作文训练评判作文的标准
?第一档：一塌糊涂（messy）；
?第二档：糊里糊涂（cloudy）；
?第三档：马马虎虎（common）；
?第四档：清清楚楚（clear）；
?第五档：漂漂亮亮（cool）。
?20分以上作文踩点扣分
?18分以下作文踩点给分
好作文的标准
?书写清晰明了，无填涂
?结构合情合理
?审题明确中心突出
?行文语言流畅准确不是单纯拼凑阅卷老师一目了然
?句式丰富使用较多的高中阶段学过的单词词组
?内容积极乐观情感饱满体现个人良好的价值观人生观
作文书写
?态度决定高度attitudedeterminesaltitude
?传达两种思想：我很认真，我要拿高分
?五要：干净，整洁，压线，分三段，ghfyIs字母重点注意恰当的大小可以遮丑
?五不要：添涂，伞型，一逗到底，上蹦下蹿，随意，瘦小挤在一起，硕大无比
?注意：字母要善于辨认，字母之间有间隔
单词之间不能隔太开忽大忽小
大概一行十一到十三字
开头结尾一个单词拼写也不能错
开头结尾三到四行不能有语法错误
作文结构
?开头总对提示语或图片进行解释阐明观点开门见山。一针见血3~4行
?中间分提出问题解决问题办法结果情绪饱满10~12行
结尾总总结观点收获前后呼应感情升华3~4行
好单词
老师偏爱“学得晚”的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现一个人“学以致用”的意识。
(1)Adj.困难的
黯然低分词：difficult
闪光高分词：tough艰难的challenging?有挑战性的
(2)Adj.重要的
黯然低分词：important
闪光高分词：vital?至关重要的;essential?必不可少的;significant?有重要意义的;
(3)Adj.美丽的
黯然低分词：beautiful
闪光高分：appealing动人的;attractive?吸引人的;charming迷人的;
fascinating?迷人的
(4)adj.?不开心的
黯然低分词：sad
闪光高分词：discouraged气馁的;depressed沮丧的;downhearted垂头丧气的;low-spirited 意志消沉的;breakdown
在阅卷老师看来，活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。因此，我们可以掌握一些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法，如：
(5)v.?参加
黯然低分词：join
闪光高分词：takepartin、participatein
(6)v.?使用
黯然低分词：use
闪光高分词：makegooduseof、makethebestof
(7)v.?拜访
黯然低分词：visit
闪光高分词：payavisitto
(8)最常见的换词手段：形容词=of+同根名词
黯然低分词：Important
闪光高分词：beofimportance
(9)v帮忙
黯然低分词：help
闪光高分词：cometoone’sassistance
(10)adv
黯然低分词：finally
闪光高分词：atlength
好词汇词组造句
?temporarysetback
不要被暂时的困难所沮丧
Don’tbecastdownbytemporarysetbacks.
?Makegreatprogress
你越努力你取得的进步越大
Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyouwillmake.
?Beboundtodo/bedoomedtodo/becondemnedtodo
除非我们不遗余力我们注定是一个失败
Unlesswesparenoeffort,wearedoomedtobeafailure.
?Obstacle
任何你遇到的困难将会让你更加坚强
Whateverobstaclesyoumeetwithwillmakeyoustronger.
