1、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Paul and I were on our school basketball team, The Lions. We loved basketball and were both huge fans of the NBA. My favourite player was LeBron James. Paul’s favourite player was Tyrone Bogues, a guy who played for the Charlotte Hornets. In fact, we actually agree that they are both champions.
Bogues was only 1.6 metres tall, which made him the shortest ever player in the NBA. And guess what? Paul was only 1.6 metres tall, too! Paul knew that being shorter than other players meant that he had to practise more. During all those hours of doing jump shots on his own, he used Bogues as his inspiration. Paul once said, “If Bogues could make it, why not me?”
Our coach was not so sure. Paul had to try out many times just for making the team. He was still usually on the bench, being just a replacement. Everyone knew Paul had real skills, and had a strong desire to play for the team. However, Paul didn’t get a chance.
This week, The Lions were playing our main competitors, The Bears, a team whose record this season had been perfect. They hadn’t lost a single game. It would be a tough one. Paul didn’t know he’d soon get the chance that he’d been waiting for.
Suddenly, a player and I crashed into each other. My knee hurt badly. The team gathered around, looking worried. The last quarter was about to begin, and my team was behind by 10 points.
“I don’t think I can play anymore, Coach,” I said quietly as the doctor put an ice pack on my knee.
“No way,” the Coach replied sharply. “We’ve got no more players!”
“What about Paul?” someone suggested.
“Paul?” said the Coach. “He can’t play!”
“Give him a shot, Coach!” I said. “What have we got to lose?”
“That’s right,” another player said. “We’re losing anyway. Let Paul play!”
“Let me try, Coach! I won’t let you down!” Paul said.
“OK, OK!” The Coach finally agreed. “Don’t let us down, Paul. It’s your time to shine.”
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为60左右;
2. 应使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
5. 提示词:球场court
Paul jumped up and rushed onto the court.
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The game ended.
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2、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.
One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when he saw the price, her heart sank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her, her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we get home we should make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreed immediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls.
Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you,” the little girl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jenny froze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave
her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, that's okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”
A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her father’s eyes. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her? She's my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, that's okay,” her father said, smiling broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语:
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Several days later, when Jenny's father came in to read her a story, Jenny
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Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.
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3、An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly
educated son. Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)perched(柄息)on their window.
The father asked his son, "What is this?"The son replied, I have just now told you that it’s a crow!"
After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, "What is this? " The son said，"Father, I have just now told you that it’s a crow! "
After a little while, the old father again asked his son for the third time, "What is this? "
At this time some expression of irritation(恼怒)was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬的回绝），"It’s a crow, a crow. " A little while later, the father again asked his son for the fourth time, “What is this? "
This time, the son shouted at his father, "Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again, although I have told you so many times ‘ IT IS A CROW ‘. Are you not able to understand this? "
A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered (破旧的）diary，which he had maintained since his son was born.
On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page.
When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary：
"Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa, when a crow was sitting on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow. I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I did not at all feel irritated but 1 rather felt affection for my innocent son. "
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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After reading the diary，
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Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father.
4、 It was somewhere between spring and summer, my mom and I were driving through the countryside. Back then, I was 13 years old, and always felt unhappy with Mom. But little did I know that this trip was going to be a special one.
A pot of flowers sat in the back seat, whose heavenly scent filled the car.
Suddenly, in the middle of nowhere, my mom pulled over. "What are you doing?" I cried, fearing that the car had broken down and we'd be stuck there, so far from home. But that wasn't the case. My mom hopped out of the car, grabbing the flowers from the back seat. "It'll just be a minute," she called back through the open windows.
My eyes impatiently skimmed the edge of the road before settling on a little sign showing that it was a nursing home. I looked back to the building, somewhat annoyed, as my mom reappeared-empty-handed.
Before she started the car, curiosity drove me to ask, "Do you know someone there?" She shook her head. "Then what did you do with the flowers?" She smiled slightly, "I gave them to the receptionist." "What?" She laughed at my confusion. "I told the receptionist to give the flowers to whoever needed them, especially who hasn't gotten any in a while."
