2016高考英语作文
（一）高考英语作文评分标准
1本体总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3词数少于或多余要求字数的，从总分中减去2分
4评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性，上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英，美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
7内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
{各档次的给分范围和要求}
第五档（很好）；（21-25分）
1完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2覆盖所有内容要点。
3应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4语法或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或词汇所致。具备较强的语言运用能力。
5有效地使用了语句间的成份，使全文结构紧凑。
6完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（好）；（16-20分）
1完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3运用的语法结构或词汇方面能满足任务的要求。
4语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（适当）；（11-15分）
1基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6整体而言，基本达到了语气的写作目的。
第二档（较差）；（6-10分）
1未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3词法结构单调，词汇项目有限。
4有一些语法结构词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)；（1-5分）
1未完成试题规定的任务。
2明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。
4较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6信息未能传达给读者。
不得分（0分）
未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判，写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
（二）高考英语作文评分标准详解
一般来说，写作题的高考评分标准包含评分原则、内容要点、给分范围及要求、说明和参考范文五个部分。其中内容要点以及词数、标点、书写等方面的原则比较容易理解、操控和落实。但“评分时，应该注意的主要内容为……应用词汇和语法结构的数量……上下文的连贯性和语言的得体性”等评分原则，“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致，具备较强的语言运用能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧凑”等给分要求、以及“对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分”等说明，相对比较抽象，不易捉摸。
一、如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”
这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解：
（一）高级词汇的使用
评分标准第五档次的要求中提到，“词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”。这里所说的“高级词汇”，指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如frustration, awkward, awfully, concern等词，都可以算作是“高级词汇”。考生若能够适当地运用一些高级词汇，定会给评卷老师留下深刻的印象。
1. I can’t find any way to solve the problem. (换作高级词汇：I can’t find any solution to the problem.)
2. The pet dog is so lovely that almost everybody likes her. (换作高级词汇：The pet dog is so cute that almost everybody likes her.)
3. The question is really difficult to understand. (换作高级词汇：The question is really confusing.)
4. He had to face all the possible difficulties. (换作高级词汇：He had to cope with all the possible difficulties)
（二）同义词的使用
英语中有些词的使用频率非常高，比如interesting, clever等，在表达时大家都很喜欢用，这样很容易令文章入千人一面的窘境中。但如果我们能够使用它们相应的同义词，就可以做到与众不同，给评卷者带来清新的感觉。例如：
1. It will be very interesting. (换作同义词：It will be a lot of fun.)
2. He was so clever that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old.( 换作同义词：He was so smart that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old.)
3. Last summer I visited New Jersey with my parents. (换作同义词：Last summer I toured New Jersey with my parents.) （三）适当利用短语取代单词
总体而言，使用短语的难度比单词要大一些，因此适当运用短语更能显出作者的功力。例如：
1. Suddenly I had a good idea. (换作短语：Suddenly I came up with a good idea.)
2. Take a moment to see what is happening around you. (换作短语：Take a moment to see what is going on around you.)
3. Everyone should do his or her best. (换作短语：Everyone is supposed to do his or her best.)
二、如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构”
固定句式（如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等）、定语从句、现在分词短语等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映写作者的语言运用能力。
（一）使用固定句式
1. She was robbed of her purse but she had no time to call for
help.(使用before one can do sth.结构：She was robbed of her purse before she could call for help.)
2. The environment will never improve until everybody takes care of
it. (使用倒装结构：Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve.)
（二）使用现在分词结构
现在分词结构可以表达伴随、原因等状语，因此几乎在任何文章中都可以用得上。现在分词短语可以使句子的表达更加简洁、生动，而且也使前后两个动作的衔接更加紧密。例如：
1. Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another and
this bridges the gap among different races or cultures. (换作现在分词短语：Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another, thus bridging the gap among different race or
cultures.)
2. People worked together on the assembly line.(换作现在分词短语：
People worked together on the assembly line, moving quickly and efficiently.)
（三）使用定语从句
定语从句的使用，不仅能使上下文更加流畅，也同时能充分展示写作者运用较复杂的语法结构的能力。例如：
1. My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle. I think he is a genius. (使
用定语从句：My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle, who I think is a genius.)
2. My aunt bought me a book. The title of the book is All about USA.
(使用定语从句：My aunt bought me a book, whose title is All
about the USA.)
三、如何理解“上下文的连贯性”
评分标准指出，书面表达应该注意“上下文的连贯性”，并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧凑”。这里说的连贯性，就是指通过连接词（包括并列连词，从属连词和连接性副词）、非谓语动词短语等语法成分，使两个或多个意义相互关联的事情或观点在同一个句子内得以表达，从而使整个段落或篇章浑然一体，连贯流畅。(一) 连接性副词
连接性副词也被称为过渡词。它们的位置一般以句首居多。连接性副词承上启下，能够令读者对后续的句子产生心理上的期待和准备，因此整个篇章会因它们而紧凑连贯。常见的连接性副词有：also, furthermore, in
addition, additionally, hopefully, meanwhile, however, instead, in other words, in brief, in a word, in my opinion, on the whole等等。例如：
1. We have many things to do. We believe we can finish before the day is over. (使用连接性副词：We have quite a lot to do. Hopefully, we will be able to finish before the day is over.)
