专题五 短文改错
训练1 短文改错(Ⅰ)
A (2016·东北三省四市一模)
One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents
and two sisters.As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together,
then we decided we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit －down
dinner.First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment —Mondays,
Wednesdays or Fridays.After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost
everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea.They said
they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some
activities.Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a
very different way.We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's
problems.Since a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before. 【答案】
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B (2016·河北唐山一模)
A new police officer was out for his first ride in a police car with a
experienced partner.A call came in told them to break up a crowd of people.The officers drove to the street and observe a small crowd standing on the corner.The new police officer rolled up his window and said, “Please leave the corner.” A few people glanced, and no one moved, so he shouted again ，“Leave that corner.NOW ！”This time, the group of people began to move unwillingly.While they left ，they stared in his directions.The young police officer was so proud that he turned to partner and asked ，“Well ，what is my performance ？”“Pretty good ，”smiled at his partner ，“but I'm sorry to t ell you this is a bus stop.” 【答案】
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C (2016·武汉调研)
I'd like to talking about my most memorable experience.It was the trip to Australia I had three years before with my dance group to participate in international dance festival.It was the first time I had travelled by plane in my life.My mum worried a lot, so everything went smoothly.I stayed there for two week and it was the happiest time in my life.Besides our performances there, we have much excitement.We spent on almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach and swam in the blue sea.But warmly Australian nights were which I adored most of all.It was a time of joy, lights, music and summer
parties. 【答案】
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D (2016·石家庄一模) Dear Li Lei ，
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高考短文改错专项练习 1 College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship. 2 I am angry about the act of dishonesty in the exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student and that I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight A’s. Little I know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating.
专题五短文改错 训练1 短文改错(Ⅰ) A (2019·东北三省四市一模) One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters.As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit－down dinner.First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays.After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea.They said they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities.Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way.We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's problems.Since a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before. 【答案】 One of my happiest childhood memories were was/is having dinner with my parents and two sisters.As a result, ∧ having found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided we would set aside three evenings the a week for a sit－down dinner.First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or and Fridays.After a couple of week weeks of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea.They said they would rather ﹨to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual Gradually， though, they began to see these evenings together for in a very different way.We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's problems.Since After a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong stronger relationships with the family than we had before. B (2019·河北唐山一模) A new police officer was out for his first ride in a police car with a experienced partner.A call came in told them to break up a crowd of people.The officers drove to the street and observe a
(13) I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. One of my neighbor is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can beat them if we won't make any mistakes. (14) Fang Tong is 34 years old, the actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre. Most of his students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never need to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing and developing. (15) I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wondered if the same thing will happen to my neighbor someday. (16) Dear Ralph, I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But she is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up Sheila? (17) Before leaving the class, the teacher, Miss White, said to her class, "Don't leave your seats. Read your books on yourselves. You would study hard and be good students. " As soon as the teacher went away, the classroom becoming noisy. One boy drew a picture of the teacher on the blackboard. Another boy began to make face just to make the other students to laugh. The boy put
专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误 [真题演练] Passage 1 (2017·全国卷Ⅲ) When I look at this picture of myself ，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically ，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took ，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time ：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days. 答案： When I look at this picture of myself ，I realize how fast time flies.I had have grown not only physically ，and but also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took taken ，I entered my second year of high school and become became a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they that/which were very important in my life at that time ：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference different kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late latest music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your my high school days. 【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了由一张照片引发的作者对高中时光的回忆。 71．解析：词法错误。realize“认识到，意识到”，是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。 答案：去掉of
2014高考英语短文改错训练（7）及答案（精品） 1.短文改错 My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take them to their aunt’s to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes. They played for a hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering to do it like a gentleman.”“How do gentlemen do it？”Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine. ” 【参考答案】1. My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take
短文改错专题突破练18 1 Recently,a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall. In the fact,this happens in many place of interest.I had some suggestions to solve this problem. First,make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦). Besides,punishments,such as a fine,is necessary to tourists with so bad behavior.Also,I think it’s helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages. I’m sure with our efforts,more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics. Recently,a famous basketball player has caused public by writing on the Great Wall.In fact,this happens in many of interest.I some suggestions to solve this problem. First,make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦). Besides, punishments,such as a fine, necessary to tourists with bad behavior.Also,I think it’s to put up some boards along the tourist attractions tourists can leave messages. I’m sure with our efforts,more and more people will become about protecting cultural relics. 2 During my second month of nursing school,our professors gave us a quiz. I had smoothly finished the others’ questio ns when I got stuck on the last one:“What’s the first name of the woman who clean the school?”I had seen,many times,the woman,tall and in her fifty,but how could I know her name? I handed in my paper,leave
