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1 时态语态 2五种简单句 3 框架连接词 4变高级：倒装，被动，从句，非谓语，虚拟…..
Yesterday my teacher, Smith saw us playing cards in the classroom. She was so angry that she gave us a
punishment. She asked us to clean our classroom for a week. Everyday we get up at 6 to clean our classroom.
Other students thank us very much.
昨天他的礼物让我很惊讶。
His gift made me surprised yesterday. His gift gave me a surprise yesterday.
His gift surprised me greatly yesterday. I felt surprised for his gift yesterday.
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting
on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language
studies.
Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should
be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship,
we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our class”
Green Action in Our Class
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.
In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. On arrival, we began to
work at once. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them.
After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took
some photos to record our green action.
Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our
environment.
各种时态、语态举例：
He often cleans his room. His room is often cleaned by him.
He cleaned his room yesterday. His room was cleaned by him yesterday.
He is cleaning his room now. His room is being cleaned by him now.
He was cleaning his room at 4 yesterday. His room was being cleaned by him at 4 yesterday.
He will clean his room tomorrow. His room will be cleaned by him tomorrow.
He would clean his room the next day. His room would be cleaned by him the next day.
He has already cleaned his room. His room has been cleaned already by him.
He had cleaned his room by the time I got home. His room had been cleaned by him by the time I got home.
I have been writing a novel recently. 2
各种复合句：
定从
The boy who is standing under the tree is my friend. Return the book which you borrowed
yesterday.
I saw Tom enter the room from whom I borrowed 20 dollars.
名从
That he failed the exam made us surprised. He said that he failed the exam
The fact is that he failed the exam. The news that he failed the exam surprised us.
The news that he told us surprised us.
What he said is wrong. All that he said is wrong. what = all that
Tell me which one you like. (which 哪一个) Give me the book which is one the desk. (which =the
book )
状从
时间 Telephone me the moment you get the results.
when, while, as; the moment, the first time, the year, as soon as, once, no sooner.. than, hardly…when, till, until,
before, after
地点 They are planting trees where there is plenty of water and sunlight. where, wherever
条件 We can surely succeed as long as we are united as one.
if, unless, as long as , so long as, provided that, suppose, on condition that
原因 As there was no answer, I wrote again. Because, since, as, for, not that.
让步 He is unhappy though he has a lot of money.
Though/although; as, even if, even though, while, whether… or…, no matter who, whoever.
方式 Finish the work as I told you. as, as if, as though
目的 Leave your phone number, so that I can call you before I come next time.
so that, in order that, in case, for fear that
结果 The hill is so high that she can’t climb up to the top. so that, so…that, such…that
比较 He is taller than his brother. than, as…as…, the more…, the more…,
非谓语动词：
1）作主语：To help each other is good. =It is good to help each other.
2) 宾语：She wishes to be a doctor.
3) 定语：Is this the best way to help him.
4) 状语：Every morning he gets up very early to read English.
5) 表语：My job is to drive them to the power station every day.
6) 宾补：I saw a little girl run across the street. My father asked us to study hard for our country.
动名词： 构成：doing
1）主语：Swimming is good for us.