英语写作中的句式选择,结合平时练习和所学短语及语法运用，总结如下：一改变时态
例:?Thebellisringingnow.????一般
??????Theregoesthebell.???????????特殊
?事例全部用过去式
二改变语态
例:Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)
Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(特殊)
被动胜过主动，讲述理由时更加客观可信
Ibelievewewillwin(一般)
Iamfirmlyconvincedthatoureffortswillpayoff.(特殊)
三改变结构
?不定式
?例:sheworkhardtorealizeherdream.（一般）Inordertorealizeherdream,sheworkedhard.（特殊）
四使用过去分词
?Becauseshedevotedallherlifetostudying,shesucceeded.（一般）Devotedtostudying,shefinallymadeit.（特殊）·Iwasinspiredbyherwordsandmadeupmymindtoholdon.（一般）
Inspiredbyherwords,Imadeupmymindtoholdon.（特殊）
·Ifailedtheexamsmanytimesandalmostgaveup.（一般）
Havingfailedtheexamsinarow,Ialmostgaveup.（特殊）
五形容词作状语
?Irealizedtheimportanceofholdingonanddecidednottogiveup
Awareoftheimportanceofholdingon,Ideterminednottogiveup
?Finally,Iarrivedatthedestination
Atlength,Iarrivedatthedestination,safeandsound/tiredbutsatisfied
六使用v-ing
1.Whenhearrived，hegavemeane-mail．(一般)
Onarriving/whenarriving,hegavemeane-mail.(特殊)
2.进入到重点大学是我一直想要的
BeingadmittedtoakeyuniversityiswhatIamlongingfor
3.每次看到这样的话语，我都忍不住想起小时候
EverytimeIsawthosewords,Icouldn’thelprecallingmymemorywhenIwasyoung.
七使用名词性从句?????????????
1.Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn’tturnup.一般
Thefactthathedidn’tturnup?disappointedeverybody.特殊
2.heissurprisedthatthelittlegirlknows?somanythings.一般
Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirl?knowssomanythings.特殊
3.他做了他所能做的事帮我摆脱困境
Hedidwhathecouldtogetmeoutoftrouble.
4.从那以后，我不停反思我所做的事情
Fromthenon,IneverstoppedreflectingonwhatIhaddone.
八使用定语从句????????????
1.Thegirlisspokenhighlyof..Her?compositionwaswellwritten.一般Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.特殊
2.Honesty,towhichteachersattachgreatimportance,playsasignificantpartinourdailylife. 3Therewasatimewhen…
4Thankstosb,withoutwhomIcouldn’thavegotthroughthehardtimes
九使用状语从句
1.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.一般
Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon‘tbelieve.特殊
十时间状语四个when/一…就
Beabouttodowhenitoccurredtomethat
原因状语thanksto/dueto/owingto
让步状语nomatter+wh--/although/as/evenif
条件状语aslongas/unless/onlyif
结果、伴随状语thusdoing/onlytodo
目的状语inorderto/inanattempttodo
十一使用虚拟语气
1.Theshipdidn‘tsinkwithallonboardbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.(一般) Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunkwithallonboard.特殊Butforthefactthat/haditnotbeenforthefactthat…
2.Itishightimethatsb.shoulddo
十二使用倒装句型,强调句型(8个NO)
1.ThoughI‘mweakI’llmaketheeffort.一般
?WeakasIam,I‘llmaketheeffort..特殊
2.HefindsEnglishisdifficulttolearn.一般
SodifficultdoeshefindittolearnEnglish.特殊
3.Ihaveneverhadsuchanunforgettableexperienceinmylife.一般
NeverhaveIhadamoreunforgettableexperienceinmylife.特殊
4.Hishardworkmakesadifference.一般
Itishishardworkthatmakesadifference.特殊
十三插入语
?ToOne’s+n(delight,disappointment,surprise,relief)
?Tomakemattersworse/what’sworse
?What’smore,/inaddition
?Inthelongrun/term
?Fromnow(then)on/sincethen
?Meanwhile,therefore,whereas()
?Asaconsequence/atlength
?Inaword/inanutshell/tosumup
?fortunately/fromwhereIstand
?Asamatteroffact/believeitornot
?Toputitinanotherway/inotherwords
例文
?结合校园事例写英语作文
?Manyhandsmakelightwork.Cooperationissoimportantthatwecanneveremphasizetheimporta nceofittoomuch.
?①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
?②除诗歌外，文体不限；
?③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
?④词数不少于120左右。
Unionisstrength.Wheneveryou’refacedwithdifficultiesorinadilemma,cooperationplaysasignificantpartingettingyououtoftrouble.
