2012高考英语写作系列开放式作文
优秀范文(开放式作文)
An Interesting Thing
一件趣事
情景内容
Last month your parents were both on a business trip, and you were left home alone for a few days. Tell your friends what a difficult (or happy) time you had during those days.
范文
I really had a difficult time. My parents would wake me up every morning, but during those days I had to get up myself. On the first night I set the alarm at 6 o’clock, but it didn’t wake me up at all the next morning. I was scolded for being late by my teacher. Afterwards, I bought three new clocks and set them all together. What noisy mornings I had!
on a business trip 出差
be left home alone 被单独留在家中
set the alarm at 6 o’clock 把闹钟调到六点钟
be scolded for being late 因迟到而被责备
I Have A Dream
我有一个梦
情景内容
Have you ever had a dream about your splendid future or imagined something unreal but interesting or meaningful? Tell your close friend about it now.
范文
I have a dream that I am always young. Then I will have enough energy to do everything whenever I want. Moreover, I don’t have to worry about old age during which I even can’t take care of myself. I know that my dream will not come true. However, I think it is lucky that I am young now. So I will treasure my time, enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.
close friend 亲密的朋友
have enough energy to do everything 有足够的精力做一切事情
moreover 并且，更进一步
worry about old age 害怕年老
take care of myself 照顾自己
come true 变成现实
treasure my time 珍惜时间
Tell Him or Her What He or She Should Do
告诉他/她应做些什么
情景内容
One of your close friends tells you, “I’m suffering from depression. I have trouble sleeping. I’m often tired. When I think about the future I feel hopeless about it. I don’t enjoy anything. I’m never happy. I don’t laugh or smile any more.”You would like to help him / her to find one or more solutions.
范文
First of all, you’d better try to find an adult you can trust to talk to. For example, your parents are a good place to start, but if that doesn’t work, try teachers or someone else, and simply tell this person about yourself and how you feel. It sometimes seems like everyone else in the world is happy and you are the only one who is miserable. You will be surprised to learn that you are completely normal. I hope this helps and the next day will be better.
suffering from depression 正处于沮丧/抑郁之中
feel hopeless 感觉没有希望
I don’t laugh or smile any more. 我不再笑
that doesn’t work 那不起作用
you are the only one who is miserable
你是世界上唯一遭受苦难的人
Learn From Lei Feng
向雷锋学习
情景内容
Today is March 5th. To learn from Lei Feng, at 3∶30 p.m., my classmates and I went...
范文
Today is March 5th. To learn from Lei Feng, at 3∶30 p.m., my classmates and I went in groups separately to visit some old teachers who had retired from our school. We chatted with them for a while, and then began to do some cleaning for them.
Everyone worked very hard and we really felt glad we were able to do something for the old teachers. We hoped to have more chances to take part in such activities.
visit some old teachers who had retired from our school
看望从我们学校退休的老教师
chat with sb 和某人聊天
do some cleaning 打扫卫生
have more chances to take part in such activities
有更多的机会参加这样的活动
Misunderstanding
误会
情景内容
My best friend Wang Ping held a birthday party. He / She invited all of my best friends except me. I was wondering at it when suddenly I remembered that one day...
范文
One day when we were taking an English exam, Wang Ping, sitting next to me, passed me a piece of paper and asked me to tell her the answers to the reading comprehension. But I thought it was wrong to cheat in the exam, so I refused. After class, I tried to explain it to her, but she angrily told me never to mention it again. I knew she must have misunderstood me. So I decided to have a heart-to-heart talk with her tomorrow.
hold a birthday party 生日聚会
invite all of my best friends except me
邀请了其他朋友，惟独没邀请我
take an English exam 英语考试
the answers to the reading comprehension 阅读理解题答案
cheat in the exam 考试作弊
never to mention it again 不要再提这件事
a heart-to-heart talk倾心交谈
No Smoking Day
世界戒烟日
情景内容
May 31st, No Smoking Day, is drawing near. Now what do you want to say to smokers to help them get rid of the bad habit?
范文
Today more and more people care for the problem of smoking. On that day, nobody is allowed to smoke, because smoking is polluting the air, also it’s harmful to people’s health and will cause lung cancer.
