商务英语写作
商务英语范文写作：询盘函电范例
kk
kiddie korner,inc.
march 2nd,2004
datex trading co. ltd.
lianfang building
666 huayuan avenue
dalian,liaoning
china
dear sir or madam,
we were impressed by the selection of sweaters that were displayed on your stand at the menswear exhibition that was held in chicago last month.
we are a large chain of retailers and looking for a
manufacturer who could supplyus with a wide range of sweaters for the teenage market.
as we usually place very large orders,we would expect a quantity discount in addition to a 20% trade discount off net list prices,and our terms of payment are normally 30 days bill of exchange,documents against payment.
if these conditions interest you,and you can meet orders of over 1000 garments at one time,please send us your current catalogue and price-list.we hope to hear from you soon.
yours faithfully,
fred johns
china trade manager
《商务英语写作》教学大纲 一、课程性质、任务和基本要求 1．课程性质 《商务英语写作》是商务英语专业的专业核心课程，也是文秘、国贸等涉外专业的重要选修课程，旨在培养学生英语五项技能中的英语写作能力。此课程涵盖了商务英语基本写作类型、写作规、写作格式和写作方法，课程容与现实商务生活紧密结合，既提供各种实例，又设计了一体化的实训，训练学生用英语有条理地组织商务信息，起草规得体、条理清晰的商务文书，合理利用商务交流中的礼节和技巧，建立有效的商务沟通。 2．课程任务 开设本课程旨在使学生对商务情景中最常见和最常用的各种应用文的用途及格式有一个总的了解，使其不仅能熟悉商务文体的各种惯用英文表达法，而且能广泛增加有关商务知识，并在模拟及实景中运用这些知识进行商务交际。 3．基本要求： 充分利用教材中的商务材料以及老师所给的案例，并结合所学商务知识，与现实商务活动进行多种形式的联系，提高学生对各种商务写作材料的准确理解和把握。经过反复学习、模仿和套用，掌握商务应用文的书写规律和方法，逐渐学会撰写各类商务应用文，力求语言正确，表达得体，在实际操作中活学活用。 二、学时分配建议 本课程教学总时数为66课时，具体学时分配可参见下表。 学时分配建议表
三、教学目标： 1．课程能力目标： （1）能够根据招聘广告并结合个人实际情况，熟练撰写英语求职信、应聘信、求职追踪信和个人简历等求职类文书 （2）能够运用商务交际中的礼节和技巧，撰写英语邀请函、感信、祝贺信等常见社交类文书 （3）能够规地起草英语启示、通知、备忘录、商务报告、会议纪要等常用公务文书（4）能够比较规地撰写英语名片、简章、商品使用说明书、推销函等主要商务宣传文书 （5）能够正确、得体地处理询盘信、发盘信、还盘信、订单与合同等常规外贸商务函电。 2．课程知识目标 （1）掌握英文求职信、应聘信和个人简历的基本格式和主要容； （2）了解英文书信的基本格式和不同书信类型的写作特点；
台布 我们从我国商务部处得悉贵公司的名称和地址，现借此机会与你方通信，意在建立友好业务关系。 我们是一家国营公司，专门经营台布出口业务。我们能接受顾客的来样定货，来样中可具体需要产品的花样图案，规格及包装装潢的要求。 为使你方对我各类台布有大致的了解，我们另航寄最新的目录供参考。如果你方对产品有兴趣，请尽快通知我方。一俟收到你方具体询盘，即寄送报价单和样本。 盼早复。 SPECIMEN：INTRODUCING BUSINESS OPERATION Dear Sirs, RE:TABLECLOTH We have your name and adress from Ministry of Commerce of the People's Republic of China.We take this opportunity to write to you with a view to set up friend business relations with you. We are a carpet manufacturer, our products are a unique style of novel, inexpensive..We are in a position to accept orders according to the customer's spmples.In the customer's