基础写作之话题写作:school life

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基础写作之话题写作:School LifeTask 1 常用词汇。

1.学校操场2.篮球场3.教室4.阅览室5.音乐室6.活动7.唱歌8.跳舞9.跑步10. 有趣的11. 有意义的12. 丰富多彩的Task 2 常用短语。

1.做功课2.读书3.打篮球4.踢足球5.打乒乓球6.打羽毛球7.踢毽子8.参加9.最喜欢的运动10.玩得开心11.增强体质12.交朋友13.参观14.旅游Task 3 常用句型。

1.我最喜爱的运动是足球。

2.放学后我们常常参加各项体育活动,如跑步、打篮球、踢毽子等等。

(all kind of)3.体育活动可以丰富我们的校园生活,强身健体。

(enrich;; not only… but also)4. 合并句子:将第2句和第3句合成一个句子(定语从句:which 引导)5.我们希望能有更多的机会了解外面的世界,开阔视野。

(It is hoped that…;broadenone’s minds)Task 4 基础写作。

(满分15分)1. 题型思考:我们如何在10分钟内,15分里拿到9分或9分以上?2. 命题特点一般来说,“基础写作”所要表达的信息已经全部给出,考生根据写作内容的要求将所给信息完整准确连贯地写出就可以了,不需要再过多发挥。

所以,“基础写作”侧重考查考生最基本的写作技能:组词造句和连句成篇。

“基础写作”限制句数(5句),因此,考生在写作组织过程中需要尤其注意对句子结构、句型、非谓语动词和篇章连贯等的运用。

简而言之,考查考生整理信息、组词造句和连句成文的能力。

3. 评分标准1). 句子内容的完整性(Completeness) 5分2). 句子结构的正确性(Correctness)与句子结构的复杂性(Variety) 8分3). 句子内容的连贯性(Coherence) 2分4). 卷面整洁【写作内容】【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

写作步骤:Step 2:整合信息:把所提供的信息整合成五个完整的句子。

(句子内容的完整性)1)2)3)4)5)Step 3:遣词造句。

(句子结构的准确性)难点点拨:第5句:我们希望能少一点作业,多一点课余时间来参加各种活动,到校外参观、旅游,这样可以有更多的机会了解外面的世界,开阔视野。

we can have less homework, more free time tovarious activities and to visit different places out of school as well, which gives us the outside world to .Step 4:连句成篇。

(提示:按照各句之间的语意和逻辑关系,使用恰当的连接词,将单句重组、合并成一篇通顺、连贯的英语短文)(句子内容的连贯性)Tips:常用的关联词或过渡词有:1. 一般来说generally speaking;2. 表示递进关系词,如what’s more, besides, in addition;moreover, not only…butalso…, last but not the least(最后一点,也是非常重要的一点)等。

3. 表示转折词,如but, however, on the other hand等;4. 表示因果关系的词,如because (of), so, therefore, as a result;5. 表示总结的连词,如in short, in a word, on the whole等。

Task 5 Summary and HomeworkSummary: Get the students to sum up: What have you learned in this lesson?Homework:1.背诵范文2. 基础写作。

(满分15分)假如你是校报记者,请根据下面的要点,用英语写一篇短文,报道你校举办的第32界校运动会。

【写作内容】【写作要求】1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

附表:课堂学习“自我评价表”: 学生利用“自我评价表”对自己的写作进行监控。

More information:常用的连接词:1. 表示对比关系: unlike, just like, instead of, on the other hand, in spite of, …2. 表示转折关系: but, however, on the contrary, while, otherwise…3. 表示因果关系: therefore, so, thus, as a result, owing to, due to, thanks to, as, for,on account of…4. 表示递进关系/强调关系: besides, also, furthermore, what’s more, in addition, moreover, worse still, above all, to make matter worse, what’s worse…5. 表示个人观点: in my opinion, from my point of view, as far as I am concerned, asfor me…6. 表示空间: beyond, below, in front of, far from, outside…7. 表示时间、顺序的关系: first, in the second place, then, next, finally, eventually…8. 表示结论: in a word, in general, on the whole, all in all, above all, in conclusion…常用的句型“加油站”:1. 活动/事情will be held in +地点+时间2. If I have the honour to do sth., I will…3. It is necessary that measures should be taken to …4. Some measures should be taken to …5. It is certain that…6. It is +adj. +of sb. to do~It is mean of you to tip so little.你真吝啬,给这么少小费。

7. It is +adj./现在分词+for sb. to do~As a doctor, it is necessary for you to pay a regular visit to your patients, assuring them that your attention is still focused on them.作为医生,你定期看望病人,让他们相信你仍然关注着他们是必要的。

8. There is no use/point (in) doing~ / It’s no good/use doing~It’s no good helping him since he doesn’t help himself.There is no use helping him now that he doesn’t help himself.既然他不争气,帮他也没用。

9. Not only ~ but also ~Not only can knowledge help you conquer fear but also it can bring you real power.知识不仅能帮助你克服恐惧,也能给你带来真正的力量。

10. It must be admitted that ~It must be admitted that online study is another effective way of self-improvement.必须承认网上学习是另一种自我完善的有效方法。

Keys:Task 1 常用词汇basketball courtTask 3 常用句型。

1. My favorite sport is football.= Football is my favorite sport.2. We often take part in all kind of sport activities after school, such as running, playing basketball, kicking shuttlecocks and so on.3. Sport activities can not only enrich our school life but also build up our bodies.4. We often take part in all kind of sport activities after school, such as running, playing basketball, kicking shuttlecocks and so on,which can not only enrich our school life but also build up our bodies.4. It is hoped that we can have more chances to know more about the outside world to broaden our minds . 或We hope that we can have more chances to know more about the outside world to open our eyes.写作步骤:Step 2:整合信息:把所提供的信息整合成五个完整的句子。

(句子内容的完整性)1. 每天下午放学后我们都有各种各样的活动。

2. 我们可以在操场上打篮球、踢足球、打羽毛球、踢毽子,这些活动丰富我们的校园生活,强身健体。

3. 我们还可以在阅览室里读书,在音乐室里唱歌,使校园生活有意义,玩得开心。

(the music room)4. 我们最喜欢的活动是踢毽子、打篮球。

5. 我们希望能少一点作业,多一点课余时间来参加各种活动,到校外参观、旅游,这样可以有更多的机会了解外面的世界,开阔视野。

范文:We can have all kinds of activities every afternoon after school. We can play basketball, football or badminton or kick shuttlecocks in the playground, which can not only enrich our school life but also build up our bodies. In addition, reading books in the library or singingsongs in the music room also makes our school life colorful and meaningful and lets us have a wonderful time. However, generally speaking, kicking shuttlecocks and playing basketball are our favorite sports. Last but not the least(最后一点,也是非常重要的一点), it is hoped that we can have less homework, more free time to take part in the activities and take a trip to visit different places out of school as well, which gives us more chances to know more about the outside world to broaden our minds .。