河南中招英语作文评分标准
评分原则：
1.总分15分，按5个档次给分。中档属于第三档（7-9分）。
2.评分时，先跟据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要
求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.总词数不足的，可在本题总得分中扣去1分。
4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点|、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确
性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。各要素的权重大体为：卷面书写（1分），内容9分（其中要点5分，语意连贯4分），语法结构、单词拼写、标点（4分），词数（1分）。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言正确性的一个方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度
予以考虑。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第一档（13-15分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致。词数达到要求。基本无单词拼写及标点错误。
第二档（10-12分）：写出大部分要点类容。语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。有少量单词拼写及标点错误。
第三档（7-9分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。
第四档（4-6分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。
第五档（0-3分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。
【说明】
1、要点可用不同方式表达。
2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
凡不写任何内容，抄袭、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。
2016河南中考英语作文预测(一）
1．每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。请你用英语写一篇80词以上的短文，谈谈你在成长过程中所经历的最大的一次蜕变。内容要求：1.变化前后分别是什么样子的？2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么？3.你为变化而付出了怎样的努力？注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。
I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. Now I’d like to say I’ve changed a lot. In fact, It is because of my mother’s diaries.
One day I saw my mother’s diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was surprised and began to read my mother’s diaries. In her diaries, she
showed her deep love for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn’t help crying after reading my mother’s diaries.Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I ’ll try to understand my mother’s feelings.
2 .最近，你们班就“幸福是什么”进行了一次讨论，学生们发表了自己的看法，他们认为：1. 认真学习是幸福，父母总是关心他们的生活与健康，是幸福 2. 有时当他们做错了事，周围的人会帮助他们改正，他们感到幸福。3. 你同意同学们的看法，你认为当你做……你也会感到幸福。要求：①第三要点的内容需用三到四句话展开合理想象，进行适当发挥；②词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Happiness is for everyone. Some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy.Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness.
I agree with them. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do something kind to others, like congratulating them, I feel happy, too.
When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.
3. “安全你我他，幸福千万家”，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更加幸福安康。请以“Keeping safe________ (at home/ at school /on the road…)为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
要求：补全标题：条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。内容包括：
(1) Is it important to keep safe...?(2) Why do you think so?, (3)How can you be safe...?
Keeping safe at school
It’s important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live mo re happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.First, be in order wh en we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doi ng sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safety. It’s helpful to us.
If we follow the advice, we’ll make ourselves safe at school.
4. 醉酒驾车，已经成为严重的社会问题，越来越受到人们的关注，根据下面提
故 traffic accident 对……造成伤害 do harm to…
Everyone should obey the traffic rules. Yet there are still many people drunk driving.
It’s irresponsible(不负责任的) not only to the drivers themselves but also the others.
Many drivers drive very fast in the street, or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk. Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents. Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year. In order to keep the public safe, we shouldn’t drunk drive. We must obey the traffic rules. If you drink too much, you shouldn't drive by yourself. You’d better take a taxi or ask others for help. The government is supposed to make more serious rules and laws as soon as possible.
5. Keep Healthy
Every one wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But we don’t
pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the mornin g. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at w eekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.
It is important for us to have good habits. We should eat breakfast every morning . We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.
6. 以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）” 为题写—篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean. "But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmates to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?
7. 全国实施公共场所禁烟规定，针对这一话题，某中学对该校学生的吸烟情况进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1. 对调查结果进行描述；
2．表明自己的看法并提出建议；
3．词数在80左右。
提示词: do a survey about…(做一个有关……的调查)
3% of the students (百分之三的学生)
A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. That’s terrible.
As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. It’s a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.
In short, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it.
8. 目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：
有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要
跟老师学比自己学好
可以巩固课堂所学内容
可以学到更多的东西容易养成依赖习惯
学生需要时间休息
请您根据以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary ?为题，写一篇120 词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。
要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。
参考词汇：巩固strengthen；
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.___________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it’s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what we learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it’s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.
