2020年7月和9月四级写作强化课程（何凯
文）
重点关注：
议论文：
第一：个人面对困难的坚强和勇敢。
第二：社会面对苦难的团结和合作。
应用文：
书信：
感谢信：抗击新冠病毒的医务和其他一线人员。
倡议信：响应国家号召，积极配合防疫努力。
基本关注：
第一：个人品质的其他话题：2020 考研作文：习惯
第二：社会道德的其他话题：诚信
第三：科技环境的话题：
第四：传统文化的弘扬：Chinese traditional medicine Dragon boat’s festival 端午节
内容：别跑题
形式：分三段
语言：正确和多样（多变） 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
如果出现发热，咳嗽，请及时就医检查。
If you have fever or cough, please see a doctor in time.
,please go to the hospital for the medical assistance without any
hesitation.
避免前往人群密集处，在公共场所要戴口罩。
Avoid going to crowded places.
Wear medical masks in public places.
Keep proper social distance and avoid gathering in public areas.
不信谣，不传谣
Rumor
Don’t trust the rumor or air the rumor.
We have to learn how to keep information balance and mentally
alert when facing news or rumors from different perspectives.
补充知识点：
When we are facing news or rumors from different perspectives.
状语从句的主语和主句的主语一致的时候；
状语从句的动词是 be 动词，就可以省略状语从句的主语和 be 动
词。（写作中的提升句子的连贯性的一种方法。） 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
基本的语言提升方式：
一. 句子主干的正确。
动词的搭配（性质）！（五大基本句型）
Give/offer: give sb/sth sth
Give you a book
Give the society the positive strength
Give the dull life some colors
Give the miserable life the sweet
Make sth/sb sth (使…成为)
我们总是能取得最后的胜利。
Last/final
We have always won in the end. (主谓)
We have always attained the final success. （主谓宾）We have always offered the end the success. （主谓双宾）We have always made the final the triumph. (主谓宾+宾补) We are always winners of final success. (主系表)
二. 增加修饰:
定语：名词措施 effective and proper measure
Proper and prompt measure
同位语：名词（斜杠青年）//////// 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
Wearing medical mask, the proper and prompt measure, will prevent disastrous consequences when fighting the pandemic,
which is denied by the president of the United states of America,
Donald Trump, the famous science-doubter and Mr. Know-all. 状语：时间，地点，目的，方式，结果，原因
我们必须坚持战斗，因为我们就是战士。
We must keep fighting, because we are fighters.
在疫情封闭期间，我们必须勇敢。
We must be strong during the pandemic
We have to be strong and brave during the lockdown due to the
pandemic.
Note: 还可以把任何成分都作为插入语！
,…,
我坚信这种精神将代代相传，永垂不朽！
This great spirit will be inherited by future generations, I firmly
believe, and will be alive forever(immortal). (主谓结构充当插入语) 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
无论敌人有多么的强大，困难有多么的艰巨，我们一定会奉陪到
底。
Strong
Tough
Finish this fight
Carry the fight to the end
However strong the enemy is
However tough the setback is
We will, however strong the enemy is and however tough the setback is, carry the fight to the end.
No matter how strong the enemy is and how tough setbacks are,
we will carry the fight to the end.
第三：连接句子
1. 从句：（定语从句）
抗击疫情的战斗，没有枪声没有硝烟，但却无比严峻，我们需要面对病毒，怀疑，恐惧，谣言还有歧视。
The war against the pandemic, without gunshots or fire smoke,
is extremely severe, which demands us to confront virus, doubts,
fears, rumors and discrimination bravely.
2. 同位语：
中国是世界上第二大经济体。 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
中国也是一个发展中国家。
中国是拥有 14 亿人口的大国。
中国在这次抗疫中展现出了大国担当。
China, the second largest economy of the world, a developing
country with a population of 1.4 billion, shows the world the
responsibility of a great power during the fight against the
pandemic.
shows its role as a major country in the fight against the pandemic.
deserves the reputation of a great country.
assumes the duty of great power
3. 现在分词和过去分词短语：
两个句子主语相同；可以去掉一个主语，将其中的一个动词做以下的变化；
Am/is/are 可以变为 being
Was/were 变为 having been
Do/does 变为 doing
Did 变为 having done
Be done 变为 done
我们面对选择的时候应该勇敢和理性。 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
We face choices.
