英语作文评价
篇一：给学生的英语作文写评语
如何写好学生的英语作文的评语
现在，学生英语写作水平的高低是对学生英语综合运用能力的评价指标之一，这已经受到了英语老师的普通重视，在作文教学中教师们可谓“八仙过海，各显其能”，但在对学生作文进行评价时，多数教师只是给学生一个分数或等级，很少能像中文教师那样，在学生的作文后写上自己对学生作文比较具体和明确的看法或意见的。其实，教师的评语是对学生英语书面表达能力和自主学习情况的评价和指导。我在作文评改中借鉴中文教师的做法，用英语写评语，让学生在真实的英语交际环境中，书面语能力也能得到提高。实际上，教师为学生的英语作文写评语，不仅(转自：https://www.doczj.com/doc/ba11284428.html, 千叶帆文摘:英语作文评价)有利于提高学生的英语书面交际能力，而且有利于促进师生的知识，思想和情感交流，还有利于提高学生自主学习的积极性，下面，笔者就如何写英语评语谈一点看法和体会。
１、适时恰当地评价
老师应及时地批改作文，及时了解学生的学习进步状况和学习效果，以便掌握情况，进行指导。有些学生在作文中写到了一些自己遇到的特殊的问题和想法，他们盼望老师的评价和指导，所以
教师应急学生之所急，及时地给予恰当的评价。教师在写评语时使用的词汇和语法知识不能过高或过低于学生的现有水平，最好能及时地应用学生新近学到的词汇和语法，这样有助于学生对新知识加深理解和强化记忆，也可让学生看到知识如何在实践中运用。当然评语中偶尔也可以有几个生词，有时候学生通过上下文就能理解，有时学生查字典来解决，这样做也利于学生的猜词能力的提高和扩大词汇量，有时适当地用英语习语或谚语写评语，使学生更多地感悟英语的简洁和优美。
(1)Do in Rome as the Romans do
(2)Actions speak louder than words
(3)Go helps those who help themselves
(4)It is the first step that costs
(5)Always put yourself in others’shoes
２、多加鼓励，增加学生英语学习自信心
“自信是成功的第一秘诀”，爱迪生曾说过“相信自己能的人就会赢”，无论对什么样的学生，老师都要让他树立一个信念“我能行”！因此，当老师在学生的作文中看到运用得好的词汇句型，表达了不同的观点，或文章充满了想象力和幽默感等一切“闪光点”时，应不失时机地给予表扬或鼓励的评语，这样每个学生都会有成就感，而成就动机能够很好地激发人的学习动机。
Well, your handwriting is very good.
Great! I appreciate what you’ve done for your class.
You’re a good student with sense of responsibility.
I marvel at the maturity of such a young child as you.
You’ve made fabulous progress, and I’m sure you’ll succeed. ３、以情动人
作文不仅仅是师生间教学信息的互相反馈，而且是联系和沟通师生情感的桥梁。从作文中，细心的教师能觉察到学生的思想和情感的变化，同样，从教师的评语中学生能领悟到教师对学生是否真诚、有信心和有责任心，教师对学生的努力一定要有切合实际的鼓励；对他们取得的成绩、进步，要在评语中表现出发自内心的赞赏和喜悦；对学生作文中的错误和思想情绪的变化一定要诚心诚意地以恰当的方式指出；对一些成绩落后的学生要有同情心和责任心。赞扬要恰如其分，批评要适当委婉，重在鼓励，教师应以平等
的态度与学生开展评论性的讨论，营造一种平等、自由的学术气氛，让学生与教师能在作文和评语中自由的交流思想，让学生拥有创造性地运用所学知识的机会和自由。As fire tries gold, so does adversity try courage. Nobody knows what he can do till he has tried. You’ve made a good start.
A good beginning is half the way of success.
Time waits for no man. Nothing is more precious than time, do you agree with me? Not only energy, but also persistence is necessary to success, do you think so?
No pains, no gains.
有道是“精成所至，金石为开”，教师的热情和真诚必然会在一定程度上引起学生的思想转折和学习成绩的飞跃，现在学生们很乐意把自己的思想动态和情感变化写在作文中，并急切盼望看到我给他们的评语，并对我的评语做出回应。曾有位学生回复说我就像他的妈妈一样关心他，我们都非常珍视这种师生间真诚的交流。
４、因材施教，授人以渔
在写评语时，除了帮助学生提高文化知识外，还要承认学生个体之间学习能力，掌握知识程度的差别，应因材施教，授人以渔。对于一些成绩落后的学生要保护他们的自尊心，帮助他们树立自信心，让他们也能得到继续发展。在批改他们的作文时，温和地指出错误的同时，指出他们的优点，以资鼓励。
I’m glad to know that you want to learn English well, I’d be glad to help you.
