2011年英语四级写作提高：如何改写范文
在复习准备英语四级写作时，我们应该按照“谋篇、段落、句子、措辞”(如图一)“四步走”的宏观复习方式来准备。我们应该将以往的范文作为框架，从谋篇布局着手，加以润色字词句的修饰，将其变成自己的四级高分作文。
英语四级、英语六级考试写作提高方法：
学习范文或掌握优秀作文是打破提高自己传统写作语言的第一步。下面我们通过2005年12月四级范文，分析学习如何提纯范文中的“谋篇、段落、句子、措辞”并加以利用，使其变成自己的语言。
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourist？
1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2. 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3. 我认为…
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists？
Nowadays， many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city，the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province。
So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists？ Different people have different opinions. On one hand， some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand，some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion， the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere。
In my opinion， the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus， it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field。
首先，提纯范文“谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays，… … have become one of the popular … …。It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … …。
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to … …？ Different people have different opinions. On one hand， some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …。 On the other hand， some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion，… … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … …。
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion，… … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …，it will ruin … …。
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity)：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence)：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays，on one hand， on the other hand，in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness)：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned，is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists？”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …。 On the other hand，… …。”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house。
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since， for， as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill。
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill， he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent， bright， clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual 》 intelligent 》 bright 》clever)
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays， the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast， while gathering with their beloved family。
However， an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening？ Different people have different opinions. On one hand，some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs， such as the emotional song， the graceful dance，the funny short sketch， the amusing comic dialogue， the delightful magic， and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand， some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion， the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant。
In my opinion， the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people， but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening， it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation。
寄语：分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。
To see a world in a grain of sand，
And a heaven in a wild flower，
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand，
And eternity in an hour。
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
大学英语四级写作样备考 大学英语四级写作怎么样备考 参加大学四级考试，那就要少不了要准备写作的一些备考技巧。快来看看为你准备了大学英语四级写作的常用备考攻略，欢迎大家阅读! 背诵必不可少 写作的过程最后是一个输出的过程，它跟们大脑的语料库的积累，还有英文素材的积累和长期的修养是密不可分的。写作就跟银行存钱一样，零存整取，一点点的存进去，最后取出来的时候可以一大把一大把的取。如果我们平时背、背句子、背单词、背语法、背句型、背结构背得少，考前也没有进行练习的话，那考试中肯定会遇到很多的困难。所以这里建议大家去背诵考前背诵范文，背五篇左右是打底的，背到滚瓜烂熟，脱口而出。 挑代表性范文 考前应该大范围的进行准备，而不是把题目押到一两个上面。但是也不要求全部背诵，只要把里面的作文大部分进行精读和预览就可以了，可以挑出代表题型，图画作文、英语作文、还有图表作
文以及提纲作文，至少每种各背一篇或者两篇，加在一起背五到八篇的范文就可以了。 背诵加默写 范文内容很多也很枯燥，大家背了之后不一定会写，会写不一定能写的粗来，所以大量的背诵之后，还要在草稿纸上，笔记本上自己练一下。将背诵的内容诉至笔下，只需要这一遍的过程这篇内容就会在脑海里留下深刻印象，考生便无需再担心背完又忘了的烦恼，同时一些常见的固定组合或者语法在默写的过程中也会无形加深了印象。 默写后查缺补漏 在默写的过程中可能大家不会意识到自己出的错，但是拿默写的内容与原文比对时就很轻松可以发现存在的一些问题，包括拼写错误、语法错误、甚至是标点符号的失误，这是一个查缺补漏的好时机，争取在考试之前就把这些自己习惯性会犯的错误检查修改掉，考试中获得分数的可能性就更大了。 仿写练习
