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托福写作避免生搬硬套，要把学到的句式和词组灵活运用到自己的写作当中去！这样，写作的分数自然也就提高啦！
增加过渡段：
A1 好。。。
A1 好，而且A2 好。（这个“而且”，可以用科技发展啊技术进步啊之类的扩充）
A2 好。。。
14 条万能理由：
与事物有关：效率、方便、经济、耐久、安全、空间。
与人有关：健康、乐趣、成就、性格、情感、交流、经验、他人。
理由的安排也要有逻辑顺序—首段要雕琢，要表现！
1、排比反问：
Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou City? Have you ever walked along the Long Corridor in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallen leaves on the Fragrance Hill?
If you have never had such experiences, you would never know how much fun outdoor activities could bring you.
2、背景知识式：
With the development of science and technology, more and more companies (including international companies and small companies) are founded, but there are not enough people to take these positions. So a large number of working opportunities are provided to people who are still teenager students.
In some countries, some people think if teenagers do a job while they are still studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade. Others consider that teenagers
should have jobs while they are still students. As far as Iam concerned, I agree with the latter.
Because teenagers can learn amount of useful experience through working and they think through the job they will acquire some knowledge of how to get a good relationship with others.
3、定义式：
Technology refers to skills, knowledge, and techniques thathuman beings use in their daily life and work. As everybodymay find, technology develops day by day. How does the development of technology affect our life?
Many people hold the opinion that it is due to the development of technology that human beings have access to the comfortable modern life. On the other hand, a number of people are always aware ofall kinds of destructive influence of the technological development on us. As far as I am concerned, the development of technology does far more good than harm to people’s happiness.
正文部分每段安排：
1~3 行主题句
4~8 行细节论述
1~2 行主题再现
主题句的要求：
1、要有概括性：
Eg -. When I work in daytime, other people are also working, so I can work more efficiently.
Eg +. Outside environment during daytime helps to promote efficiency in many ways.
解说：TS 一定要概括，不要写成反例那样那么细节，不然后面的话不好展开了。
2、避免绝对化：
Eg -. Elder people are efficient.
Eg +. Compared with many un-experienced young people, most experienced elders can work more efficiently.
解说：正例表述得体，尺度很好，有限定成分“most”，有对比说法“compared with”等。
3、避免语法和用词错误。
细节论述部分：
1、个人事例推广到一般：(图书馆有钱该买书还是买电脑)
During the last semester, all the twenty students of my class are required to resort to the British Encyclopedia to complete our final paper.
However, there was only one set in the whole library because it takes a whole shelf to hold and is too expensive to purchase more than one set. Ever since the university bought in the CD version of the British Encyclopedia, we are free to refer to the same article at the same time through different terminals.
This case is not rare, in reality, frequently many readers of the library need to refer to the same source at the sametime.
2、反例：（still 图书馆）
Paper books in the library circulate very fast. Frequently we find a good book lose its good shape within 3 months. Those seldom-borrowed books are not safe at all, in danger ofnatural erosion and worm bites.
解说：不好说电脑好存放的时候，就说书不好存放。
举反例要适可而止，不能指望全篇用反例来支撑自己的观点。
3、具体数据和引用权威：
想得4分以上必须注意，因为4分要求说服力，5分要求appropriateexamples。
Eg.My hometown used to have one million acres of forests. The town people are shortsighted as to sell trees for $10 per piece. Trees are sold at a rate of approximately 100 thousand pieces per year, according to the data from the government.
Professor Selephant from Peking University, one of the bestuniversities in Environmental Engineering, once said, the tress in my hometown will disappear within 10 years at thisspeed of lumbering.
倒数第二段让步：
Eg.Admittedly, books do have certain advantages over computers. They are easier to carry with, lower in unit price, and more energy efficient given that computers are driven by electrical power.
However, computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable, manageable means for libraries of the new century. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment.
解说：让步之后一定记得重申anyway 我还是坚持XXX 观点。
用书面语代替口语：
1、短语不够正式。
2、小词不够正式：常见词替换：
非正式正式
Buy Purchase
Chance Opportunity
Deep Profound
End Terminate
Help Assistance
Huge Gigantic
Same Identical
Thank Gratitude
Try endeavor
句式要多样：
1、长句优先
2、摒弃There be 句型！
Botany, the study of plants, occupies a peculiar position in the history of human knowledge.(陈述句，同位语，下定义)
For many thousands of years it was the one field of awareness about which humans had anything more than the vaguest of insights.(时间状语开头)
It is impossible to know today just what our Stone Age ancestors knew about plants, but from what we can observe of pre-industrial societies that still exist, a detailed learning of plants and heir properties must be extremely ancient.