Nothing is difficult for us to learn if you want to learn.
It’s not helps but obstacles that make a man.
Where there’s a will, there is a will.
If the facts had been in a good order, the article would have been cleaner.
Your essay shows you have real ability in English, and you are developing, increasingly depth of thought and clarity of expression
in your written work. But there are some grammar mistakes in it. 当然，在写英语作文评语的过程中，教师不仅需要不断提高自己的英语书面表达能力，更重要的是要深入研究学生的心理特点、思想情绪、个人爱好、学习习惯，以及英语程度等等，以便言之有物，以理服人，因材施教。总之，给学生写评语既是一件艰苦的事，又是一门学问，写得好会给学生培养和提高书面交际能力带来很大的帮助，其作用不可低估。
篇二：高考英语作文评分细则
高考作文评分细则
高考中的任何主观题目都有一定的评分标准，高考作文也不例外。了解了高考英语作文的评分标准，在平时的训练中就会有的放矢，该注意哪些问题也就会做到心中有数。目前全国大部分省市作文分数为25分，其评分标准如下：
★评分原则★
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于80和多余120的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
★评分标准★
第5档（21-25分，很好）完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的；
1. 覆盖所有内容要点；
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；
3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力；
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第4档（16-20分，好）完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的
1. 虽漏掉1, 2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；
3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致；
4. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
第3档（11-15分，适当）基本完成了试题规定的任务，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的
1. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；
4. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯
第2档（6-10分，较差）未恰当完成试题规定的任务，信息未能
清楚地传达给读者
1. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；
2. 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了写作内容的理解；
4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
第1档（1-5分，差）未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者
1. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是为理解试题要求；
2. 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；
3. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解；
4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
（0分）信息未能传达给读者；未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少，无法评判，写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
说明：1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达；
2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分
篇三：高考英语作文评分细则
高考英语作文预测介绍类文章 高考英语书面表达写作技巧·介绍类文章 （人物、地点与范例） 【人物介绍】 人物介绍包括他人介绍和自我介绍。它一般要求能用简洁明了的英语把要介绍的情况按照逻辑顺序一一讲明即可。但要注意他人介绍是介绍别人，所以文中要用第三人称来写；自我介绍是介绍自己，所以文章要以第一人称来写，写时两种情况不要混用。 【实例与范文】 姓名 William Sidney Porter 笔名 O’Henry 职业 短篇小说家 国籍 美国 生卒时间 1867-1910 出生地 美国西部
个人简历 1. 年轻时在银行和报社工作； 2. 30多岁时无辜坐了3年牢，在狱中开始写作； 3. 出狱后，定居纽约，很快取得成功； 4. 一生写了300多篇小说，其中一些被翻译为汉语，深受中国读者欢迎。 O’Hame of an American short-story writer. His real name is William Sidney Porter. He was bwest of Americaand died in 1910. As a young man, he worked in a bank and for a newspaper. Unfortunately, he was puaugh he had dg wrong. It waat he began his writing. Awaled in and became a successful writer. He wrote about 300which have been translatedHis books are very popular in . 【地点介绍】 地点介绍和人物介绍一样，用简洁明了的英语把所需要介绍的要点讲清楚即可，时态多用一般现在时。 【实例与范文】 请根据以下提示写一篇短文，介绍Australia，内容包 括以下几点： 1. 位置：太平洋的西侧 2. 面积：760万平方公里
my dream 英语作文 篇一：my dream 英语作文 Last night,I became a small didn't see I am Invisible. I flying in the sky .I was very happy and free .I could see many houses ,mountains and rives .Then , I'm tird so I had landed in the beautiful prairie . There was very cool .And there were many hours and cattles .They looked very happy. I am pleased to talk with them. They asked me if I come from .I told them I was from distant countries to travel here and their parents. They asked where my parents . Oh my god ! I'm lost .I'm sad . Next,I once heard someone calling my name .I woke up at was only a dream .It is my mother told me to get up .
