大学英语四级写作(1)详解56页PPT

四级作文评分原则
2020/10/27
四级考试大纲写作要求
• 能在阅读难度与课文相仿的书面材料时 做笔记、回答问题和写提纲，能就一定 的话题或提纲在半小时内写出120-150 词的短文，能写短信或便条，表达意思 清楚，无重大语言错误。
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四级作文评分原则
1. CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学 大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对 作文的评判应以此要求为准则。
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四级作文2分样卷
I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1 Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton.
didn’t heared the car come. All of above, I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident.
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四级作文5分样卷
It was 8:00 this morning, I went on my way to school. When I just at the school gate, I saw the terrible traffic accident happend.

• 如果字数不少，但段落数不够，也酌情扣分。比如在要求写三段的作文
中只写了一段，只能得0—4分；只写两段，只能得0—9分。
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四级写作部分简介 2.时间与字数要求
1．时间要求：30分钟 时间安排：3m 审题并构思结构和主要内容 20-25m 写 2m 检查
2. 字数要求：120-150字
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考试题型
1．很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是……
2．也有人持不同意见，……
3．我的看法和打算
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如何引入？—— 一个现象
• Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
With the development of English education in China, nowadays, many attentions have been paid to spoken English skills. The question, wether students can actually use English as a communication tool after years of study, has caused hot debate. As a result, test of spoken English is becoming increasingly common in English education. But does it really necessary to set such a test?CET-4 WritiFra bibliotekg 写作.
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CET-4的新变化 (Since 2013)
• 改变1（Listening Part） 原复合式听写题目中的句子听写换成听写单词与词组。 优势：学生不需要听长句，正确率上升 缺点：数量增多，需要听写共10个单词/词组。

4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包 括0分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
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评分标准
1. 本题满分为15分 2. 阅卷标准共分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及
14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认
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正确认识四级中的写作
大学英语四、六级考试取消了合格证书、改为成 绩报告单之后可以明显看出考生的写作分偏低。 由于这部分要综合考察学生对词汇、语法、句型、 篇章的积极驾驭能力，写作一直是令广大考生头 疼的一个部分。
特点：1. 得分低 2. 得分易
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CET4考试大纲对写作的要求
共1题，考试时间30分钟。要求考生写出一篇100120词的短文，试卷上可能给出题目，或规定情景， 或要求看图作文，或给出段首句要求续写；或给 出关键词要求写成短文。要求能够正确表达思想， 意义连贯，无重大语法错误。写作的内容包括日 常生活和一般常识。短文写作部分的目的是测试 学生运用英语书面表达思想的初步能力。
conversely； “合”的过渡词：therefore, so, as a result, in short, in
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评分原则
1. CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的教学要求，对作文的 评判应以此要求为准则
2. CET作文题采用总体 (Global Scoring) 评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印 象给出奖励分(Reward Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数量扣分。
3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。 作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达，要考虑作文是 否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想， 也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

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In my opinion, free admissions to museums are good for the public, but on the other hand they may pose problems to the museum management. Governments should provide help to museums and guide them to serve the public better.
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倒装、非谓语动词和插入语的使用
• 1、 not only…but also… • Only by…can… • Not until…do… • 2、分词做状语，动名词做主语或宾语 • 3、适当插入一些副词或介词短语等 • This measure, undoubtedly(in my opinion),
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写作对策
1、内容要紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点 要审准题——看清题目、提纲、图画、表 格，扣紧题目写就不会出现大问题
注意：1.不要妄图以情动人； 2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。
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2.结构上要层次清晰
结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句 (Conclusion)。 分段——文章结构的关键 引言段——扩展段——结尾段 引言段要包含中心句；扩展段每段应有主题；结 尾段自然收尾 开头空出相同字符数空格；题目不必重抄；段与 段之间不必空行
will eliminate the waste of water.
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评分原则
• 1、检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四 级教学要求。
• 2、采用总体评分（Global Scoring)方法 • 阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（reward

