英语书面表达经典句型

书面表达专项训练写作句型专练2➢“The +比较级…the +比较级”结构是英语写作中常见的比较级结构，表示两个关联事物按照统一程度变化，翻译为“越……越…… ; 愈……愈……”➢“The +比较级…the +比较级”结构从语法结构上分析是一个复合句。

前面the作为连词(如果到达某个程度…)引导一个状语从句，后面的the作为程度副词引导主句;比较级的对象通常为状语、表语以及宾语。

➢“The +比较级…the +比较级”结构的时态有两类：①从句The+一般现在时,主句the+一般现在时；②从句the+一般现在时，主句the+一般将来时；(当主句使用一般将来时，从句使用一般现在时表示将来)➢“The +比较级…the +比较级”的检验：①去除the, 将the引导的内容还原到谓语动词后；②查看主句和从句是否成分缺失；③尝试使用if逻辑连接主从句，查看是否翻译顺畅。

写作训练1.你得到的越多，想要的就越多。

__________________________________________________________________________________2.你工作越刻苦，进步就越大。

__________________________________________________________________________________3.你越和你的父母交流, 你和他们相处地越好。

__________________________________________________________________________________4.你犯的错误越多, 你从中学习到的越多。

__________________________________________________________________________________5.你学习的越多, 你越为未来做好准备。

【英语】英语中考英语书面表达经典1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。

请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。

要点提示：注意：1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharingToday, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势）However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）【解析】【详解】这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

四川高考英语书面表达：高考分析：近4年四川都是框架式作文。

给出大的框架，具体内容需要学生自己补充，从而体现新课标创新的精神。

2013年考纲对书面表达要求：学生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇120个单词左右的短文。

情景包括目的，对象和内容等；提供情景的形式有图画，图表，提纲等。

阅卷标准：要点齐+质量（高级词汇或复杂结构恰当使用）+文章框架（文体要求）书面表达误区：很多学生一味的追求高级复杂的单词，对句子机构把握不到位，出现只见单词，不见句子，不能表达意思。

高考英语书面作文的阅卷是以句子给分，而不是以单个单词给分。

看看2013年四川高考书面表达例文：很多学生都会大呼，写得很一般，难道这个水平就是35分的满分作文。

高考例文是高考专家或者大学教授根据考试标准写得例文，从例文中不难看出，高考英语书面表达要求用词准确，不需要太花哨。

四川高考英语出题的逻辑也就是内容：有一个事实，接着说明影响，分析原因，提出建议。

下面这些通用句型同时满足“要点+质量”两项要求。

一．提出事实通用句型：1.……是普遍存在的。

It is commonly seen that…It is often seen that…2.……是毫无疑问。

There is no doubt that…3.正如我们所见，……As we see,…二．分析原因通用句型：1.那是因为……That is because…2.理由是……The reason is that…3．理由之一是……One of the reasons is that…4.A的理由是…The reason why A is that…三：影响通用句型：1.对A有好的影响make a good effect on Amake a good influence on Amake a good impact on A 2.对A有坏的影响make a bad effect on Amake a bad influence on Amake a bad impact on A四．提出建议1.建议是……The suggestion is that…2.建议之一是……One of the suggestions is that…3.为了使A更好，B应该做……To make A better, B should do…4.如果A享受B，A将使C变得更好。

2020届高考英语书面表达专项训练祝贺信一、谋篇布局祝贺信通常包括三部分内容：1、祝贺他人获得成功说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺。

