叙事性英语作文
【篇一：英语作文的写作模板：记叙文】
英语作文的写作模板：记叙文
记叙文特别注重写作技巧，要求跌宕起伏不平淡，崇尚“意料之外，情理之中”的文学效果，是一种难度很大的文体。但是在考试的时间压力下，我们可以背诵一些写作模板应付紧张的考试。
一．记叙文的写作模板介绍
everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it. to me, it happened __1时间和地点___, and i still remember the whole process vividly. at that time, i was ___2“我”在做什么____. it was a sunny day and things were awfully ___3形容词_____ before it happened. then ____4事件____ drew my attention. i saw ___5详细说明当时情况_____, and to my ____6表达感受的名词_____, ____7当事人______ was ____8正在进行的动作____. it did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that i would _____9自己的感受______.
whenever i look back on what happened that day, i think it is right to ____10理应采取的措施或态度一______. first for all, no one can deny its/his/her _____11对当事人评价的名词______. furthermore, it is important for us to _____12理应采取的措施或态度二______. i will cherish all these memories forever.
二．应用模板的例子
例子1 题目：honor for my teacher
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it was a sunny day and things were awfully before it happened. then drew my attention. i saw , and to my was it did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that i would .
whenever i look back on what happened that day, i think it is right to . first for all, no one can deny her . furthermore, it is important for us to
注意，这是一个写作模板，里面有12个空格，并不是说一定要填满12个空格。可以按照实际情况进行取舍。
【篇二：九年级英语作文叙事】
dear mike,
i’m glad to hear from you. during the three years of middle school, there are many sweet memories shining in my mind. but among them i remembered a sports meeting best.
it was a cloudy day. i took part in the school sports meeting and ran the 100-meter race. i was not good at sports, so i felt very nervous. after i started to run, i fell to the ground and hurt my leg badly. i was very sad and my feeling was as bad as the weather. luckily, my friend li hong took me to the hospital immediately.(立刻) after the doctor examined and put some medicine on my leg, li hong took me home. he not only paid for the medicine but also took care of me.
i felt very thankful to him. and i think he is my true friend. just like the old saying says, “ a friend in need is a friend indeed.” friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that i enjoyed
during the three years. so i will remember it forever.
i’m glad to hear from you. our school organized a lot of activities in the past three years. i remember the mountain climbing best.
last term, my classmates and i had a school trip to xiangshan park. there, we were divided into 7 groups to take a competition. the first group that topped the mountain would
win a big prize. of course, everyone was looking forward to winning the game.
our group tried our best to climb as quickly as possible. but i felt dizzy and was out of breath for climbing too quickly midway. i was so tired that i couldn’t keep going. i fell down to the stairs suddenly. everyone in my group came to me immediately. at that moment, i felt really sorry because i made the group stop and maybe we couldn’t win the competition. but none of them complained me. they were all kind and friendly. some of them gave me candies so that i could get more energy. others carried the bag for me so that i could climb the mountain easily? “you can do it!” everyone encouraged me. at that time, i felt really powerful!
at last, we topped the mountain. although we didn’t win the game, i felt so proud and warm. we were the best because we were such a united group!
what do you remember best at school? write and tell me.
i’m glad to hear from you. at school i remember the most unforgettable thing that happened between my english teacher and me.
once i was not good at english, especially when i began to learn english. i found it too difficult. i also became upset easily.
i always failed in the exams and almost gave it up. my english teacher, miss li, noticed my problem. she had a talk with me patiently and taught me how to learn english well. after that, she spent an hour helping me every da
y. little by little, i became interested in english and felt more and more confident. now i not only do well in english but also try to help others with their english when they are in trouble.
i still remember that because i think i am so proud to be one of miss li’s students. i have learned a lot from her. when i grow
up in the future, i hope i will become a teacher like her.
what do you remember best at school? write and tell me.
