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英语写作——英语写作点拨一、确定主题句主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。
它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。
通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点：1. 归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点；2. 提炼出一句具有概括性的话；3. 主题句应具有可读性，能够吸引读者。
二、注意篇章结构合理布局一般为三段式：开始部分——说出文中的要点、核心问题；正文部分——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论；结尾部分——对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出，段落之间有机联系，内容完整、连贯。
前后呼应，去除与主题无关的内容。
三、写作技巧1. 如何开篇技巧1：主旨设问更给力例如：I think it is very important for us to do sports. Why? Because it is good for our health and study.I think it is very important for us to protect environment. Why? Because it is good for living.I think it is very important for us to learn English. Why? Because it is the most-widely used language in the world now.技巧2：从我们到我例如：Different people have different..., but/and I have/prefer...2. 如何写正文句型变化：变化原则1：表达观点要“自我”例如：In my opinion, we should pay much more attention to the weak subjects!变化原则2：两句之间要过渡例如：I left my pen at home. What’s worse, the stationery store was closed that day.变化原则3：问题阐述用形容词句型普通句型 The environment is bad.比较级句型 The environment is getting worse and worse./The environment is getting much wo rse than before.最高级句型 This is the worst environment I have ever seen.变化原则4：表达作用试试“way+to do”例如：Reading is a good way to relax myself.Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English.变化原则5：增强情感转感叹例如：How beneficial it is for us to read!How important it is for students to do sports.变化原则6：描述事情加感情例如：I was very happy that I got an A in English last term.It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term.变化原则7：形容词句型升级例如：It was an unusual experience in my life.→ It was one of the most unusual experience in my life.变化原则8：活用there be结合定从There are many reasons why I enjoy reading词汇变化：变化原则1：make更有feelI made a progress in English. I feel proud.→ It makes me feel proud to make a progress in English.变化原则2：连词不再用and并列 likewise; similarly; as well as…递进what’s more/worse; furthermore; additionally; in addition...转折 while; however; by contrast; on the other hand; instead...变化原则3：喜欢不再like用be fond of; enjoy; be crazy about变化原则4：提出措施尽量不用should用suppose; had better do; have no choice but do; it’s our duty to do三、如何结尾1. 巧用过渡，归纳全文过渡词：to sum up; in conclusion; in brief; on account of this; thus过渡句型：Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that...Thus, it can be concluded that...Therefore, we can find that...2. 如此建议Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to...Accordingly, I recommend that...Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.四、写作锦囊：巧用连接词过渡，提升连贯性1. 次序关系first, first of all, to begin with, to start with, second, next, then, afterwards, finally, eventually, lastly, at last, last but not least2. 因果关系because, since, as, for, due to, in view of, for this reason, for the reason that..., as a result, so, therefore, thus, hence, so that3. 转折关系but, however, though, even though4. 并列关系and, also, too, as well as, either...or..., both...and...5. 递进关系moreover, not only...but also..., not...but..., in addition (to), besides, in order to, meanwhile6. 类比关系like, likewise, similarly7. 比较关系compared with, compared to, rather than, rather, neither...nor, on the contrary, different from this8. 举例关系like, such as, for example, in particular, including, as for, as to9. 强调关系in fact, especially, particularly, obviously, what is more important, certainly, of course, without a doubt10. 条件关系if, unless, lest, provided that, if it is the case, in this sense, once, if possible, if necessary, if so11. 归纳总结therefore, in short, in brief, in other words, on the whole, in sum, to sum up, in conclusion, in summary, to conclude, the conclusion can be drawn that...。
