2018年_2018年浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析

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2016.9 浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband， Tom， had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest。

Unfortunately， on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel。

By the time they reached the lake，Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I’m go ing to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time。

After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around， hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and， far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost。

2016.9 浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2018年6月浙江高考英语续写《优秀作文集》 2Suddenly a little rabbit ran in front of my horse and it was so cute that I wanted to catch it. I asked my dad if we could follow it and he nodded. The rabbit was very flexible, so it jumped here and there, which powerfully attracted us to catch it. Suddenly the rabbit stopped in front of a hole and began to graze. I kept up my spirits and immediately caught it. I could hardly conceal my excitement and turned back to show it to my dad. But without giving me any cheers of encouragement, he looked at me heavy-heartedly and said sadly, “My son, I will tell you bad news that we have got lost and I don't know the way.” Silence hung around us and we fell into desperation.We didn't know where we were and the sky became dark. To avoid getting stuck into a whirlpool of negativity, my dad and I rode the horse to find the track and I shouted “help” from time to time. When we felt exhausted and overwhelmed, I suddenly noticed a river in the distance. “Dad! Quickly, go to that river.” I yelled. Though feeling confused, he still followed my words. I said excitedly, “Dad, I think the river is the one nearby the farm house. So if we walk along the river, we may get back.” Finally he agreed and walked after what seemed like a century, the farm house came into sight. When we were approaching the house, we saw Uncle Paul, who was intending to go out to look for us. Hearing our experience, he sighed and patted me on the shoulder, saying, “Now everything is OK. Let's come in and have some supper.”(2019届Class Ten 曾尹)赠送以下资料考试知识点技巧大全一、考试中途应饮葡萄糖水大脑是记忆的场所，脑中有数亿个神经细胞在不停地进行着繁重的活动,大脑细胞活动需要大量能量。

点评高考浙江卷作文：如何推动“读后续写”故事情节发展读后续写是新高考模式的一个重要的改革，这个题型对学生的读和写提出了更高的能力要求，学生要能够基于文章的理解用自己的语言对原文进行续写，想要写出一个情节逻辑合理，对老师和学生来说无疑是一个巨大的挑战。

下面以浙江高考2018年和2020年真题为例，一步一步讲解分析。

2018年真题原题材料阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peacefuland quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。

2018高考英语作文真题及满分范文全汇总【2018·全国Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。

请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 到达时间；2. 合适的礼物；3. 餐桌礼仪。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】Dear Terry,How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【2018·全国Ⅱ卷】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：1. 短片内容：学校的发展；2. 放映时间、地点；3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。

2016年10月到2018年6月浙江高考读后续写真题2016.10 浙江高考One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2018年浙江高考作文审题解析与考场佳作品读2018年浙江高考作文题目为“天地之间，风云变幻”。