【篇三：narrative 叙事英语作文】
alice guo
mr. tinsley
sept. 23th 2013
personal narrative (first draft)
gone with the cheers
“come on!! chase her!! you can do it!” the inflammatory sound of cheers keeps ringing in my head, but the cheers of encouragement become softer and softer.this was my first sports meeting in my middle school. it was hosted on sept.
20th; just a few days later thanthe new semesterhad begun. as a freshman, everything was new to me. i found it strangethat i couldn’trush in the hallways any more.i oftenwas lost in the campus and could not find the way to
thedormitory. i had never tried those wired food before i came here.
most of the time, you could see me sitting on that cold but smooth chair, staring at a small black fly rushing around the whitest wall. it flew without knowing direction, without rhyme or reas on. so abrupt, isn’t it?
i wasn’t adaptable at all, never. being pulled apart from my old friends made me feel sad. when i laid stiffly on my stiff wood bed, i was lonely and isolated.
a few days later, my advisor had a seriousconversation with me. he said he was aware that i was too solitary to make friends. “you should be outgoing and be open. do you want to be alone all the time?” i nodded subconsciously, suddenly i realized something, and shook my head abruptly.
through that conversation, my advisor knew that i was good at running, and i had won many prizes. so i became a part of the sports team.
i sat alone on the bench of the playground, gazing at the blurry figures. cheers and laughter filled the entire space. a pleasant smell was coming,accompanied by the gentle breeze. three girlsappeared. they stared at me with curiousness. “i am xia xia, call me summer. i have been noticing you for a while. you are so quiet. what is your name?” that girl with short black hair asked, mouth slightly up.i began to talk with them. after introductions, i knew they were the members of the sports team just like me, and we were going to participate in a relay race
game. “ from now on, we are partners! ”the other girl patted me on the shoulder. she was short but athlet ic. “yeah! our team will be the best! just wait! losers!” the girl with the blue hair band cheered. she posed like a gunner holding a gun, strafed in the air. we looked at each other andlaughed out loud. under the clear blue sky, we ran with abandon. they held my hand, sang songs without tune, waved arms together and going around in circles. sunshine was floating on our faces brightly. from that moment on, we were connected.we started hanging out together. telling jokes, gossiping and making fun of each other. i was no longer alone. we practiced everyday. ran around the playground over and over again. we always stuck it out until we were out of
breath and our legs hardly moved. our shirts got wet, with uncountable beads of sweat that dropped from our forehead. exhausted but happy, we did everything we could do to improveour running skills. because we were going to join the relay race, the heart connections were very important. we did pass- and receive
combinations of thousands time, to ensure we could save time on it and pass the relay baton accurately. we tried to increase
our awareness so we could predict each other’s every move between the team.
the big day came. it was a little chilly in the morning. sunshine was so soft, been blew away of the stronger wind. we were standing on the race, with calm and aplomb. i was the anchor leg, which got a lot of pressure: no matter how fast the other teams are, i was supposed to, should to chase them.
with the red smog appeared on the screen, a transient
gunshot made everyone bleed out. like the moment was frozen.
i stood in that, waiting for my girls. more and more near,
almost here! we were the second one. summer looked fierce in the high speed. when she handed the baton on my hand, i rushed out like a narrow. i got to win! i told myself. the wind blows hard near my ear, making a roaring noise.another girl chased up me. she accelerated. the cheers were rolling. i cannot let others down! i cannot be behind! i waved my arms faster like a super machine, so as my legs.the only thing that i could see was theribbon in the finishing line.
only 50 meters left! i exhaust all my strength to run faster. and the cheers
surrounded me, loud but hopeful. i closed my eyes and let myself bump ahead. nearer!almost there! i tried best to step farther and father. at that moment, like the whole world has been frozen, i felt i touched a ribbon. we won!!! the other three girls rushed to me, hold each other tightly. we go around and around, high five and jumped. the auditorium had boiled, too. cheers and laughterstayed a very long time. finally, racking
with the wind and lightening and disappeared.
