感谢信写作导练
一、文体概述
感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当受惠者对给予自己帮助、支持、关心或其他受益时，给对方表示感谢的信件。所表达的情感必须真挚。信件通常包括以下内容：写信的目的（表示感谢）→感谢的原因（详细展开）→对方的作用和对自己的意义→再次表示感谢。
二、必备短语
1. take the opportunity 利用这个机会
2. It was really kind of you... 你真是好……
3. return one’s kindness回报某人的善意
4. with one’s help/with the help of sb. 在某人的帮助下
5. express one’s gratitude/thanks for 表达某人的感激
6. recall those beautiful days回忆那些美好的日子
7. I sincerely appreciate…我真诚地感激……
8. thanks to/because of your encouragement由于你的鼓励
9. be patient with sb./have much patience with sb.对某人有耐心
10. Without your help, I wouldn’t... 没有你的帮助，我就不会……
三、套用句式
1. My true gratitude is beyond any words/description. 任何语言都无法表达我真
挚的谢意。
2. We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us. 我们都非常感谢你，也非常感激你为我们做的一切。
3. I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English. 我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。
4. Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 再次感谢你的盛情招待，我非常期待不久会看到你。
5. I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我谨借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持。
四、语篇模板
(下列范文中共有10处错误，每句最多两处，请改正)
Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warmly help during my stay in England. Last week, I participated on the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed yourself in your country. We pay a visit to the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture or history. Of course, I also made many new friend. What’s more, I was lucky enough stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together. Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offer me as a gift, that is of great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make the full use of it.
Welcome to China when it’s convenience for you !
Yours,
Li Hua 五、课堂练习
假定你是李华，你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据下列写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。
1.对她表达感谢之意。
2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情。
3.希望了解她的近况。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sure,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China.It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、课外作业
假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs. Wilson写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助，内容包括：
1.对老师的辛勤教学工作表示感谢；
2.感谢在校期间老师对自己的教导；
3.表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Mrs. Wilson,
I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. Firstly, I’d like to express my gratitude for your excellent teaching and your care as well as love for me! Thank you for your encouraging words, which never fail to brighten my way ahead. It’s you who cheered me up. Never will I forget what you said-- doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. And I really appreciate your instruction.
I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still too busy? How I miss you, my beloved teacher! Wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 参考答案与范文：
语篇模板
李华上周在英国参加了学校组织的“文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。因此给Kelly写的一封感谢信。
1.warmly→warm 修饰名词warm，应用形容词。
2.on→in因participate in为固定搭配，意为“参加”。
3.yourself→myself 因主语是I，应该是“我”玩得开心，故用myself。
4.pay→paid 由Last week可知，此处描述的是过去的事情，故用一般过去时。
5.or→and 了解的应是“文化与历史”，而并非“文化或者历史”。
6.friend→friends 根据前面的many可知此处应用名词的复数形式。
7.在stay前加to 因be lucky to do sth.固定搭配。
8.that→which 此处which引导非限制性定语从句，指代先行词the dictionary。
9.把make后的the去掉应make full use of为固定搭配，意为“充分利用”。
10.convenience→convenient 系动词后接形容词作表语。
高考英语全国卷中邀请信写作导练
一、文体概述
邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或知名人士、专家等参加某项活动时所发的邀请信件。写邀请信要简洁明了，通常要写清楚以下几个方面：1.邀请对方参加的活动内容、时间和地点。2.邀请对方参加的原因。3.期待对方接受邀请。
二、必备短语
1. invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
2. in order to do sth. 为了做某事
3. hold a party 举办晚会
4. in the Meeting Hall 在会议厅
5. take place 举行
6. take part in / participate in / compete in 参加
7. make progress 取得进步
8. look forward to 期待
9. accept one’s invitation 接受某人的邀请
10. long for your coming 渴望你的到来
三、套用句式
1. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the Talent Show. 我写信是想邀请你参加“才艺表演”。
2. We are going to h old a party for Tom’s birthday. 我们打算为汤姆举办生日晚会。
3. We sincerely hope that you could come. 我们真诚希望你能来。
4. I’d appreciate it if you could come. 如果你能来，我将不胜感激。
5. I’m looking forward to your early reply. 期待你的早日回复。
四、语篇模板
(下列范文中共有10处错误，每句最多两处，请改正)
Dear David,
Ne xt Saturday will be my birthday. I’m going to hold a birthday party at home on the evening. They will start at 7:30. Some classmates as well as some foreign friend have been invited. The activities include singing, dancing but sharing interesting experienc es. Surely, we’ll have good time. I would feel honoring if you could come. I live at 28 Zhongshan Road. You can take Bus No. 9 or No. 16 and got off at the stop of Yucai High School. Justly on the opposite side is my house, that is red with a white door. I’m sure you can’t miss it. I do hope you will to come.
