专四写作复习指导
一、整体介绍
1、复习规划
⑴. 考试时间：4月第3个周六上午8:30-10:45
⑵. 词汇过关：《专四词汇词根+联想记忆法》
⑶. 精析真题（99年至今），背诵范文
⑷. 模拟练习：至少4次
作文：10：00-10：35
便条：10：35-10：45
2、大纲解读及评分标准
⑴. 文体：论说类、记叙描写类
⑵. 评分标准：
①思想内容：50%
②组织架构：10%
③语法：20%
④用词：15%
⑤得体：5% 优秀（15-13分）良好（12-10分）中等（9-7分）不及格（6-4分）
低分（3-0分）
⑶. 分数构成：基准分+印象分
①. 基准分：思想内容+结构+语言
思想内容：观点清楚，前后不矛盾，并有充分、恰当的例证说明自己的观点——论证充分，自圆其说
组织结构：细节安排有条理，叙述层次清楚，段落之间联系自然，句子连贯——逻辑严谨，
3段最好(1st段:40-50词; 2nd段:120-130词; 3rd段:40-50词)
语法：没有句子结构上的重大错误。拼写、标点、大小写等正确或有个别错误。引用原文适度，不超作者文章的10％——正确无误，尽量高级，词汇替换
eg: Nowadays, the Internet has become part of people’s life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
用词：用词（包括习惯用语）准确、恰当——准确无误，丰富多变
得体：语言得体，语气恰当，以理服人，有说服力——有理有据
②．印象分
书写：清晰，字迹整齐漂亮（黑色水笔）
表达：正确、正规、可读（不要缩写eg: 3ks. 3Q. CU）
标点：逗号，句号
修改：不修改，少修改（草稿纸、模板句式）；
严禁使用修正带、修改液或用胶带粘
题目：大小写——实词大写，虚词小写eg: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online？
二、结构
1、文章结构
第一段：给出观点；
第二段：论证观点（原因论证、举例论证、细节论证）
第三段：总结观点
2011年
Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of tax private car owners would have to pay would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control the number of cars and reduce pollution in the
city. But others don’t think so. What is your opinion? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Should Private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution?
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
2008年The Benefits for V olunteering
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
2010年Should College Students Hire Cleaners
In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
2、段落结构
第一段：给出观点
⑴第一句：Background information：背景介绍
⑵第二句：General talk of the topic：引出主题
⑶第三句：Thesis：我的观点
2004年Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?
In the contemporary society, young people tend to phone more often than write to each other. Therefore, some claim that phones will replace letter writing. Though phones are more convenient than letter writing, from my perspective, it will not put letter writing end.
2003年The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood
In the competitive society, quite a proportion of people live under great pressure from education, career and families. How can we live happy life? I believe it is vital that we keep a good mood under whatever circumstances.
第二段：论证观点
⑴第一部分（1句话）：引言
There are numerous reasons that may account for my point and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.
⑵第二部分：论证(argument)
①分论点一+论据(2-3句)
②分论点二+论据(2-3句)
*万能理由（一）：分论点提出角度
Live in A Big City or Small City?
①方便(convenient convenience)
It is convenient.
It is of convenience.
It has found its convenience during the last years.
It has found its seriousness during the last years.
It has found its importance during the last years.
句型：sth.has found its…during the last years.
②有效性(effective)
③环境好(environment-friendly)
④健康(health)
⑤沟通(communication)
⑥安全(secure security )
⑦知识(knowledge)
⑶第三部分：小结(1句)—可有可无
第三段：总结观点
⑴第一句：重申论点（Restate of the thesis）
2002年The Best Way to Stay Healthy
All in all, I believe the best way to keep fit is taking proper physical exercise.
2003年The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood
Thus, we need not only to build a strong body but also keep a good mood in order to face the pressures or challenges of modern society.
