2008高考英语专题复习书面表达突破训练(七)
Part A 写作基本理论⑦英文写作基础——动词(三)
高考英语核心动词十五类
三、使役动词类
表“致使”意义的动词称之为使役动词，如make，let，have，keep，leave，set，send等。使役动词的作用是后接非谓语动词的不同形式作宾语补足语，表达不同的含义。分以下三种情况。
1.make，let have等后接不带to的不定式，表“使／让某人／某物做某事”。
Don't make him do it if he doesn't want to．
If you have any problems，just let me know．
在被动结构中不定式须带to，但是have不用于被动结构中。
He was made to apologize to the guest．
后接动词不定式做宾语补足语省略不定式符号“to”的一些常用特殊动词口诀:
一些动词要掌握，have, let和make,
此三动词是使役，“注意”“观察”“听到”see，
还有feel和watch，使用它们要仔细，
后接“宾补”略去“to”，此点千万要牢记
除此之外，还可以掌握“一二三四五”，
一感feel,二听hear, listen to, 三让have, let, make,四看see, look at, , watch 五观察observe
2.have，keep，leave，send，set，get等后接v.-ing形式，表持续性动作。
I'm sorry to keep you waiting for so long.
Why do you have him worrying about his lessons?
3.have，keep，leave等后接v-ed形式，表被动含义。
He didn't keep on asking me the time until he had had his watch repaired．
I’ll keep you informed as soon as I have the news．
【高考例题】
(1)[2004天津]Don't leave the water __ running __ while you brush your teeth．
(2) [04重庆]Laws that punish parents for their children's actions against the laws get parents worrying. (3)[2003春安徽]—Why did you go back to the shop?—I left my friend __ waiti ng ____ there .
(4)[NMET1991]It was so cold that they kept the fire __ burning ____ all night.
(5)[NMET1989]—Good morning, can I help you?
—I'd like to have this package _ weighed_____, madam.
(6)[NMET1991]The speaker raised his voice but still couldn't make himself heard
(7)[1994上海]As you have never been there before, I'll have someone ____ show___ you the way.
(8)[NMET1995]Paul doesn't have to be made _.to learn_____. He always works hard.
(9)[1999上海]A computer can do only what thinking people __.have it do ____.
(10)[1998上海]Mrs. Brown was much disappointed to see the washing machine she had had repaired went wrong.
(11)[2005福建]If anyone happens to drop in while I'm out,___ have ___ him or her leave
a message.
四、含情感色彩的动词
这类动词有excite，inspire，encourage，interest，satisfy，delight，please，move，frighten，surprise，amaze，astonish，shock，worry，astonish，disappoint，discourage，exhaust，puzzle，tire，terrify等。情感动词后接指人的名词或代词作宾语，有v.-ing和v.-ed两种形式，在句中作宾语和表语，v.-ing形式指人，v.-ed形式则指事物。
The story was so moving that everyone present was movedto tears.
What disappointing result! We were all disappointed with it.
Climbing a hill was tiring and we were tired when we reached the summit.
[高考例题]
(l)[2000春北京]Nick is looking for another job because he feels that nothing he does __ sati sfies _ his boss.
(2)[2002春NMET]—l'm very _ pleased _ with my own cooking. It looks nice smells delicio us.
—Mm, it does have a ___ pleasant__ smell.
(3) [2003春北京]Mr. Smith, ___ tired __ of the ___ boring __ speech, started to read a n ovel.
(4)[2003上海]It is believed that if a book is ___ interesting ___, it will surely __ interest __ the reader.
(5)[2004春上海]After his journey from abroad, Richard Jones returned home __ exhausted _.
Part B 写作必备素材⑥议论文
人生信条、人口人权
We should make full use of our time to do useful things.
We should form the good habit of saving time. Do not put off what can be done today until tomorrow.
It is a pity that some people do not know the importance of time.
They do not realize that wasting time is equal to wasting a part of their valuable life.
Do not put off what can be done today until tomorrow.
Women shouldn’t be looked down upon.
There’s nothing that women can’t do.
Women hold half of the sky.