9. 最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开了讨论。有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，写一篇短文介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。
观点
原因同意不完全同意
1 教会如何生活过分溺爱
2 指出缺点，指明方向强加兴趣、价值观
3 教会富有爱心希望值过高
要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯；
2、词数110左右；
3、开头已给出，不计入单词总数。
【参考范文】
Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. What’s more, parents’love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are
their most important teachers.
However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.
In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap.
10. 新农村-A New Village
Yesterday we went to visit a village. On our way to the village, we were glad to see a lot of nice rice, vegetables and fruit in the fields. Also we saw new schools, factories and buildings.
We got a warm welcome at the village. Some farmers invited us to their houses. They had moved to the new buildings. Their living room was large and bright. In it there were all kinds of new furniture. Nearly every family had color TV sets, fridges,washing machines and some of them even have bought motorbikes. Everyone had a smile on their faces. It was said that some guests from a foreign country would come to visit it.
We were very glad to find the farmers' life had changed a lot. We hope their life will become better and better.
11.许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；●我的压力是什么；●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100；短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. ___________________
That’s all. Thank you!
参考范文: Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at https://www.doczj.com/doc/cc3200688.html,st Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
That’s all. Thank you!
12. 你心目中的好老师是什么样子的？一名受欢迎的老师应该有什么样的特点?围绕这个主题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
The Good Teacher in Your Heart
Firstly, a teacher should be able to play different roles in school. He can care about us like a mother. He can give us knowledge. He can play games and discuss problems with us like a friend.
Secondly, a teacher should be patient and helpful. When we are in trouble, he can always help us patiently.
Thirdly, a teacher should be fair. He should have the same rules for everybody. Fourthly, a teacher should be fun. He can make his class interesting and make us laugh.
13.爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的“English Garden”正在举办主题为“付出即是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
2.. 80—100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Giving is Receiving
I am a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month. I often visit the Children's Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me? 中考英语书面表达背诵范文（二）
一、Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .
二、Save the earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .
It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave rubbish
everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better .
三、Improve our environment
Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?
We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Don’t spit in public places . Don’t draw on public walls . It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .
四、Pollution around us
In recent years, our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. It’s very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .
五、Make our world more beautiful !
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us . Animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them . We shouldn’t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home . We must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener . The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have . Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.
六、Keep our school clean
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful .
七、My country life
I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here
is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It’s very quiet . What a nice place I live in !
八、How to learn English well
As we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ?
The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day .
九、How I learn English
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well . I like English very much . I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary . After class , I do my homework carefully . I watch English movies and listen to English songs . I have booked an English newspaper . It’s Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods . I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day . That’s all .
十、How I improved my English
When I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.
Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.
十一、The importance of English
English is the most widely spoken in the world. It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. It's widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge . English is used by travellers and business people around the world. It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used. That's why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.
English is so useful that we must learn it well . Now let’s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class .
十二、I want to be an inventor
TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student.
I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.
十三、I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to come to China from all over the world. Most of them don’t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on , I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it come true.
十四、I like the Internet
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It’s very useful. I often search the Internet for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.
The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try ?
十五、The Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. It’s bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot .
十六、Computer
Computer is a wonderful machine. It's a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smallest computer is as big as a note-book. We call it pocket computer. Computer becomes more and more important in many ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun.
十七、The importance of water
Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.
However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes . Some factories even pour waste water into the river. As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink .
Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves .
十八、Water
Water is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is necessary for all plants. They need water to grow. People can’t live without water. Plants will die without water. It is important to all living things. However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. At the same time we should save as much water as possible.
十九、I like sports
I feel that taking exercise is good for our health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play basketball with my friends. Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying And I improve a lot in my lessons. So please take exercise as often as possible .
二十、Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei . I was born in Fuzhou on December 15 ,2000 . I’m studying at Yucai Middle School. I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like English best. My favorite sport is football. My hobbies are drawing and computer. I’m very happy to live in a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We love each other very much .
