作文题目：WeChat
词数要求：80-100词
写作要点：1.如今微信走进了人们的生活，为大家带来了诸多便利，但有些人也随之成了“微信控”（WeChataholic ）;
2.对此现象的描述；
3.你对“微信控”的看法。
In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Many people express themselves, exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat.
There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Next, Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Furthermore, convenience also accounts for its popularity. It is available everywhere and at any time.
However, problems exist meanwhile. Firstly, our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat. As a result, we can be in trouble. Moreover, it may make communicating with others face to face less. To make the matter worse, relationship could break down. Last but not the least, our attention might drawn too much to focus on study.
作文题目：Mobile Phone
词数要求：80-100词
写作要点：1.现在越来越多的中学生拥有自己的手机；
2.作为一名中学生，谈谈你对持有手机的看法。
Today, more and more middle school students have their own mobile phones. As a student, I think it’s good to have a mobile phone because mobile phones can offer a lot of convenience. And students can send short messages to their parents when they are in trouble or not at home. In fact, if students use mobile phones in right ways, mobile phones will help us, such as we can use mobile phones to look up new words. But it can also bring some trouble. For example, many students use their mobiles to listen to music in class. They don’t listen to the teachers carefully. And many students send messages in class.
In my opinion, it’s not right to use mobile phones in school. We should try our best to use mobile phones in right ways.
1. 感谢信 假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you. Because of your help，now I am a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University. Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. You not only wrote a recommendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University，but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate （回报）your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades. Yours truly, Li Hua 2. 道歉信 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意：1. 词数120~150；2. 可适当增加细节。
2019年中考英语作文题目（热门话题）汇总 学术文化篇 ①沉迷网络游戏 题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in ★范文 Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. ②怎样学好英语
初中英语作文常用谚语推荐 古老的谚语是文化的沉淀和结晶~来学学下面这些高频谚语~让它为咱们的作文增加闪光点~ （一）关于勤奋 1. No pains，no gains. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 2. Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。 3. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 4. Genius is one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration.天才一分来自灵感，九十九分来自勤奋。 5. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事，只要肯登攀。 6. Success only means working hard all one's life .成功只意味着终身不懈的努力。(俄国化学家门捷列耶夫) 7. I have nothing to offer but blood , hard work and tears .我所能奉献的没有其它，只有热血、辛劳和眼泪。(英国政治家丘吉尔. W.) （二）关于学习方法 1. Learning without thinking is a dangerous thing. 学而不思则罔。 He who learns but does not think is lost; he who thinks but does not learn is in danger. 学而不思者罔，思而不学则殆。 2. It’s never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。 3. Well begun is half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。 4. Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。 5. Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。 6. Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。 7. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。Little by little one goes far. 千里之行，始于足下。 8. Look before you leap. 三思而后行。 9. He who laughs last laughs best. 笑到最后笑得最好。 10.Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。 11. One tree can’t make a forest. 独木不成林。 12. Habit is a second nature. 习惯成自然。 13. Seeing is believing. 眼见为实。 14. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马 15. No man can do two things at once. 一心不可二用。 （三）关于自强自信 1. Where there is a will, there is a way . ( Thomas Edison , American inventor ) 有志者，事竟成。(美国发明家爱迪生. T.) 2. God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。 3. Nothing is too difficult in the world if you set your mind into it. 世上无难事，只怕有心人。Nothing is impossible to a willing mind.世上无难事，只怕有心人。 4. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。 5. Confidence doesn't need any reason. If you're alive , you should feel 100 percent confident. 自信不需要理由,生活应该保持100分的自信 6. Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. 自信是走向成功的