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高考英语应用文写作之新闻报道
应用文写作之新闻报道(金版学案52页) ?技巧点拨 1.新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句(topic sentence),因此这个句子中主要讲清what (事件), when (时间), where (地点) 和who (人物),而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节,往往包括why(目的或原因)和how(具体过程)等。 2.注意新闻类型题材的一些常用语,如It is reported that..., As is reported..., According to the report...; It is estimated that...等。 3.新闻通讯亦为记叙文，时态一般要用过去时，注意句子结构；主句，从句结构要清晰，语言要客观平时，不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。 4. 阅读范文时, 重在掌握时间的表达, 背诵范文的第一句和斜体字的句型。 ●假设你是一名新闻记者，请根据以下表格信息给英语报社写一篇新闻报道。 【写作内容】 国际背景今年4月，墨西哥爆发了H1N1流感（flu）,疾病迅速蔓延到全球多个国家。国内影响截至8月30日下午，有报道称河南省某中学共发现确诊病例 (confirmed case) 80 例，那儿的中小学全部推迟开学。 专家估计该疾病的死亡率低于1%，低于SARS 和禽流感（bird flu）。 预防方法勤洗手，多喝水，充足睡眠。 个人信念在政府的帮助下，我们一定能够打赢这战争。 【参考范文】 The H1N1 flu broke out in Mexico in April this year and it has spread quickly to many countries in the world. To our disappointment, by the afternoon on August 30, 80 confirmed cases of H1N1 flu had been reported in a school in He’nan province, resulting in the
阅读的重要性英语作文英语阅读能力的重 要性 英语学习中，要培养学生包括听、说、读、写等多种技能，但其中最基本而又最重要的就是阅读能力了。在21世纪的今天，阅读已成为获取知识和信息的一条重要途径，也是中国大多数英语学习者学习英语的重要手段。在英语各级各类考试中，阅读题的分数在整个试卷中所占的比重很大，阅读分数的高低，往往决定学生考分的高低。英语的阅读内容涉及的范围较广，有关于历史的也有关于现实生活的，有故事性的，也有经济、科普类的，这样的阅读内容要求学生的知识面要广、分析理解判断的能力要强。可以说，阅读理解能力直接反应一个学生的综合能力。 然而很多人阅读理解能力很差，一接触阅读理解，就有一种谈“读”色变、茫然失措的感觉。我们通过分析发现影响阅读理解能力的主要因素有：1.词汇量匮乏，对词语理解失准，片面。2. 相关的背景知识缺乏，影响对整篇文章的理解。3. 不习惯英语表达的思维模式，对英语的句子结构不熟悉，造成文章理解的困难。4. 没有良好的阅读习惯，既影响了阅读的速度，又妨碍了学生获取信息的准确性。5. 缺乏掌握基本的阅读技巧，阅读效果不好。 找出了影响学生阅读能力的主要因素后，就应针对这些方面采取措施，加强专项训练，教会学生学会阅读，掌握阅读方法，养成良好的阅读习惯，培养高效的阅读理解能力。要做到这一点，我们必须教给学生们如何扩大词汇量，如何将语法学习运用到阅读中，以及如何积累背景知识。最后是掌握有效的阅读策略，它可以帮助你更好的理解阅读材料，即使有生词和难以理解的一些句子。 下面我们就来谈一谈英语阅读理解的重要性 第一，阅读可以培养学生的语感，激发学生学习英语的兴趣 语感在英语学习中非常重要，因为它决定了你的英语口语是否纯正和地道。语感是对语言最直接的感受，它是在特定环境中经过长期的语言实践形成的。俗语云：“书读百遍，其义自现。”这是中国古文的学习方法，我个人认为它同样也适用于英语学习。因此，阅读是培养我们语感最基本和最直接的方式。此外，它可以帮助学生在各种门类的英语考试中，作为一个潜在的能力，帮助学生克服一些语言障碍作出正确的判断，即使没有理由。 第二，阅读能扩大词汇量 词汇是语言的基本单位，没有词汇，就谈不上遣词造句写文章。但如何扩大词汇量是很多人都头痛的事。有的人试图背字典来增加词汇量。起初，这种方法或许还可以，但时间久了就太无聊了。学生们很容易感到厌烦，而且会很快遗忘。事实上，除了死记硬背，有很多其他更好的方法来扩大词汇量，比如阅读就是一个理想的方法。在特定的语境中记忆单词，很容易理解和掌握新单词，而且记得牢。此外，广泛阅读可以增加我们遇到一个新词的频率。第一次我们可能不知道它的含义，但我们可以从上下文推断或参考字典知道其读音和意义。因此，当我们第三、四次遇到它时，即使不知道其确切含义，但在我们的脑海中至少有一个总的印象。所以当我们多次它时，我们将熟悉它就像熟悉我们的名字。 第三，读书能提高英语写作能力 写作，作为一种重要的学习技能，它可以反映了一个人的英语综合能力。在英语学习中，
英语写作技巧：提高英语写作的连贯性 1.首先：first of all/as the very beginning/to begin with/for one thing(for another). 2.其次： 1)what is more/besides/in addition/furthermore/moreover/as well as 2)what is worse/even worse/to make the things worse 3.但是/转折： on the other hand/however/while/whereas/instead/on the contrary/in contrast to/nevertheless 4.原因： 1）because/as/since/ now that/seeing that/considering/given that 2）the reason why/for the reason that/the reason is that 3)due to/owing to/as a result of/because of /thanks to/on account of / 5.结果： 1)therefore/as a result/thus/in consequence/consequently/so that 2)lead to /contribute to/result in/ 6.目的： in order that,so that,in order to,so as to