二十一、My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .
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中考英语作文范文15篇 （1） 今年三月五日，是雷锋同志牺牲五十周年纪念日，也是毛主席题词号召全国人民“向雷锋同志学习”的第四十九个年头。请你给福州晚报写一篇报道，介绍你们学校开展学雷锋活动的情况，内容如下： 要求：1. 词数80个左右。 2. 所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 （参考词汇：战友comrade，做好事do good deeds） Learning from Lei Feng Lei Feng_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ In order to remember Lei Feng, our school organized all kinds of activities. ______________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Lei Feng was born in a poor family on December 18th, 1940. At the age of 18, he gave his young life in order to save his comrade. He loved his country very much and always worked hard. He was strict with himself and cared about others more than himself. He was always ready to help people in trouble. In order to remember Lei Feng, our school organized all kinds of activities. We searched for Lei Feng’s stories on the Internet. We learned to sing songs about Lei Feng and watched films about Lei Feng. The most important thing is that we did a lot of good deeds to learn from Lei Feng. For example, Li Ming helped an old man clean his house after school. Lei Feng is a good example to all of us. Lei Feng’s spirit will always be alive in our hearts. （2） 本学期开始，学校为了建设“文明校园”，开展了争做“好学生”活动。请根据下表提示，以“Great 2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。 3．文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 Great changes in our school The activity of being a good student has been held since the beginning of this term in our school. Everybody has taken an active part in it. ____________________ ____________________
中考英语作文高分技巧 一、结构要清晰 结构清晰这点真的很重要，我们都知道，阅卷老师们要在规定的时间内批阅上千份作文，而清晰的结构，会让阅卷老师一目了然，自然就会喜欢你的作文。什么结构好呢？那就是三段式。 第一段要开门见山，直接拿出主题。给大家举个例子，比如，写我的妈妈，第一段直接就说My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明确自己的观点。 第二段就要说，她为什么是一个好妈妈。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 详细说出妈妈的优点。 第三段得出结论。大家可以发表自己的观点，也可以提出建议和希望。如，I love my mother. I love my family！ 二、时态要准确 英语作文除了结构，还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的，那就是时态，这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时；对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时；过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用乱配。 三、短语运用要灵活
同学们在写作文的时候，要尽量使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。当然，定语从句、宾语从句等句型，在关键的时候用上一两个，会增添你文章的文采。在英语中存在很多简单又能表达很多意思的短语。这些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味。 还有对关联词的使用，如first of all，secondly，finally，last，so that，in order that，not...but，not only...but also等。还可以使用高级点的如，in a word，all in all （表示总结的），but，yet，however（表示转折）等。 经验的阅卷老师很在意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了整个文章的思路。 四、写全要点 近年的各地中考英语提示性作文比较多，也就是说写作内容几乎都有要点提示，确切地说就是给出写作提纲，通常都是3 ～5个提示点，这种作文，同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译，但是提示点必须在文章中有所体现。文章写得再好，如果缺少了要点就会扣分的。所以要点也就是文章的第二段内容，同学们要把提示点写全，然后围绕提示点充分发挥，丰富自己所写的内容。 五、书写要认真 这一点同学们必须高度重视，作文的书写一定要保持规范整洁，同一篇文章书写规范整洁的和书写混乱的之间可以有2到5分的差距。 给阅卷老师留下最深刻印象的就是你的书写，最简单的得分点就是我们的认真书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心情，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”。 大家切记不要涂改，在情况允许的前提下可以打些草稿。避免不必要的丢分。漂亮的字体是可以练出来的，只要大家在心里注意了自己的书写，都会写得很好。
中考英语作文万能格式佳句11句 1. We ' re often told that ......But is this really the case ? 我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗？ 2. People used to ......however , things are quite different today . 过去，人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。 3.some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides．But we must realize that ...... 一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到...... 4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution . 认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。 5. It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face . 这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。 6. In short , we must work hard to make the world a better place . 简而言之，为了把世界变成更美好的地方，我们必须勤奋工作。 7.Lost time is never found again. 岁月既往，一去不回。 8.Everybody should have a dream. 每个人都该有个梦想. 9.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. 抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。 