2018届二轮复习 短文改错专题10篇训练之三 学案(21页word版含有解析) (1)

2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇汇聚之一【1】In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But China’s human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda’s habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.【答案】【小题1】had--have【小题2】great-- greatly【小题3】mean--means【小题4】live 前加to【小题5】damaged --damaging【小题6】panda-- pandas【小题7】of划掉【小题8】which--- where / in which/ live后加in【小题9】can--can’t /cannot【小题10】Besides --However【解析】【小题1】一个动作表示持续到现在，还会持续下去用现在完成进行时，had--have。

2018届二轮复习短文改错解题技巧学案练与析一、分清错误的类型，对症下药1．缺词短文改错中所缺的词常常是冠词、介词、代词等虚词，它通常与词的搭配相关，比如：见到名词，应考虑是否缺了冠词；见到动词，可注意后面是否少了应与之搭配的介词或其他词；见到某些固定表达，如in fact，as soon as等，应考虑是否完整；还有某些短语加冠词与不加冠词意义不同，如in front of，in the front of；某些短语加介词与不加介词用法不同，如：as a result，as a result of。

高考常考点具体如下表所示：典型例题：①In the car park there Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.答案及分析：在as后加a。

car是可数名词，此处表示“有一辆汽车冲了过来”，表泛指，故要用a。

②For example，how many times have you walked out of a room and left the lights or television when no one else was there?答案及分析：在television后面加on。

句意：例如，当那里没人的时候，有多少次你让电灯或电视开着就离开了房间？leave...on表示“让……开着”。

③There was one in particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’tlooking.答案及分析：在put后加it。

