陕西省延安市小升初英语专题复习卷(十)作文
姓名:________ 班级:________ 成绩:________
小朋友，带上你一段时间的学习成果，一起来做个自我检测吧，相信你一定是最棒的！
一、写作题。 (共14题；共71分)
1. （5分）科技发展日新月异，请结合实际生活，谈一谈你平时如何和他人保持联系（How to make contact）。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于六句话。
2. （5分）请对你的—位家人，进行描述，至少4句话。
3. （5分）你的爸爸妈妈要去参加你的家长会，但不知道你的学校怎么走，你该怎么告
诉爸爸妈妈你的学校怎么去呢，用英文来说明。
要求：1）条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺。2）标点正确，书写整洁、规范。3）不少于20个单词
4. （5分）假如你是Tina，去年和你的父母到中国的首都北京做了一次难忘的旅行。请你根据问题的提示，用英语写一篇题目为“A trip to Beijing”的短文吧。
提示：1）When did you go to Beijing?
2）Who did you go with?
3）How did you go there?
4）What did you do/ see there?
5. （5分）你的周末都会有什么活动？你会帮爸爸妈妈做家务。还是和同学朋友一起去踢足球、打篮球，还是会看书呢？请向大家具体介绍一下你上周末或者平时的周末会做些什么吧。
参考词汇：do housework，read books，weekend，listen to music，play football
6. （5分）如果地球生病了会怎么样？想一想，写一写
The Earth is sick！
7. （5分）假设今天是周末，你们家的人都在做什么呢？请写一写吧！（要求：至少50字）。
8. （5分） (2018六上·浙江期中) 用“be going to do”句型写一个周末计划，至少3句。
My weekend plan
9. （5分）写一段话，介绍你未来的家
My house in the future
10. （5分）根据思维导图提示，写一写你的一位同学或朋友，60个单词左右。
11. （6分）(2017·深圳模拟) 读表格信息，完成下列短文。
Name Alice
Age 1. 13
Be from 2. New York
Live 3. Beijing,China
Family 4. Father(pilot),mother(teacher)
Hobbies 5. Reading books;painting
Favourite subjects 6. Chinese,Science
My name is Kate. Alice is my e-friend. Let me tell about her. ________ .________ . ________ .________ . There are three people in her family.
________ .________ .
12. （5分） (2019五下·广州期中) 根据表格写一张邀请函
To whom Activity Time Place Who invites
Kelly Sam's birthday
party Next Friday,May
23rd
Sam's home Sam
13. （5分） (2019六上·兴化期中) 同学们，今年的国庆假期你是怎样度过的?请以“My National Day holiday”为题，写一篇短文，跟大家分享一下吧。不少于5句话。
14. （5分）想一想，结合本课所学的知识，写一份家庭安全防火须知
Fire safety at home
We must not……
We must ……
When there is a fire,we……
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1. 越来越多的人使用手机进行联络； 2. 过度依赖手机会对心理健康产生危害； 3. 谈谈你的看法。 参考作文 More and more people contact each other using cell phones. The overuse of or over-reliance on cell phones may cause problems to people’s emotional health. To begin with, the overuse of mobile phones will invade people’s private time that should have been spent on relaxation. For instance, the use of mobile phones enables your boss to find you whenever and wherever you are, even when you are enjoying a dinner at home. Secondly, the frequent sending and receiving of short messages may keep a person continually alert to any sound similar to that of a cell phone. According to psychologists, being constantly sensitive to some sounds will make people feel under pressure. Do you want to stay away from the harm of overusing mobile phones? Just turn it off after a day’s work. (133 words) 九 1. 有些人认为家长应该为孩子谋划未来的职业； 2. 孩子认为应该由自己决定将来的工作； 3. 谈谈你的看法。 参考作文 Parents generally believe should they plan their children’s careers, claiming they know their children well enough to decide what kind of job suits them. Many even tend to force their ideas of jobs on their children. However, many children believe they should be left free to choose their own careers. Firstly, parents and children may not share the same interests. Secondly, children grow up in an age different from their parents’. Therefore they should be allowed to choose for themselves. In my opinion, mutual understanding is important. On one hand, parents’ view reflects their concern for children. On the other, it is the children who will be doing the job. Therefore, it is wise for parents to give them this freedom while children should consult their parents when necessary. (129 words) 十 1. 有些人觉得中国人全民学英语没必要； 2. 有人认为掌握一门外语就多了一项技能； 3. 谈谈你的看法。 参考作文 Nowadays it is a trend for Chinese to learn English. Without certain certificates showing their English ability, it may be hard even to find a job, even though most jobs have nothing to do with English. For some, it is a waste of time and resources for so many people to learn English. On the other hand, it is believed that grasping a foreign language means obtaining a useful skill, which could make a person be able to fulfill more jobs and demands in the society. To me, the most time-consuming task for students in China is learning English. They have to spend a lot of precious time reading, memorizing words, and doing exercises. To them, the only meaning in English learning is to deal with tests. Therefore, it is not necessary for all the people to learn English. (139 words)