I kept silent for a moment. Not long after we continued our driving, I spoke again, "Did you leave your name?" To this she answered instantly, "No. Leaving flowers there for someone who will appreciate them makes me feel good, which is enough of a thank for me."
Suddenly, still thinking about Mom's deeds, I heard something burst loudly. It was our car that broke down! Nothing could be worse, because neither my mom nor I understood how to repair it, and we didn't know where the garage was. It also seemed impossible to wait for any passer-by, since we had seen so few along the way.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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5、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
When she was 22 years old, Pat Jones decided to travel around the world and see as many foreign places as she could when she was young. When she finished college at home in Britain, Pat chose to visit Latin America first. She managed to get a job as an English teacher in a secondary school in Bolivia. Pat spoke a little Spanish，so she was able to communicate with her students even though they did not know much English.
A sentence she had once read somewhere stuck in her mind ：If you dream in a foreign language, it means that you have really mastered it. Pat repeated this sentence to her students and she hoped that someday she would dream in
Spanish and they would dream in English.
One day, Tim, one of the worst students in her class, came up to her and explained in Spanish that he had not done his homework. He said that he had gone to bed early, but slept badly. Pat was quite angry with him, for she did not think that his explanation had anything to do with his homework. But Tim told her that he dreamed all night and his dream was in English.
“In English!” Pat thought. She was greatly surprised, since Tim was such a bad student. She was also jealous (嫉妒的）. Her dreams were still not in Spanish，but she decided to encourage her student and asked him to tell her about his dream.
“All the people in my dream spoke English，” Tim said. “And all the signs were in English. All the newspapers, magazines and TV programs were in English，too.”
“ But that’s wonderful!” said Pat. “What did all the people say to you?” she asked.
“I’m sorry, Miss Jones. That’s why I slept so badly all night. I didn’t understand a word they said. It is a nightmare (噩梦）！” Tim answered.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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After hearing the boy's words, Pat
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In order to encourage her students to speak English, Pat
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6、阅读下面文章,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事情节。
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Once there was a little girl named Emily. Although her singing was very pleasant to hear, lacking of courage, she never dared to sing in front of strangers.
One summer, the neighborhood where she lived would hold a singing competition. Her best friend, Lucy, came to invite her to participate in the competition, but Emily said, “I’m afraid to take part in it.” Her mother said, “it’s okay, just do it bravely.” Emily followed her mama’s advice
and decided to give herself a try. The day came. Emily and Lucy went to the competition site. But she was too timid (胆小的) to walked onto the stage. She had been waiting until others finished singing. She shakily (颤抖地) forced herself to stand on the stage. She started to sing, but her voice was so low. What’s worse, she was so nervous that she forget the lyrics (歌词) after singing a few words. Being laughed at by others, embarrassed and shy, she ran away from the stage.
Some naughty boys ran after her and said, “Emily, coward (胆小鬼)! Emily, coward!” Emily didn’t argue with them. What she wanted was to go back home as quickly as she could. Finally, she rushed into the house, hugged her mom and cried sadly.
“Well, my poor girl. Don’t cry. Tell me what happened to you.” asked her mom. Emily looked up her mother and told her what she had experienced.
Listening to her, her mom cupped her face and said, “it doesn’t matter, girl. As long as you practice singing more in front of strangers, you will become braver little by little. So, my girl, don’t be beaten by a failure. You can go out to practice singing every day. No matter who is listening to you, go on singing and never stop. I believe there will be a harvest for you.”Paragraph 1:
Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion.
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Going on singing, she walked into the park, where many people were singing and dancing.
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7、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Max works as a security guard at a famous museum. As a security guard, Max watches visitors to the museum as they come and go. He often wonders things about them. Where do they come from? Are they happily married? What do they do for a living?
One day, Max notices a very pretty woman visiting the exhibit he is guarding. He has seen her before. In fact, she often comes to see the rare jewelry exhibit—sometimes several times a week.
