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我是否可以把你比喻成夏天？Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?虽然你比夏天更可爱更温和：Thou art more lovely and more temperate:狂风会使五月娇蕾红消香断，Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,夏天拥有的时日也转瞬即过；And summer's lease hath all too short a date:有时天空之巨眼目光太炽热，Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,它金灿灿的面色也常被遮暗；And often is his gold complexion dimmed,而千芳万艳都终将凋零飘落，And every fair from fair sometime declines,被时运天道之更替剥尽红颜；By chance, or nature's changing course untrimmed: 但你永恒的夏天将没有止尽，But thy eternal summer shall not fade,你所拥有的美貌也不会消失，Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st,死神终难夸口你游荡于死荫，Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade,当你在不朽的诗中永葆盛时；When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st,只要有人类生存，或人有眼睛，So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,我的诗就会流传并赋予你生命。
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.注：第11行语出《旧约•诗篇》第23篇第4节：“虽然我穿行于死荫之幽谷，但我不怕罹祸，因为你与我同在……”英文赏析：This is one of the most famous of all the sonnets, justifiably so. But it would be a mistake to take it entirely in isolation, for it links in with so many of the other sonnets through the themes of the descriptive power of verse; the ability of the poet to depict the fair youth adequately, or not; and the immortality conveyed through being hymned in these 'eternal lines'. It is noticeable that here the poet is full of confidence that his verse will live as long as there are people drawing breath upon the earth, whereas later he apologises for his poor wit and his humble lines which are inadequate to encompass all the youth's excellence. Now, perhaps in the early days of his love, there is no such self-doubt and the eternal summer of the youth is preserved forever in the poet's lines. The poem also works at a rather curious level of achieving its objective through dispraise. The summer's day is found to be lacking in so many respects (too short, too hot, too rough, sometimes too dingy), but curiously enough one is left with the abiding impression that 'the lovely boy' is in fact like a summer's day at its best, fair, warm, sunny, temperate, one of the darling buds of May, and that all his beauty has been wonderfully highlighted by the comparison。
我是否可以把你比喻成夏天？我是否可以把你比喻成夏天？ Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?虽然你比夏天更可爱更温和：可爱更温和： Thou art more lovely and more temperate:狂风会使五月娇蕾红消香断，狂风会使五月娇蕾红消香断， Rough Rough winds winds winds do do do shake shake shake the the the darling darling darling buds buds buds of of of May,May,夏天拥有的时日也转瞬即过；夏天拥有的时日也转瞬即过； And summer's lease hath all too short a date:有时天空之巨眼目光太炽热，有时天空之巨眼目光太炽热， Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,它金灿灿的面色也常被遮暗；它金灿灿的面色也常被遮暗； And often is his gold complexion dimmed,而千芳万艳都终将凋零飘落，而千芳万艳都终将凋零飘落， And every fair from fair sometime declines,被时运天道之更替剥尽红颜； By chance, or nature's changing course untrimmed: 但你永恒的夏天将没有止尽，夏天将没有止尽， But thy eternal summer shall not fade,你所拥有的美貌也不会消失，你所拥有的美貌也不会消失， Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st,死神终难夸口你游荡于死荫，死神终难夸口你游荡于死荫， Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade,当你在不朽的诗中永葆盛时；当你在不朽的诗中永葆盛时； When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st,只要有人类生存，或人有眼睛，只要有人类生存，或人有眼睛， So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,我的诗就会流传并赋予你生命。