小学英语写作技巧 小学阶段的英语教学要使学生掌握一定的英语基础知识和听、说、读、写技能，形成一定的语言综合运用能力，写作有助于词汇、语法、句型、课文等语言知识的学习，并能够促进听、说、读和思维能力的潜在性发展。同时，听、说、读和思维能力的发展又反作用于写作能力的培养。写作教学对于帮助学生了解英语思维方式，形成用英语进行思维的习惯，提高学生综合运用语言知识的能力大有益处。 小学阶段不同年级的作文有不同要求和写作技巧。 （一）小学三年级 对于小学3年级的学生，在他们已经掌握好了如颜色（colour）、衣服（clothes）、数字（number）、星期（day of the week）、月份（month）、宠物（pet）、情感（feeling）、身体部位（body）、文具（school things）的基础上进行文章的填空，如果学生能够按照文章的要求写进相关的信息，那就已经很不错了。下面是一个自我介绍的简单例子： Myself Hello，my name is_____. I am_____years old.My favourite colour is_____，_____， and_____.My favourite pet is______，_____ and______. My favourite food is_____，______and______.My favourite day is______. My favourite school thing is______and______.My favourite number is ______ and______. I am______today. 上面的这个例子，如果学生能够依次能吧自己的姓名、年龄、喜欢的颜色、喜欢的宠物、喜欢的食物、喜欢的日子、喜欢的文具、喜欢的数字和今天的心情准确无误地写出来，那么就已经能够完成了3年级阶段的作文要求。 （二）小学四年级 对于4年级的学生，可以写一篇介绍自己课室或者自己卧室的文章。下面是一篇4年级学生的介绍课室范文。
写作过渡妙词整理 一、过渡词或句： 递进：1. Furthermore 2. besides 3. moreover 4. what’s more 5. in addition 转折：1. however 2. but 3. although 4. on the other hand 5.nonetheless 6. nevertheless 7. yet 8. by contrast 9. after all 其他：no doubt, in fact, as a matter of fact, no wonder, to be true, as a result, frankly speaking, to tell the truth 二、举例说法： 1. for example, for instance, 2. can be given a concrete example that, 3. history presented many examples of AAA., 4. perhaps the most important example of AAA. is that, 5. a good example of this is that, 6. in order to see this point clearly, let us see an example., 7. an example can give the details of this argument, 8. to illustrate this, there is an example that is very persuasive, 三、引出自己观点的说法： 1，In my point of view, 2，As far as I am concerned, 3，According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer A rather than B, 4，In my opinion, 5，On a personal level, 6，For me, 7，Which one I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and educational background. 四、结尾句： 1，From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ---, 2，In a word, Generally speaking, In a short, As a result, 3，So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that ---, 4，Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that---, 5，In conclusion ,everybody want to choose the one that fits hi, 6，So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to choose A, 7，Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that---, 8，Nevertheless I must admit that people can do well without A, but no one can ignore the additional convenience and satisfaction offered by A. Such experience will definitely be helpful in one’s later life. 五、引出论据的过渡句： 1，My argument for this view goes as follows, 2，There are numerous reasons and I shall here explore a few primary ones, 3，Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons for choosing A, 4，My arguments for this point are listed as follows. 六、各论据段首句： 1、第一个原因Above all, First of all, In the first place, To begin with, The main reason for my propensity for AAA is that, the most obvious reason is that, 2、第二个原因Another reason is that, Another positive role of AAA lies in, The further reason why I advocate AAA is that, 3、其他Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguments on both sides, All the above evidence supports the undeniable importance of AAA. Maybe there are some other reasons to show that AAA, but it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly acceptable.