（名词性从句）
This is logical.(长短结合)
Plants are the basis of the food pyramid for all living things, even for other plants. They have always been enormously important to the welfare of people, not only for food, but also for clothing, weapons, tool, dyes, medicines, shelter, and a great many other purposes.(递进句型，排比)
Tribes living today in the jungles of the Amazon recognize literally hundreds of plants and know many properties of each. To them, botany, as such, has no name and is probably not even recognized as a special branch of “knowledge” at all.(插入语，介词开头)。
3、无灵主语，非人物主语开头。
4、非主语成分起始句子：
Eg.
Adj. Basic to any understanding of Canada after World War II is its impressive population’s growth.
Adv. Too, often, students are forced to cheat on tests.
Prep. From the shortage arises the demand for nuclear poweras a new source of energy.
Ing.
Ed.
名词性从句What was needed in reality was not taught in school. 修辞要用：
1、比喻
2、排比：短词排比
3、引用
时间安排：
3min 列提纲
22min 写正文
检查到最后一秒
检查重心：
1、句法：不缺句子成分
2、时态：包括语态—esp.三单。
3、主谓一致
4、平时练习易错的地方。
避免性别歧视：
1、he or she ，不过出现次数太多会很累赘
2、能用they 就别用he or she
托福写作教育类词汇整理 a s s i g n m e n t,h o m e w o r k任务，家庭作业 r e q u i r e d/c o m p u l s o r y c o u r s e s,e l e c t i v e c o u r s e s 必修课程;选修课程 c h i l d r e n a n d y o u t h/a d o l e s c e n t青少年 a d a p t t o s t h./a d j u s t o n e s e l f t o s t h./ b e c o m e a c c u s t o m e d t o s t h.适应 s e g r e g a t e s t u d e n t s区分对待学生 t e a m s p i r i t团队精神 t h i n k i n d e p e n d e n t l y独立思考 s t u d e n t s’f e e d b a c k/i n p u t,学生的反馈 s t u d e n t s a p p r a i s e/e v a l u a t e t h e i r t e a c h e r s’ p e r f o r m a n c e学生对老师的评价 g e n e r a l i s t, s p e c i a l i s t, w e l l-r o u n d e d/v e r s a t i l e 通才;专才;多才多艺的人 h u m a n i t i e s,s o c i a l s c i e n c e,a r t s,s c i e n c e a n d e n g i n e e r i n g,b a s i c s c i e n c e, a p p l i e d s c i e n c e人文;社科;艺术;科技;基础科学; 应用科学
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托福写作评分标准托福写作评分包括机器评分以及人工评分两部分: 机器评分E-rater- 语法是否正确、用词是否得当、以及单词拼写及大小写是否准确等方面, 一篇考生的文章会经过两台机器评分。 人工评分通过ETS阅卷人评分，综合写作和独立写作分别有两位阅卷人给出分数。 托福写作原始分数为0-5分，考生得分分为三个level GOOD，FAIR，LIMITED 最终成绩通过两个科目的分数取平均分，再换算为30分制的分数。 详解托福综合写作的评分细则
综合写作是托福写作板块中的其中一项。托福考试的写作部分分为综合(Integrated writing)和独立(Independent writing)两块，这两块分别独立评分，取平均值后得到最终的分数。也就是说，这两个部分各占一半权重，因此应给予相同程度的重视。关于这两部分的了解，强烈建议同学们自己去看看ETS出版的托福考试官方指南(OG)，OG里面对于考试形式和评分标准有非常详尽的介绍，有些同学在准备输出端考试(写作或者口语)的时候，居然连评分细则都不看，仅凭自己的主观臆测和对于老师讲解的依稀记忆去打造自己的文章，考不好真的不奇怪。下面，我们就来分析一下托福考试的评分细则。 综合写作的满分要求是： A response at this level successfully selects the important information from the lectu 5分：文章切题，阐说充分，文章有说服力;段落组织有序，衔接紧密，过渡自然，有很强的逻辑性;段落内句与句连接顺畅，句式使用恰当，灵活，娴熟;用词确切，得体。文章中有个别语法拼写错误，但不影响内容表达。 4分：文章切题，阐说基本充分，在某些细节上有缺陷。段落层次组织有序，衔接紧密，过渡自然，逻辑性强;句间连接顺畅，句式使用恰当，灵活;用词基本得体。文章中有少量用词不当和语法拼写错误。 3分：文章切题，阐说尚可，展开不够。段落层次组织有序，衔接紧密，过渡自然，有逻辑性;句间连接基本顺畅;有部分句法错误;用词一般，有时不得体。词性区分和拼写等有若干错误
万能理由 Character 能干able /capable/competent 聪明intelligent/ bright 合作cooperation/collaboration/ 坚韧不拔Firm and indomitable/persistent and dauntless/ 勤奋diligent/industrious /hardworking 独立Independence / 负责任assume the responsibility/ 宽容tolerant /lenient/ show consideration for /give every care to / 诚实Honest/ reasonable /leadership 11)put a premium['pri:mi?m] 保险费，额外费用；奖金on/ put a high value on/cherish/ treasure 珍惜重视 12)bear in mind 牢记 It is important to bear in mind that happiness comes from a person's inner feeling not the possession he/she has. 学生应该牢记每天作业会提高学习成绩。
Students should bear in mind that daily homework will help improve score. 1)Come a long way 有很大进步 Human being has come a long way from drinking and eating food to talking through cell phones. 学生在学习上通过每天写作业有很大进步。 Students come a long way in learning through finishing daily homework. 人类有巨大进步从只能在地球上的有限活动范围到能登陆月球。 Human being has come a long way from moving within a limited area on the earth to reaching the moon. 2)值得做。。。 It is worthwhile to ...it is worth doing Eg It is worthwhile to spend time in learning music and art, because they can benefit me for life time. 每天花时间做作业是值得的，因为学生因此而他养成良好的