I hope you should make a plan to get rid of the bad habit. It’s our hope that we all take an active part in the activity.
I’m sure you’ll succeed in giving up smoking.
May 31st, No Smoking Day, is drawing near.
5月31日，世界戒烟日，正临近了。
help them get rid of the bad habit 帮助他们摆脱这个坏习惯
care for the problem of smoking 关心抽烟问题
cause lung cancer 引起肺癌
take an active part in the activity 积极参加这项活动
succeed in giving up smoking 成功地戒烟
An Incident
一次小事故
情景内容
It was a summer morning in the classroom on Monday. Amy found a Band-Aid on Billy’s ankle. She asked Billy what was wrong with his ankle. Supposing you are Billy, please tell Amy what happened to your ankle.
范文
Yesterday afternoon I was playing ball games with a few boys from the neighborhood. While kicking the ball, I slipped and fell over. My angle was injured. It bled a bit, so I had a Band-Aid on it. But I don’t think it serious. I hope it will be all right soon.
Band-Aid 创可贴
what was wrong with 怎么了，出了什么事
supposing you are Billy 假设你是比利
slipped and fell over 滑倒
bled a bit 流了许多血
On My Way To School
在上学的路上
情景内容
You missed class this morning. Your classmate called you to find out why you were absent. You tell him what happened.
范文
I broke my leg on my way to school this morning. It was foggy. I was riding my bike very fast. Suddenly a car drove towards me and knocked me off my bike. I was taken to the hospital immediately. The doctor examined me and found my left beg broken. I had to lie in bed for at least three weeks.
missed class 缺课
find out why you were absent 弄清楚为什么迟到
knocked me off my bike 把我从自行车上撞下来
lie in bed for at least three weeks 至少在床上躺三周
Sports Meeting
运动会
情景内容
Last Thursday a sports meeting was held in Li Ping’s school. Li Ping was in the boy’s
1000-metre race, but he didn’t finish the race. Su ppose you are Li ping, you tell us what happened.
范文
When the race began, I felt great! My friend Wang Xiaopeng was running by my side. Halfway during the race, he told me that his legs were hurting. I knew he couldn’t run any further though we only had 200 meters to go. Then, ‘Bang, ’he fell to the ground. Of course winning was my goal, but being a good friend was more important.
boy’s 1000-metre race 男子1000米比赛
I felt great! 我感觉棒极了！
couldn’t run any further 不能再跑
fell to the ground 摔倒在地上
My Old Tape Recorder
我的旧录音机
情景内容
You are a middle school student. You’re going to have an important English examination in two months. You want your parents to buy you another tape recorder to take the place of the old one.
Now you tell your parents why you need a new tape recorder.
范文
You see, two months later I will have the English examination, including the listening test. I have to do some listening practice. But my tape recorder doesn’t work properly because something is wrong with it. So I need a new tape recorder to take the place of the old one. I hope I can get it as soon as possible.
have an important English examination
进行一次重要的英语考试
tape recorder 录音机
take the place of 代替，顶替
do some listening practice 做听力练习
get it as soon as possible 尽快地拿到录音机
Why Do People Play Football
人们为什么踢足球
情景内容
Why do people play football? It’s a stupid game and dangerous, too. Twenty－two men fight for about two hours to kick a ball into a net. They get more black eyes than goals. Sometimes they even break their bones. Football players must be mad. And why do people watch football matches? They must be mad, too. They certainly shout and scream like madmen. In fact I’m afraid to go out when there is a football match. The crowds are so dangerous. I’d rather stay at home and watch TV. But what happ ens when I switch it on? They’re showing a football match. So I turn on the radio. What do I hear? The latest football scores. And what do I see when I open a newspaper? Photos of football players. Oh, I’m afraid I may be mad about it some day.
范文
As a middle school student, I have no much time to spend playing football. However, I watch a football match on TV whenever possible. I like it not only because it’s an exciting game, but also because it is brave and be full of confidence, courage and perseverance. You need to learn to work together with others perfectly. The sport of football can show a spirit as well as strengthen your body. When you are tired after a long time of study. Just watch a football match, which can give your brain a good rest.