spmples,request about the assorted pattern,specification and package of the needed goods can be indicated particularly. In order to give you a gengral idea of various kinds of the table-cloth we are handling,we are airmailing you under separate cover our latest catalogue for your reference.Please let us know immediately if you are interested in our products.We will send you our price list and sample to you as soon as we receive your specific inquiry. Looking forward to your early reply,we are. Yours faithfully Xiaoli
商务英语之订单最常用句子 我们想订你们的货，今天会寄上正式的订单。 1. We'd like to order your products. We'll send our official order today. 你是否收到了我们订电话机的订单？ 2. Did you get our order for your telephones? 我们发现贵公司的订单最近逐渐减少了，对吗？ 3. We've noticed that your orders have been falling off lately, haven't you? 那是因为我们转向成衣生意的缘故。 4. That's because we have switched to made-up goods market. 目前有什么我可以代您订购的吗？ 5. Is there anything I can book for you now? 现在我们能向你订购的只有棉织品。 6. What we can order from you right now are cotton goods. 你可以告诉我货名和数量吗？ 7. Can you let me have the name and quantities? 除非你方三月订货，否则我们无法6月送货。 8. Unless you order in March, we won't be able to deliver in June. 我准备向你们订货，但是唯一的条件是，货物只限卖给芬兰的公司。
9. I'm ready to place an order with you, but only one condition is that the goods are confined to Finland. 前寄样品必须在8月底以前到达伦敦，否则所订货物都将无效。 10. Advanced samples must arrive in London before the end of August; otherwise the goods are useless. 我们可以修改一下29734号订单吗？ 11. Can we make a change on order No. 29734? 我们想增加99725号订单上AR-26的数量。 12. We want to increase the number of AR-26s on order No. 99725. 商务旅行必备48句经典句型 1 Do I have to make a reconfirmation? 我还要再确认吗? 2 Is there any earlier one? 3 Could you tell me my reservation number, please? 请你告诉我我的预订号码好吗? 4 Can I get a seat for today's 7:00 a.m train? 我可以买今天上午7点的火车票吗? 5 Could you change my flight date from London to Tokyo? 请你更改一下从伦敦到东京的班机日期好吗? 6 Is there any discount for the USA Railpass?
商务英语求职信范文汇总6篇 尊敬的领导： 您好！ 首先感谢您在百忙之中翻阅我的自荐材料，为一位满腔热情的大学生开启一扇希望大门，我叫王翔，是一名常州轻工职业技术学院商务英语专业的学生。而现在我正面临。 我出生于一个充满温馨的家庭，父母让我从小养成刻苦耐劳、谦虚谨慎、热情待人、朴实诚恳的生活态度，在两年的大学生涯中，我刻苦学习，并掌握一些商务英语方面的知识，能熟练地进行听、说、读、写，熟练运用网络查阅相关英语资料，并能及时予以翻译。 我是一个吃苦耐劳的人。而且我知道该怎样去用心学习，因为我懂得付出才会有回报。可能十分的努力换回来一分的回报，但我坚信只要有百分之一的希望就要去拼一把，苦点累点不算什么，我还很年轻，用信念去奋斗没有什么不可以。 我是一个善于思考的人。做每一件事之前都会考虑清楚如何来做才能在现有的条件下达到一个更好的效果。上有政策，下有对策有
