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英语写作方法之比较与对比续

英语写作方法之比较与对比续
英语写作方法之比较与对比续

3)Useful Writing Patterns

(1)块状比较模板:

模板一

It is really hard to say which is better than the other, A or B. Both have their merits and shortcomings.

A has a great many advantages. First, …. Second, …. Third, …. Wondering as A is , it has its drawback s. First of all, …. Besides, ….

B is quite different from B in many ways. Its positive sides are as follows. Firstly, …. Sencondly, …. Like anyting else, B has its faults, such

as….

Evidently, both A and B have their positive and negative aspects.The best solution may be that you enjoy pleasures of the both and get

rid of their inconveniences.

模板二

The topic of ____ (主题) is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say _A__ is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ______(A理由一). What’s more, _____(A理由二). Moreover, _____(A理由三).

While others think that __B__ is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,______ (B理由一).Secondly/Besides, ______ (B理由二). Thirdly/ Finally, ______(B理由三).

For my point of view, I think ______(我的观点). The reason is that _____ (原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reason to

explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.

模板三

There is a heated debate over ______(主题). It is commonly accepted that __A__ . In contrast, others think that __B___ .

Those who hold the first opinion suggest that ______(A理由一). In their view, ______ (A理由二). However, others think ______(B理由一).They argue that

_______(B理由二) .

Considering one after another, I stand on the side of _A/B__ . First of all,

______(原因一). Furthermore, _______(原因二). Thirdly, ______(原因三). Therefore, I am in favor of the idea _____ (我的观点).

(2)逐点比较框架:

Both A and B are very popular in today’s society. Just like a coin has two sides, everyting has its advantages and disadvantages, and A

and B are no exception.

There are many differences between A and B. In the first place, A…. On the contrary, B…. In the second place,A …. Unlike A, B….

Last but by no means the least, A …. By contrast, B….

Both A and B have their strong points and weak points respectively. People can choose which way to use according to their own likes

and dislikes.

3. 写作后阶段:检查与修改

1)词汇、结构、句型、时态、语法(方面的错误减到最低);

2)句子之间的连接、段落之间的衔接(流畅;

3)整篇文章的内容(重点突出)、结构与层次(清晰、分明);

四.写作练习:请根据自己的能力和兴趣,用比较和对照写作方法完成一篇英语作文,题目如下:

1. By Car or By Bike

2. By E-mail or By Letter

3. Live On Campus or Off Campus

4. Package Tour or Travelling On Your Own

5. College Lectures or Discussion

6. Study Abroad or At Home

五.范文

Campus Life

1. 有的大学生认为大学生活是丰富多彩,充实的;

2. 有的大学生对校园生活不满意;

3. 你理想中的大学生活是什么样的?谈谈你的感受。

Early in senior high school, we longed to be enrolled in a university. Now the dream has come true. But how do we college students like our campus life?

Certainly, some relish it, finding it colorful and rewarding. Besides study, they spend considerable amount of time improving themselves in various aspect. Yet others do not think much of their college life, thus do not benefit as much. In their eyes, the university is just a bigger high school. The only difference is that they have more time at their disposal without parents looking over their shoulder.

As to me, college life is ideal if only I have abundant books to read, some bosom friends to keep me company, a couple of conscientious professors to instruct me, and an easy access to the Internet.

On Overseas Study

1.有人认为出国留学是个人发展的最佳选择;

2.也有人坚持在国内也能实现自己的理想;

3.我的看法。

With the deepening of reform and opening—up of our country, many people dream of going abroad for further study. They insist that the modern research facilities, world famous professors and excellent environment in those foreign co11eges and universities can help lay a perfect foundation for their future development.

However, there are still many people who favor studying at home. They argue that studying

abroad is too expensive and therefore d oesn’t pay, They also point out that there are no language and cu1tural barriers if they study in our country.

Just as the old saying goes, ―Every advantage has its disadvantage.‖ Both opinions are acceptable in some sense. If students have the chance and financial resources, they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their eyes. On the other hand, if conditions don’t permit, they can pursue their studies in top universities at home. What counts is not the place where they study, but what they can learn.

Western Festivals in China

1 有人崇尚过西方节目,认为是与国际接轨的途径之一。

2 有人反对过西方节日,强调要保持民族文化的纯洁性。

3 我的观点。

We are always looking forward to a variety of festivals. Among them, some are from western countries, for example, Christmas, the Valentine'S Day and so on. Some people, especially the young men, considered it natural to celebrate these festivals. They point out that accepting western festivals shows that people in China are becoming more and more aware of the importance of international cultural exchange between the countries. Celebrating the festivals of another culture is just a good chance for us to know more about it. After all, these festivals have enriched our life.

On the contrary, arguments against these western festivals can be 0ften heard among old people. They think that Chinese culture is eminent and glorious. We Chinese should keep its purity, since it is this culture that makes our nation different from others. Those exotic festivals can not blend in with ours because of their foreign background.

As for my part, I don't think foreign festivals will do any harm to the purity or survival of our culture. Besides, whether to celebrate them is rather an individual choice. Of course, we should not forget our traditions which have descended from our ancestors thousands of years ago, but if the western festivals could bring us happiness and joy, why can’t we celebrate them?

Living alone or Living with Roommates

1.有人认为大学里应独自生活

2.另一些认为大学里应与别人同住

3.你的看法

Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students’ dormitory. Opinions are divided over the matter.

Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves. They can enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own. They can have their own timetable without disturbing others. They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.

But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own. With several students sharing the same room, each person’s experiences can be greatly

enriched. They can learn a lot from talking to one another. By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.

As far as I’m c oncerned, I prefer to live with roommates because I love the feeling of belonging. Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent a apartment outside the campus.

To Be a Small Fish in a Big Pond or a Big Fish in a Small Pond?

1.在大企业工作的特点;

2.在小企业工作的特点;

3.我的选择。

Just as there are distinct differences between being a small fish is a big pond and a big fish in a small pond, so it is with working as a

subordinate in a large enterprise and presiding in a small firm.

With the former, you can derive a deep sense of satisfaction from being a member of a well-known organization such as General Motors, or the Bell Telephone System. You have the opportunities of learning from experienced executives and knowing about the standard working process.

With the latter, you have greater responsibilities and your decision may bring immediate effect. Normally you are expose to various experiences and expected to do a great many thing without much help or guidance.

Personally I prefer to work in a small enterprise, where my prospect of promotion is good as long as I work hard. To tell the truth , I’d rather become a well-known and important figure within my own small pond.

Knowledge and Diploma

1.目前社会上存在这样一种说法:文凭越高越吃香

2.而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识

3.你的观点

It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.

On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s education al experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.

So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion.

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