Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed. It made
our communication more and more convenience. young people incline to
communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people
around them.
First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits
. There has a example,
a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p.m ,
and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m .If there has no
internet,they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the
internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere .It
eliminates the barrier of distance,and very convenient for us.
The second, It also have some bad influence . young people may spend
hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk
with other face to face. Some people say,they become more and more
indifferent to each other in real life. Some netizens who are immersed
in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.
So,e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance
between them and make the best of the internet.
1.1
Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed.
[教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: technique, technology 均有“技术”之意。
technique: 多指具体的某种技术和技巧。
technology: 含义比technique广泛，泛指生产工艺、科学技术。
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[批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish
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[批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击
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1.2
It made our communication more and more convenience.
[教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。
communication: 指邮电、无线电、铁路、公路等各种交通方式或媒介。
traffic: 指来往的东西的情况，表示一种抽象概念的交通流动量。
transportation: 指将乘客或货物从一处运到另一处，也可指交通运输工具。
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1.3
young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with
people around them.
[教师点评][名词错误] on internet 冠词缺失
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[搭配统计] 动名搭配 munication 在教材中出现过 8 次
SeeAlso: miss communication6
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少，短少”之意。
lack: 指完全短缺或数量不足。
need: 语气较重，指需要必不可少的东西，强调急需。
want: 侧重缺少某种必需之物，或个人渴望得到的东西。
require: 使用广泛，语气较轻。强调急需时可与need换用，但有时暗示所需的人或物是完成某一任务必不可少的。
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2.1
First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits .
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
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[语法检查] 建议把 about it's benefits 改成 about its benefits (Did you mean...)
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[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”之意。
advantage: 指因某方面占优势或利用某机会以及对方弱点而获得利益与好处。
benefit: 普通用词，指通过正当手段从物质或精神方面得到的任何好处或利益。
interest: 作“利益”解时，多用复数形式，既可指集团、群体的利益，又可指个人的利益。
favour: 指在竞争中获得的advantage,也可指在狭隘的个人利益。
profit: 着重收益，尤指从物质、钱财等方面获得的利益。
gain: 指获得的物质利益，也暗示不损坏他人利益而得的无形好处。
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[批改提示] want的近义表达有intend或tend。
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2.2
There has a example, a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p. m , and
her father is in the America at ten clock p. m .
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
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[语法检查] 建议把 There has a 改成 There is a (Revise...)
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: example, instance, case, sample, illustration, specimen 均有“例子，事例”之意。
example: 普通用词，指能代表同类事物性质或一般规律的典型例子。 instance: 多指用于说明、支持或反证一般事实或理论的事例。
case: 多指需要加以认真研究的实例，如病例，案例等。
sample: 通常指样品。
illustration: 指用来说明、解释某种理论或看法而引用的例证。
specimen: 可与sample换用，但常指人或物中选出的有代表性部分，或指供科研、化验或检验用的标本。
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[批改提示] 注意Chinese和the Chinese区别。
Chinese用作名词，表示“中国人”[a person born or living in China, a person of Chinese descent]时，是可数名词，单复数同形；指中国人民或特指—个或数个中国人时，均加冠词，泛指时不能加。
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2.3
If there has no internet, they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet
can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere .
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
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[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。
Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely difficult to manipulate.
如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
Between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.
一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。
The surface of Mars is remarkablydiverse.
火星的表面参差不齐。
He was so informed and intensely forceful.
他是那么见多识广，极了不起。
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It eliminates the barrier of distance, and very convenient for us.
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
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[搭配统计] 动名搭配 eliminate...barrier 在教材中出现过 289 次
SeeAlso: pass barrier24,eliminate roadblock16,wipe_out barrier5,reject barrier4
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: obstacle, barrier, obstruction, bar, hindrance 均含“障碍，障碍物”之意。
obstacle: 指在达到目的或前进的过程中必须消除或绕过的障碍物，也指起阻碍作用等情况。
barrier: 常指临时的或者可能跨越的障碍。
obstruction: 常既指具体的障碍又可指抽象或喻意上的阻碍。
bar: 既可指阻止进出或通过的栅栏一类的障碍物，也可用于抽象意义障碍。
hindrance: 指妨碍他人进步或做事的人或物。
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[批改提示] eliminate近义表达有do away with/ get rid of/ extinguish/