短文改错专题复习 [复习讲义] 英语复习短文改错专题 NMET短文改错的解题基本思路应该是：一．以句为单位，找行中错误，每行必有一个判断（错词、多词、少词和正确），而判断 的依据一定是上下文，最小单位是一个完整的句子。二．以篇为单位，找句中错误。许多时候，就某一行或某一句单独而言常常难以 判断其是否正确，错误何在，而必须以全篇为一整体才可对该句， 进而对该行作出判断。 具体解题过程中，应该注意把握九个一致问题： 一．时态一致短文中谓语动词的时态与上下文，特定语言环境 及该句的时间状语是否保持了呼应与一致。 例1． My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team. (NMET’98)全文都是一般现在时，此句中was 虽然与 上下问不一致，应改为am。 例2．I remembered her words and calm down.( NMET’ 2000) 此处为一描述过去事件的语境，应与前文remembered 保持一致，须改为calmed。 例3． Today, it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past. (NMET’ 93)第一个is 与时间状语today保持一致，地第二个is则应 改为was, 使之与其时间状语in the past 一致。 二．主谓一致谓语动词在人称和数上是否与主语保持一致。 例4．Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. (NMET’2000)主语为A and B时，谓语动词一般为复数，应改 为are。
短文改错训练答案 1 When I was in high school, I had an awful experience. At that time I wa s∧so brave and not outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all kinds of bad things to me. I was scaring to see him. named scared So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to dine out. I agreed. But invite We met in a bar and we were so happy that nothing went well. By the end of that night, Big Tom everything At apologized for what he has done to me. Now we have become close friends. had In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we have the courage to correct them. is 2 English is my favourite subject and I’d love the opp ortunity to get my English improve by improved studying abroad. My speaking is excellent, but I am afraid that my writing is not so good as. My parents have promised that if I∧accepted into the programme, they will get I taught in after school am me writing lessons. Studying abroad will not only help improve my English but also gives me a better give understanding of customs and cultures i n∧west. In addition for that, I belong to a debating club the to at school. So I am used to talk in front of other people. I am also fond of making friend and I think talking friends people will find it easily to get on with me. easy 3 Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. an Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, but I found the Disappointed teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere on class. I decided to in make∧best of it. I work hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I the worked had difficulties, they were seldom available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, always students which greatly increased my confident and got me motivated. confidence
高中英语短文改错专项练习及解析 （时间：60分钟,满分：100分） 短文改错（共10小题；每小题10分，满分100分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。 （一） How time flies! A week have passed before I noticed it. Looking back on the things that happening last week, I found the life here full with happiness and interests. I can still remember the first day of the summer camp. I came to my bedroom by myself. When I opened a door, I saw a girl with short hair seating in a chair with a book in her hand. She must be a quiet girl who liked reading, I thought myself at the time. After we said hello to each other, other girl came in with a big noise. Her name was Rose. She was so outgoing and humor that both Cherry and I couldn’t help laughing at her words. Then we had studied and had meals together, and became good friends. I can’t forget the day when we spent together no matter where we are in the future. （二） Dear Li Hua, I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand how sad you are as they have to transfer to other school. But everything will be fine when you adapt to your new surrounding. In your letter, you asked me about my first school. In my memory, my first school was very large with each classroom beautiful decorated. There was a big square lies in the center of the schoolyard. And I could have good view of the square from my classroom windows. My favorite teacher was
短文改错专题 一．改错题型特点： 高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题型。主要考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确性及词、句、篇和语法的综合水平。高考短文改错设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多，覆盖面广，包括词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等，是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。 二．短文改错常见考点设置： 考点1：名词 命题特点: 本来用复数,却用单数；本来用单数，却用复数。 记住常考的几个不可数名词：news, work(工作), advice, fun, progress, information, luck, weather, music, health, change(零钱),baggage(行李), luggage(行李),furniture, jewellery, equipment等 改正方法: (1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系. 1. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. 2. After class we become stranger at once. 3. They want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get marks in all my subject. 4. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. 5. There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. 6. Now we can get millions of informations from the Internet. 7. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. 8. She is one of the most intelligent girl in our class. 9. I looked at his other hands. 10. Most of them are peasant and some often go fishing in the sea. 11. We have made great progresses with Mr. Liu teaching us. 12. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new rules should help students get higher grade. 13. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 14. He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures. 考点2：代词 命题特点：1.男女性代词用反；2.单数指代复数；3.代词词性用错；4.缺少人称代词。 改正方法: 根据上下文的逻辑关系以及人称代词的数和格的一致问题。 15. Rose is such a kind girl that we all like him very much. 16. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. 17. I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. 18. It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. 19. Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself as I was learning to express me in simple English. 20. My story book is much more interesting than her. 21. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 22. Some students may also save up for our college or future use. 23. Do you think necessary for you to learn Japanese well? 24. I dressed me quickly and hurried out the house. 25. You’d better keep that he said in mind. 26. He has three children, two of them are teachers. 27. The population of China is much larger than it of the USA.
题型组合训练3 阅读理解短文改错 (建议用时：35分钟；实际用时：分钟) 阅读理解 (福建漳州一中2019年高三模拟考) New App Helps People Remember Faces Large gatherings such as weddings and conferences can be socially overwhelming. Pressure to learn people's names only adds to the stress. A new facial－recognition app could come to the rescue, but privacy experts recommend proceeding with caution. The app, called SocialRecall, connects names with faces via smartphone cameras and facial recognition, potentially avoiding the need for formal introductions. “It breaks down these social barriers we all have when meeting somebody，” says Barry Sandrew, who created the app and tested it at an event attended by about 1,000 people. After receiving an invitation to download SocialRecall from an event organizer, the user is asked to take two selfies and sign in via social media. At the event, the app is active within a previously defined geographical area. When a user points his or her phone camera at an attendee's face, the app identifies the individual, displays the person's name, and links to his or her social media profile. To protect privacy, it recognizes only those who have agreed to participate. And the app's creators say it automatically deletes users' data after an event. Ann Cavoukian, a privacy expert who runs the Privacy by Design Center of Excellence praises the app's creators for these protective measures. She cautions, however, that when people choose to share their personal information with the app, they should know that “there may be unintended consequenc es down the road with that information being used in another context that might come back to bite you.” The start－up has also developed a version of the app for individuals who suffer from prosopagnosia, or “face blindness，” a condition that prevents peopl e from recognizing individuals they have met. To use this app, a person first acquires an image of someone's face, from either the smartphone's camera or a photograph, and then tags it with a name. When the camera spots that same face in real life, the previously entered information is displayed. The collected data are stored only on a user's phone, according to the team behind the app.