2015年考研英语作文模拟试卷及答案
一、考研英语(一)作文模拟试卷
模拟题一：
PART A
Directions:
Write an email to the editor of your local newspaper, stating your point of view on reading extensively.
预测范文
Dear Editors,
I have been reading your newspaper for many years with great enthusiasm and interest. Now I would like to render my own idea on reading extensively.
Nowadays few of us read extensively after we leave school. This tendency is rather disturbing, for one should know that reading extensively are no less necessary to one’s mental life than fresh air to one’s physical life. From reading extensively, we can derive companionship, experience and instruction. First and foremost, a good book is our faithful friend. It can increase our contentment when we are cheerful and happy, and lessen our pain when we are sad or lonely. Furthermore, reading extensively can also offer us a wide range of experiences.
Though with the advent of TV and Internet, books are no longer read as extensively as they once were, nothing can replace the role that reading extensively plays in our lives.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
尊敬的编辑：
多年来我一直怀着极大的热情和兴趣阅读贵报。现在我想关于读书问题提出我自己的看法。
当今我们中很少有人离开学校后再坐下来读书。这种倾向令人担忧，因为我们知道，书籍对人的精神犹如空气对人的身体同样是十分必需的。从读书中我们可以得到伴侣，得到经历，受到教益。首先，一本好书就是我们一个忠实的朋友。当我们高兴和幸福时，书能增添我们的快乐;当我们伤心和孤独时，书能减轻我们的痛苦。其次，书还能向我们提供各种经历。
虽然随着电视、手机和网络的出现，读书的人没有以前多了，但没有什么东西可以取代书籍在我们生活中的作用。
PART B
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay,you should
1)describe the drawing briefly.
2)explain its intended meaning, and
3)give you comments.
预测范文
If given the choice, a great many people would change at least one aspect of their appearance. As is depicted in the drawing, a young lady is requesting a doctor to give her a straighter nose, bigger lips, smaller chin, slimmer figure, and so on. One option that has gained tremendous popularity in recent decades is plastic surgery, the branch of surgery dealing with therapeutic or cosmetic reformation of body issue.
Firstly, one’s appearance is the God’s blessing, and has been one part of our body. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, many of them are found mammary gland disease. The more serious effect is that they risk being unable to breast feed. Secondly, the advocating for such a practice will mislead people in the judgment of beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in
its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, and so on, which should be the real mainstream of our spiritual life. The practice and some contests about man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop correct concept of beauty.
Concerning the above possible harms the practice may bring about, we are strongly against it and advocate seeking true and natural beauty. Besides, people, especially women, should lay more attention on the cultivation of their inner hearts. The inner beauty outweighs the outside beauty in the long run.
参考译文
如果可以选择的话，很多人至少要改变他们相貌的一个方面。如图所示，一位女士正在请求一位医生给她更笔挺的鼻子、大点儿的嘴唇、小点儿的下巴、更苗条的身段等等。最近几十年来，一个极其受欢迎的选择就是整容手术——治疗或美容性的修正人体组织的外科手术的一个分支。
首先，人的外表是上天的赐予，而且是我们身体的一个部分。在丰胸手术之后，很多女性看起来比以前更加性感。然而，她们中的很多人发现有乳腺疾病。更严重的后果就是他们冒着无法哺乳的风险。其次，提倡这种行为将误导人们对美的判断。美的观念内容非常丰富。它应该包括例如诚实、勤奋等很多美德，这才应该是我们精神生活中真正的主流。这种行为以及关于整容的比赛将误导人们拥有正确的美的观念。
考虑到这种行为可能带来的上述危害，我们强烈反对整容，并提倡追求真实自然的美。其次，人们尤其是女性应该更加重视培养内在的心灵。长远看来，内在美超出外在美。
模拟题二
PART A
Directions:
Suppose you are a college student, write an email to apply for a student loan.
预测范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a third year student majoring in history at the Beijing Normal University and seek your assistance to help me finance this final year of my course.
This year, I need more time for my studies and have had to cut back on the outside jobs. I want to get as good a pass mark as I possibly can hence; I have made studying my priority. This is the reason I seek your help through a student loan.