以下为对该作文题目的解析以及一篇优秀的考场佳作品赏析。

审题解析：题目中的“天地之间，风云变幻”表达了一种无形中的变动和不确定性，风云变幻是自然界的一个规律，也是一种人生的体验。

作为作文的题目，它希望考生能够通过这个词组，思考自己对世界、生活以及自己的认知和理解，从而表达自己的感悟和见解。

在审题的过程中，考生可以从多个角度去思考和展开，可以从自然界中的风云变幻中获取灵感，也可以从人生的经历和感悟中去理解这个词组，以自己独有的方式展开文章的写作。

考场佳作品读：风云变幻，时而勃发，时而飘散。

它是自然界的规律，也是生活中不可或缺的一部分。

回顾我的成长历程，也许我们都曾经历过风云变幻。

那个才刚踏入校门的少年，对风云变幻的认知是模糊而迷茫的。

随着岁月的沉淀，我逐渐领会到风云变幻的真谛。

我记得在那个初春的午后，我见证了一场风云变幻。

天空中纯净无云，犹如一幅美丽的画卷，但转瞬之间，暗云密布，雷声阵阵，仿佛要将整个世界笼罩。

当时的我忽然想到，生活也是如此，明朗的阳光下，我们唯一可以确定的是变化。

而对于风云变幻，我们只能接受，只能感悟。

那是一种不确定性，也是一种生机。

风云变幻，教会了我接受。

在这个多变的世界里，我们总是在经历各种各样的风雨，而这些风雨，也成就了我们成为更加坚强和成熟的人。

无论是风云过后的澄净，还是狂风骤雨中的坚韧，那些都让我成长，让我的内心变得更加丰富。

在风云变幻的时刻，我懂得了换位思考。

在别人遭遇风雨的时候，我能够给予他们更多的关心和帮助，因为我深刻明白了那种心境。

生活中的风云变幻是公平的，谁也逃不脱。

风雨过后，阳光定会再次闪耀，只要我们诚信地对待，平等地对待。

在风云变幻的阵阵狂风中，我学会了坚韧。

面对困难与挫折，我懂得了深沉的忍耐，懂得了顽强的拼搏。

风雨之后，必将阳光普照。

而这些困难和挫折，也让我成为了现在的自己。

点评高考浙江卷作文：如何推动“读后续写”故事情节发展读后续写是新高考模式的一个重要的改革，这个题型对学生的读和写提出了更高的能力要求，学生要能够基于文章的理解用自己的语言对原文进行续写，想要写出一个情节逻辑合理，对老师和学生来说无疑是一个巨大的挑战。

下面以浙江高考2018年和2020年真题为例，一步一步讲解分析。

2018年真题原题材料阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peacefuland quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。

2018高考英语读后续写The 2018 Gaokao (also known as the high school entrance examination in China) was one of the most important tests for millions of students across the country. As the exam came to an end, students anxiously awaited their results, hoping to secure a place in their desired college or university. Louisa, a determined student, was no exception.Louisa had spent countless hours studying and preparing for the Gaokao. She had dreams of attending a prestigious university and pursuing a career in medicine. The exam was tough, but she felt confident in her abilities. However, as the days turned into weeks and still no news of her results arrived, doubt began to creep into Louisa's mind.Finally, after what felt like an eternity, the day came when Louisa received her Gaokao results. With trembling hands, she opened the envelope and scanned the scores. Disappointment washed over her as she realized she had not scored well enough to secure a place in her desired university. She felt like all her hard work had been in vain.For days, Louisa wallowed in self-pity, questioning her abilities and wondering what her next steps should be. But then, a conversation with her supportive teacher changed everything. Mr. Zhang encouraged her not to give up and suggested alternative options for further education.Driven by a newfound determination, Louisa began exploring other universities and courses that aligned with her interests. She discovered a lesser-known medical program at a university in a different city. Though itwas not her first choice, Louisa saw this as an opportunity to prove herself and push her limits.With her sights set on her new goal, Louisa embarked on a new chapter in her educational journey. She moved to the unfamiliar city and threw herself into her studies. The courses were challenging, but Louisa was determined to excel. The change in scenery and the support from her newfound friends and professors motivated her to work even harder.As the years passed, Louisa became more confident in her abilities. She actively participated in various extracurricular activities related to medicine, gaining practical experience alongside her academic studies. Her hard work and dedication paid off, and she soon found herself being recognized as a promising young medical student.Four years later, Louisa stood proudly on the stage, donning her white coat and holding her medical degree. Despite the initial setback of not getting into her desired university, she had come a long way. The Gaokao had not defined her future; it had merely been a stepping stone on her path to success.Louisa's story serves as a reminder to all students that setbacks are not the end. Sometimes, life has different plans for us, and it is up to us to adapt and make the most of the opportunities presented to us. The Gaokao is just one chapter in a long journey filled with ups and downs. As long as we remain determined and resilient, success will find its way to us, regardless of the obstacles we face.In conclusion, the 2018 Gaokao was a turning point for Louisa. Though she did not achieve the results she had hoped for, she persevered and foundalternative paths to pursue her dreams. Her story is a testament to the power of resilience and determination. Let us all remember that success is not defined by a single exam but by our ability to adapt and grow in the face of challenges.。