1.Some teachers think it is effective for students to study in groups while others think that it is better to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Teamwork activities have strongly been advocated by many schools, possibly because good team spirit has been regarded as one shared trait of successful enterprises. However, some people think that students should be given an environment where they study independently. These two ways of learning have their respective advantages and disadvantages and serve different purposes. One prominent advantage of group study is that it enhances students' social skills and teamwork skills. In the team environment, members need to know how to cooperate with communicate with each other. This prepares students for the workplace, where teamwork is frequently required. We are also convinced that members can share their knowledge and experience so as to improve their learning outcomes. Moreover, students can detect their knowledge gap when answering questions raised by their classmates. This benefit is not achievable for those students who study independently. Despite these benefits, group study cannot gain support teachers who emphasize students' individual achievement. Group study may induce some students to rely excessively on their peers. It is important to bear in mind that in the real world, employers opt to employ extraordinary individuals, rather than recruiting a team. In addition, group study will demotivate those students who are driven by personal achievement. In some cases, if work is not distributed fairly and members' roles are ambiguous, the group fails to achieve its objectives and shakes members' confidence in teamwork. In the discussion of the pros and cons of group study, we can come to the conclusion that it should be integrated with independent study. While improving students' social skills and helping them to acquire knowledge, group work hinders the development of independent learning habits.
教育类话题 1、学生层面 ①要不要多学一门课，要不要多干别的事情 反对：(1)不要上，学生压力大 a: grades 的压力 b: competition 的压力 c: 需要时间来complement what they lack (2) 可以通过其他方式 field trip: a interest 学生更有兴趣 b 锻炼学生的品质：合作精神、克服困难、interpersonal skills ②其他方式上课：online course：time-consuming，efficiency, more study material Field-trip ：interest, interpersonal skills, cooperative Make friends with strangers, art persuasive in group setting, and the ability of giving a presentation in the front of the audience. 对学生的四大好处 ①skills a: interpersonal skills b: time management skills---prioritize tasks/manage time /combat stress ②quality a: independence--- reduce reliance on others b: perseverance: overcome difficulties--optimistic ③knowledge a: understand thoroughly b: access to more knowledge c: interest ④future career development a: locate work b: promotion 更有竞争力 2、其他干扰的东西对学生的坏处 1 对学习的坏处：academic performance ①understand thoroughly ②intersect 没有兴趣学习 2 对skill的坏处①没法培养时间管理能力time management ②没法培养interpersonal skill 能力; addicted to/ feel reluctant to interact with others 2、教师和学校层面 School: a: reputation/increase enrollment rate b:donation (alumnus, company) 对老师的好可以：对学生好 对学校好 3 教师的教学方法好 教学方法的多样化：diversify ①apply advance technology in teaching ②group discussion
托福写作教育类总结
教育类话题 1、学生层面 ①要不要多学一门课，要不要多干别的事情 反对： (1)不要上，学生压力大 a: grades 的压力 b: competition 的压力 c: 需要时间来complement what they lack (2) 可以通过其他方式 field trip: a interest 学生更有兴趣 b 锻炼学生的品质：合作精神、克服困难、interpersonal skills ②其他方式上课：online course：time-consuming，efficiency, more study material Field-trip ：interest, interpersonal skills, cooperative Make friends with strangers, art persuasive in group setting, and the ability of giving a presentation in the front of the audience. 对学生的四大好处 ① skills a: interpersonal skills b: time management skills---prioritize tasks/manage time /combat stress ② quality a: independence--- reduce reliance on others b: perseverance: overcome difficulties--optimistic ③ knowledge a: understand thoroughly b: access to more knowledge c: interest ④ future career development a: locate work b: promotion 更有竞争力
2019托福写作范文：教育孩子的方式 【托福】 2016年托福写作真题题目： 2016年10月16日托福独立写作题目 现在有一些学校require children(5-11岁) to work together instead of working on their own during most of their learning process， do you agree or disagree that is the best way to teach children? 托福写作模板及参考答案： 托福写作范文参考： 2016年10月16日托福独立写作范文 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Many schools require young children (aged 5-11) to work together in a small group instead of working alone to learn man activities. Educators and researchers have never stopped the examination of the importance and relevance of collaborative learning that are encouraged by middle schools. When compared with studying alone, I, personally, believe that it is far more beneficial to students when working in groups for the following reasons. First off, working in a group can be very conducive for students since they can help students to study more effectively and thus tackle real-world issues. A recent study conducted by University of Minnesota backed up the claim that