Best wishes！
Yours,
LiHua 五、课堂练习
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David在你们班的学习已经结束，即将回国。你们班准备为他举办欢送会(farewell party)，请你给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。要点如下：
1.祝贺他通过考试；
2.感谢他帮助你们学习英语；
3.邀请他参加欢送会。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
How time flies! Two years has passed since you came to study in our class. You have really made great progress in your studying in China. Congratulations on your passing all the exams. We all appreciate your help with our English. And we’ll never forget the wonderful time we spent together.
It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon! So we are going to hold a farewell party for you in the Meeting Hall of our school this Saturday evening. Surely, we’ll have a good time. We sincerely hope that you could come.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、课外作业
假定你是李华，你校将举办主题为Chinese Food的英语演讲比赛，想邀请你校外籍教师Brown先生当评委。请你按照下面内容用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
1.演讲比赛的主题、时间和地点；
2.参赛对象；
3.发出邀请并表达谢意。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的开头与结尾已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Brown,
In order to develop Chinese traditional culture, our school is going to hold an English Speech Contest, so I’m writing to invite you to be the judge.
The English Speech Contest, whose theme is “Chinese Food”, will take place in the school auditorium from 9:00 a. m. to 11:30 a. m. on May 6th. Twenty contestants from Senior Grade 1 and Grade 2 will compete in it. And the judges are expected to be there at 8:45 a. m.
I’d appreciate it if you could come. If you have any questions, please contact me at 8880000. Thank you very much for the favour you’ll do to us.
I’m look ing forward to your early reply.
With best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua 参考答案与范文：
语篇模板
1. on→in 固定词组，in the evening在晚上。
2. They→It 指代上文的party，故用it。
3. friend→friends 因friend为可数名词，前面有some，故用复数形式。
4. but→and 跟前面并列，故用and。
5. 在have和good中间加上a 因have a good time玩得愉快，故需加上a。
6. honoring→honored 句意：我将感到荣幸。此处表示被动，故用honored。
7. got→get 因can take and get off，此处为并列谓语，故用get。
8. Justly→Just 句意：我的家正好在对面，故用Just。
9. that→which 非限制写定语从句，故用which。
10. 去掉to 情态动词后用动词原形，故去掉to。
高考英语全国卷中投诉信写作导练
一、文体概述
投诉信是人们在生活中对服务、商品、关系等不满时向特定对象写的信件，通常还会要求对方做出相应的补救。投诉信的用词要恰当并且相对正式，语气要坚决。叙述问题时用过去时态，提出建议时用现在时态。投诉信应包括三个方面的内容：1.表明写信目的及投诉的内容；2. 投诉的原因；3. 希望得到的结果。
二、必备短语
1. express my disappointment/dissatisfaction/concern about 表达不满
2. bring about inconveniences 带来不便
3. to make matters worse 更糟糕的是
4. in a rude manner 态度恶劣
5. put up with/bear 忍受
6. look into/investigate the matter 调查此次事件
7. take measures/actions 采取措施
8. deal with/solve the problem 解决问题
9. a satisfying solution 一个满意的解决方法
10. declare a refund 要求退款
三、套用句式
1. I am writing to express my disappointment/dissatisfaction/concern about…我写
这封信是为了表达我对于……的失望/ 不满/担心。
2. The reason for my dissatisfaction is ... For one thing, … For another, …我不满意的原因是……。一方面……，另一方面……
3. Under these circumstances, I find it difficult to ...在这种情况下，我很难……
4. I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this month.我希望在这个月底之前解决这件事。
5. I would appreciate it if you could give due attention to this matter.如果你可以给予此事足够的重视，我将不胜感激。
四、语篇模板
(下列范文中共有10处错误，每句最多两处，请改正)
To whom it may concern,
I am one of your customer. I ordered a set of books on your website two weeks before, but I didn’t receive them not until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were too poorly packed up that the cover of one book is torn. To make matters worst, it is not complete set, as I found one book missing.