TherewasatimewhenIwassoproudthatIoverlookedmypeers,refusingtoworktogetherwiththe m.Therefore,therewasnodoubtthatIwasleftalone,sufferingfromlonelinessandfailure.Fortunately, ateacherimpressedonmethevalueofcooperation.Fromthenon,Ilearnedtohelpeachotherandturntom yfriendsforhelpwheneverIhaddifficultyinfinishingataskonmyown.Surelycooperationmadeadiffe
rence.NowIamgettingalongwellwithmyfriends.Meanwhile,Ibecomemoreconfident. Myexperiencehastaughtmethatonlyifweattachgreatimportancetocooperationcanwegobeyondour selves.Asthesayinggoes,“United,westand;Divided,wefall.”
常用习语?
1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。?
2.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。?
3.Easiersaidthandone.说起来容易做起来难。?
4.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。?
5.Onefalsestepwillmakeagreatdifference.失之毫厘，谬之千里。?
6.Slowandsteadywinstherace.稳扎稳打无往而不胜。?
7.Afallintothepit,againinyourwit.吃一堑，长一智。?
8.Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.实践出真知。?
9.Allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。?
10.Morehasty,lessspeed.欲速则不达。?
11.Itsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老。?
12.Allthatglittersisnotgold.闪光的未必都是金子。?
13.Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行始于足下。?
14.Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行。?
15.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.伟业非一日之功。?
16.wellbegun,halfdone.好的开始等于成功的一半。???
17.Factsspeakplainerthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。?
18.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。??
19.Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行动胜过语言。?
20.DoasRomansdoinRome.入乡随俗。?
21.Anidleyouth,aneedyage.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。?
22.Asthetree,sothefruit.种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。??
23.Everyoneisthearchitectofhisownfortune
每个人都是自己命运的建筑师
24.Nocross,nocrown.Nosweat,nosweet
Nopains,nogains不经历风雨怎会有彩虹
25.Manyhandsmakelightwork众人拾柴火焰高
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请你根据下面的提示写一篇发言稿。 注意：1．根据要点可适当发挥但内容要连贯、完整。 2．词数：120左右。 3．文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 4．参考词汇：idol 偶像 Ladies and gentlemen, Nowadays, star-worshiping(追星) is popular among teenagers, especially many middle school students…. That’s all. Thank you. One possible version: Ladies and gentlemen, Nowadays, star-worshiping(追星) is popular among teenagers, especially many middle school students. Thousands of fans are on fire for the handsome appearances, beautiful songs and perfect acting skills of their idols, and they imitate whatever stars do, including their clothes, hair style and hobbies. As a result, some of them forget what they should do and even spoil their study. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As young students we should learn from them. Only in this way can we become useful men and be real popular stars in the future. That’s all. Thank you. 点评：本篇文章充分的表达了文章要求和作者自己的意思，自由发挥得当。用到了下列结构：（二） 面对中学生“出国热”，社会对此有不同的看法。请你以Studying Abroad为题，根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。 注意：1．第一句已为你写好，不计入总词数。 2．词数120左右 3．参考词汇：媒介，中间人mediator In recent years, studying abroad has been popular…..
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2014-2017年全国卷高考英语作文真题范文汇总 笔者最近认真研读了2014-2017年高考英语全国卷作文真题范文以及高考英语作文评分标准，通过反复斟酌，笔者决定根据高考英语作文评分标准对这些作文真题进行重新创作，真诚希望广大考生可以利用这些原创范文积累写作素材，同时也希望广大考生可以根据作文评分标准认真分析这些原创范文并最终提高英语写作的能力。 1.2017年全国卷Ⅰ作文真题： 第二节书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你 写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： （1）时间和地点； （2）内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 原创范文： Dear Leslie, I hear about the news that you are now keen on Tang poems. Because of this, I’m writing to inform you of the detailed plan for the next class.