1环境保护篇 01新冠病毒 2020年，一种新型冠状病毒(novel coronavirus)在全球蔓延。据传，这种病毒是从野生动物传染给人类。假定你是李华，你校英文报“人与动物”栏目拟刊登主题为“保护野生动物”的短文，邀你投稿。要求如下： 1.介绍野生动物的现状； 2.猎杀野生动物的后果； 3.提出自己的建议。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇： 生态系统ecosystem 新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus 传染性的infectious ★范文 Protection of Wild Animals At present,as a consequence of human activities,many wild animals are endangered.Worse still,some of them may disappear forever. There is no doubt that hunting wild animals has a bad influence.For one thing,it causes the imbalance of our ecosystem.For another,it leads to the spread of infectious diseases from animals to us human beings,such as SARS and novel coronavirus. As far as I am concerned,something must be done to stop this illegal act.Nature reserves ought to be built so as to offer more living space to wildlife.What's more,we should never have wild animals for food,as they are part of environment. 02拯救地球 地球是我们人类共同的家园，人类只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文参评。 1.重要性：只有一个地球 2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难 3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然 参考词汇： disaster n.灾难 protect v.保护 注意： (1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名; (2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数; (3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 ★范文 Let's Do Something to Save Our Environment
满分英语作文中考范文1 Many years ago, I saw an interesting movie. It pictured the future life that people could fly in the sky by cars. Of course, I don't think it will happen in the coming time. The change in cars is about the energy. It is said that the cars will use both electricity and gasoline, which can reduce pollution. I think it is a great change for cars. More and more people have cars now and the gas they release brings heavy pollution to the air, which damages our health. The cars can use electricity in the long trip. When it runs out of it, then gasoline can be a substitute. 满分英语作文中考范文2 Since I go to school, every Monday, the school has the tradition to hold the ceremony of raising flag. At this moment, when I hear the national anthem, a sense of pride will arise in my heart. I am so proud of my country. Nowadays, the world is watching China, because it plays an important role in the world. Every decision that the government has made catches the media's attention. The foreign media try to understand the key of the great development of Chinese economy. There is no doubt that our country has become much stronger, and every Chinese will be very proud of being part of it. I must study hard, so that I can make a contribution to the society. 满分英语作文中考范文3 When I come to middle school, I have make friends with new faces and I learn a lot from them. The most important thing is to be independent. My friends can solve problems by themselves and take care of themselves. In front of these fellows, I start to think of myself. When I meet problems, I will ask for help from my parents immediately. Now I realize that I must learn to be independent. So I want to say something to my parents and have a talk to them. I want to let them know that I have grown up and can do the basic thing by myself. I am learning to be stronger. 满分英语作文中考范文4 When I was very small, I lived in my hometown. My grandparents raised two dogs, and I liked them very much. I watched them grow up from the little animals to the big dogs. Every time when I leaved home for school, they would follow me for
★初中英语作文常用单词词组all in all 总的说来 and so on 等等 as a matter of fact =in fact 其实，实际上at present 目前现在 date back to 追溯到 for the future 从今以后，在今后 from now on 今后，从现在起 in short 总之，总而言之 in a word 简言之、一句话、总之 in the end 最后，终于most important of all 最重要的是 about all 首先 for one thing,…….for another thing 首先…，再者… first of all, …next then,….lastly…首先，然后，最后firstly,secondly,thirdly…finally 第一，第二，第三…最后in addition 另外 in addition to 除…之外 according to 根据 as far as I am concerned 据我所知 generally speaking 一般说来 what’s more 更多的是 1
therefore 因此，从而 furthermore =moreover再者otherwise 另外 in my opinion 我认为，我的意见是not only …but also 不但…而且…in spite of 不管 for example 例如… different from 与……不同 as a result 结果 in order to do 为了 There is no doubt that 毫无疑问It is well known that 大家都知道to tell the true 说实话 however 然而 therefore 因此 since then 自从那时起 as soon as 一……就……thanks to 多得，幸亏 ★★初中英语作文常用句型： 1.表示原因 1)The reason for this is that… 2)There are three reasons for this. 2
2018中考英语热门话题 一. 学术文化篇 1. 沉迷网络游戏 李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in ★范文 Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to
今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John 写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下： 1. 表述你与母亲间的情感； 2. 为母亲制作一张卡片； 3. 帮助母亲做点事； 4. 陪母亲散步等。注意：1.词数80 左右； 2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 【优秀满分范文】 Dear John, It 's Mother 's Day today. It ' s a special day, isn ' t it? I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me. 1. Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. 2. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. 3. Besides, I ' ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I 'm sure she ' ll be very happy. What' s your plan for Mother ' s Day? I ' m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua
2017中考英语作文：11个热点话题，20篇优秀范文 明天起，中考将陆续开始。为帮助大家更好的应对考试，今天，小简老师为大家分享11个热点话题，20篇优秀英语范文。这些话题无非都是和 初中生学习、生活息息相关的话题，因此，同学们写作这些话题时不会无话可说。难点在于句型和篇章结构。通过对下面20篇经典范文进行研读 背诵，相信大家在中考英语写作中得满分并非不可能! 一. 学术文化篇 1. 沉迷网络游戏 李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in ★范文 Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it's very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is
bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports in interested more become will he Maybe school. after him with sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. 2. 怎样学好英语 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 ★范文 How to learn English well
中考英语作文满分必备的7类50个句型及短语 1.重点句型12句 1). It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说… 2). …so …that …如此…以至于… …too …to do 太…而不能… such …that …如此…以至于… 3). not…until…直到…才… 例：I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back。 4).The reason why + 句子is that + 句子…的原因是… The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。) 5). That is why + 句子那是…的原因 6). That is because + 句子那是因为… 7). It is said that + 句子据说… It is reported that + 句子据报道… 8). There is no doubt that + 句子毫无疑问… 9). It goes without saying that + 句子不言而喻，毫无疑问 10). There is no need to do 没必要做… 11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 12. as is known to all, +句子众所周知 as we all know, +句子据我们所知 it is generally/ publicly known / considered that…, 众所周知 2.提建议7句 had better (not) do 最好(不)做 how about / what about doing …怎么样? I think you should do 我认为你应该… I suggest / advice that you should do 我建议你做… If I were you, I would do…我要是你的话，我会做… It’s best to do 最好做… Why not do / why don’t you do…? 为什么不… 3.表示喜欢和感兴趣6句 like / love doing enjoy doing be fond of doing 喜欢做… be keen on n/doing 喜欢做… prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing 4.努力做…7句 try to do努力做… strive to do 努力做… try one’s best to do = do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做… make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做… do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做… spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做…
中考英语作文 写人叙事类 常用句型 开头句 1、The person who has influenced me most is...对我影响最大的人是····· 2、A true friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are depressed. 一个真正的朋友是会在你失落沮丧的时候给你温暖的人。 3、I have never expressed my thanks and respect to... 我从未对······表达过我的谢意和敬意。 4、For a long time,there was one thing that I would never forget. 很久以来，一直有一件事情令我难以忘怀。 5、The experience left a deep impression on me. 这次体验给我留下了深刻的印象。 中间句 1、She has watery eyes and a lovely baby face. 她有着水汪汪的眼睛和可爱的娃娃脸。 2、He is of medium build but has a powerful body. 他虽然是中等身材，但有着强健的体魄。 3、He is a boy full of integrity and honesty. 他是一个充满正直诚实品质的男孩。 4、I am a positive person and never lose heart. 我是一个积极乐观，从不轻易放弃的人。 5、As long as he makes a promise,he will never break it. 只要他做出了承诺，就决不食言。 6、She always does a favor to someone who is in trouble. 她经常帮助那些有困难的人。 7、In my opinion,friends are the persons whom we can share happiness and sorrow with. 在我看来，朋友是我们可以分享快乐和悲伤的人。 8、When I think of this matter,I feel very lucky. 当我想到这个问题时，我觉得非常幸运。 结尾句 1、Thank you for everything you have done for me. 感谢您为我所做的一切。 2、I am proud of her,and I love my mother very much. 我以她为豪，而且我非常爱我的母亲。 3、It will be one of my unforgettable experiences in my life.
中考英语作文热门话题预测 预测（一）共享单车 共享单车无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2018中考英语写作预测话题是：共享单车。 【预测题目】 假定你是红星中学初三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim 回信，内容包括： 1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）； 2. 这种单车的优势； 3. 你对这种单车的看法。 注意：1. 词数不少于80； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：智能手机smart phone, 二维码the QR code 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of bike riding-- mobike in your latest letter. It’s very convenient to use if you have a smart phone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip. Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is
中考常用词汇及短语大全 一) 连接词 （1）表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor, or, as well as…, and, both…and…。（2）表因果关系或对等关系的连接词：therefore, so, as a result, as the result of …，because of, due to …,owing to, thanks to等。 （3）表时间顺序的连接词：the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhyle, at the beginning, in the end, before long, for the first（second…）time, the minute等。 （4）表转折关系的连接词：yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at the same time（然而）等。 （5）表解释说明的连接词：that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on, etc. and the like等。 （6）表递进关系的连接词：not only…but (also), what，s more, what's worse, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all等。 （7）表示总结的连接词：in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all等。（三）注意以下过渡词的用法 1、表示时间的 af first 起初 next 接下来 then 然后 after that 那以后 later 后来 soon 不久 soon/shortly after ……之后不久 finally 最后 in the end 最后 eventually 最终 at last 终于 lately 近来 recently 最近 since then 自从那时起 after that 那以后 in no time 不一会儿 after a while 一会儿 afterward 后来 to begin/start with=in the first place 首先、第一点 immediately 立即、马上