Curricular for TOEFL Writing ⅠOutline 1.Course Introduction 2.Test Introduction Writing section Question Reading Time Listening Time Writing Time Integrated task 3 minutes 2 minutes 20 minutes Independent task －－30 minutes Question type setting Time:50 minutes Question type: a.Integrated writing (20 minutes) Step 1: read a passage (3 minutes) Step 2: listen to a passage related to the reading material (2 minutes) Step 3: summarize a passage about 150 to 225 words based on the reading and listening passages. (without you own viewpoints) b.Independent writing (30 minutes) ▲agree or disagree ▲comparison Test evaluation a.effectively addresses the writing topic and task b.well organized and well developed https://www.doczj.com/doc/de9696303.html,es specific details and examples to support your view d.displays language facility by demonstrating syntactic variety, word choice and idiom 3.Principles of TOEFL writing ▲simplicity ▲equality ▲difference 4.Difference between English and Chinese writing ▲Structure vs. meaning ▲Long sentence vs. short sentence ▲Clause vs. individual sentence ▲Pronoun vs. noun ▲Passive voice vs. active voice ▲Variety vs. repetition ▲Abstract vs. specific ▲Extension vs. reasoning ▲Omission vs. complementary ▲Center in the beginning vs. center in the back 5.Appreciation and analysis of model composition with full mark. ▲ vocabulary ▲ grammar
精品文档 The most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime. As the economy and technology develop at an incredible speed in today's society, there are an increasing number of people believing that the most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime. In my view, however, this is out of the question and the three most significant problems affecting the society, namely war, environmental destruction and disease, will still influence us and may not be entirely resolved forever. War is a problem afflicting humans since they took into being in the first place. Wars take place when different countries have conflicting benefits, which is unlikely to be eliminated as long as the boundaries between countries still exist. For instance, in the Middle East where water is extremely scarce, many countries are in conflict in contention for water resources. Since every country acts for the sake of its own benefit, it seems that people in the region are incapable of living together in harmony. Eternal world peace, therefore, is unlikely to be achieved in our lifetime. Environmental destruction emerged not long before but it is becoming increasingly severe and can not be ignored. With the large-scale utilization of fossil fuels and rapid development of industry, huge amounts of pollutants are being produced, contaminating the environment to a large degree. The disposal of these pollutants being a tough task, it is hardly possible that we can completely get rid of them within a short period of time. Furthermore, even if we can come up with optimal methods for dealing with these substances, there remains the problem that these methods may cost too much and obstruct the development of economy. Last but not least, the well-being of people around the world is threatened by a variety of diseases, ranging from AIDS to cancer, the cures for which have not been discovered yet. Diseases set off panics among humans, affect their normal life and leave people badly off with the high medical expenses. There are thousands of scientists devoting themselves to finding cure for diseases, but new types of diseases keep emerging and there is no eliminating all of them. In summary, the problems with the most significance today are going to be passed on to our offspring. To eliminate these problems thoroughly, there is still a long way to go. . 精品文档 Some people think that a university professor should focus time on doing research, while others think that the main role of a professor is to educate students in a university. What is the main role of a university professor, to educate students or to do research? Some people believe that professors should focus their time on doing research, but as far as I am concerned, it is