2. The boy comes from a poor family. The boy does very well in his studies. The boy plans to work his way through college. (使用连接性副词：Even though he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college.)
(二) 使用从属连词
常见的从属连词有after, as, when, while, as long as, as soon as等。例如：
1. You work hard and never give up. You will succeed in your studies. (使用从属连词：So long as you work hard, you will succeed in your studies.)
2. The teacher came in. the students were quiet. (使用从属连词：The students were quiet as soon as the teacher came in.)
四、如何理解“语言的得体性”
评分标准要求考生应注意“语言得体性”，就是要求在表达时根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等因素来选择使用恰当的英语语言。（一）体裁和题材对得性的要求
不同体裁和题材的文章有不同的用语要求。比如，书面通知中就不适合用“I will tell you a piece of good
news.”或“May I have your attention, please?”等句子。这些句子只有在口头通知中才算得体的语句。2003年高考的书面表达要求“你”
给一位外国朋友回信，介绍“你”帮他找的一套出租房。相当一部分考生没有理解“你”与说话对象的关系，所以话语中没有给对方提出异议的余地，叙述的方式和口吻上缺乏礼貌性，像“The house is very suitable for you.”等语句显得相当主观，若改为“Do you think it is suitable for you? If not, I will try again.”就比较得体。
另外，英语中还有正式语和非正式语，书面语和口头语之分。写作前，还应该认真分析题目的体裁，根据不同的体裁，确定用语的类别。正式用语或书面语的句子结构严格遵循语法规则，所采用的单词使用频率不是很高，比如：permit, inform, discover, depart等词都属于正式用语；而非正式用语或口头用语则较多地使用短语，所采用的单词使用频率高，也比较短。比如let, tell, find out, leave等等。费正式用语也经常使用简略语或缩略词。
（二）文化和思想内涵对得体性的要求
只有了解社会、历史、文化、政治及思维习惯等因素对语言的影响，才能使选词更贴切、更得体。例如：
1. People who live on the farm can hear cocks’ crow every
morning. (rooster 和cock 都可表示“公鸡”，但cock通常听起来比较粗鲁，所以应把cock改为rooster才比较妥当。)
2. Because he was ill, he had to stay at home yesterday. (本句话想
要表达的意思是“因为他病了，所以他不得不呆在家里”。汉语思维中
常常是先原因，后结果，而英语则刚好相反。所以句子应该改为：He had to stay at home yesterday because he was ill.)
五、如何理解“紧扣主题的适当发挥”
所谓“紧扣主题的适当发挥”，就是指在合乎情理、合乎规范、力所能及的前提下添加一些要点中没有提及的信息。请看2003年全国高考的一篇优秀考场作文（节选）：
I am very pleasant to learn that you will come to China to study
Chinese. I have found an apartment for you. The apartment is on the third floor of a quiet tree-lined street—Fangcao six-storeyed building, which is located on a where you are Street. It is only one bus stop away from Jianxin Chinese School, planning to
study this summer. The apartment has a bedroom, in which there is a a single bed. Inside there is a& for office and comfortable sofa, a desk bathroom and a kitchen. The apartment occupies an area of 25 square meters. The rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope that the apartment will meet your expectation.
出开头和结尾外，本文适当发挥的地方有五处（见文中标注），都是稍加扩展又立即收题，而且无一例外都是定语。这些信息的添加，不仅增强了文章的个性，而且使文章内容更加丰富。可见信息的添加不能旁逸斜出或标新立异，否则就会适得其反，突然增加一些出错的机会。
高考英语作文完美炮制法
高考英语写作技巧汇总
（一）掌握技巧：
（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容.
（2）确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现
在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点：
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。
（二）巧用连接词
要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词
表示罗列增加
First, second, third, First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,
Especially / In particular,
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, at
first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment, form now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover, furthermore, in fact, actually
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all, 表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that
表示条件关系
as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless
表示让步关系
though, although, as, even i f, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom)
表示举例
for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example
表示比较
be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like, just as,
表示目的
for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,
表示强调
in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all,
表示概括归纳
in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion
（三）掌握常用句型：
1. in order to
为了实现他的梦想，他学习非常努力。
He worked very hard in order to realize his dream.
2. in order that
她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就绪。
She worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o’clock..
3. so…that
他们太累了，除了伸懒腰什么都做不了了。
They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.
4. such…that
天气非常冷，以致于街上一个人都没有。
It was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street.
5. would rather do…than do
他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。
He would rather listen to others than talk himself.
6. prefer doing to doing
他宁愿在精心准备后去做报告。
He prefers making speeches after careful preparation.
7. prefer to do…rather than do
比起女人，男人总是宁可在家睡觉也不愿花那么多时间来购物。
Compared with women, men always prefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time
shopping.
8. not only…but also
在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程，而且还获得了博士学位。
In just three years, she had not only finished all the lessons, but also received her doctor’s degree.
9. either…or
如果考试过关，你可以买一个MP3或去云南玩一趟。
You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.