时也不一定是贬义的。当领导做出一定的要求和指示，应该是在保质量的完成任务的同时，还会思考如何做才能更完善。如有偏差的地方，我会主动和领导沟通，说明我的看法并作出修改方案，把事情做好事我努力的方向。 我很喜欢从事与英语相关的工作，我深深知道这类工作对英语的要求很高，我非常喜欢英语，并且在每天都在不断地提高自己的水平。并且我深知工作的时候应具备认真的态度和耐心，还要肯学肯干，责任心很进取心是必须的，先前的经历教会了我这些，是我一生的财富。 自荐书不是广告词，不是通行证，但我知道一个青年可以通过不断的学习完善自己，可以在中证明自己。 尊敬的领导，我是一个做任何事都充满激情的人,如果我能喜获您的赏识，我一定会尽职尽责地用实际行动向您证明.我一定会不负所望的做好每一件事的.公司的未来，我愿奉献我毕生的心血和汗水。 再次致以我最诚挚的谢意！ 此致
一、询盘例文 敬启者： 我们是最大的家具进口商之一，现对转椅（Swivel Chairs）感兴趣。 盼望贵公司早日报来温哥华CIF最低价，说明支付条件、最早交货期及可供数量。如有产 品目录，也请寄来两份。如果报价合理，我们将大量订购 如蒙早日回复，将不胜感激。 此致 北京长城进出口公司 加拿大温哥华东方贸易公司经理 John Smith 2010年5月 Orient Trading Co. Vancouver, Canada May 10,2010 Beijing Great Wall Imp.& Exp. Corp. Dear Sirs, Re: Swivel Chairs We are one of the largest importers of furniture. At present we are interested in Swivel Chairs and would appreciate your giving us the lowest price CIF Vancouver, the earliest time of delivery and quantities available. Please also send us two catalogues if available. If your price is reasonable, we will place a large order. We are looking forward to your early reply. Best regards, John Smith Orient Trading Co. Vancouver, Canada 一、报盘例文 敬启者： 感谢您5月21日的询盘。我方现报盘如下，此报盘须经本公司最后确认方为 效。 品名：110号， 111号转椅 颜色：黑色、棕色和金色 价格：货号110,每把100美金，CIF旧金山价 货号111,每把95美金，CIF旧金山价 装运：2007年8月19日 付款：电汇
摘要 商务英语应用文在外贸业务和商务活动中使用越来越广泛而频繁，它在互通商业信息，联系商业事务及促进贸易关系等方面起着重要作用。了解和掌握商务英语应用文写作对国际商务、外贸业务从业人员来说是非常重要的。商务写作的语言具有专业术语丰富性、商务文体多样性、缩略词常用性等特征。因此，商务英语写作需要坚持生动具体、内容完整、清楚简洁、有礼有节等原则。文章重点探讨了商务信函的写作技巧，即选用四部式结构（引言、详情、应答、结束语）、遵循语言原则、注意信函语气等，期望有助于商务写作能力的提高。 关键词：商务写作；商务信函；原则；方法 第2/13页 目录 摘要 (1) 目录 (2) 引言 (3) 1 商务英语写作概述 (3) 1.1 商务英语写作的种类 (3) 1.2 商务英语写作的语言特点 (3) 2 商务英语写作原则 (5) 2.1 生动具体 (5) 2.2 内容完整 (5) 2.3 准确无误 (5) 2.4 清楚简洁 (6) 2.5 有礼有节 (6) 3 商务英语写作基本策略 (6)
4 商务英语信函写作技巧 (7) 4.1 选用四部式结构 (7) 4.2 遵循语言原则 (8) 4.3 注意信函语气 (9) 结束语 (9) 致谢................................................................... 10 参考文献................................................. 错误！未定义书签。 第3/13页 商务英语的写作技巧 引言 随着对外开放的不断扩大和外贸体制改革的不断深化，特别是中国加入WTO后，我国的对外贸易取得较快的发展，国际商务和对外贸易活动日益频繁。对国际商务活动从业人员来说，英语能力是最基本的，也是最重要的。而商务英语应用文在外贸业务和商务活动中使用也越来越广泛而频繁，它在互通商业信息，联系商业事务及促进贸易关系等方面起着重要作用。了解和掌握商务英语应用文写作对国际商务、外贸业务从业人员来说是非常重要的。 众所周知，要写好商务英语应用文，首先要具有一定的英文写作水平与经济贸易知识[1]。其次，应熟悉和掌握各种应用文的写作格式和特点，特别是掌握商务英语的语汇、句型套语和谋篇布局的写作技巧[2]。除此之外，更要了解商务写作和一般性写作的区别，以及商务写作的原则[3]。经过反复地学习、模仿和套用商务英语应用文范例，才能掌握商务英语应用文的书写规律、要求与方法技巧，逐步学会写各类商务英语应用文。 1 商务英语写作概述 1.1 商务英语写作的种类 广义的应用文(Applied writings in broad sense)泛指一切应用文字，文体大致有别于记叙文、抒情文和论说文，界限不太明显；狭义的应用文(Applied writing in narrow sense)，主要指政府、机关、群众团体或企业法人间用于交往的文字，如公文(official documents)、函电(1etters or correspondences)等。而随着社会经济的发展，英语应用文的应用范围越来越广泛，以商业为主体的和为商务活动服务的各类实用文体都应包括在英语应用文范畴之内，例如，请柬、
