BEC高级写作部分指导

BEC高级写作实用技巧以及真题范文图表作文写作要领（1）注意总-分结构的使用。

中心句概括总趋势。

总增长：典型数据/区间：there are some fluctuations to this general trend;Within this generaltrend, there aresome fluctuations,for example…（2）注意分水岭的描写,即把整个图表的变化趋势分成两个或三个变化阶段来整体描写。

（3）注意语言的多样化，多用同义词替代，避免重复用词。

（4）注意数据的内部逻辑关系，确定描写线索。

即确定以某个数据的变化来贯彻全文。

图表作文句型总结：1.基本功: 叙述表格/图表(重点)(1)组成： consist of.., be made up of.., be composed of..,(2)比例： account for%, represent%, make/take up %.., 或者直接说 % of….(3)上升(by..to…)，增加，提高：a. 普通：increase, grow, rise, expandb. 渐渐上升：climb, edge up, ascend, trend up.c. 猛增，激增：jump, surge, soar, proliferate (数量), leap, shot upd. 词组：achieve an increase in….by…to…Continue its upwards trend; trend upOn the rise, on the increase.On consecutive rise: 保持连续增长n. 名词：increase, rise, growth, expansion,ascendance渐渐增加,slight increase, rise, growth in..bump-up(突然增加),proliferation(激增),jump,leap, surge, boom(4)减少，下降，减缓a. 普通：decrease, fall, drop, reduce, shrink, (shrinkage)b. 逐渐变少：slide, dwindle, decline, edge downc. 骤减：collapse, slump, plummet, plunged. 经济衰退，停顿：slump, collapse,stagnate,stagnant,stagnation,sluggish,sluggishness,slack,crisis, recession,slowdown,downturn,e. 词组： fall off, drop off, go down,continue its downwardtrend, trend down, on thedecline, on the downturn.(5) 保持平稳，不变：Remain stable,/steady,/unchanged Level off vi 上升，或减退至平稳水平 Subside vi 减退至平稳水平standstill n/adj 停滞不前(6) 起伏波动：Rise and fall,fluctuate slightly/dramatically,fluctuate between….and…, a minorfluctuation,small rises and falls/fluctuations.(7)形容趋势程度a. 剧烈，显著，明显Dramatically, sharply, considerably, rapidly, suddenly, greatly,alarmingly, significantly, enormously,steeply, massively, incredibly,hugely, amazingly, substantially; atan alarming rate; by a wide margin.b. 缓慢/逐渐Gradually, steadily, slightly, gently, marginally, slowly, moderately, in amoderate way, by the least amount.(8)表示倍数：a. (使)增几倍于： double, triple, quadruple【'kwɔdrupl】，b. adv.adj 几倍的，几倍地：fivefold, sixfold, sevenfold….c. ad. 几倍：twice, three/four/five times….e. 几分之几： 2/3： two-thirds, etc. (at a fraction of…)(9) 比较数据as…as…a. three/four times as many. 做主语或定语成分Eg. approx.20% more people preferred the diet cherry version and nearlythree times as many preferred thediet strawberry version.b.“A + be + XX times + as +adj + as + B”。

Part One写作（概述及方式）问题共点概述：●Write a Short Report●Write 120-140 Words●Describe the movements (Charts or graphs)●At least one chart (Line, Bar and Pie)解题总思路：(Accomplish In Four Steps)I. Reading ...................................读题（归纳图表主要内容）II. Organizing ...............................订框架（根据模板、例句完成文章主要部分）III. Conclusion ...............................客观总结（仅归纳最显而易见的客观联系）IV. Checking ..................................检查（拼写、语法及其他错误）文章基本框架：（Basic Structure）●Introduction ..............................简要介绍题目，归纳图表主要内容●Findings ...................................说明图表中数据走势，趋势和变化●Conclusion ...............................图表、数字简最客观联系写作要点：●直接了当进入主题●抓住数据特点，突出变化趋势，进行对比●建议写作中使用小标题，增强各段落写作方向，条理更加清晰分步解题：1．如何读题：●学会节省时间,速读●只挑不同的内容读●归纳图表的主要表达内容，先中文后英文例：Book2，Test1，Part One （以下例题部分均为此题，简称如上题）Question1:●The graphs below (Page 28) show the performance of a European country’smanufacturing and agricultural sectors in terms of exports and importsbetween 1991 and 2001.●Using the information from the graphs, write a short report describing thegeneral movements in exports, imports and the resulting balance of trade.●Write 120-140 words.1. 词语不多，难度不大，阅读时间尽量缩短2. 斜体字部分基本为Part One惯例，可基本忽略阅读3. 下划线部分为题目“不同内容”所在，亦是表格的主要内容4. 根据题目要求和图表内容“再造”下划线部分如：表格描述的是欧洲某国工业和农业在1991到2001年间进出口情况，而后将此句子翻译为英文即可。