10. Neither…nor
他是一个无聊的人，既不爱娱乐，也不爱读书。
He is a boring man. He likes neither entertainment nor reading.
11. as well as
他善良又乐于助人。
He was kind as well as helpful.
12. …as well
这个小孩活泼又可爱。
The child is active and funny as well.
13. One…the other
你看见桌子上有两只笔吗？一支是红色的，另一支是黑色的。
Have you seen two pens on the desk? One is red, the other is black.
14. Some…others
每个人都很忙，有些在读书，有些在写作。
Everyone is busy in classroom. Some are reading, others are writing.
15. make…+adj /n
我们所做的可以让世界更美丽。
What we do will make the world more beautiful.
16. not…until
直到他告诉我发生的事，我才了解真相。
I didn’t know the truth until she told me what happened.
17. as if
他夸夸其谈好像什么事都知道。
He talks a lot as if he knows everything.
18. It is no use (good) doing…
假装不懂规则是行不通的。
It’s no use pretending that you didn’t know the rules.
19. find it + adj to do…
我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。
I find it necessary to take down notes while listening.
20. It is + time since…
我已经有两年没见他了。
It is two years since I last met him.
21. It is + ti me when…
我到电影院时已经八点钟了。
It was 8 o’clock when I got to the cinema.
22. It is + time before…
不久我们就会再见面的。
I won’t be long before we can meet again.
23. It is…that…
我最珍视的是友谊。
It is friendship that I value most.
24. It is + n / adj + that / to do…
每个人都必须懂得如何使用计算机
It is a must that everybody should know how to use computers.
写作辅导：写作核心句型
核心句型
1．开头
1. The arguer may be right about …, but he seems to neglect (fail) to mention (take into account) that fact that…
2. As opposed to (Contrary to) widely (commonly/generally) held (accepted) belief (ideas/views), I believe (argue that…
3. Although many people believe that …, I doubt (wonder) whether the argument bears much analysis (close examination).
4. The advantages of B outweigh any benefit we gained from (carry more weight than those of / are much greater than) A.
5. Although it is commonly (widely / generally) held (felt / accepted / agreed) that …, it is unlikely to be true that…
6. There is an element of truth in this argument (statement), but it ignores a deeper and more basic (important / essential) fact (reason) that…
7. It is true that (True, / To be sure, / Admittedly,)…, but this is not to say (it is unlikely / it doesn’t follow / it doesn’t mean / it won’t be the case) that…
8. The main (obvious / great) problem (flaw / drawback) with (in) this argument (view / remark) is that it is ignorant of (blind to) the basic (bare) fact that …
9. It would be possible (natural / reasonable) to think (believe / take the view) that…, but it would be absurd (wrong) to claim (argue) that …
10. In all the discussion and debate over…, one important (basic) fact is generally overlooked (neglected).
11. There is absolutely (in fact) no (every) reason for us to believe (accept / resist / reject) that…
12. Logical (Valid / Sound) as this argument and I wholeheartedly agree with it, it appears insignificant (absurd) when … is taken into consideration (account).
13. To assume (suggest) that … is far from being proved (to miss the point).
14. A close (careful) inspection (examination / scrutiny) of this argument would reveal how flimsy (groundless / fallacious) it is.
15. On the surface (At first thought), it (this) may seem a sound (an attractive) suggestion (solution / idea), but careful weighing on the mind (on closer analysis / on second thought), we find that…
16. Too much emphasis placed on (attention paid to / importance attached to) … may obscure (overlook / neglect) other facts…
17. The danger (problem / fact / truth / point) is that…
18. What the arguer fails to understand (consider /mention) is that…
19. We don’t have to look very far to see (find out) the truth (validity) of this argument (proposition).
20. However just (logical / sound / valid) this argument may be, it only skims the surface of the problem.
2．正文
1. Although the popular belief is that…, a current (new / recent) study (survey / poll / investigation) indicates (shows / demonstrates) that…
2. Common sense tells us that…
3. The increase (c hange / failure / success) in… mainly (largely / partly) results from
(arises from / is because of)…
4. The increase (change / failure /success) in … is due to (owing to / attributable to) the fact that…
5. Many people would claim that…
6. One may attri bute (ascribe / owe) the increase (decrease / change) to …, but … is not by itself an adequate explanation.
7. One of the reasons given for … is that…
8. What is also worth noticing is that…
9. There are many (different / several / a number of / a variety of) causes (reasons) for this dramatic (marked / significant) growth (change /decline / increase) in .. First,… Second,… Finally,…
10. There is no evidence to suggest that…
11. Why are (is / do / did) …? For one thing, … For another, …
12. Another re ason why I dispute the above statement is that…
13. It gives rise to (lead to / bring / create) a host of problems (consequences).
14. There are numerous reasons why …, and I shall here explore only a few of the most important ones.
15. It will exert (have / produce) profound (far-reaching / remarkable / considerable / beneficial / favorable / undesirable / disastrous) effect (influence) on…
16. A multitude of factors could account for (contribute to / lead to / result in / influence) the change (increa se / decrease / success/ failure / development) in…