Sometimes women are better at their work than men.
The day will come soon when women can really enjoy equal rights.
It is high time we practised birth control.
In my opinion, there is no relation between the so-called lucky number and luck. The only key to success or wealth lies in hard work. We should believe in our own efforts to struggle for success.
It’s very convenient for the people who have their own cars to go to work or to take their children to school. But a lot of problems are coming out.
We should learn anything valuable from all nations in the world.
Apart from the advanced science and technology, we should learn that Americans love freedom and independence.
It is easy to imitate Americans but difficult to learn the secrets of their success.
If the rest of the world also had fair ownership of land like China, there would be no starvation. There is a long way to go to build China into a most powerful country.
The only key to success or wealth lies in hard work.
The reason for their success is that they knew how to study by themselves.
As a proverb says, “Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.”
As the old saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success.”
We must always remember the old saying that where there is a will, there is a way.
Unfortunately, most people do not seem to realize how much inner strength and ability they have.
If they really have the desire and the ambition, nothing is impossible.
Every man knows that money is powerful and important in everyday life. But I don’t think that money is/means everything.
It goes without saying(毫无疑问)that money can do many things.
As the old saying goes, “Good health is the best wealth.”
There is no doubt that wealth brings happiness. But there are exceptions when wealth does not go hand in hand with happiness.
People can not live without health but can without wealth.
Only when wealth is acquired by means of honest labor and spent for the benefit of not only oneself but also his people and country, can it bring happiness.
近年来高考英语书面表达中的难句
第七节：各种状语和状语从句
1. All the students of Senior Grade Three are required to be there on time.
2. The teacher told me to pay much attention to my handwriting in my studies later.
3. If you have any trouble, please ask me for help.
4. I’m very sorry to have troubled you so much.
5. I’m so sorry that I have made such a careless mistake.
6. All my teachers praised me for my little progress.
7. She was a lady in her early / late thirties.
8. I asked him if he agreed with what I said at the meeting.
9. We were told to get everything ready for the college entrance examination.
10. Hearing the good news, he couldn’t help letting out a cry of joy.
11. The farmers spent half a year building this man-made lake.
12. It took them half a day to get rid of all the rubbish from the river bank.
13. The engineer showed us how to operate the computer of a type.
14. Helped by my friends I came to realize my mistake and decided to give it up.
15. With the help of the villager, we had no trouble in finding her address.
16. When he returned home, Tom was surprised to find great changes had taken place in his home
town.
17. After going two crossings, you’ll catch sight of a post office at the back of which is the Friendship hotel.
18. The book was so interesting that he couldn’t tear himself away from it.
19. Before we knew it, it was time for us to get back.
20. The running car hit the old man before he could get out of the way.
Part C2007年高考写作基本功训练(词组句子汉译英)
①.高考必备习惯用语和固定搭配汉译英
1. 缺席, 不在
2. 心不在焉
3. 全神贯注于…
4. 富于, 富有
5.能接近, 进入, 了解
6.偶然地, 意外.
7.自愿地, 主动地
8.与…一致
9. 因为;
10.不论什么原因也不
11.,把...考虑进去
12.说明, 解释(理由)
13. 解释, 说明.
14.指控, 控告
15. 扮演;
16. 使自己适应于
17. 此外, 又, 加之
18. 粘附; 坚持, 遵循
19. 调节; 适应;
20. 预告, 事先.