During one of these visits, she starts a conversation with Max. She asks if it is difficult to be a security guard and if he ever gets bored. She introduces herself as Maria，a fashion designer.
When Maria comes to visit, she often talks with Max. “Maybe she likes me,” he thinks.
Max thinks she is very interesting and wants to spend more time with her. During one of their talks at the museum, he finds out that she is studying Italian.
He lies and tells her he has always wanted to learn Italian. He is simply using Italian as a trick. And it works! Max and Maria meet every Saturday afternoon in the museum garden to study Italian.
During the lessons, they also talk about themselves. Maria shares her dreams of one day showing her fashions in a museum. Max tells her many details about his security job, including the security code and the locations of alarms. He jokes that it would be very easy to rob the museum.
Over the passing weeks, they learn more about each other. What Max doesn’t
learn，however，is that Maria is not as innocent as she looks. Maria is actually an international jewel thief! Police from eight different countries have been searching for her in the past two years!
Her latest goal is to steal the rare Black Diamond! This diamond is the most valuable diamond in the world and it is part of the exhibit that Max is guarding. All her attention on him was a trick to learn more about the museum’s security system.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150个左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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One night after the museum closes, Maria appears at the gate of the museum.
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As she holds the diamond in her hands，the lights in the museum go on.
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答案以及解析
1答案及解析：
答案：
Paul jumped up and rushed onto the court. And clearly, all the extra hours of practising alone paid off. The other members just couldn’t keep up with his energy and speed. He made shot after shot, and the crowd couldn’t stop cheering.
The game ended. Our team had won by 2 points. “Well,” said the Coach as he patted Paul on the shoulder, “you’ve just won your place on the team, big guy!”
解析：略
2答案及解析：
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Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent- minded, with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly. When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father, with her fingers trembling automatically. No one knew what the necklace meant to her. She whispered to her father, softly and gently, “ Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.” Then, the necklace slid into her father’s hands determinedly.
Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, his father dragged out a blue box. Much to Jenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. Jenny froze there, a thrilled expression twisting her face. Before Jenney was able to say something, her father brushed a warm kiss on her face and gathered her into his arms. Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.
解析：略
3答案及解析：
答案：Paragraph 1：
After reading the diary，the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the clays when he used to sit together with his father. His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritated while his father asked him the same question just four times! The son thought to himself：If I grow old, how will my son look at me? Will he think of me as a burden? Will he shout at me because of my poor sight, poor hearing or poor understanding?
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Feeling ashamed , the son got down on his knees before his father. He made an apology to his father, lagging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior. He said, " his you who have cared
for me since I was a little child. You showered your selfless affection on me. You worker! hard to make money so that l could afford to go to university. I will serve you in the best way."
解析：略
4答案及解析：
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We were worrying about what could be done. But after waiting in vain for a considerable time, Mom and I decided to walk back the road to the nursing home and seek help. God knows how far we had driven! When we arrived, the receptionist was surprised, but warmly helped us contact the garage. There, the old men who had received the flowers were excited to meet us, talking about how great that day was. It amazed me what random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received it. While we were laughing and talking merrily, the garage got our car repaired. Paragraph 2:
As we drone along, a flower shop came into sight on the road. I paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of kindness, I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal her excitement, but the glittering tears failed her. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her. This was the trip of my life.
解析：略
5答案及解析：
答案：One possible version:
After hearing the boy's words, Pat felt sorry for his terrible experience and said at least that was a good beginning. She still believed in the sentence stuck in her mind, so the English teacher made
a deal with her students. Though she had only a limited knowledge of Spanish, she decided she should use the language more often while her students should use English the same way.
In order to encourage her students to speak English y Pat also asked her students to tell their dreams in English while she did it in Spanish. It worked. Several students took turns to tell their dreams in fluent English. Amazingly, some students could finally dream in English, which made Pat almost jump with joy the moment she heard what her students said. She was not jealous this time. One possible explanation for this is that “ practice makes perfect”.