I am sorry to have received such poor service, but I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money nor deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informing of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
高考英语作文高分技巧 2012-10-04 高考英语怎么拿高分的技巧 高考英语作文如何才能得高分，这个问题是不少高考学生普遍关心的问题。高考英语写作应该要紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求，以有指导的英语写作为主，要求考生在短时间内构思成文。由于它是对高考学生语言综合运用能力的考查，因此在高考英语作文写作中令很多考生感到十分苦恼，也是一个失分率很高的题型. 高考英语作文高分技巧一、紧扣主题突出重点 动笔之前，针对提示的文字或图片必须先认真审题，组织内容，构思提纲，理顺思路，切忌偏题，离题，东拉西扯，不得要领，一定要避免累赘繁琐，条理不清，重点不突出的.失误。 高考英语作文高分技巧二、表达正确文字流畅 强调使用课本上学到过的单词、词组、佳句确保文章简洁通顺，切忌使用随便从文曲星或词典上找来的冷僻单词，特别强调的是必须避免使用不规范的中文式表达，受欢迎的作文是用词用句实实在在，朴实无华，清晰流畅的文章。 高考英语作文高分技巧三、谋篇布局 (1)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。 (2)考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些词汇和句型等。 (3)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性 高考英语作文高分技巧四、句式美? 高考英语作文中句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使本来结构单一、语句乏味的文章极具可读性。合并简单句使文章的语言由松散变得凝练。简单句虽然短小精悍，但在语言表达上，不能单一地只注重简单句的正确运用，还应多运用一些并列句或复合句，使句式灵活多变。考生在写作时，可以巧变感叹句，增强语言的表达力;省略与替代交替使用，避免写作时不必要的重复与累赘，使句子更简练、精确;主动句与被动句交替使用，使句子更具多样性;分词及with复合结构结合使用，使得文章句子结构紧凑，描述形象生动，为文章增色。
2017年浙江高考英语高分作文详细点评及写作指导 在这篇文章里面有应用文评分原则，以及有关邀请信的写法。 今天推出的作文由优秀考生考后根据回忆整理而成。感谢我们精英群里的老师提供第一手资料！感谢我的朋友们！感谢资源库的志愿者们提供第一手资料！谢谢分享！ 先从评分标准开始，然后提供原文，思路解读，作品展示，评析，欢 迎吐槽。（应用文比较简单，不进行思路分析了。） 文章有点长，应用文两篇。续写四篇。每篇有点评。后附一些拓展素材，如细节描写等。由于时间仓促，能力有限，不当之处，敬请谅解。应用文评分原则: 本题总分为15 分，按以下5 个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 第一档：（1—3 分）只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个 别句子正确； 第二档：（4—6 分）能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达；第三档：（7—9 分）能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，但能基 本达意； 第四档：（10—12 分）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚； 第五档：（13—15 分）能写明全部要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚。
3．词数少于60 和多于100 的，从总分中减去 2 分。 4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：时态、人称、内容要点、应用词 汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6．如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 邀请信四要素 1. 开篇点题，发出邀请。 2. 介绍邀请参加的活动（内容、地点、时间、注意事项） 3. 夸赞对方。希望得到回复。 4. 再次发出邀请。 【优秀句式】 1. I’m writing to tell you that we intend to... and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class. 2. You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain. 3. Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement. 应用文原题大意 第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分） 第一节应用文写作（满分15分）
高考英语作文指导——议论文
高考英语作文指导——议论文 Knowledge Objectives To help the students to learn the basic writing skills on Argumentative Composition Compentence Objectives To help the students to grasp their basic writing skills To practice writing skills.(detailed information& general idea) Emotion Objectives To cultivate the love of writing Teaching approach:Communicative approach Teaching Aids: Multi-Media Difficult points : Teaching procedures: I. Pre-task: Revision Lead-in II. While task:Learn some basic writing skills on Argumentative Composition （一）英文议论文的结构特点汉语写作对文章结构的要求不是很高，如开头段应该包括什么、论题句应该在什么时候出现、文章的结尾是否必须总结全文等等。