大学英语四级考试写作专项指导与练习
1. 对比对照类、现象/观点阐释类、问题解决类以及应用文类是考查的重点。写作试题中提供的文章框架清晰明了，思路明确。描述现象、分析原因、阐明个人看法是四级写作部分的主要考查重点。
2. 根据考试改革方案和课程教学要求的相关规定，应用文（包括书信、便条等）、说明文和议论文仍然将是新四级作文的主攻方向。从近5年来真题的命题来看，议论文、应用文始终是考查的重点。
二、解读阅卷评分原则
阅卷老师在语言方面主要从两个方面进行评判：
1、基本正确
美国作家海明威经常使用小学词汇，但他是诺贝尔文学奖的得主，可见语言的好坏不在词藻的华丽与否，而在于使用得是否得当。四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单，而是严重错误太多。基础一般的
同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型，只要使用得基本正确，也可以得到及格分数。考生最常犯的语言错误有三类：语法、拼写、标点。最常犯的语法错误包括：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。
2、丰富多变
基础较好的同学，要想取得四、六级写作高分，应做到丰富多变。丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面。同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好不要重复出现，应尽量使用同、近义词替换(无法替换的关键词除外)。例如：think可以替换为reckon, assume, argue等词。此外，句型也应富于变化，不要拘泥于主谓宾句型，可以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。全文应以短句为主，长短句相结合。精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调;复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。
三、背诵是永恒的高分真经
语言学习有两个关键词——输入(INPUT)和输出(OUTPUT)。口语和写作属于输出，考生必须变被动为主动，这很难在短期内突破。没有大量的输入，很难进行自由输出。在英语学习中，多数同学只沉溺于背单词、抠语法、做阅读，很少有人背诵英文文章。正因为没有大量输入，写作才始终处于“挤牙膏”状态，想一句说一句，说一句翻译一句。背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝，可分为以下5个层次：(1)精彩词汇，(2)精彩句型，(3)精彩句子，(4)万能框架，(5)经典范文。注意句子和句型不一样，精彩句子应作为单词来记忆。背诵前，确保自己已充分理解所有内容。
培根说过：“Writing makes an exact man.”(写作使人精确。)背完经典范文后，进行默写。然后对照原文纠错，搞清楚错在什么地方。多数同学在写的时候都会犯小错误，如拼写、单复数、大小写等。这些就是你在写作中的弱点，也是阅卷老师最不能容忍的地方。
四、写作练习与背诵范文
1、问题分析、解决型
1. 定义：问题分析解决型作文要求考生针对给出的问题进行论述。题目所给的问题大多数是当今社会的热门话题。问题从本质上而言也是一种现象，只不过是一种不大好的现象。通常都要求考生分析问题产生的原因或危害，并提出解决问题的建议。
2. 写作步骤：基本提纲结构是：第一段直击问题作为中心，用“一句话”来具体展现和说明。第二、三段为对问题的原因或解决方法的分析，为文章的主体段落，要注意分层展开。
第一步：提出问题或现象。针对命题，概括性地提所要论述的社会问题和现象的主要特点。
第二步：找出、分析问题的原因或后果。说明问题产生的原因是什么，并且要分析说明原因造成的后果是什么。
第三步：提出建议或解决问题的方法，或对目前无法解决的问题提出展望。
3. 问题分析型作文模版
问题分析型模版按照开头、正文和结尾三个部分呈现。供同学们研究、模仿，以便快速提高类似作文的写作水平。
开头段
1. It has now drawn （increasing public / much nationwide）attention to the (issue / problem) of _______.
2. Currently, _________ has been brought to such popular attention that ________.
3. According to (a statistics / a survey / an investigation / a study / a poll), there is _________(提出问题).
例：(Recently / Currently), the problem of global warming has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the top of the agenda.
According to the recent statistics, 80% teenagers are (addicted to / indulged in) playing online games.
正文段
1. (分析原因) The (phenomenon / problem / failure / change) (of / in) _________ is (partly / mainly / largely) (attributable to…/due to…/owing to….) ________. First of all, _________. Secondly, ________. Finally, ______.