篇二：my dream 英语作文 MyDreamIt is said that a life without dream is like a persion without soul. So everybody has a dream and I am not an exceptional I was a in a primary school, I have wanted to be a a teacher, I would like to see my students come to be a useful persion. Of course, to be a teacher is not an easy thing. And I know that if I want mydream to come ture, I need work a word, whatever mydream is, i should try my best to realize it. mydream When I was a little girl, I had a dream to be a famous writer. I remembered that I made a big decision to realize mydream that I started my first writing of a novel. I was a skinny little school-girl with glasses who dreamt up characters with qualities I longed to embody – they were pretty and powerful and lived lives full of intrigue and
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2018-浪费水资源的英语作文-精选word文档 本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！ == 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ == 浪费水资源的英语作文 节约用水，人人有责。我们要珍惜爱护水资源，不应该浪费一点一滴。下面要为大家分享的就是浪费水资源的英语作文，希望你会喜欢！ 浪费水资源的英语作文篇一 No creature can live without water and human being is not an exemption as well. Our body is mainly formed by water, about 70% or more. So everyday we need to drink a lot to keep ourselves healthy and full of energy. Except that, there are lots of things we need water in our daily life. We need to use water to cook, to wash clothes, to shower and so on. As we know the water shortage is a big issue all over the world. Therefore save water is very important in our life. 浪费水资源的英语作文篇二 Hello, my name is water. Life, everywhere. Wash and brush, wash hair, cooking, cooking, washing clothes. You see how important life everywhere, I cannot, so everyone should cherish, saving water blessing. Everybody must be hard, vying for saving little angel! Tap water, wash hands, and speak hygiene. Roll up your sleeve, the first open bibcock flushing.
英语作文介绍中国的风俗习惯 【篇一：中国传统节日和民俗简介(附英文)】 中国传统节日traditional chinese holiday 中国的传统节庆膳食是节日必不可少的伴侣。例如，我国的端午节(the dragon boat festival)是纪念古代诗人屈原的日子。那一天，人们通常要赛龙舟、吃粽子(zongzi)。中秋节是观赏满月的日子。圆圆 的月亮象征着圆满，象征着家庭团聚。因此，中秋节(the mid-autumn festival)的特制食品是一种圆形的月饼。春节是中国的农历 新年(the chinese lunar new year’s holiday)，除了常见的家禽和 肉类之外，人们还要按各自的地方习俗烹制传统食物，如饺子和年糕。 traditional chinese holiday meals are indispensable on some festivals. for example, the dragon boat festival is a day established in memory of the ancient poet qu yuan and people usually hold dragon boat races and eat zongzi on that day. the mid-autumn festival is an occasion for viewing the full moon. the round moon is a symbol for completeness and family reunion. the special food of the day is yuebing, a round cake known as the mooncake. the spring festival is the chinese lunar new year’s holiday. bes ides the popular poultry and meat, people cook traditional food according to regional customs, for example, jiaozi, or boiled dumplings, and niangao, or the new year cake . 端午节the duanwu festival 端午节，又叫龙舟节，是为了纪念爱国诗人屈原。屈原是一位忠诚 和受人敬仰的大臣,他给国家带来了和平和繁荣。但最后因为受到诽 谤（vilify）而最终投河自尽。人们撑船到他自尽的地方，抛下粽子，希望鱼儿吃粽子，不要吃屈原的身躯。几千年来，端午节的特色在 于吃粽子（glutinous dumplings）和赛龙舟，尤其是在一些河湖密 布的南方省份。 the duanwu festival, also called the dragon boat festival, is to commemorate the patriotic poet qu yuan. qu yuan was a loyal and highly esteemed minister, who brought peace and prosperity to the state but ended up drowning himself in a river as a result of being vilified. people got to the spot by boat and cast glutinous dumplings into the water, hoping that the fishes
作文评分标准 本题满分为15分。 2．阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3．阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一份数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分），但不得加或减半分。 4．评分标准：2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。[注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。] [注] 1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数 2.只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分（指规定三段的作文） 长度计分标准: 91～100词: 扣1分 81～90词: 扣2.5分 71～80词: 扣4分 61～70词: 扣6分 60词以下: 扣8分 3.为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60（相当于百分制的60分）。 作文分15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 得分率100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7 经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月份起采用“作文最低”制计算成绩，其中足见国家对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。按规定，考生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分。也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。 评分标准分五个档次，14分，11分、8分、5分、2分，它分两个档次，14分上可以给到15，下可以给到13，8分上可以给到9分，下可以给到7分，5分上可以给多6分，下可以给到4分，2分上可以给到3分，下可以给到1分，这就是从1到15它分了五个档次。这五个档次我们再可以分三大档，14分和11分的这算是两个合起来，叫一大档，这大档的它相同点是内容切题，文字连贯，条理清楚，这是14分和11分它的相同点，也就是说只要你达到内容切题，文字连贯，条理清楚，你就可以得到11分以上的这么一个分数。 11分和14分两个档之间区别在什么地方？在于用词上，你的用词是不