大连外国语学院Dalian University of Foreign languages 莎士比亚十四行诗翻译的比较课程名称翻译简史院系研究生部年级专业 2011级英语笔译姓名林玲学号 **********时间 2011-12-30莎士比亚十四行诗翻译的比较摘要：莎士比亚十四行诗在英国文学史上，乃至世界文学史上都具有崇高的地位。
解放后，中国很多翻译大家都或多或少的翻译了莎士比亚十四行诗，本文旨在总结解放后出现于市面的翻译版本，并对梁宗岱、屠岸、戴镏龄、辜正坤翻译的十四行诗第十八首，从音节，韵脚，标点以及内容四方面进行对比分析。
十四行诗最初流行于意大利，彼特拉克的创作使其臻于完美，又称“彼特拉克体”，后传到欧洲各国。
莎士比亚十四行诗大约创作于1590年至1598年之间，其诗作的结构技巧和语言技巧都很高，几乎每首诗都有独立的审美价值。
莎士比亚在运用这个诗体时，极为得心应手，主要表现为语汇丰富、用词洗练、比喻新颖、结构巧妙、音调铿锵悦耳。
而其最擅长的是最后两行诗，往往构思奇诡，语出惊人，既是全诗点睛之作，又自成一联警语格言。
在英国乃至世界十四行诗的创作中，莎士比亚十四行诗是一座高峰，当得起空前绝后的美称。
莎士比亚十四行诗又被称为“莎士比亚体”（Shakespearean）或“伊丽莎白体”，由三节四行诗和两行对句组成，每行10个音节，韵式为ABAB，CDCD，EFEF，GG。
莎士比亚十四行诗共有154首，其中前126首是写给一位年轻的美少年的，127到152首是写给黑女郎的。
解放后，对莎士比亚十四行诗进行整篇翻译的译者大概有二十位。
主要情况如下表一所列：表一在莎士比亚的154首十四行诗中，其中以第十八首最为脍炙人口，它的音韵特点为五音步抑扬格（pentameter iambic），韵式也是典型的“莎士比亚体”（Shakespearean），即：ABAB，CDCD，EFEF，GG。
诗歌原文如下：Sonnet 18Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? AThou art more lovely and more temperate: BRough winds do shake the darling buds of May, AAnd summer's lease hath all too short a date: BSometime too hot the eye of heaven shines, CAnd often is his gold complexion dimm'd; DAnd every fair from fair sometime declines, CBy chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd; DBut thy eternal summer shall not fade, ENor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st; FNor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade, EWhen in eternal lines to time thou grow’st: FSo long as men can breathe or eyes can see, GSo long lives this and this gives life to thee. G本文将对梁宗岱、屠岸、戴镏龄、辜正坤翻译的四个版本，从音节，韵脚，标点以及内容四个方面进行对比分析。
莎士比亚十四行诗中文一对天生的尤物我们要求蕃盛，以便美的玫瑰永远不会枯死，但开透的花朵既要及时雕零，就应把记忆交给娇嫩的后嗣;但你，只和你自己的明眸定情，把自己当燃料喂养眼中的火焰，和自己作对，待自己未免太狠，把一片丰沃的土地变成荒田。
你现在是大地的清新的点缀，又是锦绣阳春的唯一的前锋，为什么把富源葬送在嫩蕊里，温柔的鄙夫，要吝啬，反而浪用,可怜这个世界吧，要不然，贪夫，就吞噬世界的份，由你和坟墓。
二当四十个冬天围攻你的朱颜，在你美的园地挖下深的战壕，你青春的华服，那么被人艳羡，将成褴褛的败絮，谁也不要瞧:那时人若问起你的美在何处，哪里是你那少壮年华的宝藏，你说，“在我这双深陷的眼眶里，是贪婪的羞耻，和无益的颂扬。
” 你的美的用途会更值得赞美，如果你能够说，“我这宁馨小童将总结我的账，宽恕我的老迈，” 证实他的美在继承你的血统～这将使你在衰老的暮年更生，并使你垂冷的血液感到重温。
三照照镜子，告诉你那镜中的脸庞，说现在这庞儿应该另造一副;如果你不赶快为它重修殿堂，就欺骗世界，剥掉母亲的幸福。
因为哪里会有女人那么淑贞她那处女的胎不愿被你耕种,哪里有男人那么蠢，他竟甘心做自己的坟墓，绝自己的血统, 你是你母亲的镜子，在你里面她唤回她的盛年的芳菲四月:同样，从你暮年的窗你将眺见——纵皱纹满脸——你这黄金的岁月。
但是你活着若不愿被人惦记，就独自死去，你的肖像和你一起。
四俊俏的浪子，为什么把你那份美的遗产在你自己身上耗尽, 造化的馈赠非赐予，她只出赁; 她慷慨，只赁给宽宏大量的人。
那么，美丽的鄙夫，为什么滥用那交给你转交给别人的厚礼, 赔本的高利贷者，为什么浪用那么一笔大款，还不能过日子, 因为你既然只和自己做买卖，就等于欺骗你那妩媚的自我。
这样，你将拿什么账目去交代，当造化唤你回到她怀里长卧, 你未用过的美将同你进坟墓; 用呢，就活着去执行你的遗嘱。
五那些时辰曾经用轻盈的细工织就这众目共注的可爱明眸，终有天对它摆出魔王的面孔，把绝代佳丽剁成龙锺的老丑: 因为不舍昼夜的时光把盛夏带到狰狞的冬天去把它结果; 生机被严霜窒息，绿叶又全下，白雪掩埋了美，满目是赤裸裸: 那时候如果夏天尚未经提炼，让它凝成香露锁在玻璃瓶里，美和美的流泽将一起被截断，美，和美的记忆都无人再提起: 但提炼过的花，纵和冬天抗衡，只失掉颜色，却永远吐着清芬。
四、同一作品，由一种语言翻译成另一种语言，作品的风韵意味必然会有所不同；同一作品，由不同的人用同一语种译出，译文所传出的风韵意味又会有所不同。
一切“不同”都体现“文体”上。