2. (分析原因) There are (several / many / a number of / a variety of) (causes / reasons / factors) could (account for / contribute to / lead to) (the dramatic growth / extraordinary development / inevitable change ) in ________.
3. (分析影响或结果): It is important for（people / teenagers）to realize that _________ will ( produce / exert / have) a/an (remarkable / noticeable / striking / outstanding) (impact / influence / effect) on ________. In the first place, ________. In the second place, ________. Furthermore, __________.
结尾段
1. There is (no denying/little doubt) that (special / adequate / considerable / further) attention must be (paid / called / devoted) to the problem of _________. If we (ignore / fall in / are blind to) the problem, it is very likely that ________.
2. It is high time that strict measures were taken to _______. (It is time that we laid considerable special emphasis on the growth _______.)
3. It is (suggested / recommended / hoped) that (great / persistent / continuous) efforts should be made to (halt / control / check) the danger of _______. Anyhow, (wider education / more publicity) should be given to the serious (consequences / effects) of ________.
4. Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, we should (appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to ______). In addition, we should (cultivate the awareness of people that _______ is essential to us). Only in this way can we (reverse the disturbing trend illustrated above).
练习篇一
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Deal with Sub-health. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 随着世界现代化的不断发展，人们的物质生活水平不断攀升，但人们却日益受到“亚健康” 这种不良状态的威胁。
2. 亚健康的具体表现及在我国的蔓延程度(北京，上海，广州等地的上班族都属于亚健康状态)。
3. 在现代社会中应怎样解决亚健康问题。
【审题】这篇文章要求考生谈如何解决亚健康问题,因此文章的体裁应该是议论文。文章的内容包括三个方面：一是亚健康问题的出现；二是亚健康问题的表现；三是如何解决亚健康问题。文章的重点应放在第二、三方面。文章的写作方向应为：亚健康问题的出现——亚健康表现为疲倦等，大多数上班族处于亚健康状态——缓解压力，拥有健康人生。
【中心思想】在物质生活水平不断提高的现代社会，“亚健康”问题出现了；具体表现为紧张、疲倦，身体状况不佳，多数上班族都处于亚健康状态；要解决亚健康问题，就要学会调整生活，缓解压力，以确保拥有健康人生。
【写作提纲】
Para. 1: The appearance of sub-health problem
(1) Life of improved living standards
(2) The threat of sub-health
Para. 2: The symptoms and victims of sub-health
(1) The symptoms — fatigue, a sense of being ill
(2) The victims — office workers
Para. 3: The solution of the problem
(1) cause — quick pace of modern life
(2) solution — learning to slow down and enjoy life
【背诵范文】
How to Deal with Sub-health
With the acceleration of global modernization, people are enjoying a constantly improved material life. At the same time we may gradually find ourselves confronted with the threat of
sub-health, a state between health and disease. Indeed, sub-health can result in both physical and mental diseases. Even worse, people who suffer from sub-health are more easily to die prematurely.
One typical symptom of sub-health is continual fatigue; the victim always feels tired and suspicious of some disease, which, however, is usually not to be detected through any physical check. Typical victim group consists of office workers, the active fo llowers of material life yielded through their tense and hard work.
Considering the great harm brought by sub-health, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to prevent sub-health. As the quick pace of modern life is the ultimate cause of the problem, modern people had better learn to slow down a bit, try to do some exercise regularly to keep healthy. In addition, people must have enough sleep to ensure that they can regain energy and physical strength. To conclude, it is necessary for us to take flexible measures to avoid the threat of sub-health.
练习篇二
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Commercialization of Campus Music. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1）近年来校园音乐逐渐走向商业化，由企业发起主办的大学生音乐节、校园歌手大赛层出不穷
2）导致这种现象的原因是什么
3）这种现象可能带来的影响
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析导致这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求说明该现象可能带来的影响，由此可推知本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近年来企业热衷于举办大学生音乐节、校园歌手大赛的现象；分析导致这种现象的原因；说明该现象可能带来的影响。
【背诵范文】
Commercialization of Campus Music
In recent years, campus music has been commercialized gradually. More and more enterprises are interested in being the sponsors of college music festivals or award competitions of campus singers. Campus singers and songs are not confined to college campus any more but being pushed to the market gradually.