We should be brave and rational.
Facing choices, we should be brave and rational.
=When facing choices, we should be brave and rational. 我们曾经被困难打到过。
但这次我们绝不屈服。
We were defeated by setbacks in the past.
We will never surrender this time.
Defeated by setbacks in the past, we will never surrender this time.
=Although defeated by setbacks in the past, we will never surrender this time.
阳光下有棵小树。
小树长得很茂密。
A young tree stands in the sunshine.
= In the sunshine stands(系动词) a young tree.
主系表倒装为表系主
The young tree grows vigorously. 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
=In the sunshine stands a young tree, growing vigorously.
4. 独立主格结构：
两个句子的主语不同。可以保留两个主语！
将其中的一个句子的动词做以下的变化：
Am/is/are 可以变为 being (可以省略)
Was/were 变为 having been
Do/does 变为 doing
Did 变为 having done
Be done 变为 done
最后两个句子写成一个句子！
把酒问青天
Holding a cup of wine, I ask the blue sky.
下面四种都正确！
With cup of wine being in my hand, I ask the blue sky.
A cup of wine being in my hand, I ask the blue sky.
A cup of wine in my hand, I ask the blue sky.
With cup of wine in my hand, I ask the blue sky. 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
写作的思路（模板）的学习：
模板是没有罪的！
应用文：按题干要求写作，写满 150 字，要点覆盖到！
广告；通知；书信；
议论文：（命题作文，图画作文，图表作文）
1.引入：背景句；描述图画；描述图表
2.论述：论点+论据（调查，例子）
3.呼应：重申，展望，建议
According to a survey, one of the major obstacles to the development of e-commerce is the lack of a product quality supervision system.
One of the biggest barriers for the growth of e-commerce, according to a survey, is the absence of product quality guarantee
mechanism.
根据一项调查，电商发展的主要障碍之一就是产品质量监督体系的缺失。
插入语 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
One of the biggest barriers for the growth of e-commerce, according to a survey, is the absence of product quality guarantee
mechanism.
例子：
钟南山院士
马云先生
乔布斯
马斯克
扎克伯格、
良好的习惯对于一个人的成长和成功非常重要。
钟南山院士就是一个很好的例子。
The desirable and positive habits matter a lot to the personal
growth and success. Dr. Zhong Nanshan, the giant and great hero
of our times, serves as a shining and fitting example here. Universal: 普适性的表达（每篇文章都能用的表达）Relevant： Specific：具体的（）
I come across a survey conducted by the Global Times concerning 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
the topic of social morality, revealing (现在分词短语做定语！
) that
almost all interviewees are of the idea that the awareness about
social ethics should be enhanced and promoted, which is a promising start. （背—换）
我看到《环球时报》就社会道德问题所做的一项调查，结果显示，几乎所有受访者都认为社会道德意识应该得到提高和推广，这是一个良好的开端。
模：黄色：universal (普遍性的) 红色（可替换部分））
板：蓝色：relevant (相关性的)
I come across a survey conducted by the Global Times concerning
the efforts to fight against the pandemic, revealing that almost all
interviewees are of the idea that the awareness about independent thinking and science competence should be enhanced and promoted, which is a promising start.
我看到《环球时报》就这个问题所做的一项调查，结果显示，几乎所有受访者都认为这个问题的相关意识应该得到提高和推广，这是一个良好的开端。
看到 Ving：就去寻找谁发出的这个动作！
句子主语，前面的某个名词，前面的整个句子。 20 年上半年英语四级实力抢分班/临门一脚
预测：
四篇文章！
第一：个人品质的其他话题：
面对困难的勇气！2020 考研作文：习惯
第二：社会道德的其他话题：诚信
第三：科技环境的话题：过度使用手机
第四：传统文化的弘扬：
Chinese traditional medicine
Dragon boat’s festival 端午节