下面是一首莎士比亚十四行诗(第66首)的两种汉语译文，请读者认真阅读，从文体角度仔细比较二者的区别。
（一）对这些都厌倦了，我召唤安息的死亡，——譬如，见到天才注定了做乞丐，空虚的草包穿戴得富丽堂皇，纯洁的盟誓受到了恶意的破坏，高贵的荣誉被可耻地放错了地位，强横的暴徒糟蹋了贞洁的姑娘，邪恶，不法地侮辱了正义的完美，拐腿的权势损伤了民间的健壮，文化，被当局统制得哑口无言，愚蠢(俨如博士)控制着聪明，单纯的真理被唤作头脑简单，被俘的良善伺侯着罪恶将军；对这些都倦了，我要离开这人间，只是，我死了，要使我爱人孤单。
(屠岸译)(二)不平事，何堪耐!索不如悄然去泉台；休说是天才，偏生作乞丐；人道是草包，偏把金银戴；说什么信与义，眼见无人睬；道什么荣与辱，全是瞎安排；童贞可怜遭虐待，正义无端受阉埋；跛腿权势，反弄残了擂台汉；墨客骚人，官府门前口难开；蠢驴儿自命博士驭群才；真真话错唤作愚鲁痴呆；善恶易位呵，恰如小人反受大人拜。
似这等不平何堪耐，不如一死化纤埃，待去也，呀!怎好让心上人独守空阶?(辜正坤译)语文教育082班陈少龙作业一、语言风格的不同第一首诗歌的语言饱含西方文化气息，较好地保留里原作品的语言特色。
比较好地遵守了翻译中的“信”的原则。
语言相对直白，但却蕴含这强烈的感情色彩。
例如：“高贵”、“强横”、“邪恶”、等。
这这首诗的的第二个语言特点就是很好地运用了强烈的对比，形成可巨大的反差，以此来激起读者的共鸣，例如：“邪恶”与“正义”，“愚蠢”和“聪明”。
第三，就是语言饱含西方宗教特色。
第二首诗的语言，比之第一首诗，它融入了东方的文化血液。
比较好地运用了翻译原则中的“雅”。
语言表达委婉。
文雅中却洋溢出无比的辛辣。
例如：“天才”却做“乞丐”；“草包”却戴“金银”。
莎士比亚十四行诗翻译的比较--上海译国译民翻译公司表一在莎士比亚的154首十四行诗中，其中以第十八首最为脍炙人口，它的音韵特点为五音步抑扬格（pentameter iambic），韵式也是典型的“莎士比亚体”（Shakespearean），即：ABAB，CDCD，EFEF，GG。
诗歌原文如下：Sonnet 18Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? AThou art more lovely and more temperate: BRough winds do shake the darling buds of May, AAnd summer's lease hath all too short a date: BSometime too hot the eye of heaven shines, CAnd often is his gold complexion dimm'd; DAnd every fair from fair sometime declines, CBy chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd; DBut thy eternal summer shall not fade, ENor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st; FNor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade, EWhen in eternal lines to time thou grow’st: FSo long as men can breathe or eyes can see, GSo long lives this and this gives life to thee. G本文将对梁宗岱、屠岸、戴镏龄、辜正坤翻译的四个版本，从音节，韵脚，标点以及内容四个方面进行对比分析。
Sonnet 181. Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?Could I compare you to the time/days of summer?2. Thou art more lovely and more temperate:You are more lovely and more gentle and mild than the days.3. Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,The wild wind shakes the favorite flowers of May.4. And summer's lease hath all too short a dateAnd the duration of summer has a limited period of time.5. Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,Sometimes the sun shinning is too hot.6. And often is his gold complexion dimmed,And his gold skin of the face will be dimmed by the clouds.7. And every fair from fair sometime declines,Every beautiful thing and person will decline from previous state of beauty.8. By chance, or nature's changing course untrimmed:(the beauty) will be stripped of by chance or changes of season in the nature.9. But thy eternal summer shall not fade,But your summer exists forever and will not lose color/freshness or vigor.10. Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st,You will never lose your own beauty either.11. Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade,The Death can’t boast that you wander in his shadow.12. When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st,You grow as time grows in the undying lines of my verse.13. So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,So long as men can live in the world with sight and breath,14. So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.This poem will exist and you will live in it forever.Formal features14 lines4 stanzas: 3 quatrains + 1 coupletRhythm & meter: 10 syllables (5 feet) each line, iambic pentameterRhyme scheme: abab cdcd efef ggStructure:1st – 2nd quatrains: an introduction to and development of a problem3rd quatrain: a volta or a turn “突转”(a change in direction, thought, or emotion)the couplet: a summary or conclusionThe theme:The main theme is t he power of the speaker’s poem to defy time and last forever, carrying the beauty of the beloved down to future generations.What is it about?The speaker opens the poem with a question addressed to the beloved: “Shall I compare thee toa summer’s day?” The next eleven lines are devoted to such a comparison. Summer: (Line 3: rough winds；4：too short；5. too hot；6. too dimmed；7&8. beautiful things will die) Sonnet 18 is the first poem in the sonnets not to explicitly encourage the young man to have children. The “procreation” sequence of the first 17 sonnets ended with the speaker’s realization that the young man might not need children to preserve his beauty; he could also live forever in this poem.Figures of speechIn line (5 ) There is a Metaphor .In line ( 5+6 ) There is a Personification .( eye of Heaven shines ) : Eye of heaven = the sunThe sun became dark because dark of clouds .In Line (9+10+12 ) There is a Hyperbole .In Line ( 11 )There is a personification .In Line ( 14 ) There is an Inverted order .Analysis: （拓展）The poem works at a rather curious level of achieving its objective through dispraise.The summer's day is found to be lacking in so many respects (too short, too hot, too rough, and sometimes too dingy), but curiously enough one is left with the abiding impression that 'the lovely boy' is in fact like a summer's day at its best, fair, warm, sunny, temperate, one of the darling buds of May, and that all his beauty has been wonderfully highlighted by the comparison.Sonnet 1301. My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;My lady’s eyes aren’t like the sun at all.2. Coral is far more red, than her lips red:Coral is much redder than her lips.3. If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;If snow is white, then her breasts are brown.4. If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.If hair is as coarse as threads, then her hair is full of black threads.5. I have seen roses damasked, red and white,I have seen the pinkish, red and white roses.6. But no such roses see I in her cheeks;But I can see such kinds of roses in her cheeks.7. And in some perfumes is there more delightThere is much tempting/attractive fragrance.8. Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.The fragrance is more attractive than her steamy, sweaty and unsavory smells.9. I love to hear her speak, yet well I knowI like listening to her speaking, but I am also aware that10. That music hath a far more pleasing sound:The sound of music is much more favorable than her sound.11. I grant I never saw a goddess go,I admit that I never saw a goddess walking by.12. My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:My mistress stamps on the floor when she walks.13. And yet by heaven, I think my love as rare,But I can swear to God that my lover is as precious as15. As any she belied with false compare.As any woman who has been misrepresented by ridiculous comparisons.Formal features14 lines4 stanzas: 3 quatrains + 1 coupletRhythm & meter: 10 syllables (5 feet) each line, iambic pentameterRhyme scheme: abab cdcd efef ggStructure:1st – 2nd quatrains: an introduction to and development of a problem3rd quatrain: a volta or a turn “突转”(a change in direction, thought, or emotion)the couplet: a summary or conclusionThemeThe poet suggests their love is rare because he does not desire her to be something she is not.It's about finding love in spite of (or maybe even because of) physical flaws.It pokes fun at our obsession with looks and to show how ridiculous it is to ask any person to live up to some ideal of perfect beauty.Figures of speechNegative similesSimile may also be expressed in the negative form“My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun”Etc.Ironic toneThe sonnet appears to be humorous, but the couplet displays the deeply romantic tone of the poem.Analysis（拓展）In many ways, Shakespeare’s sonnets subvert and reverse the conventions of the Petrarchan love sequence: the idealizing love poems, for instance, are written not to a perfect woman but to an admittedly imperfect man, and the love poems to the dark lady are anything but idealizing, like this one. He describes the woman that he loves in extremely unflattering terms but claims that he truly loves her, which lends credibility to his claim because even though he does not find her attractive, he still declares his love for her.Sonnet 1291. The expense of spirit in a waste of shameThe expenditure of sexual energy in a desert of shameful moral decay2. Is lust in action: and till action, lustIs the lust/letch acting: and before having sexual intercourse, lust3. Is perjured, murderous, bloody, full of blame,Is dishonest, murderous, violent and blameworthy with a lot of guilt.4. Savage, extreme, rude, cruel, not to trust;Barbaric, extreme, rude, cruel, and untrustworthy.5. Enjoyed no sooner but despised straight;As soon as lust has been enjoyed, it is hated.6. Past reason hunted; and no sooner had,Lust is pursued beyond the control of reason, as soon as lust is fulfilled,7. Past reason hated, as a swallowed bait,It is hated irrationally like a bait that a fish swallows8. On purpose laid to make the taker mad.