2013高考英语二轮复习精品资料专题19 短文改错教学案（教师版）【2013高考考纲解读】
【重点知识整合】
解题步骤
1．通读全文，掌握大意
快速通读短文，要迅速把握短文的题材、中心思想与故事的时间、地点、原因、结果以及人物关系等要素，并理清行文的时态、人物与逻辑等方面的问题。虽然短文改错是分行设错的，但判断只能以句子作为意义单位，做到行不离句，句不离文；孤立地在一词一句上寻觅错误的“只见树木，不见森林”的改错法很容易让人产生烦躁情绪，影响解题效果。因此，我们必须坚持从整体到局部，再从局部到整体，把握全局，用整体理解去攻克词、句、篇上的错误。
2．整句理解，逐行分析
这是最关键的一步。根据词法和句法知识，检查和判断错误所在。可逐行检查主谓、时态、人称是否一致；关系词、代词使用是否正确；动词形式是否恰当；表达是否符合习惯用法等，分析判断所述多个考查项目在句中的正误。
3.复读全文，检查验证
将初步改错后的短文再次细读，检查并验证所做的答案是否使全文语气连贯流畅，行文逻辑是否合乎情理，全篇结构是否严密完整，凡遇不通之处要进行细致的分析和推敲，以便使答案更有把握。此时，若有一两个拿不准的，不可举棋不定，可以根据此项命题的特点，运用错误类型的比例来做最后定夺。
解题方法
1．先易后难
在通读全文的过程中，可以将其中明显的冠词、固定搭配、主谓一致等拿得准的错误先行改正，第一遍解决不了的，第二遍重点突破，不断缩小包围圈，并要兼顾四种命题类型在历年高考中所占的比例。若发现某种题型在改错中占的比例过大或过小，便要重新推敲一下。当然这种比例历年也有些微变化，并非绝对。
2．注意改错符号
教师讲课或教辅书由于时间和版面的限制，在给出短文改错练习答案时可能不规范，再加上同学们平时做练习时规范化不够，因而高考中可能出现仍按平时习惯，用文字或用箭头去表示改正方法的现象。
改错时，要严格按照高考要求来答题。高考试卷中每个大题前都写明了答题的要求，但仍有不少学生不规范答题，白白丢了应得的分数。
主干知识整合
短文改错的错词现象与规律
短文改错的考点主要体现在以下几个方面：
【2013届云南师大附中月考】短文改错（满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
Welcome to Happy Restaurant! In our restaurant , you will enjoy a better taste and a better atmosphere. The cook, who are invited from Spain and Italy, brought us a lot of local food for the guests from different places. With a variety of delicious food choices, we strong believe that you will not have other food bought out of your restaurant. As you can see, all the guests enjoy the environment as well the tasty food because everybody doesn’t forget to talking in a low voice. We believe that a quieter place is a better place for you to taste the food . If you are interesting in the recipe of our dishes, our cooks are ready to ask your questions. The dinner sets are not one-time –used, but because you want to take anything in our restaurant for memory, please tell our waiters or waitresses. They are willing to help to you.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分（试题内容见答题卡）
【2013届河北省五校联盟调研考试】二、短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by t r a i n.
They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single ticket allows t h e m
enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return one not only is cheaper but
also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey.
Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When t h e y
get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.
【2013届贵州遵义湄潭中学第三次月考】短文改错(共10小题；每小题I分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删
除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example，when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angrily. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mum with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.
4. 【答案】other → others。
【解析】此处意为“别人”，所以改为others；
【考点定位】考查代词的用法
5. 【答案】 busy前的is→ was。
【解析】根据句意此处应用一般过去时；
【考点定位】考查动词时态
6. 【答案】making→ made。
【解析】此句却谓语，making改为made作谓语；
【考点定位】考查句法结构
7. 【答案】angrily→angry。
【解析】此处形容词angry作make的宾补；
【考点定位】考查形容词的用法
8. 【答案】去掉on。
【解析】“一天晚上”应为one night；
【考点定位】考查习惯表达
9. 【答案】loudly→ loud。
【解析】此处形容词loud修饰名词music；
【考点定位】考查形容词的用法
10. 【答案】difference→ different。
【解析】此处形容词作表语；
【考点定位】考查形容词的用法
【2013届辽宁省五校协作体高三联考】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1。每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our class recently has had a heated discussion about if the historic old buildings should be tear down. Opinions varies from one to another. Some students support the protection of those buildings so they are carriers of history through which the future generations can deep understand the development of our city. Beside, the historic old buildings can also arouse people’s love for the city.