欢迎各位员工及家属参与。 All staff and their family members are welcome. 董事会将于8月4号星期五下午3点在1131室召开会议。 The board of directors will be conducting a meeting at 3 p.m on Friday ,august 4 in room 1131 我们的门诊政策有所变动，希望大家注意。 There has been a change in our clinic sercice policy which we would like to bring to your attention. This Wednesday’s regular meeting announced the establishment of Research and Development Department. 这个周三的公司例会宣布成立公司研发部。 Call zhang wen at 2397884 for more detailed information. 有关详情请联系张文，电话2397884 We wish to take this opportunity to thank you for being coopertive. 借此机会感谢大家的配合。 We very much hope that you will be able to attend our wedding ceremony and look forward to meeting you on 22 november. 我们非常希望你能参加我们的结婚典礼，希望能在11月22号那天见到你。 Mr .and mrs michael garwood request the honor of your presence at an gardon party to celebrate their daughter’s graduation from college。michael garwood 夫妇很荣幸能邀请您参加庆祝他们女儿大学毕业的花园聚会。 You and your family members are cordially invited to attend the pwc annual ball. 盛情邀请您和家人参加pwc的周年舞会 希望您能接受邀请，并在7月23日之前回复. l hope you will accept the invitation and reply before 23rd july. 晚宴开始前在209室会有茶点，欢迎前往。 Tea and cakes will be served before the evening dinner in room 209.welcome to join us. Please remit payment withhin ten days so that you can maintain your credit rating 请于10天内汇款，以维持你的信用等级。 Althought abc company has reserved the clubhouse for saturay ,we can instead offer you our conference room,which seats 60. 虽然ABC公司已预订在星期六使用会所，但是我们仍能为您提够60人的会议室。 You will be glad to know that your request for reimbursement for travel expense is granted. 您要求报销差旅费的请求已被批准，相信您一定很高兴得知这一消息。 Customers will be provided with the best service owing to our long experience in the catering business. 凭借在饮食业的丰富经验，我们能为顾客提供最好的服务。 We have noticed in your letter that the damages to five chairs in shipment were found. 从您的来信得知，已发现5把椅子在装运过程中受到损坏。 我们希望本月底以前收到您应付的金额。 We hope to receive the amount due by the end of this month. 我们希望你们能对货物满意，并期待收到你们更多的订单。 We hope you are satisfied with our goods,and look forward to receiving your future orders. 对于任何不便之处我们再次表示感谢。 We apologize again for any inconvenience.
