蒋军虎英文写作讲义
蒋军虎英文写作讲义 (1)
一、英文考试做题顺序 (3)
二、英文小作文通用要求和注意事项 (3)
三、小作文种类 (3)
1，作文通用要求 (3)
2，十种书信 (3)
2.1 书信通用要求:标准格式，142阵形 (3)
2.2求职信、申请信application letter/cover letter & Applying letter (4)
2.3推荐信recommendation letter (5)
2.4辞职信resignation letter (5)
2.5建议信suggestion letter/advice letter (6)
2.6感谢信thanks letter[2010 年真题，今年不太可能再考] (7)
2.7祝贺信congratulation letter (7)
2.8道歉信apology letter (8)
2.9投诉信complaint letter (8)
2.10邀请信invitation letter (8)
2.11介绍信introduction letter (9)
2.12请求信introduction letter (9)
3，通知notice (10)
3.1通知notice (10)
3.2备忘录Memo (10)
3.3 报告report (10)
4，摘要写作要点 (11)
5，小作文考试重点 (11)
三、大作文模板 (12)
1，文字情景作文 (12)
1.1 记忆要点 (12)
1.2 作文模板[不要写作文题，没有明确就不要写] (12)
2，图表情景作文 (13)
2.1 Outline (13)
2.2 template (13)
3，图画情景作文 (14)
3.1 Outline (14)
3.2 template (14)
一、英文考试做题顺序
蒋军虎老师建议的做题顺序：
第一步，阅读
第二步，写作，小作文和大作文
第三步，翻译
第四步，完形填空。
顺序原因：一切围绕考分重点，即阅读和写作来投精力。完形填空作为时间的替补。二、英文小作文通用要求和注意事项
1，格式规范：如作文标题，书信的开关及落款
2，书写整洁：阅卷规定，书写不清可以降低1档（3分左右）
3，虎头豹尾：作文的开头、结尾都要用事先准备好的范句，不可出错。前三句即决定成绩。4，避免明错：作文要用保险的方法，不要出明显差错，如时态，单复数，虚拟语气等。
备注：
1，老师阅卷是将试卷扫描成电子版，在电子版上阅卷，所以不能写出界，否则扫描不上2，小作文和大作文可以有重复的句子出现。因小作文和大作文是不同老师流水线改卷。
三、小作文种类
1，作文通用要求
MBA英语二的写作25分，分为：
A节：小作文，10分，种类：A1，应用文:书信，备忘录，报告，通知，便笺字数要求100字，一定要大于100字
B节：大作文：15分，三类：
B1，文字情景作文，05，08，09，传统考法
B2，图表情景作文：考试年份：06，07，10，本年备考重点
B3，图画情景作文：考试年份：98，99，2008，2010，
2，十种书信
2.1 书信通用要求:标准格式，142阵形
书信格式：要求采用缩进式，缩进可以4或8个字母
书信结构：
1，称呼顶格：个人：Dear Sir/Madam/Judy/Jack,(用逗号)
机构：Dear Sir or Madam, /To whom it may concern, / To those concerned,
专业：Dear Mr. Wang, / Dear Professor Wang, / Dear Editor Wang,
2，正文缩进4字.通常分三段，句子数量：1，4，2，或1，5，2内容为：
首段：写信目的1句
中段：写信详情4或5句，通常1句总述，3到4句分述
尾段：收尾2句，S1：感谢看信，S2：期待回信
3，落款在右边：
Yours truly, / Yours faithfully,/ Yours sincerely,
NAME
2.2求职信、申请信application l etter/cover letter & Applying letter
1，outline：
P1【写信目的求职】P2【我有资质.教育背景.工作经验.自身素质】P3【感激面试.期待回应】
Para1, S1, writing the letter, purpose, applying for a position
Para2,S1,my qualifications, meet your requirements
S2,In the first place, major, in line with this job
S2,In the second, previous work experience, help lay a solid foundation
S3,Inaddition, a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn
S4,refer to my resume attached, for more details.
Para3,S1,would appreciate it a lot, schedule an interview
S2,Looking forward, to your reply, at your earliest con-ven-ien-ce.
3，Example 1：application letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position[as posted in the newspaper].