In the contrary, some other students think that the old buildings may hold back the development of economy and the process of modernization. It may affect the beauty of the city.
As far I’m concerned, I approve of t he former opinion. But if a building is worth of little, it may be proper to demolish(摧毁) it and make better use of that area. We should just weight the advantages and disadvantages.
3.【答案】varies — vary
【解析】根据主语opinions可知，谓语动词用复数形式；
【考点定位】考查主谓一致
10.【答案】weight – weigh
【解析】此处the advantages and disadvantages作宾语，其前应为谓语动词，所以改成weigh；
【考点定位】考查动词作谓语的用法
【2013届浙江省十校联合体高三上学期联考】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man
was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your l ife. It’s true what honesty is more impor tant than money!
【2013届四川省成都外国语学校高三11月考】短文改错（共10小题；每题1.5分，满分15分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误只涉及到一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并且在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改后仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者从第十一处起不记分。
Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, they are very strict with their children .So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports .The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder many a child are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines .Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our government is carrying on a plan to solve the education problem .
【答案】his—their
【解析】parents前的代词应和主语some保持一致，故用their；【考点定位】考查代词指代一致
【答案】already前加have
【解析】此处根据时间状语already可知用现在完成时；
【考点定位】考查动词时态
【答案】lesson前加a
【解析】此处draw a lesson为一个短语，意为：吸取教训；【考点定位】考查冠词的用法
【答案】on—out
【解析】此处carry out意为：执行；执行计划来解决教育问题。【考点定位】考查动词短语的用法
【2013届河南中原名校高三第三次联考】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Health is more important than wealth．Good health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope in our career．To keep fit, firstly, it is much
important for us to take more fruits and vegetable because they provide vitamins．And we should keep a balancing diet and avoid food what is rich in sugar and fat．Secondly, we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies as strongly as possible．Beside, we should avoid too much work pressure．Finally, we should get rid of bad habits that damaged our health, such as drinking and smoking．If we stick to the advice given up, we will lead a healthy life．
【2013届山西省山大附中高三期中】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.
Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't
make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other. And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.
To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.
【解析】此处it是形式主语，后面的动词不定式的复合结构作真正的主语；
【考点定位】考查不定式的用法
【答案】successful—successfully
【解析】此处副词修饰动词短语cope with；
【考点定位】考查副词的用法
【2013届浙江省重点中学高三期中联考】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，共有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
Manager,
I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see
a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema.
I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make more improvements.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】well—good
【解析】此处指电影好，用good；well作形容词，意为：身体好；
【考点定位】考查形容词的用法
【答案】problem—problems
【答案】a—the
【解析】此处特指“正在写的信”，故用the；
【考点定位】考查冠词的用法
【答案】去掉on
【解析】此处consider是及物动词，后直接带宾语；
【考点定位】考查consider的用法
【高频考点突破】
短文改错的目的是测试考生发现、判断、纠正一些词法、句法以及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面错误的能力。它既能考查考生的词汇和语法方面的能力，也能考查考生的阅读理解能
力。其考查的角度可以概括为以下三个方面：
一、词法型
词法的测试包括：定冠词和不定冠词的用法；名词的单复数和名词所有格；动词的时态、语态、语气、情态动词和非谓语动词等；人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等的用法；介词的搭配；并列连词、从属连词的用法；形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法；固定搭配和习惯用法。
二、句法型
句法的测试包括：主谓语在数上的一致；名词性从句；定语从句；强调句型；句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性及逻辑性。
三、语篇型
语篇的测试包括：上下文中的时态是否一致；上下文中的代词是否一致；上下文中的逻辑是否一致；上下文中的词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。
【例7】I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me.” said Mother cheerfully.
