如何靓化英语写作
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如何靓化英语写作
要想写出漂亮的文章，必须从写好句子着手。
而写好句子，必须熟悉英语句式的特点。
还有知道英语句子和汉语句子之间的差别。
汉语句子讲究简洁、明了。
在外形上可以比作一根竹子，每个句子就是其中的一节。
而英语句子重视句子与句子之间的逻辑关系。
在外形上可以比作一串葡萄，一根主干加上很多的分支。
要写出地道的英语句子，就要遵循英语构句的原则。
1.把句子中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。
例如：
Weak: Tom’s father is a worker. He works in a factory.
Better: Tom’s father, a worker, works in a factory.
2.将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。
例如：
Weak: The team members are good players.
Better: The team members play well.
3. 在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。
例如：
Weak: Here are the books you ordered.
Better: The books you ordered have arrived.
4.用并列连词（and, but, or等）或分号（；）把两个或两个以上的简单句连在一起构成。
例如：
Weak: You help him. He helps you.
Better: You help him and he helps you. 或You help him; he helps you.
5.用介词替代动词。
介词表示状态，with, without, against, for 都可以取代汉语中相应的动词。
如：
Weak: China is a large country. It has long history.
Better: China is a large country with long history.
6. 用介词替代从句。
如：
Weak: When you come to the second traffic, turn right.
Better: At the second traffic light turn right.
7.用定语从句合并两个简单句子。
Weak: He bought a pen yesterda y. It doesn’t work well.
Better: The pen he bought yesterday doesn’t work well.
8.用关联词合并两个简单句。
Weak: He enjoys playing football. He also enjoys playing basketball.
Better: He enjoys not only playing football but also basketball.
类似的关联词有：both…and…; neither…nor…; either…or…
9.改变句子的语态。
汉语重视主动句，而英语重视被动句。
Weak: He has made much progress in his English.
Better: Much progress has been made in his English.
10.使用短语替代动词。
在句子中使用短语能为文章增添色彩。
Weak: Our city has changed a lot in the past five years.
Better: Great changes have taken place in the past five years in our city.
改变后的句子用短语take place 代替的了change，并且将主动语态改为被动语态。
11.使用不定式。
不定式表示即将发生的动作。
Weak: We will discuss this problem at the meeting that will be held tomorrow.
Better: We will discuss this problem at the meeting to be held tomorrow.
改变后的句子将原句中的定语从句that will be held 改为了to be held。
简化了原句，同时也让体现了句子层次性，逻辑性的特点。
12.使用分词。
动词的分词有两种：过去分词和现在分词。
过去分词表示主动，现在分词表示被动。
Weak: She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.
Better: She walked out of the lad followed by many students.
13.恰当使用逗号，充分发挥标点符号的语法功能。
句号表示一句话内容的终结，而逗号表示一个暂时的停顿，这句话的内容还没有完成。
如：It has some fantastic sights, including the Eiffel Tower and Note Dame Cathedral, one of the most famous churches in the world.这个句子中使用了两个逗号，第一个逗号后面使用了动词ing形式，表示状态。
第二个逗号后面是一个介词短语，对前面的名词进行解释说明。
