考研英语写作常见语言错误I.词汇错误A. Article 冠词a.The machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to producewhat are essential for them to keep alive.b.Machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce whatare essential for them to keep alive.a.The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both government and people.b.The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both the government and people.a.On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise.b.On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on the rise.a.We can’t avoid being beaten by the others.b.We can’t avoid being beaten by others.a.It provides us with natural scenes and the life of all kinds of wild animals, with theexplanation by the narrator.b.It provides us with views of natural scenes and a look of the life style of all kinds of wildanimals, with an explanation by the narrator.a.And also, they treat the firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.b.And also, they treat firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.a.Finally we can teach ourselves and learn the new knowledge.b.Finally we can teach ourselves and learn new knowledge.a.Higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.b. A higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.B. Nouns 名词可数名词&不可数名词a.Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recording and films need electricity.b.Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.a.Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantage anddisadvantage.b.Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantages anddisadvantages.a.As long as we don’t give up and believe in ourselves, and in the meantime learn somethingfrom failure, we’ll certainly make our marks in the end.b.As long as we don’t give up keeping believing in ourselves, and in the meantime learnsomething from failure, we’ll certainly make our mark in the end.a.With money we can travel widely and have more experience.b.With money we can travel widely and have more experiences.a.The fresh air and beautiful sceneries will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.b.The fresh air and beautiful scenery will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.a.For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes many damages.b.For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes a lot of damage.a.Even a lot of entertainments such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.b.Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.a. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science,has come into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly.b. A great number of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and socialscience, has come into existence and enriched the sea of human knowledge greatly.用词不当a.For example, in reporting, a reporter can use it (tape recorder) instead of the old means ofwriting them on a notebook.b.For example, a reporter can use it in interviews instead of the old means of writing them on anotebook.a.With more and more people coming into this world, human beings are now in danger of foodshortage because the land on which man can grow rice remains the same.b.With more and more people coming into this world, human beings are now in danger of foodshortage because the amount of land on which man can grow food crops remains the same.a.It can lessen the crowding degree of streets and speed up the flow of traffic.b. b. It can lessen the crowdedness of streets and speed up the flow of traffic.a.In the meantime, the grain requirement in people’s diet consequently kept dropping.b.In the meantime, the grain consumption in people’s diet consequently kept dropping.a.With the development of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk andmeat than before.b.With the improvement of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk andmeat than before.a.They will push our society to a higher position.b.They will push our society to a higher level of development.a.Now, when a person is hunting for a job, there will always be a job interview.b.Today when a person is hunting for a job, there are almost always job interviews.a.In contrast, still a few of civilians expect the government to call off this regulation.b.However, there are still a few citizens who expect the government to call off this ban.a.You should practice under the direction of a teacher.b.You should be trained under the direction of an instructor.名词的并列&一致a.This directly causes the problem of the world’s food shortage, housing and lack of jobs.b.This directly causes the problem of the world’s food shortage, housing shortage and lack ofjobs.a.From the figures, we can see easily that the proportions of grain, fruit and vegetables havedeclined a little, while that of milk and meat has risen.b.From the figures, we can see easily that the proportion of grain, fruit and vegetables hasdeclined a little, while that of milk and meat has risen.C. Adjectives 形容词比较级和最高级a.And there are times when we fail to do more satisfactory work.b.And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work.a.I try my best to read more English articles to speed up my reading, because I believe the moreI read the faster I can improve my reading comprehension.b.I try my best to read as many English articles as possible to speed up my reading, because Ibelieve the more I read the faster I can improve my reading comprehension.a.In modern society, the relationship between natural science and social science has becomemore and more close.b.In modern society, the relationship between natural science and social science has becomecloser and closer.