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苏州北外附属苏州湾外国语学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·天津中考模拟）手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色，许多中学生沉迷于手机无

法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.请根据以下提示点写一篇短文：

1. 去年，Miller对手机游戏非常入迷，而且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影；

2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦虑；

3. 昨天还因为走路看手机被自行车撞了，膝盖受伤；

4. 你的建议……

参考词汇：mobile games手机游戏anxious焦虑be crazy about对……入迷要求：

1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥

Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was

【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.

In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t ta ke mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；再紧扣要点，动笔写作，可适当发挥。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

2．（·安徽中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Johnson打算暑假来合肥玩，而合肥

的夏天经常持续高温，请你根据以下提示，用英文给他写一封邮件，告诉他防暑降温的方法。

● 清淡饮食；● 合理休息；● 适当运动；● ……

注意: 1.词数80-100；2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名和地名；4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Johnson

Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.____________________________________________

I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack,

Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.

First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What's more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat.

I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇关于防暑的建议，所以写作时，比较多地用到表示建议的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建议时要条理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的词。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。写完后记得对文章检查复合，避免单词拼写及语法错误。本篇文章首先第一段对别人的到来表示欢迎，接着对合肥的天气进行总的描述，并引出下文自己的建议。第二段也是文章的主体部分。用first of all, Next, What's more, Finally,提出了四点建议，其中用到建议的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。结构清晰，层次分明，词语及句型使用正确，很不错的一篇文章。

3．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达

假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。

内容如下：

1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；

2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；

3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。

参考词汇：雾霾haze

注意：

1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 词数80左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .

People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.

As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中

要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。

4．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达

假如你是Li Ming, 最近你的英国笔友Susan要来温州体验中国的传统文化，请你为Susan设计温州一日游的活动，帮助她体验温州的文化习俗。请根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件：

1.计划去的地方；

2.一日游的活动安排；

3.阐述安排的理由

要求：1. 不能出现真实的个人身份信息；

2. 词数：110词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Susan,

I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou._______________________________________ Yours,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Susan,

I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou soon， where there are lots of places of interest． To experience traditional Chinese culture better， We can begin our tour by going sightseeing along Wenzhou Road． I bet you will be attracted． Along the Wenzhou Road．not only can you watch the wonderful scenery， but also you will find many historical relics， from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture．

Sincerely waiting for your coming!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇书信作文。根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要

写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

5．（·黑龙江中考模拟）假如你是吴浩，你的父母打算春节期间带你和妹妹去北京。你们准备坐飞机去，请你给旅行社写封电子邮件，咨询有关航班，酒店和旅游景点的情况。留下你的电话，以便旅行社和你联系。

Dear Sir or Madam,

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a tri p to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help.

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于应用文体，向旅行社询问去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

6．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达

提示：转眼间三年的初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习与生活中一定有些让你难忘的人或事物。请以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你

的感受。

要求：1. 请先将题目补充完整后再作答；

2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4. 将短文写在答题卡上。写在本试题卷上无效。

【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.

when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇话题作文。根据以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。文章时态用一般过去式时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

7．（·浙江中考模拟）

如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？

句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。【高分句型二】

It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。

which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。

8．（·扬州中学教育集团树人学校初三）现在有些学生缺乏“感恩”意识，对待家人、朋

友、老师等很冷漠，而且行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，以“Learn to Express Thanks” 为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4）不得使用真实姓名、

校名和地名等。

Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express

thanks.”________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________

Thanks for your listening.

【答案】Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.” Nowadays some students consider it natural to eat well and wear fashionable clothes. They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them. However, they don’t show any sense of “Thanks”.

I don’t think it’s right. It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much. In addition, we are supposed to be thankful to our teachers for teaching us so much knowledge. What’s more, we should say thanks to our friends because they share joy with us and give us courage to overcome many difficulties.

In my opinion, it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them. First of all, we should be polite to our parents and teachers. Besides, we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble. Last but not least, we must study harder to make a great contribution to our country in the future. And only in this way can we better reward our parents, teachers, friends and so on. Thanks for your listening.