②.句子汉译英
1.你应该提高你的绘画能力。
2.我有个哥哥住在国外。
3.经理出差去国外了。
4.我不在时，请照看我的房子。
5.环境保护者和野山羊在大草原上的出现时环境改善的一个很好的迹象。
6.经理缺席会议。
7.他由于心不在焉造成了很多错误。
8.没人注意到他没来上学。
9.我会尽我所能帮助你的。
10.他是个有本领的作家。
Part D 十年高考英语写作真题及范文分析、总结、背诵、默写
(NMET 1995—NMET 2006)
2004年全国各地高考英语书面表达试题
广西卷
假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。
内容要点：*表示歉意
*理由：去机场接人
*询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座
注意：1. 词数：100左右
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Miss Morgan,
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
Part E 书面表达周周练
假设你是李华，是“江海中学”的学生。请你围绕“ 建设社会主义新农村”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全江苏省的中学生写一封信，介绍社会主义新农村的内容并发表自己的看法。
要点提示：
1．加强水利设施建设，以便灌溉(irrigate) 农田,使农村居民都能安全用水。为使农民出行便利(facilitate)，仍将继续进行公路建设。
2．在农村将努力扩大使用清洁燃料,如沼气(marsh gas)、太阳能。农村电力网建设也将完成。
3．农村教育状况、农村卫生服务体系(public health care system)、农村社会保障体系（social security system）也都将得到改善。农村居民有更多的文化。
4．自己的想法：1）。。。。。。2）。。。。。。3）。。。。。。。。。。
注意：1．词数：120左右。书信的开头已为你写好，不计入词数。
2．内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。
参考答案
1. be absent from…. 缺席, 不在
2. absence of mind(=being absent-minded) 心不在焉
3. be absorbed北地区in 全神贯注于…近:be engrossed in; be lost in; be rapt in; be
concentrated on; be focused on; be centered on
4. (be) abundant in(be rich in; be well supplied with) 富于, 富有
5. access(to) (不可数名词) 能接近, 进入, 了解
6. by accident(=by chance, accidentally)偶然地, 意外.
7. of one's own accord(=without being asked; willingly;
freely)自愿地, 主动地
8. in accord with 与…一致
9. with one accord (=with everybody agreeing)一致地
10. in accordance with (=in agreement with) 依照, 根据
11. on one's own account
1) 为了某人的缘故, 为了某人自己的利益
2) (=at one's own risk) 自行负责
3) (=by oneself)依靠自己
on account 赊账; on account of 因为; on no account不论什么原因也不;of …account 有…..重要性.
12. take…into account(=consider)把...考虑进去
13. give sb. an account of 说明, 解释(理由)
14. account for (=give an explanation or reason for) 解释, 说明.
15. on account of (=because of) 由于, 因为.
16. on no account(=in no case, for no reason)绝不要,
无论如何不要(放句首时句子要倒装)
17. accuse…of…(=charge…with; blame sb. for sth.; blame sth. on
sb.; complain about) 指控, 控告
18. be acquainted with(=to have knowledge of) 了解; (=to have
met socially) 熟悉
19. act on 奉行, 按照…行动; act as 扮演; act for 代理
20. adapt oneself to(=adjust oneself to) 使自己适应于
21. adapt…(for) (=make sth. Suitable for a new need) 改编,
改写(以适应新的需要)
22. in addition (=besides) 此外, 又, 加之
23. in addition to(=as well as, besides, other than)除…外
24. adhere to (=abide by, conform to, comply with, cling to,
insist on, persist in, observe, opinion, belief ) 粘附; 坚持, 遵循
25. adjacent(=next to, close to) 毗邻的, 临近的
26. adjust..(to) (=change slightly)调节; 适应;
ability n. ①能力②才能（常用复数）
[特征]
ability是able的名词形式，可以和able一起记忆。
- He is a man of ability. 他是个能干的人。
- He has the ability to read. 他有阅读的能力。
- He has great abilities as a writer. 他是个有本领的作家。
[考点]
ability后面可以接动词不定式、介词in或for，但不能接of doing形式。
-（×）You should improve the ability of drawing.
-（√）You should improve the ability to draw.
-（√）You should improve the ability in/for drawing.你应该提高你的绘画能力。
[备考必备] 重要词组
have the ability to do sth. 有能力做某事to the best of one's
ability 尽力
- I will help you to the best of my ability. 我会尽我所能帮助你的。
[贴心叮咛]
上面[特征]中三个句子是最基础的，ability的基本用法都在这三个句子中。
abroad n. ①在国外，到国外②到处
[特征]
- One of my brothers lived abroad. 我有个哥哥住在国外。
- The manager went abroad for business. 经理出差去国外了。
- The poor granny has never been abroad. 这个贫穷的老奶奶从未出过国。
- The news spread abroad. 消息传得很广。
[贴心叮咛]
这个单词很简单，虽然历届高考也经常考到，但考点不是很多，只要记住上面几个基本用法即可。
absence n. ①不在，缺席②缺乏
[特征]
- Nobody noticed his absence from school. 没人注意到他没来上学。
[备考必备] 重要词组
in/during one's absence 在某人不在时
- Please take care of my house during my absence.