⑵第二句：建议措施/展望未来（suggestions/ future）
2009年Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
Therefore, some actions need to be taken to curb(限制) the development of tourism. Only in this way can we witness the ideal scene in which all the people can enjoy their life to the utmost. 三、语言设计
1、词汇
⑴准确性
extensive knowledge
fierce competition
⑵多样性（注意：尽量使用晚学到的单词）
2000年The Importance of Extracurricular Activities
很多人认为课外活动很重要。
Many people think that extracurricular activities is very important.
*“许多，很多”many: a host of/
an overwhelming number of/
a great many/ a good many
越来越多的人认为课外活动很重要。
More and more people think that extracurricular activities is very important.
“越来越多的人”more and more people: people in growing /increasing numbers
*“越来越”More and more: increasing/ increasingly
Competition is becoming increasingly fierce.
*“认为”think: maintain/ claim/ believe/argue/ hold/ insist/ assume
take/ hold the view/ opinion
*“重要”important: significant/ vital/essential /crucial
be of great importance
play an important/essential role in…
*“非常”very: extraordinarily/ extremely
→A host of people hold that extracurricular activities is of extraordinary significance/ play an important role in our daily life.
→People in increasing numbers hold that extracurricular activities is of extraordinary significance/ play an important role in our daily life.
*“不同”different: distinct/ dissimilar/ various/ a diversity of
*“得到”get: obtain / gain/ acquire/ attain/ have access to
1999年Advertising on Television
“广告的一个主要功能是可以帮助顾客找到有用的产品”
One of the main functions of advertising is to help consumers to find useful products.
*“帮助”help: assist sb in doing sth./ aid sb. in sth/aid in doing sth
*“有用的”useful: conducive/ beneficial/ instrumental
*“使用”use: make use of/ employ
→One of the main functions of advertising is to assist consumers in finding beneficial products.
*“漂亮”beautiful: pretty/ cute/ attractive/ charming/ elegant
*“经常”often: frequently/ constantly
2. 语法
⑴倒装句
eg I will never give up.
→Never will I give up.
eg. I will never marry him.
→Never will I marry him.
①否定词置于句首
*not, no, little, few
*never, hardly, seldom, rarely, scarcely…
否定词+情态动词/助动词+主语+实意动词
eg. I never remain suspicious of that …
→Never do I remain suspicious of that…
②Only+状语置于句首
“只有按照这样的方式我们才能……”
Only in this way can we do……
Only+状语+情态动词/助动词+主语+实意动词
eg. We can settle the problem of urban air contamination only in this way.
→Only in this way can we settle the problem of urban air contamination.
（2）虚拟语气
“是该做……的时候啦”
It is high time that sb. did sth(过去式).
eg. It is high time we did something to change the situation.
It is high time that we took the environmental protection into consideration
It is high time that parents raised their consciousness of protecting their children against the harm of the Internet.
（3）强调句
*It is … that …
eg. I love you.
→It is I who love you.
→It is you who I love.
→I do love you.
*sb./ sth. do/did/does+动词原形+谓语动词(原形)
eg. The problem becomes serious.
→The problem does become serious.
→The problem does find its seriousness.
eg. The problem becomes popular.
→The problem does become popular.
→The problem does find its popularity.
⑷插入语
①位置：主谓之间
②内容
*主语+rather than anyone/anything else
eg. I love you.
→I, rather than anyone else, love you.
in conclusion/summary/brief
*undoubtedly
eg. Internet is becoming more and more important.
→Internet, undoubtedly, is becoming increasingly important.
*in conclusion/summary/brief
eg. In conclusion, Public transportation should be given a strategic position in the city’s sustainable development.
Public transportation, in conclusion, should be given a strategic position in the city’s sustainable development.
3、句子
如何写长句？
先写主干，后加修饰。
⑴定语修饰（修饰名词）
①adj.修饰
adj. + n.
②n. 修饰
people of china
sense of safety
③定语从句
人+who, whom, whose
物+that, which
时间+when
地点+where
eg. To write a letter, you just need a piece of paper, a pen, an envelop and a stamp, which all together costs no more than 1 Yuan.