2、展开评论事件、赞扬收信人重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。

本部分考生需要发挥自己的思维，适当增加细节，使本段尽量充分饱满。

3、邀约，再次祝贺。

二、常见句型【part 1】开头常用句式①I have learned with delight that you……. I would like to extend to you my warmest congratulations on it. And I feel very happy for you.②I am really happy to learn that you have been elected…【part 2】其它常用句式①______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.②It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）.【part 3】结尾常用句式①Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.⑨I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）. My best wishes for your further success.②All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!闪光词汇及词组：delighted: adj. 高兴的，欣喜的achievement: n. 成就，功绩essential: 本质的，基本的，重要的play a ... role: 起......的作用enhance: v. 提高，增强comprehensive: adj. 全面的embrace: v. 拥抱pave the way for: 为...铺平道路brilliant: adj. 灿烂的三、通用模板模板1：Dear_____________ ，Congratulations on your _______ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement.I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to ________ . What’s more, I also believe that .May all goes beautifully in your new post!Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2：Dear_____________ ，Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . Please accept my sincere congratulations to your ___________.I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in. Now you prove to me a matured and well-rounded________in every respect. Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ .May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!Yours sincerely,Li Ming四、典题讲解假如你是李华，你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。

2022年高考英语书面表达提升必背句型（1）----名词性从句1.What Zhang Guimei impresses me most is that she puts students before herself and that her happiness lies in helping others. (主语从句、表语从句)2.What concerns me most is that you seldom talk with others these days. (主语从句、表语从句)3.What we can't miss are diverse performances, such as animal performances, fireworks displays, water sports shows. More interestingly, varieties of advanced entertainment facilities will give us a unique experience. (主语从句)4.What really matters/ counts is whether you can concentrate on your lessons. (主语从句、表语从句)5.We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that smoking is harmful to our health. (同位语从句)6.I hold a firm belief t hat you will take my advice into consideration. (同位语从句)7.What we should know is that it is forbidden to touch the exhibits and make much noise there. (主语从句、表语从句)8.Therefore, there is no denying that the more words you possess, the better you’ll be. (同位语从句)9.In a word, I hold a firm belief that you will take my advice into consideration.(同位语从句)10.I'm convinced that with your intelligence and diligence you can pass your test easily. (宾语从句)11.I think what you should do is try your best to prepare for the sports meeting and enjoy the process of training. (主语从句)12.I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the tournament. (宾语从句)13.Another thing that students often complain about is that we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. (表语从句)14.I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. (宾语从句)15.That's why Zhang Guimei was awarded the title " Role Model of the Times". (表语从句)16.There is no denying that / It goes without saying that people’s living conditions are being improved on the whole. (同位语从句)17.It is universally acknowledged that reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind. (主语从句)18.It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together. (主语从句)19.It did not surprise me at all when the host announced you as the winner.(主语从句)20.I'd appreciate it if you could give me an early reply. (宾语从句)21.What's the most attractive part is that we will be given a precious chance to have a taste of tea. (主语从句、表语从句)22.There is a widespread concern over the issue whether we should end the separationof science and arts in high schools. (同位语从句)23.The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. (同位语从句)24.The doctor advised that we should have a balanced diet and get into the good habit of getting up early. (宾语从句)25.So I wonder if it’s possible for you to share with me how you improve your English. (宾语从句)26.People across the country support Wuhan to the best of their ability. I’m definitely convinced that we can get through the hard times. (宾语从句)27.It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. (同位语从句)28.It is widely believed that plenty of fresh air contributes to good health. (主语从句)29.I'm convinced that you will be inspired by his strong will and remarkable achievements. (宾语从句)30.I’m indeed very sorry that I am unable to keep my engagement to go to the movie with you this Sunday. (宾语从句)31.I strongly hold the view that measures should be taken to stop Chinese tourists (from) behaving badly in public places. (同位语从句)32.I hold the firm belief that with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. (同位语从句)33.I am writing to you in the hope that you will be so kind as to do me a favor. (同位语从句)34.I am sorry to learn that you have problem in fitting in with the new environment. (宾语从句)35.I am convinced that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.(宾语从句)36.I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlights of the festival.(宾语从句)37.From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that you must have self－confidence if you want to achieve your goal. (同位语从句)38.At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I hope that you will have a safe and happy journey home and that there will be more programs like this in the future.(宾语从句)39.As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society. (宾语从句)40.Also, what deserves my special attention is whether there is an age limit. (主语从句、表语从句)。