The following factors can account for this phenomenon. On the one hand, some enterprises’ paying more attention to campus music is out of their sense of commitment to the society. They want to set healthy enterprise images before the public. On the other hand, nowadays entertainment marketing is very popular. Enterprises want to utilize entertainment activities to improve their notability and influence. College students, as the focus of the whole society, are a good choice for these enterprises. Of course, these musical activities have brought more chances for campus singers to show their talents to the public. Besides, campus songs have gotten more wide spreading.
However, commercialization of campus music to some extent reduces its uniqueness. Induced by fame and wealth, some campus singers try to cater to the tastes of the public and lost their own styles gradually. Therefore, in order to make campus music develop more healthily, both the sponsors of music activities and our campus singers should pay more attention on music itself but not profits.
2、比较对照、选择型
1. 定义：对比选择型文章，要求考生就题目中提到的某一事物或社会现象给出两个对立的观点，然后将两种观点进行对比，并表明自己的看法和立场，或做出选择。所提出的两种观点有时并没有对错之分，有时也可以根据常识判断出某一观点错误或者不成立。
2. 写作步骤：
3. 对比选择型作文模版
模板一
1) There is no complete agreement among people as to _____. 2) Some people consider that _____. 3) However, others think that _____.
4) Some people contend that _____. 5) They hold this opinion because _____. 6) However, others who stand on a different ground believe that _____. 7) They argue that _____.
8) Personally, I prefer the former/latter opinion/choice. 9) Firstly, _____. 10) Secondly, ____. 11) Most important of all, _____. 12) Taking the above-mentioned into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that_____.
模板二
1) When asked about / When it comes to _____, different people will offer different opinions. 2) Some people take it for granted that _____. 3) In their opinion, _____. 4) Besides, _____.
5) By contrast, others hold that _____. 6) They maintain that _____. 7) And _____.
8) Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the first opinion/choice. 9) For one thing/ On the one hand, _____ 10) For another / On the other hand, _____. 11) For instance, _____. 12) Therefore, as stated above, _____.
练习篇三（第一次四级模拟考试已用）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的
2)阐述他们各自的考虑
3)表明你的看法
【行文思路】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。
【背诵范文】
High Salaries or Career Development?
There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.
[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer
from depression [4]due to lack of enough money. [2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.
In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.
【点评】
[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。
[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。
[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。
[4]“因为缺钱”。
[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。
[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。
[7]“一般来说”。
[8]“选择”。
【句式练习】
1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。
___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.
临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句：Career may give us long term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.
临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。
___________________________________________________________________________.【KEY】
1. In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.
2. However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.
3. The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.
练习篇四
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Machine Translation and Human Translation. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1）现在诸多的电子辞典及相关翻译软件被开发出来，人们不再需要翻阅厚重的字典；
2）有人认为以后机器翻译会完全取代人工翻译；
3）你是否同意这种观点，为什么？
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种新兴事物，提纲第2点针对该事物提出一种有争议的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”是否同意这种观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述电子辞典和翻译软件的使用现状，引出机器翻译会代替人工翻译的观点；表明“我”对这一观点的态度并说明理由；总结“我”的观点，提出建议。
【背诵范文】
Machine Translation and Human Translation
In recent years, all kinds of electronic dictionaries and translation software have been developed. With the development of technology, these electronic dictionaries and software can help us translate not only words and phrases but even sentences and paragraphs. So some people come to the conclusion that machine translation will replace traditional human translation.
Admittedly, translation machines and software bring much convenience for our study and our work. With the m, we needn’t bother to leaf through the heavy dictionaries. However, machine translation has its disadvantages. First, generally speaking, translation software only can give direct translation, which is sometimes not in accordance with the original articles in logic and meaning. Second, some people depend on electronic dictionaries and software too much, which is unfavorable to their improvement in language ability.
Considering the above-mentioned, I couldn’t agree with this argument that machine translation can replace human translation. But it is safe to say that machine translation is a good complementary to human translation. Therefore, we should combine machine translation with human translation efficiently.