Over all, I like the sport of football. It’s a game full of challenge.
fight for 为……而战斗
kick a ball into a net 把球踢进网内
shout and scream like madmen 象疯子一样尖叫
I’d rather stay at home and watch TV. 我宁愿呆在家里看电视。
switch sb. on 换（电视）台
a game full of challenge 一项充满挑战的比赛
描写本类主题常用语言集锦
1. With the development of the mode of public transport, the communication between people becomes more and more frequent.
随着交通工具的发展，人们的交往越来越频繁。
2. With the result of the Party’s policy of economic reform, there has been a great increase in economic growth, from which Chinese people have benefited a lot.
由于党的正确的经济改革政策，我国的经济有了很大的增长，人们从中获益不浅。
3. Some people say the most important element to success is luck, while others claim it is hard work.
有人说，成功的关键是运气，而有些人则认为成功是靠努力工作。
4. Now people in growing populations are beginning to recognize the importance of birth control.
现在越来越多的人认识到计划生育的重要性。
5. According to a recent survey, more and more students are doing part-time jobs.
根据最近的调查表明越来越多的学生在打工。
6. As far as learning a language is concerned, practice is of great importance.
就学习一门语言而言，不断的实践是十分重要的。
7. It goes without saying, without advanced science and technology, a country will have poor living conditions.
毫无疑问，没有先进的科学技术，一个国家将只能处于贫穷的境地。
8. The telephone has made it possible for us to communicate with our friends far away, without leaving our houses.
电话的使用能使我们有可能不出家门而与在远方的朋友们交谈。
9. With help from a computer, this project was completed ahead of time.
有了计算机的帮助，这一工程提前完成了。
10. Complicated as the problem is, it can be solved in a few minutes with an electronic computer.
虽然这个问题很复杂，用电子计算机几分钟就解决了。
11. So far, computers have found applications in the field of industry, which has caused a surprising change in terms of the productivity.
迄今为止，计算机在工业领域中的使用使得生产发生了惊人的变化。
12. The school should make it its aim to help students to develop themselves in an all-round way.
学校应该把学生的全面发展作为自己的目标。
13. Professor Mary pointed out that in learning a foreign language, great attention should be paid to the improvement of reading speed.
玛丽教授指出，在外语学习过程中，应特别注意阅读速度的提高。
14. He owed his success entirely to his family support.
他把自己最终的成功全都归功于他家人的支持。
15. If you persevere, you will accomplish wonders.
如果你坚持不懈，定能创造奇迹。
16. What we learn in school will have a great effect on our future.
我们在学校所学的东西对我们的未来有很大的影响。
17. Failure is also a type of learning if you can draw a lesson from it.
如果能从失败中吸取教训的话，失败也是一种学习。
18. We learn a foreign language in order to communicate with people all over the world.
我们学习外语是为了同世界人民进行交往。
19. Newspapers and magazines keep us informed of what is happening around the world.
报纸杂志使我们了解世界各地发生的事情。
20. Once you have confidence in yourself, you are sure to make remarkable progress.
一旦你对学习有了信心，你的学习就一定会取得显著进步。
21. The result from the study and research has shown／illustrated that people are becoming more and more concern about the quality of their life.
研究和观察结果表明，人们越来越关心生活的质量。
22. The first thing I do every morning is to turn on the radio to listen to the weather forecast and the news of the day.