我不在时，请照看我的房子。
absence of mind 心不在焉
- His absence of mind led to a lot of mistakes.
他由于心不在焉造成了很多错误。
[练习与解答]
- The evvironmentalists and wild goats' on the vast
grasslands was a good indication of the better environment.
[2004 上海]
A. escape
B. absence
C. attendance
D. appearance
答案：D
（环境保护者和野山羊在大草原上的出现时环境改善的一个很好的迹象。escape是“逃跑”；absence是“缺席”；attendance是“参加”；appearance是“出现”。）
absent adj. ①缺席的，不在场的②缺乏的
[备考必备] 重要词组
be absent from 缺席
- The manager was absent from the meeting. 经理缺席会议。
[贴心叮咛]
absent考的频率很高，对这个词的考查基本都集中在词组be absent from
One possible version:
Dear Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.
I am very much interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
A Letter to High School Students in Jiangsu
Dear fellow students,
Our government is aiming to build a new socialist countryside . I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal
Now, I’d like to tell you something about the programme.
First of all, more water facilities will be installed to irrigate the farmland and allow rural residents to drink safe water. At the same time , road construction will continue with the goal
of facilitating farmers' work.
According to the programme, efforts will be made to expand the use of clean fuels such as marsh gas and solar energy in rural areas and the construction of the rural power network will be completed.
We’ll find that the rural education conditions , public health care system and social security system will be improved. Rural residents will have more access to culture,too.
I think our dream of a new socialist countryside will come true soon.
Dear fellow students, let's study hard now and try to use our knowledge to build our new socialist countryside in the near future
。。。。。。
Li Hua
目录 突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达 (1) 第一讲提升英语写作的“三板斧” (3) 第二讲熟练写作的10类体裁 (18) 《突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达》 【高考命题规律】 1.语用目的——讲好中国故事，增强文化自信 高考书面表达的情境设置真实，任务要求符合考生能力水平，又自然融入了我国优秀传统文化的内容，能够引导考生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承和发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲好中国故事，增强文化自信。 2.文体形式——以应用文为主，主要考查书信/电子邮件 从近几年高考全国卷来看，书面表达主要考查应用文，其中以电子邮件为主，邀请信、告知信、介绍类书信考查较多，只有2018年全国卷Ⅱ考查了书面通知。电子邮件是生活中最常用的应用文体，近几年来，当仁不让地成为了命题专家的最爱，而这也符合了高考“重考查深度更重考查广度”、“贴近生活”的趋势特点。 3.提示类型——以提纲作文为主，试题的开放性越来越强 近几年高考书面表达主要以提纲作文为主，但提示越来越简洁，试题的开放性逐渐增强。(半)开放性体现在试题既为考生提供了恰当的提示，又留有供其自由发挥的空间，既让低水平的考生有话可写，又让高水平考生有展现自己语言表达能力的机会，保证试卷的区分度。 【掌握备考策略】 ●普通作文VS高分作文——找出差距才能目标明确
●高考书面表达评分细则——各省可能根据情况稍有不同 1.本题满分为25分，按5个档次给分。如果是第四档(16-20分)，那么就给18分。好处是：阅卷教师们“没有风险”，怎么都说得过去。坏处是：低分下不去，高分上不来。 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将其分数降低一个档次。 ●书面表达评价表——自我评价与同伴互评 写作训练时，教师评价和修改虽重要，但自我评价和同伴互评效果更佳，可以借鉴下表进行自我评价和同伴互评。
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but also I have the personality for a ______________ (工作名称). On one hand, _____________________(第一个原因On the other hand, ______________________(另一个原因). Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me，please feel free to contact me at any time at________________________( Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you. Yours Sincerely, 模板② Dear Sir or Madam, I’m _________(简单自我介绍). When I was reading the advertisement, _________(表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it’s a good opportunity for me to _____________(应聘的原因Therefore I recommend myself to without hesitation.
