2020年高考英语短文改错高频考点7：并列句(含答案解析)

专题07 短文改错高频考点TOP7 并列句考点一And, so, but, or误用由并列连词( and, but, or, so, not only…but also, however, neither… nor, either…or, still)把两个或两个以上的互相独立的分句连接而成的句子叫做并列句。

并列句之间的关系有并列、转折、选择、因果等关系。

1) 表递进或顺承关系：常用连词and, both…and…, as well as , not only …but also…, neither…nor…等连接。

He is a lovely boy and he is helpful.他很可爱，乐于助人。

2) 转折关系：常用连词but, however, yet（然而，可是）等连接I can come, but will be a little late.我能来，但是要稍晚一些。

3) 选择关系：常用连词or, either…or…, not…but…, or else等连接Either give a hand, or leave right away.或者帮忙，或者立刻离开。

4) 因果关系：常用连词for, so 等连接She is kind to the others, so all of us love her. 她对别人很好，所以我们都喜欢她。

1)She never said she was rich, and she was.【答案】and 改为but【解析】but 在此表示转折。

句中的she was 为she was rich 之省略2)Mr Smith worked very hard so without any success.【答案】so 改为but【解析】此处语意转折考点二如并列连词and, or前后连接为动词词组，则要考虑并列关系是否一致1)Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.【答案】to去掉【解析】or并列连词，organize和plant并列2)In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.【答案】showed改为show【解析】show和get并列（1）We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.【答案】and 改为but【解析】因此处语意转折（2）I told Mother，Father，Sister，all my friends here what a great time I had.【答案】all 前加and【解析】表示并列关系（3）It is a very impo rtant exam but I can‘t afford to fail it.【答案】but 改为and / so【解析】此处表因果关系，并非转折关系（4）She was smiling but nodding at me.【答案】but 改为and【解析】此处并无转折之意（5）It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.【答案】and 改为or【解析】a visitor 和a guest 应是选择关系，意思是“好像我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人”（6）The food was expensive and the service was good.【答案】and 改为but【解析】此处意义发生转折（7）I‘m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games.【答案】so 改为and【解析】表并列关系（8）My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.【答案】but 改为and【解析】此处表示并列，而不是转折（9）So once you‘ve started collecting seriously，you…【答案】So 改为But【解析】因为前后是转折关系（10）Clever as she is，but she works very hard.【答案】去掉but【解析】因前面已有引导让步状语从句的连词as（=though 虽然），千万不要受汉语句式“虽然……但是……”的影响，而重复用连词（11）I teach them，play with them，but watch them growing up.【答案】but 改为and【解析】因为teach / play 与watch 是并列关系，而不是转折关系【湖南省长郡中学2019届高三上学期第一次月考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

专题07 短文改错高频考点TOP7 并列句考点一And, so, but, or误用由并列连词( and, but, or, so, not only…but also, however, neither… nor, either…or, still)把两个或两个以上的互相独立的分句连接而成的句子叫做并列句。

并列句之间的关系有并列、转折、选择、因果等关系。

1) 表递进或顺承关系：常用连词and, both…and…, as well as , not only …but also…, neither…nor…等连接。

He is a lovely boy and he is helpful.他很可爱，乐于助人。

2) 转折关系：常用连词but, however, yet（然而，可是）等连接I can come, but will be a little late.我能来，但是要稍晚一些。

3) 选择关系：常用连词or, either…or…, not…but…, or else等连接Either give a hand, or leave right away.或者帮忙，或者立刻离开。

4) 因果关系：常用连词for, so 等连接She is kind to the others, so all of us love her. 她对别人很好，所以我们都喜欢她。