3. 应用文类
A．图表作文
1. 定义：图表作文是通过提供的一组或几组数据来反映某个趋势或某一问题、现象。要求考生对图表中的相关数据进行描述、分析和评论，并得出合乎逻辑的结论。它是将数据、形象信息转换为文字信息的过程。图表作文要求的不是对图表的简单叙述，而是抓住图表所反映的主要问题。因为图表式作文所要讨论的现象和问题都隐含在数据里，所以考生常会感到比较难写。因此要想抓住主旨，就要分析图表中那些最有代表性、规律性的数字，或变化大的数字。
图表式作文的几种形式:
一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。
二是以图形形式A表示数据变化的曲线图; B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异的条形图; C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。
表格-Table 矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格
曲线图-Line Graph 表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图
柱状图，条形图-Bar Chart/Graph
饼形图-Pie Chart
2. 写作步骤：图表式作文写作分三步:
第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题
常使用的词汇有:table, chart, figure, graph, describe// tell, show, represent等
常用句型：
1.The graph/chart/table above shows …
2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that...
3. As is shown in the graph, ...
4.The chart/table shows the differences between…
第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写（在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。注意层次。即facts and reasons
常用转折，对比及比较的词汇：While, but, on the contrary, however, compare with, in contrast to ,as…as, the same as, be similar to, be difference between, among, more than, less than
常用描写趋势变化的词汇：Increase, rise, go up, reduce, drop, go down, fall, reach, remain, by/to, slowly, slightly,
gradually, sharply, rapidly, the number of…, from…to及比较级，倍数句型等。
常用句型：
Facts:
1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in…
2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in…
3.It is 20% lower/higher than…
4.The number /rate has nearly doubled, as against that of last year.
5.The number is …times as much as that of….
6.It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by…/…% / two thirds.
7.By comparison with…, it decreased/increased/fell from…to…
Reasons:
1.The reason for…is that…
2.One may think of the change as a result of…
3.The change in…largely results from the fact that…
4.There are several causes for this significant growth in….First,….Second,…
5.This brings out the important fact that…
第三步：归纳总结或发表评论(展望未来或提出方法或建议)。
常用词汇：
1.in a word,/ in short, /generally speaking
2.It’s clear from the chart that…
3.In summary, it is important…
4.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that…
5.Obviously, if we want to…,it is necessary…
6.There is no doubt that attention must be paid…
需注意以下几点：
1）图表上的内容/数据无须全部描述;
2) 善于抓总的规律、趋势，归纳增减率
3) 描述时应注意动词时态。叙述特定时间的情况应用一般过去时，叙述经常出现的情况或自己的评述则用一般现在时。
4. 表示增长、上升的词汇increase, rise, climb, go up, soar, skyrocket
5．表示下降、减少的词汇decrease, drop, fall, go down, reduce, decline
6．表示持续不变的词汇level off；remain steady/unchanged
7．表示倍数的词汇double; triple the number of/the percentage of; four/five…times
描述变化程度的adv.：
sudden/suddenly 突然的，意外的rapid/rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，险峻的
dramatic/dramatically 戏剧性的，生动的significant/significantly 有意义的，重大的，重要的
sharp/sharply 锐利的，明显的，急剧的steep/steeply 急剧升降的
steady/steadily 稳固的，坚定不移的gradual/gradually 渐进的，逐渐的
slow/slowly 缓慢的，不活跃的slight/slightly轻微的、略微地stable/stably 稳定的
现象解释型
一、模板一
近十年来x市有越来越多的人选择出境旅游
出现这种现象的原因
这种现象可能产生的影响
写作思路：本题属于提纲式图表命题。提纲第1点要求指出一种现象，提纲第求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求阐述这种现象可能产生的影
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1. The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Tutoring Private tutoring is “in”. A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors. While private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages, I feel that we should give more thoughts to its negative effects. Such a popular practice clearly indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents either missed the chance of obtaining a good education themselves or have been too busy with their own business. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they are helpless. Private tutoring seems to be the only solution. As private tutoring is usually given on the one-to-one basis, the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of the pupil; and teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils, indeed. While on the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that they can hardly find enough time for rest or entertainment, which is essential for kids’ physical and mental health. Besides, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. What is more, some teachers are eager to help pupils do well on the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking instead of helping them acquire