及物动词put后缺少宾语，代替“我特别想要的那个玩具”要用it。

2．多词短文改错中多余的词常常是虚词，如冠词、介词、代词、副词、连词等。

一种是根据涉及的名词、动词的特点等判断是否多了冠词、介词、副词或其他词；另一种是根据全句的结构和意义，判断是否多了连词或其他词。

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之二【1】Last weekend we went for camping in the mountains with our teacher, Anna.When we arrived, we made a camp fire first.Then, Anna taught us to catch fish so that they could have more food to eat that night.I liked the airs there because it was fresh and clean.Many stars were up highly in the sky and the moon looked bright.We all sat around the fire, listening Anna’s stories about her childhood.She was born into a poor family or she worked very hard to be successful.I was very touched that I couldn’t sleep the whole night, thought about being a teacher in the future.When I get home, I said to my parents, “Everything was great about the camping.I want to be the teacher like Anna in the future.”答案：第一句：去掉for第三句：they→we第四句：airs→air第五句：highly→high第六句：listening后加to第七句：or→and/so第八句：very→so; thought→thinking或thought前加and第九句：get→got第十句：第一个the→a【2】When Tom was a little boy, he dreamed of become a famous writer one day.We all know whether a person wants to become a writer, he should read many books and practiced writing every day.Besides, thiswas not what Tom did.Actual, he did nothing for his dream.Now at the age of 30, he still just talks about his dream.He doesn’t read or write it.In fact, there were many people like Tom.They ha ve dreams, but they don’t try their best realize their dreams.If you also have a dream, please do which you can to realize it.If you just talk about it every day, their dream will be a dream forever.答案：第一句：become→becoming第二句：whether→if; practiced→practic e第三句：Besides→However第四句：Actual→Actually第六句：去掉it第七句：were→are第八句：best后加to第九句：which→what第十句：their→your【3】Last weekend, I helped my grandparents preparing their trip to Beijing.On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched for the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beijing, and some hotel informations.In the afternoon, I go to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was long queue.After dinner, I put the thing my grandparents would need into the suitcase, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, or a map.The next morning, I went to the station to see him off.Waving goodbye with them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey.答案：第一句：preparing→prepare第二句：去掉第一个for; informations→information第三句：go→went; long前加a第四句：thing→things; or→and第五句：him→them第六句：with→to; happily→happy【4】Alice, my best friend, devotes many energy to her lessons.She is always one of the top student in our class.She loves the music so much that she made it a rule to enjoy songs in her spare time.Alice is always willing to help other, and she often helps us with our lessons.As a volunteer, she has successful organized some voluntary activities.We paid a visit a nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school.That we did was warmly welcomed.Win honor for our school, Alice is well known to our classmates.答案：第一句：many→much第二句：student→students第三句：去掉the; made→makes第四句：other→others第五句：successful→successfully第六句：visit后加to; so→and第七句：That→What第八句：Win→Winning【5】Li Ming is a friend of mine.I’m glad he changed greatly in the pasttwo years.I clearly remember he was quite fat two years before.He got tired so easy that he couldn’t take exercise, that made him very ter, he realized unless he went on like that, he would end up achieve nothing.So he made up his minds to make a change.He went running every morning and played the basketball every afternoon.Besides, he followed a diet of more vegetables or less meat.Gradually he began to lose weight.He is now an energetic boy in good health.So when faced with problems, we should overcome it with great determination and strong willpower.