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sat写作事例汇总
sat写作事例汇总

1.Franklin Roosevelt: Paralytic illness

a. adversity

b. hard work

c. self-satisfaction

2.William Shakespeare:

great British playwright(剧作家)

1564 Duirng Renaissance

a.adversity :

born rich -Father : John Shakespeare engage in business

after his father went into bankruptcy, he dropped school and

begin making a living by himself.

Apprentice in Butcher’s shop;

b.creativity :”Better a witty fool than a foolish wit”

“Don’t glid the lily”

“The empty vessels make the greatest sound”

1.Romeo AND Juliet:

Capulet Juliet: courageous.

2.KING LEAR

Freedom :

3.HAMLET: to be or not to be

a.HIGH morality

b. Courage

c.choices

3.Oscar Claude Monet: impressionist painter-

Born in Paris

Grocery store:

5

1923: two operations (cataract白内障)

Color & shadow ;detail

“spatterdock”(睡莲); “sunrise”

a.hard work can change fate.

b.Focus on detail/ subject

c.Stick to one’s own idea

d.Identity

4.Abraham Lincoln:

1809:born into a poor family, do a lot of farm work.

9-mother died;

22-business fail;

23-fail in Senator election;

1860-US President

American Civil War: 1861,4: by peace the Emancipation

Proclamation

51- US 16thpresident

a. Adversity

b.perseverance

c.self-satisfaction

d.leadership

e. deception

5.William Henry Bill Gates III

4-5 page essay

check encyclopedia,wrote more than 30 pages essay.

a.Pursue perfection

b. focus on detail

c.courage

d.self-satisfaction

philanthropist n.

Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation

2008.6.27

1,3 million

e. grasp opportunity

f. choices

6. Mitsubishi Electrical Industrial Co. ltd./ Steven jobs

Focus on detail

6.Warren Edward Buffett:

Famous invetor/ a langendary figure in the stock marlet.

a. focus on one subject: full of investment conciousness

1. 5 years old selling gum

2. in high school- act as newsboy; act with partners to lease billiard

ball game machine to a barber to earn extra cash

3. 11 years old- buy his first stock.

b.self-satisfaction:

2006/6/25: 37.5 billion US $ to charity –the biggest one in the world. 88% of his whole asset.

2009/6/30: Lunch with wealth people, auction to collect money for charity –ebay 1,68 million

99%

8.Gabrielle Bonheur Coco Channel:

one of the premier fashion designers in Paris, France

1883 born in France

12 : mother died ; deserted by father

Live in orphanage for 7 years

a. personal gain: use immoral method: First a mistress of a wealthy military officer then of an English industrialist, Coco Chanel drew on the resources of these patrons in setting up a millinery shop in Paris in 1910, expanding to Deauville and Biarritz. The two men also helped her find customers among women of society, and her simple hats became popular.

b. creativity:originality/fashion designer:Coco Chanel's designs helped set the fashion tone for the 20th century

9.Jane Austen:

British Novelist and Realist.

Pride and Prejudice

It is universally acknowledged that a man with great fortune must be in want of a wife.

Protagonist n. snobbish a.

a.change

b.self-satifaction:

Darcy:sacrifice money for seek of true love.

c. courage ,

Elizabeth:self-satisfaction is more important than money or fame.

10.Benjamin Franklin-

the drafter of the Declaration of Independence(1757-1775), US Constitution

inventor- lighting conductor ; the first inventor and scientists who enjoys an international reputation.

a.creativity

b.adversity

born poor, Two years schooling

c.hard work

12: apprentice

During 10 years work as a printer,

he read store.

Self-study : four language: Spanish, Italian, French, Latin

11.Charles Robert Darwin

Natural Selection; Origin of Species

1831 graduated from Combridge University ,giving up well-paid occupation –priest, participated in British government-orginzed world voyage.

a.fight authority

Fight Aristotle on natural selection

b.adversity:

Low IQ. Mocked by neighbour

c.stick to truth

d.focus on detail

study theology in Cambridge

Careful observation for different speices

e. self-satisfaction

f. pursue own dream

12.Henry Patrick: give me freedom or give me death.