I am not exactly sure of the rules and conditions related to a student loan and would appreciate it if you could send me the details for repayments, the interest rates applicable and the periods for which loans are available. Thank you in anticipation of your assistance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
尊敬的先生或女士：
我是北京师范大学历史专业三年级的一名学生，给你写信请您在经济上给予我帮助，使我完成三年级的课程。
今年我需要很多学习的时间，因此要减少校外兼职工作。我想尽可能努力学习通过考试，所以我要以学习为重。以上就是我向您寻求帮助、申请助学贷款的理由。
我对助学贷款的条件和规定不太了解，如果您能给我及有关还款额、利率、期限的详细信息，我将不胜感激。期待您的援助!非常感谢!
您真诚的，
李明
PART B
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay,you should
1)describe the drawing briefly.
2)explain its intended meaning, and
3)give you comments.
预测范文
As is shown in the picture above, raising up his head, a young boy is holding a glorious sun with his firm hand. The caption indicates that “With dreams, our heart can fly high; with flight, our dreams will not be far away”.
Some people think that dream is good for success while others argue that it is not so good because it may get people unrealistic. Obviously, dream is necessary in our life only if it is encouraging and realistic. First and foremost, there is power in dream. The dream can lead people to the path they want to go on and it gives us passion. The dream can be enthusiastic love of life that puts sparkle in our eyes, a lilt in our steps and smoothes the wrinkles from our souls. Furthermore, we are born with wide-eyed, enthusiastic wonder as anyone knows who has ever seen an infant’s delight at the jingle of keys or the scurrying of a beetle. It is this childlike wonder and dream that gives enthusiastic people such a youthful air, no matter how old they are. Lastly, people with dreams also love what they do, regardless of money or power or title.
In short, God gives each bird its food, but he does not throw it into its nest. Wherever you want to go, just cherish your precious dreams and let your dream be realized.
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如图所示，一个小男孩抬起头，正在用坚定的手托举着一颗辉煌的太阳。文字说明显示：“有了梦想，我们的心有了飞翔。有了飞翔，我们的梦想不再遥远”。
有些人认为梦想对成功有好处，而其他人认为由于梦想可能使人们不太现实，因此梦想没什么好处。显而易见，只有在梦想鼓舞人心并非常现实的情况下，梦想才对我们的生活是必须的。首先，梦想拥有力量。梦想可以引领人们走上他们想选择的道路，并且给予我们激情。梦想可以是对生活的热爱，使我们的眼中熠熠闪光，使我们的步伐轻快，抚慰我们灵魂的创伤。其次，我们生来就拥有天真热情的惊喜之情，任何人只要曾经见过婴儿对于钥匙叮当声或甲虫爬行的快乐，都会深有体会。正是这种孩子似的惊喜和梦想，才赋予热情的人们一种青春的气息，无论他们岁数多大。最后，拥有梦想的人们不顾金钱、权利或职位，也热爱他们的所作所为。
总之，世界上有许许多多的机会，但我们必须自己去把握。无论你想做什么，珍惜你可贵的梦想并让梦想实现。
二、考研英语(二)作文模拟
PART A
Directions:
Write to a company, and apply for a post advertised in a newspaper.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have read your advertisement in China Daily on 9 December for the post of Accountant, and would be grateful if you could consider me favorably as an applicant for the position.
My professional training and experience all contribute to my qualifications for the job. I graduate from the Department of Accounting in Guanghua Management School of Beijing University in 2013. You will note from my enclosed resume that I was awarded First-prize scholarship four times for my outstanding academic performance. After graduation, I worked as an accountant in Beijing New Oriental Education and Technology Group. I hope that such working experience can be taken into favorable consideration.
I have enclosed a resume for your reference. I would like to extend my heartfelt appreciation if you could let me know the result of my application in due course. (138 words)
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
参考译文
尊敬的先生或女士：
我在12月9日的中国日报上看到您对于会计职位的招聘。并且非常感谢您能好心考虑我作为该职位的申请人。
我的教育背景和经历都使我非常胜任该职位。2013年我毕业于北京大学光华管理学院会计系。从我附上的简历中，您会看到由于出色的学习成绩，我曾四次获得一等奖学金。毕业后，我在北京新东方教育科技集团担任会计。我希望您能好心考虑我的工作经历。
我附上了一份简历供您参考。如果您能让我适时知道申请结果，我将衷心感谢。
您真诚的，
张伟
PART B
Directions
Write an essay based on the following chart in your writing, you should
1)interpret the chart, and
2)give your comments
You should write about 150 words.