My qualifications, I believe, just amply meet your requirements. In the first place,my major, English, is perfectly in line with this job. In the second, my previous work experience [as a middle-school English teacher] has helped lay a solid foundation for the work here. In addition, I am a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn. Please refer to my resume attached for more details.
I would appreciate it a lot if you could schedule an interview for me. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
Key words：
Application 申请；Apply 申请；Position 职位；Post 职位；Qualifications资质; Background: bachelor Master Doctor; work experience: solid foundation(良好的基础);team player, self-motivated, eager to learn(渴望学习)
4，Example 2: applying letter
To whom it may concern,
I’m writing the letter for the purpose of applying to be a volunteer for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
My qualifications, I believe, just amply meet your requirements. In the first place, my specialty, English, is perfectly in agreement with the job. In the second, my previous work experiences as a social volunteer has helped lay a solid foundation for the work here. Moreover, I am a good team player, self-motivated, eager to learn.
I would appreciate it a lot if you could schedule an interview for me. Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
2.3推荐信recommendation letter
1, outline
P1【写信目的推荐.在找工作】P2【符合要求.有经验.有素质.值得考虑】P3【感谢.期待回应】Para1,S1,recommend to you
S2, seek employment as a sales manager
Para2,s1,amply meet your requirements
S2, rich experiences, help lay a solid foundation
S3,good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn
S4, certain, deserve your consideration
Para3,s1, pay due attention, s2, look forward, your reply, at your earliest con-ven-ien-ce
2, example
Dear Judy,
I’m writing the letter for the purpose of recommending to your Li Ming, one of my best collages. He is seeking employment as a sales manager in your company.
As far as I know, his qualifications amply m eet your requirements. In the first place, his rich experiences as a sales manager has helped lay a solid foundation for the work here. In the second, he is a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn. Accordingly, I’m certain that he deserves your consideration.
Thanks a lot for paying due attention to the letter. I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
2.4辞职信resignation letter
1, Outline:
P1【写信目的辞职】P2【不合适.没挑战.低工资.要辞职】P3【谢机会.感sorry】
Para1, S1, resign from my current position
Para2,S1,After several months of work, find it in-appro-priate, take the position,following reasons S2,expected the job to, be both challenging and rewards, turn out to be the opposite
S3,salary, has proved to be a lot lower, you originally promised
S4, As a result, make up my mind, to quit, after much de-libera-tion
Para3,S1,having offered me, the golden oppor-tunity to work, with the outstanding staff here
S2,I am sorry, for any in-con-ven-ience caused.
2, Example:
Dear Mr. Jack,
I’m writing the letter for the purpose of r esigning from my current position.
After several months of work, I find it inappropriate for me to take the position[as an editor]for the following reasons.In the first place, I ever expected the job to be both challenging and rewards which has turned out to be the opposite. In the second, the salary has proved to be a lot lower than you originally promised and I have a large family to support. As a result, I’ve made up my mind to quit the job after much deliberation.
Thanks a lot for having offered me the golden opportunity to work with the outstanding staff here. I sincerely hope you will approve of my resignation. I am genuinely sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
Key words:
Resignation 辞职，position 职位, inappropriate 不适合的; challenging 挑战的; offer 提供; golden opportunity 绝佳机会. After much deliberation 深思熟虑
2.5建议信suggestion l etter/advice letter
1, outline:
P1【写信目的建议】P2【情况危急.必须行动.公众意识.相关部门.大众媒体】P3【感谢.期待】Para1, S1, convey my deepest concern,
Para2,S1, must be pointed out, current situation, is going from bad to worse.
S2, accordingly, it’s urgent, take effective measures.
S3,enhance the public’s awareness of gravity of it.
S4, appeal to, relevant department, set up stick regulations, against it
S5, mass media, help devise ways, easing the bad trend
Para3,S1,pay due attention
S2, looking forward, see some new changes
2, Example 1: 宏观大建议
To whom it may concern,
I am writing the letter for the purpose of conveying my deepest concern about the “White paper”.
It must be pointed out that the current situation is going from bad to worse. Accordingly, it’s urgent for us to take effective measures. In the first place, we should enhance the public’s awareness of the gravity of it. In the second, we should appeal to the relevant department to set up strict regulations against it. [For example, changing more on the plastic bags]. In addition, mass media should help devise ways of easing the bad trend.
