2019届高考读后续写练习5篇(高二)
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专题限时集训(一) 读后续写训练1A(2016·绍兴市期中考试)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Last summer when my family was road tripping to Montana we arrived in Great Falls late one night.The kids had fallen asleep in the car,so my husband went and checked in while I stayed with the kids.When he returned with the room keys,we woke up our children and took them out of the car,through the hotel,up the elevators and into our guest room.We kept the room dark,leaving only the entry light on,and quickly put the kids into bed hoping they'd drift back to sleep.My husband went to put our waters in the minifridge only to notice some beers.“That's strange”,he said and I agreed,but having discovered left-behind drinks in hotel fridges in the past I didn't think much about it.I figured the housekeepers had forgotten to check it.In the meantime,my husband ran to the store and I went into the bathroom to get ready for bed.As I washed my face I looked down to see cardboard beer containers in the trash.I felt my heart begin to pound.We were in someone else's room!Now panicked,I checked the closet.Nothing.I then went to the dresser drawers.Nothing.My eyes scanned the door room's floor and there it was:A black bag that looked like one of ours.But it wasn't!I immediately called the front desk and the waitress in charge responded with an “Oh,my God!This is not good!”By now the kids were wideawake,jumping on the beds as I was trying to put all of our things back into our oversized suitcase.Just while we were packing our things,I heard someone was unlocking the door,which made my heart beating wildly.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
高考英语作文专题复习:读后续写10篇范文 第 1 页 共 16 页 高考英语作文专题复习:读后续写10篇范文 1. 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 Thanks to my conservative(保守的) Jewish background, I didn’t believe in angels. That is, not until Christmas Eve of 1979, when an angel brought unexpected joy to my home. After divorce, my two daughters not only lost the security of a whole family, they also tearfully left behind neighborhood friends, a familiar school, and a large house. These had all been replaced with a narrow two-bedroom apartment in a poorer part of town. I arranged to take my vocation during my children’s winter school holiday. We spent evenings planning activities: cookie baking, games, a pizza night, and evening car rides to view neighborhood holiday lights. With expectation, they seemed to be in good spirits. The week before the school break, however, terrible news of family disasters arrived. By Christmas Eve, gloom clouded our vacation plans. An afternoon outing for movie did little to improve our mood. On returning to our apartment, we were astonished to see a beautiful, six-foot Christmas tree propped(支撑) against our front door. In silent wonder, we looked back and forth, from the tree to one another and around the empty street. Excitement built, and the girls begged to keep the tree. “Maybe it’s for us,” insisted my older daughter. “Yeah,” echoed my younger child. “I bet an angel brought it to us!” I laughed aloud at the idea of an angel bringing a Christmas tree to a Jewish family. Caught up in their happiness, I pronounced the tree “ours.” We dragged it inside and headed out to the only supermarket in our small town open that late on Christmas Eve. With holiday goods marked down to half price, I gave a nod of approval to a tree stand(底座), two boxes of multicolored balls, a package of six Santa figurines(小雕像), a 100-foot string of mini lights, and one paper angel. Paragraph 1: Back home, we moved “our” tree into our tiny living room. Paragraph 2: The annual winter holiday became a family tradition. 高考英语作文专题复习:读后续写10篇范文 第 2 页 共 16 页 One possible version: Back home, we moved “our” tree into our tiny living room. Cheerfully, the girls painted some paper decorations. With delight that had been absent for months, we started to add the things we bought from the supermarket around the Christmas tree. We strung the lights, hung the multicolored balls and placed the paper angel on top. Finally, with a girl in each of my arms, we sat in the darkness, attracted by the twinkling Christmas tree lights. There was full of joy in our new home. The annual winter holiday became a family tradition. We’d feel complete with a “Jewish Angel” Christmas tree in member of our heaven-sent gift. For many years, we held our breath and experienced the familiar feeling up our arms when we placed the original paper angel on the top of each tree. Still, every Christmas Eve, my daughters and I talked about the unexpected joy that Christmas tree had brought us and about the special childhood memories at that time.