⑵状语从句
when, before, after （时间状语从句）
where (地点状语从句)
because=in that, since, as, for（原因状语从句）
if, unless（条件状语从句）
although, though, while，even if… (让步状语从句）
范文分析
2007年
Nowadays, the internet has become part of people’s life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
范文一（5分）
I think it is wise to make friends online . First , Now job’s pressure more and more . Everyone cann’t better talk face to face. Second, Friends online may speak everything of them.
Third, Friends online may help something of them and solvle some problem.
The forth, Friends online may gain more knowledge and information.
All in all, make friends online is wise in the society. Make friends online cann’t change a 潮流。Everyone may enjoy Everyone with his friends online!
范文一（5分）
1、内容：论据不清，不知所云
2、结构：段落随意划分，不合规范
3、语言：通篇中式英语，语法错误极多。单词量有限，字数严重不足。
范文二（7分）
People would like to make the best of Internet to broaden their minds, they can get large information, they can play interesting games, even they can make friends online. While a question has been arisen: “is It wise to make friends online?”
The Internet is not reality, you can not trust a person through the Internet. Now I would not like to talk about the advantages of the Internet, while the disadvantages you can not deny is existing.
Many people make the most of it to do bad things, such as trick you that he is need of money eagerly and wise you would help him as a friend, or character as your friend to inform your family that you are in danger and need money to save you etc. All the things can be seen on the newspapers, magazines, etc. So it is unwise to trust a so called online friend.
I can Jump to the conclude that it is unwise to make friends online, because it is not reality, also we can not trust others without knowing the person well. So let’s do utmost to make the base use of the advantages of the Internet. cherish the friends around us!
范文二（7分）
1. 内容：首段结尾与二段开头，没有表明观点。读者一头雾水。
2. 结构：几乎没有关联词，粗浅分了三个部分。
3. 语言：生涩, 第二段表达不清，错误百出。
范文三（9分）
There is a tendency we can’t deny that most of us have access to Internet. Subsequently, making friends online has become a common thing. Some may argue that making friends online isn’t a good choice, however, personally, I hold the idea that it is wiser to make friends online.
On one hand, it’s a kind of company. When we live in our apartment, we seldom communicate to the neighbors, esp. that our family members are outside; the sense of feel lonely overcomes us. Therefore, in order to get rid of this, we need to find someone to talk with. Then making friends online is a good way to solve this problem. Meanwhile, we can not only gain friendship, but also exchange our minds. In this way, we obtain a sense of satisfaction from talking with a stranger who will tend to say beautiful words toward us.
On the other hand, making friends online help us enrich our sight. We make friends, coming from different areas, accordingly, we obtain a lot of information that we can’t get from our limited knowledge. Sometimes, friends online encourage us to read helpful books where will be able to learn more.
All in all, from my point of view, making friends is helpful for enriching our knowledge and helping us encourage with others, hence, it’s advisable to make friends online as long as we use it properly.
范文三（9分）
1. 内容：观点比较明确，但论据不足，没有力度，表达苍白。
2. 结构：比较清晰，关联词比较合理，整体字数偏多。
3. 语言：比较生涩，错误较多，多句表达不清，但能理解
范文四（12分）
Nowadays, it has been a fashion to make friends online, and more and more teenagers, college students and even many adults will spend a lot of time chatting with people on the Internet. But I
don’t think it is wise to make friends online.
Firstly, most of people will not reveal their real identity on the Internet, which will not enable you to make true friends. Just imagine a young lady you are talking with may be an old man, and I’m sure we will feel very bad when we are exposed to the truth.
Besides, the friends online can bring bad effect to people, especially for teenagers. The unhealthy stuff will both physically and psychologically influence young people and, in a certain degree, can lead an unproper way to their whole life.
And last, making friends online can do bad to the relationship between you and you family and friends in real life. Being addicted to the Internet makes you ignore the reality. You will be angry about your parents’persuading and after a long time, maybe you will find you have lost the ability of how to communicate with others properly.
In a word, it is not wise to make friends online. I hope everyone can focus on the reality instead of wasting too much time making friends on the Internet.
范文四（12分）
内容：观点明确。
结构：清晰。关联词准确，各部分字数比例合理。
语言：比较流畅，有一定说服力，错误占10%。细节问题，不影响理解。整句错误较少。范文五（14分）
’s life, making friends online enjoys its great popularity, young people. However, is it wise to make friends online, as many parents and teachers are worrying about? As far as I am concerned, I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online.
Firstly, too much attention to online friends distracts your concerns to the true friends and families in the real world. If we look around, we often find a lot of young people staying online and chatting with online friends all day long. By the same time the communication between them and the friends around them are becoming less and less. Therefore, they feel lonelier in real life and spend more time on Internet.
Besides, online friends are often disguised. A large number of cases have proved that many criminals make use of Internet to cheat of money or love. Even if they are not cheaters, they tend to be totally different persons when you get in actual contact with them. There’s always a gap between the real world and the imaginary one.
Nevertheless , it’s unwise to make friends online. Those who are indulging in Internet should cast your eyesight to the friendship and kinship in the real life. What you should do is to seek solution, but not to escape.
*pay attention to; attach importance to
范文五（14分）
1、内容：观点明确，论据充分，表达到位。首尾呼应，说服力很强，有实证、有例证。
2、结构：结构清楚，关联词准确，各部分比例合理。
3、语言：自然流畅，语气恰当，用词准确，几乎没有错误
四、第一段写作
文章类型
2011：should private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution
2009：Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
——正反对比利弊类
2006：some students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow’s money is better. What do you think?
——正反对比选择类
2008: The benefits for volunteering
2003: The importance of keeping a good mood
——给定观点类
2005: My idea of a University Arts Festival
2002: The best way to stay healthy
——自由发挥类
第一类：正反对比利弊类
2011：Should Private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution
2010: Should College Students Hire Cleaners?
2009: Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
2007: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
1999: A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television
第一段
第一句：Background information 背景介绍
领域/社会在某个时间发生了巨大的变化，但与此同时，关于…主题…却引起了一场热烈的讨论。
The society has changes.
The society has had amazing changes during the last years.
The last years have witnessed amazing/ remarkable/ incredible changes in the society.
A debate was triggered as to…
A debate/ A discussion/ An argument/ A contentious issue was triggered/ stimulated/ inspired as to…
eg. The last years have witnessed amazing changes in the society, while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to whether private car owners should be taxed for pollution/ whether college students should hire cleaners/ whether tourism brings harm to the environment.
第二句：General talk of the topic 引出主题
一些人认为…对我们有好处，而另一些人持相反观点。
Some indicate …can benefit us, while others take the opposite stand.
认为：maintain/ claim/ believe/
argue/ hold/ insist/ assume
take/ hold the view/ opinion
第三句：Thesis 我的观点
我同意前者/后者。
Personally, I prefer the former/ latter.
I, personally, prefer the former/ latter.
模板句型：The last year has witnessed amazing changes in society/领域，while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to 主题. Some indicate …can benefit us, while others take the opposite stand. I, personally, prefer the former/ latter.
2011年：Should Private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution?
The last year has witnessed amazing changes in society，while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to whether private car owners should be taxed for pollution. Some indicate tax on cars can benefit us, while others take the opposite stand. I, personally, prefer the former.
第二类：正反对比选择类
2006：Some students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow’s money is better. What do you think?
2004: Will phones kill letter writing.
第一段
第一句：背景介绍
领域/社会在某个时间发生了巨大的变化，但与此同时，关于…主题…却引起了一场热烈的讨论。
The last year has witnessed amazing changes in society/领域，while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to 主题.