七年级简单英语作文带翻译：My dream Everybody have a dream, because we’re dreamers. In our heart, there is a colorful dream. Sometimes the dream is perfect, sometimes it’s special, sometimes it’s sweet, sometimes it’s yummy. In my dream, there are some children. I always play games with them and enjoy ourselves. There are so many candies, too. Blue candies, pink candies, orange candies, apple candies…How delicious! In my dream, there is a special sky. In our world, the sky is blue, but the sky of my dream is pink, some angels are having fun there. In my dream, white bird can fly high, flowers can sing songs, frogs have a jump race, tomatoes are blue, potatoes are yellow, all the things are different. In my dream, Chinese people, Korean people, Japanese people, Italian people, Spanish people, American people and Russian people are hand in hand. All the people smile for ever. It is a balanced world. . In my dream, everything is wonderful, but our world isn’t like it. So we m ust like my dream, to let our world get more beautiful! 每个人都有一个梦想，因为我们是梦想家。在我们心中，有一个 彩色的梦。有时梦想是完美的，有时它是特殊的，有时是甜的，有时 它是好吃的。 在我的梦里，有一些孩子。我总是和他们玩游戏，玩游戏。有这 么多的糖果，太。蓝色的糖果，粉红色的糖果，桔子的糖果，苹果的 糖果……有多好吃！在我的梦里，有一个特别的天空。在我们的世界
奢侈的浪费Extravagant Spending 大学英语作文 Nowadays, with the fast development of the economy, Chinese people have live a better life, they have enough money to buy what they want. We see from news that people over spend their money, they fly to European country to buy the branches, wasting a lot of money to chase for the material stuff. This is extravagant spending, they can use the money to do better thing.现在，随着经济的快速发展，中国人生活过得比以前好，他们有足够的钱去买想要的。我们从新闻上看到人们过度花费金钱，他们飞去欧洲国家买名牌，浪费大量金钱去追求物质的东西。这是奢侈的浪费，他们应该花这些钱去做更好的事。 Last week, I saw the news from the Internet that Chinese people buy a lot of discount branches in New York, the picture is vividly presenting the satisfied faces in them. Most of the buyers are fromChina, it is clearly satire Chinese people that they spend a lot of money to buy the products while the foreigners are not interested. During the latest years, indeed, most people become rich, as the fortune comes so fast, people have no idea where to spend the money, so they chase
如何写活动介绍类作文 写活动介绍类作文的三点建议 1. 了解题目要求和要点内容，写作时注意总分结构的使用。 2. 按照要点顺序列出写作提纲。 3. 要点之间可以用序数词或过渡性的句子衔接。 写好中考作文的十个简单原则 1. 是表达，而不是印象。 2. 简单的句子效果最好。 3. 主动，而不是被动。 4. 了解目标受众。 5. 大声朗读。 6. 尽量避免使用行话。 7. 词的长短也很重要。 8. 肯定比否定要更好——即使在写作中！ 9. 留下时间来修改和重写——在你写完全部内容后。 10. 写下来。每时每刻。 中考英语作文满分必备万能句 1. It goes without saying that... /(It is) needless to say (that).../ It is obvious that...不用说…… ?It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.不用说早睡早起是值得的。 2. Among various kinds of.../ Of all the... 在各种……之中 ?Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。 3. In my opinion/To my mind/ As far as I am concerned/ I am of the opinion that... 就我的看法……; 我认为…… ?In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。 4. With the increase/growth of the population... 随着人口的增加……
mydream英语作文150字 The high unemployment rate of college students is said to more than 10 %. Many college students plain about the difficulty of looking for a job. In this case, I hold the opinion that one should have a dream in childhood, and keep struggling for dream. On the other hand, one is not supposed to expect too much of himself, and start everything from the most basic. I have my own dream. Not to be a scientist or a doctor, but to be a teacher. I’m sure of this dream. Teacher is a great career in my eyes, and play an important part in the society. I know it is not easy to realize my dream. But I am willing to study hard from now on. I’m sure my dream will e true. 1\150字的英语作文：My family Hello everyone. My name is li Yihan. I am from China. I like playing football. My mother likes playing tennis.Oh,yes. This is My father. He likes playing puter games." Hello,good morning." This is My sister . She dones't like playing sports and playing puter games. Do you know what she likes? Oh,yes. She likes reading books. This is my family. I love it very much. 2\初一英语作文150字：我的同学.