我每天早上做的第一件事情是打开收音机听天气预报和当日新闻。
23. Once you get into the habit of smoking, you’ll find it hard to give it up.
一旦养成了抽烟的习惯，你会发现很难戒掉它。
24. It indicates that all living things on the earth are being greatly threatened by industrial pollution.
这表明地球上所有的生物正在受到工业污染的严重威胁。
25. It’s not allowed to blare horns here, those who fail to obey the regulation will b e fined.
此地禁止按喇叭，不能遵守此规定者将被处以罚款。
26. People all over the world believe that it won’t be long before a cure for cancer comes into being.
世界人民期待着不久的将来有治疗癌症的新药出现。
27. He has got into the bad habit of reading in bed, which is harmful to his eyesight.
他已养成一个在床上看书的坏习惯，这习惯有害于他的视力。
28. Working hard is important, but knowing how to make the most of one’s abilities is more important.
用功是重要的，但知道如何充分利用自己的才能更重要。
29. Even though l have studied English for a few years, I still find it hard to express myself effectively in English.
尽管我已学了几年英语，但仍不能有效地用英语表达自己的想法。
30. Sick and weak as Grandma is, she has taken on all the housework in the family.
祖母虽体弱多病，却承担了家里所有的家务。
31. Referring to this accident, the driver admitted that his car knocked down a child.
在谈及这次事故时，司机承认他撞倒了一个孩子。
32. I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.
我认为，私车应该限制而不是鼓励。
33. Measures must be taken to make the water clean before it goes into the river.
必须采取措施，将废水净化后才能排放入河流。
34. Helping others is the source of happiness.
帮助别人是快乐的源泉。
35. The computer has completely changed our life.
计算机大大地改变了我们的生活。
36. Without computers, the realization of modernization would remain a dream.
没有计算机，实现现代化只能是个梦。
37. We must work hard if we want to achieve success.
要想获得成功，我们就必须努力学习。
38. Lack of education is an obstacle to success.
缺乏教育是成功的障碍。
39. The earth is the only planet and home for the human race.
地球是人类唯一的家园。
40. No one will be able to survive if the land, water and atmosphere are seriously polluted.
当土地、水和大气受到了严重污染，没有人能存活。
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而连接词起的正是桥 梁作用。 在扩展的过程中也有些窍门，以下几点可供参考： 1)在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。英语中存在着极为丰富的同义词，准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。同时要灵活运用各种句式，如 倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加 文章的可读性。 2)使用不同长度的句子。如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话，通过分句和合句或用两 句、三句来表达，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。 3)改变句子的开头方式，不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首，或 用分词等。 4)学会使用过渡词。 (1) 递进furthermore，moreover，besides，in addition，then，etc (2) 转折however，but，nevertheless，afterwards，etc (3) 总结finally，at last，in brief，to conclude，etc (4) 强调really，indeed，certainly，surely，above a11，etc (5) 对比in the same way，just as，on the other hand，etc
开放作文形同于书面表达，但又不等同于书面表达，因为书面表达往往给出较为详细的提示（文字提纲式、文字+图画式、或图表式），考生在组织短文时，完全可以把这些提示当作短文提纲或线索；考生在表达时，只需沿着这条线索思维即可，考生发散思维的空间不多。而“开放作文”是一种限制相对较少、留给考生更多自由发挥空间的、考查学生书面表达能力的一种时新题型。这种题型只给出主题，也就是说只告诉你正在或将要发生什么事情，至于事情发生的过程、结果则完全由考生自己去发挥，考生的思维完全可以发散。所以，考生的思路不同，写出的作文就会是千人千面。 漫画式开放作文以北京高考为代表。命题形式往往围绕一幅漫画去写作。 （2011北京卷） 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. 随着高考改革的推进，一些自主单独命题的省份，逐年加大了书面表达的开放的力度。比如2011年高考湖南卷就是模仿北京卷而出的开放程度很大的书面表达题。 （2011湖南卷）
假设你参加所在年级的英语写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇作文 1.简要描述下图内容并点明主题； 2.联系实际表达该图带给你的启示。 标题式开放作文以上海高考为代表（但是近年来上海试题作文的开放程度有所下降）。命题形式往往围绕一个特定的话题去写作。 （2005上海卷） 古人云：“天生我材必有用”（There must be a use for my talent）。通过描述你生活中一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。 随着高考改革的推进，一些自主单独命题的省份，逐年加大了书面表达的开放的力度。比如2011年高考安徽卷和湖北卷就是模仿上海卷而出的开放程度很大的书面表达题。 （2011安徽卷） 某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.短文中不能出现本人相关信息。 （2011湖北卷） 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。 Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn about team work. Teamwork shows us how other people’s roles fit the purpose of the gr oup, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people. 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