7.表示条件： if,unless,so/as long as,in case,on condition that,suppose,provide that，if only,given that 8.表示让步： 1)although/though/as 2)even though/if 3)despite/in spite of 4)however/whoever/whenever/whatever 5)no matter what/no matter who/no matter how/no matter when 9.就我来说： From my pers onal angle alone…/In my opinion/From my personal point of view…/As far as I’m concerned… 10.表示总结： in brief/to conclude/in short/in a word/all in all/in summary/
英语写作的重要性 几乎所有的英语学习者都很注重听力和口语，如果不是要应付考试，极少有人会尝试进行英语写作。殊不知，光是会溜溜地说而不会写一篇完整的文章，基本上可以算作是半个英语文盲。 我们中国人学英语主要用途是什么？是因为要出国？还是因为要经常和老外face 2 face 的对话？恐怕我们的英语学习人群中最多只有1%的有机会出国，不会超过10%的人有机会和老外直接对话。英语实实在在使用最多的地方还是英文邮件书信往来。尤其涉外工作，则必须具备良好的英语写作能力。 经常进行英语写作练习，将会很好的提高自己的英语逻辑思维能力，同样对提高口语表达能力大有帮助。 英语写作的重要性 几乎所有的英语学习者都很注重听力和口语，如果不是要应付考试，极少有人会尝试进行英语写作。殊不知，光是会溜溜地说而不会写一篇完整的文章，基本上可以算作是半个英语文盲。 我们中国人学英语主要用途是什么？是因为要出国？还是因为要经常和老外face 2 face 的对话？恐怕我们的英语学习人群中最多只有1%的有机会出国，不会超过10%的人有机会和老外直接对话。英语实实在在使用最多的地方还是英文邮件书信往来。尤其涉外工作，则必须具备良好的英语写作能力。 经常进行英语写作练习，将会很好的提高自己的英语逻辑思维能力，同样对提高口语表达能力大有帮助。 英语(论坛)是当今世界上主要的国际通用语言 从全世界来看，说英语的人数已经超过了任何语言的人数，10多个国家以英语为母语，45个国家的官方语言是英语，世界三分之一的人口（二十几亿）讲英语。比如在日本，除了他们的本国母语——日语之外，英语是他们的第二语言，很多高层次的日本人以会说英语为荣。
英语写作的连贯性 按《大学英语教学大纲》要求，四级写作考试时间为30分钟，要求学生写出一篇120—150词的短文。试卷上可能给出题目，或规定情景，或给出段首句要求续写，或要求看图作文，或给出关键词，要求写成短文，要求能正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语法错误。 上述考试大纲所说的“能正确表达思想”，笔者认为，除了切题之外就是文章的连贯性要好。作文是一个有机的整体，它由段落组成，而段落是由一组与一定语境和上下文相联系的、在内容和结构上密切相关的、表达一个相对独立完整意思的句子组成的。那么，何谓连贯性？怎样才能连贯？这也是很重要的问题。 连贯性主要是对文章段落的结构而言。它要求段落中各句的组织与安排以一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序进行，做到条理清楚，层次分明。 英语段落的一个基本特点是它一般按照直线形（direct linear structure）进行展开；英语段落往往先陈述该段的中心思想，后分点说明；英语段落从主题句到其他句子的安排通常是按照层级的概括性（planes of generality）进行的。为了便于直观地考查英语段落线性发展的层次关系，我们用数字将其标出：主题句（这里研究的是英语典型段落，其主题句置于段首）标为plane 1（称为第一层级句，它对该段中心思想的概括性最强，通常是主题句和结论句）；将概括性次之的句子标为plane 2（称为第二层级句）；将概括性再次之的句子称为plane 3；然后以此类推，分别将其标为plane 4， plane 5等。英语段落往往形成一个有条不紊的层级系统，层层递进，环环相扣，具有内在的“粘合性”（cohesion）。例如： ①Nowadays，information plays a very important role in the development of our society． ②Commercial advertisements are one of information sources and at the same time they are means to spread information．③They tell us both the function and advantages of goods．④Certainly factories and firms who advertise their products will get a lot of benefits．①In brief， without information it is not convenient for people to live in the modern society． 上面段落的句子层级呈简单的直线形发展：1→2→3→4→1。这是英语典型段落的发展模式。当然，还有更复杂的模式。下面是另一种常见的模式。
新闻报道写作