图表作文写作要领（1）注意总-分结构的使用。

中心句概括总趋势。

总增长：典型数据/区间：there are some fluctuations to this general trend;Within this general trend, there are some fluctuations, forexample…（2）注意分水岭的描写,即把整个图表的变化趋势分成两个或三个变化阶段来整体描写。

（3）注意语言的多样化，多用同义词替代，避免重复用词。

（4）注意数据的内部逻辑关系，确定描写线索。

即确定以某个数据的变化来贯彻全文。

图表作文句型总结：1.基本功: 叙述表格/图表(重点)(1)组成：consist of.., be made up of.., be composed of..,(2)比例： account for%, represent%, make/take up %.., 或者直接说 % of….(3)上升(by..to…)，增加，提高：a. 普通：increase, grow, rise, expandb. 渐渐上升：climb, edge up, ascend, trend up.c. 猛增，激增：jump, surge, soar, proliferate (数量), leap, shot upd. 词组： achieve an increase in….by…to…Continue its upwards trend; trend upOn the rise, on the increase.On consecutive rise: 保持连续增长n. 名词： increase, rise, growth, expansion,ascendance渐渐增加,slight increase, rise, growth in..bump-up(突然增加), proliferation(激增),jump, leap, surge, boom(4)减少，下降，减缓a. 普通：decrease, fall, drop, reduce, shrink, (shrinkage)b. 逐渐变少：slide, dwindle, decline, edge downc. 骤减：collapse, slump, plummet, plunged. 经济衰退，停顿：slump, collapse, stagnate, stagnant, stagnation,sluggish, sluggishness, slack,crisis, recession, slowdown, downturn,e. 词组： fall off, drop off, go down, continue its downward trend, trenddown, on the decline, on the downturn.(5) 保持平稳，不变：Remain stable,/steady,/unchangedLevel off vi 上升，或减退至平稳水平Subside vi 减退至平稳水平 standstill n/adj 停滞不前(6) 起伏波动：Rise and fall,fluctuate slightly/dramatically,fluctuate between….and…, a minor fluctuation,small rises and falls/fluctuations.(7)形容趋势程度a. 剧烈，显着，明显Dramatically, sharply, considerably, rapidly, suddenly, greatly, alarmingly, significantly, enormously, steeply, massively, incredibly, hugely, amazingly, substantially; at an alarming rate; by a wide margin.b. 缓慢/逐渐Gradually, steadily, slightly, gently, marginally, slowly, moderately, ina moderate way, by the least amount.(8)表示倍数：a. (使)增几倍于： double, triple, quadruple【'kw?drupl】，b. adv.adj 几倍的，几倍地：fivefold, sixfold, sevenfold….c. ad. 几倍：twice, three/four/five times….e. 几分之几： 2/3： two-thirds, etc. (at a fraction of…)(9) 比较数据as…as…a. three/four times as many. 做主语或定语成分Eg. approx.20% more people preferred the diet cherry version and nearly three times as many preferred the diet strawberry version.b.“A + be + XX times + as +adj + as + B”。

写作部分BEC HIGHER写作部分主耍涉及商业信函和图表写作两部分的内容，现具体介绍如下：商业信函第一章格式问题1.格式问题：请同学们在BEC的写作中采用平头式的写法。

收信人的姓名和地址置于信纸的左上方地址、称呼和结朿礼词后没有标点符号H期在右上方段落从定格开始，段落之间的行距为两行（但在考试中山于受答题卡限制，请同学们酌情考虑）写信人的名字和头衔在签名下方2.称呼和结束礼词的注意事项：称呼的写法遵循下列原则:称呼打结束礼词存在对应的关系，请同学们特別注意:以下均为错误用法:Dear Mr JohnDear Mr John Smith3.日期：在英国英语中，天在前，但是在美国英语中，月份在前。