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• [写作指南]
• 这是一篇看图作文。要求考生先简单描 述图片内容，继而就“理财的重要性”这 个话题发表自己的看法。根据题目要求， 可将文章内容安排如下：
• 第一段：简明扼要地描述图片内容，引 出下文讨论的重点。
• 第二段：分点概述理财的重要性。
• 第三段：结合大学生的情况，说明大学生 该如何理财。
尾）：引问题，讲问题，表决心 • (1)开头：引出现象+观点或对主体内容的概括，可包括对
谈论问题或现象的简单陈述及明确的观点（3-4句话，约 30-40字） • (2)主体：主题句+扩展句（2条最佳，约80字） • 主题句：开门见山；句首（条理词+总括句） • 扩展句：支持主题句；过程：设问--回答；常见扩展句类 型：进一步说明，举例（非个人的，大家公认的），假设 相反情形，列数据等
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常用得开头段得表达方法
• ●使用引语(use a quotation) 使用一段名人名言,或人们常用得谚语、习语, 以确定文章得写作范围与方向。 如: “Great minds must be ready not only to take the opportunity, but to make them、” Colton, a great writer once remarked、 But it still has a profound significance now、 To a person, in whose lifetime opportunities are not many, to make opportunities is more essential to his success、 分析:开头引用Colton得名言说明“创造机会” 对于成功得重要性,点明主题。
常用得开头段得表达方法
• ●主题句法(use of topic sentence) 文章一开始就以主题句点明全文主题,然后围绕 主题内容进行发展。 如: Nowadays one of the serious problems China is faced with is the increasing illiteracy among the adolescents、 According to a recent survey by Dr、 Li, dean of Educational Department of Beijing Normal University, about 18% of the children between 8 and 15 years old have dropped out of school across the country、 分析:文章开头即提出中国得文盲现象日益严重 这一问题,然后再用实例数据加以佐证。

Sample writing
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health 1. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处。 2. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处。 3. 给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议。
Reference model
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health
Reference Model (3)
which are quite misleading. Finally, new technical inventions do not necessarily lead to progress in learning. Diligence is always the decisive factor, because “There is no royal road to learning”.
• The biggest advantage of …. What’s more….
• However, the negative effects are obvious. To begin with, …. In the second place,…. Finally,….
• Up until now, we can see it clearly that…. The key lies in the user--- so long as we can make proper use of it, it can be most helpful to us in many respects.
1) As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3) Besides, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us. 4) And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life.

英语四级作文范文解析pptIn recent years, the English CET-4 exam has become a significant challenge for many college students in China. It is a comprehensive test that evaluates students' listening, reading, writing, and speaking abilities in English. To help students better prepare for the exam, I have created a detailed analysis of a sample essay and provided some tips on how to improve English writing skills. 。

First of all, let's take a look at the sample essay. The topic of the essay is "The Impact of Social Media on Communication". The essay starts with an introduction that defines social media and explains its popularity. Then, the writer discusses the positive and negative effects of social media on communication, providing examples to support each point. Finally, the essay concludes by emphasizing the importance of using social media responsibly to maintain effective communication.Now, let's analyze the structure and content of the essay. The introduction is clear and engaging, providing a brief overview of the topic. The body paragraphs are well-organized, with each paragraph focusing on a specific aspect of the topic. The writer uses transition words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly and ensure coherence. Additionally, the examples provided are relevant and help to illustrate the points made in the essay. 。

Cultivate students' critical thinking
require them to be able to analyze problems, propose viewpoints, and provide arguments.
Adapt to the needs of international communication
Writing is one of the four basic skills in English learning: listening, speaking, reading, and writing are complementary and indispensable.
Writing is an important criterion for measuring English proficiency: it can reflect students' English proficiency and is also an important component of various English exams.
strategies
Advanced vocabulary selection and replacement
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Use emotionally charged vocabulary such as "significant" instead of "important" and "financing" instead of "interesting" to enhance the infectiousness of the article.