高三英语二轮复习策略根据高三英语复课计划，于3月15日前全面结束第一轮复习，以现在的实际进度来看，完全能按时完成任务。
第二轮复课即将开始，在这里，我代表英语组的全体同仁，对于一轮复习的得失做以总结，并于二轮复课的目标，策略及具体方法汇报如下，望领导及同志们提出宝贵意见。
一、一轮复课的总结“夯实基础，强化基础知识”，这是第一轮复习的重点。
主要是为学生复习基础知识，以抓课本中的难点和重点为突破口，注重基本词汇、语法的复习，并培养高三意识。
通过第一轮复习，学生的基础知识得到了巩固和加强，扩大了词汇量，学习了高中阶段的所有语法，做题能力和应试技巧也有了很大提高，已达到了第一轮复习目的。
但通过上学期的期末考试及二模，以及备课组会上各老师所反馈的情况来看，还存在下列问题。
第一，虽然大部分同学通过第一轮复习，知识增加，能力得到提高。
但是还有不少同学，虽然努力学英语，不断地行行各专项的训练和综合的测试，开始显得力不从心，因为复习的内容不能直体现在分数的不断上升，反而还会降低。
第二，学生的缺点暴露无遗。
有的学生背单词出现障碍，有的语法结构出现问题，对于各项考试题目由于各种原因出错，导致考试得不高分。
第三，还有学生普遍基础知识薄弱，不认识单词，不会语法，分不清句子结构，阅读理解文章看不懂，至于解题方法对于这些同学就意义不大了。
第四，通过一轮复习，给学生输入了大量的语法和词汇知识，但对许多学生来说，学制的知识是一盆散沙，捡到篮子都是菜，没有进行分类整理，没有系统化、条理化。
第五，部分学生虽然苦学英语，但方法不当，因而进步不明显，出现畏难心理，打退堂鼓，甚至已经直接放弃了英语学。
针对以上问题，都需要相出相应的对策，在二轮复习中解决，才能使学生的成绩有所提高。
二、二轮复习策略二轮复习是高三英语复习进入的一个非常关键，也异常难熬的瓶颈时段。
此轮复习的主要目标是专项训练，培养和拓展能力。
就是把课本知识和语法知识系统化、条理化，迅速把掌握的知识转化成能力，如解题能力、分析能力、知识的迁移能力、创新能力。
高级表达2 丰富优化句式句式1画龙点睛的"非谓语动词"1.He listened with close attention，biting his lips and staring at the floor.他聚精会神地听着，咬着嘴唇，眼睛盯着地板。
2.He sat with his head in his hands，not belie v ing what I told him.他双手抱头坐着，不相信我告诉他的话。
3.I opened the letter carefully，hoping for some clues to the identity of the owner of the wallet.我小心翼翼地打开信，希望能找到一些有关钱包主人身份的线索。
4.Gasping with pain， he forced himself to his feet and with slow， shaky steps， began to walk.他痛苦地喘着气，强迫自己站了起来，迈着缓慢的步子，摇摇晃晃地开始走。
5.The man stood there silently，torn by sorrow and compassion.男人安静地站在那里，被悲伤和同情折磨着。
6.Encouraged by his teacher， he decided to gather his courage and participate in the writing contest.在老师的鼓励下，他决定鼓起勇气参加写作比赛。
7.Filled with fright， I dragged my exhausted body inching forward.我心中充满恐惧，拖着疲惫的身体慢慢向前走。
8.Ha v ing told the truth， he felt a lot easier and returned home with a lighter heart.说出真相后，他感觉轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校2016（广东）花县高考英语（二轮）书面表达（点睛）浏览（4）基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）以下是佛山剪纸艺术的相关信息：[写作内容]请根据以上信息写一篇英语短文，介绍佛山剪纸艺术，供外国游客参考，内容包括：佛山剪纸艺术的历史、种类及现状。
[写作要求]1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2.[评分]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
基础写作【参考范文】Foshan paper-cutting is a traditional folk art with a long history, which dates back to more than 1000 years ago. In Qing Dynasty,paper-cutting became popular in Foshan and was an important part of people’s daily life. There are three kinds of paper cuts: paper cuts for decoration, for religious purposes and for design, among which those for decoration are the most widely used. Nowadays, paper-cutting products are often chosen as presents and foreigner are always fond of them. There are more than 30 shops for paper cuts in Foshan, and paper-cutting products sell as far as in Southeast Asia.【2014模拟】读写任务 (共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
7步成文第六步打磨开头和结尾，“别出心裁”把分添近三年高考英语全国卷的书面表达以应用文为主，一般要求写一封书信，书信一般有自己特地的开头格式。
但固有的、模式化的开头会让阅卷老师多读生厌、乏累不堪，因此要想给阅卷老师留下好的第一印象，就得有一个引人入胜、新奇新颖的开头，这能够激发阅卷老师的爱好，博得好感。
有了一个好的开头，若再加上一个画龙点睛的结尾，那就真可谓锦上添花，无可挑剔了。
“头好一半文”“尾好更添韵”说的就是开头和结尾的重要性。
一、“四档”“五档”差在哪[典例感悟] (2024·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国挚友Leslie学习汉语。
请你写封邮件告知下次上课的安排。
内容包括：1．时间和地点； 2.内容：学习唐诗； 3.课前打算：简要了解唐朝的历史。
留意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。
二、如何由“四档”升“五档”(一)应用文常见开头段的写法——开宗明义应用文的特点是开宗明义，用简洁的语言引出文章的主题，使读者清晰文章要表达什么内容，常用的开头有：(二)应用文常见结尾段的写法——表示期盼在应用文的结尾处我们常运用一些功能句式，向对方表示友善的感谢或亲切的问候，表达愿望或期盼等。
常用的结尾有：[课堂应用体验]翻译下列开头和结尾句1．我代表学生会给您写信恳求帮助我们的校友。
I_am_writing_to_you,_on_behalf_of_the_Students'_Union,_to_ask_for_help_for_ our_schoolmate.2．假如便利的话，我希望你能接受我们的邀请。