答案：第二句：changed前加has第三句：before→ago第四句：easy→easily; 第二个that→which或在第二个that前加and第五句：u nless→if; achieve→achieving第六句：minds→mind第七句：去掉the第八句：or→and第十一句：it→them【6】Being a teacher is always believed to be one of greatest occupations, because teachers make great contributions for the st week, I got a chance to experience teaching students.Our school asked us to teach some kids live in the countryside.The kids was so happy that they gave me a warm welcome.I teach them English and after class, we played games happily.We had a lot of funs together.When I returned back to school, I missed the students so much.They like me but some of themhave kept in touch with me ever since.I felt so proudly of being a teacher.答案：第一句：greatest前加the; for→to第三句：us→me; live→living第四句：was→were第五句：teach→taught第六句：funs→fun第七句：去掉back第八句：but→and第九句：proudly→proud【7】The World Health Organization said that 92 percent of the world’s population live in areas of high air pollution.Experts say much of that pollution comes from vehicles fueling by diesel.Many cities in Europe have called for end the production of diesel cars.They hope to replace them with electric vehicles but their quality has improved.London is one of the most heavy polluted cities in Europe.Levels of harmful gases in the city are regularly higher than limits set by the European Union.Martin Williams says pedestrians (行人) often do not realize how close they are to air pollution sources because they cannot see it.He says people across Great Britain have being died too early because the pollution.Experts say electric cars could offer a answer to air pollution in most city.They add, however, that the electricity should be created by using renewable energy.答案：第一句：said→says第二句：fueling→fueled第三句：end→ending第四句：but→because第五句：heavy→heavily第七句：it→them第八句：去掉being; because后加of第九句：a→an; city→cities【8】During my second month of nursing school, our professors gave us a quiz.I had smoothly finished the others’ questions when I got stuck on the last one: “What’s the first name of the woman who clean the school？” I had seen, many times, the woman, tall and in her fifty, but how could I know her name? I handed in my paper, leave the last question blankly.After a class ended, one student asked for the answer for the question.The professor said, “As you know, that in your careers you will meet many people.You should respect them and care about them, even you just smile and say ’hello’ to them.”答案：第一句：professors→professor第二句：others’→other; clean→cleans第三句：fifty→fifties第四句：leave→leaving; blankly→blank第五句：a→the; 第二个for→to第六句：去掉that第七句：even后加if/though【9】In the village where I grew up, everyone knew an old man, thatspent all his time in painting.People that lived in the village used to admiring his works and he often gave his paintings to his friends.Whether he was offered money, he would never take it.He said he painted for a pleasure.He once gave one of his paintings to my father, who actually wasn’t interesting in art.Years later I found at our old house.By that time the old man had died and people had started to recognize his paintings as great work of art, which were worth lots of money.So an art gallery makes me an offer of $5,000 for this painting and I nearly sold it.So then I decided not to.It reminds me of my childhood and of the old man who didn’t real want to make money by painti ng.答案：第一句：that→who第二句：admiring→admire第三句：Whether→If第四句：去掉a第五句：interesting→interested第六句：found后加it第七句：work→works第八句：makes→made第九句：So→But第十句：real→really【10】Tourism is booming in Tibet.More than 6.8 million Chinese and foreign tourists visit the region in the first half of this year.Tourism income during that period rose on to 7 billion yuan.More tourists are expected to traveling around Tibet in the second half of this year.The region is hosting the China Tibet Tourism or Culture Expo, featuringseries of festivals.Currently, foreigners need a special travel permission to tour the region in addition for a Chinese visa.They have to wait for the permit patient.It is cheerful what the local authorities have promised us to shorten the time of obtaining it.答案：第二句：visit→visited第三句：去掉on第四句：traveling→travel第五句：or→and; series前加a第六句：permission→permit; for→to第七句：patient→patiently第八句：what→that; us→them。