预测范文
The bar chart above illustrates the various reasons that college students find it increasingly difficult in getting jobs. From the perspective of employers, the
lack of practical experience, excessive expectations and financial crisis ranks the first, accounting for 57.1%, 42.3% and 36.9% respectively.
The job market for college graduates is getting tighter and tighter. To begin with, with the social competition becoming keener, college graduates should be well-equipped with practical experience which suits the demand of the society. Otherwise, they will fond no place for themselves. Unfortunately, the majority of them lack adequate practical ability and operative skills. What is more, another reason is connected with their attitude towards employment. A large number of graduates put earnings above anything else. They aim at the well-paid position in foreign corporations or big banks and set a standard as high as RMB 5,000 for their monthly salary. Since below that they won’t accept any job, many opportunities have been lost. Obviously, if they have realistic expectation of how much they should earn in the beginning of their career, it won’t be difficult for them to get a job.
With the increasing college population, employment for graduates will become more serious. Among many solutions, having a correct attitude toward it is an extremely crucial one.
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上述柱状图揭示了大学生就业难的各种原因。在用人单位看来，缺乏实践经验、期望值过高和金融危机排在前列，分别占57.1%、42.3%和36.9%。
大学毕业生就业市场正在变得日益严峻。首先，现代社会激烈的竞争促使大学毕业生更应掌握实践经验，以适应社会的需要，否则他们将无立足之地。不幸的是，大多数学生实际操作和动手能力较差。其次，另一个原因与他们对工作的态度有关。很多毕业生把收入放在首位。他们旨在外企或大银行的高薪职位，设定的标准高达月收入5000人民币。在此之下他们不接受任何工作，很多机会因此流失。显而易见，如果他们在就业之初就对他们的收入有更加实际的期待，他们就不难找到工作。
随着大学生人数日益增加，毕业生就业问题变得日益严重。在这些解决方案中，拥有正确的态度最为重要。
What is vividly revealed in the picture above is that water is being reused in daily life at home. After washing rice, the water，can be used to wash vegetables and then water，the plants. What a harmonious It is not difficult to find that what the picture intends to express is the importance of saving a and protecting resources．On the one hand, as we all know, water resource is unrenewable and water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being. On ,the other hand, the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford Lo waste it. Water resource is not only indispensable in our daily life but also in industry and agriculture. -h is hard to imagine what the world would be like when there is no more water. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention. But, this is not adequate. As is shown in the above picture, what we need is more actions to save and protect resources! First of all, social environment is shaped by the general public, and the cultivation of conservation-minded society depends on the active involvement of every member of our society, be he old or young. Accordingly, an education campaign should be launched to call on people from all walks of life to save and protect resources. In addition, saving and protecting resources is bound up with our daily life. We , college students, should spare no effort to save valuable energy and natural resource such as power, water, coal, gas and so on. Only by the joint efforts of the whole society, can we create a real conservation-minded society.