1)She never said she was rich, and she was.【答案】and 改为but【解析】but 在此表示转折。

句中的she was 为she was rich 之省略2)Mr Smith worked very hard so without any success.【答案】so 改为but【解析】此处语意转折考点二如并列连词and, or前后连接为动词词组，则要考虑并列关系是否一致1)Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.【答案】to去掉【解析】or并列连词，organize和plant并列2)In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.【答案】showed改为show【解析】show和get并列（1）We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.【答案】and 改为but【解析】因此处语意转折（2）I told Mother，Father，Sister，all my friends here what a great time I had.【答案】all 前加and【解析】表示并列关系（3）It is a very impo rtant exam but I can‘t afford to fail it.【答案】but 改为and / so【解析】此处表因果关系，并非转折关系（4）She was smiling but nodding at me.【答案】but 改为and【解析】此处并无转折之意（5）It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.【答案】and 改为or【解析】a visitor 和a guest 应是选择关系，意思是“好像我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人”（6）The food was expensive and the service was good.【答案】and 改为but【解析】此处意义发生转折（7）I‘m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games.【答案】so 改为and【解析】表并列关系（8）My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.【答案】but 改为and【解析】此处表示并列，而不是转折（9）So once you‘ve started collecting seriously，you…【答案】So 改为But【解析】因为前后是转折关系（10）Clever as she is，but she works very hard.【答案】去掉but【解析】因前面已有引导让步状语从句的连词as（=though 虽然），千万不要受汉语句式“虽然……但是……”的影响，而重复用连词（11）I teach them，play with them，but watch them growing up.【答案】but 改为and【解析】因为teach / play 与watch 是并列关系，而不是转折关系【湖南省长郡中学2019届高三上学期第一次月考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

2020年全国一卷英语短文改错题Today I tried cokking a simply dish myself.I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs,and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it.First Icut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside.Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick.After that I poured oil into a pan and tnrned off the stove.I waited patiently unless the oil was hot.Then I put the tomatoes the beaten eggs into pan together.”Not that way ,”my mother tried to stop us but failed.She was right.It didn’t turn out as I had wished.2020年全国二卷短文改错题Thank you fou you letter, what really made me happy.I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in school in my hometown.I’m surely you'll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.2020年全国三卷短文改错题My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families.In order to make surelyall of us are in good health,and makes specific plans for us.For example ,everymorning,my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I hadto eat an apple.My dad don’t like the soup and Idon’t enjoy apples.I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things,we may become ill.But he insists on eating health food.Understanding her good intentions,I eat all the food what is provided by mom with appreciation.2020年全国一卷英语题答案Today I tried cokking a simply dish myself.I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs,and I thought itSimple friedmust to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it.First Icut the tomatoes into pieces 去掉to preparebut put them aside.Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick.After and chopsticksthat I poured oil into a pan and tnrned off the stove.I waited patiently unless the oil was hot.Then Ion till/untilput the tomatoes the beaten eggs into pan together.”Not that way ,”my mother tried to stop us butinto 后加the me failed.She was right.It didn’t turn out as I had wished.2020年全国二卷短文改错题答案Thank you four letter, 【which】really made me happy.I’m glad to know that you’ve come 【to】China to learn kung fu in school in my hometown.I’m 【sure】you'll have a good time. Actually, I 【started】to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, 【but/yet】I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer 【vacation】. Then I can spare some time to lean it again, 【so】that we can practice together 【on】every day. Best of luck with 【your/you】learning kung fu in China. See you 【soon】2020年全国三卷短文改错提答案My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families.In order to makeConcerned familysurely all of us are in good health,and makes specific plans for us. For example ,everysure 去掉andmorning,my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple.My dad don’ta have doesn’tlike the soup and Idon’t enjoy apples.I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things,we mayforced后加to become ill.But he insists on eating health food.Understanding her good intentions,I eat all the shefood what is provided by mom with appreciation.that。

专题07 短文改错高频考点TOP7 并列句考点一And, so, but, or误用由并列连词( and, but, or, so, not only…but also, however, neither… nor, either…or, still)把两个或两个以上的互相独立的分句连接而成的句子叫做并列句。

并列句之间的关系有并列、转折、选择、因果等关系。

1) 表递进或顺承关系：常用连词and, both…and…, as well as , not only …but also…, neither…nor…等连接。

He is a lovely boy and he is helpful.他很可爱，乐于助人。

2) 转折关系：常用连词but, however, yet（然而，可是）等连接I can come, but will be a little late.我能来，但是要稍晚一些。

3) 选择关系：常用连词or, either…or…, not…but…, or else等连接Either give a hand, or leave right away.或者帮忙，或者立刻离开。