第二讲 短文改错[全国卷3年考情分析][命题者说]短文改错主要考查语法基础知识，语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、难的语法结构。

短文词数通常与书面表达一样，也是100词左右。

Ⅰ 短文改错命题原则表——高考就考这些点短文改错10处错误中，设错方式是有规律的，一般情况下，多、缺词2～3个，错词7～8个，做完题后，可按此规律进行查验。

见下表：A(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor ’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up ！” “Slow down ！” “Turning left ！” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案：In the summer holiday following myeighteen eighteenth birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard∧the/my first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so but/yet once I started the car, my mind goes wentblank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating theword words ， “Speed up ！” “Slow down ！” “Turning Turnleft ！” I was so much ＼ nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late later ， the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly suddenstop just in the middle on ofthe road. B(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案：Mr. and Mrs.Zhang /all both all ＼ work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takesthem about a an/one hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting interested in planting vegetables in their garden, that whichis on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier earlyand water the vegetables together. They have also bought for somegardening tools. BesideBesides，they often get some usefulinformationsinformation from the Internet. Whensummer camecomes，they will invite their students∧topick the fresh vegetables!C(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案：When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of＼how fast time flies. I hadhave grown notonly physically, andbut also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo wastooktaken，I entered my second year of high school and becomebecame a new member of the school musicclub.Around me in∧this/thepicture are the thingstheythat/which were very important in my life atthat time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying differencedifferent kinds of cars andplanes，playing pop music，and collecting thelatelatest music albums.This picture often brings backto me many happy memories of yourmy high school days.名词单复数的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下三个方面：(1)可数名词单复数的错用：一般考查错把复数用作单数，有时也考查错把单数用作复数。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之一【1】Last year, I spent my summer holiday at my uncles in Beijing, which I stayed for nearly one month. In the first two weeks, I visited some places of interest such as the Forbidden City. In the following days. what interested me most was explore several op universities, including the PekingUniversity. Deeply attracted by the beautiful sceneries and academic atmosphere, I found myself greatly inspire to study hard to be admitted by one key university in 2018. Additional, one of the most interesting but meaningful things was to teach my cousin to learn English. Even though we had much difficulty at first, neither of us improved much both in knowledge and patience. I indeedenjoyed that summer holiday, which have benefited me a lot from life and study ever since.答案【2】In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating from high school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may find the school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that they need a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It suggested that textbooks be recycled so that we can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in a time on how to remove their pressure proper.答案In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating fromthathigh school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may findfor buryingthe school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that theyand suchneed a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It/\suggested that textbooks be recycled so thattheir iswe can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in atrees删除atime on how to remove their pressure proper.properly【3】Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t fit? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or you will find out people are more friendly than you think!答案Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’textremelyfit∧? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to thein thoughts floatingcampus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when theseemedalovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendlinesswhoHerpushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or删除to andyou will find out people are more friendly than you think!【4】I woke up lately yesterday because my alarm clock didn't ring. With no time for the breakfast, I rushed out of my house. I had intended to catch the 7: 30 subway, and I didn't make it. Have a little time left, I take a taxi instead. I arrived at the school only find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school where should have been full of students was empty. It was Saturday. However, our ill luck showed no sign of coming at an end. When I returned home, I found myself lock out. I had forgotten to bring the key. Just my luck.答案第一句lately--late;第二句breakfast前the去掉；第三句and---but;第四句Have--Having,take---took 第五句find前加to,where---which;第六句at---to第七句lock--locked【5】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.答案I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as ∧reporter last term. Theconfidence a exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible forannuallyinterview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. Oneinterviewing them thoughtlady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothingand ofwas more excited than communicating with people.excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.删除that【6】Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. Andothers talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor.答案Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Somementioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And othersinspiringtalked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believetheirthat this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I hadhave always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they arelivesdoing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their respectable withprofessional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. Ihardmust learn as much as I can ∧get into a good medical college, which I can prepareto wheremyself fully for the job of a doctor.【7】When my grandfather left school, he got his first job as a office worker. In those days, he was extreme thin. He paid very little, so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time, and he looks just like me, but a lot thin! When he grew older, he worked at all sorts of thing, such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life, but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed, like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.答案71. ... a office worker. a → an72. ... extreme thin. extreme → extremely73. He paid ... paid前加was74. ... eating a lot. eating → eat75. ... photos of her ... her → him76. ... a lot thin! thin → thinner77. ... sorts of thing ... thing → things78. ... worked as a ... worked → working79. He worked hardly ... hardly → hard80. ... found out time ... 去掉out【8】The first time I went to the zoo was several years ago, with parents. Yesterday I went to the zoo with some classmates. Arriving here, we got a guidebook and started walking round a zoo. We all got pretty exciting about visiting the animals. But something in their eyes made me to think they might enjoy live in the wild rather than be kept in a cage. One classmate might have guessed what had come in my mind, as he tells me at least in this way we had a good chance to know more about the animals. I don't know. Maybe some days there will have a better way to see and study them.答案71. ... with parents. parents前加my72. Arriving here ... here → there73. ... round a zoo. a → the74. ... pretty exciting about ... exciting → excited75. ... made me to think ... 去掉to76. ... enjoy live ... live → living77. ... come in my mind ... in → to / into78. ... he tells me ... tells → told79. Maybe some days ... days → day80. ... will have a ... have → be【9】Last week, I went out with my family for the meal in a restaurant. The food is not very good though. For my first course, I chose a dish calling “Cook's special”, turned out to be a kind of pizza. Generally, I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasn't very tasty. The rest of my families didn't enjoy their food very much either. Personal, I think we would have enjoyed us more if we'd cooked a meal at home. After all, we always have had plenty of food in the fridge.答案71. ... for the meal ... the → a72. ... food is not ... is → was73. ... a dish calling ... calling → called74. ... turned out to ... turned前加which75. ... and this meal ... and → but76. ... was quite disappointed ... disappointed → disappointing77. ... my families didn't ... families → family78. Personal, I think ... Personal → Personally79. ... enjoyed us more ... us → ourselves80. ... have had plenty ... 去掉had【10】It's hard to make friends if you stayed at home alone all the time. Instead, you should get out of the house and does things that will put you touch with others. Joining a club or play a sport. Go to meetings of different group in the neighborhood. It's a lot easy to make friends when you have similarly interests. Plan things to talkabout with others people. Find out that what's in the newspaper, listen to the top CDs, and get to know something interesting about my favorite TV or movie star. 答案71. ... stayed at home ... stayed → stay72. ... and does things ... does → do73. ... put you touch ... touch前加in74. Joining a club ... Joining → Join75. ... of different group ... group → groups76. ... a lot easy ... easy → easier77. ... similarly interests. similarly → similar78. ... with others people. others → other或去掉people79. Find out that ... 去掉that80. ... my favorite TV ... my → your。

