face an acute crisis in its economic core, the 16 countries that use the single c urrency. Markets have lost faith that the euro zone’s economies, weaker or stronger, will one day converge thanks to the discipline of sharing a single currency, which denies uncompetitive members the quick fix of devaluation.Yet the debate about how to save Europe’s single currency from disintegration is stuc k. It is stuck because the euro zone’s dominant powers, France and Germany, agree on th e need for greater harmonization within the euro zone, but disagree about what to harmon ies.Germany thinks the euro must be saved by stricter rules on borrow spending and co mpetitiveness, barked by quasi-automatic sanctions for governments that do not obey. Thes e might include threats to freeze EU funds for poorer regions and EU mega-projects and even the suspen sion of a country’s voting rights in EU ministerial councils. It insists that economic co-ordination should involve all 27 members of the EU club, among whom ther e is a small majority for free-market liberalism and economic rigour; in the inner core alo ne, Germany fears, a small majority favour French interference.A “southern” camp headed by French wants something different: ”European economic government” within an inner core of euro-zone members. Translated, that means politician s intervening in monetary policy and a system of redistribution from richer to poorer mem bers, via cheaper borrowing for governments through common Eurobonds or complete fisc al transfers. Finally, figures close to the France government have murmured, curo-zone me mbers should agree to some fiscal and social harmonization: e.g., curbing competition in c orporate-tax rates or labour costs.It is too soon to write off the EU. It remains the world’s largest trading block. At it s best, the European project is remarkably liberal: built around a single market of 27 rich and poor countries, its internal borders are far more open to goods, capital and labour th an any comparable trading area. It is an ambitious attempt to blunt the sharpest edges of globalization, and make capitalism benign.36. The EU is faced with so many problems that .[A] it has more or less lost faith in markets[B] even its supporters begin to feel concerned[C] some of its member countries plan to abandon euro[D] it intends to deny the possibility of devaluation37. The debate over the EU’s single currency is stuck because the dominant power s .[A] are competing for the leading position[B] are busy handling their own crises[C] fail to reach an agreement on harmonization[D] disagree on the steps towards disintegration38. To solve the euro problem ,Germany proposed that .[A] EU funds for poor regions be increased[B] stricter regulations be imposed[C] only core members be involved in economic co-ordination[D] voting rights of the EU members be guaranteed39. The French proposal of handling the crisis implies that __ __.[A]poor countries are more likely to get funds[B]strict monetary policy will be applied to poor countries[C]loans will be readily available to rich countries[D]rich countries will basically control Eurobonds40. Regarding the future of the EU, the author seems to feel __ __.[A]pessimistic[B]desperate[C]conceited[D]hopeful36-40 BCBADPart B 6Directions:Read the following text and answer the questions by finding information from the rig ht column that corresponds to each of the marked details given in the left column. There are two extra choices in the right column. Mark your answer on ANSWER SHEET 1. (1 0 points)41-45 EDCBG 641-45 EDCBGPart B 参考答案41.E。