We_hope_that_you_will_accept_our_invitation_if_it_is_convenient_for_you.3．我写信申请在您的高校里学习。
I'm_writing_to_apply_to_study_in_your_university.4．我写信告知您我的问题，这个问题困扰了我很长时间。
2０18高三英语二轮复习板块三书面表达1 运筹帷幄之中，参透不变之法编辑整理:尊敬的读者朋友们：这里是精品文档编辑中心，本文档内容是由我和我的同事精心编辑整理后发布的，发布之前我们对文中内容进行仔细校对,但是难免会有疏漏的地方，但是任然希望(20１８高三英语二轮复习板块三书面表达１运筹帷幄之中，参透不变之法)的内容能够给您的工作和学习带来便利。
同时也真诚的希望收到您的建议和反馈，这将是我们进步的源泉,前进的动力。
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运筹帷幄之中，参透不变之法A(20１7·河北石家庄高三联考)假定你是李华,你校学生会要举办一次主题为“健康成长”的英语演讲比赛。
你已报名参加比赛。
请根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿。
1．积极的人生态度；2．努力学习；3.参加体育锻炼.注意：1。
开头和结尾已给出。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．词数１00左右。
Ladies anｄ gentlｅmｅｎ,Mｙ naｍe is Li Hua。
_＿______＿__________＿________＿＿_______＿_＿____＿_____＿＿＿＿______＿＿__＿_______＿_＿_＿__＿______＿_______________＿_____＿＿＿_____＿___＿＿______＿＿______＿__________＿＿____＿___＿＿_____＿_＿＿__＿_____＿__＿＿_______＿＿_＿___＿_____＿__＿___＿_____＿_＿______＿＿＿_＿_＿＿＿＿__＿_＿＿___＿_＿＿______＿__＿＿_＿__＿__＿___＿____Ｔhａnｋyou．[参考范文]Ｌａdｉes_and_ｇeｎtlｅmen,Mｙ_nａmｅ＿is_Lｉ_Hｕa。
关键字：写作技巧文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意义表达得更加深刻。
文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种：1、首尾呼应，画龙点睛在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。
如“I Cannot Forget Her” （我忘不了她）的结尾：After her death，I felt as if something were missing in my life.I was sad over her passing away，but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.2、重复主题句结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。
如“I Love My Home Town”（我爱家乡）的结尾：I love my home town，and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.3、自然结尾随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。
如“Fishing”（钓鱼）的结尾：I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours，but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing，we lay down on the river bank，bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.4、含蓄性的结尾用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法，而是让读者自己去领会和思考。
2021届高三英语二轮专项训练：阅读表达(biǎodá)+写作〔20〕第一节：阅读表达[1]What is your favorite color? Do you like yellow, orange or red? If you do, you must be an optimist, a leader, and an active person who enjoys life, people and excitement. Do you prefer grayand blue? Then you are probably quiet, shy and you would ratherfollow than lead. If you love green, you are strong-minded and determined. You wish to succeed and want other people to see you are successful.[2]At least this is what a psychologist tells us, and we arealso told that we don’t choose our favorite color as we grow up. If you happen to love brown, you did so as soon as you opened your eyes, or at least as soon as you could see clearly.[3]A yellow room makes us feel more cheerful and morecomfortable than a dark green one, and a red dress brings warmth and cheer to the saddest winter day. On the other hand, black is depressing(沮丧). Light and bright colors makepeople________________.[4]It is a fact that factory workers work better, harder, and have fewer accidents when their machines are painted orange rather than black or dark gray.[5]Remember, then, that if you feel low, you can always brighten your day or your life with a new shirt or a few colorful thing. Remember also that you will know your friends and your enemiesbetter when you find out what colors they like and dislike. And don’t forget that anyone can guess a lot about your character when you choose handkerchiefs or a lampshade.1.What is the best title of this passage?(no more than 6 words)_______________________________________________plete the following statement with the words from the passage. (no more than 4 words)You’d like such colors as _______________ if you would be a member rather than a leader.3.Fill in the blank in the Paragraph 3 with proper words. (no more than 8 words)___________________________________________________4.What is the advantage if the machines in the factory are paintedin bright colors?(no more than 7words)_________________________________________________5.What does the word “they〞 (Line 3, Paragraph 5) probably refer to? (no more than 5 words)_________________________________________________第二节：书面(shūmiàn)表达最近几年食品平安已经成为社会的热点话题，请你根据以下内容向校英语播送站写一篇英语短文。