考研英语写作三段论：第一段---描述图画或图表 第二段---解释寓意 第三段---给出评论 第一段： 第一句 1、As is shown above , 描述图画（倒装）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。 描述图画注意： 第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。 第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。 第三部; 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。 模式：在图画中央有------(倒装)，它-------（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-----（独立主格作状语） 第二句----总结 ①The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看 穿其肤浅的含义。 ②The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself , but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真实
目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着 什么。 第二段 第一句----观点的提出 (1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the 重要主题 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said , is this phenomenon more obvious . (2) The picture does revel certain disturbing social phenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that 有害主题 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is not only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and opening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the same time , with the above one being the foremost .在过去的 十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但 同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。（或In no country other than china , it has been said m is this problem more serous . ） 万能观点： ①图画主题的重要性 Nothing can be compared with··· ···is not only necessary , but also indispensable ··· ···remains to be an integral part in···
历年英语?一作?文真题 2017年 ?小作?文 Directions: You are to write an email to James Cook, a newly-arrived Australia professor, recommending some tourist attraction in your city. Please give reason for you recommendation. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the email. Use instead. Do not write the address. (10 points). ?大作?文 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture in your essay, you should 1. describe the pictures briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and 3. give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
?小作?文 Suppose you are a librarian in your university. Write a notice of about 100 words, providing the newly-enrolled international students with relevant information about the library. You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead Do not write the address .(10 points) ?大作?文 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture in your essay, you should 1. describe the pictures briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and 3. give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
一、社会民风问题(诚信、节约、食品安全) 互信 mutual trust 诚信 credibility 品德 morality 创新 innovation 共赢 all-win 欺诈 fraud 代价 cost 社会文明 social civilization 假冒伪劣产品 fake commodities 社会危害 harm to society 学术造假 academic cheating 诚实为上策 Honestly is the best policy. 减少浪费 reduce waste 促进改革 promote reform 减轻负担reduce the burden of…… 调整产业结构 adjust the industrial structure 物质文明、精神文明一起抓pay equal attention to the material progress and cultural progress 形成文明、健康、崇尚科学的良好社会风尚 form civilized, healthy and science-upholding social practice 二、道德问题(尊老【扶不扶】、爱幼、奉献爱心) 伦理 ethics，moral principle 道德 moral，morality 逃避责任 shirk the duty, shun the responsibilities 中国文化传统美德 traditional virtue of Chinese culture 经济支持financially support, 严厉惩罚 severely punish 培养意识 cultivate the awareness, 遏制不良现象 curb evil phenomenon 虐待 mistreatment, be ill-treated, be neglected, be reduced to utter poverty 老年人 aged father, senior citizens, old and helpless parents, elderly people, the old 三、科技对生活带来的改变(科技发展、纸质书与电子书、电子商务发展、在线教育、交流沟通方式的改变、网络与生活、网恋、个人隐私泄露) 网恋cyber romance 网购online shopping 团购Group shopping 秒杀Sec-kill 网店online shop/store 信誉credit
新东方在线考研 [https://www.doczj.com/doc/e45418904.html, ]网络课堂电子教材系列 1 2015考研英语作文三段式结构写作技巧 2015考研时间将近，最后那场角逐厮杀的气味相信考生们已经嗅到了，无论你对之前的备考是满怀壮志还是心理敲鼓，到了真正上考场的危急时刻，考生们都会爆发出强大的力量，积极调动出大脑中蕴藏的所有超能量。怎样使考场作文结构完整?下面就带各位考生来学习一下怎样使考场作文结构更加完整，更加精彩，更能获得阅卷老师的亲睐。 一、三段成文，段段紧扣主旨 考研英语大作文一般为图画作文，可安排为三段式结构，每个段落都为图中所表达的中心主旨服务。 1.第一段：考生应根据所给的漫画的文字叙述内容，提炼漫画的主题。漫画的主题来源于漫画中展现的内容及解释漫画的文字叙述。根据要求拟定文章提纲，确定文章结构以及思想。第一段的主要内容为图画描述以及全篇文章的中心主旨句。 2.第二段：分两至三个分论点，文中可以附加例子来对中心论点进行论证和照应。 3.第三段：总结作者独特观点，在此深化印章中心论点，并提出建议、建议的原因以及解决措施。 二、段首点睛，写好中心主旨句 各个段首是做文章最重要的句子，一方面句首一般为段落的中心主旨句，在对图画进行整体和细节的描述之后，对整个段落进行总结，提炼出中心主旨句。另一方面，段首是阅卷老师首先看到的句子，阅卷老师的“第一眼”直接决定了考生的作文成绩。闪光的段首句可以画龙点睛，从而提高整体的作文分数。 三、尾句升华，完美展现功底 结尾句与段首句同样重要，有一个好的结尾总述段落，回扣全文的中心主旨，是一篇文章结构完成与否的重要前提。同样，段尾句也是阅卷老师落眼的“宝地”，漂亮的结尾是能让考生英语功底良好的展现出来。要写好段落结尾句，首先应该做到没有语病，其次是语言表述够新颖，最后，做到升华主旨，让文章完美收官。 认为只有以上三点才可称得上=是一篇完整的结构完整、优秀的闪光考研英语作文。当然英语表达的地道与否也十分重要。 骐骥一跃，不能十步;驽马十驾，功在不舍。成功的秘诀从来不在于一蹴而就，而在于你是否能够持之以恒。8天，只要坚持还可以改变很多。最危急时才是见血封喉的最后一击，不到成绩公布的那一刻，谁都不能下最后定论。希望今天的讲解能让考生在考场上完成一篇结构完整的精彩作文。预祝各位考生金榜题名!