2011申论a卷大作文英文回答:In the contemporary era, the rapid advancement of technology has profoundly influenced our lives, creating both opportunities and challenges. As technology continues to evolve at an unprecedented pace, it is imperative that we reflect on its implications for human society and the future of our planet.The transformative power of technology has undeniably brought about numerous benefits. Access to information and communication has been democratized, fostering global connectivity and facilitating the sharing of knowledge. Technological advancements have improved healthcare, agriculture, and energy efficiency, contributing to enhanced well-being and sustainability. Additionally, automation and artificial intelligence have the potential to revolutionize industries and create new economic opportunities.However, the advent of technology also poses certain challenges. The widespread adoption of digital devices has raised concerns about privacy and data security. The proliferation of social media platforms has led to the dissemination of misinformation and the formation of echo chambers that can exacerbate societal divisions. Moreover, the rapid pace of technological innovation may outpace our ability to adapt and govern its use responsibly,potentially creating unintended consequences for the environment and society.To harness the benefits of technology while mitigating its potential risks, we must adopt a balanced and forward-thinking approach. This requires investment in education and digital literacy to ensure that all citizens are equipped with the skills necessary to navigate the digital landscape. Robust regulatory frameworks must be established to protect individual rights and prevent the misuse of technology. Furthermore, it is crucial to foster a culture of responsible innovation that prioritizes ethical considerations and the long-term well-being of society.中文回答:科技浪潮席卷全球,深刻地改变了我们的生活方式,既带来了机遇,也带来了挑战。
2011年MBA联考中文写作解析及参考范文
论说文:根据下述材料,写一篇700字左右的论说文,题目自拟。
众所周知,人才是立国、富国、强国之本。
如何使人才尽快地脱颖而出是一个亟待解决的问题。
人才的出现有多种途径,其中有“拔尖”,有“冒尖”。
拔尖是指被提拔而成为尖子,冒尖是指通过奋斗、取得成就而得到社会公认。
有人认为,当今某些领域的管理人才,拔尖的多而冒尖的少。
解析:
一、审题立意的方向
1、抓关键词:本题的关键词是人才、脱颖而出、冒尖、拔尖
2、找到唯一的关键词:拔尖
3、找到题干中的核心问题;为使人才尽快脱颖而出,是通过拔尖的方式,还是通过冒尖
的方式?
4、作者自身的观点是什么,有没有隐含意义:作者自身倾向认为现在的冒尖的人才太少,
应该有更多的冒尖人才。
二、写作思路
根据上述分析,大体有三种写作思路:
1、冒尖比拔尖更值得提倡(这是最佳也是最保险的思路)
2、拔尖比冒尖更值得提倡(这种思路写起来比较困难,容易跑题,但也不是不可以写,
原文根据“有人认为,当今某些领域的管理人才,拔尖的多而冒尖的少”)
3、冒尖和拔尖可以有机结合(这种思路要坚持从辩证的角度去写,不能顾此失彼)
三、范例
也谈“拔尖”与“冒尖”
有人认为我国当今某些领域的管理人才拔尖的多,冒尖的少。
我赞同这个观点。
钱老认为:现在中国没有完全发展起来,一个重要原因没有自己独特的创新的东西,老是“冒”不出杰出人才。
钱老的这段话则是对当前人才现状的精辟分析。
“拔尖”和“冒尖”二者似乎相差不大,强调的都是突出、出众的意思。
但是,深入体味二者的区别,不难发现:二者的不同之处不在于“尖”,而在于“尖”是如何出来的?这才是问题的关键。
社会的发展更需要“冒尖”管理人才。
企业管理专家、管理学者、管理精英……似乎我们并不缺少管理人才,但是看看我国的管理人才竞争力排行榜中的位置,不由我们对一些现象深思回味。
拔尖强调外力使其成为“尖”,是矮子里面“拔”将军的结果;冒尖是指通过人才自身的努力脱颖而出,比较强调内力的作用。
知识经济时代是一个追求效率的年代,也是一个知识更新、技术更新、管理方法更新最快的时代。
若要跟上时代步伐,在各方面创造出高效率,就必须主动发挥人才的聪明才智,挖掘创新潜力,走创新之路。
培养“冒尖”管理人才不能仅强调在口头上,更要落实在行动中。
培养“冒尖”管
理人才关键需要有创新的思想。
海尔以“日事日毕,日事日高”来激励员工,也就是今天的事今天做好,而且今天要比昨天做的好一些。
这种做法不仅提高了员工的工作效率,而且创造了一大批不断超越自我的优秀员工及管理者。
这是思想创新在培养“冒尖”管理人才的体现。
邓小平开创的“改革开放”无疑是社会制度方面的创新和重大突破,他让我们的国家跟上了世界发展的脚步,同时在各行各业培养出许多“冒尖”人才,这是制度创新在培养人才的卓越典范。
如何培养“冒尖”管理人才,我们肩负着中华复兴的重任,每一个人都无法逃避。