10.Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。 11.Let's look on the bright side. 让我们往好处想吧。 中考英语满分作文必背句型 1. 重点句型 1). It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说… 2). … so … that … 如此… 以至于… … too … to do 太… 而不能… such … that … 如此… 以至于… 3). not…until… 直到…才… 例: I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back. 4).The reason why + 句子is that + 句子… 的原因是… The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。) 5). That is why + 句子那是…的原因 6). That is because + 句子那是因为… 7). It is said that + 句子据说… It is reported that + 句子据报道… 8). There is no doubt that + 句子毫无疑问… 9). It goes without saying that + 句子不言而喻，毫无疑问 10). There is no need to do没必要做… 11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 2. 提建议 had better (not) do 最好(不)做 how about / what about doing …怎么样? I think you should do 我认为你应该…
英语作文提分亮点词汇和句型 一、解题思路 1 审：认真审题，找关键词 2 列：用简单的句子或短语全面列出文章要点 3 连：恰当运用关联词连接句子，使文章层次清晰 4 美：美化文章，适当运用高级词汇和句型 二、方法点睛 * 运用高级词汇 1. 固定短语和固定搭配的使用 I don't know how to enlarge my vocabulary. I have no idea how to enlarge my vocabulary. She likes popular music very much. She is fond of music. 2. 恰当使用高级词语 However，a large amount of water has been wasted every day． Water is the fundamental to all living things． He teaches us to be selfless and try our best to help others. I usually help my parents clean the house, beautify the yard and cook. 3. 巧用习语 The summer holiday is around the corner.(即将来临) This sentence doesn't make sense. (有意义，讲得通) I was all at sea when I began my new job. (茫然不知所措） 4. 高级过渡词汇however, therefore, whereas…… 5. 表先后顺序的关联词（组） first of all / at first / firstly 首先 in the end / finally / eventually / at last终于、最终、最后 last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的 6. 表因果关系的关联词（组） therefore 因此as a result / as a result of… 结果、因此 例：He worked hard at his study. As a result, he passed the exam easily. 7. 表述观点 As far as I’m concerned… 就…而言As we all know, …正如我们所了解的，… In my opinion … 依我之见，… 8. 表归纳总结 all in all 表示"总的来说"，"总而言之" in short / in a word 简而言之 in conclusion / in summery 总之、最后 9. 表转折关系的关联词（组） after all 毕竟though / even though 虽然, 尽管, 纵然, 即使 despite / in spite of不管、不顾、虽然、尽管however / but 然而、但是 10. 表并列关系的关联词（组） as well as / as well 也、又、同样 例：He has knowledge as well as experience. both…and…两者都… 11. 表递进关系的关联词（组） What’s more 另外、而且 in addition / additionally 另外、此外
中考英语作文范文30篇文章 Model Writings （以下30篇文章仅供同学对不同题材的参考） 句型：下划线 词组短语:黑体 精美句子：方框 1. How to Make Friends It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests. Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them. Don’t be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the things you like and do best. Be a good listener. Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself. Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends. 2. My View on Television Television has been in our life for many years. We can’t live happily without television. It can give us the latest information and news. It get happiness from the plays on television. We’ll be bored all day if there is no television. Television programs are attractive. After a whole day’s hard work, we can sit before the television and drink a cup of tea. How wonderful it is! Television is also bad for people’s health. It’s not
中考英语作文提分秘籍 增加细节的技巧13例 技巧一：列举具体的实例进行补充说明 例1. 我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。（添加for example） 改造前：We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.改造后：We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products and save energy. 例2：我要花一些时间和父母在一起。（添加-ing表伴随） 改造前：I'll spend some time staying with my parents. 改造后：I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. 例3：我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。（If possible, ...） 改造前：I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. 改造后：I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. If possible, we can travel together or share traveling experiences. 例4：互联网在我们的日常生活当中变得越来越重要。（not only ... but also ...） 改造前：The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. 改造后：The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. Not only can we read news from home and abroad, but also send emails and attend on-line courses.