(The bait) set on purpose to make the trapped creature react with frenzy.9. Mad in pursuit and in possession so;10. Had, having, and in quest to have extreme;The taker is insane in pursuing one's lust and mad in possessing the object of lust: going to extremes in having had it, in the having of it, and in seeking to have it;11. A bliss in proof, and proved, a very woe;A heavenly sensation while it is being experienced. Once you are done, it is a true sorrow.12. Before, a joy proposed; behind a dream.An expected joy exists before having it; after having it, it seems like a dream.13. All this the world well knows; yet none knows wellEveryone in the world knows it very well, but no one knows14. To shun the heaven that leads men to this hell.To avoid the tempting sense of delight which leads men to hell.Formal features14 lines4 stanzas: 3 quatrains + 1 coupletRhythm & meter: 10 syllables (5 feet) each line, iambic pentameterRhyme scheme: abab cdcd efef ggStructure:1st – 2nd quatrains: an introduction to and development of a problem3rd quatrain: a volta or a turn “突转”(a change in direction, thought, or emotion)the couplet: a summary or conclusionTheme•About lust.–Lines 1-2: lust in action (shameful and wasteful...)–Lines 3-4: lust before action (dishonest, murderous, bloody…)–Lines 5-8: a comparison between lust before and after action (enjoyed vs.despised; both are past-reason / mad) – lust causes madness!–Lines 9-12: a comparison between lust before and after action. (bliss vs. woe;joy vs. dream) – lust causes sadness and disillusionment.–Lines 13-14: a conclusion.Figures of speech•Simile: taker of lust as a hooked fish•Personification: lust as a person•Contrasts: "before" vs. "behind" (after), "heaven" vs. "hell," and so on.Analysis （拓展）•The profound hatred of sexuality, sexual pessimism•Its hatred of sexuality derives from the Christian imperative of the virginal life and the dislike of all bodily functions•It gives essentially a phallo-centric view of sex•Impersonal tone: The speaker never says outright that he is writing about his own experience; instead, he presents the poem as an impersonal description, a catalogue of the kinds of experience offered by lust.。
莎士比亚十四行诗原文译文探析莎士比亚（William Shakespeare）是英国文学史上的一位伟大的戏剧家和诗人，他的作品流传于世并对后世文学产生了深远的影响。
莎士比亚的十四行诗是他众多杰作中的一部分，他以其深刻的思想和优美的诗句赢得了世人的赞誉。
在这篇文章中，我们将对莎士比亚的十四行诗进行原文、译文以及探析。
我们先来看一首莎士比亚的十四行诗原文：Sonnet 18接下来是这首诗的译文：第18首十四行诗我是否应该把你比作夏日？你比夏日更可爱更温和：狂风摇曳着五月娇艳的花蕾，夏日的期限太短暂了：太阳有时候照得太热烈，有时候他那金色的容颜也黯淡无光；天生的美丽有时会减退，不管是偶然或是自然的变化所致；但是你那永恒的夏天绝不会褪色，也不会失去你拥有的那份美丽；死亡也不能夸耀说你属于他的阴影，当你那永恒的形象随时间而增长；只要有人们的呼吸或者眼睛还能看到，这首诗就将长存，这首诗给了你生命。
莎士比亚的十四行诗常常采用押韵的手法，并且以iambic pentameter的形式出现。
这首Sonnet 18即为莎士比亚的经典之作，通过比喻把描绘出了诗人对爱人的赞美之情。
诗的开篇即以修辞设问来呈现，作者在问自己是否应该将心上人比作夏日，然后通过下文的赞美，表达出对心上人更为深切的赞美之情。
他认为心上人的美丽胜过夏日，夏日虽然美丽，却不如心上人温和可爱。
由此，诗中呈现了作者对心上人的赞美之情。
在诗的后半部分，诗人使用了“永恒的夏天”来包含对心上人的赞美之语，不管是风吹雨打，都不会改变。
随后，诗人再以修辞手法呼唤死亡无法摧毁对心上人的赞美之情，并肯定了这份美丽将长存与时间，给了心上人永生。
通过以上对原文和译文的对比分析，我们不难发现莎士比亚的十四行诗所蕴含的深刻情感。
诗人通过对夏日和心上人的比较，抒发了对心上人深切的赞美之情，并以永恒的夏天来喻示继续深切的情感长存。
这首诗也正是莎士比亚情感抒发的一个缩影，其深情款款的语言和艺术手法让我们感受到了莎士比亚伟大的文学魅力。