附录五：专升本英语作文技巧和模板 （一）称呼： 1、写给机构：Dear Sir or Madam, （06、07） 2、写给个人：（05）Dear Mr. Wang, （08）Dear Bob, （09）Dear Editors, （二）正文：3段，7句左右，100-130词，3-5个关联词（适可而止），3-5个从句（多多益善） 1、第一段：2句左右 1）自我介绍（私人书信除外）： （1）工作人员： I am a staff member from your company/corporation. I am a staff member from Motorola（China）Electronics Ltd. （2）学生：I am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Beijing University. 2）写作目的：书信的中心思想，改写提纲一 I am writing the letter for purpose of resigning from my current post/position. I am writing to inform you that I wish to request if you could help me find a potential beneficiary of Project Hope. 2、第二段：3句左右，改写提纲二 1）主题句：1句 2）分论点一：1句 3）分论点二：1句 3、第三段：2句左右，改写提纲三 1）表示感谢（私人建议信除外）： （1）My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. （2）Words fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you. （3）I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you render me. 2）期待回信： （1）I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. （2）I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. （3）Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. （三）落款： 1）结尾客套：Yours sincerely, yours, sincerely 2）签名：Li Ming
专升本英语-写作技巧及作文结构安排 一．写作技巧 1.根据文章大意判断作文题型。 2.各种题型的写作方法。 现象解释型：基本方法为：描述现象→分析原因→对现象做出预测或如何促进（限制）这种现象的进一步发展。 对比选择型：基本方法为：阐述一种观点或态度并表明这种观点或态度正确的理由；阐述第二种（相对或相反的）观点或态度并说明这种观点或态度正确的理由；表明个人支持或反对以上观点或态度，并说明原因。 问题解决型：基本方法为：提出问题→分析问题→解决问题。 观点论证型：基本方法为：分析主题→得出结论→举例论证→得出结论（证明观点的正确性）。 应用文基本方法为：分析所给情景→选择写作方法。 二、三段式作文的结构安排 题型第一段第二段第三段 现象解释型描述现象说明现象产生的原因表明个人态度或阐述个人做法 对比选择型表明一方或双方由 的观点及理表明另一方的观点及理由，指 出双方观点不足之处及理由 表明个人态度或阐述个人做法 问题解决型提出问题分析问题，给出解决方案表明个人态度或阐述个人做法观点论证型提出论点例证论点得出结论或表明个人看法或做法应用文描述事实阐述原因表明观点或提出建议 三、写作模板 一、现象解释型写作模板 1．现象解释型模板一 Topic sentence ①——has become a common part of people’s life. ②And——has always aroused the greatest concern. ③what impresses us most is ——. ④The reasons——are varied. 信息提示 1.空格内用概括性的词语填出最近出现的总体现象。 2.空格内填题目要去讨论的具体现象 3.现象的具体表现 4.过度句，填现象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。 5. Among the various reasons,——plays an important role. 6.That is to say,—— 7.What is more,—— 8.For example,——5.原因之一。 6.具体说明原因一。7原因二。 8 举例说明原因二 9．When talking about——，——，10．On the one hand—— 11．On the other hand,—— 12．In brief,——9.空格一填作者要讨论的现象，空格二填作者的看法。 10.支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面。 11.理由二或第二个方面。 12.总结。 2．现象解释型模板二 1.We have witnessed —— 2.According to ——，—— 3.And —— 4.Many reasons contribute to——1．空格内填最近出现的总体现象。 2.空格一根据题目填空，空格二内填现象的具体表现一。 3.现象的具体表现二 4.过度句，填现象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原
六年级小升初英语作文The final revision was on November 23, 2020
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专升本考试英语是比较重要的科目，分分必争，那么如何在短时间内让自己的英语作文水平提高呢？如何才能提高自己的专升本英语作文分数呢？下面为同学们整理了专升本英语作文模板，希望对同学们有帮助。 万能句型 (1)Some people support it while others do not. 有些人支持，然而有些人反对。 (2)My favorite proverb is...(谚语), which means... 我最喜欢的谚语是…… 它的意义是…… (3)Generally, I am in favour of the conclusion. 总的说来，我赞成这个结论。 (4)There is a famous saying that... which shows the importance of... 有句……的名言，表明了……的重要性。 (5)The message conveyed here is very clear... 这儿所传达出的信息十分明确…… (6)It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that... 它展示了当今一个普遍现象……