英语作文万能句子 段首句 1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that____. 2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。 Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second, ____. What makes things worse is that______. 4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ Because ______. Besides，______. 5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，…… People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them, _____. 7.…已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中引发激烈的辩论。 …has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 8.…在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用, 它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题 …has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well 9.人类正面临着一个严重的问题…，这个问题变得越来越严重。 Man is now facing a big problem ..., which is becoming more and more serious. 10、如今，人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...。 Nowadays，it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that... 11、“如同硬币的正反面，...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to... 12、“近来，...的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。” Currently, the issue of ...has been brought to public attention 13、“随着...的快速增长，...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。 Along with the rapid growth of ..., ...has become increasingly important in our daily 列举时可以用 First of all, 首先secondly, 其次beside, 另外what's more, 另外 last but not least 最后的但不是不重要的
2017年黑龙江省哈尔滨市中考英语试卷 五、任务型阅读（本题共20分，每空1分）先阅读（A）、（B）、（C）三篇短文，然后根 据题目要求及所给语境完成下列五项任务. 28. (15 分)(2017?哈尔滨) ability beg in your differe nee heavy descripti on daily put One day, our English teacher Mr . Smith came into the classroom with a book in his hand . He started his less on with a questio n . "Who can ( 61) describe what stress (压力) is like ? "No one answered . Then he raised the book and asked, "How heavy is the book ? "We (62) began to think and guess. One students stood up and said, "I think it is 100g. "Another student said, "It's 200g"Our answers were (63) different . At last, Mr. Smith explained . "It does n't matter on the real weight. It depe nds on how long you hold it . If I hold it for a minute , it is OK . If I hold it for an hour , I will have a pain in my right arm . If I hold it for a (64) day , you will have to call a doctor . It is the extra same weight, but the Ion ger I hold it , the (65) heavier it becomes. This book stands for stress. If you hold it without (66) putting it down , sooner or later, you will not be (67) able to keep on. No matter how much stress you have, stop and have a rest for a while if possible . Boys and girls , you should learn to relax (68) yourselves . I am sure you will live a happy school life . "We will never forget Mr. Smith and the meaningful (有意义的) less on. 任务1:阅读短文(A)，用方框中所给的词的适当形式填空，使文章通顺、连贯、合理.(每空一词，每个词限用一次) 【分析】本文以举东西的例子讲述了什么是压力的问题，东西虽小，举得时间长了，它 就会很重.生活中也是这样，我们应该学会放松. 【解答】61 . describe考查动词的辨析.空格前是情态动词can,此处应该是动词原形， 结合句意：谁能描述压力是什么样子的？故填describe. 62. began考查动词的辨析.根据 下一句用的是一般过去时态，此处也应该是一般过去时态，空格后是 to do sth .结合句意：我们开始思考，begin to do sth .开始做某事，begin的过去式是began, 故填
中考英语作文写作指导：作文提分要领 书面表达一直是高考英语试卷中的压轴题。书面表达旨在考查考生根据所给提纲、图表、图画等信息，综合运用所学知识完成写作任务的能力。它要求考生不但要有扎实的语言基本功，而且要有较强的逻辑思维能力和语言表达能力。 英语作文高分技巧： 第一，提炼字词句 一篇作文是由单词和句子组成的。这是写作最基本的要素，就像万丈高楼需要一砖一瓦层层盖起来一样，如果砖瓦质量不好，那么这座高楼很快就会垮掉。同样的，如果基本的词句掌握不好，那么我们在写文章的时候就会感觉提笔无从下手，甚至连一个句子都很难写出。这就是因为头脑中没有"存货"造成的。因此，从现在开始，我们应该重视字词句的提炼，把我们学过的，见到过的甚至在新闻，广播，杂志，电影里见到的优美的、地道的词句提炼出来为我所用。一般来说，我们掌握了初中教材要求的大部分词汇以及考纲中全部词汇和词组，写出一篇合格的作文并不是难事，然而，面对如此激烈的竞争，仅仅是一篇合格的文章就够了吗?恐怕不是的。因此，掌握更多的优秀词句能让我们在写作中出彩。我们可以从作文素材中进行词句的提炼： 第一个资源，也是我们最容易忽视的资源，就是我们手中的教材。