书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟 商务英语写作经典范文 Gentlemen： Due to the fact that we have not received your payment for the goods we have delivered to you in accordance with our contract entered into on [date] ，and that in failing to pay for these goods you are in breach of said contract，as you were noticed on [date] ，it is our intention to make a private sale of the goods which we have manufactured for the balance of goods to be delivered under that certain contract，but which are undeliverable due to said breach，for a purchase price of $ . This sale is to be consummated on [date] ，and will go forward if your default is not cured by [date] . It is our desire to inform you of the foregoing and afford you the opportunity to decide on a course of action，in view of the fact that you will be held liable for the loss sustained by us on said resale to the extent authorized by [cite section and code]. [商务英语写作经典范文]相关文章： tips:感谢大家的阅读，本文由我司收集整编。仅供参阅！
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Tone & Style in Business Writing Tone is the element in your writing which says something about the relationship you have with your reader/audience and the attitude you have towards the subject. The tone you adopt in your business communications is therefore very important. For example, in a business letter or spoken presentation, your tone will normally be respectful and cooperative. Your tone will reflect your position within the company. A respectful, uncertain tone is usually used with your superiors, a more commanding tone is used with your subordinates, while with your colleagues a more friendly, helpful tone is used. Style is the way you use words and expressions to achieve a certain effect or overall impression. Quite often, styles in writing can be seen as formal, neutral or informal.. Achieving a tone to suit the business audience Good readers in the business world know how to choose their words. The communication must achieve its aim or time and energy are wasted. If you want to be a good writer and speaker, good grammar and spelling are necessary but not enough. Your words must be chosen with care and tested for their suitability for each particular writing task. Good writers can write upwards, horizontal or downwards without offending their readers. They use the most suitable words for their position and particular business. The idea of tone is very important to the business communicator. Since readers can be insulted or offended not by the message but be the manner of expression, an otherwise perfect memo or letter could quite possibly cause a breakdown in communication. It is therefore important for you to be able to analyze your relationship with you readers(s) and then to choose the appropriate language and tone for your message. 2008 ITS Corporate Training 1
商务英语常用句型40句 大家在商务英语写作的时候一定会为用哪些句型烦恼吧，下面小编为你分享商务英语常用句型吧！ 1. I am writing to confirm /enquire/inform you… 我写信是要确认/询问/通知你… 2. I am writing to follow up on our earlier decision on the marketing campaign in Q2. 我写信来追踪我们之前对于第二季度营销活动的决定。 3. With reference to our telephone conversation today… 关于我们今天在电话中的谈话... 4. In my previous e-mail on October 5… 先前在10月5日所写的信… 5. As I mentioned earlier about… 如我先前所提及关于… 6. As indicated in my previous e-mail… 如我在先前的信中所提出… 7. As we discussed on the phone… 如我们上次在电话中的讨论… 8. From our decision at the previous meeting… 如我们在上次会议中的决定… 9. As you requested/per your requirement… 按照你的要求… 10.In reply to your e-mail dated April 1，we decided… 回答你在4月1日写的信，我们决定… 11.This is in response to your e-mail today.
Begin at the same level~~~~ 下降到最低点: 波折变化: fluctuate around fluctuation of 幅度：slightly sharply significantly dramatically a is in direct proportion to b merely roughly 一、BEC高级（Higher）Part Ⅰ——图表作文 图表作文的文章结构 1）引言部分 2）主体段落 3）结论部分 4）例文分析： The bar chart below shows the number of complaints made by consumers about different products and services in the years 1994 and 1997.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. You should write at least 140 words. The bar chart displays the changes in the number of complaints made by consumers about five kinds of products and services between 1994 and 1997. According to the diagram, there was an increase in the complaints about most of the products and services. The number of complaints about package holidays abroad and financial services increased over the period. The complaints made about the package holidays abroad rose by 12.7% from 15,000 in 1994 to about 18,000 in 1997. And there were about 52,000 complaints about the financial services in 1997, 5.2% up on 1994. There were also more complaints about electric goods and second-hand cars in 1997 than in 1994. The complaints about the two products rose by 9.2% and 6.7% respectively. The former increased from 66,000 in 1994 to about 70,000 in 1997 and the latter went up from 80,000 to 86,000. And clothing is the only sector where the number of complaints dropped over the period. In 1994, there were around 45,000 complaints while the figure decreased by 4% to around 43,000 in 1997. In conclusion we can see there were more complaints about the products and services in 1997 than in 1994 with the only exception of clothing. ●图表作文常用的语言手段 1）作文的开头——表示“出处”的句子结构。 2）描述“数据变化”的常用表达方式 3）表示变化的副词和形容词 4）描述“数据”的表达方式 5）“大约”的表达方式 ●真题写作范例： 例一（课堂15分钟快速练习）： The graph below shows development in the ownership of mobile telephones as a percentage of telephones owned. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the changes in telephone ownership. You should write at least 150 words.