高考英语书面表达背诵 范文25篇 -CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN
高考英语书面表达背诵范文25篇 ---多背范文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上内容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 范文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know th at the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@https://www.doczj.com/doc/d814495151.html,. I’m looking forward to your reply. 2
2011高考英语书面表达强化训练 历届高考英语书面表达中使用过的词组总汇 1.a boy of 14. 2.a brief discussion 3.a heated discussion about 4.a waste of time 5.a wilderness survival program 6.achieve this goal 7.after a short rest 8.after—class activities 9.agree with what sb says 10.air pollution 11.an English speech contest 12.arrive at an agreement 13.as far as I know 14.as for myself 15.as is shown on Chart 2 16.as we all know 17.as well 18.at home and abroad 19.at the age of 20.at weekends 21.attend classes 22.attractive and meaningful 23.be about to do---when 24.be against the idea of— 25.be available 26.be fond of 27.be healthier and more energetic 28.be on the point of doing sth when 29.be trained 30.Best wishes 31.break the rules 32.build a “harmonious society 33.catch sight of 34.charge fees for 35.chat with friends online about 36.cheating in examinations 37.collect stamps 38.get close to nature 39.cover the entrance fees 40.deal with this problem 41.develop its economy scientifically 42.develop rapidly 43.do a lot of harm 44.do endless homework 45.early in the morning 46.express thanks to 47.fail in the exams 48.follow one’s own interests 49.for one reason, for another reason 50.for this purpose 51.form/ develop/get into a bad habit 52.free of charge 53.get along well with 54.get better results 55.get cheated 56.get everything ready for 57get rid of/ kick off 58.get the free medical care 59.get the position 60.get well prepared for 61give sb a warm welcome 62.give sb some advice on how to do sth 63.give sb some wonderful performances 64.go to the countryside for a change 65.Good luck in your coming examination 66.group discussion 67.have some trouble doing sth 68.have a discussion about 69.have a history of 200 years 70.have confidence in oneself 71.have much knowledge in many fields 72.head west 73.hear from 74.hold a party 75.heavy traffic 76.improve one’s English study 77.improe our study methods 78.in favor of 79.in one’s early/late thirties 80.in rush hour 81.in the past ten years 82.introduce sb to sb 83.it is convenient for sb to do sth 84.It’s one’s duty to do sth 85.It is pretty hard for sb 86.it’s been a dream for sb to do sth 87.join sb in doing sth https://www.doczj.com/doc/d814495151.html,y a solid foundation for 89.learn more about nature 90.let one’s imagination fly 91.let out a cry of joy 92.lie to the east of 93.listening and speaking abilities 94.living condition 95.look forward to 96.make a trip to 97.make arrangements 98.make friends online 99.make one’s decision as soon as possible 100.May I have your attention ? 101.miss the good/golden chance/opportunity 102.noble spirit 103.opinions are divided on the question https://www.doczj.com/doc/d814495151.html,anize a tour around the city 105.pay a visit to 106.prepare lunch 107.promote the students’ abilities 108.recommend 109.reduce learning load 110.result from 111.result in 112.satisfy one’s needs 113.sb be required to be there on time 114.school rules 115.shortly after 116.show interest in 117.show one’s love for 118.show one’s talent 119.show sb around 120.sign up 121.sign your name 122.solve the problem 123.spare no efforts to do sth 124.sports activities 125.spread Chinese culture 126.start school 127.sth is drawing near. 128.stick to the post 129.take advantage of
