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无锡外国语学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析(1)

无锡外国语学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析(1)
无锡外国语学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析(1)

无锡外国语学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析(1)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1.(·四川中考模拟)书面表达

暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。

注意]

(1)表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;

(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;

(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;

(4)词数:不少于80。

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________

【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.

Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.

In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥.写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内

容,可知本文主要是第三人称,一般现在时态进行叙述.语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯.适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.

【点睛】

这篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

2.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达

近日,你校迎来一批来自英国的交流生,学校组织学生向他们介绍中国的传统文化。请你根据表格信息写一篇题为"Chinese Tea"的英语短文,向英国交流生介绍中国的茶文化。

注意:1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥。

2.词数90左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Chinese Tea

Tea is an important part of Chinese culture.

【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics.

Most Chinese like drinking tea.People often treat friends with tea.They often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a gift.Drinking tea is good for people’s health.A cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.

Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文,题目是Chinese Tea。本文人称主要是第三人称,时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料,认真审题,确定主题,表格信息提示就是本文的提纲要点,根据要点适当发挥,列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容,条理清楚,字数90词左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有连贯性。写完以后,注意再读一遍,看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。本文提纲:

茶是中国文化的重要组成部分。它历史悠久,享誉世界。中国有很多种茶。它们中的每一个都有自己的特点。

大多数中国人喜欢喝茶。人们经常用茶来招待朋友。他们经常给朋友和亲戚买茶作为礼物。喝茶有益于人们的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。

茶不仅有助于外国人了解中国,而且能在东西方之间架起一座桥梁。

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范,时态运用要正确,叙述清楚条里,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。注意书写的规范:大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查:单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法:1.审题:文体,时态,人称。2.抓住要点:要点是否齐全,适当补充。3.扩充句子:通过增加状语,定语,连词,使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文,合理使用连词。5.改正错误:拼写是否错误,语法时态是否正确,连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文:注意书写工整美观整洁。

3.(·甘肃中考模拟)发明创造改变了世界。作为一名中学生.假如你梦想当一名发明家,应该怎样做才能实现梦想呢?请根据下面的漫画提示,以“How to Become an Inventor”为题,写一篇短文。

要求:1. 80词左右,可适当发挥。(文章标题和开头已给出不计人总词数)

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。

How to Become an Inventor?

With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,

【答案】How to Become an Inventor?

With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic

method.It is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of innovation.Second,interesting is the best teacher.Hardly can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the problem.What's more important,Never give up.Keep our belief.That's the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.

What I have list above is my answer to how to become an inventor,and that is what I'll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇话题作文,以“How to Become an Inventor”为题,写一篇短文。

【详解】

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I want to be……,studying hard is……,we need……,That's……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我想要成为一个发明家;接下来介绍为了成为一个发明家,应该如何做;最后指出为了成为一个发明家,我要坚持做下去。此处play an important role in, come true, give up, such as等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达

下面的图片描述了昨天下午发生在四年级三班教室里的情景。小林和小刚之间的对话,让你想到了什么?请根据你对图片的理解,用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。

内容包括:1. 完整描述图片内容; 2. 简要阐述你的观点和看法。写作要求:1. 可以根据图片信息,进行适当的发挥;

2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。提示词:手提电脑 laptop

【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to compare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their

attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文要求我们观察图片,将图片中发生的场景用英语表达出来,是一篇看图作文。首先学生们应仔细观察图片,了解图片中发生的场景,弄清楚它主要想传达的意思,然后用英语将这些内容表达出来。审题可知,这篇短文的内容应主要包括两个部分:首先要描述图片中发生的事情;其次对该事情阐述自己的观点和看法。短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,第三人称来叙述,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意:首先短文内容应符合图片表达的意思,不能会错意,写偏、写错;可以根据图片信息适当发挥,使文章更加充实、完整。其次要注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。用从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。句式结构可以简单句为基础,穿插并列句或复合句结构。为提升作文水平,应注意应用高级词汇和复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分,使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求以及图片信息,介绍了图片中发生的事情,并对这件事发表了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点:首先短文内容符合题目要求,作者通过观察图片,正确了解了图片传达的信息,确定了文章的中心。文章内容完整、充实,叙述清晰、有层次。作者观点明确,理由充分。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般过去时和一般现在时、第三人称来叙述,正确使用了谓语动词的形式,注意了过去式,尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化,语法规范,用词准确。最后短文中句式结构文章,符合英语的表达习惯,简单句、并列句、复合句交替应用,文章富有节奏的变化。短文中还使用了丰富的句型,如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、