考研英语作文复习攻略 一、字体 常用字体如意大利斜体，多数考生好几年也没有能够通过简单练习变得工整清晰，能做到的只有少部分人。原因很简单，这类字体的练习需要的技巧性更强，难度还是要高一些，而且极容易出现写作速度一快就潦草。一句话，多数普通考生驾驭不了。而印刷体的优势在于，练习掌握很容易。因为没有连笔，弧度等过多要求，所以，任何字体写得好都很不错，而你能否写好这是一个很大的问题。对于大多数人不想在字体上浪费太多时间来说首先要做到的是字体的工整清晰大方，如果对美感有追求就只能多练并且能保证书写的速度。 一篇作文，判卷的老师是投放在投影仪上进行批改的，投影仪会放大优势同时也放大劣势。所以你写的好看工整，放映出来也是工整的，不管你的内容如何，疲倦的判卷老师看到如此美好的事物也是带着欣赏的心情去批阅的。但是如果的你的字迹潦草，那么老师不管你写的内容如何，都不会很耐心的去阅读，甚至只会看上两眼给个差不多的分数就可以了。所以字体的好看也是你的加分技能哦! 二、打好基础 积累足够的词汇和短语以及长难句作为足够的作文素材，和中文作文一样，背诵是提高英语实力和考研分数的方法之一，背到滚瓜烂熟，能够脱口而出，把别人的东西加入自己的理解进行二次创作是最简便的得分方式。 审题申准，个人认为作文分为五大类（社会公德类、个人品质类、科技产品类、双漫画对比类、环境类）根据这五大类结合学习到的作文模板创作好自己的模板，把这些模板背的滚瓜烂熟后用真题进行锻炼，然后再用模拟题进行练习，一个真题用不同的模板套入其中进行写作，再用最适宜的模板进行写作增加你对模板套用的理解和灵活性。提高考场的效率，专注于写作文上，省去思考和组织语言的时间并专注于把字写的漂亮一些。这里引用何凯文老师的一句话“考研短文的中心论点通常就是‘主题很重要’或者‘主题很有害’”，进一步把考研作文锁定在一个极小的范围内，运用高级词汇代替基础词汇对老师的评分也会有一定的提升。 三、做题技巧 正如前文所说，大家不一定要按照试卷安排的顺序去做题，做题的先后次序可以按照实际情况调整。一般来说，最前面的题目是完形填空，但众所周知，完型的分值相对较少，难度却并没有比其他来的容易，而且相信大家在完型上也遭遇过不少挫败，所以大家可以把这类题目稍微往后放，把相对充裕的时间留给分值较高的作文和阅读理解。不仅是英语，其他科目也要采取类似的做题方法，因为毕竟考研也是一次考试，既然是考试就需要一定的应试技巧，所谓应试技巧，说白了就是将你的分值尽量放大的方法，自己调整做题的顺序就是其
2017年考研英语作文高分的标准 考研英语中的作文是中的重点，也是分数最高的题。那么该怎么拿高分呢?下面给大 家整理了一些技巧，希望对大家有所帮助。 一、高分作文的四个标准 1、主题准确。考研英语作文不会明确告诉你文章的明确主题是什么，而只会通过图片、图表、只言片语暗示你，你需要根据仅有的信息作出判断，做到不曲解、不过分延伸，直接准确地把主题思想出来，这是必须做到的第一步。 2、结构清晰有层次。好的文章必须结构清晰、有层次。就大作文来说，一般需要分 为三部分。第一部分描述图片或图表，引出话题，提出论点;第二部分展开论述，分析原 因或表达不同观点;第三部分上升一个高度，提出解决办法或发出呼吁等。各部分之间有 一个层层递进的关系。 3、词句出彩。词句是文章的基本构成，在写作过程中，有意识地使用一些高大上的 词汇，替换常见表达，尽量写出一些从句、复合句、强调句、倒装句等特殊句式，同时注意长短句结合，表达流畅有节奏，会给文章大大地增色、加分。 4、卷面整洁。卷面在考试中非常重要，如果一篇文章通篇都是涂改，或字迹歪斜潦草，哪怕文章本身写得再好，也很难得高分。这就需要平时养成良好的写作习惯，先打腹稿或草稿，下笔谨慎，落笔少涂改，保证卷面整洁。 二、如何写出高分作文? 1、攻克语法。要想写出高分，必须有亮点，在考研英语中这个亮点就是：长句子。 如果通篇都是平实的短句或平句，起伏不大，很难迎合阅卷老师的胃口，相反，写出几个有水平的高逼格的句子，瞬间就能提升档次，绝对是实力的证明。因此，语法这一关，必须要攻克，强调句、倒装句、各种各样的从句，平时多练习写一写，考场上绝对能为作文加分。 2、培养语感。许多小伙伴会感到写英语作文非常难，经常无话可说，或有话表达不 出来。如果换成是汉语写作，相信每个人都能滔滔不绝，但换成英语就怂了，这就是缺乏语感的原因。想要培养语感，需要做到：多阅读。建议小伙伴在复习过程中遇到好的文章，可以在晨读时间多读几遍，读得多了，也就读得顺了，语感自然能培养起来，写作文时离“下笔如有神”也就不远了。 3、积累模板。考研英语作文的类型一共就那么几种，小作文无非就是书信、摘要、 备忘录、报告、便笺，大作文无非就是提纲型、图表型、图画型、情景型等。每种类型都
交通问题 How horrible the traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①. Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。 Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment. On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。 Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。 佳作妙译 交通状况真是一团糟!这幅漫画描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的场景。实际上，交通堵塞严重到了一定程度，与其说这是一条拥挤的街道，还不如说这是一个停车场。焦急的乘客等不到数量稀少的公交车，而私家车却到处都是。 虽然这幅图有点夸张，但是当今这种现象并不罕见。私家车的增多必然产生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通压力会给人民生活带来不便，也会对环境造成负面影响。一方面，一旦发生堵车，原来很近的路程似乎变得十分漫长，除了等没有别的办法，大量的宝贵时间被浪费在路上。另一方面，汽车排放的尾气更增加了环境的负担、导致了碳排放，这和低碳生活的理念相违背。 因此，应该采取有效措施缓解严重的交通堵塞问题。第一，通过提高税费限制私家车拥有率(保有量)。