解析：略
6答案及解析：
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Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion. The next day, she began to practice singing outside. Gradually, her courage became greater and greater, and the sound of her singing was also louder and louder. Months later. She could sing as she was walking.
A naughty boy who had laughed at her before cried to her, “Emily, coward! Emily, coward!” However, she chose to ignore his behavior.
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Going on singing, she walked into the park, where many people were singing and dancing. Hearing her beautiful voice, some stopped to listen to her singing and clapped for her. A grandma smiled to her and said, “Oh, little girl , you sing really well!” Emily said thanks to her. Emily felt pleased that she could sing confidently in front of strangers. The second year, the neighborhood held the singing competition again. This time, Emily walked onto the stage bravely, and her loud and beautiful voice of singing moved all the people. They all cheered for her, including those who had laughed at her. Her mother was delighted to see the timid girl had been a brave one.
解析：略
7答案及解析：
答案：Paragraph 1
One night after the museum closes, Maria appears at the gate of the museum. She enters the building quietly using the security code that Max shared with her. "When dealing with a beautiful woman, men can be so stupid, " she laughs to herself. She sneaks into the .jewelry exhibit and destroys the alarms. Then she walks up to the glass case protecting the Black Diamond and unlocks it with the key she stole from Max. She laughs, “The Black Diamond is mine!”Paragraph 2
As she holds the diamond in her hands, the lights in the museum go on. Then an alarm sounds and a team of police run in. They have caught her! As a police officer takes hold of Maria, the lead police investigator comes into the room. Her surprise is so strong that she is unable to speak. It is Max. She yells, "How could I have been fooled by you, a simple police detective? " Max puts his badge back in his pocket and says, "You can think about that in prison, and by the way, I speak perfect Italian."
解析：略
1. Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character. 2. Dear Brad, I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house an d a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last. As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future. Li Hua 3. Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it. Thank you! 4. We spend two weeks in London last year. We went there in the autumn .We think it is the best season to visit England. The weather is usually good but there aren’t too many tourists in October. We stayed in a small h otel in the West End .It was convenient as we did most of our traveling by foot. We went to look at the places where all tourists see. We saw Buckingham Palace and the National Gallery. We went to shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money .What we liked most, though, was going to theatre. We don’t have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home .A lot of people say English food is very badly. We didn’t think so. It’s true that most of the restaurants are French or Italian or Chinese, but we had some very good meal.
第二部分题型专项短文改错 一、考点聚焦 1、题型特点 （1）词法内容。包括名词、代词的数与格，反身代词，动词时态语态，非谓语动词、短语动词的用法，不规则动词的变化形式，形容词的比较级，形容词副词的区别，介词的误用等。 （2）句法内容。包括主谓一致、指代一致，并列连词，从属连词等引导各种从句的关联词语，感叹句，疑问句，祈使句的结构等。 （3）行文逻辑。包括句子的肯定、否定、推理、判断等。 二、应试技巧点拨 （1）通读全文，了解文章主旨大意，确定文章的题材、体裁，把握文章的背景知识。 （2）逐句分析，把握结构。粗略分析词法、句法、逻辑上是否有问题。 （3）逐行修改，先易后难。 （4）复读全文，验证答案。一要注意错误点的分散与比例，二要注意答题是否合乎规范。 2、改错歌诀 现将本书编写者总结的短文改错歌诀提供给大家，希望有所帮助。 短文改错要做好，常见类型应记牢。 名词爱考“数”与“格”，冠词在前“错”“多”“少”。 动词时态和语态，非谓语搭配莫错了。 连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆。 介词多半搭配，多漏误用想周到。 句法涉及到“一致”①，从句多考关系词。 词法句法均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。 “1126”惯常比②，回读复查敲定稿。 注：①“一致”：包括主谓一致，代词及相应的限定词在数、性、称方面的一致，主语与主语补语，宾语和宾语补语的一致等。②“1126”：指的是通常10个题项有一处是正确的，一处（或两处）属多余，两处（或