5月1日，高二三班的学生志愿者li yu 和zhang hua 去阳光敬老院（SUNSHINE NURSING HONE)开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是学校英语报的记者，请按下列要求用英语写一则100~120词的新闻报道。 ?1.时间地点人物活动；?2.老人们的反应?3.简要评论 真题回放
Students Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— By Chen Jie, School Newapaper
?主题定位：?题材定位： ?时态定位： ? 内容定位：审题定位学生去敬老院献爱心，为老师带来欢乐和温暖新闻报道，属应用文范畴以一般过去时为主去敬老院献爱心（送 鲜花和水果，打扫，聊天） 老人反应 自己感受
新闻报道一般包括标题，导语，背景，主体，结语五个部分。一般来说，标题，导语和主体是新闻报道必不可少的三部分。?标题：简洁，概括，醒目?导语：开头的第一段或第一句，简要叙述报道核心内容（时间，地点，人物，事件等）?主体：事情发生的具体细节（详写）? 结语：最后一句或一段，通常是全文内容总结，或简要评论。（简洁，明确）文 章 结 构
内容安排老人的反应 愉悦，欣慰，生活中多了乐趣 第三段简短评论给他人带来了欢乐，也丰富了自 己的生活 第一段报道事实第二段时间：地点：人物：活动：
考研英语写作的连贯性原则 [日期：2006-02-23] 来源：作者：[字体：大中小] 语言的连贯与否是评价一篇文章优劣的标准。在一篇文章里，语言的连贯主要体现在句与句、段与段之间。上句要能很自然地带出下句，后句与前句呼应，形成句句相连，读起来一气呵成；就如同听一段优美的乐曲，中间是不能停顿的。同样，段与段之间也要相互呼应，不可各自独立、前段不接后段、后段不理前段，使文章缺乏整体性。 语言的连贯方法很多，有我们最常说到的过渡词(transitional words)，也可以称为转折词，还有代词、同义词、近义词等许多成分。为了进一步了解英语语言连贯特点，我们先看下面的实例分析。 (一)了解连贯——实例分析 Directions： A. Title: A Trip I Would Like to Take B. Time limit: 40 minutes C. Word limit: 120～150 words D. Your composition must be written on the ANSWER SHEET. 这篇作文题目要求写“我所喜欢的旅行”，但这一旅行还没实现，是计划、打算或是愿望。如不清楚这一点，就有可能跑题。 请看一篇学生例文分析： ［“I have a dream one day, I can travel around China.”At that time I was only a little girl. Now I am an adult. I can turn it into reality. ］［I will begin my trip from our capital, Beijing. It is the center of politics, economy and culture. It is just a living history museum. The Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum…There are so many interests that I even cannot count all them out. ］［My first stop is Huhehaote, I want to see the grassland, to drink a cup of tea with milk, to listen to the wonderful tune played with matouqin.］［After that I will get on a train, leave for Jiuzhaigou. It is a beautiful place. There are a lot of trees, flowers and waterfalls, if I am lucky I will meet pandas. ］［Several days later, I will arrive in another ancient capital—Nanjing. I want to pay a visit to Zhong Shanling and Y u Huatai. ］［As we all know, Hang Zhou is very close to Nanjing. So I will choose Hang Zhou to be my next stop. I had been told that West Lake is very charming. It is a rarity of the great nature. It is always beautiful, moving and lovely. ］［Now I do not have much money. So I will go back to my home town—Tianjin. ］ 这篇例文在语言和语法方面有些问题，但本节主要讲语言的连贯，所以，对其他问题不作评论。 这篇文章虽然只由一段组成，但其中可分为七个层次，以文中的括号为标志。 下面依次从连贯性角度进行修改。 第一个层次主要讲作者从小就想周游中国，现在是成人了，可以实现这个愿望。这个用了五句英文表达的层次，句与句之间的连贯不够好，如果修改一下，感觉就会好得多。 To travel around the country has long been my dream. 此句用不定式做主语，谓语为完成时，较好地概括了例文中前三句的内容。This dream is much more likely to be realized now than it would have been ten years ago, 此句中的This dream呼应上句中的my dream，这里的重复是句子上下连贯的方法之一。since I have grown up and have begun to earn my living. since是表示因果关系的转折词，起连接作用。此外，ｓｉｎｃｅ带的句子内容比原句意义充实完整，表明我已经长大，而且已经自立了。使句子内容充实完整也是语义连贯的基础。第一层次可完整表述如下：