Do you agree or disagree: Improving schools is the most important factor in successful development of country. Intro: 1.每个国家在发展时，都会遇到资源分配的问题，在这么多领域上，有人提出应该先优先发展教育，因为提高学校质量是一个国家成功发展的最重要的条件。但是我不容易这个观点，我认为仅仅提高学校质量并不能保证一个国家的发展，我们还需要看到其他的东西。 BODY: 2.需要重视提供足够的就业机会。没有足够的就业机会，英雄无用武之地，不会对国家发展有利。 3.需要重视社会制度的发展：公平性，社会保障。否则会打击优秀毕业生积极性，导致好的学校也没有意义。 很多富二代，官二代人靠着关系跟后门进入好的单位，但是有能力的人没关系的人却处处面壁。 每年也有大量的留学生出国后滞留国外，因为国外能享受到更好的社会保障。 4.让步+转折：虽然教育是国家发展的重要方面，但是不能忽略了其他同样重要的方面的发展。 Conlusion 5.所以,虽然教育是国家发展中重要的一环，但是却不能说是最重要的一环，一个国家能最终成功发展，必须在多个领域上都要抓紧。 When it comes to the development of a country, many people believe that societal source should give priority to education, which is the most essential ingredient for successful development. However, I can not agree with this statement. It's worthwhile and necessary to develop education, but to say that schools improvement is the most important factor to develop a country is out of point. Education can not guarantee the development of a country if the improvements of other equally important aspects are omitted. First, a country will not be successfully developed if it neglects to create or can not offer enough job opportunities. Basically, if the economy does not generate enough good professional jobs to absorb the influx of highly educated young adults, improving in school seems to be meaningless to a society. Worse yet, too many jobless graduates may even bring instability to a country. That's because unemployment can elicit their dissatisfactions and disappointments to the authorities which may spur the abuse of their intelligence. Also, little concern about social system improvement can threaten the development course regardless of top-level schools. Suppose that when getting a good job is not much connected
2019年8月26日27日托福写作预测：教育成功类 话题 Education & Success 1. Ifyour teacher says something incorrect in a class, what will you do? 1. Interrupt your teacher right away 2. Keep silent 3.Correct your teacher after class 2. Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement? Professorsshould spend more time doing research rather than teaching students. 3. Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement? It is moreimportant for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence than to teachthem specific knowledge. 4. Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier to succeed nowadays than in the past. 5. Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in school and work, the ability to adapt oradjust to a changing condition or circumstance is more important than having excellentknowledge of a job or a field to study 6. Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement?
综合写作模板 1. in the lecture, the professor made several points about ...... .the professor argues that..... However, the reading passage contends that ......The professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of point that are contrary to.... 2. the first point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that....According to the professor...... .....differs from the reading in that the reading states.....The point made by the professor casts doubt on the reading becasue.... 3. Another point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is....The professor claims that.....However, the reading states.....This point is contradicted by..... 4. Finally,the professor stated that ,on the contrary of reading,......In other words,.....This directly contradicts what the reading passage indicates,because..... 然后反驳的单词，differ from ,disagree with, cast doubt on, conflict with, challenge 5. In the lecture, the professor made several points about...The lecture argues that.....The points made by the professor agree with .....In fact, the examples used by the
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4.让步+转折：虽然教育是国家发展的重要方面，但是不能忽略了其他同样重要的方面的发展。 Conlusion 5.所以,虽然教育是国家发展中重要的一环，但是却不能说是最重要的一环，一个国家能最终成功发展，必须在多个领域上都要抓紧。 When it comes to the development of a country, many people believe that societal source should give priority to education, which is the most essential ingredient for successful development. However, I can not agree with this statement. It's worthwhile and necessary to develop education, but to say that schools improvement is the most important factor to develop a country is out of point. Education can not guarantee the development of a country if the improvements of other equally important aspects are omitted. First, a country will not be successfully developed if it neglects to create or can not offer enough job opportunities. Basically, if the economy does not generate enough good professional jobs to absorb the influx of highly educated young
托福写作评分标准
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