建议信英语作文,公开课课件

as a matter of fact in addition
in my opinion as far as I am concerned
first/firstly first of all
suddenly
however have to do sth.
all of a sudden
on the contrary have no choice but to do sth.
1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解
2、提出建议并给出理由
注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出， 但不计入总词数）。
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
样题分析 第二人称
I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Best wishes (for you).
实战演练
练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来 信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据 下列要点写回信。
要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班； ⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。
定语从句
=help 用短语来代替单词
=want to 用短语来代替单词
I hope that these suggestions will work.And I am dying to receiving your good news./ I can't wait to hear from you again. /Don't hesitate to write to me about your great progress. =want to 用短语来代短语

...
talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；

Strike a balance between formal and casual
Your language should be formal enough to show respect, but not too stuffy or formal that it comes across as stiff or unnatural. Use 专业且亲切的语言，让读者感到舒适。
Begin your letter with a brief introduction of yourself and your purpose for writing. State your relationship to the recipient and explain why you are writing.
结尾: 鼓励团队采纳建议，表达对团队发展的期望。
具体建议: 分析团队协作中存在的问题，提出改善团队沟通和合作的具体建议。
目的: 针对团队协作提出建议，帮助改善团队氛围，提高团队效率。
How to write a good suggestion letter
05
Start with a clear introduction
I would be grateful if you could provide me with further information.
Thank you for your assistance in this matter.
Example analysis of suggestion letters
02
Salutation
Begin with a formal salutation, such as "Dear [Recipient's Name]," or "To Whom It May Concern."

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26、要使整个人生都过得舒适、愉快，这是不可能的，因为人类必须具备一种能应付逆境的态度。——卢梭
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27、只有把抱怨环境的心情，化为上进的力量，才是成功的保证。——罗曼·罗兰
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28、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。——孔子
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29、勇猛、大胆和坚定的决心能够抵得上武器的精良。——达·芬奇
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30、意志是一个强壮的盲人，倚靠在明眼的跛子肩上。——叔本命 就永远 只能是 死水一 潭。 34、当你眼泪忍不住要流出来的时候 ，睁大 眼睛， 千万别 眨眼!你会看到 世界由 清晰变 模糊的 全过程 ，心会 在你泪 水落下 的那一 刻变得 清澈明 晰。盐 。注定 要融化 的，也 许是用 眼泪的 方式。
35、不要以为自己成功一次就可以了 ，也不 要以为 过去的 光荣可 以被永 远肯定 。
高考英语书面表达---建议信 写作优秀课件(共42张PPT)
【完美版】
31、别人笑我太疯癫，我笑他人看不 穿。(名 言网) 32、我不想听失意者的哭泣，抱怨者 的牢骚 ，这是 羊群中 的瘟疫 ，我不 能被它 传染。 我要尽 量避免 绝望， 辛勤耕 耘，忍 受苦楚 。我一 试再试 ，争取 每天的 成功， 避免以 失败收 常在别 人停滞 不前时 ，我继 续拼搏 。

16. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____

2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 3.I would like to sugges.t/recommend that...
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points

整
体 2. Body
三 部
中心记述部分；层次分明
分 3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
假如你是李华。你的美国朋友Mike最近感觉 学习压力很大，写信向你求助。请你用英文给他回 一封信，就如何处理压力给他一些建议。
1. 既要努力学习也要学会放松（劳逸结合）；
2. 看关于如何解压的书籍；
3. 向朋友和父母倾诉。
Best wishes.
Yours, Lily
建议信
Task 1
Lily was worried, thinking that she was too
__f_a_t___. Therefore, she asked you to give her some _s_u_g_g_e_s_t_io_n__s_\ _a_d_v_ic_e___to help her_lo_s_e__ _w_e_i_g_h_t__ and keep__fi_t __.
meanings of it. Thirdly, ___A______, which can
improve your listening and speaking abilities. What’s more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.
• B. I’m sorry to hear that you are not able to communicate with others effectively.
• C. I do hope to hear good news from you that you do well in communicating with others.

Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language

Chinese words more easily. What’s more, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
• 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学 好中文。请你根据下列要点写 回信。
• 要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班；⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中 文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。
• take a Chinese course
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
First, you had better show your friendliness to others.
It is good for your to make friends. 两个简单句
First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others.状语从句
写作模板 第二段： (建议及理由) 1. Here are a few suggestions. 2.I’d like to share some advice
with you. 3.In my opinion/As far as I am
concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.

常用句式
• 4. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
• 翻译：我希望你会发现这些建议很有用。 • 5. I hope that you can take my suggestions
into consideration. • 翻译： 我希望你能接受我的建议。
• Jamie
审题
• 本篇作文为写回信，为一篇应用文，但其格式 已经给出，格式问题无需考虑。主要要求考生 写出正文。
• 审题时，需要解决好如下问题： • 一、写什么？
这一信息包括在试题的背景介绍和内容要点两个 部分之中。
审题
• 写信的背景：署名为Worried的同学向你诉说了 自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习 和生活受到了影响。
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
考虑什么因素？？？
• 三、时态、人称、词数等。本文的基调为现在 范畴的时态，人称以第二人称为主。注意在行 文中使用一些高级句型，提高作文档次。词数 要求为120左右。
范文
• Hi_Worried，
• I'm_sorry_to_know_that_you_are_having_such_a_bad_tim e_at_the_moment. I’m writing to draw your attention to the fact that the truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret. Here are three useful tips：