专题一读后续写读后续写作为浙江英语高考新题型,是一种常见的“给材料作文”,它要求学生在阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后,根据所给出的开头语和关键词语把这篇未写完的文章补充完整.读后续写要紧扣文章前文所述,去推想之后可能出现的情况,要展开合理、充分的想象,构思适当的情节,写成一篇完整的文章.读后续写有助于培养学生的想象能力、创新思维能力和语言表达能力.[选材特点]1.所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;2.多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强.[评分参考]阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;4.上下文的连贯性.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右(词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分);2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.[写作步骤]1.精读文章,确定文章线索,如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,这有利于“顺藤摸瓜”.2.仔细审题,明确续写要求,如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等,做到“心中有数”.3.回扣原文,想象续写内容.快速回读短文,揣摩文章的思路,结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容.4.拟写草稿,修改错词病句.结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,上下文的衔接.5.标出所使用的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语,最后誊写文字时,务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”.[方法技巧]1.在读懂原文的基础上,紧扣原文中心,以原文的结局为起点,写出故事情节的发展和变化.2.对原文故事没有写出的情节展开合理的推想,打开思路.多角度地想象出几种情况或结局,并从中加以最优选择.3.要注意前后照应,符合逻辑,防止自相矛盾.必须与上文紧密联系,使上下文融为一体.4.原文的主要角色,续文中都要安排“戏”,但不要引进影响事件结局的新角色.注意确保四个一致:1.要与原文的主题或作者的本来意图保持一致.2.要与原文的体裁、结构、写作手法保持一致.3.要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持一致.4.主要人物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一致.[写作要求]阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldn't get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks like you've got a problem,”Arthur said.“I'm afraid so.I'm in a big hurry and I can't start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said,“Thanks.If you're sure it wouldn't be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all.I'd be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other,“What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase!She thinks I'm the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened,and without another thought,he started to run.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur【经典范文】【范文一】As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”And also at the moment,Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robber.So Arthur didn't stop,but continued to run until he saw a taxi.He stopped it,jumped in with the suitcase and said to the driver,“Go to the police station,please.The man shouting behind is the bank thief!”The taxi raced away like the wind.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told the police what had happened.Obviously,the police had already learned about the robbery.They opened the suitcase and there was a large sum of money inside,as Arthur had expected.Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other ter,with the information,the police caught the robber.The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.(Words:153)【范文二】As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Thinking of the way the young man had behaved,he realized the young man might be the bank robber.So Arthur ran faster and stopped a taxi.The moment he got into the taxi,he told the driver the man shouting behind was the bank thief and asked him todrive to the nearest police station.The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went in.Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police,he heard a voice outside,“Help!Help!” To the surprise of Arthur,it was the young man.He had followed Arthur in another taxi.It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes.Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Words:158)【范文点拨】原文所给关键词分类:地点:Park Avenue,the bank人物:The young man,people,the bank thief事件:suitcases,in the back seat,loud noise of an alarm,robbery,the shouts 在续写时,除了注意原文给出的关键词,还需要注意以下线索:1.Why did the young man look worried?2.What happened?But everyone had a different answer.3.Arthur became frightened and without another thought,he started to run.A(2016·嘉兴一中质检)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the street.It was a cold,silent winter night.His mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her operation.Jack had sold everything he had,and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could.But the real world is cruel.A large amount of money was still needed.To Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack saidto himself.Then he went to the bank,his workplace,again.For several days,he observed the bank and planned a theft.The next day,he went to work as usual.Everything seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small one he always carried.At 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.However,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didn't notice him,of course.When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark,Jack came out from the bathroom.He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase.He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 ing a special key and some other tools,he then easily opened the doors of the safes.The bank's security system wasn't very good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of money.Several minutes later,Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.Paragraph 2:But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.