Thanks a lot for p aying due attention to the letter. Looking forward to seeing some new changes in the society soon.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
Key words:
Deepest concern 最深切的关注；convey 表达；suggestion 建议; going bad to worse 变得更坏；effective measure 有效手段; enhance 加强; awareness 意识; help devise ways 想方设法; deteriorating 恶化
3, Example 2: 具体事件小建议
To Sir or Madam,
I’m a student from the Department of Foreign Languages and I am writing the letter for the purpose of making some suggestions about the library’s service.
It must be pointed out that the present situation is going from bad to worse. Accordingly, it’s imperative for us to take effective measures. To begin with, why not set up an inquiry desk at the
circulation hall? In addition, the students should have access to the latest issues of foreign magazines. Finally, you’d better maintain strict order in the reading room.
Thanks a lot for pay due attention to the letter. Looking forward to seeing some new changes in our library room.
Yours truly,
Li Ming.
2.6感谢信thanks l etter[2010 年真题，今年不太可能再考]
1, Outline
Para1, S1, 写信目的：感谢,thanks
Para2,S1,原因1：友好热情S2，原因2：慷慨帮助 S3，原因3：友谊 S4，内容：感谢方式Para3,S1，再次感谢S2，祝福
Key words:Generous 慷慨的;
2, Example
Dear Judy,
I’m writing the letter for the purpose of conveying my thanks for your warm reception [during my recent visit to your country].
Your friendly warmth made it possible that I have a pleasant time in America. And it was your generous help that allowed me the chance to know the American culture better. In addition, I consider in an honor for me to make a friends of you. I hope that you would visit our country in due course so that I could enjoy the opportunity to repay your kindness and refresh our friendship.
Please accept my sincere thanks. Wish you all the best.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
2.7祝贺信congratulation letter
1, Outline:
P1【写信目的祝贺】P2【得来不易.激动.值得.鼓励.骄傲】P3【祝贺.期待】
Para1,S1,convey my sincere con-gratu-lations
Para2,S1,how hard you’ve worked, to attain this goal.
S2,imagine your excitement, realize such an ambition.
S3, more deserving than you
S4, real encouragement, to see your pains rewarded.
Para3,S1, accept my sincere congratulations.
S2, wish you still further success
Key words:
Excitement 激动; attain 取得; ambition 追求; deserve 值得
2, example
Dear Judy,
I’m writing the letter for the purpose of expressing my sincere congratulations on [your promotion to general manager of the company].
I know how hard you’ve worked to attain this goal. Therefore, I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition. Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you. On
the other hand, for me, it would be a real encouragement to see your pains rewarded. [ In short, I take great pride in your achievements].
Please accept my sincere congratulations. I wish you still further success.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
2.8道歉信apology letter
1, outline
P1【写信目的道歉】P2【道歉原因.道歉.解释，补救】P3【道歉.请求原谅】
Para1,S1,make a sincere apology, for my carelessness
Para2,s1,
S2, fell awfully sorry
S3, try my best , as soon as possible
Para3,s1, accept my heartfelt apology,
S2, hope you can forgive, for my carelessness
2, example
Dear Judy,
I’m writing the letter for the purpose of making a sincere apology to you for my carelessness. When I arrived home, I found I had forgotten to return the music CD that you lent me. I fell awfully sorry for this. As I understand this CD is one of your favorites, I’ll try my best to send it back as soon as possible.
Please accept my heartfelt apology. I genuinely hope you can forgive me for my carelessness.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
2.9投诉信complaint l etter
1, outline
P1【写信目的投诉】P2【道歉原因.道歉.解释，补救】P3【道歉.请求原谅】
Para1,S1,make a sincere apology, for my carelessness
2, example
To whom it may concern,
I’m writing the letter for the purpose of make a complaint about the laptop I bought last week. The reasons for my complaint are as follows. In the first place, the system often broke down for no reason, which led to the loss of my key data. In the second, the color of the screen was abnormal and couldn’t be adjusted. Accordingly, I find it difficult to go on with my work.