所以某些特別的吋期容易引起误解。

例如：12 06 2003在英国指的是：6月21日在美国指的是：12刀6日因此日期要写成：12 June 2003注释：在bee考试屮同学们可以釆用恩波所推荐的用法。

但是12 06 2003的用法仍然是可以使用的，因为bee为英版考试。

在使用恩波推荐的用法时，要记住月份使用大些字母开头。

天后不必写th、rd、nd或者st。

第二章写法问题预备参加bee考试的同学们由于缺乏商务写作的实际经验，对于写作部分都比较郁闷。

恩波结合历年考试实际，为大家准备了15类共计50个经典的实战句型，供大家在考场上使用。

我们对每一个句型都模拟了-•种环境：You want to know the prices of some air conditioners.We are interested in your air conditioner and we would like to know the prices ofsome air conditioners.You saw an advertisement in the newspaper yesterday and you want further infonuation. We are writing in connection with the advertisement in the newspaper yesterday. You want to know if the company you are writing to organizes holidays to Africa. We are writing to inquire about the holidays to Africa that your company organizes.2.回信的开头：环境：A compa ny wrote to you on 23 July. They wan ted to know if you sell photocopiers.Thank you for your letter of 23 July, asking if we sell photocopiers.A man wrote to you on 18 December. He wan ted employme nt with your compa ny. He alsosent his curriculum vitae.We have received your letter of 18 December, enclosing your curriculum vitae.A company sent you a fax on 3 June・ They wanted to know if you were going to themarketing conferenee in London.Thank you for your fax of 3 June, asking if I was going to the marketing conferencein London.A woman telephoned you this morning・ She wanted to know if her order No. 599 hadarrived.Thank you for your telephone call this morning concerning the order No. 599.3.信件的结尾：7.说明原因：注：owing to通常用于不好的消息。

图表作文写作要领（1）注意总-分结构的使用。

中心句概括总趋势。

总增长：典型数据/区间：therearesomefluctuationstothisgeneraltrend; Withinthisgeneraltrend,therearesomefluctuations,forexample…（2）注意分水岭的描写,即把整个图表的变化趋势分成两个或三个变化阶段来整体描写。

（3）注意语言的多样化，多用同义词替代，避免重复用词。

（4）注意数据的内部逻辑关系，确定描写线索。

即确定以某个数据的变化来贯彻全文。

图表作文句型总结：1.基本功:叙述表格/图表(重点)(1)组成：consistof..,bemadeupof..,becomposedof..,(2)比例：accountfor%,represent%,make/takeup%..,或者直接说%of….(3)上升(by..to…)，增加，提高：a.普通：increase,grow,rise,expandb.渐渐上升：climb,edgeup,ascend,trendup.c.猛增，激增：jump,surge,soar,proliferate(数量),leap,shotupd.词组：achieveanincreasein….by…to…Continueitsupwardstrend;trendupOntherise,ontheincrease.Onconsecutiverise:保持连续增长n.名词：increase,rise,growth,expansion,ascendance渐渐增加,slightincrease,rise,growthin..bump-up(突然增加),proliferation(激增),jump,leap,surge,boom(4)减少，下降，减缓a.普通：decrease,fall,drop,reduce,shrink,(shrinkage)b.逐渐变少：slide,dwindle,decline,edgedownc.骤减：collapse,slump,plummet,plunged.经济衰退，停顿：slump,collapse,stagnate,stagnant,stagnation,sluggish,sluggishness,slack,crisis,recession,slowdown,downturn,e.词组：falloff,dropoff,godown,continueitsdownwardtrend,trenddown,onthedecline,onthedownturn.(5)保持平稳，不变：Remainstable,/steady,/unchangedLeveloffvi上升，或减退至平稳水平Subsidevi减退至平稳水平standstilln/adj停滞不前(6)起伏波动：Riseandfall,fluctuateslightly/dramatically,fluctuatebetween….and…,aminorfluctuation,smallrisesandfalls/fluctuations.(7)形容趋势程度a.剧烈，显着，明显Dramatically,sharply,considerably,rapidly,suddenly,greatly,alarmingly,significantly,enormou sly,steeply,massively,incredibly,hugely,amazingly,substantially;atanalarmingrate;bya widemargin.b.缓慢/逐渐Gradually,steadily,slightly,gently,marginally,slowly,moderately,inamoderateway,bytheleasta mount.(8)表示倍数：a.(使)增几倍于：double,triple,quadruple【'kw?drupl】，b.adv.adj几倍的，几倍地：fivefold,sixfold,sevenfold….c.ad.几倍：twice,three/four/fivetimes….e.几分之几：2/3：two-thirds,etc.(atafractionof…)(9)比较数据as…as…a.three/fourtimesasmany.做主语或定语成分Eg.approx.20%morepeoplepreferredthedietcherryversion andnearlythreetimesasmany preferredthedietstrawberryversion.b.“A+be+XXtimes+as+adj+as+B”。