请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。
凿壁偷光1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2．结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；3．根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。
写作要求：1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3．不必写标题。
评分标准：内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文：The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people's lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large－scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and being on the right track.Writing 3(·郑州市质检二)假定你是李华，下面四幅图画描述了发生在你上学路上的一件事情，请根据图画内容用英语写一篇短文。
位敦市安定阳光实验学校技法7| 画龙点睛的结束语结束语即结尾。
一篇英语作文如果结尾写得好，就会强化阅卷老师对你所写作文的好感，从而给你的作文打高分。
1.如何写好结尾？结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯文章的中心思想，升华主题的作用。
主要有以下几种写法：(1)照开头Everyone enjoys beautiful things.And seeing sunrise may be one of the most unusual experiences in our life.(2)复现主题We must protect the water as well as find ways to reuse it. If not, the last drop of water will be a teardrop.(3)总结式In a word, a friend in need is a friend indeed. May all of us treasure friendship.(4)引用式I believe my dream will come true one day becaus e “Where there is a will, there is a way.”(5)式The Internet is now very important to me because it not only gives me a lot of fun but also it is very useful.I like it and hope you will like it too.(6)问题式Will you join us in the next century? How romantic and fantastic it will be!2．书信的结束语书信的结束语，我们见到最多的是I'm looking forward to .../Looking forward to ...。
第1章专题7动词的时态和语态1.(2011·全国卷，9)If you don't like the drink you ______，just leave it and try a different one.A．ordered B．are orderingC．will order D．had ordered答案：A。
句意：如果你不喜欢你点的饮料，就别喝了，再换一种。
由情境可知饮料是刚才点的，故用一般过去时。
2．(2011·重庆卷，21)That piece of music sounds quite familiar. Who ________ the piano upstairs?A．has played B．playedC．plays D．is playing答案：D。
本题考查动词时态。
句意：这音乐听起来很熟悉。
谁在楼上弹钢琴？根据语境表示有人正在弹奏钢琴，故应用现在进行时态。
3．(2011·重庆卷，31)Look at the pride on Tom's face. He ________ to have been praised by the manager just now.A．seemed B．seemsC．had seemed D．is seeming答案：B。
本题考查动词时态。
句意：看汤姆脸上自豪的表情。
他好像刚刚受到经理的表扬。
seem为系动词，不能用于进行时态，排除D项，前后两句的时态要一致，故此处应用现在时态，B项正确。
4．(2011·四川卷，9)All visitors to this village ________ with kindness.A．treat B．are treatedC．are treating D．had been treated答案：B。
本题考查动词的时态。
句意：所有来到这个村子的游客都受到友好的接待。
第1章专题3代词1.(2011·重庆卷，27)—Silly me! I forget what my luggage looks like.—What do you think of ________ over there?A．the one B．thisC．it D．that答案：D。
本题考查代词的用法。
句意：——我真傻！我忘了我的行李什么样了。
——那边那个行李你觉得怎样？luggage为不可数名词，不能用one代替。
it指代同一物，故A、C两项不对。
this代表这儿的东西；that代表较远的，那里的东西。
故D项正确。
2．(2011·全国卷，11)I got this bicycle for ________：My friend gave it to me when she bought a new one.A．everything B．somethingC．anything D．nothing答案：D。
句意：我这辆自行车一分钱也没花：我的朋友买了一辆新的，就把这辆给了我。
for nothing“不花钱，免费”。
3．(2011·四川卷，3)There is ________ in his words.We should have a try.A．something B．anythingC．nothing D．everything答案：A。
本题考查不定代词。
句意：他的话里有点儿意思。
我们再试试看。
从第二句话的信息里可以断定应该是肯定的句意，而因为不太确定，故用something来表示。
4．(2011·山东卷，24)The two girls are so alike that strangers find________difficult to tell one from the other.A. itB. themC. herD. that答案：A。
本题考查形式宾语it的用法。