1. __________ 2. __________ 3. __________ 4. __________ 5. __________ 6. __________ 7. __________ 8. __________ 9. __________ 10. _________ 1. __________ 2. __________ 3. __________ 4. __________ 5. __________ 6. __________ 7. __________ 一处）需补加成分，6处需更改。当然，此非“定势”，仅作参考。 三、精典范例 例1 （NMET 2000） The day before the speech contest （比赛）English teacher talked to me. She saide that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and calm down, I did a good jobm and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. 解析 1. my English 。该题考查代词，绝大部分考生知道English teacher 前少一个词语，但很多人都误加上了our, an 或the,而后面两次出现my English teacher ，因而本题实际考查学生对文章内容的理解。 2. schoolmate → schoolmates 。schoolmate 应为复数形式。 3. that → whether 。whether 与后面的or not 相呼应。 4. 正确。 5. as → that 。把as 改成that ，组成so … that 结构。 6. a 去掉。catch sight of 是固定短语。 7．but → and 。意义的转折用but,意思并列用and 。 8. calm → calmed 。remembered 和calmed 是对应的。 9. is → are 。主语用and 连接，谓语动词用are 。 10. often 去掉。often 多余。 【例2】（2004年全国卷I ） Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel unhappy every day.
（全文由Peter编制） 2016年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错 1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错（10 分） My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. 2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
高考英语短文改错题技巧汇总|高考英语短文改错模拟训练10篇 【--高考祝福语】 试题预览 高考英语短文改错模拟训练10篇 No.01 I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is 1.___________ my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a 2.___________ bike. Ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. I 3.___________ use my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warm
4.___________ and dry. It can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold and 5.___________ rain is pouring down. It can also be very danger. Of course 6.___________ I will be very careful on my bike. In facts, accidents are not 7.___________ the only problem. One day I went to school and come back 8.___________ to find his front wheel was missing. It was a long walk to 9.___________ the repairer’s shop. Now I have two strong locks. 10.___________
高考英语短文改错考点解析-形容词与副词 一、考点规律分析 短文改错对形容词与副词的考查主要涉及形容词和副词比较等级的误用（尤其是在本身已是比较级的词前误加more）、形容词与副词的混用（如修饰动词时误用形容词或修饰名 词时误用副词）等，另外，用作表语时该用形容词的却误用了名词、简短副词（如in，down 等）的误加与漏用、涉及形容词搭配的as…as 结构、how 与what 的混用等也是常考的考点。 二、真题单句归纳 （1）After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening. （frightening 改为frightened，因它表示某人感到害怕，而不是令人害怕）（全国卷） （2）Charles said，“As soon as I see a realy tall building，I want to climb it. （realy 改为really 或real，若改为really，则修饰tall；若改为real，则修饰building）（全国卷）（3）Last Sunday，police cars hurry to the taller building in New York. （taller 改为tallest，因从含义上看此处应是最高级）（全国卷） （4）As a result，people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past. （去掉more，因为longer 本身已是比较级，不能再受more 修饰）（全国卷）（5）Therefore，there are still some countries where people have shorter lives. （Therefore 改为However，因此处语意转折）（全国卷） （6）People in industrial countries can expect to live for twice so long as people who lived a few hundred years ago. （so long as 改为as long as，其意为“与……一样长”）（全国卷）（7）In some places you may borrow many books as you want. （many 之前加as，因 as …… as 结构不完整）（全国卷） （8）I told Mother，Father，Sister and all my friends here that a great time I had. （that 改为what）（全国卷） （9）I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting. （去掉much，因much 不能用来修饰形容词的原级，尽管它可用来修饰比较级和最高级）（全国卷）（10）I‘m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. （wonderfully 改为wonderful，因它是放在名词前作定语）（全国卷）
短文改错专题 一．改错题型特点： 高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题型。主要考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确性及词、句、篇和语法的综合水平。高考短文改错设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多，覆盖面广，包括词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等，是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。 二．短文改错常见考点设置： 考点1：名词 命题特点: 本来用复数,却用单数；本来用单数，却用复数。 记住常考的几个不可数名词：news, work(工作), advice, fun, progress, information, luck, weather, music, health, change(零钱),baggage(行李), luggage(行李),furniture, jewellery, equipment等 改正方法: (1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系. 1. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. 2. After class we become stranger at once. 3. They want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get marks in all my subject. 4. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. 