用词不当/错误a.On the way home, I thought early morning walk was really helpful.b.On the way home, I thought early morning walk was really good and healthful.a.In my opinion, the right solution to the problem is the combination of the two, that is, to laydown more roads in spacious areas and to open up more bus lines in downtown areas.b.In my opinion, a better solution to the problem is the combination of the two, that is, to laydown more roads in spacious areas and to open up more bus lines in downtown areas.a.With the development of big cities, a problem has arisen before us: traffic in cities hasbecome more and more serious than before.b.With the development of big cities, a problem has arisen before us: traffic in cities hasbecome heavier and heavier than before.a.Such opinion leads to surprising waste of water.b.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.a.Once these fake commodities enter the market, they will do unevaluated harm to the society.b.Once these fake commodities enter the market, they will do immeasurable harm to thesociety.形容词词序a.This is no longer a childish unrealistic dream.b.This is no longer an unrealistic childish dream.a.This picture describes an American girl dressed in Chinese traditional costume.b.This picture describes an American girl dressed in traditional Chinese costume.D. Adverbs 副词用词不当a.An early morning walk can help one to be light-hearted and to work effectively.b.An early morning walk can help one to be light-hearted and to work efficiently.a.In fact, fresh water is exactly inadequate.b.In fact, our fresh water supply is far from adequate.a.We should practice it from time to time, and thus we will slowly master it and do it perfectly.b.We should practice it from time to time, and thus we will gradually master it and do itperfectly.副词短语a.The industrial and Agricultural Revolutions which began in 1650 contributed a bit to thegrowth of population.b.The industrial and Agricultural Revolutions which began in 1650 contributed a lot to thegrowth of population.E. Pronouns 代词用法不当a.Everyday I spent at least an hour on English in the past seven years.b.Each day I spent at least an hour on English in the past seven years.a.In order to make more profit, some manufacturers exaggerate their products’ functions in theadvertisements. That is, the product does not live up to the standard advertised and the consumers will find themselves fooled.b.In order to make more profit, some manufacturers exaggerate their products’ functions in theadvertisements. Very often, the product does not live up to the standard advertised and the consumers will find themselves fooled.a.To our Chinese, firecrackers are symbols of festivals and happiness.b.To us Chinese, firecrackers are symbols of festivals and happiness.指代不明a.For example, the need for jobs will make us develop our industries. It causes environmentalproblems.b.For example, the need for jobs will make us develop our industries which in turn will causesenvironmental problems.a.We always stick to the rules so that I never hurt others or be hurt.b.We always stick to the rules so that I never hurt myself or others.a.But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of noquality and worth nothing.b.But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find them ofpoor quality and worth nothing.人称代词一致a.First, we can’t deny that money is useful. You need money to buy food, to buy a house or topay for your educational cost.b.First, we can’t deny that money is useful. We need money to buy food, to buy a house or topay for our educational cost.F. Prepositions 介词介词错误a.What we can conclude from the figures and the explanations is the people’s life is improvingand the changes of people’s diet show that people’s interest is on the quality of food now and that our people’s health improving day by day.b.What we can conclude from the figures and the explanations is the people’s life is improvingand the changes in people’s diet show that people’s interest is in the quality of food now and that our people’s health improving day by day.a.I have bought a tape recorder with which I can practise my ability of listeningcomprehension.b.I bought a tape recorder with which I was able to improve my ability in listeningcomprehension.a.Advertisements exist everywhere, on the newspaper, on TV, on the walls in the streets andeven in the postboxes of our houses.b.Advertisements exist everywhere, in the newspaper, on TV, on the walls in the streets andeven in the postboxes of our houses.a.People showed extraordinary enthusiasm in face of a great, speculative prosperity ahead.b.People showed extraordinary enthusiasm in anticipation of a great, speculative prosperityahead.G. Verbs 动词一般动词用词不当a.If not controlled, the population of the world will amount to 7,000 million in 2000 as can beseen from the graph.b.If not controlled, the population of the world will reach 7,000 million in 2000 as can be seenfrom the graph.a.They can clean the air, beautify the city, develop a good climate and weaken noise.b.They can clean the air, beautify the city, develop a healthy climate and reduce noise.a. A road which can only hold two cars side by side can allow more than ten bicycles.b. A road which can only allow two cars to pass may allow more than ten bicycles to run side byside.a.While taking part in sports, people can strengthen their muscles, quicken their speed ofresponse and increase their ability of resisting diseases.b.Being active in sports, people can strengthen their muscles, increase their response speed andbuild up their ability to resist diseases.a.Social science and natural science are mixed with each other today.b.Social science and natural science are inseparable from each other today.a.Being a teacher needs knowledge, patience, skills, etc.b.Being a teacher requires knowledge, patience, skills, etc.a.In conclusion, most students still don’t know how to spare the time and make it valuable.b.In conclusion, most students still don’t know how to use the two-day weekend to their bestadvantage.a.Whether you will apply English or not in the future, English has undoubtedly been the mostimportant language in our society.b.Whether you will use English or not in the future, English has undoubtedly been one of themost important languages in our society.a.It will help me to know the world outside the campus better.b.It will help me to experience the world outside the campus better.