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之三【一】Dear Bob,Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get toknow more about your country. First, let me tell you something moreabout myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is thecapital of China. I go Hongqi Middle School. Westudy quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics.I use to play ping-pong a lotin my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favoritesport? I look forward to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua【二】My Favorite SportMy favorite sport is football. I was a member ofour school football team. We practise for three timesevery week and often watch football match on TVtogether. Play football not only makes us growtall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play andteam spirit. We must keep mind that we playfor the team instead ourselves. Also, the sportteaches us the important of obedience (服从). Eachplayer must obey captain, who is the leader ofthe team. And they must not break the rules too often if we wantto win the game.【三】The Problem with TelevisionNow I can’t watch much television but a few yearsago I was used to watch it every night. I was oftena little tired afte r a day’s work and watch TVdemands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my family. Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no way of settle the matter except by selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead.【四】Dear Peter,Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthdayparty on Sunday. I’d like very much come buthad an examination on Monday morning. It isa ver y important exam but I can’t afford tofail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend readingand prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I won’t be able to come in this time. Hope youcan understand. I’ll take this chance wishyou wonderful time on your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!Yours,Li Ming【五】The day before the speech contest English teachertalked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would win or not. When I was in the stage the next day, I felt sonervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.【六】Like most of my schoolmates. I have either brothers nor sisters, in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are inother homes, I wonder.【七】Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows. it’s famousmountain with all kinds of plants and animal. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.【八】When I first learned write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary.I followed her and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. she liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was agood one . Their word were a great encouragement to me.【九】Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe my self as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to dothings well as them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as fool. SoI feel unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know thatthey don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other verywell in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’tseem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?Y ours,Xiao Wei【十】Dear Mr. Brown,I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could only speak a few words. But one and a half year later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from your encouraging words. I will always remember what you said, “If you try to, you can be No. 1!” I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home and will come to China againsometimes in the future. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.Yours sincerely,Li Min答案：【一】1. learn 改为learnt或learned。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之二【1】The first day I went to school, I climb nervously onto the school bus. It was full of noisy child shouting and laughing excited. Then I found out a place next to a quiet girl with long hair and big eyes. We were both very shy, but we didn't talk much on the way to school, although we smiled with each other. In the followed days, we got to know each other better, and became good friends. Now when either of them has a problem, the other is always ready to helping. We have so much in common that we spend most our free time together.答案短文改错：71. ... I climb nervously ... climb → climbed72. ... noisy child ... child → children73. ... laughing excited. excited → excitedly74. ... I found out ... 去掉out75. ... but we didn't ... but → so76. ... with each other. with → at77. ... the followed days ... followed → following78. ... either of them ... them → us79. ... ready to helping. helping → help80. ... most our free ... most后加of【2】There is always a great need for public bicycles in my area. Generally I have to waiting. But I had had a different experience yesterday. As usually, when I went to pick up a bike, here was no sign of one. I noticed woman riding past me, thinking she wouldn't stopped. Suddenly, she made a U-turn, rode towards me, returned the bikes and said, “Go ahead.”I was surprising and she smiled at me, “I'm not in any hurry and my office is just one stop away.” I thanked him and realized that there are some people who are truly kind and really makes a difference to others' life by doing small things.