中考优秀英语作文范文：我想要快乐 中考优秀英语作文范文篇一 我想要快乐I Want to be Happy Life is a colorful picture full of different feelings. I d like to be happy because happiness is important to everyone. 生活像是一幅画满了各种心情的图案。我想要快乐，因为快乐对每个人来说都很重要。 I have an unforgettable experience to share with all of you. Last Sunday my grandparents gave me some pocket money and with the money I brought some books and instead of snacks. The next day I took the books to school. After lunch, I showed the books to my classmates and we read together. We learned a lot from the interesting books. Both reading and sharing made me happy. 我有个难以忘怀的记忆要与大家分享。上个星期天我的爷爷奶奶给了我一些零花钱。我用钱买了些课外书而不是零食。第二天，我把这些书带到了学校。午饭过后，我把书拿出来，和我的同学一起阅读。从这些有趣的书中，我们学到了很多知识。阅读和分享让我感到很快乐。
2019中考英语热点话题作文预测10篇 话题一：安全自救 参考范文 安全对于每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点，请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。 内容提示： 1. 交通安全: 遵守交通规则, 不闯红绿灯等； 2. 食品安全:吃健康食物,不吃垃圾食品等； 3. 活动安全:进行体育锻炼时,不要弄伤自己,不私自下河游泳等。 作文要求: 1. 词数:100词左右。正文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 作文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 作文句型有变化，有复合句。 参考词汇：焦点：focus 遵守：obey 交通规则：traff ic rules... ★范文 Safety is very important to everyone.Middle school students are flowers of our country, so students’ safety is becoming the focus to us all. First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street. Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food.Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs.Besides, don’t hurt ourselves while we are pl aying. It’s dangerous to swim in the river alone, so don’t go to the river by yourselves. In a word, it’s important to remember these for us all. 话题二：沉迷网络游戏 参考范文 李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in ★范文 Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He shou ld spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to pay attention to his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him
中考英语作文获得高分的五个技巧 初中英语作文分为五档。五档：13-15分;四档：10-12分;三档：7-9分;二档：4-6分;一档：0－3。 要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点 要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中全部体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要做到要点全，围绕中心。 结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达我们应该保护环境，第一段直接说The environment is very important to everyone. All of us should do our best to protect the environment. 这样开头表明观点。 第二段：分几点说怎么保护环境，这要看题目要求了。1.我们应该操持教室卫生。We should keep our classroom clean and tidy.2. 不能随处扔垃圾，看见垃圾要主动捡起。We can’t throw rubbish everywhere. In addition, when we see the rubbish on the ground, we should pick it up.3. 看见有人破坏环境，要去阻止。If we see someone do something bad to the environment, we should come up to persuade him not to do that.4. 多参加植树等有益环境的活动。We can take part in some activities which are good for our environment, for example, planting trees. 第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等,不要复杂，因为你可能翻译不好复杂的话，要首先保证说得对。如，I think everyone can make a contribution to the environment. I hope our environment will be better and better. 逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all（首先），in addition，what’s more，moreover（都是另外的意思），in a word，（总之）。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。 语法：对写作来说，语法是硬性的要求，一定要保证语法正确才行。如，单词的使用，时态，句式等。有的句子是有固定句式或用法的，不能硬翻译，先想一想有没有固定用法，固定句式等，如果没有再去翻译着写。比如：每天步行上学虽然占用我很长时间，但我觉得这对环境和身体都有好处。Although it takes a long time to go to school on foot, I think it’s good for the environment as well as my body.这句要注意take句式的用法，表示“虽然”的让步状语从句的用法，“和”的用法（as well as,也可以说and） 亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候，要想做到更好，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。亮点包括一些高级词汇和句式的使用，与包括书写的漂亮与否，大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师, 也会喜欢书写清楚、漂亮的，并且用了丰富的词汇，句式（比如定语从句）等就更好了。所以，以后写英语作文要养成好习惯，这还需要大家认真积累知识，积累经验。 英语作文中常用加分短语和句型 1表文章结构顺序：First of all首先，第一，In the beginning 起初，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，For one thing … (for another ) 首先……（其次），At first最初，At present 现在，当今，Nowadays 现在，Recently 最近Currently 目前，最近 2.表并列补充关系的：what is more 而且；此外，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore此外，In addition此外，on the other hand 另一方面 3.表转折对比关系的：however，on the contrary，but，although+ ( 从句)，In spite of+n/doing 4.表因果关系的：because因为，as因为，so因此，therefore因此，as a result 结果是 5.表换一种方式表达：In other words换句话说 6.表进行举例说明：For example，+短语或句子; such as+n./doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact 事实上In general 一般说来Generally speaking 一般地说 8.表达自己观点：As far as I know据我所知，In my opinion As far as I am concerned , 就我而言In my point of view , 以我的观点 9.表总结：In short简言之，In a word总之，In conclusion总之，In summary总之，简言之, In all , 总之，above all 最重要，as a result 结果