2020届高考英语书面表达专项训练道歉信一、谋篇布局道歉信通常包括三部分内容：1、写信目的，表示歉意。

简要说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解，并引出下文。

2、陈述原因，提出弥补措施；详细说明当时的情况，解释原因，语气要诚恳，理由要真实。

如果可以弥补，真诚地提出补救方法，希望能消除误会，弥补过失。

3、请求原谅，希望得到理解。

再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。

好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。

二、常见句型【part 1】开头常用句式1.I am extremely sorry that ……. I'm writing to tell you the reason for it.非常抱歉……。

我现在给你写信告诉你原因。

2.I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to ……因为不能……，我现在写信表达我深切的歉意。

3.I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to……我现在写信是为了表达我没能……的歉意。

4.I regret to tell you that I can't *******for some unavoidable reasons.很遗憾的告诉你，因为一些不可避免的原因我不能……。

【part 2】其它常用句式1.Due to ……, I have to ……因为……我必须……。

2.To make up for my fault, could you please……？If so, I promise……为了弥补我的过失，是否可以请你……？如果可以，我保证……。

3.Would you mind if I changed the appointment time?你是否介意把约定时间调整一下？4.Would it be convenient for you……？……对你来说方便吗？5.I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to ……如果可以约定另外的时间让我……，我会很感谢。