而英语写作要求文章结构必须十分严谨，文章各个部分的功能都要十分清晰，开头、中间和结尾都有严格的要求。 简而言之，英语议论文共有三大特点： 1、观点鲜明的开头； 2、紧扣主题的结尾； 3、有主题句并且衔接自然的中间段落。 所以，既然高考英语考的是英语文章，大家就应该遵循英文议论文的写作思路和习惯：表示支持则旗帜鲜明地支持；表示反对就彻彻底底地反对，而不能采取“墙头草两边倒”的做法。 （二）英语议论文写作要点: straight:开门见山，直来直去。 brief:文章“简为贵”，要抓住要点，简明扼要。 coherence: 文理通顺，前后连贯。 division:词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当，划分要清楚，避免使用重复字句和片段。ambiguity:尽量不用可能会引起歧义的词语或句子。 Key：用适当的关键词突出主题，每段都应有主题句。
2020高考英语书面表达高分写作的详细思路指导解读和最全资料整理2020届高考迫在眉睫。这个时候，需要你做以下事情： 1.最常考的话题分类，每个话题共同的思维点有哪些，相关词块又有哪些； 2.每个句子要有一定的内容含量，少一些大家都知道的套路句，积累属于自己的个性化套句 一、简化再简化：Less is more 所有作文在题材上的相通之处： 二、亮点主题句 一篇作文要得高分,必须要有主题句。主题句就是用以概括文章中心思想和核心内容的句子,可以最直接、最凝练地体现作者的写作意图,表达感情和立场。 千万不要忽略精彩的主题句对于表达中心思想的重要性。一篇作文如果虚的多、实的少,当然不会得高分。 下面是我总结的十大救急词组,大家一定要背熟,达到发现主题词后就能迅速填空的程度。 救急词组1）not only important, but also indispensable不仅重要,而且不可或缺 例句：Mutual supportis not only important, but also indispensablein a modern society. 译文：互相帮助在当今社会不仅重要,而且不可或缺。 替换表达：... play a key role in... serve a leading/dominant role in... 救急词组2）Special attention must be paid to...必须特别注意…… 例句：Special attention must be paid tothe importance of environmental protection. 译文：必须特别注意保护环境的重要性。 替换表达：Careful attention must be directed to... 救急词组3）... threaten to do more harm than good to... ……会对……弊大于利
感谢信写作导练 一、文体概述 感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当受惠者对给予自己帮助、支持、关心或其他受益时，给对方表示感谢的信件。所表达的情感必须真挚。信件通常包括以下内容：写信的目的（表示感谢）→感谢的原因（详细展开）→对方的作用和对自己的意义→再次表示感谢。 二、必备短语 1. take the opportunity 利用这个机会 2. It was really kind of you... 你真是好…… 3. return one’s kindness回报某人的善意 4. with one’s help/with the help of sb. 在某人的帮助下 5. express one’s gratitude/thanks for 表达某人的感激 6. recall those beautiful days回忆那些美好的日子 7. I sincerely appreciate…我真诚地感激…… 8. thanks to/because of your encouragement由于你的鼓励 9. be patient with sb./have much patience with sb.对某人有耐心 10. Without your help, I wouldn’t... 没有你的帮助，我就不会…… 三、套用句式 1. My true gratitude is beyond any words/description. 任何语言都无法表达我真 挚的谢意。 2. We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us. 我们都非常感谢你，也非常感激你为我们做的一切。 3. I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English. 我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。 4. Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 再次感谢你的盛情招待，我非常期待不久会看到你。 5. I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我谨借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持。 四、语篇模板 (下列范文中共有10处错误，每句最多两处，请改正) Dear Kelly, I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warmly help during my stay in England. Last week, I participated on the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed yourself in your country. We pay a visit to the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture or history. Of course, I also made many new friend. What’s more, I was lucky enough stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together. Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offer me as a gift, that is of great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make the full use of it.