【写作指导】本篇读后续写是一篇记叙文.主要叙述了Jack作为银行工作人员,利用职务之便,为了筹钱给妻子动手术,成功地偷走了银行的钱.根据第一段提示,此段应描写银行和社会对此事的反应;根据第二段首句提示,银行经理成为了最不幸的人.尽管Jack为妻子治好了病,但心理上也发生了很大的变化.【参考范文】After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.The police arrived at the bank very quickly,only to find no one there.The next day was a really special day for the town,which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft.The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case,of course,including Jack.The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible,even though no clues had been found yet.But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position.At last,with enough money for her operation,Jack's wife was saved.However,Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank.He could not forget what he had done to the old man.His guilt deepened as time went by.Finally,he turned himself in to the police and accepted his punishment.【导学号:85602000】B阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.It was Mother's Day and I was shopping at the local supermarket with my son who is five years old,Tenyson.As we were leaving after finishing our shopping,we realized that only minutes earlier an elderly woman had fallen over at the entrance and hit her head on the ground badly.Her husband was with her,but there was blood everywhere and the woman was embarrassed and clearly in shock.Fortunately,a lot of people stopped to help out.While we were walking towards the scene,Tenyson became very worried about what had happened to the elderly couple.He said to me,“Mom,it's not much fun falling over in front of everyone.”Seeing that there was a flower stall(摊位) at thefront of the supermarket,he added,“Why shouldn't we buy the lady a flower?It will make her feel better.” I was amazed that he'd come up with this sweet idea who was only a five years old boy.So we went over and told the flower seller what we wanted.“Just take it,”she replied.“I can't take your money for such a wonderful deed.”By now medical staff had arrived,and were looking after the injured woman.There we saw the old man was also in great horror,but he tried to comfort his wife and held her hands tightly to encourage her to be strong.We gave the flower to the woman's husband and I told him it was from my son.At that,the old man started crying and said,“Thank you very much.”He then turned to me,“You have a wonderful son.Happy Mother's Day to you.”The man bent down and gave his wife the flower,telling her who it was from.Regardless of being badly hurt,the old lady looked up at Tenyson with love and appreciation in her eyes and gave him a little smile.And my son went down his body to the injured lady and tenderly said,“Happy Mother's Day to you,too.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:After a moment,the elderly lady was taken into an ambulanceParagraph 2:One year later,【写作指导】本篇读后续写根据文中所给的关键词,故事情节以及每段开头语可推知,续写内容为老妇人被送往医院.此处还应描写儿子的心理活动,以使文章内容、情感更加充实.根据第二段开头语可知,此处要讲述一年以后的事情,为了使故事情节更加完整,学生可以将事件回归到母亲节,作者母子在超市购物与老夫妇重逢的情形.在写作时,学生可以适当运用下列表达方式:worriedly,It seemed that...,there is (are)...等.【参考范文】After a moment,the elderly lady was taken into an ambulance by medical staff and was sent to hospital.The crowd gradually scattered.Tenyson and I went home.On our way home,he asked me worriedly,“Mom,will the elderly lady be OK since she was too old and she had badly fallen over?”I looked at him and said.“The elderly lady would be fine since there were so many people coming to help her.And you did a wonderful deed,my boy.”One year later,it was Mother's Day again.As last year,I went shopping,at the local supermarket with Tenyson.Suddenly,Tenyson said excitedly,“Look,Mom.It is that old woman.”I looked that way and saw the elderly lady and her husband.It seemed that she had recovered from her injury.We walked towards them and they were happy to meet us,too.The elderly lady hugged my son and whispered to him.“I will never forget the flower you give me,my sweet boy.”C(2016·金华一中模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.Jim was walking down a dimly lit street late one evening,hoping to see his lovely children as soon as possible.As he was walking quietly,Jim heard muffled(低沉的) screams coming from behind some bushes.Alarmed,Jim stopped to listen carefully.He realized that what he was hearing was the unmistakable sound of a struggle.Thinking of the danger,he became frightened.Only yards from where Jim stood,a girl was being attacked.Jim didn't know what to do.Should he get involved in it?He was worried about his own safety and regretted having suddenly decided to take a new route home that night.He was afraid of becoming another victim.He