BEC商务英语写作开头结尾常用句型 第一部分、BEC作文段首句常用句型: 一、对立观点命题形式的首句： 1. Many people do not doubt that A is superior to B , while others think quite differently on the issue of _____. Personally, I stand on the side of A . 2. Some people say A , other people argue B . In a word , _____. But I cannot agree this point of view for many reasons. 3. There are different views concerning this topic . Some people like to CHOOSE A , some prefer to CHOOSE B . Personally , I prefer B . I think B has more advantages. 4. From my point of view , it is more advisable to CHOOSE A than to CHOOSE B . 5. Despite the fact that most people prefer A , I would like to choose B because the following reasons . 6. In general , I prefer to _____ . 7. As far as I am concerned , I would like to prefer _____ . 8. When it comes to _____ , most people tend to believe A . But others consider B as _____ . 9. When asked about _____ , the vast majority of people would support that A . But others regard B as _____ . 10. At the risk of address the issue too direct , I prefer A because I think that _____ . 11. When asked about _____ , many people give their opinions that _____ , but other people may see _____ differently . 12. When faced with _____ , quite a few would claim that _____ , but others , in contrast , deem _____ as _____ .
第一种、介绍信 Letters of Introduction 实例之一： Dear Mr. / Ms., This is to introduce Mr. Frank Jones, our new marketing specialist who will be in London fro m April 5 to mid April on business. We shall appreciate any help you can give Mr. Jones an d will always be happy to reciprocate. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐， 现向您推荐我们的市场专家弗兰克·琼斯先生。他将因公务在四月15日到四月中旬期间停留伦敦。我们将非常感谢您向琼斯先生提供的任何帮助，并非常高兴施以回报。 您诚挚的 实例之二： Dear Mr. / Ms, We are pleased to introduce Mr. Wang You, our import manager of Textiles Department. Mr. Wang is spending three weeks in your city to develop our business with chief manufactures a nd to make purchases of decorative fabrics for the coming season. We shall be most grateful if you will introduce him to reliable manufacturers and give him any help or advice he may need. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐， 我们非常高兴向您介绍我们纺织部的进口经理王有先生。王先生将在你市度过三周，他要与主要的生产厂家拓展商务并为下一季度采购装饰织品。如能介绍他给可靠的生产厂家，向他提供所需的任何帮助或建议，我们将不胜感谢。
1. 永康盛辉公司的Frank Luo收到美国Sunshine Trading Co., Ltd. 经理Adam 初次询盘并按其要求及时寄出商品目录和价目单 Dear Adam, We thank you for your letter asking for our new catalogues and shall be glad to enter into business relations with your firm. Complying with your request, we are sending you under separate cover our latest catalogues and pricelist covering our exports available at present and hope that you will find many items in it which interest you. We look forward to receiving your inquiries soon. Sincerely, Frank 2. 美国客商在收到材料后，表示对其中三款角磨机感兴趣并寻问Frank Luo能否报FOB价，最惠价，最低订货量等问题。 Dear Frank, Thanks for your information. We are interested to buy large quantities of Angle Grinder and shall appreciate it if you would give us the best FOB Ningbo price. I have now listed below the models that are of interest: AG105L, AG203S, AG880H Please send us some samples for testing. We will pay the sample fees. How about MOQ? We are waiting for your reply. Best Regards, Adam 3. 收到询盘后，Frank Luo给美国客商做了回复。 Dear Adam, With reference to your last inquiry, we have already forwarded you the samples and take pleasure in making the following offer: Art No. AG105L: USD25.30/PC FOB Ningbo, Art No. AG203S: USD30.50/PC FOB Ningbo, Art No. AG880H: USD13.00/PC FOB Ningbo” Please note the prices we have quoted above are based on our MOQ600PCS for each item. Please feel free to contact us if you have any question. Sincerely, Frank