高考英语满分作文范文大全分享 高分作文肯定不是临场训练出来的，而是平时修炼出来的，它需要你平时多阅读，多观察，多积累，提升我们的境界，锤炼我们的思想。下面就是给大家带来的高考英语作文，希望能帮助到大家! 高考英语作文篇1 假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需要书面预约，请按下列的要求写一封信：1.本人简介2.求助内容3.约定时间4.你的联系方式(Email: lihua@1236 ; Phone:12345678) 范文：Dear Sir , I’m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university . I’m writing to ask for help . I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library . I was told the learning center provides help for students and I’m anxious to
get help from you. I have no class on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons . Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me . Here are my email address and phone number :lihua@1236 ; 1234567. Look forward to your reply . Yours , Li Hua 高考英语作文篇2 Drunken Driving Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunken driving has been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for /behind this phenomenon. Firstly, recent decades have witnessed the rapid development of people’s living standards. As a result, cars gained ever-increasing popularity and have found their way into our everyday life. Secondly, people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink liquor/strong wine. Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive. Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and
高考英语作文写作常用短语 英语作文试题一般要求字数在120字左右，段落一般为三段，因而有“三段论”一说。以下是，我们一起来了解下: 1、情感与欲望 be pleased with …; be delighted in doing…; take a pleasure in doing; be worried about; feel surprised at … be sorry for …; be angry with sb for sth; be angry about …为某事生气; look forward to doing…; wish to do; expect to do; long for long to do; be sick for one’s home; have a strong desire to do …; 2、健康状况及治疗 be in good shape; be in good poor health; feel weak well, terrible, sick; have got a high slight fever; have a slight bad cold; take one’s temperature; have got a pain in …; be good bad for one’s healtheyes; It’s nothing serious. stay in bed until…; save one’s life 3、其它 It takesb. some time to do…; It is said that …; be fit for; be short of; be well dressed; miss the lecture train; change…into…; waste time doing; spend time doing; be busy doing; have no choice but to do; I can’t help it. be in need of…;
高考英语写作技巧：写作之描写篇 这里所说的描写，是指对自然景物、社会环境和动植物的描写。 描写，是用生动形象的语言，把景物的形体、特征、性质等具体地描绘出来，使人产生如临其境、如睹其物的感受。它是用富有表现力的文字描绘客观事物的一种表现形式。运用描写，可以展现地域、环境、自然景物的画面，可以绘声绘色、有形有神地展示动物、植物的神态。 人们通常所说的描写，主要是指艺术性描写。我们这里所说的描写也包括了一部分用于说明文里的技术性描写，如地区的介绍等。描写，有单独成文的，也有穿插在其他体裁之中的。比如，在记叙文中，景物描写可以创造某种气氛，烘托人物性格、展示事件背景等。我们这里选编的主要是单独成文的描写文。 一、描写方式 所有描写都包含两个要素：一是对象（object），二是观察者（observer）。前者指看到的或听说的客观事物，后者指看或听的人，一般是指描写文的作者。根据二者之中哪一个要素处于支配地位，我们可把描写方式分为两种： 1.客观性描写 客观性描写独立于观察者的感知和感情，精确记录描写对象的面目。它是一种真实的报道，目的在于告诉不能亲眼看见描写对象的读者景物的真实情况。作者把自己当作是一部照相机，用词语如实摄制真正的照片。从其超然或公正的特点来看，客观性描写文作者很像是科学家，他要从自己的工作中严格排除个人意见和感情。例如，他在描写上楼时，不能写“I am going upstairs”，而只能直接写“on the second floor”；也不能用反映个人意见内涵的词语，例如，要说“大楼”就要用陈述事实的“large building”，而不能用含有感情的表达“a magnificent building”。 2.印象性描写 印象性描写与客观性描写截然不同。它注视的是描写对象在观察者或作者心目中引起的情绪或情感，而不是描写对象本身的存在。就是说，它不是向读者传达信息，而是要激发读者的感情。它是让人们去感觉，而不是让人们去看。所以，感情交流是印象性描写的首要目的。交流的过程起始于作者，它必须来源于真诚的感情。作者要想使自己的描写成功，不仅感觉要深，而且要在自己的心目中明确那是什么感情。只有作者了解了自己的心情才能把它交流给读者。 二、描写类型 描写文有多种分类方法，有从对象上分类的，有从方法上分类的，还有从描写角度分类的。就我们的需要而言描写文可从内容和技法两方面进行分类：
2020年度高考英语作文满分范文 高考英语作文满分有哪些，大家有看过么? 下是初心范文材料网编辑整理的高考五篇满分英语范文材料，希望可以分享高三的学生进行参考和借鉴。 一、通知 假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来，为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化，学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示，用英语向他们发出口头通知。 时间：下周五6：00—8：00 地点：教学楼101室 内容：①唱中国歌;②比赛用筷子;③学习包饺子 注意： ①词数不少于50; ②可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; ③开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 优秀满分范文材料 Good afternoon, everyone. May I have your attention, please? I’m the chairman of the Students’ Union. As the New Year is around the corner(即将到来), we are going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture. During the party, not only can you sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks. What’s more, you’ll learn at the party how to make dumplings. Sounds great.
