Are We More Connected or More Alone？148

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：水泽农学校：复旦大学分数：91If there is something that best improves the way we connect today,that must be the technology.With the intervention of technology,the communication has surpassed the barriers of time,space and class.In fact,modern technology makes people connect more conveniently,but estranged themselves from others.It is whether people are being alone in a new way has been considered by more and more people.There is no doubt that technology is a boon in communication.On the one hand,technology has made a great contribution to the world's becoming a global village.Nowadays,people are able to connect with anyone they want by phone,email and Skype,no matter what time and place.On the other hand,the number of smartphone users and internet users will exceed 3billion based on the latest research.People can use different social networks to make friends,share information and follow moments easily and instantly.Technology is making a bid to redefine human connection,but such benefits are overwhelmed by enormous gravitational tug of electronic products.There is a rising trend that we rely on technology instead of relying on each other.Unfortunately,we are far from our hometowns,as well as we have no emotional attachment to our friends.Granted,modern technology enables us to get acquainted with thousands of friends,which creates the illusion of an active interpersonal relationship.Nevertheless,it inevitably erodes our affections.As a side effect of technical development,the chance of face-to-face interactions goes down.Our relations have become rather fragile as they are connected by emotionless machines.The society will eventually evolve to embrace a brand new interpersonal relationship that is unprecedentedly free and open.Even so,the connections in the old days shall always be cherished.After all,we will firmly believe that a real hug is more valuable than numerous greetings from the virtual world.。

Are We More Connected or More Alone？在这个时代，人人都有手机，我们想要找朋友、找家人，网上联系十分方便。

与从前相比，我们是更加联系的。

但这同时又使我们更孤单。

从前，我们想要联系别人，我们会见面，我们将信息口口相传，无论是在时间上还是在空间上，我们都是一起的。

然而今天，我们跨越耳机听到对方的声音，我们隔着屏幕看到对方的脸。

但这是不可避免的、这是趋势，社会的发展注定我们不会永远待在一个地方，就像现在，我们离开从小到大一起生活的父母，到很远的地方上学，所以我们要感谢电子通讯的发展。

也许当声音停止你摘下耳机，你的心中有一丝惆怅，当视频结束你退出微信，你的心中会有一丝失落，这其实也是我们越来越联系的动力，正因我们的孤单是不可逆的，我们才要发掘越来越多的途径来世我们保持联系。

In this era, everyone has a cell phone, we want to find a friend, find a family, online contact is very convenient. Compared with the past, we are more connected. But it also makes us more lonely. In the past, we wanted to contact others, we will meet, we will word of mouth, whether in time or in space, we are together. Today, however, we hear each other's headphones across the headphones, and we see each other's faces across the screen. But it is inevitable that this is the trend, the development of society is doomed we will not stay in a place forever, just like now, we leave parents who live together from small to large, to go to school far away, so we would like to thank the development of electronic communications.Maybe when the sound stops you off the headphones, your heart has a trace of melancholy, when the end of the video you exit WeChat, your heart will be a trace of loss, which is actually more and more of our power, because our lonely is irreversible , We have to explore more and more ways to stay in the world we keep in touch.In my opinion, we aremore connected, and also more alone. The two are mutual influence, mutual promotion.。

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone?姓名：左同学学校：江苏省天一中学分数：94I'm sorry to hear that since you were addicted to the Internet,you have been no longer the sunny boy that you were half a year panying with mobile phones and computers not only weakens our relationship but also consumes the time of outdoor activities.Your parents are more than worried about your silence at home.Anyone who is concerned about you feels anxious about your current situation.There's no denying that computers are currently used to meet the demands of our study or to consume ourselves with.However,beneficial though they many seem at first,their drawbacks are considered overweighing the advantages.Occasions are common when a student lost himself in the virtual world;he became reluctant to accept the reality.Given that time is donated to the Internet,it widens the generation gap as a consequence of the lack of communication.Ways on healing from its harmful impaction can be concluded as follows.Firstly,only when you are aware of the harm of the virtual world,can you embrace the challenges in reality.Secondly,working out in the gum as well as chatting with friends will also contribute to getting rid of them.We hope to see you as you were.。

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：杨小淑学校：昆明市第二十八中学分数：95I have learned that you are addicted to the internet,occupied yourself in playing computer games and forget studying and communicating with your family and friends.You seldom chat with your parents at home.Your parents have showed concern for you.So I would like to share my feeling with you.It's universally acknowledged that the internet is currently one of the most useful media.It contributes to making it easier for us to keep in touch with people,get to know the current affairs and so on.But as far as it goes,it also has a negative impact on our life.Online socialization weakens our ability to deal with realistic interpersonal relationship.Furthermore,it contains a diversity of unhealthy information,which can be detrimental to your physical and mental health.Have you ever noticed that you get more and more distant with your companions since you have used the internet.From my own perspective,you should become aware of both sides of the internet and subsequently use it in a applicable way.Ultimately,you may become the energetic and outgoing person,whom you used to be.I hope these suggestions would be helpful to you.。