17. In 1999, it increased (rose / jumped / shot up) from 5 to 10 percent of the total (to 15 percent / by 15 percent).
18. By comparison with 1998, it decreased (dropped / fell) from 10 to 5 percent (to 15 percent / by 15 percent).
19. It account for 15 percent of the total.
20. There were 100 traffic accidents in April, and increase of 5 percent in a five-month period.
21. By 1999, only (less than / more than / almost / about / over / as many as) three quarters (40 percent of / one out of five / one in four) college population (graduates / housewives) as against (as compared with) last year (1998) preferred to (liked)… 3．结尾
1. From what has been discussed above (Taking into account all these factors / Judging from all evidence offered), we may safely draw (reach / come to / arrive at) the conclusion that…
2. All the evidence (analysis) supports (justifies / confirms / warrants / points to) a(n) unshakable (unmistakable / sound / just) conclusion th at …
3. It is high time that we place (lay / put) great ( special / considerable) emphasis on the improvement (development / increase / promotion) of…
4. It is high time that we put an end to the deep-seated (unhealthy / undesirable / deplorable) situati on (tendency / phenomenon) of…
5. We must look (search / all / cry) for an immediate action (method / measure), because the present (current) situation (phenomenon / tendency / state / attitude) of …, if permitted (allowed) to continue (proceed), will surely (certainly) lead to (result in) the end (destruction / heavy cost) of…
6. There is no easy (immediate / effective) solution ( approach / answer / remedy) to the problem of …, but … might be useful (helpful / beneficial).
7. No easy method (solution / recipe / remedy) can be at hand (found / guaranteed) to
solve (resolve / tackle) the problem of …, but the common (general / public) recognition of (realization of / awareness of / commitment to) the necessity (importance / significance) of … might be the first step towards change (on the right way / in the right direction).
8. Following these methods (suggestions) may not guarantee the success in (solution to)…, but the pay-off will be worth the effort.
9. Obviously (Clearly / No doubt), if we ignore (are blind to) the problem, there is every chance that…
10. Unless there is a common realization of (general commitment to)…, it is very likely (the chances are good) that…
11. There is little doubt (no denying) that serous (special / adequate / immediate /further) attention must be called (paid / devoted) to the problem of …
12. It is necessary (essential / fundamental) that effective (quick / proper) action (steps /measures / remedies) should be taken to prevent (correct / check / end / fight) the situation (tendency / phenomenon).
13. It is hoped (suggested / recommended) that great (continuous / persistent / sustained / corporate) efforts should be make to control (check / halt / promote) the growth (increase / rise) of …
14. It is hoped that great efforts should be directed to (expended on / focused on) finding (developing / improving)…
15. It remains to be seen whether…, but the prospect (outlook) is not quite encouraging (that rosy).
16. Anyhow, wider (more) education (publicity) should be given to the possible (potential / grave / serious / pernicious) consequences (effects) of…
17. To reverse (check / control) the trend (tendency) is not a light task (an easy job), and it requires (demands / involves / entails) a different state of main towards (attitude towards / outlook on)…
18. For these reasons, I strongly recommend that…
19. For the reasons given above, I feel that…
高考英语答题模板：拿高分有技巧
高考作文万能模板：图标作文
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture，____ has been on rise/ decrease，significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart，it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand，____.In the other hand，_____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition，______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned，I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
书信作文模板
Your addressMonth，Date，yearReceiver's addressDear …，
I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.
……
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I
am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours，
话题作文
Nowadays，there are more and more __ _ in __ _. It is estimated that ___. Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is ______. Besides，_____. The third one is _____. To sum up，the main cause of it is due to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing，_____. For another thing，_____. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.
对比观点作文
(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人认为。。。
2. 另一些人认为。。。
3. 我的看法。。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2) 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).
阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述.
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.
2. 分析并举例使其更充实.
The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).
解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处). 说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
现象说明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.
There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.
what is more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.
Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another________
____.In Conclusion____________________.
一种事物或现象(负面意义倾向)
关于A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落，都有越来越多的关于A的议论。
给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言，我们可以这样描述A…
A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。
认真分析后我们可以看到，A对社会/世界/健康的不利有很多。首先，从最直观的角度来看，A的出现直接损害了(这里加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡) 。(举例)。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是，由于A所产生微小利益，
却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。
事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益，而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。
而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避免它带来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。
One object or phenomenon (negative significance inclination.)
A has attracted extensive attention of the society. Nowadays, increasingly more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, ugogo and marry aspects of our everyday life.
Since its concept covers vast fields, such as science, humanity, ideology, economy, society and nature, A is difficult to be defined, precisely and fixedly. Generally speaking ,we can describe A as follows:…….
A’s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world. It seems to have a strange power to drive some individuals or organizations to act wrongly. The essence of these wrong actions is:
(1) to gain personal, short-term and partial individual interest at the expense of damaging others’long-term and overall interest;
(2) to adopt improper means to win more rewards with less input.
Situating under the shadow of A, individuals /organizations and violate natural law merely to obtain temporary, or even illusory interests. However, the result may turn out to be loss of really important and valuable resource or ability.
We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A, because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely threaten the development of the whole society.
Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the essence, the problems brought by A originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material production. Thus, we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.