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一、写作指导——如何写好记叙文 记叙文是以写人叙事为主要内容的一种文体，它是叙述人的经历或事物发展变化过程的一种表达方式。记叙文是写作训练中最普遍、最基本的一种文体，它的基本特点就是陈述过程。 【例题展示】 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。注意：1．周记的开头已为你写好。 2．词数不少于60。 Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. __________________ __________________________________________________. 【写作要求】 该试题要求考生写一篇英文周记，其实也是写一篇记叙文，叙述祖父母去北戴河旅行的准备过程。题目的呈现方式为四幅图片。第一幅图是事前准备，三个问号涉及要写出的三个方面，这属于题目的踩分点，千万不能遗漏。第二幅图和第三幅图也都是准备的过程，图画信息没有一般看图作文中逐渐出现高潮图点，前三幅图的图画内容没有所谓的轻重之分，因此在写作的时候，要注意三幅图的比重要基本一致，不要出现一个图一句话带过，而其它图画重点描写的情况。最后一幅图，是故事的结尾。 【思路点拨】 （1）记叙文的类型。记叙文一般分为三类：以人物为主的记叙文、以事件为主的记叙文、以写景状物为主的记叙文。在一篇记叙文中，写人、写景、写事往往是交织在一起的，但各有侧重。该试题是以事件为主的记叙文，注意要以事件为中心组织材料。 （2）记叙文的时态与人称。记叙文所记叙的一般是过去发生的事，原则上用一般过去时，该试题应该用一般现在时；记叙文一般采用第一人称(First—person narrator)和第三人称(Third—person narrator)。第一人称是从“参与者”的角度进行记叙，第三人称是以“观察者”的身份展开叙述。短文的开头(Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe) 以及试题要求表明这篇文章的人称是第一人称，而且要注意是“我”，而不是“我们”。 （3）记叙文叙述的线索。记叙文叙述可以时间、地点、事件发展的过程、人物的思想
2017年浙江高考英语高分作文详细点评及写作指导在这篇文章里面有应用文评分原则，以及有关邀请信的写法。 今天推出的作文由优秀考生考后根据回忆整理而成。感谢我们精英群里的老师提供第一手资料！感谢我的朋友们！感谢资源库的志愿者们提供第一手资料！谢谢分享！ 先从评分标准开始，然后提供原文，思路解读，作品展示，评析，欢迎吐槽。（应用文比较简单，不进行思路分析了。） 文章有点长，应用文两篇。续写四篇。每篇有点评。后附一些拓展素材，如细节描写等。由于时间仓促，能力有限，不当之处，敬请谅解。 应用文评分原则: 本题总分为15 分，按以下 5 个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 第一档：（1—3 分）只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子正确； 第二档：（4—6 分）能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达； 第三档：（7—9 分）能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意； 第四档：（10—12 分）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚；
第五档：（13—15 分）能写明全部要点；语言基本无误；行文连 贯，表达清楚。 3．词数少于60 和多于100 的，从总分中减去 2 分。 4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：时态、人称、内容要点、应用词 汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6．如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 邀请信四要素 1. 开篇点题，发出邀请。 2. 介绍邀请参加的活动（内容、地点、时间、注意事项） 3. 夸赞对方。希望得到回复。 4. 再次发出邀请。 【优秀句式】 1. I’m writing to tell you that we intend to... and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class. 2. You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain. 3. Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement. 应用文原题大意
高考英语作文发言稿类的写作指导写作技巧指导 1.发言稿是介绍性说明文，在语言使用一定要准确简洁，通俗易懂，层次清楚，条理分明。介绍说明事物的内容关系要明确，要求逻辑性强。发言稿印版有开头语，正文和结束语三部分组成。开头语一般来说比较简单，目的就是吸引听众或读者的注意力。 发言稿的开头和结尾一般都有固定的的格式，如: Dear friends, I’m glad to introduce myself to you .___________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 如果是熟悉的听众，头尾可以活泼一些，灵活一些，如:
(1)Good morning,/Good afternoon,everyone… That’s all. Thank you. (2 )Good evening!Ladies and gentlemen.. That’s all. Thank you. 2.正文是发言稿的主体，主要是提供论点和相关的论据等，论点要明确，论据要充分有力。发言稿的正文常见形式: 第一部分:开门见山提出本人要谈的问题及对问题的看法; 第二部分:说明理由，常见的关联词有:First of all , Secondly, Finally等; 第三部分:照应开头，总结全文。最后可以做简明扼要的总结，也可以谈自己的希望或看法等。常见的句式有:In short, In a word…等。 3.发言稿的语句表达要直接面对听众，尽量不要用复杂
啰嗦的句子，更不要采用深奥难懂的句子。话要说的准确易懂，最好用大众语言。除了要求以简单句为主的同时，可以适当穿插一些复合句结构。由于文章要求以简单句为主，所以不要把文章写成单句的罗列，适当的使用关联词承前启后，可以使文章前后连贯，浑然一体。 发言稿的时态一般以现在时态为主。 常用句型 1.I’d like to tell you something about our school. 2.Let me give you a brief introduction about our school. 3.Please allow me to introduce the travel arrangements to you. 4.It’s my honor to say a few words to welcome you. 5.I am sure we will benefit a lot from the lecture. 6.Personally, I think it’s a good idea for us to have daily
2. 高考读后续写高分技巧 (2018·浙江高考) 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm, ” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,