第二，应该鼓励和推广低碳的公交车、地铁等公共交通工具，以便我们拥有更顺畅的交通。 名师点评 ①it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的结构，通过字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。 翻译的时候，往往翻译成：与其说是B，不如说是A。 反过来，当我们想用英语表达“与其……不如……”的时候，我们可以采用这个结构。 实际上，这个结构在模拟题阅读中曾多次出现。如2000年Text 3中的选项：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。 ②With the number of private cars increasing: with 短语表伴随，翻译成“随着”。 ③exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是过去分词短语作后置定语。 相当于定语从句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽车排放的尾气)。
英语专业考研作文 篇一：2015考研英语大作文写作十大必背模板 2015考研英语大作文写作十大必背模板 新东方在线 距离2015考研还有60余天，考研复习进入了最后冲刺阶段，新东方在线 考研英语教研室建议大家这一阶段不仅要坚持练习真题，更要开始加重大、小作 文的练习力度。 但新东方在线考研写作辅导专家王江涛提醒大家，英语写作的短时提分，主 要是靠写作技巧，而不是纯粹的写作能力的提高，比如在道长考研英语写作白金 单项班及道长考研英语（二）写作白金单项班中，主要从写作技巧的角度为大家 阐释如何写作，争取到能力范围内最高的分数，所谓应试，要效率就必须采用这 样的学习思路。 写作类型
首先，根据作文内容可将其分为10大类。其实从文章功能来看，我们可把 这10大类文章归为三种类型：解决问题、论证观点、阐述现象。其中第一类具 有解决问题功能的短文包括了：1、身体健康类；2、职业道德类； 3、人口增长 类；4、环境保护类；第二类具有论证观点功能的短文包括了：5、情感类；6、 人生价值类；第三类具有阐述现象功能的短文包括了：7、文化交流类；8、教育 类；9、家庭关系类；10、社会热点类。 其次，除了以上三项常考功能模板，我们还将在本部分的最后列出两个具有 对比论证功能的模板。虽然自从1997 年以来的历年短文题目中没有出现要求进 行对比论证的话题，但是考生仍然应该有所准备。 最后，新东方在线全国研究生入学考试研究中心为大家准备了以下作文模 板，供大家参考学习。 ? 功能I：解决问题 这种类型的文章主要针对一些实际的问题分析其原因和后果，最后提出解决的措施。一
般情况下三段的分布为：第一段描述图画内容，第二段分析问题所在，第三段提出解决方案。 1、身体健康类 The picture What is strikingly noticeable is but it can be easily explained by shown in the picture. The discern able unhealthiness discloses a prevalent phenomenon that has long existed in the China’s . As a result, the integration of poor living conditions and work pressure leads naturally to their poor health and short life-span, just as the picture tells us. The situation is rather depressing because, and it is largely owing to. To solve the problem, I think there should be a thriving social trend , and those who should be rewarded with good living and working conditions. 2、职业道德类 We can see from the picture that If . There are three reasons to explain why it happens to. Firstly, , which resulted from. Secondly, though . I maintain that effective measures should be taken to put an end
2017年考研英语万能作文模板 考研作文三大高分句型：短句拉长，插入语，并列结构。 红色为填入模板的词，黄色为临时加的句子，可以不加，加上效果更好。 第一段 Here demonstrates a chart with regard to the?diverse ｛细化的产品｝quantity of｛总的产品｝（of后的可加可不加） ｛细化的产品｝proportion of｛总的产品｝（of后的可加可不加） range from ｛年份｝to｛年份｝。 ｛几种｝distinct peoples，｛详细1｝，｛详细2｝，｛详细3｝respectively。 in｛某个假日或某次活动某次事情｝。 As is shown in the thought-provoking chart above，the change/ proportion of{一种产品或现象} was obvious，which had picked?up significantly from {多少份额/数量}in{年份} to {多少份额/数 量}in{年份}。 occupied roughly {多少份额} of the whole{产品或现象}。 In comparison，the{另一种产品或现象} declined/increase?only from?{多少份额}?to?{多少份额}。 occupied only {多少份额或数量} involved。 During?this?period，what’s?more，the?{另另一种产品或现象} remained stable。