Due to the depth and width of A’s harmful influence, we should draft our solutiogogotematically on the basis of deep analysis of A problem. We must acquire our power from technology, management, law and culture terrorm, effectively eliminate the shadow of A, and ensures ourselves a bright future.
议论文的框架
(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.
Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
( 3 ) 答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.
( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.. 图表作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand,_______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.
But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______.
I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
实用性写作(申请信)
Your address
Month, Date, year
Receiver's address
Dear ...,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in .... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising.
.../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
X X X
2016年全国各地高考英语作文汇总 新课标I卷 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 示例1 Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindness! Yours, Li Hua 示例2 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
高考英语短文改错的解题技巧与方法 摘要：短文改错是近年高考英语测试题中的一个必考题。其目的是考查学生综合运用英语的准确性,测试考生发现、判断纠正文章错误的能力。 关键词：短文改错准确性上下文正确理解行文逻辑 短文改错题是目前高考英语的必考项目，也是平时期中、期末考试的必考题型，短文改错是融语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性英语试题，旨在考查学生对语言的发现，判断，纠正文章中错误的能力以及对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力。短文改错其实并非难题，但得分率不高。究其原因，主要与学生对短文改错的特点和做题方法有很大的关系。 一．短文改错设置的错误的主要类型 短文改错设置的错误的主要类型有：⑴名词的单复数；⑵动词的词态和语态；⑶非谓语动词；⑷介词的搭配；⑸主谓一致性；⑹不定冠词与定冠词；⑺固定词组的搭配；⑻行文逻辑一致性；⑼词性的混淆；⑽同义词辨异；⑾连词的误用；⑿代词的格与数；⒀句子成份残缺等。归纳为语法错误、词汇错误和上下文关系错误。这些错误大致涉及以下几个方面：（一）一致性问题 所涉及的一致性问题主要包括主谓一致、时态、语态一致、代词指代一致、名词的数与格的一致、句式结构与语意一致、行文关系的一致。例如：主谓不一致 eg: There were a football game on TV last Saturday evening. 讲解：原句中a football game决定了谓语动词必须用单数，所以应该把were改为was。 （二）词性问题 词性问题不单单是识别的问题，能够说出所给单词的词性，并不说明能够在句中找出用错词性的地方。其主要目的是检测考生是否真正了解主要词类的语法作用及其在句中的经常性位置，如名词在句中一般作主语、宾语、表语，动词作谓语，形容词充当表语、定语和宾补，而副词则充当状语，修饰形容词、动词乃至句子。 名词主要考察能力：单复数混用和出题形式： 单复数混用 eg: Helen is seve nteen year old. She is very busy. 讲解：“年龄多大了”应该为复数形式，应此应该把year改为years。注意：代词单复数混用类似。 eg: As for a friendship, we can readily find them in our classmates and other people ar ound us. 讲解：显然因该把them改为it，指代前面提及的friendship。此句话意思是“就友谊来说，我们可以很容易地从我们的同学和周围的人中找到。” 形容词/副词主要考察能力：两者之间是否混用。 出题形式：形容词与副词混用。即该用形容词的地方原文用了副词，该用副词的地方原文用了形容词。 ①副词代替正确形容词出现在文章当中 eg: During the football season, Helen is much busier than usually. 讲解：很明显“与平时相比较更忙”，因此需要把usually改为usual。 ②形容词代替正确副词出现在文章当中 eg: As the time clock showed one minute an d forty-two seconds left in the game, she began cheering excited,“Come on-get going!”
怎样提高初中英语的写作技巧和方法 西畴县逸夫中学-----杨宗粉 【摘要】：培养学生写作能力须：打好词汇量基础；熟练记住单词；熟练使用简单句；加强听力训练，；书写规范，促进写作；注重听、说、读能力的同步发展；重视课外练习。注重学生平时的单词拼写与组句能力，提醒学生积累常用表达方式，要求阅读背诵精彩段落，同时教师要利用教材话题资源，结合多种训练与评价方式，提升学生思维能力，强化写作专项指导，使学生养成英语书面表达的习惯，最终达到英语作为语言交际的目的。 【关键词】：写作技巧；词汇量；写作方法；单词拼写组句能力；阅读背诵；常用表达方式 听说读写是构成英语语言交际能力的重要组成部分，其中要求较高的是“写”的能力。《英语课程标准》对各个年级学生“写”的技能提出了明确目标对于我们农村地区的学生来说，英语写作非常困难。尤其在每一次的英语考试中，英语写作题型总是必不可少的，而且占到 15-20分左右，可见写作在英语考题中占的比例还是较大的。但一提起写作学生们就犯愁，甚至一字不写，有的干脆放弃。写一篇像样的英语作文多80%的学生来说是“难于上青天”。针对这种现象来分析学生存在的问题和解决的办法： 一、学生写作过程中出现的现状 1.词汇量太少 词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素，要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想，必须以足够的词汇量为基础，但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇
量都达不到规定的要求，因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误，影响理解；词语误用，表达不准确；某一词语反复使用，语言表达缺乏变式，文章显得单调乏味；文章中出现大量“造词”，让人看了啼笑皆非等。 语法规则和句型句式是英语写作涉及的另一基本要素。学生英语写作中出现的“大错”又多半是由语法错误引起的，学生在写作中语法不规范、句子结构混乱、含义不清等情况屡见不鲜，Chinese English 现象更是不乏其中，所以词汇量和语法问题是中学生英语写作时首先要解决的问题。 2.词汇错误较多 学生在写作的时候，中式英语Chinglish ：如There are many people would like to go on a vacation. I by bike to school every day. 2、词汇错误：错别字、近义词混淆、词性误用3、词组、句型使用不正确，缺乏重点句型的使用：如I spent one hour to read the book yesterday. 4、时态、语态、人称把握不正确（审题不正确）。思维模式总是先汉语，后转化为英语，可能他想到了句子该怎样写，句型也知道的，但却有个别单词不会。如：“对我来说学英语是困难的”这个句子可能他想到了，句子结构“it is＋adj for sb to do sth”也知道，但里面的形容词difficult不会写，导致句子表达含糊，以至于整篇文章错词百出，面目全非。 3.写出的长句达不到表达效果 一般的英语应试作文，总会给出汉语提示，学生写作也是从提示
