2014年9月20日雅思写作解析及原创范文
小作文：地图题一条河两侧建筑在1980年和现在变化的对比
大作文：
In developing countries, some people think the government should introduce newtechnology to people in order to improve quality of life, while others belie ve the governmentshould offer free education. Discuss both sides and give yo ur own opinion.
相关题目：
Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people's qua lity of life inthe developing countries. However, others believe that free educa tion should be offered.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(2009年11月19日)
感言：雅思题库题目过千，茫茫题海，原题押中的机会较小，但是写作思路拓展和语料库应用可以融会贯通，今日考题为科技类，教育类，政府类综合考察，背诵过语料库的童鞋只要可以灵活地头脑风暴，自圆其说，用预测题目的语料库定可才艺展示，博取高分。
作家立场：普及免费教育以及依赖科技革新都是改善人们生活质量的方式，两者应该完美结合。
布局图：
首段：背景介绍+ 争议焦点(可以省略)+ 作家立场
二段：为何科技可以改善人们的生活，提高生活质量(细节或者例证展开)
三段：为何教育可以改善人们的生活，提高生活质量(细节或者例证展开)
尾段：再次亮明观点+ 总结理由(可以省略)
思路拓展：
高科技可以改善人民的生活质量
1. 飞机旅行给人们出行带来便利，对于国家的商贸旅游有利好，国家富足，生活质量改善。
2. 普及互联网可以拓宽人们的精神视野，带来心灵愉悦，例如，穷人亦可以通过网络浏览美术馆和艺术馆的精湛艺术品。
3. 普及智能手机可以便利交流，获得信息，辅助教育，甜美生活。
普及教育可以改善人民的生活质量
1. 普及免费教育使来自偏远地区的贫困儿童受益，可以帮助他们摆脱贫困，改变命运。
2. 普及免费教育可以培养更多大学生，对于国家而言，提高国民基本素质，为国家发展注入新鲜活力，对于个人，专业上精通，精神上受益，为未来的事业辉煌，美满婚姻打下坚实基础，因此，普及教育有助于提高个人生活质量。
原创范文赏析：
首段：背景介绍+ 作家立场：
The government, as a decision-maker, is the representative of citizen’s bas ic interests. Inthis sense, every governmental policy will inevitably exert a p rofound influence on its citizens’quality of life and further prosperity of the nation. People have been debating for years the function of a good governm ent, as I see it, both introducing innovative high-tech productsand popularizi
ng free education fall into the category of the governmental function.
解析：
1. exert a profound influence on …… 对于…… 施加深远影响
2. fall into the category of …… 归属于…… 的范畴
二段：正方观点的展开：为何政府要依赖科技改善人民的生活质量：
The reasons why developing high-tech products could conduce to the amelior ation of anation’s population lies in three main aspects. Primarily, prosperi ng aviation can, to large extent optimize people’s quality of life. For exampl e, the development of the internationaltrade makes citizens have access to va rious seasoned fruits and vegetables, likewise, the prosperity of international tourism enables people to improve the quality of their lives bytouring many hot scenic spots with their families, pursuing academic dreams overseas and thus enjoy more leisure activities or embrace more personal success. Also, t he betterment ofpeople’s life depends on the popularity of the Internet and t he mobile phone, specifically, the cell phone greatly strengthens the family tie and diversifies people’s entertainment. Similarly,with availability of the Int ernet, more and more citizens can embark on self-employment bydrawing on e-commerce or receiving education at home. (139)
解析：
1. tour many hot scenic spots 游览很多热门旅游景区
2. strengthen the family tie 加强家庭联系
3. embark on self-employment by drawing on e-commerce通过电子商务自我创业
二段：反方观点的展开：为何政府要教育改善人民的生活质量：
Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without an education, m any of usbelieve, is an unfortunate victim of adverse circumstances, depriv ed of one of the goldenchances, thereby, supporting free education has an in dispensable role to play in perfectingpeople’s quality of life. For a start，those poverty-stricken children from the rural areas couldbecome the benefi ciaries of free education, it is highly possible that a man receiving fineeducati on can shake off poverty and then revolutionize his or her destiny. Further, a nationcould benefit from the promotion of universal education, surely, tale nts inject new vitality into the mightiness of a country, the increased happine ss index of the citizens will ensue whena nation become stronger and richer. (126)
解析：
1. Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without an education, many of usbelieve, is an unfortunate victim of adverse circumstances, de prived of one of the goldenchances. 教育是我们时代的关键词，一个人没有受过教育，是逆境的牺牲品，被剥夺了最珍贵的机会。
2. shake off poverty and then revolutionize his or her destiny 摆脱贫困，改
变命运
3. inject new vitality into the mightiness of a country 为国家的强大注入新鲜活力
尾段：再次亮明观点：
Overall，
I re-affirm my stand that a nation can rejuvenate through science andeducati on，
to optimize people's quality of life, efforts should be made the government i nterms of high-tech innovation and universal education.(35) 解析：
1. a nation can rejuvenate through science and education 科技兴国
2. efforts should be made the government 政府应该努力
3. in terms of 在……方面
创作感言：写作已超越模板，思维锋利如刀，语料信手捏来，因为素养是千锤百炼。写作是辛苦的，因为难以超越自己;写作是快乐的，因为享受表达的乐趣。
创作寄语：夜已深，为官网写作考试周报是对于梦想的坚持，是回报新东方的厚爱，更是为照亮烤鸭前行之路，烤鸭之路很艰难，但是我们要有坚信。有梦想的人是快乐的，坚持梦想的人是幸福的。因为，我们想象中的美一定可以擦去心中的泪，梦是宝贝。
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Foreign languages have increasingly gained popularity among students these years, given that the world is shrinking and each country now has a more frequent contact with the outside world. Many people[c1]argue that children should begin learning a foreign language at elementary school, instead of waiting until [c2] they enter secondary school. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, despite the fact that parents do not want to put too much pressure on their children, they also do not want them to lose at the starting line. This means, if the kids start to learn a foreign language early, their parents are relieved from the thought that their kids will have to catch up later on, which is true to some extent. On the other hand, it is scientifically proved that children tend to learn a language faster before the age of 12. As far as I know, my friends who started to learn English when they were six or seven now have a much more satisfactory English level than those who started at12 or 13. So it is wise to have foreign language course in primary school curriculum. Additionally, learning a foreign language at an earlier age can lay children a solid foundation for future studying.Rather than just learning a language itself, children learn a lot more about the learning methods. As a result, when they enter secondary school, they can explore more languages and enrich their knowledge by extensive readings.