But I think it is not proper to compare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.等。

5.(·山东初三)

你知道年最受欢迎、最新潮的健身方式是什么吗?“Plogging”,一边捡垃圾,一边慢跑,正逐渐走进我们的生活。拾荒(clean up trash)、慢跑(jog),不仅促进环境卫生,而且有益身体健康,可谓一举两得。

请结合自己的日常生活经历,用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。

内容包括:1、身体力行,保护环境的事例;坚持锻炼,增强体质的事例。

2、结合事例,谈谈你对目前最环保的运动方式(plogging)的认识,以及怎样从身边小事做起,做生态中国,健康中国的践行者。

注意:1、可以围绕主题,根据要求,进行适当的发挥。

3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my community. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇是材料作文,要求结合自己的日常生活经历,谈谈你对目前最环保的运动方式(plogging)的认识以及怎样从身边小事做起,做生态中国,健康中国的践行者。

【详解】

1.题干解读:本篇材料作文要求以第一人称,谈谈自己对目前最环保的运动方式(plogging)的认识以及结合自己的日常生活经历,谈谈怎样从身边小事做起,做生态中国,健康中国的践行者;陈述现阶段的事情用一般现在时。书写时要注意题干所给的提示材料,成文时要文句通顺,内容完整。

2.例文点评:本例文结构严谨,层次分明。开篇紧扣主题,介绍自己最喜欢的运动是跑步;正文部分顺理成章的介绍plogging这种运动方式以及自己如何身体力行地做到锻炼、环保两不误;结尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.点题,总结全文。文章布局合理,内容完整连贯。

3.高分亮点:

高分短语: so much ; all over the world; run along; take action to;keep ……clean .

高分句型:

1.I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure.

2.Plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running .

3.Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river;

4.To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.

【点睛】

本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题,确定人称(第一人称)和时态(一般现在时);关注题材的格式(记叙文),注意文章的篇章结构;书写时要紧扣主题,做到中心突出,内容完整、连贯;成文后要检查人称、时态是否一致、单词的拼写是否正确、短语和句式的使用是否得当。

6.(·北京中考模拟)题目②

“持之以恒,方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情,都需要持之以恒的精神。

某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事(爱好,习惯……),你是怎样做的,以及你的感受。

提示词语:keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud

提示问题:1. What did you do?

2. How do you feel?

It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.

【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.

When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates,I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes,I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced,I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇是材料作文,根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事;文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

【详解】

1.本篇要求根据所给材料,用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事,根据提示,描写“What did you do?用一般过去时,描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题,文句通顺。

2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”,正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格,通过克服困难、不懈地努力,坚持跑步,到现在比以前会跑;结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响;文章结构清晰,前后呼应。

3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如:固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of;不定式in order to;try my best to;状语从句so…that …;比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等;短语多彩、文句表达多样。

7.(·广东中考模拟)马上要初中毕业了,大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示,写一篇发言稿。

My Life At School

How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.

【答案】My Life At School

How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.

In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My

good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.

I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题,写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具体内容,学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,注意根据表达需要使用正确时态,并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回忆;然后是不开心的事情;最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示,但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语,应把他们变成自己的话,并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意:文章中应包括表格中的所有信息,不能遗漏要点;第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充,注意应合情合理,与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯,用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分,使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,回忆了自己的初中生活,并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点:首先文章内容完整,结构清晰。短文分三段,第一段基本是题目中给出的开头,作者使用一句话引出下文;第二段是主体,介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情;最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理,有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体,表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语,如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

8.(·辽宁中考模拟)(B)根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100

体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:

1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.

2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.

3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.

4.女孩也喜欢运动,希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条.

5.你对运动的观点.

6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字

7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.

8.参考词语:keep slim (保持苗条)

What We Get from Sports

Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in

sports._________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________

【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.

Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.

In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.

【解析】

【详解】

本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法,应该用一般现在时态,写作要点要包括:1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析(多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点)。3.提出自己对运动的观点。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好地完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,主谓一致,在文中使用了时间状语从句,定语从句,特别使用一些亮点词句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,句子通顺,行文连贯。

9.(·浙江中考模拟)书面表达

A small thing

提示:请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文,记叙一件你经历过的小事。

要求:1.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数100左右;

2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名,校名,否则以零分计。

【答案】A small thing

It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father.