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如provide a happy life，any sense of，take good care of；very much，be supposed to do；be thankful to，so much，share with，what’s more，say thanks to，in my opinion，be polite to，try our best，in trouble，in the future，and so on 等。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them.和They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

9．（·张家港市梁丰初级中学中考模拟）书面表达

假设你校英文社正在调查中学生在学习英语过程中会遇到的问题。下面表格列举了最普遍的三个问题，请你根据这些问题及给出的合理建议，为报社写一份英文报告。

写作要求：

1. 报告须包含表格中所有信息，并适当增加细节，以使行文流畅、通顺；

2. 表格中省略号处请2-3句话作适当发挥,给出合理的建议；

3. 词数90左右，报告的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇：本土人（native speaker）

Nowadays it’s importan t and necessary to learn English well but students are having problems learning English. Many students _____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Nowadays it’s important and necessary to learn English well but students are having problems learning English. Many students are poor at reading skills. Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills. Reading can make you feel confident. Some other students feel difficult to remember new words. The best way to learn new words is through listening. You can listen to English radio programs or TV programs. At the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers say. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Practice reading and listening as much as possible, and you can be a good learner.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如have problem doing，be poor at，make you feel confident，some other students，the best way，listen to，at the same time，help sb. do，as much as possible等。同时Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills./ The best way to learn new words is through listening.等非谓语动词结构和At the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers say.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化。而三句As a…的运用，使短文很有条理，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

10．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

南京阳光中学每年要接特来自世界各地的交流学生。为了让他们更好地在南京学习生活，校学生会面向全体学生招募“阳光志愿者”。假如你是李明，请根据下面招募广告，用英文写一封自荐信。

Volunteers Wanted

Required Qualifications

Good English and Chinese

Helpful, patient, outgoing

Good knowledge of Chinese culture

Duties

Teach Chinese＆introduce Chinese culture

Show exchange students around Nanjing

Working hours

4:00 p.m.-5:00 p.m. Wednesday, 8:00 a.m.-12:00 am. Sunday

Contact Info.

Ms. Yang Email: iindayang@https://www.doczj.com/doc/ea16408186.html,

Join us!

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数80左右，自荐信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．

Dear Ms. Yang

I would to be a sunshine volunteer. ______________________________________________

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Ms. Yang,

I would like to be sunshine volunteer.First I am good at both English and Chinese.And I am sure I can teach exchange students Chinese well.I am also helpful and I am always ready to help those in need.Besides,I am patient enough everything in detail.i have such a good knowledge of the Chinese culture that can help them know the beauty of it.I can make good plans for their trips because I know Nanjing well.I am outgoing and I think it’s easy for me to make friends with them,I am free from 4:00p.m. to 5:00p.m. on Wednesday.I can teach them Chinese during this time.I can also spend the whole Sunday morning showing them around Nanjing.

I will be very happy if I am chosen to be a volunteer.Iam really looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达是写一封作学校“阳光志愿者”的自荐信。

【详解】

这是篇材料作文。招募广告即写作的主要内容，考生可从自己是否满足招募要求入手。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

11．（·陕西西北工业大学附属中学中考模拟）假如你是李华，初中生活即将结束，在步入高中学校学习之际，你思绪万千。请你根据下面的提示，写一封信表达你对老师由衷的感激。

提示：1. 生活上的照顾 2.精种上的支持 3. 学习上的帮助要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、班级）

4. 词数：不少于 80 词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear teachers,

My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, I'd like to show my thanks to you for what you’ve done to me these years.

【答案】My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, I'd like to show my thanks to you for what you’ve done to me these years. You take great care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of me. I'm very grateful. When I encounter difficulties, you always encourage me to face them bravely and help solve them. You supports me in sperm. when I have difficulties in studying , You are always willing to help me.

【解析】

【详解】

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【点睛】

这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如：You take great care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of me.给文中增色

不少。

12．（·杭州市清河中学中考模拟）小明在朋友圈发了一段文字，表达了自己的苦恼，假如你是他的朋友，请回复他，表达你的观点，并给他一些你的建议。要求不少于80个字。

Hi, Xiao Ming!

【答案】例文Hi, Xiao Ming!

In my opinion, you have to take a long talk with your parents. On the one hand, You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself. Interest comes first, and one can do better in everything if it is connected with their interest. So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s j ust the very beginning to enter an art school.

On the other hand, you should be understanding with your parents because they really care about you. They want you to be better. But everything may happen if you attend Zhong Kao. If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized. That’s the worse thing nobody wants to see.

Simply put, keep your dream! Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in my opinion，have to do，take a long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。而并列结构Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that

you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and yo ur parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

13．（·江苏中考模拟）为提升南京城市形象，我市已启动老小区出新改造工程。假设你是 Tim，请根据下面表格内容的提示，用英文向你的外国笔友 Jack 做简单的介绍。

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing.

_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________

【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old communities can do what they can do to renovate our communities.