(7)Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to do... 父母为孩子安排一切，不遗余力地做…… (8)Measures should be taken to stop... 应该采取措施阻止…… (9)Everyone has his dream. However, it is not so easy for people to realize their dreams. 每个人都有梦想。然而，对人们来说，实现他们的梦想并不是那么容易的。 (10)It is a good idea to do... 做……是一个不错的主意。 (11)We have had a survey on... 我们对……开展了一次调查。 (12)Different people hold different opinions. 不同的人持不同的意见。 (13)Opinions are divided. 有不同意见。 (14)Others have different opinions. 其他人有不同看法。 (15)The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in... A和B的不同之处在于…… (16)There are several reasons for... but in general, they come down to three major ones. 导致……的原因有多种，但整体上，它们可以归纳为3个主要方面。 (17)Many ways can contribute to solving this problem，but the following ones may be the most effective. 许多方法可以解决这一问题，但是接下来的几个方法可能是最有效的。 (18)It's hardly too much to say that... 毫不夸张地说…… (19)But it's a pity that... 但是可惜的是…… 黄金模块
英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 miniutes to write a composition on the title:make our city greener,your composition should be based on the following outline: 1：城市绿色的状况2：绿化的好处（如：清洁空气，美化城市，改善气候......）3：怎样才能实现绿化范文：Recent efforts toward the greening of our cities have achieved much, although the results are still far from satisfactory. In recent years many trees have been planted in the cities and much care has been taken of the planted trees. In spite of all this, the greening process is relatively slow compared with cities in many other countries. For example, the green space available on average to each Shanghai citizen is only 0.4 Mu while every Londoner has more than 20 Mu. We can benefit much from making our cities greener by planting trees. First, trees absorb carbon dioxide to produce oxygen which is essential to the health of human beings. Second, trees and other greenery make our cities more beautiful. Third, trees can also improve the climate of the cities. Since we can get so much from making our cities greener, we should spare no effort to do that. We should plant more trees and take better care of them. We also should not cut down the trees. In a word, we should do everything to add to the greening of our cities. Directions: For this part, you are allowed30 minutes to write a composition based on, the following two questions: 1．你在英语学习中有哪些困难? 2．你是如何克服这些困难的? Y our composition should be no less than 100 words. Write this composition on the Answer Sheet. Remember to write it clearly. 范文：To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English during the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress. The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it. Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain “a sense of English language”. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are “good English” and which are not. Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport. Y ou should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 运动的积极因素；2. 运动的消极因素； 3. 你的体会范文：Sports benefit us in many respects. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our body. There is no doubt that properly balanced physical activities keep us physically fit. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playing field he not only competes for himself but also for his team. Sports teach us about consideration, cooperation