2016年高考英语 8种常见英语作文模板素材 一、不同观点列举型(选择型) There is a widespread concern over the issue th at 作文题 目. But it is well known that the opinion concerni ng this hot topic varies fromperson to person. A majority of people think that 观点 一. In their opinion there are two factors contribu ting to this attitude as follows. In the first pla ce,原因一.In the second place, 原因 二. So it goes without saying that 观点 一. The other people, however, differ in their opin ion on this matter.They hold the idea that 观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand,原因一;on the other hand, 原因 二. Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或观点 二. It is not only because 原因
2016年高考作文 第二节书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1．主题：环境保护； 2．展览时间； 3．投稿邮箱：. 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
One Possible Version Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you show me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good change for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to . Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua
2016年高考英语作文万能模板 一、英语书信的常见写作模板 书信作文模板 I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____. …… I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience. Best regards for your health and success. Sincerely yours 开头部分： I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 结尾部分： I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 二、议论文模板 1.正反观点式议论文模板 导入：第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... （导入话题） Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧） 正文：第2段：Most of the students are in favor of it.（正方观点）
【解题技巧】 1、通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，尤其是有的行文逻辑方面的错误在看单句时难以发现错误（比如前文用mike，后文代词用she等）。在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行分句改错。 2、分局阅读，逐行找错。在完成第一步后，要进行逐行主句的改错。这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇角度着重分析和特别注意。 3、最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿。 【考查要点】 1 词法的测试： 2 定冠词和不定冠词的用法，即a, an, the三者的转化与增减。例：A beauty of the West Lake is more than I can describe.正解：A--The 3 名词的单复数和名词所有格。 例：More than one students can’t take in it.正解：students—student 4 动词的时态、语态、语气，情态动词和非谓语动词。
例：He is good at sing songs.正解：sing—singing 5 人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等用法。 例：The book is her.正解：her—hers 6 词性的变化。 例：John deep believed that the God knows everything.正解：deep—deeply 7 并列连词、从属连词的用法。 例：She insisted that the boy told was a lie.正解：that—what 8 形容词、副词以及比较级与最高级的用法。 例：They all exacting by the exacted news.正解：exacting—exacted ; exacted—exacting 9 固定搭配与习惯用法。 例：It happened all of sudden.正解：of 后加a 11、句法的测试： 12 考察英语的一致性现象，主要包括：主谓不一致、代词不一致、
提高英语写作的方法与技巧 1．背景 写文章难，用英语写文章则更难。理由很简单，中国人若想用英 语写文章，首先必须具备一定的语言水平，即必须掌握英语中最基本 的词汇和语法，必须具备写出通顺连贯的英语句子的水平，同时还要 懂得一点英美文化背景知识和一定的修辞法。所有这些要素都是用英 语写作的基本前提。用英语写文章难的另一原因是，英语写作与汉语 写作虽有很多相同之处，但因为社会文化背景的差异，两者之间又有 些不同之处，像思维模式、遣词造句、文体风格等都存有着明显的差异，我们只有了解了这些差异，并在实践中灵活利用这些差异，写出 的文章才能合乎英语习惯、流畅得体，达到书面交际的目的，所以我 们常说，写作不但要表达出想要表达的意念，而且还要得体，要符合 英语表达习惯。当然，要想写出像样的文章，除扎实的语言功底外， 还需要具备其他一些水平，其中包括审题水平、选材水平、谋篇水平、思维水平、分析水平、想象水平以及比较渊博的文化知识。 2．存有的问题 当前学生用英语写作文存有以下几个突出问题：一是语言表达水 平差，这是语言基本功不扎实造成的；二是语言不规范。三是分析问题、理解问题的水平不强。关于第一个问题，主要表现在遣词造句、 语法的规范化方面；学生们不善于选词，想到哪个就用哪个，学了很多，记了很多，会用的却很少。所以，应用时往往苦于无法用英语完 全表达思想，随之就产生了汉语式的句子。关于第二个问题，主要表 现在句型意识弱，对于一些习惯表达法知之甚少。学生只会写： “ Computer is very important to our life.” 却很少通过阅读学 会这样的句子：“ Computer is playing an increasingly important role in our daily life ” 又如：“ The transportation can p romote the tourism industry greatly” , 这个句子好不好，还有没有其他表达法，通过学习写作知识，我们知