My demand is that you should take this matter into serious consideration and give me a satisfactory replay as soon as possible. At the same time, I genuinely hope to see some improvement in your services.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
2.10邀请信invitation l etter
1, Outline
P1【自我介绍.写信目的邀请】P2【活动介绍.邀请.活动介绍.邀请】P3【客套.要求.期待】
Para1,S1,make a sincere apology, for my carelessness
2, example
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am head of a household electric appliance plant, which is a major manufacturer of high-quality recorders. I’m writing the letter for the purpose of inviting you to the exclusive presentation of our new models and a reception.
The presentation is scheduled to take place at Noble Hotel on the third of January. I’ll fell it an honor if you could come. There will also be a reception at the tow p.m. I hope you will attend too.
Since your presence is of vital importance to this occasion, I do hope you can make it. Just call our office at 010-********, and we will glad to reserve a place for you. I’m looking forward to seeing you at that day.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
2.11介绍信introduction letter
1, outline
P1【写信目的介绍】P2【个人情况.计划.原因.期待】P3【感谢.期待】
2, example
Dear Judy,
I’m writing the letter for the purpose of introducing to your Li Ming, one of my best colleagues.
Presently he is studying in Si Chuang University. He will graduate in July and go to America for further study. As it will be the first time for him to study aboard, he will most likely encounter a variety of difficulties. Therefore, he hoped to enjoy your guidance in some ways. I would be most grateful if you could kindly offer help.
Thanks a lot for paying due attention to the letter. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Ming.
2.12请求信introduction letter
1. outline
P1【写信目的请求】P2【条件.条件1.条件2.计划】P3【感谢.期待】
2, example
To whom it may concern,
I’m writing the letter for the purpose of asking you to help find a child in a remote area to offer financial aid.
My requirements for the candidate are as follows. In the first place, he must be in poverty a nd truly in need of help. In the second, the child should be self-motivated and eager to learn. In addition, he must be willing to return to his hometown after graduation from university. Form my plant, I would send him a certain sum of money each term.
Thank you for paying due attention to the letter. I’m looking forward to your replay.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
3，通知notice
3.1通知notice
1, outline
P1【通知目的】P2【条件.条件1.条件2.条件3】P3【套话.期待】
2, example
NOTICE
To enrich the students’ campus life, the Postgraduates’ Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization.
The requirements for the candidates are as follows. In the first place, the applicants must have outstanding skill at English. In the second, they should be good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn. Last but not the least, the students with relevant working experience shall be preferred.
Those interested in the activity may sign up with the monitor of their class before the first of Feb. Everybody is welcome to join in it.
Postgraduates’ Association
2010.11.28
3.2备忘录Memo
1，outline
P1【目的】P2【主题.条件1.条件2】P3【套话.期待】
2, example
Date: Juanary 15, 2011
To: All Students of the English Department
From: Class Monitor Zhang Wei
Subject: Sprint Excursion
As spring arrives and the weather turns to be agreeable, the department has decided to organize a spring excursion in a suburban country.
The activities include mountain claiming and picnic. All the students of the English department are encouraged to participate. We remind you of the necessity of bring some food and water as well as wearing comfortable shoes.
Those interested in this excursion may sign up with the monitor of their class. Everybody is welcome to join in it.
3.3 报告report
1，outline
P1【主题】P2【主题.条件1.条件2】P3【套话.期待】
2, example
To: Professor Clinton
From: zhang wei
Date: January 15, 2011
Subject: A progress report on graduation research
This is a report I have to submit to you about my graduation paper.
Last week, I gathered information from library and from an interview. Of the twelve references lists on my proposal, I found only nine, for others I will go to search in a larger library.
As far as interview concerned, I had an extended interview with Mr. Liming, a professor from Peking University, who was kind enough to give me some brochures as well as a copy of report on electronic mail. I hope to use in my paper.
Starting tomorrow, I will begin organizing my paper. And I can be expected to submit a rough draft by the end of the month.