教材文章难度适中，词汇丰富，是非常好的词库。也许有的同学不以为然，那么我们看这个句子：A比B要美得多。如果让你用英语写出这个句子，你能想到的句型有几个?在你想到的句型中，是不是转来转去就那么几句：A is more beautiful than B, 或者A is more beautiful when compared with B , 或者B is not as beautiful as A......这样的句型你会写，还有数万个和你一样的中学生也会写，但是如果你写出：Although A is beautiful, it pales when it is in comparison with B. (虽然A很美，但是与B相比便黯然失色了。) 这样的句子，效果会大不相同。 第二个资源，基于教材，我们可以向外发散，任何你读过的报英文刊杂志，比如《21st Century》《China Daily》等等，都是很好的资源，还有很多经典的英文电影，英文歌曲也都是丰富的词库，从中可以提炼出非常多的优美的词汇和句子，改造一下，就可以放到我们的文章中，为我们的作文增色不少。 第二，巧用过渡词 所谓过渡词，就是表示先后顺序的first, second,....at last，表示因果关系的as a result, due to, because of...，表示分述关系的what’s more, furthermore, besides, in addition等等。为什么要使用这样的词汇?原因有二：其一，我们每个人写的文章虽然内容几乎千篇一律，但是每个人的写作风格和逻辑思路不尽相同。怎样在短时间内让阅卷老师进入自己的逻辑体系，快速而精准的判断你的文章呢?过渡词就是一个很好的"向导"，它能够
中考英语作文万能句型和词组！好作文是背出来的！这些句子你会用吗？ 一、熟记以下句型 want to do sth help sb with sth Help sb do sth ask sb to do sth forget to do sth take sb to sp stop doing sth get/Tell sb to do sth see sb do sth see sb doing sth hear sb doing sth be angry with sb teach sb to do fill A with B decide to do sth like doing sth hope/wish to do sth remember/forget to do sth begin/start to do sth There is/are sb doing sth it is kind/dangerous of/for sb to do sth so+adj/adv…that+句子 it takes sb some time to do sth Not…until… it is happy/g lad/sad…to do sth How+adj+主语+bel What+a/an+adj+名词（单）！ Too+形容词/副词+to do sth 二、掌握以下词组 be good at be late for be worried about be interested in be busy dong sth be afraid of on one’s way to+地点have a good time have a rest have sth done look after
1. We ' re often told that ......But is this really the case ? 我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗？ 2. People used to ......however , things are quite different today . 过去，人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。 3.some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides．But we must realize that ...... 一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到...... 4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution . 认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。 5. It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face . 这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。 6. In short , we must work hard to make the world a better place . 简而言之，为了把世界变成更美好的地方，我们必须勤奋工作。 7.Lost time is never found again. 岁月既往，一去不回。 10.Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。 1). It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说… 4).The reason why + 句子is that + 句子… 的原因是… The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。) 5). That is why + 句子那是…的原因 6). That is because + 句子那是因为… 9). It goes without saying that + 句子不言而喻，毫无疑问 10). There is no need to do没必要做… 11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 had better (not) do 最好(不)做 I think you should do 我认为你应该… I suggest that you should do 我建议你做… If I were you, I would do…我要是你的话，我会做… prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing 感兴趣 try one’s best to do= do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做… make up one’s mind to do下定决心做… 4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成? 6. Easier said than done. 说起来容易,做起来难? 11. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人? 13. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难? 16. I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort. 成功要靠三件事才能赢得:努力,努力,再努力? 20. Honesty is the best policy. 做人以诚信为本? 21. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的关键?