was wondering whether he should just run to the nearest phone and call the police or went to fight with the attacker to save the unknown girl.As he struggled from within,the girl's cries were growing weaker.Jim knew hehad to act fast.Yet he knew he couldn't just walk away from this.He realized that he could not turn his back on the fate of this unknown girl,even if it meant risking his own life.Now,Jim was not a brave man,nor was he athletic.Even he himself didn't quite know where he found the moral courage and physical strength.However once he was determined to help the girl,he became strangely transformed.He ran behind the bushes and pulled the attacker off the girl,who panicked very much.Seeing Jim prevent him,the attacker became crazy and began to fight with him.Jim became fearless and they fell to the ground,where they wrestled for a few minutes until the attacker jumped up and escaped.Jim felt very tired and he couldn't catch the attacker.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150词左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:Watching the attacker run into the darkness,Jim thought of the girl.Paragraph 2:“Dad,is that you?”asked the girl in wonder and amazement as she【写作指导】本文是一篇记叙文续写.一天晚上Jim在回家的路上听到争斗的声音,考虑到危险,他有点害怕.经过激烈的思想斗争后,他还是挺身而出.结果,他救的是自己的女儿.所续写的内容要积极向上,富有正能量,能够给读者以启迪并激发出读者强烈的社会责任感和维护正义的决心.【参考范文】Watching the attacker run into the darkness,Jim thought of the girl.Breathing hard,Jim rose from the ground and walked towards her.The girl wassitting behind the bushes,sobbing.Although in the darkness Jim could hardly see the girl clearly,he could certainly sense her trembling shock.Not wanting to frighten the girl further,Jim at first spoke to her from a distance.Jim said soothingly that the attacker had run away and she was safe.There was a long pause and then he heard some words from the girl.“Dad,is that you?”asked the girl in wonder and amazement as she walked from behind the bushes.To Jim's shock,there stood Jim's youngest daughter,who began crying.Hugging Katherine,Jim also cried.After the police arrived,they told them about the attacker in detail.He felt it was a right decision to rush to fight with the attacker.Now in his children's eyes,Jim is a brave man and a hero without fearing any danger.D阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.A friend of mine whose name was John Smith had a bad memory,which made him famous.He was so forgetful that he sometimes forgot what he was talking about in the middle of a sentence.His wife had to constantly remind him about his meetings,his classes—even his meals!Once he forgot he had eaten breakfast twice,at home and at school.His wife liked to remind her neighbors,“If John didn't have his head tied on,he would forget that too!”Since Smith was a professor at a well-known university,his forgetfulness was often an embarrassment to him.It wasn't that he was not clever,as some critical people tended to say,but just very,very absentminded.One hot summer day,professor Smith decided to take his children to a seaside town about a threehour train ride away.To make the trip more interesting for his young children,he kept the name of the town a secret.However,by the time they arrived at the station,Smith forgot the name of the town he was planning to visit.Luckily,a friend of his happened to be in the station.He offered to take care of the children while Smith hurried back home to find out where he was going.The professor's wife was surprised to see him again so soon.“Oh,my dear,I forgot the name of the town.”“What? You forgot the name? Maybe one day you will forget my name!NowI'll write the name of that town on a piece of paper,and you put it in your pocket and please,please don't forget where you put it.”Satisfied that she had solved the problem,she sent her husband off again.Ten minutes later she was astonished to see him outside the house for the third time.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:“What is the matter now?”asked his wife.Paragraph 2:Hearing the cry,out rushed their neighbors,trying to find out what had happened.【写作指导】本文属于记叙文类读后续写.主要讲述了发生在一个健忘的教授身上的故事.内容上,根据记叙文的特点,故事要有曲折性,学生可以从故事情节和人物心理这两个方面进行写作.记叙文通过人物的动作来发展故事情节,学生可以在写作时尝试使用非谓语动词结构和倒装句式来表达动作的多样性.值得注意的是,续写的内容不能一味追求故事的离奇性而忽略文章的逻辑性.【参考范文】“What is the matter now?” asked his wife.“I just can't remember why I come back and where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day,”replied the professor.However,the real reason was that he forgot where he had left his children.Sensing something wrong,Mrs Smith didn't believe his words,because whenever he told a lie,he would blink his eyes usually quickly.“Tell me the truth,”ordered his wife.“As you told me,I didn't forget where I put the name of that town,but I forget the station where I left our children!” whispered the professor,his voice trembling.“What a bad memory!” shouted the wife.Hearing the cry,out rushed their neighbors,trying to find out what had happened.A fight between the couple was about to start when the professor's cell phone began to ring.His friend,whose patience had worn thin,phoned to complain.The professor apologized,got into his car and drove away,leaving behind a bunch of people outside the house.Being afraid that he would make matters worse again,Mrs Smith decided to follow him,who then called a taxi.By the time she caught up with her husband,the children were already back home safe and sound.【导学号:85602001】。