【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达是描述老社区改造工程，话题较新。

【详解】

这是篇材料作文，所给的内容要点给的比较零碎，不完整，所以考生需要结合实际情况补充完整，是文章内容充实。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

14．（·河北中考模拟）书面表达

初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......

请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：（1）What was the event?

（2）How did you make it?

（3）What’s your feeling?

要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win

Hello,

everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____

Thank you for your listening.

【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win

Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.

When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.

To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.

Thank you for your listening.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

15．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

假定你今天是英语课上的值日生，请根据表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。

要求：（1）报告必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节，但不要逐条翻译；

（2）报告的开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数），你只需接着写；

（3）词数在80-100左右。参考词汇：捐赠 donate 希望工程 the Project Hope

Hello, Everyone! Here are some important things that happened this week.

____________________________

【答案】Hello, Everyone! Here are some important things that happened this week. Let me tell you something about the speech contest. My classmate- Lijia has kept practicing spoken English these days. With the help of the teacher, she worked so hard that she won the first place in the English speech contest on Wednesday afternoon.

And now let’s talk about the good things that happened in our class. 200 books, 50 school bags and 4200 yuan were donated for the project Hope. In addition, Li Ming got ill on Monday and our monitor sent him to the hospital in person.

Our colorful school life brings us so much happiness that we will remember the days forever. That’s all, thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

本题是一篇材料作文，假定你今天是英语课上的值日生，请根据表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。本文人称主要是第一和第三人称，使用的时态有一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时和一般将来时，一定注意时态的转换。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含所给要

点，，条理清楚，字数80-100左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

大家好！以下是本周发生的一些重要事件。我来告诉你一些演讲比赛的情况。我的同学李佳这些天一直在练习口语。在老师的帮助下，她努力工作，在周三下午的英语演讲比赛中获得了第一名。

现在我们来谈谈我们班上发生的好事。为“希望工程”捐赠了200本书、50个书包和4200元。另外，李明周一生病，班长亲自送他去医院。

我们丰富多彩的学校生活带给我们如此多的幸福，我们将永远记住这些日子。

就这些，谢谢！

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

16．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请根据以下提示点谈谈你的想法。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；

2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；

3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；

4. 接下来你打算……参考词汇：cherish珍惜open up o ne’s eyes开阔眼界

要求：

1. 字数80-100个；

2. 开头已经给出不计入总词数；

3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。

When I have trouble with my best friend

There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday.

_______________________________________________________________________________ ______

__________________________________________________________________

【答案】When I have trouble with my best friend

There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something

about myself. Last Sunday my best friend Lisa lost my favourite book that was a birthday present from my mother. The book is very meaningful for me. What’s more, she didn’t apologize to me about this, I felt quite sad. I love reading, because it can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge. I cherish every book of mine and they are my treasure.

So I am going to have a serious talk with Lisa in order to tell her my true feelings. I think we can buy a new one and read it together. In fact, understanding is the most important thing between friends.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据题干“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍和好友闹矛盾的一件事情。

第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么会和好友有矛盾。

这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；

2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；

3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；

4. 接下来你打算……

第三部分：总结全文——好友之间应该互相理解。

17．（·云南中考模拟）假如你叫李华, 三年的初中生活即将结束, 你将迎来漫长的暑假, 你的笔友Peter写信来询问你的暑假计划。请根据表格中所给的基本信息给你的笔友回信, 告诉他你的暑假计划。

要求：

1. 回信必须包含表格中的所有信息, 并可适当发挥, 字数在80字左右, 开头和结尾不计入总字数。

2. 回信中不得出现真实的人名和校名, 否则将以零分计。

3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上, 如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分。

Dear peter,

Li Hua

【答案】例文Dear peter ,

Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it.

Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven’t see them for a long time, I miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, as we all know, both cities are so beautiful and important, I believe I can learn a lot by travelling. After coming back, I will learn senior subjects by myself to get ready for the coming senior school, because I dream to go to a famous university.

That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours.

Yours

Lihua

【解析】

【详解】

本文分三个自然段。第一段点出文章主题you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it。第二自然段用Firstly，Then ，After coming back有序列出三个计划。文章结尾用That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours总结。另外，文中为第一人称，时态主要为一般将来时will visit my grandparents，I am going to take trip，I will learn senior subjects等。

18．（·北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计人总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①

假如你是李华，明天下午2:00你要去参加“传统文化才艺展示”活动，因此不能上英语课。请用英文给你们的外教John写一张请假条，告诉他你要去干什么，为什么要参加这个活动以及你保证按时完成作业。

提示词语:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help

提示问题:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?

Why will you take this activity?

How will you finish your homework?