一、英语作文范文：2018浙江卷高考英语作文范文：引以为傲的事题目的作文怎么写导语：2018年浙江卷高考英语真题中的英语作文题目是命题作文：One Thing Im Proud of。

通过对这件事情的阐述，谈谈自己的引以为自豪的原因以及从中得到了怎样的启示。

看看自己的作文和英语作文范文差距在哪里呢。

了解到不足，才会改正才会更加有进步的空间。

One Thing Im Proud of I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were，I was determined to be just as good. Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud of this experience，because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb Practice makes perfect.2018浙江高考英语作文题目及范文：续写【范文】Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!第一篇Cherie 老师Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!第二篇：Katie 老师Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I immediately grew fond of the furry rabbit and called out excitedly, “Dad! Look!”Alarmed, the rabbit ran away in a flash. I followed it eagerly, hoping to catch it as my trophy for the trip. My dad just followed me, knowing it was impossible to stop me. We tracked the rabbit for about ten minutes until it got completely out of sight. Depressed and tired, I suggested going back. But apparently, we had diverged from the track Uncle Paul warned us to keep. (86 words)We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent shivers down my spine. Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. Fortunately, Dad was not so panicked as I was.He kept silent and listened very carefully as he took my horse rein and led the way. We had wandered for what seemed like ages when suddenly a river came into sight. Hopefully, we could find our way back to the farm house if we followed the river. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper, but what an experience! It turns out there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm. (114 words)第三篇：Oz老师Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was so quick that my horse was scared. The horse started to neigh, shiver and gradually lose control. It suddenly ran to another direction away from the initial track Uncle Paul has warned us to keep. My dad held the rope tightly in order to calm the horse down. However, it didn’t work. Our cowboy hats were even lost while the horse was running wild and finally we fell down from the horse and the horse just ran away leaving me and my dad lying on the ground.Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. My legs were hurt so that my dad had to carry me on the back. “We get lost, right?” I asked my dad,“Yes. But don’t worry, we’ll find the way back home.” We slowly walked towards the luminous direction. “I guess we’re late for supper.” Sensing my fear and concerns, my dad tried to make me laugh. At that time, we saw the river in front of us. “Dad, this is the river next to our farm house. We can follow the river to find our way home.”“Exactly! How clever you are!” Then we followed the river bank and finally our house came into our sight. Reflecting on this memory, I regarded this experience as my special adventure with my dad.第四篇：Niehai 老师Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It got such a fright that it rushed at a high speed. I, frightened too, grabbed the rein tightly. Minutes later, the horse was off the track and I found that there was no sign of my dad. In the middle of nowhere, I felt a wave of fear wrap around me .Worse still, the rain came pouring down and I was wet through. After seemingly long hours, there came a loud cry of my dad. As a quick response, I shouted in a loud voice."Dad, I’m here!" Tracing my voice, Dad finally found me and we got reunited.We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The moon burst through the clouds and cast its silver light all over the wet land. We wandered slowly on our horses, feeling at a loss what to do. Suddenly, the sound of a floating river caught my attention."Dad, maybe we can find the farm house down the river." Dad nodded with approval. With great care, we rode our horses along the river. Shortly afterwards, the uncle Paul’s farm, sure enough ,came into our sight. Finally, we got to the farm, safe and sound. What a trip like never before!第五篇：Tanya 老师Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse reared into the air, let out a frightened whinny, and galloped off the track. I held on for dear life, branches lashing into my arms and face. Finally he slowed down, then stopped, but looking around at the endless sea of trees, I knew we had gotten hopelessly lost. I called; the only answer was the rustling of the wind in the trees. The horse meandered through the lonesome pines, with me continuing to call and scan the horizon for a familiar landmark, ears pricked for the sound of a horse or a human voice.We had no idea where we were and it got dark. At last I heard the welcome sound of rushing water -- the river! Gratefully we went to the bank and drank our fill. We followed it in the direction that the sun had set, and eventually heard the familiar frogs, and saw the comforting sight of the old farm house, my dad shining a huge lamp from the porch, guiding our way home.。