词汇错误
拼写错误
注意单词拼写，避免简单的拼写错误。
词性误用
区分不同词性的词汇，确保在句子中正确使 用。
搭配错误
熟悉常用词汇的搭配和用法，避免不合适的 搭配。
语义不清
选用准确、具体的词汇表达思想，避免使用 模糊、笼统的词汇。
篇章结构错误
缺少主题句 在段落开头明确主题句，概括段落大 意。
缺少过渡词
在段落之间使用适当的过渡词，使文 章连贯、流畅。
请老师或同学对自己的文 章进行点评和反馈，以便 及时发现并改正问题。
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四级写作常见错误及避免方法
语法错误
主谓不一致
检查谓语动词与主语在人称和数 上是否一致。
时态错误
根据上下文判断动作发生的时间， 选用正确的时态。
语态错误
区分主动语态和被动语态，避免 误用。
虚拟语气错误
在表示建议、要求、命令等语气 的句子中，正确使用虚拟语气。
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礼貌地请求面试机会，并提供联系方式
模拟题三：图表作文写作
题目：根据所给图表写一篇文章， 分析中国人口老龄化的趋势和影
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描述图表中展示的中国人口老龄 化的趋势和特点
讨论应对人口老龄化的措施和政 策建议
解析
分析人口老龄化对中国社会、经 济、文化等方面的影响
总结全文，强调人口老龄化对中 国未来的挑战和机遇
息交流等
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指出现代科技对人们生活的负面 影响，如沉迷网络、隐私泄露等
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提出应对现代科技负面影响的措
施，如加强监管、提高个人信息
保护意识等
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模拟题二：应用文写作
题目：写一封求职信
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解析

英语四级作文ppt讲解Today, I want to talk about the importance of learning English. English is a global language and it is used in many different countries. It is also the language of the internet and many international businesses. Therefore, learning English can open up many opportunities for people.First of all, English is the most widely spoken language in the world. This means that if you can speak English, you can communicate with people from manydifferent countries. This can be very useful if you want to travel or work abroad. It can also help you to make friends from all over the world.In addition, many of the world's top universities teach their courses in English. This means that if you want to study at one of these universities, you will need to be able to understand and speak English. This can open up many doors for your future career.Furthermore, English is the language of the internet. This means that if you can speak English, you can access a huge amount of information and resources online. You can also communicate with people from all over the world through social media and online forums.Moreover, many international businesses use English as their main language. This means that if you can speak English, you will have more job opportunities and you may be able to earn a higher salary. In today's globalized world, English language skills are highly valued by employers.In conclusion, learning English is very important in today's world. It can open up many opportunities for you in terms of travel, education, career, and communication. Therefore, I would encourage everyone to learn English and to continue improving their English language skills. Thank you for listening.。

要求考生根据所给题目和 提示，在30分钟内完成一 篇120-180词的短文写作。
写作题材
涉及校园生活、社会热点、 科技、文化、环保等各个 方面。
评分标准与要求
评分标准
主要从内容、语言、结构 和卷面四个方面进行评分， 其中内容和语言占比较大。
内容要求
切题，表达思想清楚，文 字通顺、连贯，基本无语 言错误。
5. 注意书写规范，保 持卷面整洁。
4. 多使用高级词汇和 句型，提升文章档次；
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写作技能提升方法
词汇积累与运用
积极扩大词汇量
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通过阅读、听力、单词记忆等方式，不断增加自己的词汇量，
特别要注意掌握常用词汇和短语。
学会运用高级词汇
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在写作中适当使用高级词汇可以提升文章的档次和表达力，但
要注意运用得当，避免过度使用。
四级写作ppt课件
• 写作基础知识 • 四级写作考试概述 • 写作技能提升方法 • 四级写作常见误区及应对策略 • 四级写作模拟训练与点评 • 四级写作备考建议与注意事项
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写作基础知识
写作的定义与重要性
写作是一种通过文字表达思想、 情感和信息的活动。
写作在日常生活、学习和工作中 具有广泛的应用，如邮件、报告、
结构混乱无序
误区 文章结构不清晰，段落之间缺乏逻辑 联系，使读者难以理解作者的思路。
列出提纲
在写作前列出提纲，明确文章的主题 和各个段落的内容，确保文章结构清 晰。
使用过渡词
使用过渡词来连接段落和句子，使文 章更加连贯和流畅。
分段阐述
将不同的观点和论据分段阐述，使读 者能够清晰地理解作者的思路。
忽视读者感受
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四级写作模拟训练与点评