高考英语写作……话题写作练习 一. 教学内容： 话题写作练习 A 人物介绍 参考篇目：Unit 1. Hawking. Einstein 注意：1. 表格变为段落 2．按时间顺序 3．根据逻辑关系加上连接词 常用短语和词汇： be born when he/she was ……years old /at the age of later begin to graduate from spend time doing discover 评价：be considered to be / be regarded as be rewarded…… contribute devoted oneself to sth. 根据以下素材写一篇介绍爱因斯坦的短文 Date of birth: March 14th, 1879 Place of birth: Germany Childhood: curious, slowing in learning Education background: 1886 : study in Munich, mathematics, religion 1896 : graduated from high school 1900 : become a maths teacher 1905 : receive a doctor’s degree Achievement: develop the Theory of Relativity by 1915 prove light is bent when passing the sun won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922 Evaluation: one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century Albert Einstein Albert Einstein was born on March 14th,1879 in Germany. When he was a child,he was curious about everything, but he was considered to be slow at learning. In 1886, he began to study in Munich. He studied mathematics as well as religion. In 1896,Einstein graduated from high school at the age of 17. Four years later, Einstein became a maths teacher. In 1905, he received a doctor’s degree. By the year 1915, he had developed the famous Theory of Relativity and became famous in the world. He proved that light is bent as it passes the sun. Because of his great achievement, he won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922. Einstein was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. Some people say that he was a genius. But I think the main reason why he was so successful was his hard work . B. 说明文
高考英语作文技巧 1.开头万能公式一:名人名言 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编! 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? 经典句型: A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言 It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言 更多经典句型: As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 2.开头万能公式二:数字统计 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: Honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 Youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 更多句型: A recent statistics shows that … 写作绝招 结尾万能公式: 1.结尾万能公式一:如此结论 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此为过渡短语, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! 更多过渡短语:
高考英语书面表达讲解与训练——开放性写作 一. 教学内容： 书面表达讲解与训练 开放性写作（北京卷） 开放性写作是北京卷近两年增加的第二篇作文，英文为open-ending composition。它所给提示比较简单，要求学生根据提供的情景，写一段接续文字。这篇作文要求学生充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构，既能体现出学生活跃的思维，又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。它要求学生必须在短时间内写出一篇内容充实新颖、思想健康、符合逻辑、交际得体的，字数不少于50个字的作文。 写作注意要点： 1. 审题要准，定位要清。 即：审语境、审人称、审时态。注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识，看文章是以第几人称出现；说话的对象是谁；看清题目要求。 2. 逻辑清晰，合情合理。 要做到思想健康，积极向上。要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑。 要把理由说充分，是在现实生活中可能会发生的事情。内容要新颖、健康、乐观向上，（所表述的内容、观点是主动、积极向上的），我们在写作时要注意的是求新并不等于求怪，并不是说越希奇古怪、越离谱越好。内容新颖并非是别人完全没提过的、全新的想法，而是别人在相同的情景之下讲得比较少的，又不违背逻辑的想法。新颖的思路能够充分表现学生的创造力。 3. 内容充实，详略得当。 要有主次之分，详略得当。要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑。 考查的目的---能否正确使用英语达到交际的目的。（语言要口语化）把事情说具体，缺少细致的描写，就像建房只搭架子不用砖一样，显得空洞无味。英语写作有一条座右铭，那就是“show more than tell”，意思是细节表达一定要多于抽象陈述，也就是写作要细节化或举例说明。我们尽量用看得见、摸得着的东西来具体表达思想。才能使文章充实、有趣，符合开放作文的要求。 4. 内容完整、首尾呼应。 要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 有头有尾；展现给读者一个完整的画面。 【典型例题】 ［开放性写作分类与解析：］ 1. 逻辑性思维(logical thinking ) 给出结果猜测可能性（cause and effect） 根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字。 注意：词数不少于30。 You and your friend ar e in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?” You tell him what happened. Possible version: I guess it was all my fault. My mother was doing some reading by the window yesterday, and
2019高考英语作文真题及满分范文全汇总 1. 全国Ⅰ卷 【题目要求】 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。 注意： 1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结束语已为你写好。 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position. The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 2. 全国Ⅱ卷 【题目要求】 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括： 1. 比赛信息； 2. 赛前准备； 3. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