第二段 Why does this phenomenon revealed in the chart above？（疑问句加分点）There are numerous reasons accounting for it and I would like to explore a few of the most extraordinary ones here。Above all，I am strongly convinced that since technology and science progressing quickly in the past three decades（短句拉长加分点），some people give plenty of priority to material possessions and personal interests，therefore，a growing/increasing number of people prefer to do{原因一}。In addition，this is partly due to the fact that{原因二}。 第三段 In line with my personal thinking，there is one major equation are two major equations ought to be taken into account seriously（并列结构加分点）。On one hand，the general people ought to do{建议} reasonably。What is more，the relevant department ought to increase the benefit for people。Only if this measure these measures are/is adopted effectively can we live a better life。
大作文我就是根据这个模板，然后自己修改了点，感觉这模板”万能”。之前一直觉得两百单词怎么拼也拼不出，看完这个后我是觉得两百很容易写了，优势还超过二三十多个单词。 其次就是多背点英语阅读中的比较好的句型，到时写作用到上面。 17句搞定考研英语作文所谓万能这个概念，如果大家都去这么用的话，就等于没有用了。PartB部分是有的，但是partA没有，PartB可以基本上把这个文章全写完的一个模板方式。万能模板，你这么想，大家告诉我，只要一个题目能够转变成一社会现象之后，最好准备两到三套大的万能无敌模式。关于万能模式的几个问题： 一、我们选用的句子的灵活性强，经过了精心的选择 二、句型都是五星级,并在开头和长短句子方面有设计,并注意语法的丰富,每句话语法都不同. 三、我们选的句子与市面的任何资料都不同 四、很多同学说写的一样是否是雷同，不大可能，因为很难分到一个考场批判危害性的框架 1.总共写十七个句子. 第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。 (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ，(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主题should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势 第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用“not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替“for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。 (1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the
3、写作方法 从2010年开始，英语(二)大作文只有两点提纲，但最好写成三段，首段描述图表，首句应写总体描述：主题(春节假期花销比例)+对象(我国某市居民)。次句应写细节描述，分别描述占比最高的新年礼物和其次的交通、聚会吃饭与其他。第二段最好写成原因列举，首句可写主题句，承上启下进行过渡。其次具体说明二至三点原因，可写为何新年礼物花销最大或交通、聚会吃饭也占据一些比例。第三段可预测图表发展趋势、进行归纳结论或提出建议措施。 4、注意事项 值得注意的是，2015年考研英语(二)答题卡出现了重大变化，一张A3纸，正面左侧为客观选择题，含完形填空、阅读A节、阅读B节，右侧为翻译。反面左侧为小作文，约20行;右侧为大作文，约20行。大作文写150-230词左右即可，无需太多。 参考范文 大作文 一、不错范文，可供改造 The pie chart above presents the different proportion of residents’ consumption in a Chinese city during Spring Festival. To be specific, the percentage of consumption on New Year’s gifts, party, traffic and others is 40%, 20% , 20% and 20% respectively. Surprisingly, the pertinent number about gifts is 40%. Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely. Undoubt edly, the purpose of the graph is to showcase the diversity of residents ’ consumption during holidays in China, especially over-consumption on gifts as a frequent way of interpersonal communication. What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? It’s a thought-provoking question. First and foremost, advertisements of mass media, such as radio, television and Internet, might be misleading. Plus,pertinent action taken by the government to put an end to this trend might be little and limit. Therefore, people, men and women, old and young, in mounting numbers are spending too much on holiday gift which floods everywhere. To sum up, there is an upward tendency for people these days to spend money on festival presents rather than other things, which I believe will not change in a short time. To reverse the trend is not a piece of cake, which requires a good awareness of consumption value and interpersonal communication. Only in this way can we have colorful festivals and relaxing times. (223 words)
我用过的考研英语写作模板 一、几篇写作模板。 1、人生哲理问题。 Indicated above is a picture that vividly describes such a scence ,......描述图画内容.......Obviously,what the author wants to convey to us is not the picture itself,but to lead observers to find out what hides behind the iceberg. The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with 独立when it comes to the cultivation of individual characteristics.Due attention to this quality has been attached by individuals and even the whole society, Otherwise, we cannot witness such a prosperity . People with the spirit of 独立 can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status. And it is not hard to notice that without 独立,hardly can individuals make progress , take profits , especially in this fiercely competitive modern world , I argue . That will be a sorry state of affairs . The picture , to some degree , makes us reflect the conventional success and enlightens us to wonder the meaning of lift and its permanent as the essential trait that will entitle us the way to make life meaningful . So the surest way to have a meaningful happy life is to set goals mattering to us and to the world and commit ourselves to striving for it with this quality. 2、无形社会问题反面展开。 Indicated above is a picture that vividly describes such a scence ,......描述图画内容.......Obviously,what the author wants to convey to us is not the picture itself,but to lead observers to find out what hides behind the iceberg. The picture does reveal a disturbing phenomenon that is the lack of 诚信,which is in large measure detrimental not only to thepersonal life, but to the further development of the whole society. More specifically speaking, individuals, enterprises, organizations and even the whole society fail to notice the damaging consequences of dis诚信when undergoing the dramatic social transformation. It is not hard to notice that without 诚信,hardly can individuals or organizations make