4) 因果关系：常用连词for, so 等连接She is kind to the others, so all of us love her. 她对别人很好，所以我们都喜欢她。

1)She never said she was rich, and she was.2)Mr Smith worked very hard so without any success.考点二如并列连词and, or前后连接为动词词组，则要考虑并列关系是否一致1)Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.2)In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.（1）We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.（2）I told Mother，Father，Sister，all my friends here what a great time I had.（3）It is a very important exam but I can‘t afford to fail it.（4）She was smiling but nodding at me.（5）It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.（6）The food was expensive and the service was good.（7）I‘m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games.（8）My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.（9）So once you‘ve started collecting seriously，you…（10）Clever as she is，but she works very hard.（11）I teach them，play with them，but watch them growing up.【湖南省长郡中学2019届高三上学期第一次月考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

2020年高考英语全国卷II短文改错试题及答案详解（全国卷II适用地区：重庆、陕西、甘肃、宁夏、青海、新疆、黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、内蒙古、海南）请看试题：第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.请看译文：谢谢你的来信，这真的令我很高兴。

2020届高三英语短文改错汇编（1）2020届湖南省永州市高考第二次模拟英语试题One morning that I was in primary school, I tried cooking for first time. As my parents weren’t in, I have to cook something to eat. I took an egg from the refrigerator, putting some oil in the pan and cracked an egg into it. After a few second, I tried to turn the egg over in case it would get burnt. Unexpectedly, it caught fire. Not known what to do, I screamed but rushed out of the kitchen. After a while, I realized I should put out the fire, so I returned back, only to find something but a black burnt egg. I’ve learned that I can’t be too carefully while cooking.【答案】that→when for后加the have→had putting→put second→seconds known→knowing but→and删除returned后的back something→nothing carefully→care ful【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。

文章主要讲述了作者小学时独自在家煎鸡蛋，不小心把蛋煎糊了，还差点儿酿成火灾的故事。

【详解】1. 考查定语从句关系词。

专题15 短文改错1. It was really a nice experience. If you’d like to make trip to our city some day...【错因分析】有些考生认为，experience可以作不可数名词，前面不用不定冠词，于是误将a nice experience 中的不定冠词a去掉。

【试题解析】experience前面有形容词nice修饰，故不能去掉a，而make a trip to...是英语中的固定搭配，意为＂去某地旅行＂。

【参考答案】在trip前加a。

2. His boss wanted to fire him if he didn’t start coming on time, so he went to the doctor for a help. The doctor gavehim some...【错因分析】容易将第一个the改为a。

有些考生认为，在文章中，doctor在此为第一次出现，前面用不定冠词，结果误改答案。

【试题解析】其实，go to the/a doctor都可以，因此没有必要去改它。

而help既可作可数名词，表示＂提供帮助的人或物＂，也可作不可数名词，表示抽象的概念＂帮助＂。

此处指工人找医生帮忙，help为抽象概念，前面不用冠词，所以要将a help中的a去掉。

【参考答案】将a help中的a去掉。

英语中冠词只有三个，只能从以下几个方向出题：1）不定冠词a和an互改；2）不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；3）根据需要增删冠词。

如：1. As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. （famous前加a）2. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but...（a改为the）3. On Thursday I will have to decide what I want to doover a weekend.（a改为the）4. I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home （had后加a）We are planning a small party for the next Sunday. There, Katia...The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.【错因分析】容易改medicine为medicines。

2020年高考英语短文改错原文、译文、长难句解析及答案详解第一部分：短文改错原文和译文Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove.I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. ＂Not that way，＂my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.今天我亲自尝试做一道简单的菜。

我喜欢吃西红柿炒鸡蛋，并且我认为做这道菜一定很容易。

妈妈告诉了我如何做这道菜。

首先，我把西红柿切成块，然后放到一边。

接着，我把鸡蛋打到碗里，然后用筷子快速把鸡蛋打散。

之后，我把食用油倒入平底锅里，打开火。

我耐心等待，直到油被烧热。

接着我把西红柿和打散的蛋液一块儿倒入了平底锅里。

“不要那样，”我妈妈全力来阻止我，但没有成功。

她是对的，（这道菜）结果并没有像我希望的那样（做好）。

第二部分：短文改错长难句解析难句解析一：Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself.解析：本句中“try cooking”意思是“试着做某事”；“myself”意为“我本人、亲自”（注意区分by myself是独自的意思）。