大学英语四级作文范文10篇 The Advantages and Disadvantages of Living in the 21st century(生活在21世纪的优缺点) Living in the 21st century offers certain advantages,such as a higher standard of living, but it also has some disadvantages, such as a polluted environment. To begin with, most people now have more money for less hard work. They earn higher salaries than before and enjoy better social security, such as social welfare for laid-off workers and disability insurance. Secondly, because of the advance in medical technology which leads to better medical care and treatment, people’s life expectancy is longer. Moreover, most people now can afford to buy foods of high nutrition and enjoy their leisure time. Thirdly, modern conveniences such as radio, TV, internet, various vehicles and labour-saving machines in the home, all greatly facilitate human communication, transportation and housework as well. Nevertheless, living in the 21st century also has its disadvantages. The most serious one is the increasingly polluted environment; air is filled with smog and water is contaminated by iehemicals from factories.Another main disadvantage is the personalization of human relattonships which mostly result from people’s ever-increasing contact with machines and numbers. Still one more disadvantage is the weakening of spiritual values. An undeniable fact is that a large number of people are solely interested in materialistic culture,while neglecting spiritual civilization. Limited by space, we have to skip the examples. In conclusion, although the 21st century has indeed given us a lot of advantages, it may not have made us wiser, because it has also made our earth dirtier, our people less humane, and our spirituali iife poorer, We shpuld continue to enjoy the benefits of technological advancement,however, we must make a concerted effort to preserve our natural environment for future generations. Moreover, we should take the time now to make our lives more meaningful in anihcreasingly impersonal, computerized world. 全国大学英语四级考前作文预测 二 On responsibility .(关于个人责任) We Chinese place a high value on responsibility. It is traditional deal for us Chinese to take care of our parents. We owe them a great deal for the love they give us while we are growing up. It is right, then, when they are getting older with each passing day, we help them and see that they are well cared for. In this way, we give back some of the love and care they have given to us. As loyal Chinese citizens, we must have a strong sense of responsibility to our country. I t is our duty to keep China strong in the eyes of the world. Therefore, we should study and work hard for China’s strongness
1. The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Tutoring Private tutoring is “in”. A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors. While private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages, I feel that we should give more thoughts to its negative effects. Such a popular practice clearly indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents either missed the chance of obtaining a good education themselves or have been too busy with their own business. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they are helpless. Private tutoring seems to be the only solution. As private tutoring is usually given on the one-to-one basis, the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of the pupil; and teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils, indeed. While on the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that they can hardly find enough time for rest or entertainment, which is essential for kids’ physical and mental health. Besides, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. What is more, some teachers are eager to help pupils do well on the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking instead of helping them acquire
1、Writing Directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Is the Ban on Abusive Language Online Helpful? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1．对网上不文明语言的禁令引起热议 2．有人认为禁令有效，也有人认为禁令无意义 3．我的观点 Is the Ban on Abusive Language Online Helpful? Recently, the topic whether the ban on abusive language on the Internet is helpful or not has aroused great attention and debate. Some people believe it helpful while others doubt its effectiveness. Those in favor of this move state that imposing the ban on online abuse is a counterattack against the deterioration of the communication method on the Internet. More significantly, it’s no doubt that the ban gives positive guidance to either netizens or the public and helps encourage higher morality. However, other people oppose that the ban, as a matter of fact, is unnecessary and difficult to practice, for the users can well disguise their true identity. Furthermore, morality should be something rooted in an individual’s heart so to underline the ban will do nothing to encourage people to be more polite. Personally speaking, I agree with the former opinion. Abusive language online, in most cases illogical, is a desperate insult to suppress others’ ideas. Thus, ban concerning this issue can offer helpful instructions to the netizens. In addition, it also contributes to promoting the moral standards of the whole society.