【2018提分必看】武汉市历年中考英语作文题及范文 分享 2017 假如你是班长李明，你将安排你班外教的儿子Tom来汉的活动。请用电子邮件告知。内容要点如下：1.参观城市博物馆。了解武汉文化； 2.走进课堂，交流学习情况；3.去东湖划船，欣赏风景；4.在家举办朋友聚会，品尝美食；5.补充一至两点个人想法。 注意： 1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2.词数: 60-80 ； 3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译； 4.邮件的开头已给出。不计入总词数。参考词汇：City Museum城市博物馆The East Lake东湖 view n.景色 Hi Tom, I'm glad 10 hear you'll come to Wuhan. Li Ming 范文： Hi Tom, I'm glad 10 hear you'll come to Wuhan. Wuhan is a beautiful city full of culture and history, Visiting City Museum is a good way to learn about Wuhan. we can go boating in the East Lake. Enjoying the fascinating views. Then. we'll invite you to our class and talk about school tife. My friends and I will have a party for you at home. And you can tas te our traditional food as well If possible. You may watch Han Show. Hope you'll have fun here. L i Ming 2016 初中生活即将结束，学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。内容要点如下： 1. 初中科目更多，好的学习方法很重要； 2. 锻炼身体，
中考英语作文范文十篇 1) It’s our duty to save water（节约水是我们每个人的责任。） As we know , water is very important to man, （我们知道，水对人类来说是非常的重要。）we can’t live without water. （没有水我们就不能生存。）The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. （适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。）But some people don’t care about it .（但是有些人却不关心或不在意。）They waste a lot of water in their daily life. （日常生活中他们浪费很多水。）Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.（更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。）They throw rubbish into rivers , too. （他们还乱扔垃圾到河流理去。）Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.（很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。）Something must be done to stop the pollution. （人类必须采取一些措施来制止污染。）Only in this way can we live happily.（只有这样，我们才过得幸福开心。）If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.( 如果我们不节约水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪) 2) Planting trees Trees are very helpful and important for us. （树对我们人类是多么的重要和有用。）We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the f
中考英语作文满分的提分方法 中考英语作文解题思路 1 审：认真审题，找关键词 2 列：用简单的句子或短语全面列出文章要点 3 连：恰当运用关联词连接句子，使文章层次清晰 4 美：美化文章，适当运用高级词汇和句型 中考英语作文的注意事项 1. 卷面整洁，字迹工整，尽量不涂改 2. 写完检查，避免语法错误 常见语法错误：名词单复数，介词缺失，句子结构混乱。 3. 时态一致 4. 用到全部提示词 5. 紧扣题目要求与内容 中考英语作文的提分方法 1. 运用高级词汇 ①固定短语和固定搭配的使用 我不知道如何扩大我的词汇量。 I don t know how to enlarge my vocabulary. I have no idea how to enlarge my vocabulary. 她非常喜欢音乐。
She likes music very much. She is fond of music. ②恰当使用高级词语 However，a large amount of water has been wasted every day. 然而，每天都有大量的水被浪费。 Water is the fundamental to all living things. 水对于所有生物来说都是最基本的。 He teaches us to be selfless and try our best to help others. 他教育我们要无私、尽最大努力去帮助别人。 I usually help my parents clean the house, beautify the yard and cook. 我通常帮助我父母打扫房子、美化院子和做饭。 ③巧用习语 The summer holiday is around the corner.(即将来临) This sentence doesn t make sense. (有意义，讲得通) I was all at sea when I began my new job. (茫然不知所措) ④高级过渡词汇 however 然而 therefore 因此 ⑤表先后顺序的关联词(组) first of all / at first / firstly 首先 in the end / finally / eventually / at last终于、最终、最后