【解析】考查代词的格。me改为I。这是一个倒装句，作主语，应用主格。
【例8】My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us.
【解析】考查小品词的遗漏。wanted后加 to。want to do sth.为固定用法。
【例9】My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then
【解析】考查动词的时态。are改为 were。时间状语为the other day（不久前某一天；几天以前），所以应该用一般过去时。
【例10】Without a moment’s delay, his neighhor pricked up the box but announced:“I ‘ll take them. ”
【解析】考查逻辑连词。but改为and，很显然，拿起来和宣布说“我买了”是并列、承接关系，所以要用并列连词and。
【做题指导】
短文改错一直是学生在应考时失分较多的题型。这主要是因为设错的内容多为学生在平常进行语言操练时常犯的错误。比如：写作中用到的关键词，语言学习中的负迁移现象，容易忽视的虚词、小品词等。做好短文改错题应注重以下技巧：
一、谨记答题原则
（1）“规范性”原则：要严格按照示范规定的符号改错。
（2）“四不改”原则：①单词拼写不改。②大小写不改。③词序错误不改（应从错词或少词方面考虑）。④标点符号不改。
（3）“五改动”原则：①忠实于原文原则（不可改变原文的原意）。②一对一原则（一错一词）。③错误以改动最少为原则。④虚词以添加或者删除为原则。⑤实词以改变形式为原则。
二、规律常见错误
常见错误（1）“不一致性”错误
主要包括：主、谓语不一致；时态不一致；语态不一致；名词的单、复数不一致；代词指代不一致；搭配不一致等。
【例4】…….he will say some words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes him happily too.
【解析】考查主、谓语一致。Is改为are。that代指先行词words，所以谓语动词要用复数。常见错误（2）“行文逻辑”错误
这种错误主要是运用行文逻辑，考查连接手段。谨记两种句式：并列句（并列连词），复合句（从属连词）；六种关系：转折关系，选择关系，层递关系，并列关系，因果关系，同位关系；一种变化：语义的曲折变化。如：肯定与否定，方位与时空的转移等。
常见错误（3）“平行结构”错误
平行结构是指两个或更多的词、词组或从句具有相似或相等的句法功能。在表达相互平行的概念时，要使用相同的语法结构，即动词与动词相配，形容词与形容词相配，分词与分词相配，不定式与不定式相配，短语与短语相配。平行结构经常借助于并列连词and，but，or或连词词组not only…but also…，not…but…，either…or…，neither…nor…，as well as等。
1. Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character. 2. Dear Brad, I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house an d a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last. As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future. Li Hua 3. Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it. Thank you! 4. We spend two weeks in London last year. We went there in the autumn .We think it is the best season to visit England. The weather is usually good but there aren’t too many tourists in October. We stayed in a small h otel in the West End .It was convenient as we did most of our traveling by foot. We went to look at the places where all tourists see. We saw Buckingham Palace and the National Gallery. We went to shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money .What we liked most, though, was going to theatre. We don’t have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home .A lot of people say English food is very badly. We didn’t think so. It’s true that most of the restaurants are French or Italian or Chinese, but we had some very good meal.