书面表达中的高级结构一．高级词汇1．occur 替换think ofSuddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. →An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.2．devote替换spendHe spe nds all his spare time in reading. →He devotes all his spare time to reading.3．seek替换want / look forThey sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.4．average 替换ordinaryI’m an average ( ordinary ) student.5．but替换veryThe film we saw last night was very interesting. →The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.The film we saw last night was anything but boring.6．seat 替换sitOn his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried. 7．suppose 替换shouldHe is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.8．appreciate 替换thankThank you very much for you help. →We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.9．the case替换trueI don’t think it is the cas e ( true ).10．on替换as soon asAs soon as he arrived, he began his research. →On his arrival, he began his research..11．due to替换because ofHe arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.12．cover替换walk/readAfter covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.13．contribute to替换be helpful/usefulPlenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.14．round the corner 替换coming soon/ nearby① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).15．come to light替换discoverThe family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. →The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.16．have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneselfAfter visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).17．come up with替换think ofJack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.18．set aside替换saveSome students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books. (2004天津卷)19．be of + n. 替换adj.The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.20．refer to 替换talk about/of, mentionThe professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.21．can not but / can not help but替换have to doI could not but (had to) go home.22．more often than not替换usuallyMore often than not (Usually), the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.23．lest替换so that /in order thatI wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it. →I wrote down his telephone number lest I (should) forget it.24．be long for sth. / be long to do sth. 替换want to do sth./wish forI want to see you very much. →I am long to see you.25．be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested in He is caught up in ( very interested in ) collecting stamps.26．more than替换very①I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September. →I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.( NMET 2003 )② If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.(2004全国卷) 27．perfect (ly) 替换good/ very wellHe speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).28．do sb a/the favor 替换helpWould you please do me the favor ( help me ) to turn down the radio?29．the other day替换a few days agoThe other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. ( NMET 1997 )30．in the course of替换duringIn the course of (During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.31．the majority of替换mostThe majority of (Most of ) the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.32．consist of替换be made up ofOur class consists of ( is made up of ) 50 students.33．be worn out替换be tired / broken① After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out (tired).② My shoes are worn out (broken). Please buy me a new pair.34．become of替换happenWhat do think has become of ( happened to ) him ?35．attend to替换look after36．on condition that替换as long as37．nevertheless替换however38．express one’s satisfaction with替换be satisfied with39．spare no efforts to do替换try one’s best to do40．many a 替换many41．be rushed off one’s feet 替换be busy in doing42．a handful of替换a little / some43．meanwhile替换at the same time44．get to one’s feet替换stand up45．beneath替换under46．occasionally替换sometimes /once in while47．for instance替换for example48．seldom替换not often49．wealthy替换rich50．amazing替换surprising51．as a matter of fact 替换in fact二．高级句型结构◆ It句型①It will be + some time + before…It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars.② It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.（2008年湖北卷）③ It is + 被强调部分+ that…1) It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.2) Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.◆more …than any other 表示最高级Among the optional courses, spoken English and computer study are more popular than any one else.◆名词从句① It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.( 2004 全国卷Ⅲ )② My hometown is no longer what it used to be.◆（非限制性）定语从句① The flat is in a building on Fangca o Street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.→The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. (NMET 2003)② It was quite an experience for us both, which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life. (2002北京卷)◆分词结构①I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endlesshomework and attending classes as well. (NMET 2001)② We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. (2004 全国卷Ⅱ)③ Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.（2004 辽宁卷）④Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.（2008年湖南卷）◆ with结构① A terrible accident happened yesterday, with nine people killed and almost eighty injured.② He was carrying a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his lefthand.◆倒装句① The library is to the east of the teaching building. →East of the teaching building is the library.② Although we are tired, we are happy.→Tired as we are, we are happy.③ Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man. (2002 上海卷)④May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!（2007年湖南卷）◆被动语态① Opinions are divided on the question. (NMET 2002)② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students. (2004全国卷Ⅳ)③ New factories, houses and roads have been built.(2004 江苏卷)◆奇妙的改写（1）．Only 改成no one butOnly Tom passed the exam l ast week. → No one but Tom passed the exam.（2）．as soon as …改成No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/The moment Nosooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.（3）．have sb/sth do/doneThe girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken (her leg was broken.).（4）．变换插入语的位置①However, they suggest fees should be charged low. →They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. (NMET 2002)② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’velearned Chinese. →This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. (2004 全国卷Ⅰ)(5). 用同位语代替非限制性定语从句Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.→Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.(2002上海卷)Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poemsthat are read all over the world.（2008年湖南卷）◆其它（1）留意句子的开头①用with复合结构开头With the sun setting in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems.（2006年湖南卷）With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.（2009年江苏卷）②用非谓语动词形式开头ⅰ）In order to improve our English, our school held an English contest.ⅱ）Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner.（2）长短句交织运用（留意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好）◆◆相关过渡语1). 表示时间依次: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last…2). 表示空间依次:near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side…3). 表示比较、比照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary,nevertheless, otherwise…4). 表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus…5). 表示递进关系: besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of…6). 表示并列关系: and, as well as, also…7). 表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude…。

2020届高考英语书面表达专项训练邀请信一、分类1.普通英文邀请函第一种邀请信邀请的对象一般是朋友、熟人，所以内容格式上的要求都比较松，可以写得随便一些。

只要表明邀请的意图，说明活动的内容、时间、地点等等。

但既然是邀请信，那么就一定要在信中表达非常希望对方能够参加或者出席的愿望。

2.正式英文邀请函第二种邀请信一般由会议或学术活动的组委会的某一个负责人来写，以组委会的名义发出，而且被邀请者通常也是属于比较有威望的人士。

因此，这类邀请信的措辞要相对正式一些，语气要热情有礼。

这一类邀请信通常要包括以下内容：首先表明邀请对方参加的意图以及会议或学术活动的名称、时间、地点；然后要对被邀请者的威望和学术水平等表示推崇和赞赏，表明如果被邀请者能够接受邀请，会给会议或者活动带来很好的影响；接着要说明会议或活动的相关事宜，最好是能引起对方兴趣的事宜；当然不能忘了表达希望对方能够参加的诚意；最后还要请收信人对发出的邀请做出反馈，如确认接受邀请。