4，摘要写作要点
摘要，是用1500字左右的中文，摘写100字左右的英文，是阅读能力和翻译能力。
思路：1读，2摘，3译
1读：浏览各段首句或2、3句，不用看完全文
2摘：选摘总结句->或句子中的关键词
3译：对摘的句子做翻译
摘的要点：文摘句（自选能写的）-》句改写（容易翻译的方式）-》句摘词（把复杂的词或句子结构简单化）
宗旨：通过摘句、改句、摘词，将难度控制到自己能写的范围内
翻译要点：1，分析句子结构，2，确定并翻译句子主干，3，添加句子的枝叶，副词或修饰，4，通读审校。
并注意：通用短语不要用单词，增加句子的丰富性。
5，小作文考试重点
优先级：1,书信2,通知+备忘3,报告
三、大作文模板
考试要求：大作文有三类：1，文字情景描述，写评论，2，图表，写评论3，漫画，写评论三种作文的难度越来越大，相同一个万能模板，只是第一段分为文字开头、图表开头、漫画开头，二、三段不太变化。字数：英语一200字，英语二150字，只需要酌情增减从句。
1，文字情景作文
1.1 记忆要点
篇章结构：三段论。句子阵形：442。行文思路：总分总。写作要点：背模板，套熟句Outline:
第一段：总述形势：
P1,S1: :开头是趋势，S2：双方不满意；S3：有人要支持，有人抱怨去；S4：我看是好事
第二段，提供论据
P2,S1: 证据非难事S2：先经济政治，S2a调查可证实S3：再确信好事，S4：并不容忽视
第三段，深化认识：P3,S1：结论深了去S2：公众别怀疑[可选S3，我信这趋势]
记忆要点：
S1：These days, an increasingly hot issue, among the public that, a growing number of, willing to S2:whenever, come to this subject, spring up opposite voices
S3a:，tend to, view it as a blessing(beneficial), S3b:，claim, it’s a hell
S4:。For my part, incline to support, former view
S1：：of no difficulty, put forward several arguments, to account for the phenomenon
S2：：at the top of the list, rapid development of the economy, steady improvement of living standards, more and more people[family] can afford a private car
S2a:：According to a recent survey, about 55% of, have such financial resources
S3：：in the second, admit that, to study abroad[ to obtain another degree], enrich their experiences [enable people to find well-pay job]
S4:：last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that, lifelong study has become a must in the current era of knowledge explosion [ we should keep up with the times]
S1: considing what has been argued so far, safely come to the conclusion, trend,
S2: accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public, regard it with, too much anxiety.
S3: And I firmly believe that, situation, continue for quite a while, in the years to come
1.2 作文模板[不要写作文题，没有明确就不要写]
These days, it has become an increasingly hot topic among the public that
[a growing number of college students are willing to work as a nurse after graduation.]
[a growing number of adults intend to continue their further education]. Whenever it comes to this subject, there will always spring up opposite voices. Some people tend to view it as a blessing, while the other claims that it’s a hell. For my part, I am inclined to support the former view.
It’s of no difficulty to put forward several arguments to illustrate [account for]my standpoint[ the phenomenon]. At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and the steady improvement of living standards,[more and more Chinese families can afford their children’s higher education abroad][those with various degrees are in great demand]. According to a recent survey, about 55%of [Chinese families in big cities have such financial resources][ of job hunters have found their desirable positions]. In the second, we must admit
that [to study abroad can enrich their life experience][to obtain another degree can enable people to find well-paid jobs]. Last but not the least, the fact could not be ignored that [children will have to be independent of their parents] [ lifelong study has become a must in the current era of knowledge explosion].
Considering what has been argued so far, we can safely come to the conclusion that the trend is normal and acceptable. Accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety.[ 可选Therefore, I firmly believe that the situation will continue for quite a while in the years to come.]
2，图表情景作文
2.1 Outline
Figures-> change -> phenomenon -> issue/topic/subject
P1,s1:有变化；S2：具体变化[上升还是下降]；S3：数据引用[开始，后来];S4：与此同时Para2与Para3与文字情景作文相同
首段记忆要点
S1, what is shown in the char above, demonstrate[reveal]clearly, some change, have taken place, with regard to, [the recruitment number].
S2,based upon the data of the chart, one can see that, has been on a steady rise [decline] all the time
S3, In the year of , is only about, but within no more than server years, went up[down] to .
[S4,有两种变化时描述第二种变化,meanwhile, have witnessed [slight] changes].