我是否可以把你比喻成夏天？Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?虽然你比夏天更可爱更温和：Thou art more lovely and more temperate:狂风会使五月娇蕾红消香断，Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,夏天拥有的时日也转瞬即过；And summer's lease hath all too short a date:有时天空之巨眼目光太炽热，Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,它金灿灿的面色也常被遮暗；And often is his gold complexion dimmed,而千芳万艳都终将凋零飘落，And every fair from fair sometime declines,被时运天道之更替剥尽红颜；By chance, or nature's changing course untrimmed: 但你永恒的夏天将没有止尽，But thy eternal summer shall not fade,你所拥有的美貌也不会消失，Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st,死神终难夸口你游荡于死荫，Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade,当你在不朽的诗中永葆盛时；When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st,只要有人类生存，或人有眼睛，So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,我的诗就会流传并赋予你生命。
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.注：第11行语出《旧约•诗篇》第23篇第4节：“虽然我穿行于死荫之幽谷，但我不怕罹祸，因为你与我同在……”英文赏析：This is one of the most famous of all the sonnets, justifiably so. But it would be a mistake to take it entirely in isolation, for it links in with so many of the other sonnets through the themes of the descriptive power of verse; the ability of the poet to depict the fair youth adequately, or not; and the immortality conveyed through being hymned in these 'eternal lines'. It is noticeable that here the poet is full of confidence that his verse will live as long as there are people drawing breath upon the earth, whereas later he apologises for his poor wit and his humble lines which are inadequate to encompass all the youth's excellence. Now, perhaps in the early days of his love, there is no such self-doubt and the eternal summer of the youth is preserved forever in the poet's lines. The poem also works at a rather curious level of achieving its objective through dispraise. The summer's day is found to be lacking in so many respects (too short, too hot, too rough, sometimes too dingy), but curiously enough one is left with the abiding impression that 'the lovely boy' is in fact like a summer's day at its best, fair, warm, sunny, temperate, one of the darling buds of May, and that all his beauty has been wonderfully highlighted by the comparison。
莎士比亚十四行诗原文译文探析莎士比亚（William Shakespeare）是英国文学史上最杰出的剧作家和诗人之一，他的作品被翻译成多种语言，并在全球范围内广泛传播。
莎士比亚的十四行诗（Sonnet）尤为著名，这些诗歌以其深刻的情感、优美的语言和细腻的描写而闻名于世。
本文将对莎士比亚的十四行诗原文进行解析，并对其进行中文翻译，以探讨其诗歌魅力及特点。
我们可以以莎士比亚的第18首十四行诗为例，来进行原文分析和翻译。
翻译：我将你比作夏日吗？你比夏日更可爱温柔：大风摇曳着五月的娇蕾，夏日的时光太短促：有时天上的眼睛闷热骄阳，金色的脸庞也会变得阴霾；一切美丽都要有凋零的时刻，不论是偶然或是自然的更迭；但你永恒的夏日不会凋零，也不会失去你所拥有的美丽；死亡也不会得意你在他阴影下徘徊，当你在永恒的诗行中与时间一同成长：只要人类还能呼吸，眼睛还能看到，这首诗就会活着，而这诗为你赋予永生。
在这首诗中，莎士比亚通过比喻的手法将爱情赋予了永恒的生命力，表达了对爱情的赞美和珍视。
诗中描述了夏日的短暂和变化，与之相比，诗人认为所爱的人之美将永存不朽，不受时间和死亡的摧残。
莎士比亚用极其婉转的语言，表达了对所爱之人深切的感情和艳丽的赞美。
诗中对时间的描绘和爱情的延续也是莎士比亚十四行诗的常见主题。
莎士比亚的十四行诗在原文中运用了丰富的修辞手法，包括比喻、排比、转折等，使诗歌语言优美、精练，并能够深刻表达其情感。
莎士比亚对押韵和韵脚的运用也非常出色，使得诗歌在朗诵时具有优美的韵律感，增强了诗歌的感染力和表现力。
对于翻译而言，莎士比亚的十四行诗的翻译可以说是一项极具挑战性的任务。
翻译者需要理解莎士比亚的原文意境和表达方式，将其准确地传达到目标语言中去。
在保持原文风格和韵律的基础上，翻译者还需尽量使译文通顺、自然，表达出原文的情感和内涵。
莎士比亚的十四行诗翻译对于翻译者的语言功底和文学素养都有较高的要求。
莎士比亚的十四行诗中常常运用反讽、夸张等修辞手法，这些手法使诗歌在表达情感时更显得生动、深刻。