2010年山东高考英语作文 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意：1. 词数120~150； 2. 可适当增加细节。 【范文】 Dear Tom, I am indeed very sorry that I can not go to Beijing with you next week , which I have promised .I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened . Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family . You know , we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year . I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me . I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing .Once again ,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused . Sincerely yours, Li Hua 2011年山东高考英语作文 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： 1．询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。 注意：1．词数：120-150；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【范文】 Dear Tom, It’s a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here. I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer. I think the chance is of great importance for me. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile,I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a
2014 高考英语作文全国卷I 假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容） 注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．参考词汇：住宿-accommodation Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six -week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are th ere per week? Besides, I wish there would not to be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be a host family or university dormitory? I’m looking forwar d to your early reply. 2014 全国卷II 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。 1.家庭； 2.工作； 3.业余生活。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.开头语已为你写好。 I often imagine _____ my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I’ll enjoy my work and get along well ___ my colleagues. I’ll do a good job in whatev er I do. In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holiday, I’ll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be _____ richer and more colorful. 2015 全国卷I 假定你是李华, 你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿, 要点如下: 1. 栏目介绍; 2. 稿件内容; 3. 稿件长度: 约400词汇; 4. 交稿日期: 6月28日前天 注意: 1. 词数100左右;
高考英语短文改错答题技巧+20条复习要诀 导读：教书育人楷模，更好地指导自己的学习，让自己不断成长。让我们一起到本人一起学习吧!下面本人网的本人给 你们带来了《高考英语短文改错答题技巧+20条复习要诀》供 考生们参考。 高考英语一轮复习的20条学习要诀 第一要诀：收听英语气象报告 有些教学录音带为配合初学者的学习，故意放慢语速，这对英语听力的训练是不够的。如果听语速正常的英语，初学者又会感到力不从心。英语气象报告的速度虽快，但词汇简单固定，内容单纯，重复的可能性大，而且在生活中随时都可以印证，是听力入门的好教材。 第二要诀：收听中国国际广播电台的英语广播 中国国际广播电台(China Radio International)每 天早上7:00-8:00，中午11:00-12:00各有一小时的英语节目。内容包括国内外新闻剪报集锦和各类系列的专题报道。除了英语标准流利的国内播音员担任广播之外，也有向外侨或访客就某一话题而做的录音访问。内容广泛，但词汇较简单，语速亦适中，可以藉此训练或增进英语的听力。 第三要诀：善用录音带锻炼听说能力 有些学习者总是习惯于一边看书一边听磁带，把磁带当成阅读的辅助工具，这样打不到锻炼听力的目的。录音带应该是以听说能力的训练为主。学习者要选用与自己能力相适应的听力磁带，不要急于求成，以免产生受挫心理。先反复聆听
磁带内容，起先只要抓住梗概，多听几次后，对细节的了解便越来越多。听力较差的人，可先阅读课文，然后再集中精力领会每段每句的意思。这样练习有助于培养倾听时注意力的集中，使您的听力迅速进步。 第四要诀：听正常语速的英语，才能加速听力的进步 很多广播教学和听力教材总是为了配合听众或学习者的程度而故意放慢语速，这虽是无可厚非的变通方法，但也会产生一些不良的副作用。例如：1.听惯了语速放慢的英语，在与外国人的实际交往中，就很难适应，甚至听不懂他们用正常语速讲的英语。2. 故意放慢语速时，通常会把一句中每个词 都清楚的读出来，但在正常的会话中会出现很多同化(assimilation)，减弱(reduction)，连音(liaision)的现象。所以，听语速正常的英语对于听力和会话极为重要。 第五要诀：从网络上学习原版英语 现在的网络已经很发达了，上面有很多英语学习资源。听，说，读，写都可以在网络上面完成，还可以无限次的重复，直到你学会为之。但网络上面的资源也是良莠不齐，要你自己去发现适合你学习的网站。如何找到有价值的学习网站，其实也不是很困难，现在有很多资源集锦的网站。 第六要诀：和朋友表演影片情节 在英语学习中，我们经常会与朋友或同学相约用英语交谈来提高英语会话能力，但经常感到自己的语言贫乏，所谈内容有限。现在不妨试试这种方法：配合前节所讲的“从电视，电影中学习英语”，先依据电影情节节选一个或多个片段，个人选定一个角色，然后在影片看熟之后试着把台词誊录成文字并背下来，最后进行排练表演。经常做这种练习，不仅对英语会话和听力大有好处，而且对语法和写作也是很好的锻炼。
小学英语在线学习|小学英语写作方 法和技巧 【--考试祝福语】 作文在小学英语考试中占了很大的分值，那么究竟怎样做才能写好一篇小学作文呢?下面给大家介绍小学英语写作方法和技巧，欢迎阅读! 小学英语写作方法和技巧要写好英语作文，具体要做到以下几点： 注重英文阅读习惯的养成与坚持 坚持英语阅读的习惯，不仅可以保持对英语语感的敏感度，更重要的是它有助于培养英式思维，从而避免汉式思维句子的出现。 (1)平时多读，积累句型：读的越多，语感欲强烈，写作的时候自然而然就可以自如的运用灵活多变的句式来完整一篇小作文了，另外建议多积累名言警句、谚语等以作为高级句型运用与作文中。 (2)选出一些代表性范文精读：选出不同题材的优秀作文范文，读的时候注意文章的开头、结尾、层次结构以及所用
句型等。要有目的、用学习的心态来精读优秀范文，并做到学以致用。 注重平时的写作训练 英语写作训练可以以日记、话题或仿写的形式来进行。通过坚持一个学期的英语日记，保持英语写作的习惯。所以一定要坚持每周两到三次的写作训练，正所谓习惯成自然就是这个道理。 五步写出一篇好作文 什么才是好作文呢?很多同学误认为只要像学校平时测验那样子“句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误”就应该得满分。而小升初对作文的考核并非如此简单，同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么除了以上两个方面外，我们怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文而在小升初中获取高分呢?下面就来看我们的“高分作文五步法”。 (1)认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式 时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。 如ago，last…过去时;next，in…将来时等 人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。