5. There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. 6. Now we can get millions of informations from the Internet. 7. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. 8. She is one of the most intelligent girl in our class. 9. I looked at his other hands. 10. Most of them are peasant and some often go fishing in the sea. 11. We have made great progresses with Mr. Liu teaching us. 12. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new rules should help students get higher grade. 13. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 14. He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures. 考点2：代词 命题特点：1.男女性代词用反；2.单数指代复数；3.代词词性用错；4.缺少人称代词。 改正方法: 根据上下文的逻辑关系以及人称代词的数和格的一致问题。 15. Rose is such a kind girl that we all like him very much. 16. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. 17. I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. 18. It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. 19. Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself as I was learning to express me in simple English. 20. My story book is much more interesting than her. 21. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 22. Some students may also save up for our college or future use. 23. Do you think necessary for you to learn Japanese well? 24. I dressed me quickly and hurried out the house. 25. You’d better keep that he said in mind. 26. He has three children, two of them are teachers. 27. The population of China is much larger than it of the USA.
高考英语短文改错 常见错误类型 高考英语改错题是考生感到棘手的题型之一。笔者对近几年的高考英语改错题作了细致的分析并加以归类后，发现错误类型主要集中在以下方面。（例题保留原题号） 1. 动词时态 每年都有时态错误的小题，而且改动基本集中在一般过去时与一般现在时之间。时态的更改要以上下文的主体时态为依据。 （1）（2003全国卷）She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was... 84. read （and连接并列谓语） （2）（2004江苏卷）At once I apologize and controlled myself... 83. apologized （and连接并列谓语） （3）（2004全国卷）Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class,... 82. talk （根据sometimes可判断此句为一般现在时） （4）（2005全国卷Ⅱ）I will write again and send you the photos we take together. 85. took （把照片寄给你，应该是已经拍好的，用过去时） （5）（2005全国卷Ⅰ）There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. One of them was that they can earn money. 77. is （从上下文判断，应该是现在时，谓语用is） （6）（2005江苏卷）We named him Jack and keep him for about three years. 76. kept （and连接并列谓语） 2. 名词单复数 单复数互改是高考英语改错题的基本题型之一，改动的依据有：一是根据名词前的修饰限定成份；二是根据上下文的逻辑关系。 （1）（2003全国卷）Their word were a great encouragement to me. 85. words （是把word改为words 还是把were改为was，根据名词前的修饰限定词their来决定。） （2）（2004江苏）that was a dinner we had waited for several month. 85. months （several修饰复数名词） （3）（2004全国卷Ⅰ）a few minute on the Internet. 77. minutes （a few修饰复数名词） （4）（2005全国卷Ⅱ）But one and a half year later. 79. years （one and a half意思为一年半，故判断此处year应为复数形式） （5）（2005全国卷Ⅰ）There are advantage for students to work... 76. advantages （从there are 判断应该用名词复数） 3. 句子结构 句子结构方面的错误范围庞大，解答高考英语改错题主要可以从以下几方面来思考：1）句子结构是否完整，成份是否冗缺；2）单词的词性与其在句中的功能是否相符；3）主谓一致；4）复合句中连接主句和从句的关系词或引导词的运用是否得当等。 （1）（2004 全国卷）I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. 78. because/as （复合句中连接主句和从句的关系词运用不当） （2）（2004 全国卷Ⅱ）I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. 81. why （复合句中连接主句和从句的关系词运用不当） （3）（2005全国卷Ⅰ）For the most part, students working to earn money for their own use. 78. work （缺谓语动词） （4）（2005全国卷Ⅰ）Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything if they like. 79. allows （主语是动名词短语Earning their own money，谓语应该用单数） （5）（2005江苏卷）But the most wonderful thing about Jack were his musical ability. 84. was
Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! （2014课标2） My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m.and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn’t need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with afte r-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