专题16 书面表达 一、假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教Peter 参加。请你写一封信给Peter,要点如下: 1.英语戏剧节的活动内容; 2.邀请Peter一起表演一个节目; 3.期望Peter对本次活动给出建议。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week.Knowing that you are interested in English drama,I am writing to invite you to participate. A variety of activities will be included in the festival,such as singing,crosstalk and so on.You are expected to put on a performance with us.In my opinion,it will be a good combination of your culture and ours.Besides,since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival,we are at a loss about how to arrange it properly.Your advice will be of great value to us.Please inform us of your arrival in advance so that early arrangements can be made. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件,说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race),希望你帮助他预订好旅馆,并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower,东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信,内容包括: 1.回复他的要求;
全国各地高考英语书面表达汇总9套 新课标I卷 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 示例1 Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindness! Yours, Li Hua 示例2 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign
高考英语书面表达讲解与训练——开放性写作 一. 教学内容： 书面表达讲解与训练 开放性写作（北京卷） 开放性写作是北京卷近两年增加的第二篇作文，英文为open-ending composition。它所给提示比较简单，要求学生根据提供的情景，写一段接续文字。这篇作文要求学生充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构，既能体现出学生活跃的思维，又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。它要求学生必须在短时间内写出一篇内容充实新颖、思想健康、符合逻辑、交际得体的，字数不少于50个字的作文。 写作注意要点： 1. 审题要准，定位要清。 即：审语境、审人称、审时态。注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识，看文章是以第几人称出现；说话的对象是谁；看清题目要求。 2. 逻辑清晰，合情合理。 要做到思想健康，积极向上。要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑。 要把理由说充分，是在现实生活中可能会发生的事情。内容要新颖、健康、乐观向上，（所表述的内容、观点是主动、积极向上的），我们在写作时要注意的是求新并不等于求怪，并不是说越希奇古怪、越离谱越好。内容新颖并非是别人完全没提过的、全新的想法，而是别人在相同的情景之下讲得比较少的，又不违背逻辑的想法。新颖的思路能够充分表现学生的创造力。 3. 内容充实，详略得当。 要有主次之分，详略得当。要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑。 考查的目的---能否正确使用英语达到交际的目的。（语言要口语化）把事情说具体，缺少细致的描写，就像建房只搭架子不用砖一样，显得空洞无味。英语写作有一条座右铭，那就是“show more than tell”，意思是细节表达一定要多于抽象陈述，也就是写作要细节化或举例说明。我们尽量用看得见、摸得着的东西来具体表达思想。才能使文章充实、有趣，符合开放作文的要求。 4. 内容完整、首尾呼应。 要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 有头有尾；展现给读者一个完整的画面。 【典型例题】 ［开放性写作分类与解析：］ 1. 逻辑性思维(logical thinking ) 给出结果猜测可能性（cause and effect） 根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字。 注意：词数不少于30。 You and your friend ar e in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?” You tell him what happened. Possible version: I guess it was all my fault. My mother was doing some reading by the window yesterday, and
【关键字】活动、作文、英语、要点、发现、研究、支撑、环境、标准、任务、关系、取决于、规范 任务型阅读与书面表达组合练(三) (限时40分钟) Ⅰ.任务型阅读 (2017·南京、盐城高三二模)“HELL is a city much like London，” said Percy Bysshe Shelley in 1819. Modern academics agree. Last year Dutch researchers showed that city dwellers (居民) have a 21% higher risk of suffering from anxiety disorders than do their calmer rural countrymen, and a 39% higher risk of suffering from mood disorders. But exactly how the inner workings of the urban and rural minds cause this difference has remained unclear —until now. A study just published in Nature by Andreas Meyer-Lindenberg of the University of Heidelberg and his colleagues has used a scanning technique called functional magnetic-res onance imaging (机能性磁共振成像，简称fMRI) to examine the brains of city dwellers and countrymen when they are under stress. In Dr Meye r-Lindenberg's first experiment, participants lying with their heads in a scanner took maths tests that they were bound to fail (the researchers had designed success rates to be just 25－40% ). To make the experience still more embarrassing, the team provided negative feedback through headphones, all the while checking participants for indications of stress, such as high blood pressure. The city people's general mental health did not differ from that of the rural countrymen. However, their brains dealt with the stress caused by the experimenters in different ways. These differences were noticeable in two regions: the amygdalas (杏仁核) and the perigenual anterior cingulate cortex (前扣带皮层，简称pACC)．