Thomas Jefferson: All man are created equal. The Declaration of Independence

13. Helen Adamas Keller

Educator / writer/ philanthropist

1880, 6 Alabama

1882, 19- month Scarlet Fever

1887, Anne Sullivan

a. adversity

1899 harvard university

1964 Time Magazine

“Three Days to See”

14. Michael Jeffery Jordan:

3 NBA All Star

10 Scoring Title,

6 Final Most Valuable Player,

After many years of playing basketball, he returned to NBA in 1995. 1992-1994,play baseball, not a good player

1999 returned once agin.

a.perserverance

b. focus on one subject

15. Marie Curie :

female scientist, physicist.chemist

find radium, polonium

Tutoring 7 years

a.hard work / pursue perfection

universite de Paris

10; 107

1903

1911

a.self-satisfaction: not get patent right, not for fame or

money.

b.Stick to truth:sacrifice whole life, receive presure

from all walks of life.

c. courage

d. judgment: majority opinion-poor guide in her cas

e.

e. adversity:

f. choices

16. Jane Goodall:

British primatologist, ethologist, zoologist, anthropologist, and UN Messenger of Peace.

the world's foremost expert on chimpanzees

45-year study of social and family interactions of wild chimpanzees in Gombe Stream National Park, Tanzania.

She is the founder of the Jane Goodall Institute and has worked extensively on conservation and animal welfare issues.

study chimpanzee 45 years

Two beliefs: only human use tools;

Chimpanzees were passive vegetarians.

Chimpanzees share emotions

a. perserverance

b.hard work

c. focus on one subject: love animal since childhoo

d.

17. Mother Teresa

17. Lance Edward Armstrong:

1996.10:cancer/ 12 weeks

Carie(凯丽)

champion of 1999-2004 le Tour de France.

a.hard work

b. Fight cancer

Hard practice before the tournament.

18. Michael Schumacher:

F1 Formular

1969 born in Germany

1997, The last race crash into his competitor Jacques

Villenerve(Canadian) who has a very cloose score to him

intentionally, score cancelled by FIA.?

a. Too much emphasis on winning/personal gain

19. Napoleon Bonaparte:

build empire

a.Great leadership.

b.Too much on winning

c. perservance

d. Pride goes before a fall

e. focus on detail –Invade Russia 1812.1

f. choices

Neglect the server weather in Russia, troops suffer a great

deal

19.Barack Obama:

first African-American President

20.Ming Yao:

A. Courage:

hard-training 2002, US-NBA

b. adversity

c. self-satisfaction:

2008 earthquake in China,

donate 20 Million US to help build “Hope School ”

21. Alexandre Dumas ,fils :

The Lady of the Camellias

Father: Alexandre Dumas: civil servant

Mother: tailor

1824.7 born in Paris

1831. acknowledged by father

Deligent

a. creativity

b. adversity

22.Thomas Edison:

invent light bulb,

more than a 1000 kind of filaments for making

bulb. …tungsten filament

20,000 times of failure in experiment.

a. success v.s failure

b.Optimistic

c. perseverance

d. Grasp opportunity:

during the Gilded Age ; founder of General Electronic

Company

23.Mohandas Gandhi:

Indian political and spiritual leader.

“Non-violence non cooperative movement”

a. courage

24.Socrates:

offer free teaching ,selflessness

a.self-satisfaction

25. Oprah Winfrey-

1954.1.: born in Mississippi

19 : MTVF

33: “Empress”of US famous Talk show

48: billionnare (first African-American woman)

30 Emmy Awards

a.adversity:

Born very poor , self-study

b.creativity:

Rely on Creativity to gain her own status and TV apperance

26.Henry Ford:

a.adversity

was born into a poor family in Michigan.

b.creativity:

1.tinkering with machine-Locomotive with great

magnitutue.-auto industry contribution.

2. assembling line

3. 8 hours

4. T-model

c. focus on detail

d.great opportunity:

Incorporated ford company in 1903.

a.great leadership

8h /5 dallars

great leader act as commoners / perserverance

27.Scarlet Letter:

Protagnist: Hester –adultery ; sinful

Adversity / self-satisfaction/ choices /judgment

28. Andrew Carnegie:

A.Born poor

Sine 13, sell newspaper.

b. During the Gilded Age, he heard about the “Bessemer

Converter”, and thought of applied it into iron extracting process.

And it greatly accelerated the extracting company. And became

“iron King” and the richest man at the time.

c.The Gospel of Wealth-self satisfaction :

1919:3500 libraries. And founded Carnegie Mellon College.

29.John Locke: “property Gurantees liberty”

30.The Great Gatesby

American Dream. Illusionment / disillusioment

Daisy overnight rich/ newly rich

Self -satisfaction

Deception

Judgment / truth

choices

31. The Troy:

Achilles-great warrior/ pride goes before a fall

Achillis’s heel

Hector-

Hero ?

32.. Gone with the Wind –

Scarlet / Ashley / Berad

Optimistic / adversity / perservrance / self-satisfaction 33.Tiger Woods

Topic :

1.technology

2.creativity

3.success & failure

4.virtue:honesty/selflessness

/hard-working/perservance/courage

5.judgement

6.freedom

7.truth

8.cooperation VS. Competition

9. choices

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