图表作文写作要领（1）注意总-分结构的使用。

中心句概括总趋势。

总增长：典型数据/区间：there are some fluctuations to this general trend;Within this general trend, there are some fluctuations, forexample…（2）注意分水岭的描写,即把整个图表的变化趋势分成两个或三个变化阶段来整体描写。

（3）注意语言的多样化，多用同义词替代，避免重复用词。

（4）注意数据的内部逻辑关系，确定描写线索。

即确定以某个数据的变化来贯彻全文。

图表作文句型总结：1.基本功: 叙述表格/图表(重点)(1)组成：consist of.., be made up of.., be composed of..,(2)比例：account for%, represent%, make/take up %.., 或者直接说% of….(3)上升(by..to…)，增加，提高：a. 普通：increase, grow, rise, expandb. 渐渐上升：climb, edge up, ascend, trend up.c. 猛增，激增：jump, surge, soar, proliferate (数量), leap, shot upd. 词组：achieve an increase in….by…to…Continue its upwards trend; trend upOn the rise, on the increase.On consecutive rise: 保持连续增长n. 名词：increase, rise, growth, expansion,ascendance渐渐增加,slight increase, rise, growth in..bump-up(突然增加), proliferation(激增),jump, leap, surge, boom(4)减少，下降，减缓a. 普通：decrease, fall, drop, reduce, shrink, (shrinkage)b. 逐渐变少：slide, dwindle, decline, edge downc. 骤减：collapse, slump, plummet, plunged. 经济衰退，停顿：slump, collapse, stagnate, stagnant, stagnation,sluggish, sluggishness, slack,crisis, recession, slowdown, downturn,e. 词组：fall off, drop off, go down, continue its downward trend, trend down,on the decline, on the downturn.(5) 保持平稳，不变：Remain stable,/steady,/unchangedLevel off vi 上升，或减退至平稳水平Subside vi 减退至平稳水平standstill n/adj 停滞不前(6) 起伏波动：Rise and fall,fluctuate slightly/dramatically,fluctuate between….and…, a minor fluctuation,small rises and falls/fluctuations.(7)形容趋势程度a. 剧烈，显著，明显Dramatically, sharply, considerably, rapidly, suddenly, greatly, alarmingly,significantly, enormously, steeply, massively, incredibly, hugely, amazingly,substantially; at an alarming rate; by a wide margin.b. 缓慢/逐渐Gradually, steadily, slightly, gently, marginally, slowly, moderately, in amoderate way, by the least amount.(8)表示倍数：a. (使)增几倍于：double, triple, quadruple【'kwɔdrupl】，b. adv.adj 几倍的，几倍地：fivefold, sixfold, sevenfold….c. ad. 几倍：twice, three/four/five times….e. 几分之几：2/3：two-thirds, etc. (at a fraction of…)(9) 比较数据as…as…a. three/four times as many. 做主语或定语成分Eg. approx.20% more people preferred the diet cherry version and nearly three times as many preferred the diet strawberry version.b.―A + be + XX times + as +adj + as + B‖。

图表作文写作要领（1）注意总-分结构的使用。

中心句概括总趋势。

总增长：典型数据/区间：there are some fluctuations to this general trend;Within this general trend, there are some fluctuations, for example…（2）注意分水岭的描写,即把整个图表的变化趋势分成两个或三个变化阶段来整体描写。