2.2 template
What is shown in the chart above reveals clearly that [remarkable/some] changes have taken place with regard to[university graduates’expected income毕业生期望薪酬] [ the recruitment of Master of Engineer] [DINK families in China].
Based upon the data of the chart[diagram], one can see that the [expected income per month][number][percentage] of [recruitment of ME ][such families] has been on a steady rise[decline] all the time.
In the year of [1998,图表数据], it [recruitment number] was only about [3,100 RMB] [1%], while within no more than several years, it [the number][percentage] went up[down] to [2,100 RMB] [12%] in [2009].[ At the same time, college graduates’ real income[the number of others] has witnessed slight changes.]
It’s of no difficulty to come up with several possible factors to account for the trend.
At the top of the list, with the rapid development of [higher education] our economy and the steady improvement of living standards, [a great number of families are rich enough to afford the private cars][the number of graduates has been growing.][ mobile phone has become a life necessity] [a growing number of couples enjoy family time without children.][those technical are in great demand] According to a recent survey, about 55% of [families in big cities have plan to buy a car in next year][students claim that competition between students is increasing] [families have no plans to bear children][employers need professional graduates].
In the second, we must admit that [a good many of graduates have turned down-to-earth]. [there are a great number of population in our country][some couples are showing great worry for the rapid growth of population]. [ME can help people to find well-paid position with great ease.] Last but not the least, the fact could not be ignored that [mobile service in our country has been increasingly cheaper][youngth have come to place more emphasis on the choice of life work instead of monthly rewards]. [it’s too expensive to raise a children][lifelong study has become a must in the era of knowledge explosion].
Considering which has been argued so far, we could safely come to the conclusion that the trend is normal[abnormal] and acceptable[negative]. Accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety.[如果是负面:Accordingly, it is urgent for us to take effective measures to reverse the trend][ 可选Therefore, I firmly believe that the situation will continue for quite a while in the years to come.]
3，图画情景作文
3.1 Outline
1，看Directions, 审题2，看图，先看宏观，再看微观，3，确认自己主题：支持或反对2，作文结构
Para1:
S1，赞美图画:thought-provoking drawing, attract, attention by, startling originality
S2，感慨Looking at this drawing, every reader sink into, meditation, upon its implication
S3，描述As is shown by the cartoon,
S3，解读Needless to say, this picture is intend to illustrate the gravity of [ the current traffic jam] Para 2:
S1有原因It is of no difficulty ,to put forward, some factors, to account for, above phenomenon S2：原因1, To begin with, rapid development of economy, steady improvement of living standards
S3举例,Based upon, survey, about 55% of ,
S4,原因2，In addition, we must admit that
S5,原因3，Finally [Last but not the least],the factor cannot be ignored that
Para 3:
S1，评论Taking into account, what has been argued so far, I’m inclined to view, as.., abnormal, negative [normal positive]
S2：预测Accordingly, It is of necessity for the public, to regard it, with too much anxiety.
3.2 template
This though-provoking drawing will catch every reader’s attention by its startling originality. Looking at the drawing, I believe, every reader will sink into meditation upon its implication. As is shown by the cartoon, [every car, lorry and bus on the road moves at a rather slow speed, even no faster than the grandmotherly women walking nearby with a snail. ][various culture elements, such as Kongfu, Beijing Opera and Laoshe are surprisingly boiled in a hotpot]
Needless to say, this picture is meant to illustrate the gravity of [the current traffic jam][culture integration].
It’s of no difficulty to put forward some possible factors to account for t he phenomenon. At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and the steady improvement of living standards, [论据一a growing number of families are rich enough to afford private cars][there is an increasing demand for various cultural products]. According to a recent Internet survey, about 55% of [举例families in the big city have plans fo r a car ][people in big cities are positively in favor of the trend]. In addition, we must admit that [论据二the public transport system still fails to keep up with the times与时俱进]. Last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that [论据三the public have yet to improve their sense of environmental protection][multi-cultural society will make our life rich and colorful].
Considering what has been argued so far, we can safely come to the conclusion that the phenomenon is normal [/abnormal] and positive[/negative]. Accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety.[ it is urgent for us to take effective measure to reserve the trend.] [And we firmly believe that the situation will continue for quite a while in the years to come.]