Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed. It made our communication more and more convenience. young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.
First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits . There has a example, a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p.m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m .If there has no internet,they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere .It eliminates the barrier of distance,and very convenient for us.
The second, It also have some bad influence . young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face. Some people say,they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life. Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.
So,e-communication is a double-edged sword ,We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.
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Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed.
∙[教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: technique, technology均有“技术”之意。
technique: 多指具体的某种技术和技巧。
technology: 含义比technique广泛，泛指生产工艺、科学技术。
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∙[批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish
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∙[批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击
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It made our communication more and more convenience.
∙[教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。
communication: 指邮电、无线电、铁路、公路等各种交通方式或媒介。
traffic: 指来往的东西的情况，表示一种抽象概念的交通流动量。
transportation: 指将乘客或货物从一处运到另一处，也可指交通运输工具。
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young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.
∙[教师点评][名词错误] on internet冠词缺失
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∙[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
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∙[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查
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∙[搭配统计] 动名搭配munication在教材中出现过8次
SeeAlso: miss communication6
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少，短少”之意。
lack: 指完全短缺或数量不足。
need: 语气较重，指需要必不可少的东西，强调急需。
want: 侧重缺少某种必需之物，或个人渴望得到的东西。
require: 使用广泛，语气较轻。强调急需时可与need换用，但有时暗示所需的人或物是完成某一任务必不可少的。
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First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits .
∙[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
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∙[语法检查] 建议把about it's benefits改成about its benefits (Did you mean...) 好评报错
∙[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”
之意。
advantage: 指因某方面占优势或利用某机会以及对方弱点而获得利益与好处。
benefit: 普通用词，指通过正当手段从物质或精神方面得到的任何好处或利益。
interest: 作“利益”解时，多用复数形式，既可指集团、群体的利益，又可指个人的利益。
favour: 指在竞争中获得的advantage,也可指在狭隘的个人利益。
profit: 着重收益，尤指从物质、钱财等方面获得的利益。
gain: 指获得的物质利益，也暗示不损坏他人利益而得的无形好处。
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∙[批改提示] want的近义表达有intend或tend。
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There has a example, a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p. m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p. m .
∙[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
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∙[语法检查] 建议把There has a改成There is a (Revise...)
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∙[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: example, instance, case, sample, illustration, specimen 均有“例子，事例”之意。
example: 普通用词，指能代表同类事物性质或一般规律的典型例子。