People living in the countryside had the lowest levels of activity in their amygdalas. Those living in towns had higher levels. City dwellers had the highest. In the case of the pACC, however, what mattered was not where someone was living now, but where he or she was brought up. The more urban a person's childhood, the more active his pACC, regardless of where he was dwelling at the time of the experiment. The amygdalas thus seem to respond to the h ere-and-now while the pACC is programmed early on, and does not react in the same, flexible way as the amygdalas. Second-to-second changes in its activity might, though, be expected to be connected with changes in the amygdalas, because of its role in regulating them. fMRI allows
高三英语复习---书面表达高分技巧（20120307） By Zhang Shiqin Teaching aims: we are trying to teach sts how to write a good composition, or how to make a composition better so as to get a good mark in an examination especially in the National College Entrance Examination. Teaching Procedures: Step 1高考英语书面表达高分卷常识 一．高考英语书面表达题材特点、体裁特点及出题模式： 1. 题材特点：紧扣课标，教材和考试说明； 贴近现实生活和学生生活实际，易于表达； 突出考查学生实际运用语言的能力。 2.体裁特点：利用各种体裁，以应用文（致辞、发言稿、记叙文、议论文）为主。 3.出题模式：叙事+ 议论，写人+ 议论 二．近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点： 1.行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 2.巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强； 3.巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高； 4.妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 5.书写规范工整，整体效果好。 三．英语写作高分卷的七大原则、八项注意︰ 七大原则八项注意 主题句原则注意审题 一二三原则注意人称 分段原则注意时态 长短句结合原则注意巧用连接词 多实少虚原则禁用汉式英语 短语优先原则注意书写 词句多变原则注意用有把握的词句 注意检查 四．高分卷书面表达段落的核心要素︰ 1. General structure Topic sentence Supporting sentences Concluding sentence 2. Linking words 3. Advanced expressions Various structures Graceful words Step 2怎样写出高分作文 一．仔细审题Analyze the topic carefully
高考英语书面表达最后精选 城市生活的利与弊 某英文报社准备刊发一篇题为Living in the city的有关城市生活的利和弊的 文章，根据下面提示，写一篇词数为100左右的短文。 Advantages Disadvantages 找工作容易生活消费高 交通便利人口多，拥挤 有公园、饭店等休闲场所空气污染、居住环境差 要求：1．覆盖以上内容，可作适当发挥。2．词数100左右。 Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find work. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax. However, living in a city is often very expensive. You must find a well-paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What's more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside. 说明文-English Summer Camp 假如你是李辉，参加了1998年7月25—30 日在山东烟台由英语辅导报社举办的全国中学 生英语夏令营活动。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇100—140 字的报导，以便刊登在«英语通»上。 提示：1、来自全国各地的100多名中学生参加了活动； 2、有来自国内外的30多名英语教学专家； 3、营员们必须用英语交流； 4、举办了一系列活动：1）第二届全国中学生英语辩论赛； 2）第三届全国中学生英语演讲比赛； 3）参观了名胜古迹； 4）举办了英语晚会。 思路指津：注意：1、应包括自己参加夏令营的体会。 2、参考词汇： 1）英语辅导报社：English Coaching Paper Office 2) 1998年全国中学生英语夏令营：1998 National English Summer Camp for Middle School Students (1998 NESCMSS); 3) 辩论：debate 4) 演讲比赛：speech competition 5) 主办：sponsor 6) 英语通： An Express Way to English 3、不要逐句翻译提示，可增加适当有关细节，使文章连贯。 