高考英语作文指导 (一)怎样才能得高分 从高考阅卷来看，低分作文往往是：书写潦草凌乱，胡乱涂画，简单低级错误较多（词不达意，语法错误，行文没有层次性或层次感差，逻辑性混乱等等），再就是词数不足，缺少亮点。高分作文：首先是书写干净利落，视觉美感强；文章结构匀称，不头重脚轻。其次是用词好，过渡自然流畅，句式丰富，亮点多。 平时老师在讲评作文时，经常告诉学生说，作文要得高分，就得有高级句型和高级词汇；但很多同学在写作文时，总认为高级句型和高级词汇很神秘，高不可及。高级句型也是“难于上青天”。其实，未必如此！通过研读一些优秀的学生习作和历年高考高分作文，我们发现，很多所谓的高级句型和高级词汇正是我们老师反复讲解和训练的。下面列举一些常见且高级的词汇和句型，供参考。 一．高级词汇 1．occur 替换think of/have an idea Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. →An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.→It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house. 2．devote替换spend He spends all his spare time in reading. →He devotes all his spare time to reading. He spends half of his money on books. →He devotes half of his money to books(buying books). 3．seek替换want / look for They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees. 4．average 替换ordinary I’m an average ( ordinary ) student. 5．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. → The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 6．seat 替换sit On his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried. 7．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly. 8．appreciate 替换thank Thank you very much for you help. → We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated. 9．the case替换true I don’t think it is the case ( true ). 10．on替换as soon as As soon as he arrived, he began his research. → On his arrival, he began his research.. 11．due to替换because of He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm. 12．cover替换walk/read After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired. 13．contribute to替换be helpful/useful Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. → Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study. 14．round the corner 替换coming soon/ nearby ① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans? ② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby). 15．come to light替换discover The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. →
读后续写高分作文的写作方法指导 （以衡水中学四月联考英语作文为例） 2020江苏省丰县中学上课讲义 正文指导 版本一： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. The ceiling of thick branches shut out the sky and covered the path in darkness. Jane looked around blankly, a shiver of alarm going through her. Soon the full moon rose, large, round and clear, shining in the deep blue. “Why not pick stones from the stream and make them in the form of SOS?” cried Jane excitedly, determined to save herself independently. Having finished it, she felt so exhausted and slept beside the stones. Tomorrow will be another day. It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Birds were chirping, the branches swaying to the rhythm of the wind, and the leaves fluttering like graceful butterflies. A ray of hope rose naturally in her heart. Suddenly, the buzzing of the helicopter came overhead again. It did saw her waving yellow blouse and most important the SOS. Upon its landing, so thrilled was she that she threw herself at Tom and hugged him tightly, tears of joy welling up in their eyes. “I miss you so much. Have you found the spot?” “Yes, in our heart.” 版本二： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. The trees cracked and groaned in the dark. A thrill of alarm came through Jane. Eventually, she determined on spotting an open area, awaiting another helicopter. She stumbled her way through the horrible forests and climbed to a high place. No time to waste. After she flagged her yellow blouse, Jane sank to the ground, anguished and defeated. Gazing at the sky, Jane recalled Tom and tears blurred her eyes. Terrified as she was, she fell fast asleep in the wild. It was daybreak when Jane woke up. And, as luck would have it, a helicopter just came by! Jane yelled and skipped, waving her yellow blouse. To her great joy, the helicopter noticed her and landed. What astounded her most was that it was Tom who sat in the helicopter! Out rushed Tom. A huge smile spread across Jane's face and the couple hugged tightly for a long time. It was the narrow escape that made Jane perceive that love was priceless. Over the next years, a change came over the couple. Reasoned discussion replaced fierce arguments and politeness replaced contrariness. They treasured the life and love more. 