短文改错专题全国卷3年考点分布表综合近三年全国卷短文改错题可知，其设题的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑，从这三个角度考查学生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确性。

词法的考查对动词考查的频率最高，主要考查单句话中并列谓语的时态一致或根据相应的时间状语判断时态。

形容词和副词的使用也是词法的热点考点之一，主要涉及它们之间的相互转换。

冠词的用法是必考题之一；名词的用法也几乎出现在每一套题之中；介词和数词的考查相对较低。

句法层面的改错主要涉及主谓一致、复合句连接词的使用以及特殊句式。

语篇层面的改错主要包括上、下文时态一致、代词指代一致、逻辑关系一致(连词的使用)。

错词情况中，涉及动词的情况最多。

多词错误中，多余的主要是介词；少词错误中，主要涉及介词或冠词。

A1. 【2019·全国卷I 】I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.【答案】 I becamein playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon I was in primary school, I was walking by the schoolplayground. Suddenlyfootball fell just in front of me almost hit me. interesting int erested wherewhena butand真题体验I stopped the ball and kicked itback to the playground. To everyone’s , the ball went into the net. All the football on theplayground cheered loudly, that I had a talent for football. From on, I started to play football with classmates after school. I am a goodplayer now.【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。

2020年高考英语三轮冲刺练习短文改错一1.I'm well feed at home with Dad as my cook. Dad has acquired various cooking method by trial and error. Not only does his cooking appeal to my appetite, but also guarantee the diversity of nutrition for me. Dad includes large amounts of fruits, vegetables or grains in my regular meals to keep my diet balanced. For each one meal, I eat quite a lot, but I don’t actually risk any healthy problem. So when comparing me with my classmates, I feel very lucky to live with such good dad. I also feel grateful for my dad just because of which he has been doing for me ever since.2.短文改错：When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.3.短文改错When surf the Internet yesterday, I saw a blog posted by a mother. She was not sure about whether she could afford the cost of supplying school books to both of her kid this year. One of her boys is one year low than me in the school, so I write to ask for the book list of his school. Two books of mine matched the list, becauseI was able to give them away, what I used last school year. I mailed the two booksto his son according to the given address. Then she wrote to say how deep she appreciated the gift. It's always nice to do I can to make a difference!4.短文改错：The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.5.During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They alsoI went here again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.Theyalso had a small pond,which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.6.短文改错Volunteering has a positive effect in our community.It is greatly benefit to us in several ways.First of all, volunteering can let us to learn more about society and gain valuable experience.Secondly, volunteering provides us with a good opportunity to put what we had learned to good use.I hope more and more students will active join the volunteer club of our school.Let's care for the old and disabled people around us by offer a helping hand.Let's clean the parks near their home.Let's go to nursing homes to bring love to people which are in need.Remember, we can make difference to society if we are willing to help others.So let's take actions.7.短文改错Hi Sandra，You'll never guess over I'm writing this email from a cave! We're on holiday in Spain now.We spent a few days in Barcelona first.It's a great place but we had a good time though I didn't feel well one day.Anyway, after we left Barcelona, we come to spend several days in Granada.And guess what? We couldn't find a hotel because there were quite a lot of tourist.Then someone said, “Why not trying the cave dwellings (住宅) here？” We thought he was joking, but here we were really in a cave dwelling and it's wonderfully.Tomorrow we're going to visit a palace in Granada.We're enjoying it very much that we don't want to leave this amazed place.We're never going to have enough time explore everything!Yours，Ben2020年高考英语三轮冲刺练习短文改错五(7篇含答案解析)答案解析一、短文改错1.【参考答案】（1）feed改为fed（2）method改为methods（3）guarantee改为guarantees（4）or改为and（5）each后去掉one（6）healthy改为health（7）me改为myself（8）good前加a（9）for改为to/towards（10）which改为what【解析】（1）考查非谓语。