学生浪费食物的英语作文 As is known to all waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. We can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. Stone students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on. The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. In the first place it makes stone students dependent on their parents for money which is harmful to their development. If they don't learn to support themselves they will be "useless people" when they graduate. In the second place it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. There are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help. As far as I am concerned I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all I will refrain from wasting anything from food to stationery. What's more I'm determined to call on more school nates to fight against waste. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus. 【参考以上】 众所周知校园浪费已成为一个越来越严重的问题。我们能够很容易地看到很多学生把大量的食物在垃圾桶里。石头学生花几千元买时髦的衣服等等。 浪费的负面影响能够体现在以下方面。首先它使石头学生依赖他们的父母要钱这是有害于他们的发展。如果他们不学会养活自己他们
1、En glish TeaCher MiSS Tang is my English teacher. She ' S Very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes CatS Very much. And She likes Singing and dancing, too. Her English is Very good. We ofte n play games in En glish classes. She is Very kind to us. We all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词［组］,以免写出一些错句 子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。 2、friend and I I ' Ve got a lovely friend at school. HiS nameis Jack. JaCk is 12 years old now. I ' m 11. He ' S older than me. He ' S 150 Cm tall. I ' m 148 cm. He' S taller and stronger. He' S 43 kg and I ' m41 kg. He' S heavier. We Ve got round faces and short hair. BUt my eyes are bigger and my legs are Ionger. OUr favourite colours are White and blue. We like SUmmer best. WebOth like sports, too. On SatUrdays, We play table tennis. OnSUndays, We play basketball. He ' S good at basketball. BUt I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy We are! 【要领点评】 写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。既然写作范围是两个人物，就要笔墨均匀，两者缺一不可。不能只描写朋友，也不能只叙述我。这无形中增加了写作的难度。解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况，再进行比较，通过比较突出每个人物的特点。这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。 时态：像此类题目的作文，运用一般现在时即可。 句型：因为涉及两个人的比较，不要忘记使用比较级句型：A+be+比较级+than+B。注意：在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时，应一边列举，一边比较。不要一味指出不同，还要列举相同之处。两人能成为朋友，一定有共同语言和喜好，共性不容忽视。在表达喜好时，不同的句型应交叉运用，避免枯燥的重复。 例“OUr favourite colours are, ” ，“ WeIike , best ”，“WebOth like , ,too ”， 为突出不同时间做不同运动，用“ OnSatUrdayS , ”，“ OnSUndays, ”，形成鲜明 对比。常使用并列连词and和转折连词but ,使文章读起来更流畅。结尾以How happy We are!突出了两人从友谊中得到的快乐！ 3、根据下面提供的内容，写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺，条理清楚，字数不少于50个单词。 Mary是个英国女孩，五年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她 有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。 例文：My name is Mary. I COme from England. I am an English girl. I
英语作文写作要点及评分标准 一、写作要点： 1、人们对此有不同看法； 2、赞同：理由一、理由二； 3、反对：理由一、理由二； 4、你的看法。 二、英语作文评分标准 1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的 要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3、词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。 4、评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量 和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 7、内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 各档次的给分范围和要求： Ⅰ. 第五档(很好)；(21-25分)： ⑴完全完成了试题规定的任务；⑵覆盖所有内容要点； ⑶应用了较多的语法结构和词汇； ⑷语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词 汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力； ⑸有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑； ⑹完全达到了预期的写作目的。 Ⅱ. 第四档(好)：(16-20分) ⑴完全完成了试题规定的任务；⑵虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容； ⑶应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求； ⑷语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致； ⑸应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑； ⑹达到了预期的写作目的。 Ⅲ. 第三档(适当)：(11-15分) ⑴基本完成了试题规定的任务； ⑵虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容； ⑶应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求； ⑷有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解； ⑸应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯； ⑹整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 Ⅳ. 第二档(较差)：(6-10分) ⑴未恰当完成试题规定的任务；⑵漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；
有关校园浪费的英语作文 【篇一】相关校园浪费的英语作文 As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. We can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. Some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on. The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. In the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development. If they don’t learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people” when they graduate. In the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. There are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help. As far as I am concerned, I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all, I will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. What’s more, I’m determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus. 【篇二】相关校园浪费的英语作文 Nowadays, there is too much waste on some campus. You can see students leaving their dorms with lights on. You also find that many a student, after washing their clothes,