结论是： 1.首先要找到conflict在哪里，然后最多五句话说清楚solution。解决方案不包括心情和环境描写。第一篇昨天文章里已经分析过，下面只说第二篇：
高考英语书面表达高分技巧 (名师详细解作文写作思路与技巧+满分作文背诵) 1.使用抽象名词 英语是重名词的语言，尤其是抽象名词。因为英语重视物质的属性，这是希 腊文化的传统。 看电视太多会影响学习。 1. Heavy exposureto TV will affect one‘s study. 2. Advertising campaigns have, however, promoted a growing realization of the advantages of these small plastic cards.然而广告公司大做广告，让越来越多的人相 信这种小塑料卡的好处. 3. Reluctance to retire was associated with anticipated d eprivations, mainly of money rather than of attachment to work.人们不愿退休与他们预想中将要失去很多东西 有关，其中主要是失去赚钱的机会，而不是丧失对工作的依恋之情。 4. A five-day week has found an immediate w elcome and much popularity ever since. 五天工作制立即受到了人们的待遇欢迎和拥护。 不同位置的抽象名词运用规律 主语位置： the absence of, the abundance of, the acceptance of, the analysis of, the anticipation of, the arrival of, the invention of, the awareness of, his concern of, the criticism of, the demand, his eagerness, the examination of, his explanation of, the exploration of, his praise of, the failure of, the growth of, the investigation of, the increase of, the knowledge of, the pursuit of, his reaction to, a search of, her selection of, the support of, his willingness to
2021届高考英语写作高分技巧技巧1 词汇高级，“语”众不同 高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠，为作文添彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。选词时应注意两点： 1．不“人云亦云”原则 写作时恰当使用其他考生可能想象不到的词汇会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。如： ①about→concerning/related to关于 I'd like to share with you some details related to Chinese table manners. 我想和你分享一些与中国餐桌礼仪相关的细节。 ②tell→inform 告诉 I'm writing to inform you that we will have a volleyball match next month. 我写信告诉你我们下个月有一场排球赛。 ②chance→opportunity 机会 If offered the opportunity to be a volunteer, I will do it well and live up to your expectations. 如果提供给我这个做志愿者的机会，我会努力做好以不辜负你的期望。 ②master→have a good command/knowledge of 精通 I have a good command of spoken English, thus making it easy for me to communicate with visitors. 我精通英语，因此我很容易与游客交流。 ②many→various 多种 There will be various fantastic performances given by talented students. 将有各种精彩的多才多艺的学生们演出。 2．短语优先原则 短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满，因此考生宜利用短语巧妙表达文章的意思。如： ②besides→in addition/what's more 而且 In addition, you'd better bring some meaningful gifts, such as a bunch of flowers or some fresh fruit.
【英语】高考英语高分作文必背：开头，正文，结尾句型 (一）段首句 1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. 2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying______. It’s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。 Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harm in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______. 4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。 Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ ,because ______. Besides，______. 5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，…… People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____. 7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。 Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious. 8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 ______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。