高考英语短文改错20篇 1 Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no 76． play make Jack a dull boy?What this means is that if you 77． study all the times you will become a boring person. You 78． must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise 79． you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the 80． person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have 81． a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work 82． you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do 83． not have to compete your classmates. No one can be 84． happier in studying seven days and seven nights a week. 85． 2 Dear Tracy， Although I'm 1 6 years old，but my father still treats 76. _____ me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions.77. _ _____ He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 78. _ _____ leaving things lying around in the house while he did this 79. _ _____ all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80. _ _____ follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.”81. _ _____ Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests，82. _ _____ making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t83. _ _____ bear what he does. I have been tried many times 84. _ _____ to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me. 85. _ _____ Puzzled 3 Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he 76. _____________ has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps 77. _____________ make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday 78. _____________ morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted 79. _____________ to see the report about an important football match 80. _____________ the night before. The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless 81. _____________ he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to wait 82. _____________ a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived 83. _____________ late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him 84. _____________ why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”. 85. _____________
高考英语短文改错分类解析 解题步骤： 1. 着手篇章，了解大意 考生做短文改错时，不应急于改错，而应先把文章浏览一遍，弄清文章的脉络层次和中心思想，把握作者所采用的时态、语态、人称和数。可以先把短文中明显的错误(如固定词组、词性、单复数)或认为有可能的错误(如句子结构的错误)用铅笔轻轻地标出来，为下一步正式改错做准备。 2. 逐句分析，依句改错 在短文改错中，题随行出、错随句生。因此，考生应在略读全文、把握文章中心思想的基础上，对文章进行逐行逐句研究，从词汇的用法、句子的结构到文章的篇章逻辑都要进行仔细地推敲，把错误之处一一改正过来，切不可孤立地依行改错。若一时发现不了错误，不要揪住一处不放而耽搁太多时间。可以在全文改完以后，再回过头来进行难点突破。若已改出了八、九处错误，剩余一两处实在找不出错误而时间又来不及时，则大胆地打上钩，不留空白。当然，有些考生在考试过程中由于紧张而脾气急躁，一看找不到错处就打勾，这也是不明智的。因为近几年来，该题的出题方式基本稳定，只有一处是正确的。 3. 复读全文，检查核对 考生在做完短文改错题后，务必要把已改好的短文复读一遍，查看是否出现疏漏或遗漏的地方，特别要注意时态、语态、代词所指及人称和数等篇章逻辑方面的问题，检查无误后方可定稿作答。 错误分类解析： 高考英语短文改错分类解析---名词 一、考点规律分析 短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数问题，即在该用复数的地方误用其单数，或在该用单数的地方误用其复数。 二、真题单句归纳 (1) We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream. (2) We climb everywhere, not only in America. We have been to Europe many time. (3) There are branch library in many villages. (4) I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon. (5) They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. (6) We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. (7) Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! (8) She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning. (9) She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. (10) I used to love science class — all of them— biology, chemistry, geography, physics. (11) They did not want me to do any work at family. (12) I’ll get good marks in all my subject. (13) On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. (14) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well. (15) Their word were a great encouragement to me. (16) You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month. (17) Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby. (18) You can find all kinds of information in just a few minute on the Internet. 三、模拟单句演练 (1) Women live longer than men in most country. (2) The film is very interesting. I have seen it many time. (3) It’s said that all the ticket have been sold out. (4) The children spend a lot of times watching TV. (5) I met a lot of interesting peoples on holiday. (6) The flower in the park were all pleasing. (7) He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures. (8) Computer are becoming more and more popular in the country. (9) It’s one of the most interesting book that I’ve ever read. (10) Hearing the news, the woman burst into tear. (11) He hasn’t lived here long, but he has a great many friend here.