（全文由Peter编制） 2016年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错 1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错（10 分） My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. 2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
高考英语短文改错题技巧汇总|高考英语短文改错模拟训练10篇 【--高考祝福语】 试题预览 高考英语短文改错模拟训练10篇 No.01 I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is 1.___________ my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a 2.___________ bike. Ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. I 3.___________ use my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warm
4.___________ and dry. It can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold and 5.___________ rain is pouring down. It can also be very danger. Of course 6.___________ I will be very careful on my bike. In facts, accidents are not 7.___________ the only problem. One day I went to school and come back 8.___________ to find his front wheel was missing. It was a long walk to 9.___________ the repairer’s shop. Now I have two strong locks. 10.___________
高考英语短文改错考点解析-形容词与副词 一、考点规律分析 短文改错对形容词与副词的考查主要涉及形容词和副词比较等级的误用（尤其是在本身已是比较级的词前误加more）、形容词与副词的混用（如修饰动词时误用形容词或修饰名 词时误用副词）等，另外，用作表语时该用形容词的却误用了名词、简短副词（如in，down 等）的误加与漏用、涉及形容词搭配的as…as 结构、how 与what 的混用等也是常考的考点。 二、真题单句归纳 （1）After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening. （frightening 改为frightened，因它表示某人感到害怕，而不是令人害怕）（全国卷） （2）Charles said，“As soon as I see a realy tall building，I want to climb it. （realy 改为really 或real，若改为really，则修饰tall；若改为real，则修饰building）（全国卷）（3）Last Sunday，police cars hurry to the taller building in New York. （taller 改为tallest，因从含义上看此处应是最高级）（全国卷） （4）As a result，people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past. （去掉more，因为longer 本身已是比较级，不能再受more 修饰）（全国卷）（5）Therefore，there are still some countries where people have shorter lives. （Therefore 改为However，因此处语意转折）（全国卷） （6）People in industrial countries can expect to live for twice so long as people who lived a few hundred years ago. （so long as 改为as long as，其意为“与……一样长”）（全国卷）（7）In some places you may borrow many books as you want. （many 之前加as，因 as …… as 结构不完整）（全国卷） （8）I told Mother，Father，Sister and all my friends here that a great time I had. （that 改为what）（全国卷） （9）I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting. （去掉much，因much 不能用来修饰形容词的原级，尽管它可用来修饰比较级和最高级）（全国卷）（10）I‘m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. （wonderfully 改为wonderful，因它是放在名词前作定语）（全国卷）
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As every one knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. （二） Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need. （三） I’m the captain o f our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won sever al games. There will an important game next month. But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy. (四) When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties . The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. （五） Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei
短文改错专题 一．改错题型特点： 高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题型。主要考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确性及词、句、篇和语法的综合水平。高考短文改错设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多，覆盖面广，包括词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等，是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。 二．短文改错常见考点设置： 考点1：名词 命题特点: 本来用复数,却用单数；本来用单数，却用复数。 记住常考的几个不可数名词：news, work(工作), advice, fun, progress, information, luck, weather, music, health, change(零钱),baggage(行李), luggage(行李),furniture, jewellery, equipment等 改正方法: (1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系. 1. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. 2. After class we become stranger at once. 3. They want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get marks in all my subject. 4. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. 5. There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. 6. Now we can get millions of informations from the Internet. 7. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. 8. She is one of the most intelligent girl in our class. 9. I looked at his other hands. 10. Most of them are peasant and some often go fishing in the sea. 11. We have made great progresses with Mr. Liu teaching us. 12. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new rules should help students get higher grade. 13. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 14. He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures. 考点2：代词 命题特点：1.男女性代词用反；2.单数指代复数；3.代词词性用错；4.缺少人称代词。 改正方法: 根据上下文的逻辑关系以及人称代词的数和格的一致问题。 15. Rose is such a kind girl that we all like him very much. 16. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. 17. I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. 18. It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. 19. Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself as I was learning to express me in simple English. 20. My story book is much more interesting than her. 21. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 22. Some students may also save up for our college or future use. 23. Do you think necessary for you to learn Japanese well? 24. I dressed me quickly and hurried out the house. 25. You’d better keep that he said in mind. 26. He has three children, two of them are teachers. 27. The population of China is much larger than it of the USA.
Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! （2014课标2） My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m.and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn’t need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with afte r-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
高考英语短文改错20篇 1 Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no 76． play make Jack a dull boy?What this means is that if you 77． study all the times you will become a boring person. You 78． must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise 79． you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the 80． person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have 81． a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work 82． you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do 83． not have to compete your classmates. No one can be 84． happier in studying seven days and seven nights a week. 85． 2 Dear Tracy， Although I'm 1 6 years old，but my father still treats 76. _____ me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions.77. _ _____ He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 78. _ _____ leaving things lying around in the house while he did this 79. _ _____ all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80. _ _____ follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.”81. _ _____ Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests，82. _ _____ making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t83. _ _____ bear what he does. I have been tried many times 84. _ _____ to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me. 85. _ _____ Puzzled 3 Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he 76. _____________ has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps 77. _____________ make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday 78. _____________ morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted 79. _____________ to see the report about an important football match 80. _____________ the night before. The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless 81. _____________ he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to wait 82. _____________ a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived 83. _____________ late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him 84. _____________ why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”. 85. _____________
高考英语短文改错分类解析 解题步骤： 1. 着手篇章，了解大意 考生做短文改错时，不应急于改错，而应先把文章浏览一遍，弄清文章的脉络层次和中心思想，把握作者所采用的时态、语态、人称和数。可以先把短文中明显的错误(如固定词组、词性、单复数)或认为有可能的错误(如句子结构的错误)用铅笔轻轻地标出来，为下一步正式改错做准备。 2. 逐句分析，依句改错 在短文改错中，题随行出、错随句生。因此，考生应在略读全文、把握文章中心思想的基础上，对文章进行逐行逐句研究，从词汇的用法、句子的结构到文章的篇章逻辑都要进行仔细地推敲，把错误之处一一改正过来，切不可孤立地依行改错。若一时发现不了错误，不要揪住一处不放而耽搁太多时间。可以在全文改完以后，再回过头来进行难点突破。若已改出了八、九处错误，剩余一两处实在找不出错误而时间又来不及时，则大胆地打上钩，不留空白。当然，有些考生在考试过程中由于紧张而脾气急躁，一看找不到错处就打勾，这也是不明智的。因为近几年来，该题的出题方式基本稳定，只有一处是正确的。 3. 复读全文，检查核对 考生在做完短文改错题后，务必要把已改好的短文复读一遍，查看是否出现疏漏或遗漏的地方，特别要注意时态、语态、代词所指及人称和数等篇章逻辑方面的问题，检查无误后方可定稿作答。 错误分类解析： 高考英语短文改错分类解析---名词 一、考点规律分析 短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数问题，即在该用复数的地方误用其单数，或在该用单数的地方误用其复数。 二、真题单句归纳 (1) We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream. (2) We climb everywhere, not only in America. We have been to Europe many time. (3) There are branch library in many villages. (4) I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon. (5) They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. (6) We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. (7) Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! (8) She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning. (9) She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. (10) I used to love science class — all of them— biology, chemistry, geography, physics. (11) They did not want me to do any work at family. (12) I’ll get good marks in all my subject. (13) On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. (14) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well. (15) Their word were a great encouragement to me. (16) You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month. (17) Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby. (18) You can find all kinds of information in just a few minute on the Internet. 三、模拟单句演练 (1) Women live longer than men in most country. (2) The film is very interesting. I have seen it many time. (3) It’s said that all the ticket have been sold out. (4) The children spend a lot of times watching TV. (5) I met a lot of interesting peoples on holiday. (6) The flower in the park were all pleasing. (7) He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures. (8) Computer are becoming more and more popular in the country. (9) It’s one of the most interesting book that I’ve ever read. (10) Hearing the news, the woman burst into tear. (11) He hasn’t lived here long, but he has a great many friend here.
2018高考英语专题---短文改错 压轴题高分策略之错词 一、考点规律分析 短文改错中，错词所占比重最高，常占整篇短文改错10题中的的6个小题左右。错词的情况也最为复杂，常见的有：动词错误；名词错误；连词错误；冠词错误；形容词和副词错误；代词错误；非谓语动词常见错误；介词错误；习惯用法错误以及逻辑上的错误等。矚慫润厲钐瘗睞枥庑赖。 1. 动词的常见错误 ①一般现在时与一般过去时错用； ② and前后动词时态不一致； ③主谓不一致； ④缺少动词，特别是be动词； ⑤第三人称单数形式错用； ⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。 They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies.聞創沟燴鐺險爱氇谴净。 【答案】did改为do As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. 残骛楼諍锩瀨濟溆塹籟。 【答案】visiting改为visited 【思路分析】 通读全句可知，句子的整个时态为一般过去时，有三个并列的谓语动词，分别为fed，visiting和told。很明显，并列连词and前后的动词时态应该保持一致，所以应该把visiting改为visited。酽锕极額閉镇桧猪訣锥。 One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.彈贸摄尔霁毙攬砖卤庑。