你是××中学的××，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点： 1.提出你觉得需要改进的地方； Dear Sir/Madam, I’m really excited to heat that a hiking activity is going to be held near the Bund on the Labor Day holiday. However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you’ve posted on the campus website, as I’d like to point out. are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the the scheme should be comprehensive and thoughtful enough to ensure the success of the activity. Only by clarifying these details, are you likely to attract more attention from the students. I suggest the hike be more suited to the theme “Discover Shanghai” through additional activities. Upon arrival at the Bund, I propose an introduction of the architecture on both sides of the Huangpu River. By appreciating different artistic styles of the buildings, we can gain a deeper insight into the authentic Shanghai culture mixed with exotic , the experience may well be unforgettable one, because it of organizing the activity. , if the hike is organized in more detail and in a more supportive way, it is sure to succeed. I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success. Yours sincerely Wang Lei
2016年浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作 一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题 第二节：概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is no thing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block o ut disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up t he skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 15 46. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a frie ndly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman h ad taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman sho uld not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been re garded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning awa y dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of pre venting disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter th an white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too f ar? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of diseas e. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages ch ildren to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) positi on is gaining some ground. （原创范文，仅供参考） One possible version： People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a long time in histo ry, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected peop le from getting ill. (要点 2 ) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt abou t 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us health y. (要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our im mune system. (要点 4) 【范文点拨】 (一)要点分析 1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is nothing fix ed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have different attitudes towards di rt. 再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on th
2020 中考冲刺 英语书面表达写作方法和技巧辅导 书面表达是中考中的主观题，分值为 15 分。培养写作技能，训练语言表达能力，要求学生能在所学 词汇、语法和句型的基础上造简单的句子，再到段落，最后到短文。书面表达是中考综合考查学生运用所 学英语知识进行语言表达的能力。 考查目标： （一）考查考生能力： 1.理解能力 2.思维能力 3.综合分析能力 4.运用语言知识的能力 5.用英语组词造句，连句成篇的能力 6.书写能力 （二）考查考生英语基础知识： 1. 词类及用法常识 2. 句法功能 3. 动词时态用法 4. 动词不定式及动名词的用法 5. 情态动词的用法 6. 形容词和副词的用法 7. 主谓一致 8. 被动语态 9. 从句的用法。 1 、认真审 题： 弄清楚该题目究竟要表达什么，明确写作要点、要求，选好人称、时态、文体。 2 、语言地 道： 尽量使用你初中读本中学过的句式、句型、常用的短语、习惯用法。表达要正确。 3 、避繁就 简： 理解脉络，抓住重点。确保使用有把握的词汇和句型，同时注意文章的连贯性。 4 、仔细检 查： 复核全文，注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致，单词是否有单复数的错误， 拼写的错误，字数是否达到要求等。 （一）写好词汇注意要点： 一、措辞要遵循习惯 语言是说话的习惯，交流的工具。写作时应该尽量使用常见的、熟悉的、符合语法习惯的词语，同时 注意口语和书面语的区别，使用真实的书面语表达方式，避免文章生硬、难懂。 二、选词要表达精准 词义指词所表达的含义。要用词贴切，准确的表达意思。尤其要注意辨析近义词在具体语境中的语法 区别，否则使用不当就会出错。 三、用词简明扼要 选词时我们要尽量根据自己的词汇量和能力，尽量使用自己有把握，同时又能准确表达文意的单词。 （二）写好句子注意要点： 1. 如何写好简单句？ 句型 1：S+V （主谓结构： S=主语； V= 谓语） The students listened carefully. He runs quickly. My parents work day and night. 句型 2：S+V+P （主系表结构： P=表语 ） The story sounds interesting. He becomes a teacher when he grew up. 句型 3：S+V+O （ 主谓宾结构： O=宾语）