学习能力重要性英语短文 The importance of learning English English is the most widely used language in the world. Therefore, having great English skills will have numerous advantages. Luckily, I have realized the importance of learning English and worked hard on it since I was a child. However, 13 years of learning English experience didn’t lead me to success, but being a person who can hardly communicate in English and definitely unable to write an essay. Once I came to the USA, I knew that I had made too many mistakes in learning English. Those mistakes are translating English into different languages, don’t learn vocabulary as much as I can, and don’t read and write enough. First of all, every language is unique. They usually have different grammar and use of vocabulary, which means learning English by translating it into different languages will lead to an inevitable defeat. For example, I have worked hard on learning a lot of vocabulary by translating them into Chinese. I thought it was a good idea to build up my vocabulary in order to read and write better. However, those translation processes were hugely disappointing. At
英语写作中语篇“连贯性”的巧妙运用 近年来，高考英语作文的评分标准有了重大调整，更强调文章语言的“连贯性”和“复杂性”。且看高考英语作文最高一档的给分范围和要求：“覆盖所有的内容要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力；能有效地使用语句问的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑”。显然，考生要得高分，除了文章要点全、语法正、表达准、结构整、逻辑顺、卷面洁外，考生还得掌握句型与词语的运用及行文(过渡承启)技巧，以增强语言的表达力和文章的逻辑性，提高文章档次。 篇章结构的“连贯性”在语言表达中起着非常重要的作用。“连贯性”主要是就句子之间的衔接和文章段落的过渡而言的。它要求段落中句与句之间、全文段落与段落之间的组织与安排以一种明晰的、合乎 逻辑的顺序进行，做到条理清楚、层次分明。这样的篇章结构才能让评卷老师迅速而准确地捕捉文章信息。反之，叙述顺序混乱、前言不搭后语的文章会因“缺乏可读性”而被判为较低的得分档次。因此，下面我们将重点探讨一下英语写作中语篇“连贯性”的巧妙运用。 一、整体谋篇。确定主题句 文章语篇的连贯是以内容的合理布局为前提的。因此，要想写出一篇高分作文，审题是关键的一步， 一般坚持以下几个步骤： 1. 审读情景材料 即对试题所提供的“情景”(包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等)及其“形式”(一般为图画、 图表、提纲等)予以全面的了解，同时不可忽视最后提供的“注意”。 2. 提取主题思想 在审题的同时，要注意从所给材料中提炼出一个主题，即作文的中心。它是全文成败的关键所在，因 为“评分说明”明确指出：“对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分”。一般来讲，文章的中心不超出高中生学习和日常生活中的所见所闻。 3. 进行信息取舍 确定主题之后，就要依据所需文体(多为应用文、记叙文或说明文)，围绕中心对所获取的信息进 行筛选，以突出重点。 4. 列举表述要点 这是评分标准规定的最主要标准，即是否“覆盖了所有内容要点”。动笔写作之前，最好在草稿纸上 列出要点，以免因时间紧等原因而遗漏。 5. 确定主题句 段落通常由一个表示段落中心思想的主题句和一些用来说明、描写、论证该主题的发展句构成。段落的主题句非常重要，对段落的各句起到提纲挈领的作用。一般情况下，主题旬的位置都在段落的开头，清楚明了地告诉读者该段落将要陈述的内容。为了便于展开下文，主题句一般要具备以下两个特点： ①内容要明确具体，具有特定性和单一性，切忌笼统。 比较： a. Learning English is important. a’ Learning English is important for middle school students. b. Tom is a good student． b’. Tom is a hard-working student. 上述例句中的第二句要比第一句具体、明确得多。 ②语言要简洁，开门见山。 如“How I Spent My Vacation(我怎样度假)”的开头是：I spent my last vacation happily. 下面是题为“Honesty(谈诚实)”一文中的开头： Honesty is one of the best virtues. An honest man is always trusted and respected. On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a “liar”, and is looked down upon by honest people.