This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up.

【解析】

【详解】

本文要记述自己经历过的一件小事, 在时态上用一般过去时。本篇文章,首先开篇点题,指出事情发生的时间及所经历的事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike.中间部分叙述了时间发生的经过,词语at first,However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章浑然一体。最后一段是从这件小事中得出的感悟,It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 对这件小

事进行了总结,更使文章在思想上得到了升华。文章时态使用正确,表达准确,事件本身思路清晰,是一篇不错的文章。

【点睛】

认真审题,看清题目要求,在描述事件时,要注意清晰表达事情发生的开端,内容及结尾。必要时要适当使用连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅,文章最后注意对整个故事进行总结,最好能够从故事中得出自己的感悟,在叙述故事的同时使文章具有思想性。写完文章后注意检查有误单词拼写错误,语法使用错误,字数是否达到要求。

10.(·扬州市梅岭中学中考模拟)

假如你是Liu Bin,请用英语给笔友Bob回复邮件。

注意:1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;

2.要点齐全,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;

3.词数100左右,邮件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Bob,

I’m very glad to know that you will come to our school.

Yours,

Liu Bin

【答案】Dear Bob,

I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school. Let me tell you something about it. Our school is very big and our classroom is very tidy. We go to school five days a week and have six classes every day. There is also an activity class in the afternoon. Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too.

My classmates are very nice. We often help each other. Everyone has his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.

I'm looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Liu Bin

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如be glad to,listen to the music,five days a week,so that,prepare for,for a while,of course,at the weekends,help each other,look forward to等。而固定句型it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.和I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school./ Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better./ Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

11.(·陕西师大附中中考模拟)书面表达

初中就要毕业了,校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李明,请根据要点写一封信,说说你的计划。

要求:1.写作要点都必须用上;紧扣主题,适当发挥;

2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;

4. 词数不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)

Dear editor,

I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________ Yours,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear editor,

I'm very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the evening party.It will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock,on June 22n.I have planned three activities for it.First of a11,we would like to invite our teachers to come.We will give each other gifts and give our best wishes.After that,one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us.In the end,some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together.

This is what we will do.I hope you will choose my plan.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

初中就要毕业了,校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李明,请根据要点写一封信,说说你的计划。本题是一篇图表作文,信息提示简洁明了,但是必要的补充和想象是必不可少的,切忌照信息翻译句子,必须通过适当的连词保证文章通顺,就本题而言,介绍三项活动时,要有必要的顺序词.

【点睛】

文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,如:After that,one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us;In the end,some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together.文章层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。

12.(·宁夏中考模拟)书面表达

难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。假如你是班长,根据以下提示,用英语写一则通知。要点如下:

1. 时间:6月26日下午3:00.

2. 地点:六楼会议室

3. 活动内容:

1)对老师用话语表达谢意;2)与同学交流自己的将来的梦想;3)师生合影,互赠留言等等。

参考词汇:look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..

备注:词数100左右,通知开头已拟好,不计入总数。

Boys and girls,

The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________

【答案】Boys and girls,

The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and

stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.

We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.

Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如In order to,look back at,be going to,have a class meeting,say goodbye to,talk about,the dreams of,take some photos,in the end,each other,be late等。而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

13.(·天津中考模拟)书面表达

以“我是…… 的一员”为题,写一篇80-100字的短文,标点符号不占格。提示:你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团的一员,或者作为家庭、班级、社区的一员,写出你的经历、感受等。内容可以包括以下几方面:

Are you glad to be a member of...?

What do you do in it?

How do you feel as such a member?