高考英语作文写作模板 投诉信 【篇首句】介绍自己，说明写作目的：投诉。 1. I’m Li Hua. I feel bad to trouble you but I’m afraid that I have to make a complaint about your restaurant. 我是李华。很不想给你添麻烦。但是，恐怕我不得不对你们餐馆进行投诉。 2. I’m writing to you to complain about... 我写信是投诉...... 3. I want to express my dissatisfaction about the woolen scarf I bought from your company. 我想要表达我对从你们公司买的羊毛围巾的不满。 【篇中句】说明投诉问题、后果，并提出合理建议。 1. In the first place, the food is too salty and the water isnt served in time. In addition, the music you broadcast is too noisy. Under these circumstances, I find it hard to sit here having dinner quietly. 首先，食物太咸，水没有及时端上来。而且，你们播放的音乐太吵了。
在这样的环境下，我很难安静的坐在这里吃饭。 2. While I was on holiday in Hong Kong about a week ago, I bought a green shirt for 300 HK dollars in your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it. When its washed, it fades in colour. Now I cant wear it. 大概一周前我在香港度假的时候，我在你们店里花300港元买了一件绿色衬衫，但是看上去似乎有一些状况。当被洗的时候，它会掉色。现在，我不能穿了。 3. It arrived on time the day before yesterday. But when I checked it, I found a hole in the middle. I was astonished because the hole was obvious and I didnt think you should neglect this deficiency(缺陷). 它是前天按时到的。但是当我检查时，我发现中间有个洞。我很震惊，因为这个洞和明显，我认为你们不应该忽略这个缺陷。 4. I have dialed your service number for several times but it was always busy. 我多次拨打你们的服务电话，但它总是占线。 5. Now this problem keeps worrying me. 现在这个问题一直在困扰我。
高考英语作文写作实用技巧 导读：本文高考英语作文写作实用技巧，仅供参考，如果觉得很不错，欢迎点评和分享。 (一)掌握技巧： (1)注意篇章结构，合理布局 开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容. (2)确定主题句 主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点： ①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 ②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 ③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。 (二)巧用连接词 要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词 表示罗列增加
First, second, third, First, then / next, after that / next, finally For one thing … for another…, On (the) one hand…on the other hand, Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular, 表示时间顺序 now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment form now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during, 表示解释说明 now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover furthermore, in fact, actually 表示转折关系
高考英语试题开放式作文 1.请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 You and your Australian friend Jim are visiting a city in China where you see the street sculptures as shown below. You and Jim are discussing what the artist is trying to say. Now you are telling Jim how you understand this piece of art and what makes you think so. 提示词：雕塑sculpture 笔记本电脑laptop 范文： 第二节开放作文（15分） I think the artist wants to show changes in the city. The man stands for the old generation in China: he is wearing old-fashioned clothes that date back to the beginning of the twentieth century; he is looking at the laptop in great curiosity, unable to figure out what it is. The girl, on the other hand, is totally different; she has long hair and wears a fashionable short skirt. While the man doesn’t know anything about the laptop, she plays with it skillfully. The striking differences between the two show rapid changes in people’s life in China. 2.请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
高考满分作文 （一）四川省2013年高考英语满分作文范文 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。 1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系; 2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议; 3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施 注意： 1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称 【参考范文】 It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits which we develop in our study. I’m sure“repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop. When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes. （二）全国新课标(卷I)2013年高考英语满分作文范文 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before. Also, I’d li ke you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance! His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua （三）全国新课标(卷II)2013年高考英语满分作文范文