最牛英语口语培训模式：躺在家里练口语，全程外教一对一，三个月畅谈无阻！ 洛基英语，免费体验全部在线一对一课程：https://www.doczj.com/doc/cc13811995.html,/ielts/xd.html（报名网址） [范文9] importance of education the prosperity of a nation depends on the development of education. throughout the world whatever advance has been made in science and technology is due to education, which brings forth by scientists and inventors. it is never overdone no matter how one emphasizes the importance of education. there is no doubt that countries with undeveloped education will remain poor. education is as vital to the development of an individual as it is to that of a nation. of all the elements of success in our careers none is more vital than education. it is not the genius that makes the difference between success and failure. education is the driving power. in fact, most of the famous people in our times spent many years in studies. can you name any great men you admire who are not educated persons? yet some people are still ignorant of its importance. some parents, especially in the countryside, think that it is unnecessary to send their children to school. some other parents are so selfish that they have their children work for money. in consideration of the situation, compulsory education must be enforced to ensure that there will be enough educated young people for the future of our country. [范文10] the importance of self education self education brings success. though we students have teachers to help us, still we should pay more attention to self study. here are some suggestions. first, read outside our class. every new book one reads will benefit him in one way or another. the more we read, the more we are benefited. as life is short and knowledge is infinite, we should try to read as many books as we can. second, improve our memory and reasoning powers. if we read more and more, we can make our memory and reasoning powers improve to some degree. moreover, we shall be able to write more clearly and correctly. third, develop our character. when we have formed the habit of reading, we can put into practice what they have taught and build up a good character. in a word, if we want to educate ourselves, the most important thing for us to do is to read not only our textbooks, but also any other books that are within our reach. 五、图表、信函及其他 [范文1] should women have equal job opportunities with men? this table shows the different opinions about whether women should have equal job opportunities in the following three countries, china, the u.s.a. and japan. as can be seen in the table, the people who agree with this point exceed those who disagree, especially in china. however, there are still some people in the three countries, especially in japan who are against women’s equal job opportunities with men.
2012大学英语四级考试写作辅导 记叙文的思路与练习 记叙文是以叙述人物的经历和事物的发展变化过程为主要表现形式的一种文体。记叙文既可以以写人为主，又可以以写事为主。写记叙文要注意记叙文的“六大要素”即： 时间（When）——何时发生，有没有具体时间？ 地点（Where）——何地发生，有没有地点变化？ 人物（Who）——何人参与，谁是主角？ 事件（What）——发生了什么，有何特点？ 原因（Why）——事件的起因？ 结果（How）——事件的经过及结局？ 一般说来，在一篇记叙文中这六大要素是缺一不可的。 记叙文的思路就围绕这六大要素充分展开。 【例】四级考试中，只出现过一次专门的记叙文体裁的写作，即“An Early Morning Walk”（1988.6.），2003年6月出现过包含记叙文的作文，即“An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident”。 对于“An Early Morning Walk”，知道命题要求后，我们就要开始构思了。 When：题目已规定了是“清晨”，在这个时候，“我”去散步。 Where：到哪儿散步？去公园？在校园里？在街上（街上空气不好，还是不去！）。 Who：在公园里看到晨练的人：中老年人、年轻人、小孩子;在校园里看到读书背单词的学生。 What：人们热火朝天地做操，随音乐跳舞，打球，等等。 Why：清晨空气清新，适合锻炼;一日之际在于晨，背背书，读读单词。 当然，由这个题目可以令人想到很多东西，因篇幅所限，我们做了删减。
An Early Morning Walk One morning I got up very early，and everything around was very quiet. The sun had just risen，shining brilliantly and everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk. There were only some birds singing occasionally in the tall trees. I strolled along the street toward the park，breathing the fresh air and feeling extremely happy. When I arrived at the park，I found，to my surprise，that there were so many people there. Men and women，boys and girls，all were enjoying themselves in their various activities. Some were doing morning exercises，some were playing badminton and some old people were having their tea while talking to each other cheerfully. I wandered around the park. To my delight，I found a few middle-school students talking to each other in English in one corner of the park. I went up and spoke to them in English. We soon became friends. I was very glad to find another opportunity to practice my spoken English. On the way home，I realized that an early morning walk really was good and healthful. Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and wise. 【点评】文章按照时间顺序（in chronological order），第一句话点明时间（One morning）、人物（第一人称“I”），并简要描述了早晨的特点（What was the setting），接着第二段第一句话交代地点（in the park），然后介绍公园里人们及作者的活动（What was happening），最后在文章结尾点题，即，归纳中心思想——Taking early morning walks makes one healthy and wise. 仅仅189个单词既满足了记叙文的“六大要素”，又有明确的中心思想和生动的细节，行文方式符合要求。 1. 以“A Most Unlucky Day”为题，想想该怎么写。注意：题目的中心词是“unlucky”。 When： Where： Who： What： Why： How： 参考思路
大学英语四级考试模拟试卷及参考答案(第一套)
大学英语四级考试模拟试卷及参考答案(第 一套） Part II Reading Comprehension (35 minute s) Directions: There are 4 reading passa ges in this part. Each passage is followe d by some questions or unfinished stateme nts. For each of them there are four choi ces marked A), B), C) and D). You should decide on the best choice and mark the co rresponding letter on the Answer Sheet wi th a single line through the center. Pass age One Questions 21 to 25 are based on the follo wing passage. There is a difference between science and technology. Science is a method of a nswering theoretical questions; technolog y is a method of solving practical proble ms. Science has to do with discovering th e facts and relationships between observa ble phenomena in nature and with establis