I’m a member of... (请将题目自行补充完整,已给的单词不计入总词数)

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________

【答案】I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club

Hello, everyone! I’m very glad I'm a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. Many students in our school have joined the club, so I

also have made a lot of friends.We have many activities on campus.Each week,we have two times of training. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, but I am always happy when I dance.All the members in the club are just brothers and sisters. I like this club very much.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“我是…… 的一员”为题,写一篇短文。首先考生需要把题目补充完整,然后根据所给出的材料提示,动笔写作。文章时态主要用一般现在时和现在完成时,人称主要用第一人称。在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】

首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

14.(·天津中考模拟)假设五一小长假期间,你去故宫博物院参观,请根据以下要点提不与一篇英语短文,讲述你在故宫的所见所闻。

(1)你提前在网上购买了故宫门票。

(2)你乘火车到达北京后’转乘地铁来到故宫。

(3)故宫的建筑高大雄伟,展品琳琅满目,精美绝伦。

(4)故宫内游人如织,人们纷纷拍照留念。

(5)闭馆时间到了,你仍然不愿离去。

(6)你的感受……

参考词汇:故宫博物院the Palace Museum 提前in advance

要求:

(1)词数:80~100个。

(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。

(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。

My visit to the Palace Museum

On May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum.

___________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________

【答案】My visit to the Palace Museum

On May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. I bought tickets to the Palace Museum online in advance. When I arrived in Beijing by train, I transferred to the Forbidden City by subway. The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession. It's closing time. I still don't want to leave. I feel that the Palace Museum is very great. It was a very happy day and and I gained a lot.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文,写一篇发言稿。题目中给出的材料较为简略,动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言,列出简单提纲,确定句子的时态,关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点,可以适当发挥。在写作时,本文的主语可以用第一人称,时态一般应该用一般现在时。为了是表达更有逻辑性,可以使用序数词,连接词等。

【点睛】

这篇短文用到了一些好的句型:The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. ;Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession.这些给文中增色不少。

15.(·安徽中考模拟)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)很感兴趣,给你写信想了解该诗,请你根据以下提示给他回信:

1.作者:孟郊

2.时间:唐朝

3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题:母爱的伟大

注意:

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;

2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;

3.词数: 80-100词左右,信件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________

Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.

Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.

If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据内容可知,这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分:

第一部分:交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。

第二部分:文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。

1.作者:孟郊

2.时间:唐朝

3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题:母爱的伟大

第三部分:信的结语——如果对方有任何问题,可以继续问自己,并期待收到对方的来信。

16.(·辽宁初三)近年来“汉语热”在全球各地悄然兴起,你的笔友 Peter在如何学好汉语方面急需你的帮助,快来帮帮他吧!

Dear Peter,

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】例文

Here are some ways to learn Chinese. You could watch Chinese movies. You could also write to

me in Chinese. It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with. These will be helpful.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信,书信的内容为方法策略,给外国笔友推荐一些学习汉语的方法。因此在信件中,写出一些你认为有效的学习方法即可,写作过程中注意语法、拼写正确。

【高分句型】

It's good to find a partner to practice Chinese with.找一个同伴一起练习汉语很不错。句子为It is+形容词+to do sth.结构,句中it为形式主语,真正的主语为不定式短语。

17.(·北京中考模拟)假如你是李华,下周你们学校将要组织学生开展“父亲节活动计划”分享活动,你打算先分享给你们班交换生Peter,希望听听他的看法。请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他你的计划是什么,你为什么这么做,并表达你渴望得到他建议的心情。

提示词语: gift, love, opinion

提示问题:● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

We will share the plan for Father’s Day next

week.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.

I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头;第二段写你为什么这么做;第三段表达你渴望得到他建议的心情。

例文点评:例文采用的是三段式;用第一人称来叙述父亲节计划;时态采用的是一般现在时为主,描述具体建议时,描写细致,条理清晰。

高分亮点:

短语:the plan for Father’s Day;some meaningful things;buy a beautiful card for him;give me some advice。

句型:Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help;I am eager to receive your early reply。

18.(·江苏中考模拟)今年初《流浪地球》在中国火热上映。影片故事设定在2075年,讲述太阳即将毁火,已经不适合人类生存,而面对绝境,人类将开启“流浪地球”计划,试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系,寻找人类新家园的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如,老师问:希望是什么?班长回答:希望是我们这个年代钻石一样的东西。你的笔友Demon观看后,印象深刻,给你写了一封邮件。请你根据邮件内容结合你的情况,用英语回复。

注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;

2.回复必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;

3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Demon

I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as

well.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Please write to me and tell me your view.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】Dear Demon,

I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don't want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.

In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always comes to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.

I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?

Please write to me and tell me your view.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文。根据所给出的材料内容可知文章时态主要用一般现在时,人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先要注意书信的书写格式,要对来信中的问题作出全面的答复。同时在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】

首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

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