书面表达-读后续写一1、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
We all could say that we have bad days to endure as we go through life, but what does it take to have a really good day?Some would suggest that a day would be great if everything they did turned out well, or they got exactly what they needed. On the other hand,have you ever thought that what you may give someone else may be the best day you ever had especially when you put someone else’swell-being or happiness first on your list?There is special warmth available to you and that warmth can come from a helping hand, doing a small favor for a total stranger, or even a smile.I recall a day recently when I had to go to the hospital for an appointment because I wasn’t feeling well and my doctor sent me to a specialist to try and determine the cause.As I drove to the hospital, I admittedly was feeling gloomy and certainly wasn’t on top of my game. As I approached the hospital, I began my search for a parking spot, a spot that was hard to come with everyone else trying to do the same thing. I finally found a spot not too far from the entrance to the hospital.As I got out and brought my change out of my pocket, I noticed a man looking somewhat upset standing in front of a parking meter two cars away. He seemed to be searching his pockets for what I supposed was change for the meter.Although,I really didn’t feel that great, I thought that I should at least go over to him and find out if I could help him. As I approached him, he turned to look at me, feeling at a loss not knowing what to do. I asked him if he had a problem I could help with, and he said, without hesitation, that he had no change at all because he left it in his houseonly thinking about visiting his sick wife.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
浙江省2019年高考英语二轮复习读后续写专练(一)至(四)训练读后续写专练答案提供详尽解析,旨在指导考生拓展写作思路,提升写作能力。
读后续写专练一A 2018·金丽衢十二校高三第二次联考阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was an unusually quiet day in the emergency room on December 25.Quiet, that is, except for those who were standing around the nurses’station complaining about having to work Christmas Day. I was triage nurse that day and had just been out to the waiting room to clean up. Just then five bodies showed up at my triage desk, a pale woman and four small children. “Are you all sick” I asked suspiciously. “Yes,” she said weakly and lowered her head. But when it came to descriptions of their present problems, things got a little vague. Two of the children had headaches, but the headaches weren’t accompanied by the normal body language of holding the head or trying to keep it still. Two children had earaches, but only one could tell me which ear was affected. The mother complained of a cough but seemed to work to produce it. Something was wrong, but I didn’t say anything. I explained to the mother that it might be alittle while before a doctor saw her. She responded, “Take your time; it’s warm in here.” She turned and, with a smile, guided her children into the waiting room. On a hunch call it nursing judgment, I checked the chart after the admitting clerk had finished registering the family. No address they were homeless. The waiting room was warm. I looked out at the family huddled by the Christmas tree. The smallest one was pointing at the television and exclaiming something to her mother. The oldest one was looking at her reflection in a decoration on the Christmas tree. I went back to the nurses’station and mentioned we had a homeless family in the waiting room.The nurses, complaining about working Christmas, turned to compassion for a family just trying to get warm on Christmas. Then our team went into action, much as we do when there’s a medical emergency.But this one was a Christmas emergency. A special Christmas party was to be held. 注意1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
写作提升练(五)读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的短文。