第二句：引出主题（两方观点）
一些人认为A是最好的选择，然而其他人持相反的观点。
Some take A as the premier choice, while others hold the opposite opinion..
第三句：我的观点
我同意前者/后者。
Personally, I prefer the former/ latter.
I, personally, prefer the former/ latter
模板句型：The last year has witnessed amazing changes in society/ 领域，while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to 主题. Some take A as the premier choice, while others hold the opposite opinion. I, personally, prefer the former/ latter.
2006年：Some students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow’s money is better. What do you think?
The last year has witnessed amazing changes in society，while in the meantime, a contentious issue was triggered as to whether students should save money or use tomorrow’s money. Some take saving/using tomorrow’s money as the premier choice, while others hold the opposite opinion. I, personally, prefer the former.
第三类：给定观点类
2008: The benefits for volunteering
2003: The importance of keeping a good mood
2001: Travel broadens the mind
2000: The importance of extracurricular activities
第一段
第一句：背景介绍
…主题… 近年在学生/ 人们中间非常普及流行。
…主题… has found its popularity among students/ people during the last years.
第二句：引出主题
我非常同意你的观点。
As for me, I can not agree more with it.
（比较级的否定表示最高级）
写作中的比较级：
1.“说比做容易”
“Easier said than done”
more A than B
A rather than B
prefer A to B
2. 无比较级
⑴. 极限形容词
perfect
⑵. “A比B年长”
A is senior to B.
B is junior to A
⑶. “A比B好”
A is superior to B.
B is inferior to A.
eg. Phones are superior to letter.
3. 比较级的否定式=最高级
I can not agree more with it.
I can not thank you more.
第三句：我的观点（重申观点）
…主题…毫无疑问已经成为我们的生活/成功的必不可少部分/因素。
…主题…should undoubtedly be an indispensible part/ factor of our life/ success.
*“重要”important: significant/ vital/ essential/ crucial
eg. 2003: The importance of keeping a good mood
Keeping a good mood should undoubtedly be an indispensible part/ factor of our life/ success.
模板句型：…主题…has found its popularity among students/ people during the last years. As for me, I can not agree more with it. …主题…should undoubtedly be an indispensible part/ factor of our life/ success.
2001年：Travel broadens the mind
Travelling has found its popularity among students during the last years. As for me, I can not agree more with it. It should undoubtedly be an indispensible part/ factor of our life.
2000年：The importance of extracurricular activities
Extracurricular activity has found its popularity among students during the last years. As for me, I can not agree more with it. It should undoubtedly be an indispensible part/ factor of our life. 2008年：The benefits for volunteering
V olunteering has found its popularity among students during the last years. As for me, I can not agree more with it. It should undoubtedly be an indispensible part/ factor of our life.
第四类：自由发挥类
2005: My idea of a University Arts Festival
2002: The best way to stay healthy
第一段
第一句：背景介绍
…主题… 近期在校园/社会中非常引人关注。
Noting in the campus/ society has been more striking than the topic of …主题…
(比较级的否定表最高级)
第二句：引出主题
一些人习以为常的认为…, 但对我来说我不赞成这种观点。
Some take it for granted that …一般人的观点…，but to be frank, I can not agree with it.
第三句：我的观点
我认为…
I never remain suspicious of the view that …
Never do I remain suspicious of the view that…
模板句型：Noting in the campus/ society has been more striking than the topic of …主题…Some take it for granted that …一般人的观点…，but to be frank, I can not agree with it. Never do I remain suspicious of the view that…
2005年：My idea of a University Arts Festival
Nothing in the campus has been more striking than the topic of arts festival. Some take it for granted that arts festival is just dancing and singing performance, but to be frank, I can not agree with it. Never do I remain suspicious of the view that the arts festival is supposed to the feast of arts.
五、第二段写作
1. 论证(argument)
①分论点一+论据(2-3句)
②分论点二+论据(2-3句)
2. 论证模式
一、原因论证
引言：