（3）注意语言的多样化，多用同义词替代，避免重复用词。

（4）注意数据的内部逻辑关系，确定描写线索。

即确定以某个数据的变化来贯彻全文。

图表作文句型总结：1.基本功: 叙述表格/图表(重点)(1)组成：consist of.., be made up of.., be composed of..,(2)比例：account for%, represent%, make/take up %.., 或者直接说% of….(3)上升(by..to…)，增加，提高：a. 普通：increase, grow, rise, expandb. 渐渐上升：climb, edge up, ascend, trend up.c. 猛增，激增：jump, surge, soar, proliferate (数量), leap, shot upd. 词组：achieve an increase in….by…to…Continue its upwards trend; trend upOn the rise, on the increase.On consecutive rise: 保持连续增长n. 名词：increase, rise, growth, expansion,ascendance渐渐增加,slight increase, rise, growth in..bump-up(突然增加), proliferation(激增),jump, leap, surge, boom(4)减少，下降，减缓a. 普通：decrease, fall, drop, reduce, shrink, (shrinkage)b. 逐渐变少：slide, dwindle, decline, edge downc. 骤减：collapse, slump, plummet, plunged. 经济衰退，停顿：slump, collapse, stagnate, stagnant, stagnation,sluggish, sluggishness, slack,crisis, recession, slowdown, downturn,e. 词组：fall off, drop off, go down, continue its downward trend, trend down, on the decline, onthe downturn.(5) 保持平稳，不变：Remain stable,/steady,/unchangedLevel off vi 上升，或减退至平稳水平Subside vi 减退至平稳水平standstill n/adj 停滞不前(6) 起伏波动：Rise and fall,fluctuate slightly/dramatically,fluctuate between….and…, a minor fluctuation,small rises and falls/fluctuations.(7)形容趋势程度a. 剧烈，显着，明显Dramatically, sharply, considerably, rapidly, suddenly, greatly, alarmingly, significantly,enormously, steeply, massively, incredibly, hugely, amazingly, substantially; at an alarming rate; bya wide margin.b. 缓慢/逐渐Gradually, steadily, slightly, gently, marginally, slowly, moderately, in a moderate way, by the leastamount.(8)表示倍数：a. (使)增几倍于：double, triple, quadruple【'kw?drupl】，b. adv.adj 几倍的，几倍地：fivefold, sixfold, sevenfold….c. ad. 几倍：twice, three/four/five times….e. 几分之几：2/3：two-thirds, etc. (at a fraction of…)(9) 比较数据as…as…a. three/four times as many. 做主语或定语成分Eg. approx.20% more people preferred the diet cherry version and nearly three times as many preferred the diet strawberry version.b.“A + be + XX times + as +adj + as + B”。

英语考试作文
BEC商务英语写作指导：写作格式规范
【BEC作文是否要写标题】
这里所说的BEC作文是否要写标题，有两层理解。

一，BEC 写作答题卡上是否需要填涂题号;二，BEC写作正文前，是否需要写标题。

就第一个问题，BEC写作答题卡上是否需要填涂题号，这个BEC中级写作和BEC高级写作是不同的。

BEC中级写作的小作文和大作文都是指定的，因此没有选题的必要，也就不需要填涂题号。

但是，BEC高级写作的大作文是在letter、report和proposal中三选一，因此需要在写作答题卡上填涂题号。

第二个问题，BEC写作正文前，是否需要写标题，这个根据写作的文体不同而决定。

一般来说，letter是不需要写标题的，按照商务信件的格式写就可以了。

report建议写一下标题，比如Report on staff turnover，然后按照report的三段式(introduction、findings和conclusion)来完成写作。

proposal和report类似，report相对比较简单，建议以准备report为主。

【BEC写作齐头式vs缩进式】
通行的商务写作格式，一般采用齐头式，因此在BEC写作中，也建议采用齐头式，看起来格式美观、逻辑清晰。

齐头式的写作格式要求：
段落齐头：在齐头式中，文件或书信中的每个部分都从左边界起头
不同的段落之间要空行：不同的部分(段与段之间)，以空行的方式隔开
缩进式比齐头式稍微复杂一些。

缩进式是比较老式的商务书信格式，所以很多人都熟悉这种格式。

在缩进式里，每个段落的首行要缩进，一般最少要缩进六格，要缩。