答案71. ... have to waiting. waiting → wait72. ... had had a ... 去掉had73. As usually ... usually → usual74. ... here was no ... here → there75. I noticed woman ... woman前加a76. ... wouldn't stopped. stopped → stop77. ... returned the bikes ... bikes → bike78. I was surprising ... surprising → surprised79. I thanked him ... him → her80. ... makes a difference ... makes → make【3】Some days before, I decided to leave my bike at home and take the bus instead. On the bus, I pull my cap off. When I reached my stop, I got off the bus. While cross the street, I realized something were missing. My cap! I turned around, running to the bus, and the bus pulled away from the stop. Just then, a bus stopped a short distance away because a red light. While I sadly looked at the bus, the door was opened. A man stood near the door and looked around. Seen me, he waved something: It was my cap. I barely had time to grab them and say thank you before the door closed again.答案Some days before, I decided to leave my bike at home and take the bus instead. On the bus, I pull my cap off.agopulledWhen I reached my stop, I got off the bus. While cross the street, I realized something were missing. My cap! Icrossingwasturned around, running to the bus, and the bus pulled away from the stop. Just then, a bus stopped a short distancebuttheaway because/\ a red light. While I sadly looked at the bus, the door was opened. A man stood near the door andof删除waslooked around. Seen me, he waved something: It was my cap. I barely had time to grab them and say thank youSeeingitbefore the door closed again.【4】Journey to the West is a fantastic story setting in the Tang Dynasty.When opening the book, you would read an exciting story. Tangseng and histhree companions went through adventurous experience to get the scriptures（经文），which could be beneficial for the ordinary people. They made the long and hardjourney westwards to achieve their dream. The Monkey King, also was calledSunwukong, managed to fight against all kinds of difficulties. Therefore, the MonkeyKing as a symbol of being bravery and determined is deeply loved by our Chinese.The story is so amazing that it is very worth reading,I believe you can learn moreabout Chinese culture from this book.答案【5】Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t fit? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or you will find out people are more friendly than you think!答案Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’textremelyfit∧? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to thein thoughtsfloatingcampus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when theseemedalovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendlinesswhoHerpushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or删除to andyou will find out people are more friendly than you think!【6】Last Sunday,I volunteered in a tourists attraction.At noon,I was having lunch while I found a dog wandering around and looked for something to eat.Judging from its dirty look,I knew it homeless.However,when I walked closer,it ran away.Obvious,it was afraid of people.How can I give it more help?I suddenly thought of my uncle,which liked dogs very much.He was likely that he would adopt it!I telephoned to him and asked him if he would adopt the dog.He agreed,butwhen he came,the dog was going.Last Sunday,I volunteered in a tourists ①touristattraction.At noon,I was having lunch while ②when I found a dog wandering around and looked ③lookingforsomethingto eat.Judging from its dirty look,I knew it ∧④was homeless.However,when I walked closer,it ran away.Obvious ⑤Obviously ,itwas afraid of people.How can ⑥could I give it more help?I suddenly thoughtof my uncle,which ⑦who liked dogs very much.He ⑧Itwas likely that he wouldadopt it!I telephoned ⑨him and asked him if he would adopt the dog.Heagreed,but when he came,the dog was going ⑩gone.∧tourists→tourist 这里tourist 作定语修饰attraction,因此要用单数。

2018高考英语二轮备考教学案--短文改错【考纲解读】1、短文改错的短文内容与学生的学习生活非常贴近好像就是学生的习作。

2、长度均在100词左右。

3、材料都是记叙文，简单易懂，不存在理解方面的问题。

4、新课标的设题通常是一般情况下，每句至多有两处错误，每处错误，改动一词为原则，即在一个词上进行改动，可以是添一词，删一词或改一词。

没有错误的句子，无需改动。

【要点分析】一、短文改错万能公式1.谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有：①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致;④缺少动词,特别是be动词;⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。

2.名词的常见错误：单复数名词错用，可数名词与不可数名词错用。

3.连词错误：连词包括关系代词、副词，并列连词and/or/but等。

关于连词，一般考查从句关系：who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。

4.冠词错误：误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an和the(固定搭配，或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词)5.形容词和副词错误：系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词smell/feel); 词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。

6.代词错误：代词的主格和宾格(I/me;he/him;she/her;we/us; they/them)错误;反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误; 代词的单数和复数使用错误;代词指代错误;多代词或少代词。

7.非谓语动词的常见错误：不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);介词后用动名词形式作宾语;某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。