一致性，平行a.It not only relieves the burden on the big city, but also provide a much better environment forpeople to live in.b.It not only relieves the burden on the big city, but also provides a much better environment forpeople to live in.a.Due to the pollution, we will have no pure water, fresh air which are necessary to our lives.b.Due to the pollution, we will have no pure water and fresh air which are necessary to ourlives.a. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science,has come into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly.b. A great number of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and socialscience, has come into existence and enriched the sea of human knowledge greatly.Phrasal Verbs 短语动词a.And new ways can be carried out to prevent the pollution and control the population.b.And new ways can be worked out to prevent the pollution and control the population.a.When a motorcycle is started, it gives away a lot of smoke which contains poisonouschemical substances harmful to our health.b.When a motorcycle is started, it gives off a lot of smoke which contains poisonous chemicalsubstances harmful to our health.a.In fact, no one can be denied of the access to opportunity.b.In fact, no one can be denied access to opportunity.a.To grasp a foreign language is not easy, but I will go out of my way to gain success——formy ideal job.b.To master a foreign language is not easy and to be a qualified interpreter is even harder, but Iwill go all out to gain success——in my ideal job.a.Taking into account of their behavior, we can safely come to the conclusion that thesestudents will waste to o much time if they don’t make good use of it.b.Taking into account their behavior, we think it is clear that these students will waste too muchtime if they don’t study hard on work ing days.助动词，情态动词a.To master almost every skill, you can’t but practice.b.To master almost every skill, you must practice.a.We cannot strain our efforts and ignore the rules.b.We mustn’t strain our efforts and ignore the rules.a.Do “lucky numbers” really bring good luck?b.Can “lucky numbers” bring good luck to us?H. Connectives 连接词用词不当/用法不当a.The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly, everything seemed to be covered with a layer ofgolden silk.b.The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly and everything seemed to be covered with a layer ofgolden silk.a.When I walked in the street, there were only some young men who were running in the street.b.While I was walking, I found that there were only some young men running in the street.a.Because a bicycle is not expensive, most families can afford it.b.Since a bicycle is not expensive, most families can afford it.a.So long as I am concerned, I am for the latter.b.As far as I am concerned, I am for the latter.a.And I should get practical experience as much as theories.b.And I should get practical experience while learning the theories.a.No matter they are accepted or not, the interview is a good occasion for them to practice theirability of introducing themselves to others.b.No matter whether they are accepted or not, the interview is a good occasion for them topractice their ability of packaging and selling themselves.a.In my opinion, although setting off firecrackers is one of the traditions that we Chinese have.b.In my opinion, setting off firecrackers is one of the traditions that we Chinese have.a.The first, we have more spare time. ... The second, we have enough time to do somethingwhich we like.b.First, we have more spare time. ... Second, we have enough time to do something we like.a.So far as I am concerned, I managed to find a part-time job——tutor an orphan.b.As for me, I managed to find a part-time job——tutor an orphan.过于绝对化a.For example, almost everybody had watched apples falling from an apple tree but onlyNewton discovered the Law of Gravity.b.For example, many people had watched apples falling from an apple tree but only Newtondiscovered the Law of Gravity.a.With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, byship, or by bicycle.b.With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, orby ship.a.In return, I can also learn a lot from foreign countries so that I can serve my motherland.b.In return, I can also learn a lot about foreign countries so that I can serve my motherlandbetter.a.But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of noquality and worth nothing.b.But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find them ofpoor quality and worth nothing.a.In a word, firecrackers should be banned for the benefit of all people!b.In a word, firecrackers should be banned for the benefit of most people!a.Man has been able to cure the diseases which were incapable of being cured.b.Man is able to cure the diseases which were incapable of being cured.a.With the rapid development of our society, the campus is no longer an ivory tower.b.With the rapid development of our society, the university campus can no longer be an ivorytower.逻辑不够严密a.Though it gives us more convenience, the two-day weekend has quite a few problems.b.Though it gives us more convenience, the two-day weekend has also given rise to quite a fewproblems.a.Of course, some people have had good luck through “lucky numbers”, but I think that that isonly a chance.b.Of course, some people think they have had good luck through “lucky numbers”, but I thinkthat that is only a chance.II.句法错误主谓一致a.But now large amounts of water and air has been polluted, which brings about variousproblems troubling man’s life.b.But now large amounts of water and air have been polluted, which brings about variousproblems troubling their life.a.My ideal job is a teacher.b.My ideal job is to be an excellent teacher.