Undoubtedly, Tang poems is an indispensable part of Chinese culture, which is worth learning very well. As expected, we’ll meet on this Sunday morning in the local park, which provides an environmentally---friendly atmosphere for many learners, especially language learners. In addition to this, I want to give you a suggestion that you can find some information about the history of the Tang Dynasty on the Internet prior to the arriving lesson we will have altogether. I am looking forward to your early reply as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua 2.2017年全国卷Ⅱ作文真题： 第二节书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.展览时间、地点； 2.展览内容。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 原创范文：
近十年高考全国卷英语作文真题 （一）06年全国卷I 假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。 June 8 Dear Bob, Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. __________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 内容要点： 1. 图书馆的位置：前有花园，后有教学楼 2. 内部环境：宽敞、有书架、报刊、书籍等 3. 图书馆功能：借阅、借阅数量和借期 4. 开放时间 5. 合适的结尾
（二）06年全国卷II 假定你是李华, 亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办, 现在正在招募志愿者, 你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信. 内容应包括: 1．个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 2．个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况 3．承诺：提供最佳服务 注意： 1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3．生词：申请–apply (v.), application (n.)；志愿者–volunteer Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. ________________________________________________________________________ （三）07年全国卷I 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括： 1.年龄； 2.性别； 3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。 注意：1．词数100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语已为你写好。
高考英语写作 一．【考查要点】 高考英语书面表达具体主要考查学生以下几种能力： 1.观察分析，获取，加工和输出信息的能力。 2.体现语法规则，并且正确熟练运用语法的能力。 3.语言交际表达得体，突出正确语用的能力。 4.关注社会现实，锤炼思维表达能力。 【解题指南】 要在短时间内写出一篇高分作文，一定要遵循一个写任何作文都可以采用的方法步骤。下文介绍书面表达解题六步骤。 1.审题 审清题意，明确要求。认真阅读书面表达试题中文字信息、图表信息，这是写好书面表达的关键。弄清楚文章应采用的体裁：记叙文、说明文、应用文等，用第几人称写作，主要的时态范畴是什么？如何开头、如何拓展、如何收尾，动笔之前都应心中有数。 2.抓要点 抓住要点，列出关键词。用一两个单词或短语写出每句的细节要点，关键的连接词、转折词等。 3．扩展成句 分析要点，扩展成句。弄清文章的主题之后，根据所列要点，运用适当的句型、时态，用联词成句的方式将关键词扩展成句。 4．连句成文 依据篇章结构，连句成文。在连句成文之前，一定要对文章的篇章结构有个合理清晰的构想：要点的先后排列顺序和语篇衔接是否得当、层次是否清楚、结构是否一目了然、主谓是否一致、开头结尾逻辑关系是否自然、意思是否表达清楚、中心是否突出。 5．查错改错 复读作文，检查修改。打完草稿后要认真检查，修改润色，避免不必要的错误。主要注意以下几个方面：①要点是否遗漏，文体格式是否正确。②时态语态是否错误，主谓是否一致。③句子结构、关联词是否恰当。④名词的数、代词的性数格、现在分词、过去分词、冠词等是否符合英语的习惯。⑤单词的拼写是否有误等。 6．规范抄写 定稿成文，规范抄写。书写一定要美观。如果无法达到这一标准。至少也应想着向这一标准看齐。阅卷老师每天要反复看同样内容的文章很多遍。如果连最基本的清晰度都没有，又如何获得高分呢？因此要留出足够时间抄写，确保卷面整洁清楚。忌：书写潦草、单词模糊不清、左右明显不齐、随意涂改、缺乏分段。 二．作文怎么判 1. 档次评分 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。评分时先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 第五档 完全完成了试题规定的任务 覆盖所有内容要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 完全达到了预期的写作目的 （21-25 分）
一、致歉信 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom来信说他计划在春节期间来中国旅行，希望你你能当他的向导。但是你因为学校的交流项目需要前往澳大利亚而无法陪他，请你用英语写信向他表示歉意，同时推荐你的同学李雷做他的导游。 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文 二、倡议书 ?假定你校正在开展“根除陋习，创建文明校园”活动，请你以此为主题用英语写一篇100词左右的发言稿，向全校学生倡议： ?根除：乱扔垃圾、浪费食物、吸烟…… ?提倡：讲礼貌、互助…… ?注意：开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 ?Dear friends， ?As is known to all, our school has launched a campaign against bad habits in order to build a civilizedcampus.____________________________________________
?___________________________________________________ ?___________________________________________________ ?That's all. Thank you. 参考答案： Dear friends， As is known to all, our school has launched a campaign against bad habits in order to build a civilized campus. But it has come to my notice that lots of bad behaviour still exists in our school. This does great harm to the image of our school. Therefore, I strongly urge that we students stop throwing rubbish everywhere and spitting in public. Besides, everyone must discipline himself not to make dirty remarks or waste food. Such bad manners as smoking and fighting should also be removed from our campus. At the same time, we should start with ourselves to perform good manners all the time and everywhere. We also promote the spirit of helping each other and healthy competition. Once again I'm here earnestly calling on everyone to take action and contribute to making our school a nicer place. That's all. Thank you. 三、建议信 在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写一封信，表达你们的需求和建议。 ·适当放慢进度，留出思考时间 ·反复训练重要的和易错的知识点 ·指导方法 ·减少作业量以保证质量 ·给予更多鼓励 注意： 1．根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； 2．要准确使用语法和词汇、句型，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思； 3．词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Wang, We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views. In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. __________________________________ __________________________________________________ 参考范文： Dear Mr Wang, We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views. In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you