范例一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。 范例二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’ Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion
四级写作范文必背经典 大学英语四级范文背诵(01) COLLEGE STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND PHYSICAL EXERCISE Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life. However, still some college students do not like to attend sports activities, they think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them. College students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help students build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relief pressure and keep a pleasant move. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their social skills. Nowadays, all colleges and universities have provided many sports facilities for students to do physical exercises, students can chose freely according to their interests and needs. As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot, and enjoined great pleasure. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college students, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities. 大学英语四级范文背诵(02) Online games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self discipline on too much indulge in these games. So that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train their ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly. Form my point of view, online games are wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once, but if you have enough self control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them. 大学英语四级范文背诵(03) Certificates Craze on Campus In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly, ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are two mainly reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employments pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of
2014年6月大学英语四级考试真题及答案(完整版) Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: You should write atleast 120 words but no more than 180 words. Supposea foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the mostinteresting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? Part III Reading Comprehension (40 minutes) Section A Questions 36 to 45 are based onthe following passage. Global warming is a trend towardwarmer conditions around the world. Part of the warming is natural; we haveexperienced a 20,000 -year -long warming as the last ice age ended and the ice 36 away.However, we have already reached temperatures that are in 37 withother minimum-ice periods, so continued warming is likely not natural. We are 38 toa predicted worldwide increase in temperatures 39 between 1℃and 6℃over the next 100 years. The warming will be more 40 in some areas, less in others, and some placesmay even cool
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。 范例二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend t he teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers’ effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students’ rating forms. Students sh ould not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers’ colleagues. I think students’ rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers’ performance. Instead of rating the teachers’ knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, an d to report on such things as a teacher’s ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students’ interest in the subject. 点评：越来越多的高校采取让学生给老师打分的形式来了解教学反馈，并以此作为促进教学质量的有效手段。对此做法，管理部门及教学双方褒贬不一，看法迥异。本范例题为校园生活热议话题，值得关注。
大学英语四级作文范文：朋友 请以朋友为话题，说说自己的想法。 参考例文一： With rapid development of computer technology, making friends online has become a hotspot among people, and people’s views about it vary from individual to individual. As for me,I would like to make friends in the real life rather than make friends online.Firstly,it is a waste of time to spend too much time in chatting online, and we have no enough time in studying. What’s worse,it does great harm to our health.Secondly the Internet is virtual,and there are all kinds of people in the virtual world.We are likely to be cheated.As a consequence,it will do damage to our property and https://www.doczj.com/doc/cc13811995.html,st but not the least,the over-reliance on it will bring about psychological problems.For one thing,we will ignore our real parents and friends. Actually,we are becoming lonely. For another,we may avoid facing the fact. In a word,I don’t think that it is wise to make friends online. As an old saying goes great minds think alike,friends are the people who share happy and sorrow with you,not only chat. 参考例文二：
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