重复a.Man is faced with more and more problems which threaten man’s existence on Earth.c.Man is faced with more and more problems which threaten his existence on Earth.a.People’s opinions about whether firecrackers should be banned vary from person to person.b.Opinions about whether firecrackers should be banned vary from person to person.a.During the past thirty years, developing countries have been greatly developed in manyaspects.b.During the past thirty years, developing countries have made great progress in many aspects.B.定语从句a.We may encounter some problems which need not only natural science but also socialscience.b.We may encounter some problems whose solution involves knowledge not only of naturalscience but also of social science.a.What on earth is the role money playing in our society?b.What on earth is the role money plays in our society?a.When I refresh, I will do something which I like.b.When I relax, I will do something (that) I like.C. 倒装句a.Only in this way, you can get the true job of achieving your goals.b.Only in this way, can you get the true job of achieving your goals.D. 句子的连接与简练句子的连接a.Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished. Then everyone willcomply with this regulation.b.Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished so that everyone willcomply with this regulation.a.The result is that your brain is less and less efficient, your process is slower and slower.b.The result is that your brain is less and less efficient, and your process is slower and slower.munity services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practice our ability,through which we can learn to cooperate with people, to contribute our intelligence to the society.munity service is a golden chance to use our ability, through which we can learn tocooperate with people and contribute our intelligence to society.a.But in fact, there are also many people who think numbers have nothing to do with luck.b.But there are also many people who think that numbers, in fact, have nothing to do with luck. 指代不明a.Sports and movies are means of relieving depression and violent emotions. This is why theyare necessary in a society.Sports and movies are necessary in a society in order to relieve depression and violent emotions.a.Leaders of the Women’s Liberation movement have criticized American doctors severely.They are angry – and justifiably so.Leaders of the women’s liberatio n movement havecriticized the medical profession severely. They are angry – and justifiably so.a.In the Royal Shakespeare production of Othello, Frank Finlay played Iago and was suited toit.In the Royal Shakespeare production of Othello, Frank Finlay played Iago and was well suited to the role.简练的表达a.As I had nothing to do, I decided to take a morning walk. So I went to the park.b.As I had nothing to do, I decided to take a walk to the park.a.As far as my ideal job is concerned, I think I want to be an interpreter in the future.b.As far as my ideal job is concerned, I want to be an interpreter.a.Some want to be doctors, some want to be teachers, some want to be engineers, and so on.b.Some want to be doctors, some want to be teachers, and some want to be engineers.a.These fake commodities’quality is always very poor. They may cause a great loss to theconsumers, or even the life.b.As the quality of the fake commodities is always very poor, they may cause great damage tothe consumers, or even endanger their lives.E. 断裂句a.Some persons thought the law is no good. Because they think setting off firecrackers is abeneficial thing.b.Some persons think the law is no good because they regard setting off firecrackers as abeneficial thing.a.However there are still a number of people who enjoy seeing films. Because the visual andaudio effects of films are much better.b.However there are still a number of people who enjoy seeing films, because the visual andaudio effects of films are much better.a.Almost everyone of us has bought some fake commodities. For instance, fake shoes, fakebags, and the worst thing——fake medicine.b.Almost everyone of us has had the experience of buying fake commodities, for instance, fakeshoes, fake bags and, worst of all, fake medicines.F. 标点错误&首字母大写错误a.I wandered around the park, to my delight, I found a few middle-school students talking toeach other in English in the southeast corner of the park.b.I wandered around the park. To my delight, I found a few middle-school students talking toeach other in English in the southeast corner of the park.G. 中国式英语a.Others were doing Chinese exercises.b.Others were practicing kung fu/tai chi chuan/martial art.a.It plays an important role in many fields such as industry, agriculture and people’s daily life.b.It plays an important role in many fields such as industry, agriculture and the daily life ofmen.a.People of nowadays are paying more attention to the structure of their diet.b.People now are paying more attention to the structure of their diet.a.I have bought a tape recorder with which I can practice my ability of listeningcomprehension.b.I bought a tape recorder with which I was able to improve my ability in listeningcomprehension.a.Almost everyday I open TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.b.Almost everyday I turn on the TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.a.Besides, the pictures are very beautiful; some of them are also very valuable.b.Not only is the photography very beautiful, it is fascinating, too.a.According to those mentioned above, I decide to make a good plan for the two-day weekend.b.In order to benefit most from the two-day weekend, I decide to make a good plan for thetwo-day weekend.a.These problems are really serious.b.This is really a serious problem.a.English study requires reading, listening, speaking and writing.b.The mastery of English requires the abilities to read, listen, speak and write efficiently.a.But the disadvantage of this suggestion is that many people will feel not as convenient as theydid before.b.But the disadvantage of this suggestion is that many people will not feel as convenient as theydid before.友情提示：方案范本是经验性极强的领域，本范文无法思考和涵盖全面，供参考!最好找专业人士起草或审核后使用。
