雅思移民类书信写作

雅思写作（普通培训类）Task1—书信写作

一、基本信息及备考重点

1．考试时间—建议20分钟；篇幅要求—150-170words；评分权重—40%

2．书信或图表评分标准：Task1（书信或图表）按照以下三方面评分：Task Fulfillment（完成任务）；

Coherence and Cohesion（连贯与衔接）；Vocabulary and Sentence Structure（词汇与句子结构）。

Task Fulfillment指的是考生是否能够在正确审题的基础上完成题目的指令。

Coherence and Cohesion指的是文章通过一定的衔接手段（Cohesive Devices）来表明上下文的连贯性

Vocabulary and Sentence Structure指的是文章的语言表达。

5分或5分以下的作文一般语法错误较多。

6分作文则一般没有致命的语法错误，用词和句子基本准确。

7分以上的作文用词丰富（Variety）、句子结构复杂（Complexity）。

3．书信写作类型

(08-08-30)You rent an accommodation for a week and you found that there were problems with it.Write a letter to the owner and tell him or her:

●What the problems are

●Describe the problems

●And say what actions you want the owner to take to solve the issue

(08-04-12)You recently bought an item of clothing in another town,but you found some problems with it after you returned home.Write a letter to the manager and say:

●What happened

●What are the problems

●And what you would like them to do

(08-11-20)You got a newspaper prize,but you did not get it yet.Write a letter to inquire about this.In your letter, you should ask:

●When the prize will come

●What your expectation of the prize is

●And how the editor should deal with it for you

(08-11-08)Write a letter to the local council to provide suggestions on how to improve tourist facilities in your town. In your letter,you should give:

●Present situation of tourist facilities

●Your suggestions

●Benefits from tourism

4．书信的格式与基本结构

You booked a holiday with a travel agency but the tour did not live up to your expectations.Write a letter to the agency.In your letter,you:

•Describe the problem

•Explain what you expected on your holiday

•Explain what you want the travel agency to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I wish to complain about the service provided by one of your travel operators,Jenny Chang.I contracted with her for a holiday I booked in Sydney for a total cost of`＄2,000,but later discovered the tour fell below an acceptable standard.

On February13,2006,I talked to Mrs.Jenny Chang and reminded her of some special requirements I had, including a double room in a four-star hotel,ten main places of interest and so forth.Your tour operator confirmed that these would be surely arranged.Unfortunately,these requirements were not met.The four-star hotel was in fact a three-star hotel,and the room service was below the average.The so-called double room was cramped and caused me considerable discomfort.The guide took us to six places of interest(instead of tem,as set out in contract)and some famous tourism sites were not on our itinerary.Since you undertook to book a holiday in accordance with my requirements and your tour operator assured me that all my requirements would be met,I must hold you responsible for my disappointment.

Please let me know how you propose to settle this matter.

Yours sincerely…

You want to sell some of your furniture.You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:

•Explain why you are selling

•Describe the furniture

•Suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture

Dear Jan,

As you know,we’ll be moving to a new house soon and there are a few things that I won’t be able to take with me. The new house is a bit smaller so I have to sell some furniture and I was wondering if you might be interested.

In particular,I want to sell my big dinning table.Do you remember it—the one in the living room?It has wooden legs and a grey glass top and it’s big enough for six people.There are six matching chairs to go with it.

I know you’ve always liked this furniture so I could let you have it at a good price.I’d rather sell it to you than to a strange.

Why don’t you come around and take another look at them on Saturday?We’ll be here all day,so maybe we could have some lunch together.

Give me a ring and let me know,

Love,

Shanda

格式：

称呼一律采用齐头写法

中间段落如采用缩进式，落款要写在右下角；如采用齐头式，落款也应该为齐头式