Want to know how to survive a plane crash?What about a terrorist attack?To put your mind at ease in nearly any situation,you can almost guarantee your survival if you never leave the house without 3 necessary items,i.e.a lighter(打火机),alifestraw(生命吸管) and a raincoat.Right off the place full of danger,your first instinct(本能) might be to search for help the minute you realize you’re in trouble.But survival experts insist you should stay where you are until help finds you,instead;doing so will make it easier for the search and rescue teams to locate your location.What should you do until then,you ask?Prepare to hunker down(盘腿坐下) for the long run.That’s where your three pieces of survival necessities come intoplay,Stewart says.For one,you should have something to start a fire on you at all times.Fire-starting tools are inexpensive to purchase,and you can easily carry them around in a backpack or pant pocket.But even without a fancy item,all you really need is something to light the first flame.“You can use cotton balls covered in petroleum jelly(凡士林油) as a fire starter,”Stewart told USA TODAY.“They are water resistant and will start a fire with just a spark.”Second,you’ll need something to make your drinking water fit to drink,such as a canteen(饭盒) that can boil water.Stewart recommends buying a $20 lifestraw,which “can be struck into the muddiest pool of water you can find and you suck the water out like a straw.” Any doubt?It could still save your life,Stewa rt says.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头词或句子已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【读后续写专项练习】人教版高中英语新课标2019-2020学年一轮复习读后续写练习word版含答案一轮复习:续写专项练习阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
1.It was in New Hampshire. Cody was an 11-year-old boy. Just like other boys, he enjoyed running around the lake,__and sometimes picked yellow daisies for his mother's kitchen table along the paths. But the thing he liked best was fishing. He went fishing whenever he had got a chance and he was proud of his fishing skills.On the day before that year's bass(鲈鱼) season opened, he and his father were fishing early in the evening, catching sunfish and perch with worms. Then he tied on a small silver lure(鱼饵) and practised casting. The lure hit the water, stirring up coloured ripples in the sunset, and then silver ripples as the moon rose over the lake. It was an unusually quiet evening. The gentle wind from the lake was so refreshing.After what seemed a long time, Cody noticed his fishing pole doubled over, and he knew at once that something huge was on the other end. His father watched with admiration as the boy skilfully brought the fish beside the bank.Finally, he very carefully lifted the exhausted fish from the water. It was the largest one he had ever seen, but it was a bass.The boy and his father looked at the handsome fish, gills playing back and forth in the moonlight. The father lit a match and looked at his watch. It was 10 pm—two hours before the season opened. He looked at the bass, then at Cody.“You'll have to put the fish back, son,” he said.“Dad!” cried the boy.“There will be other fish,”said his father gently but firmly.“Not as big as this one,”cried the boy again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
读后续写1A pig in the familyI was a young veterinary(兽医的) student who had been asked to make the rounds of the local farms one week in the absence of my boss,Dr Johnson.Most of the week was uneventful; I saw the usual horse vaccinations(接种疫苗),sprained dog paws,and sick cows.However,when I got to MacPherson's farm,I saw something_extraordinary.While I was talking to MacPherson,a pig came walking around the corner of the barn.What was extraordinary about it was that the pig had three_artificial_legs!I asked MacPherson about this curious animal.Why would anybody give a pig even one artificial leg,much less three?He drawled(慢吞吞地说),“Wow,this isn't an ordinary pig.Let me tell you.One day I was working on my farm,and I jumped off the tractor to check the tire,which was kind of wobbly(摇晃的).Wouldn't you know it,the tractor started to roll of its own accord,and trapped me right there under the wheel.Just then old Pinky—the_pig,saw what had happened and hurried back to the house and fastened his teeth inmy_wife's dress,and wouldn't let go until he dragged her out to where I was lying,and then she got the tractor off me.That's a smart pig—my lifesaver,I'd say.”I was quite impressed.I knew pigs were pretty intelligent,but I had never heard of a pig doing anything like that.“That's amazing.” I said,“But that still doesn't explain the three artificial limbs.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018-2019浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. 〝I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.〝Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落〕somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
高中读后续写范文高中生活,那可真是一段让人又爱又恨的时光。
就像一杯混合了各种滋味的果汁,有时甜得让人陶醉,有时酸得让人皱眉。
今天我就跟您讲讲其中一段让我至今都难以忘怀的经历。
那是一个阳光明媚的早晨,微风轻轻拂过校园的树梢,鸟儿在枝头欢快地歌唱。
我像往常一样,背着沉甸甸的书包,迈着不情愿的步伐走进了教室。
第一节课是语文课,老师在讲台上激情澎湃地讲解着课文,而我却在下面偷偷地打着哈欠,心思早就飞到了九霄云外。
突然,老师的声音提高了八度:“下面我要找一位同学来回答这个问题!”我的心猛地一紧,暗叫不好。
果不其然,老师的目光扫过全班,最后定格在了我的身上:“就你吧,来回答一下!”我硬着头皮站了起来,脑子一片空白,支支吾吾半天也没说出个所以然来。
老师的脸色渐渐阴沉下来,狠狠地瞪了我一眼:“上课不好好听讲,站着清醒清醒!”我红着脸,低着头,尴尬地站在那里,感觉全班同学的目光都像针一样扎在我的身上。
好不容易熬到了下课,我一屁股坐在座位上,长舒了一口气。
同桌凑过来,笑嘻嘻地说:“你可真够倒霉的,被老师抓了个正着。
”我无奈地白了他一眼:“哼,还不是昨晚熬夜写作业,今天没精神。
”正说着,班长走了过来,一本正经地说:“老师让你下课去她办公室一趟。
”我的心顿时又提到了嗓子眼,心想:这下完了,肯定要挨批了。