范文： 1998 National English Summer Camp for Middle School Students As a lucky student, I attended the 1998 NESCMSS held in the beautiful seaside city of Yantai from July 25 to 30, which was sponsored by the English Coaching Paper Office. Over 100 students all over the country and 30 English teaching experts from home and abroad took part in the activity. All the campers were required to speak English. During the four days, a series of English activities were held including the Second National English Debate for Middle School Students and the Third National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students. We also visited some places of interest. A colourful English evening was held on July 29. The camp provided us with a valuable opportunity to speak English, make friends and exchange learning experience. I found my English much improved at the end of the camp. Never in my life shall I forget the impressive days in Yantai. 上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗
如何突破写作，获得高分，成为广大师生关注的问题。下面就写作中如何运用高级表达提 出以下几点建议，供广大师生参考。 1.使用复合句 复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来，从而使表达显得高级。高考写作中用到的复合句 包括下列几种： (1) 定语从句 Mary is a girl in Class 1. She speaks English very fluently. → Mary is a girl in Class1 who speaks English very fluently. (2) 状语从句 The doctor arrived there in time. The boy was saved. It was not too late. → The boy was saved because the doctor arrived there before it was too late. (3) 名词性从句(包括主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句和同位语从句) Xiao Ming was always late for school. His te acher didn’t know why. → His teacher didn’t know why Xiao Ming was always late for school. 如果考生驾驭句子的能力较强，则还可以恰当使用复杂的复合句（就是从句中还包含从句）。例如： I want to know whether you want to meet Miss Tang when she comes back from Japan where she works as an engineer. (本句包含3个从句) 2.使用某些惯用句型 写作中如果能恰当运用英语中某些常见的惯用句型，可以使文章显得富有“洋味”。例如： (1) The boy was so brave that he led the enemy into our ring of encirclement (包围).(so…that… 句型) (2) So brave was the boy that he led the enemy into our ring of encirclement (包围). （倒装结构） (3) I did not realize the importance of learning English well until then.（not…until…） (4) Not until then did I realize the importance of learning English well.(not until的倒装句) (5) It was not until then that I realized the importance of learning English well.（强调句） 3.使用高级词汇 ⑴巧用习语(idiom) 英语中有大量习语，如果运用得当，则可大大增加文章的感染力。考生要在平时的学习过 程中不断积累。例如： ① What she explained doesn’t hold water. 她的解释站不住脚。 ② Many families struggle to make ends meet. 很多家庭只能勉强维持生计。 ③ I don’t know why she is always in low spirits. 我不知道她为什么总是情绪低落。 ④ He turned a deaf ear to what I said. 他对我的话一点也听不进去。 ⑤ This sentence doesn’t make sense. 这个句子讲不通。 ⑵用短语代替单词 英语中同义词众多，在表达的时候，尽量用短语代替单个的词。例如： ① I have made up my mind to study English better this term. (同义词：decide) ② I have no idea how to enlarge my vocabulary. (同义词：don’t know) ③ A burning cigarette end resulted in/led to the big fire. (同义词：cause)
专题二书面表达 一、一句多译(每空一词) 1.他提的问题值得讨论。 (1)The problem he raised was worth. (2)He raised a question, was worth discussing. (3)The problem he raised was worthy of . (4)The problem he raised was worthy to . 2.爸爸和妈妈都不在家。 (1)Mother and Father were not . (2)Mother and Father were . (3)My parents were not . (4)Both my mother and father were . (5)Neither Mother nor Father was. 3.昨晚那幢楼房突然起火了。 (1)The building suddenly last night. (2)Suddenly the building was last night. (3)A fire suddenly in the building last night. (4)All of a sudden a fire in the building last night. 4.我花了两个小时做作业。 (1)I spent two hours my homework. (2)I spent two hours my homework. (3)It to do my homework. (4)My homework two hours. 5.我宁愿待在家里也不愿去看电影。 (1)I prefer to stay at home go to the movies. (2)I prefer at home to to the movies. (3)I stay at home than to the movies. 二、翻译下列句子 6.我们班的一个明显的问题是缺乏团队精神。 7.目前,中国的私家车越来越多,因此交通变得越来越糟糕。 8.正是这些充满魔力的语言让我看到了自己的优点,建立了自信。 9.上周一令人难忘,关于传统文化我们有了一次有趣又有意义的体验。 10.这位教授给我们提出了一些如何学好英语的建议。 三、变换表达方式完成短文 11.请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。
高考英语书面表达背诵文25篇 ---多背文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封信，申请 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@sina.. I’m looking forward to your reply.