作文专题 审题过程 时态：主要考虑四种时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时，现在进行时。要根据题意判断正确的时态。注意：一篇作文可以不止一种时态。 人称：主要有第一人称和第三人称。审题时根据题意用正确的人称写。 1）如使用第三人称，需注意三单在一般现在时的用法，动词后需加s或es。如：She likes playing ping-pong. 2）写作过程中注意代词的格式。 如：He (主格) feels tired. I like him. (宾格) This is his (形代) bike. That’s not your book, It’s mine. (名代) 复数形式：Their English teacher is very funny. They often play football together. 结构：使文章有条理的方法 使用时间词语衔接：如写过去时的作文：Last Sunday; Last Weekend; My Holiday等 作文题目示例时态时间结构衔接词 Last Sunday 过去时in the morning, in the afternoon, in the evening, Last Weekend 过去时on Saturday morning (afternoon), on Sunday morning (afternoon), My Holiday 过去时on Monday, on Tuesday, on Wednesday… on the 1st day, on the 2nd, on the 3rd… last day Sunday Plan 将来时in the morning, in the afternoon, in the evening 3) 总起句和结尾句前后呼应。 4. 容易出错的句型： be动词和行为动词：同一个句子只能出现一种（现在进行时除外） 错误：I was went to the park last Sunday. (把was去掉) like + 动词ing形式。 I like going shopping. (注意like 后面紧跟的动词一定要加ing) 三单句子：She goes to school on foot every day. 动词后加s(或es)! There be句型 There is a bird and two monkeys in the tree. (用there is 而不是there are) 范文： 过去时：(动词用过去式) Last Weekend I was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning, I went to the park with my grandparents. We went fishing there. In the afternoon, I played ping-pong with my friends. It was funny! On Sunday morning, I read books and did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I went shopping with my mother. In the evening, I played chess with my father. I was very happy last weekend. 将来时: （be going to +动词原形或will + 动词原形）be going to=will Sunday Plan I am going to have a busy Sunday. In the morning, I am going to the park with my grandparents. We will go fishing there. In the afternoon, I am going to play ping-pong with my friends. Then we will go to the cinema. In the evening, I am going to read books and do my homework at home. Then I will play chess with my father. It will be a funny day! 一般现在时：（三单：注意人称、动词+S） My family There are three people in my family. My father is a doctor. He likes playing football. He is very kind. My mother is a teacher. She often reads books in the evening. I am a student. I like playing computer games and do sports with my friends. I often go hiking with my parents on the weekend. I love my family very much.
专升本考试万能英语作文模板 我知道你正在经历人生中的一次重要挑战，或许你有焦虑、有恐惧，也有激动，但我想说，请不要忘记身边所有关爱着你的人，我们是你坚强的后盾。以下是无忧考网为大家整理的《专升本考试万能英语作文模板》希望对大家考试有帮助。 专升本，有两个拉分最厉害的部分，一是听力题，一是作文题。，跟汉语作文的“起承转合”类似，英语作文其实也有固定模式， 我到那里一看，果然有五个模板，认真拜读一遍之后，不由得大吃二惊。第一惊的是：我们中国真是高手如林，多么复杂、困难的问题，都能够迎刃而解，实在佩服之极。第二惊的是：“八股文”这朵中国传统文化的奇葩，在凋谢了一百多年之后，竟然又在中华大地上重新含苞怒放，真是可喜可贺。 感慨之后，转入正题。这五个模板，在结构上大同小异，掌握一种即可，所以我从中挑选了一个最简单、最实用的，稍加修改，给各位介绍一下。这个模板的中文大意是：在某种场合，发生某种现象，并提供一些相关数据，然后列出这种现象的三个原因，并将三个原因总结为一个最主要原因，最后提出避免这种现象的两个办法。总的来
说，利用这个模板写英语作文，是相当容易的，您只要将适当的内容，填写到对应的方括号中，一篇通顺的英语作文即可完成。下面就是这个模板。 Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合]. It is estimated that [相关数据]. Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [原因一]. Besides, [原因二]. The third one is [原因三]. To sum up, the main cause of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [解决办法一]. On the other hand, [解决办法二]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象]. 为便于读者理解，我特意用这个模板，写了一篇关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的枪手)的示范性小作文，请您观摩一下。 Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 枪手] in [China"s examinations / 中国的考场]. It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers / 5%的应试者是枪手]. Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 枪手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [hirers" ignorance / 雇主无知]. Besides, [hirers" indolence / 雇主懒惰]. The third one is