精品文档2014年全国高考英语作文真题汇总与范文集锦 2014-01-北京卷（道歉信）+（连环画） 【推迟旅行，道歉说明式】 1. ）你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游； 2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往； 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意： 1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, How is everything going? I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my l eft foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? I wish you coul d understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Joe 2.）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇 短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。注意： 1. 词数不少于60. 2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 【如何解决自行车存放问题，新闻叙述式】 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there. 2014-02-新课标I （咨询信） 【暑期英语学习咨询，信息说明式】 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封 信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容） .
2021高考英语作文练习与范文 【练习一】 假定上周六你校组织学生参观了自然博物馆。请你就此活动给学校的英文网站写一篇报道，内容包括： 1. 参加人员； 2. 参观内容； 3. 活动反响。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目已为你写好； 【范文】 A Tour of Beijing Museum of Natural History Last Saturday, our school students from Grade 12 took a tour of Beijing Museum of Natural History. In the museum, there was a wealth of collections of prehistoric dinosaurs, ancient human fossils, different species of plants, and varieties of birds, insects, and fishes. We were so amazed that within four hours we had learned so much about nature. The visit to the museum was rather productive and informative. We not only extended our knowledge of human evolution, but also looked deeper into the evolution of other living species. A number of students said they eventually understood how other species adapted to living on Earth.
2019高考英语作文真题及满分范文 第四部分写作(共两节，满分40分) 第一节应用文写作(满分15分) 66. 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3. 临别祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 优秀满分作文 Dear Alex, Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help. Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a
pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home. Yours, Li Hua 1. 审题立意 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。 2. 谋篇布局 书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。 3. 关键词和句子 根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错
DAY 1 1.It occurred to me that 2.Play a adj role in 3.Motivate sb to do sth https://www.doczj.com/doc/c812978809.html,rm sb of sth 5.try one’s best do do sth/do one’s utmost to do sth/ make every effort to do sth /endeavor to do sth 6.It ‘s my pleasure to do sth 7.A growing number of -- 8.be fond of / be keen on / be crazy about / be interested in 9.The more ----- , the more ------ 10.enable sb to do sth Day 2 1.There is no need for sb to do sth 2. ---cannot emphasize the importance of -----too much 3. By doing ---, 4.On no account can we do 5.For the past ---, sb have done /have been doing sth 6.It pays to do sth /It is worthwhile to do sth 7. ---be based on --- 8.---be closely related to ---- 9.--get into the habit of doing sth =make it a rule to do sth 10.What a adj n it is to do sth !=How adj a n it is to do sth ! Day3. 1.do good/harm to sth 2.have a great influence on sth 3.Nothing can prevent us from doing sth 4. Upon/On doing sth ---/As soon as /Hardly had sb done when sb did/No sooner had sb done than sb did 5.would rather do ---than do /prefer to do rather than do 6.Only then /in this way /if/when--- did I do sth 7.be worth doing 8.Owing to /Thanks to sth 9.S is the adj 最高级 n that S have ever seen /known /heard /had /read; Nothing is more important than to do sth 10.There is no denying that ---- Day 4 1.It is universally acknowledged that ----/As is known to us / As we all know 2. There is no doubt that 3.(It is ) No wonder that --- 4.So adj be 主语 that ----
2019高考英语作文训练 李仕才 作文训练之书信（回信+文化交流）
句型提示： 1、书信功能句： 2、英语作文万能句： 1）I am writing to you to …(谈写信目的) 2) I am looking forward to your reply. （写信结束语） 3) I would appreciate it if you could …如果你能…，我将非常感激。 4) I wonder if you could …我想您是否能….