雅思写作经典范文雅思小作文数据描述模板25个 1.the table shows the changes in the number of……over the period from……to…… 该表格描述了在……年之……年间……数量的变化。 2.the bar chart illustrates that…… 该柱状图展示了…… 3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding…… 该图为我们提供了有关……有趣数据。 4.the diagram shows (that)…… 该图向我们展示了…… 5.the pie graph depicts (that)……. 该圆形图揭示了……
6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of…… 这个曲线图描述了……的趋势。 7.the figures/statistics show (that)…… 数据(字)表明…… 8.the tree diagram reveals how…… 该树型图向我们揭示了如何…… 9.the data/statistics show (that)…… 该数据(字)可以这样理解…… 10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…… 这些数据资料令我们得出结论……
11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table…… 如图所示…… 12.aording to the chart/figures…… 根据这些表(数字)…… 13.as is shown in the table…… 如表格所示…… 14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in…… 从图中可以看出，……发生了巨大变化。 15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that……or it is clear/apparent from the chart that…… 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到……
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G类雅思7分作文范文 Topic Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice. TEXT（257 Words） One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to. Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped. Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young. Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their adult children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other 雅思范文：电脑是否现代教育所必须？ 成因 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic. Are computers an essential feature of modern education? What subjects can be better taught using computers? Are there aspects of a good education that cannot be taught using computers? You should write at least 250 words. 提示 You should you your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. Topic words: Computers Essential features / absolutely necessary Modern education / good education Task words: There are no specific task words. Three separate questions are given. Questions I should ask myself: Do I think computers are essential for education? What subjects do I think are best be learnt using computers? What do I think are the features of a good education, and are computers important in it?
More and more farmers and food manufacturers are genetically modifying their crops to reduce susceptibility to disease, improve flavor, and reduce costs. Do you think genetically modifying foods is a good idea? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. Sample 6 Score A few decades ago, manipulating genes in people, plants, and animals was just science fiction. Today, it’s a reality, and genetic modification may have many positive applications in the future, including the eradication of many hereditary diseases. But like most scientific and technological advances, the genetic modification of organisms for our food supply can be as dangerous as it is beneficial. Because of the potential dangers of this technology, I think genetically altering plants and animals in the food supply is a practice that should be very tightly controlled and carefully studied before it is an accepted and common practice. Unfortunately, it may already be too late for that. Many people don’t even realize that many of their foods are genetically modified organisms (GMOs). GMOs are already prevalent in supermarkets and grocery stores across the country, but manufacturers are not required to label foods as having been made from GMOs. As a result, millions of Americans purchase and eat GMOs every day without even knowing it. Yet we don’t even know if GMOs are harmful to our health. We don’t really know how GMOs may affect our bodies or our ecosystem. When we mess with DNA, we may be making changes that have all sorts of dangerous repercussions, including some that we may not even realize for several generations. One of the main concerns about GMOs is the unpredictability of the behavior of altered genes and of the bacteria, plants, and animals that interact with the altered organism. For example, a crop of corn genetically modified to be less susceptible to a particular insect may take on other unwanted characteristics due to the change. It may, for example, become more susceptible to another disease, or it could develop a tougher skin on its kernels, or it could decrease the crop’s ability to produce vitamin E. More frightening is the domino effect of genetically modifying foods. Any change in an organism’s DNA has the potential to affect not only the organism but also anything that feeds off of it, including us. How do we know how GMOs might affect us on a microscopic, genetic level? We don’t know, and can’t know, without years of studies that track all sorts of potential outcomes over several generations. Another fear is that transferred genes may escape from one organism into another. For example, imagine that Strain A of sweet peas was altered by adding a gene that would increase its sugar production. Through cross-pollination, this altered genetic code could enter other strains and slowly (or quickly) infect the entire sub-species. If the alteration was beneficial, this could be a good thing. But the altered gene might not act the same way in all varieties, and the change may not be a good thing in the first place,
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2017年1月12日写作真题 Task 1柱状图 The chart shows the number of international applications from four different countries to a Europea n coun try. Task 2环境类 Vehicle free day means the private cars, trucks and motocycles are banned in city cen tres. Only the bus, bicycles and taxis are permitted in the city cen ter. Do you thi nk the ben efits outweigh the disadva ntages?
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