应用文写作之新闻报道(金版学案52页) ?技巧点拨 1.新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句(topic sentence),因此这个句子中主要讲清what (事件), when (时间), where (地点) 和who (人物),而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节,往往包括why(目的或原因)和how(具体过程)等。 2.注意新闻类型题材的一些常用语,如It is reported that..., As is reported..., According to the report...; It is estimated that...等。 3.新闻通讯亦为记叙文，时态一般要用过去时，注意句子结构；主句，从句结构要清晰，语言要客观平时，不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。 4. 阅读范文时, 重在掌握时间的表达, 背诵范文的第一句和斜体字的句型。 ●假设你是一名新闻记者，请根据以下表格信息给英语报社写一篇新闻报道。 【写作内容】 国际背景今年4月，墨西哥爆发了H1N1流感（flu）,疾病迅速蔓延到全球多个国家。国内影响截至8月30日下午，有报道称河南省某中学共发现确诊病例 (confirmed case) 80 例，那儿的中小学全部推迟开学。 专家估计该疾病的死亡率低于1%，低于SARS 和禽流感（bird flu）。 预防方法勤洗手，多喝水，充足睡眠。 个人信念在政府的帮助下，我们一定能够打赢这战争。 【参考范文】 The H1N1 flu broke out in Mexico in April this year and it has spread quickly to many countries in the world. To our disappointment, by the afternoon on August 30, 80 confirmed cases of H1N1 flu had been reported in a school in He’nan province, resulting in the fact that all the middle schools there had to delay the new term. Fortunately, it is estimated by the experts that the death rate of the H1N1 flu virus is lower than 1%, still lower when compared with that of SARS and bird flu. The best way they give the public to prevent it is to wash hands more often,drink more water and have enough sleep. With the help of our government, we believe that we are able to win the battle against the disease. 阅读参考范文,填空: 时态:_______________________________________ 连接词: ____________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ●假如你是新华社的记者，请根据下面提供的信息，写一篇新闻报道。 时间：4月2日凌晨四点地点：中山超市 经过：风大、火势蔓延快，消防人员花了两个多小时才将大火扑灭。 结果：整个超市被毁，两名妇女死亡，十多人受伤，直接经济损失达一百多万元，附近的银行也遭到破坏。 原因：不明，警方正在调查之中。
关于分数与能力的英语作文 Marks or Ability分数与能力 1．有些学生认为学习成绩是最重要的。 2．有些学生认为培养个人能力是最重要的。 3．你的看法。 Some students put stress on marks. One reason for that comes from the tradition of society. Most parents, teachers judge students from their marks. High marks mean honor. So students study hard to get high marks in order to satisfy their parents, please their teachers. The other reason can be found in our educational system. It is marks that decide a student's fate. As a result, the students have to gain high marks in their studies. In their points of view, marks are the most important thing. Other students pay more attention to their ability, because they believe ability can accompany them to the end of their lives. Everyone is hound to graduate from schools and step into society, so they have to learn to communicate with other people, to deal with difficulties and to face the sharp competition. All this should be developed in school, so they consider the ability the most important. In my opinion, we should not go to extremes. For one thing, we should not just pursue marks and neglect ability; for another, we should not concentrate on ability and ignore marks. Both marks and ability are crucial to students.