5) Would it be possible for you to …? 您是否可以。。。？ 6) Would it be convenient for you to …? 您是否方便…? 7) I would like to …我想要… 8) It would be better for you to …您最好… 9) You might as well …您最好… 10) If I were you, I would …. 如果我是你，我会… 11） Would you please …? Could you …? 请您… 3、英语作文常用句式： 1) 主+谓+…,doing/done … 2) 主+谓+…,which/who 从句 3）主，同位语，+谓+… 4）主+谓+…,with 结构 5）What +从句 is that 从句 6）强调句或倒装句（起强调作用，需要强调时，用） 7）其他：so/such …that…; It is …before …; too … to …等 写作训练（8） 假如你是美国的Mike，你的朋友张平打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信： 1．语言能力是基础； 2．适应能力很重要； 3．兴趣爱好被看重； 4．要有社会责任感。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Zhang Ping． Yours， Mike 思路点拨：1、人称：第二人称为主；时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主； 2、要点：1）客套话，礼貌答2） 4个要点；3）祝愿。 参考句型：1….makes it easier for you to do … 2. shoulder social responsibilities 3. May you succeed. 第一稿
2019高考英语作文真题及满分范文全汇总 1. 全国Ⅰ卷 【题目要求】 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。 注意： 1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结束语已为你写好。 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position. The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 2. 全国Ⅱ卷 【题目要求】 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括： 1. 比赛信息； 2. 赛前准备； 3. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
高考英语作文题目及优秀范文 英语作文在英语科目中很重要，想要英语成绩好，那么英语作文就得多下功夫，多积累一些作文素材。下面就和大家分享高考英语作文，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。 高三英语作文篇一 Dear Robert: How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However，I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 20X.X Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.
高考英语作文训练之一 一．加拿大高中生Tom在互联网上登出启示。希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。 假设你是李华，请在看到这则启示后，用英文给Tom 发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括： 1、你怎样得知David愿望 2、你愿意成为他的朋友 3、你打算如何帮助他 4、你盼望他的回复 本文要求你回电子邮件给Tom，因为你看到了Tom征友，愿意成为他的朋友。 写作思路： 1．确定体裁：本文为说明文。 2．格式：书信体。 3．要点：（1）在网上得知Tom.要找中国朋友，以便学习中国语言，文化。 （2）自我介绍 （3）表示愿意成为他的朋友 （4）介绍如何帮助他学习汉语---have a chat with …;send e-mail ;show around the places of interest （5）期盼回复 4．语言的使用：使用婉转的语气和客套形式。be glad to read the notice …;I am looking forward to your reply /I am waiting for your answer . 5．短语，句型的选择：make friends with/get a Chinese friend ;be fluent in ;have chats with ;learn Chinese and culture .would like to introduce oneself .keep in touch with /stay in touch with 6．段落层次：得知网络启示和介绍为第一段。帮助学习汉语等为第二段。 参考范文： Dear Tom,, I am Li Hua .I am glad to read your notice on the Internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture .I would like to be your friend .Now I would like to introduce myself to you .I was born in Xi `an city in 1990 .I am studying in Chang`an No.1High School and I am fluent in English and Chinese. I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails .What`s more ,we can have chats on the Internet in Chinese and I will send e-mail to tell you the customs ,the festivals ,the food of the Chinese .If It is convenient to you ,please come to China for a visit .I will show you around many places of interest .I hope we can keep in touch with each other . I am looking forward to your reply . Yours Li Hua 二．假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对饮食习惯进行讨论。请根据提示，用英文写发言