二、谋篇布局邀请信通常包括以下三部分：1、首段：说明事由，发出邀请。

表明邀请对方参加的意图以及活动的名称、时间、地点等简要信息。

2、主体：介绍活动，陈述理由。

要对被邀请者的威望和学术水平等表示推崇和赞赏，表明如果被邀请者能够接受邀请，会给会议或者活动带来很好的影响；接着要说明会议或活动的相关事宜，最好是能引起对方兴趣的事宜。

3、尾段：作总结，期待回复或参与三、常见句型【首段】说明事由，发出邀请。

1.It’s our honor to invite you to participate in a surprising party which will be held on Monday,March 26, 2018 in our dinning hall that is not very far from your home.我们将为…...举办惊喜派对。

我们想邀请/我们非常荣幸地邀请你......2.I’m *** from **** School，the president of the Student Union. An English speaking contest of our school willbe held on August 6. I am wondering whether you are available and able to share the important moment with us.我是来自***学校的****，学生会主席。

度米作文汇编之2014年高考英语作文：书面表达56个高分句型[1]2014年高考英语作文：书面表达56个高分句型一、以形式主语it引导的句型。

句型1.it (so) happened(chanced) that +clause. = sb. happened/chanced to do sth. =sb.did sth. by chance. 如：it happened that he was out when i got there. 当我到那儿时，碰巧他不在。

=he happened to be out when i got there.= it chanced that he was out when i got there= he was out by chance when i got there.句型2.it seems that sb. do/ be doing/ have done/ had done= sb.seems to do/ be doing/ have done/to be done/to have been done(还有动词appear等可这样使用)如:it seemed that he had been to beijing before.他好象以前去过北京。

=he seemed to have been to beijing before.句型3.it is / was+被强调的部分+that(who)+剩余的部分.如：it wasn’t until he came back that i went to bed.直到他回来我才睡觉。

(一定要注意被强调句型中的谓语动词否定的转移)。

it was because he was ill that he didn’t come to school today.只因为他有病了今天没有来上学。

(只能用because而不能用for, as 或since)it is i who am a student. 我确实是个学生。

2020届高考英语书面表达专项训练建议信建议信主要是向收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。

建议信可以写给个人，就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可以写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。

写建议信时，时态以一般现在时为主，人称多用第二人称。

一、谋篇布局建议信通常包括以下三部分：1、首段：简介自己，不要罗嗦；说明目的，注意语气。

2、主体：提出建议，说明理由首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。

3、尾段：希望采纳建议，表达美好祝愿。

二、常见句型【首段】说明写信目的1. I'm sorry to hear that （you are having trouble in ****）. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在****方面有困难。

这样的问题是很正常的。

可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。

2. I have received your letter saying ****. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。

信上说你******。

可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。

3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of ### so as to ****.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善#####的一些想法，以******。

4.You have asked me for my advice on ***, and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于***询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。

一、使用简单句和有把握句式考生在进行书面表达时应多使用简单句，少量地使用并列句和复合句。

考生在做书面表达时可采用以下五种基本句型：A：主语+系动词+表语The work seemed difficult to us.B：主语＋谓语(vi.)＋其它Great changes have taken place in my hometown.C：主语+谓语+宾语+其它He likes English very much.D：主语+谓语+直接宾语+间接宾语+其它He gave me a new dictionary.E：主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语I find it important to study English.二、英语作文关联词：1、表示平行、对等或选择关系and, both…and, as well as, neither…nor…,also, not only…but also…等。

2、表示转折关系but, yet, however, nevertheless, in spite of, although, otherwise, while等。

3、表示对比关系on the contrary, instead of, on the other hand, just like, unlike等。

4、表示因果关系so, thus, therefore,as a result, because, for, owing to, due to, thanks to等。

5、表示时间、顺序关系shortly after, firstly/secondly…, then, next, finally,for one thing…, for an other thing, in the end, eventually等。

6、表示递进、强调关系besides, furthermore, what’s more, in addition, moreover, above all, most important of all, to make matters worse, 等。