?过渡语的使得句与句，段与段之间衔接更紧密更具连贯性。 ?过渡语可以是词，短语，也可以是一个句子。通过使用过渡语可以使文章更紧凑，脉络更清楚。表示举例说明的过渡语 ?For example, for instance, for one thing, to illustrate, as an illustration, a case in point, ?Let’s take …as an example. Take … for example.?… is a typical example of … ?… is a typical/proper case in point. 表示递进关系的过渡语 ?In addition, furthermore, moreover, besides, also, what’s more ?Not only, but also, similarly, ?Another … is
?… is another… ?… is also a factor. 表示对比对照的过渡语 ?In contrast, by contrast, on the other hand, in comparison, on the contrary, unlike, like, contrary to, whereas, while, conversely, ?…differ/vary greatly/vastly from ?different from 表示因果关系的过渡语 ?Because of, on account of, due to, owing to, thanks to, for, because, since, as, for this reason ?Therefore, so, as a result, consequently, in consequence, accordingly, hence, thus ?The reasons why/for … are/lie in… ?… results in…
新闻报道范文300字[英语作文的优秀范文] 范文一：Fall Fall is the third season of a year . There are three months in fall : July , August and september . The weather in fall is cool , Sometimes it’s windy . I can wear my jackets and jeans . I often fly kites and go hiking with my good friends. And there are many fruits in fall , Just like : apples , bananas , oranges… And the Mid Autuain Festival is in fall , too . So I like fall very much . 范文二：ilikefallbest Of the all the season, I like autumn best, it is a beautiful and harvest season. In autumn, the weather is warm and windy, and the sky is beautiful. Some people are going to have picnic. The little children can fly kite in the weekend and in the windy day. So many many kites are flying in the sky .Don’t you think it is fine1? Leaves start falling from the trees, some leaves become red、yellow、gray … The weather gets cooler, some birds begin to fly to the warm place. ,such as the lovely swallows. Some animals are getting ready for the winter. They move food to their holes, because they will not come out until spring comes. In the field, crop was gold, it so beautiful, if you walk in the field, you have got very great to this! In autumn, there had a festival—Mid autumn days, on this day, all the members of the family will have a family get together, people eat moon cake, and look the moon, some family were very happy on this day.------Of couse somebody would be missing their family.For my old grandpa and ma grand ma ,they were often missing my uncle at that time. And they would say the story about my uncle.-----So, the autumn is a special season. It is a missing season! 感谢您的阅读！