怀着忐忑不安的心情,我来到了老师的办公室。
老师坐在办公桌前,正在批改作业。
看到我进来,她放下手中的笔,抬起头看着我,眼神中没有了课堂上的严厉,反而多了几分关切:“知道我为什么叫你来吗?”我低着头,小声说道:“老师,我知道错了,上课不该走神。
”老师轻轻叹了口气:“我知道高中的学习压力大,但是上课认真听讲是最基本的。
你要调整好自己的作息时间,保证充足的睡眠,这样才能提高学习效率。
”我连连点头,心里暗暗发誓,以后一定不再犯这样的错误。
从老师办公室出来后,我感觉心情格外沉重。
回到教室,我拿出课本,认真地听起课来。
接下来的几节课,我都全神贯注,不敢有丝毫懈怠。
第 1 页 共 7 页 读后续写 一、考纲解读 提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续
写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
二、原题分析 ①原文材料350词以内,所续写文章150词左右。
②原文多是情节丰富的记叙文,偶有少量的议论文。 ③原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语,所续写短文应使用5个以上。 ④续写部分分为两段..,每段开头语已经给出。
⑤续写部分分为两大类别: 1)半开放性质。必须依据文章的语境逻辑推理续写。 2)完全开放性质。可以依据文章的思路,自己发挥。 三、注意事项 ①词数要求。②与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。③内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。
④应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。⑤上下文的连贯性。 四、评分原则 ①本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
②评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。 ③词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分。 ④评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑: (1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度; (2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况; (3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性; (4)上下文的连贯性。 ⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 ⑥如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。
续写导练(一) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 When I was eleven years old, I had a big accident. I get scared even now when I think about that time. I went skating near my house. There were many people, and I saw some of them falling on the ice. It was my first time to go ice skating, so I was nervous. I was wondering how to skate. I went with a friend who was very skillful. He spent some time teaching me how to skate,but I didn’t learn much. He left me and skated all around. As soon as he left, I fell down. I envied the other people because they 第 2 页 共 7 页
could skate well. I was bored because I kept falling so I took off my skates and just walked around on the ice in my shoes. It was cold and my hands were frozen. Suddenly, I stepped on something that was not hard. What was it? It was a weak place in the ice. When I stepped there, I sank under the ice. I thought that I was going to die, but I did my best to grab something to get out from under the ice. I tried to grab the edge of the ice, but it was very difficult for an eleven-year-old. It seemed like a very long time, like a year. Then, fortunately, someone helped me. He grabbed my arms and pulled me up. So, I lived and I’m still alive today. I thanked him. At that time, my friend came back. I was annoyed at him because he was supposed to take care of me, but he didn’t. He was embarrassed. When I took a taxi home, the taxi driver was surprised and asked what had happened. I didn’t want to say anything because I was tired and scared. Even now, whenever I think about that time, I feel uncomfortable. I don’t want to go skating again even now. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: It was long before I went skating once again, ______________________________________ __________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: However, ever since then I haven’t found any time to go skating, ___________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写导练(二) 第 3 页 共 7 页
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 Mr Brown lived in a house less than two miles away from his office. He was therefore able to drive home every day for lunch. Every time he drove in the middle of the day, he found cars were parked in the road outside his house, and there was no room for his own car. He had to drive two blocks farther before he could find a place to park. Then he had to walk home. This made him very angry. He had put up a board which read “No Parking!” in the garden facing the road, but nobody seemed to pay attention to it. People only obeyed a police notice, but not a private one. There were no parked cars where there was a blue board with white letters on it: Police Notice—No Parking! Mrs Brown suggested that he should steal a police notice. But he dared not, being afraid of going to prison. She then suggested that he make one just like a police notice. He said he was not a policeman and couldn’t use the word “police”. He decided that he must find a way out and started thinking hard. For several days, the smell of paint filled the house. One night he showed his life a new notice board. It was painted in white letters on a blue board: Polite Notice—No Parking! “Oh,” Mrs Brown said, “but you told me you weren’t going to use the word ‘police’. That’s exactly like a police notice.” “Is it?” he asked. “Look again.” She began to laugh, “You are really rather clever.” 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Why did Mrs Brown say her husband was really rather clever? ___________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________