【篇一】2020年9月大学英语四级备考作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你是Tony，是英语一班二年级学生，因有事不能上外教Ms. Riddle 的课，给她写一张请假条，说明你不能来上课的原因。 【范文】 October 8, 2007 Dear Ms. Riddle, I would like to know if I could ask for a casual leave of absence from your Oral English class this Thursday morning. Yesterday afternoon I got a phone call from my cousin, who is now operating a small company in suburbs of this city. He needs an interpreter for two days but cannot find the most trustworthy person, so he wants me to make an attempt. It seems to me that this is a golden opportunity to put what I have learned in your class into practice, but I need your permission of absence. If you think I may go and help him overcome the difficulty, I am confident that I’ll do a good job and both of us will be thankful. Earnestly yours, Tony 【篇二】2020年9月大学英语四级备考作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Intelligence- Nature or Nurture? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 有人认为智力是天生的 2. 也有人认为智力是环境决定的 3. 如何更好地发展智力 【范文】
记叙文题型作文 写作步骤?要求考生写一篇记叙文,描述事件发生得时间、地点、原因、人物及结果,最后对事件进行简单分析,如:2０03年６月四级作文、2003年９月四级作文、20０4年6月六级作文。对这类题型,通常分为三个步骤来写:?第一段、总结描述?交代清楚故事涉及得人物、时间、地点: 主题句 第二段、具体描述 具体描述事件发生得原因、经过与结果?起因+经过＋结果?第三段、对事件得分析?分析句1+分析句2+分析３ 记叙文题型作文写作范文练习 Diｒections:for this ｐart, ｙoｕaｒｅａlｌowｅd thirty mｉnutes tｏｗｒite a pｏｓitionｏn the topｉc ｔhe ｄａy my classｍatｅfeｌｌill、 １、简单描述一下这位同学生病得情况；?2、同学、老师与我就是如何帮助她得; 3、人与人之间得这种相互关爱给我得感受就是、、、、?[写作模板:架构阶段] 第一段: 开篇句:aboｕt ＿_＿__o'clock ｏne eveningｉｎ_______, __＿＿_、 扩展句:＿_＿____＿、(展开描述一下事件) ?第二段:?主题句:wiｔhout hesitaｔion,__＿__、it ｗaｓn't ｌong ｂeｆoｒe ＿_＿_＿、 扩展句:1、one ＿＿__＿＿、 2、anothｅr _＿_____、 3、oｕr teacheｒ_＿_____、 第三段:?结尾句:ｉs ＿＿_____?who can ｔeｌl? bｕt ______、 扩展句:1、whｅn__＿_, people shｏwed＿__＿_spｉｒiｔregardless of _＿_＿、?２、tｈｉs kｉnd oｆcarｅｂetweeｎperｓons is ｔhe vｅry kiｎｄｇiｖing, ｕnseｌfish aｎd pｒiceless devotｉｏn o ｒsacrifice、 3、and iｔis jusｔbｅcause of ｔhis care thａｔｗe ｃａn hａve w ａrm famｉｌies, ａhａｐpy life and aｂｅａｕtifｕl wｏrｌd、 [写作模板:填充阶段］ 第一段: 开篇句:about nine ｏ'ｃlock one ｅｖening ｉｎmaｙ, my rｏoｍmate li ming was ｌying ｉｎbed, trｅmbｌing ｗith ｃold anｄhａviｎｇa couｇh、扩展句:hiｓｈead ｗas achinｇso ｉntenｓeｌy ｔhat ｈe ｋeｐt groａn ｉng、his foｒeｈead fｅlt veｒｙhot、we tooｋｈis temperature、it was 38、5℃、(展开描述一下事件) 第二段: 主题句:ｗiｔhoｕt hｅsｉtatiｏｎ, i dｉaｌed "120"、it waｓn't lｏng befｏre an ambｕｌance ａｒrｉvｅd、?扩展句:1、onｅｒoｏｍmate brought a blankeｔｆor ｈim、 2、anotheｒsuppoｒted him in ｔhｅambｕlａncｅ、 ３、ourｔeaｃｈer insisｔｅd on givｉng him sｏｍe ｍoneｙ、?第三段: 结尾句:isｈｅaｓuspｅdteｄsaｒs paｔieｎt? ｗho can teｌl ？but wｅdid't reｔｒeat、
大学英语四级写作技巧简介 大学英语四级写作技巧简介 之一——文章结构 英文写作一直是学生们的弱项，四级考试将近，大家都很担心写作问题，在此我先简单介绍一下文章的结构问题，以后再谈其他方面。 四级写作一般以三段式展开，题目要求中通常包含三个要点，每个要点为一段（记住，一定要分段），第一段提出问题，第二段分析问题，第三段解决问题。以历年的真题为例，2006年12月的题目为spring festival gala on cctv，要求：1。许多人喜欢看春节晚会；2。但有些人提出取消春节晚会；3。我的看法。“喜欢看春节晚会”是正常现象，应该作为问题的开端进行简短介绍，“有些人提出取消春节晚会”才是重点，必须给出相应的篇幅做详细阐述。最后表明我的观点，其实就是问作者的态度及解决这个矛盾的方法。又如2006年6月的题目：an announcement for a voluntary program, 要求：1。校学生会组织一次暑假志愿活动现招募志愿者；2。本次志愿活动的目的、内容及安排；3。报名条件和联系方式。这仍是三段式的结构，第一段提出问题——告之大家会举办一次暑假志愿活动，第二段描述问题——介绍志愿活动的相关信息，第三段解决问题
——怎样加入志愿活动（报名信息）。往年还考过写简历，写演讲稿，论述社会现象等题目，总是跳不出三段式，因此学生们必须掌握如何写三段式作文。 总的来说有三点要注意：1。开篇就得点题。文章字数有限，必须采取开门见山的方法，但开篇点题并不是说第一段第一句话就得提出问题，在这之前可以有所修饰，有导入的成分，但不要太长，一般第三句就得清楚、突出地把问题点出来。2。中间段阐述必须清楚。中间段是全文的核心部分，要做到阐述清楚，论证充分，要有一致性、连贯性和条理性。一般由主题句和扩展句组成，主题句是观点的高度浓缩，应该言简意赅；扩展句是对主题句的详细阐述，应该做到理由充分，内容一致。3。结尾段进行总结，并提出解决问题的方法。最后的总结在观点上可以重申但不可以重复，另外结尾一定要有所升华，不能仍停留在对问题的描述上，既然存在问题，就必须想办法解决。 至于如何开端、如何论述、如何结尾的问题，大家敬请期待下一回吧！当然我不会让大家久等的:) 写作能力无法一口气提高，大家必须在平时勤修苦练。 之二——突出主题 well begun is a half done，如何开头是值得注意的问题，它能确定
1. 问题现状 2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处). 英语四级作文万能模板：对比选择型 When it comes to____ ,different people hold different views . Some contend that____. For one thing,____ .For another,___ . In spite of all these claims, others maintain that ____，They point out that____ .Another instance often cited is that____ . It’s no easy task to find a satisfactory answer to the issue.As for me, there’s some truth to both arguments .It’s advisable to ______. 英语四级作文万能模板：说明利弊题型 说明利弊这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测) 1. 说明事物现状 2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面) 3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二). But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点). Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法). (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
下面是英语四级写作范文：毕业生去向 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topicChoices after Graduation. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition onthe table and the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)根据下图描述某高校近两年毕业生去向分布情况 2)分析这样分布的原因 【范文】 Choices after Graduation From the above table, we can see that the students of this university have three mainchoices after graduation. Of these choices, the students who have found a job only take up50%. In contrast, students who pursue further study by taking the postgraduate entranceexam or going abroad have increased greatly than before, with the total percentage of 47%.Indeed, this phenomenon is also quite common in other universities. The following factors can account for the choices of graduates. Above all, with theenrollment extension of universities, college graduates are facing the severe employmentsituation, which forces them to find another way out. Moreover, in information age, knowledgeis updated very rapidly. Many college students find their knowledge is not enough for theirfuture career. Besides, some college students would not like to enter into the complicatedsociety and want to escape from the reality temporarily by going to further study. From my point of view, one’s choice after graduation should be based on his individualcondition. Though taking the postgraduate entrance exam or going abroad for further study isa good choice, it is not necessarily true of everyone, because it might involve many factors,such as your future career direction, your economic condition. Therefore, we should take a fullaccount before we make our decisions. 手机影响学习吗Do Mobiles Distract Study Therever you are, you can see many people equipped with mobile phones. It seems that the world becomes smaller nowadays. You could be found wherever you are so long as you take the mobile phone with you. And mobile phones are also becoming a new scene on campus. Students think it is extremely convenient for them to communicate with the outside world by using mobile phones, especially when they are hunting for jobs, so they call it an essential investment. Education experts analyze the entry of mobile phones into campus as an indication of social progress. And mobile phones have been considered advanced for its attractive functions. the youth of today send messages, surf on the net, listen to music and even take photos by using their mobile phones. To some extent, it reflects that college students are more and more involved in this modern society, rather than pedants in the “ivory tower”. As a coin has two sides, the mobile phone, while providing convenience, causes trouble too. In classrooms, the untimely ringing interrupts lectures and destroys the atmosphere of study, so it prompts many complaints. And the mobile phone users themselves also suffer. Therefore, we need to think more about how to integrate mobile phones properly into our lives.
历年四级真题作文集锦 2010年6月作文：Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling 1. 如今不少学生在英语(论坛)学习中不重视拼写， 2. 出现这种现象的原因是… 3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为…. 满分范文：Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Nowadays, students attach less importance to the spelling of words in the process of English study. This phenomenon greatly influences students’ writing and brings on worries among teachers. There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon. First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay less attention to spelling. Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching. Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words. Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to i-t. As for me, I think, first, exams should be modified to add some factors into it, which would help student, pay more attention to spelling. Then, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance. Finally, for students themselves, they can, through other ways, make them be interested in word spelling. Only by these can we surly realize the importance of spelling and make improvement. 2010年12月英语四级作文及范文 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words folllowing the outline given below. 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该…… [参考范文] How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? It is nothing unusual to find overprotective parents who help their children in all aspects of life. The question is, are they sure their heart loaded with love will bring good to their children? Let’s look at the real situation of the second-rich generation. Some of them, rather than becoming the second-strong generation, becomes the defeated generation which is notorious for their life focused on consumption rather than creation. Because of the changes of education in history, most Chinese parents, though successfully accumulate wealth, don’t know much about the right value they should pass on to the new generation. They have tried all that they can to be good parents while neglecting the core value they should address, which is INDEPENDENCE. How should parents help children to be independent? They should give their children the freedom to make choices for themselves. Children cannot be happy if they don’t have control over their life, which in daily life, means they make choices for themselves, like, what to eat, what to wear, what career to do, what kind of spouse they are going to marry. Some parents may be open-minded enough to let their children to make
范例一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。 范例二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’ Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion