写作的重要性6分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为9分。
评判作文
四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。
内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。
语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。
基本表达
人们认为：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that
越来越：be increasingly+adj.,be on the rise,the growing number of
万能理由（Omnipotence）
1.方便：convenient/convenience
2.效率：efficient/efficiently/efficiency
3.节省和浪费：save time/money/space;economical,thrift
waste time/money/space;costly,lavish
4.人的心理健康：independent,cooperative,competitive,
considerate,confident,creative,sociable,
perseverance;selfish,isolated,conserative
5.人的身体健康：health,disease,strong,strength,energetic
6.娱乐：colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relax
tired,boring,lonely
7.环境：environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty
8.安全和危险：safe,danger,risk
9.经验：experience,social experience,enter the society
10.人际：humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely
写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改）
1、字母大小写
2、怪符号
3、单词拼写
4、主谓一致
5、动词时态
6、名词单复数
实例一
题目：Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途
Score:8
Bicycle is an important means of transport in China.The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese.The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage.They can only afford a bicycle,and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive.So Chinese usually buy a bicycle,and use it to go to work,or go to travel and so on.The other reason is the large population of China.All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.
The bicycle,compared to the car,is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it.It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car.This point is very important to China,because of the lack of land.It isn’t too expensive,so Chinese can afford it.It doesn’t need any oil,and it can’t cause the polusion.All of these are the good needs compared to the car.
In the future,bicycle will be widely used.And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.
Score:14
Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour,you can see that thousands of people--man and woman,old and young--ride their bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called“the kingdom of bicycles”.
注：1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。
2.During the rush hour分词结构开头。
3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。
Compared with cars,bicycles are superior in many ways.First,they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride.Second,riding bicycle is good for health.Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution.Though cars are faster and more comfortable,they are too expensive.They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air.Sometimes,it is difficult for a driver to park his car.Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.
注：https://www.doczj.com/doc/a05564668.html,pared with cars分词结构开头。
2.be superior to/be inferior to优于/低于
3.thirst,second,third英语语言有层次感，信号词
4.cheap便宜，最好用inexpensive
5.be good for health对健康有好处（万能理由）
6.Moreover表示递进
In my opinion,the future of bicycle is very promising.Since China is a developing country and has a large population,I think,riding bicycle is
appropriate to Chinese present conditions.It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.
注：promising有前途的a promising young man
Score:11
There millions of bicycles in today’s China.Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives.Because to ride a bicycle is very simple,to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money,to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world,especially in China.
注：第一句应该用there be结构
Compared with a car,a bicycle is much cheaper.It is more suitable for China as a developing country.And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has.On the contrary,a bicycle is too slow,it costs more times than a car.
I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run.Because it will be replaced by a car,a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China,the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improved.
I、对比观点选择题：1.有人认为……；2.另外一些人认为……； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。（最好写成4段）
实例二99年6月真题
Reading Selectively Or Extensively?
Outline:1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书 3.我的想法How should we read?Should we read selectively or extensively?Everyone has his own view.
Some people think we should read selectively.They argue that with the development of modern science and technology,more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What’s more,there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind,and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books,we must read selectively.
But others may not agree,they emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge,he will have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields,he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge,we must read extensively.
Who’s right?I think both of them have something right.But I think we should read extensively first.We should read books in many fields,and read
selectively in one field.
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：
（启）Paragraph I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
Score:14分
How should we read?Should we read selectively or extensively?Everyone has his own view.（启）
注：第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：
（承）Paragraph II：（1）提出一种观点或优点；（2）本段的支持性分论点；（3）
渡句；（2）提出另一种观点或缺点；（3）本段的支持性分论点（4）本段总（可
获取知识acquire/get knowledge
5.knows nothing→little；he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society后者比前者更委婉
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法；
范文22.Is Television a Blessing or a Curse?
Now,it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people’s lives.But,there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse.
注：it is generally accepted that人们通常认为
As is often pointed out by some people,television keeps one better informed about current events,allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science,and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating.The most distant countries,the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into one’s room.注：1.As is often pointed out by some people=Some people think that
2.“使……”不用make，而用keep,allow,offer
However,other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing. They argue that it has brought about many serious problems.The major one is its effects on young people.They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened.Even worse than that,vulgar commercials and indecent programs may cultivate their bad tastes,distort their viewpoints towards human life to such a degree that their minds might be corrupted.
In summary,television has both advantages and disadvantages. Whatever effects it has,one thing is certain,television in itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.
范文5.Travelling
People who like travelling have their reasons.They maintain that travelling can help them expand their scope of knowledge,especially geographical and historical learning.They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have.
注：geographical and historical押尾韵，如：押头韵clear&clean Those who dislike travelling have their reasons.They would argue that travelling means a considerable amount of money and energy.For example, traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.
In practice,travelling does more good than harm.If your finance and
health permit,you might as well do some travelling from time to time.It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.
注：1.in practice=I think2.does more good than harm好处比坏处多，其他表达方法：be superior to/inferior to比如：the advantages are superior to the disadvantages 3.enable使
范文1.Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test(CET).Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker.Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely.A test of English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English,and will thus help them with their communicating skills.
使句子具有表现力的手段：1、用形容词修饰名词；2、副词修饰动词、副词修饰形容词
On the other hand,some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners.To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework.Another required test will only add to their burden.Moreover,some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several guessed questions according to the fixed format of the test,hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck.
In my opinion,a test of spoken English will do more good than harm.Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform,the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society.Whether I take the test or not,I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.
范文21.Should smoking be banned?
Should smoking be banned?Answers to this question vary greatly.Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking.They always say that it can get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed.And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship.Therefore,they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go.
注：1.vary greatly许多种2.be in favor of=agree/be of the opinion that
3.get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed使人神清气爽
4.Giving and being given给与被给。主、被动关系在英文中用现在、过去分词表达。
But other people consider it very harmful to people’s health.They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second.And they have heard the doctor’s warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack.In addition,smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents. Thus it has become a major threat to people’s life and property.
注：1.They have heard the official reports that...官方报告表明..2.be more likely to更有可能，更容易3.chance可能
There is some truth in both arguments,but human’s life and property outweighs anything else.If smoking brings us illness and death,why not
can’’t we come up have it banned by the government?Without cigarettes,can
with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed?注：1. outweigh比……重要，同样的表达：be superior to/be inferior to。overweight 超重2.最后用两句反问句结尾，非常精妙。
课后作业Private Cars
写成4段的首段写法：
In recent years,with fast economic growth,private cars have appeared in many families in China.People's attitude toward private cars varies widely.
②With the increase in the general standard of living,some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car.Yet,people's opinions of private cars vary from person to person/public attitude toward it varies greatly/widely./is quite of the contrary./differs sharply.
③In recent few years,the phenomenon/issue/problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/in the limelight.People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.
写成3段的首段写法：
With the development of modern society/science and technology,/With the improvement of people's living standard,
more and more people can own private cars.
cars are entering ordinary families.
the growing number of people/people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)
支持段的主题句：
Some people claim that/As is pointed out that/It is generally believed that/It is
there are some advantages of owning a private car. There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.
支持段的分论点：
①方便First,private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.
②舒适Second,it is comfortable for people to travel in,especially in changeable weather/raining days/sand storm.
③炫耀Third,only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/success/prosperity in his or her career.
否定段的主题句：①However(Nonetheless/Nevertheless/But),there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/Every coin has two sides.
②While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us,we should not ignore the problem they create/produce/introduce/make.
③Despite/In spite of/For all the advantages,they brings their own disadvantages/problems/negative effects
④Like anything else,private cars also have their own weakness/limits.
⑤However,private cars are not without shortcomings/faults.
⑥Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought.They complain that......
⑦However,private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.
⑧Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars,the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.
否定段的分论点：
①占有空间On the one hand,private cars take up/occupy too much space.
②交通事故On the other hand,a driver should be careful/cautious while driving,otherwise,car accidents are more likely to happen.
③污染环境What's more/In addition,private cars give off/discharge/
CO which pollute the environment/air.
注意：所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的，就是比较superordinate的词；而下义词就是具体的东西，即subordinate的东西。
第四段（总结段）的写法：
①Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above,I still think that the advantages outweigh/are greater than the disadvantages.As for the above
problem,I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved.
②Unquestionably,the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them,so that they will not control us.
③Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer,yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated.
④Anyway/Anyhow/In any case,whether the effect is good or bad,one thing is certain:private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation,our leisure and our life.
选择题型变体逻辑结构（My View on Sth.）
选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构：
Paragraph I:（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
Paragraph II:（1）提出作者观点（本文主题句）；
（2）举例加以论证。
Paragraph III:（1）总结全文（再次强调作者观点）
范文17.My View on Fate
There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate.Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change,while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.
注：1.consensus相同意见
2.第一句话可以套用，如范文18：There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth.
3.while轻微转折和对比，强转折用词but,however
4.master 主人
As far as I am concerned,I agree with the latter opinion.There is a saying,“Everyone is the architect of his own future.”Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands.In fact,no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life.Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have.We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.
注：1.第一句as far as与I agree重复，把后半句改为the latter opinion seems more reasonable。
2.architect建筑师，archor弓箭手
3.In fact前后是转折关系，之前从正面阐述，之后从反面阐述
范文17.My View on Fate（续）
Let’’s take Helen Keller,an extraordinary American woman,for example. Let
When she was only19months old,she became blind and deaf.Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly,she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the President’s Medal of Freedom in1964because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind,the deaf and the speechless.This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.注：1.本段开始举例
2.Let's take……for example中间是插入语，表示强调，举例不宜太长。In conclusion,I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard.We should bear the following saying in mind,“Every man is the master of his own fate.”
注：bear sth.in mind：把……牢记在心
范文13.The Way to Success
第二段：Strong will,perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed,but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies.Marx often worked15hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.
II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构
Paragraph1:(1)概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点（general）；
(2)具体描述这个事物或者观点（或者是我对这个现象/事物的基本看法specific）。
Paragraph2:(1)作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句；
(2)支持性的细节分论点（至少两点）；
(3)本段总结（可以省略）。
Paragraph3:(1)总结全文，定下结论（通常为我的对策或看法）。
四级作文试题2000年1月
Directions:
For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education.You should write at least100words,and
base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多多种途径解决。
2.哪种途径适合我（说明理由）。
How I Finance My College Education
How I Finance My College Education
第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：
Nowadays/At present/Currently/These days/Today,tuitions and fees for college students are【more expensive】much higher than ever before.How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.
第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱
第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/are various.
第二段分写：
In the first place,I can get/gain/obtain all the money from my parents.
In the second place,I can a bank loan,especially set up/ established for college students/undergraduates.
What
What’’s more,I can find a part time job to earn enough money.
第三段：我所赞同的方法（阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法）。
Personally/As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/From my point of view/To my way of thinking/As I see it,I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons. For one thing,my parents are not rich enough to afford me.
For another,I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/temporary/odd jobs.
In addition,I believe I can hunt a job after graduation,and then I will be able to pay off/pay back/return/give back.
Therefore/So/Hence,.....
使文章富有表现力的手段：
1、使用有难度的词汇；
2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子；
3、使用被动语态；
4、使用倒装句；(not only...but also...；only...)
5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。
绿化我们的城市
第一段：
近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人
们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。
普通版
Recently,with the development of businesses and industries,more and more trees have disappeared in big cities.We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees.But,it is important to realize to make our cities green.
润色版
In contemporary society,while our industries and businesses have experienced a(n)rapid/fast/amazing/marked/fantastic development,the number of trees in many large cities has declined/decreased/reduced sharply/dramatically.Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut,the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance.
注：区分industry和industrial
绿化我们的城市（续）
第二段：
绿化城市会带来很多好处。其一，绿化城市能够净化空气。科学研究已经证明树木通过吸收作用可以降低大气中碳化合物的含量。其二，它能够美化城市。到处是花草树木，我们会欣然地感到自己置身于美丽的花园中。最后，绿化城市能够带来大量木材，这是解决自然资源短缺的有效办法。
普通版
There are many advantages in making cities greener.First,it makes our air clean.Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption. Second,it adds to the beauty of our cities.With trees and flowers everywhere,there is a pleasant feeling that we live in a beautiful garden and are closer to nature.Finally,it will bring us a lot of timber.And this is an effective way to solve the problem of lack of natural resources.
润色版
What benefits can the program of making cities greener bring to us?First, the air will be cleaner.Scientific experiments have already proved that trees can reduce air pollution by producing a lot of oxygen.This will improve the quality of the urban environment.Second,our cities will look more beautiful. Just imagine the city which is full of trees and flowers.What an attractive garden it is!What’s more,by making cities greener,we can provide our industry with timber the precious natural resources.
绿化我们的城市（续）
第三段：
绿化城市需要全国人民共同努力，人们不仅要广泛认识到城市绿化对城市环境的贡献，还应该同心协力栽植更多的树木并保护它们不受商业使用的侵犯。普通版
Making cities greener requires people’s efforts all over the country. And people should not only realize that it is important to make cities greener for its contribution to urban environment,but also plant trees and protect them from being used in business.
润色版
Making cities greener requires more than widespread awareness;it calls for an immediate commitment to planting more trees and growing more flowers.
(Making cities greener requires the whole nation’s efforts.And not only should most people gain the awareness of the significant contribution of making cities greener to urban environment,but also make a commitment to the protection of more trees against business.)
句型变化
A.(1)We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.(2)There are many trees along the streets.(3)There is a clean river in the city.(4)There are many fishes in the river.(5)There are willow trees on the one side.(6)There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.(7)There are many flowers on them.
B.(1)Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener.(2)Green trees line the streets.(3)A clean river winds through the city,in which a lot of fishes abound.(4)On the one side stand rows of willow trees.(5)On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.
1.There be...
1)a.There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.
b.Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.
2)a.There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.
b.Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.
2.If
1)a.If you compare the two methods carefully,you will find the difference.
b.Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.
2)a.If we only apply book knowledge,we will not get good result.
b.The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.
3)a.If there is no pollution,man can certainly survive.
b.Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.
3.In order to
1)a.In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve,we must take an immediate step.
b.An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.
2)a.In order to build a stable and prosperous nation,people should make new efforts.
b.New efforts will bring...
4.More and more
1)a.More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
b.People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
2)a.More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.
b.The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.
3)a.More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.
b.Teenage smoking is on the rise/increase/decrease/decline in recent years.
4) a.More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.
b.There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.
5)a.More and more trees have disappeared in the city.
b.There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.
社会热点话题
写作练习：Jobs for Graduates
1)大学生难找工作
2)原因很多
3)解决的办法
With the fantastic development of modern society,people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education（高等教育）.As a result,job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.
范文23：Nowadays,college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job.Most/Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.
The job market for college students/graduates is getting
tighter and tighter.According to a survey,only80%of college graduates of the class of2002found jobs the year they graduated,compared with95%in 2000.Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs?
第二段细节论证
分析原因：
1、Among the most convincing/important reasons given/cited/offered/ identified by people for this problem/phenomenon,one should be stressed/emphasized/mentioned...
2、One may regard/see/view/think of the trend/increase/phenomenon as
a sign of/result of/response to/reaction to...
3、The increase/change/failure/success in...mainly/largely/partly results from/arises from is due to/owing to/attributable to the fact that/several factors...
Several years ago,many students were enrolled in/admitted to/ taken in/matriculated popular major,so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/exceeds the demand.Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/western provinces/developing areas/less developed country. Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations,such as...
国家制定法律法规
个人接受教育
III、图表题（table,bar graph,pie chart,line graph）
图表题的写作逻辑结构：
Paragraph I:（1）概括描述图表：趋势描写；
（2）具体描述图表：必要数据支持（细节性）。
Paragraph II:（1）提出自己理由和观点（本段主题句）；
（2）细节性分论点（主要是原因，用于支持自己的观点，至少两点）。
Paragraph III:（1）预测未来和提出解决方法；
（2）总结全文和表达作者自己观点
【标题】Changes in People’s Diet
Directions:Write a three-paragraph composition to:
1.State the changes in people’s diet in the past five years.
2.Give possible reasons for the changes.
3.Draw your own conclusion.
You should quote as few figures as possible.
【短文】Changes in People’s Diet
In the past five years there have been many changes in people’s diet.Grain, as the main food of most Chinese,is now playing a less important role, while the proportion of some high-energy foods,such as milk and meat,has increased.
What has caused these changes?I think there are two reasons.First, people now have more money.The price of meat and milk is much higher than that of grain,so in the old days people couldn’t afford them.Now they have enough money to buy both meat and milk.Second,people nowadays pay more attention to the elements of their diet.They look for a well-balanced diet that will be good for their health.
In short,there have been changes in people’s diet in the past five years because of financial and health reasons,and there will be further changes in the future
【修改版】
As can be seen from the table,the past five years has witnessed dramatic changes in people’s diet.Grain,as the staple food of most Chinese,is now playing a less important role in their diet,while the consumption of high quality food such as meat,milk and fruit has greatly increased.
There are two factors leading to the change.For one thing,people now enjoy a higher standard of living.In the old days few families could afford meat and milk every day,which often meant a big chunk of the family income.But now people have enough money to taste a rich verity of foods. For another,people of today attach more attention to nutrition.They are not merely content to fill the stomach.They are seeking the most reasonable diet which will do good to their health.
In a word,with people’s standard of living getting higher and higher, changes in their diet will be more obvious and greater.
图表题的适用句型：
1.As we can see from the chart/graph/table/diagram,...
2.The chart/graph shows/displays that...
3.As can be shown in the table...,
4.The figures/statistics in the chart reflect/show/reveal that...,
5.It is clear/apparent from the chart/table that...
V、谚语格言题逻辑结构
Paragraph I：（1）点明要阐释的谚语或名言（general）；
（2）用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思，有时有正反两
面的逻（specific）。
Paragraph II：（1）作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度，即文章的论点句；
（2）支持性的细节分论点，举例子论证（至少两点，有时有正反两面的逻辑）；
Paragraph III：总结全文，定下结论（通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义）。
Practice Makes Perfect
Practice is the key to success in all fields of activity.It is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something perfectly without wasting effort,this is the result of long practice.【改写为】An English proverb says/One of the greatest men once remarked/Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb: "Practice makes perfect".It means that/In other words,it is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something without wasting effort,this is the result of long practice.
Practice Makes Perfect（续）
Take the study of English for example.Only practice can enable us to spell words correctly and master the rules of grammar.And it is only through practice that we can become fluent in speaking and writing,there is no other way.Another good example is sports.Practice is the only way to become stronger and run faster.Besides,in team games practice is what improves our sense of cooperation and helps the team to win.
【改写为】History/Our society abounds with the examples of"Practice makes perfect".......（正反两方面都举例子）On the other hand/On the contrary,no practice will only lead us to failure.There is hardly/scarcely a man who can achieve success without practice.All evidence points to/ justifies/lends supports to the fact that practice is the key to success in all fields of activity.
举例一般为：英语学习；体育锻炼
To sum up,there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice.
【改写为】For us college students,the saying/proverb has a profound and realistic significance:there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice
课后复习（self-study Program）
1、课堂讲解内容：体会用词艺术和丰富的句式
2、写作练习：2002年6月真题（Student Use of Computers）
3、记忆写作万能理由和基本表达
4、完型填空练习：完成Passage1--Passage3
做题步骤：
（1）通读全文，了解文章大意；
（2）初选答案（排除法、优选法）；
（3）寻找线索；
（4）回头补缺；
（5）核实答案。
图表题：2002年6月考题
Topic:Student Use of Computers(at least150words)
1、上图所示为1990、1995、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化；
2、请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；
3、你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。
2002年6月的图表题作文：
As is shown by the bar graph,the average number of hours a student in a certain university spends on the computer per week increased dramatically over the period from1990to2000.In1990,it was less than two hours.And in1995,it hit/reach four hours.And in2000,the number soared to（飞速上升）nearly twenty hours,which is over ten times than that of1990.
注：soared to/boom/shoot up/rocket/jump飞速上升
climb上升很慢
shrink下降，缩水
第一段还有一种写法：……In1990,the number was less than2hours,while the figure hit4hours（或者这样写：while in1995,）as compared with that of 1990,it had almost doubled.And what impress us most is that the figure soared to...,which…
Obviously computers are becoming increasingly popular for males and for females.A multitude of factors could account for the rise.In the first place,computers facilitate us in more aspects of life.Also,the rapid development of the internet enlarges our demands for using computers.We
can easily contact friends in remote places through the internet.In the second place,the prices of computers are getting lower and lower,which enable more students to purchase them.
However,there still exist some problems,such as,poor quality, out-of-date designs and so on.And how to balance the time between using computers an studying is also a serious problem.Anyhow,we will benefit a lot from computers as long as we use them properly.
IV、书信题的写作方法：
（一）信封格式：
名字、信箱、地域范围由小到大，写在右下角（与我们相反）。
（二）信纸格式：
日期：背月份的缩写
称呼（后面的标点是逗号）:Dear Sir or Madam,To whom it may concern,正文：空4个字节或者顶格写，段与段之间空行）
签名：sincerely yours
书信写作的五点要求：
1、开门见山说意图
2、咨询/建议1、2、
3、
3、不同内容可分段
4、感谢客气不可少
5、期待回信成老套
（三）开头段：
1、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你）
Dear Sir/Mr.Prometheus,
I was a student at your college,enrolled in Philosophy Department.
/I am a…at your…
/I am a…at your college,enrolled in the…course.
/My name is…,I am…
2、问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）
Dear Prometheus,
Hello/Hi.How are you?/I hope everything is fine./How are things going with you?
/How are you getting on in/getting along with…..?
3、解释写信的原因
（1）致谢：
I deeply appreciate your courtesy and I hope to reciprocate your favor when
一、引出开头 1：It is well-known to us that……（我们都知道……）==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …（就我所知…）2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最近……问题引起了关注）3：Nowadays（overpopulation）has become a problem we have to face.（现今，人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题）4：Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.（互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题）5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……（随着科技的迅速发展，越来越多的人认为……）6：It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……（人们一般认为……）7：A lot of people seem to think that……（很多人似乎认为……）8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子（全世界都知道...） 二、表达不同观点 1：People's views on……vary from person to person. Some hold that……However, others believe that……（人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……）2：People may have different opinions on……（人们对……可能会持有不同见解）3：Attitudes towards （drugs）vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards（failure）（人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异）4:There are different opinions among people as to……（对于……人们的观点大不相同） 三、表示结尾 1：In short, it can be said that……（总之，他的意思是……）2：From what has been mentioned above, w e can come to the conclusion that……（从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论……）3：Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……（把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……）4：Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……（因此，我们最好的出这样的结论……）5:There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.（毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点）6：All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.（总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题） 四、提出建议 1：It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).（该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了）2：There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……（毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够重视）3：Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……（显然，如果我们想要做么事，很重要的是……）
最牛英语口语培训模式：躺在家里练口语，全程外教一对一，三个月畅谈无阻！ 洛基英语，免费体验全部在线一对一课程：https://www.doczj.com/doc/a05564668.html,/ielts/xd.html（报名网址） Obligations We all encounter obligations in life, from spending time with family and friends to being present at important functions in the lives of the people who form our community. Many times, the obligations are actually fun and fulfilling, and we want to be there. At the same time, we all sometimes experience resistance to meeting these obligations, especially when they pile up all at once and we begin to feel exhausted, longing for nothing so much as a quiet evening at home. At times like these, we may want to say no but feel too guilty at the idea of not being there. Still, our primary obligation is to take care of ourselves, and if saying no to someone else is what we have to do, then we do not need to feel bad about it. There is a skill to balancing our obligations, and it starts with simply becoming aware of our schedule. We may notice that three invitations have arisen in one weekend, and we know that we will pay energetically if we attempt to fulfill all three. At this point, we can take the time to weigh the repercussions of not going to each event, considering how we will feel if we miss it and how our absence might affect other people. Most of the time, it will be clear which obligation we can most easily let go and which one we simply can’t miss. Sometimes we have to miss something really important to us, and that can be painful for everyone concerned. At times like this, reaching out with a phone call, a thoughtful card, or a gift lets people know that you are there in spirit and that your absence is by no means a result of you not caring. Meeting our obligations to others is an important part of being human and not one to take lightly. At the same time, we cannot meet every obligation without neglecting our primary duty to take care of ourselves. We can navigate this quandary by being conscious of what we choose to do and not do and by finding concrete ways to extend our caring when we are not able to be there in person.YouTheme Recreational Activities In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally. However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities. At last they are lured away from their study or their work. In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development. Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline
1. important =crucial (extremelyimportant),significant(amount or effect large enough to be important) 2. common=universal, ubiquitous(if something is ubiquitous, it seems to be everywhere) 3. abundant=ample(enough and usually extra), plentiful(enough for people's needs and wants) 4. stick=adhere, cling(hold on something tightly) 5. neglect=ignore.(difference: neglect means someone has not paid enough attention to something; ignore means no attention.) 6. near=adjacent(twothings next to each other), adjoin(the same as adjacent) 7. pursue=woo(man woos woman, old-fashioned), seek(if you seek sth, you try to obtain it. FORMAL) 8. accurate=precise(precise is exact and accurate in all details), exact(correct in every detail) 9. vague=obscure(unknown or known by only a few people) 10. top=peak, summit
作文 现象分析题 一、议论文正反观点题 "How to"题（大学生如何做） （一）现象分析 l 第一段：现象陈述 【校园现象】：In campus, it can often be heard about how to pass an exam, to hunt a good job or even to make friends. While, recently,it seems/ appears no other topics can arouse more students' attention than the one that 同位语从句. 【社会现象】：Nowadays, everybody who often reads the newspaper might well be exposed to such a fact as 同位语从句, which has recently been brought to the hub of the public attention. 【越来越多的人关注…】：?Nowadays, (话题关键词), as a hot topic, is increasingly arousing public attention for the very reason that (话题展开句). ?nowadays, the newspapers have pushed the issue of (话题关键词) to the hub of the public attention/ concern for the very reason that (话题展开句). l 第二段：原因=主题句+扩展句 主题句：If asked what I should do, well , I would like to do the followings. The first is to 原因1, "doing"原因2，no matter what kinds of difficulties lying ahead/ I will meet. The second, I think I had better (make full use of the school resources, such as the assistant work in a lab), which is also quite a good way. 扩展句：主观（think，feel…）"...to such an extent that ..."=so所以 the development of society/ economy The improvement of living standards The increase of population 客观The environment pollution The global warming
文都教育：大学英语四六级讲义——四级写作（下） 第四节题型分析 在本节中我们将以题型为依据进行分析讲解，以掌握各种题目的写作方法与技巧。下面就按照题型不同，分别进行讨论。 一、图表图画题型（） 表格和图表题型 表格和图表题型是大学英语写作中较为常见的题型之一，也是难度较大的一种写作题型，故大家应对此类题型加强练习，熟练掌握。 表格和图表题型写作注意事项 ●仔细研究题目以及提示信息，看准、看清图表中的数字、线条、阴影等部分 的变化趋势和走向，然后根据图表所显示的中心信息确定容层次以及主题句。 ●仔细观察分析图表所给出的大量信息，从中选取最重要，最有代表性，最核 心的信息，然后根据全文的主旨去组织运用所获取的关键信息,切忌简单地罗 列图表所给出的信息。 ●表格和图表题型写作一般采用一般现在时，但如果图表给出了具体时间参照， 则应对时态进行相应的调整。 ●表格和图表题型要求考生使用一些固定句型和表达法，大家应对此融会贯通。 ●表格和图表题型可以细分为表格，曲线图、柱形图和圆形图。除了上述共同 要点，还应弄懂这四种图在写作方面的各自特点。 ?表格形式要求考生对表格中所给出的大量数字进行比较分析，从中找 出其变化规律。 ?曲线图形式要求考生仔细观察坐标系所显示的数据信息，并且密切注 意交汇在坐标横轴和纵轴上的数字及单位。 ?柱形图形式要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断 事物的动态发展趋势，故考生应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表 旁边的提示说明与文字。 ?圆形图形式旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切 片的圆形图所传达的信息。考生应清楚掌握部分与整体，部分与部分 之间的相互关系，这种关系通常是以百分比的数字形式给出的。 ●列出各段的主题句。考生可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句， 为全文的展开铺平道路。 ●严格围绕主题句展开段落。 ●检查与修改。表格与图表写作的检查与修改应着重检查文章中所列举的信息 是否与图表所显示的信息一致。 表格和图表题型写作中常用的核心句型归纳如下： . ,… . ... . ,... . （ \ \ \ ）... . （\ \ ）…
英语四六级漫画类作文要点 第一段：描述图片，引出中心思想 开头句描述图片内容： From the cartoon /picture , we can see that ... It can be clearly seen /concluded from the picture that ... This picture vividly describes that ... The picture describes ... As shown/illustrated/can be seen/depicted/described in the picture, ... Let’s take a closer look at the drawing, ... What the drawing vividly depicts is that ... 引出文章中心句 The cartoon picture conveys the message that ... It is safe to figure out that ... The picture intends to inform us that ... What the picture presents is that ... The picture illustrates that ... The author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to ... What the cartoon conveys is ... The cartoon describes a very common phenomenon in our society that ... How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning ... 第二段：正反议论型 Funny as it seems, this picture poses us a controversial question: "..." Some people hold the view that ... Some people argue that ... People’s views on ... vary from person to person. Some hold that ... However, others believe that ... Attitudes towards ... vary from person to person.
国际上最有最有影响力的反腐败国际组织是“透明国际”，2016年的最新数据表明丹麦是世界第一清廉国。在丹麦没有腐朽的理念和文化。政府会大力对国民，公务员进行廉洁教育，丹麦那句“不要认为你有什么特殊，你和我们每个人都一样”的谚语就是平等的精神最好的诠释。我们都知道丹麦是福利性国家，丹麦国民通过交税可以获得免费的教育，医疗和养老金等社会福利。虽然高额税收几乎达到个人收入的50%，但社会福利体系最大限度得减少了“谋生型腐败”的可能性，也就是说，高福利大大压缩了腐败的边际收益。金钱的诱惑减少了，人们就更趋向于做他们感兴趣的工作。 中国是世界上最古老的文明之一。构成现代世界基础的许多元素都起源于中国。中国现在拥有世界上发展最快的经济，并正经历着一次新的工业革命。中国还启动了雄心勃勃的太空探索计划，其中包括到2020年建成一个太空站。目前，中国是世界最大的出口国之一，并正在吸引大量外国投资。同时，它也在海外投资数十亿美元。2011年，中国超越日本成为世界第二大经济体。 China is one of the most ancient civilizations across the world, from which many elements that construct the foundation of the modern world are derived. Now China has the world's fastest growing economy and is experiencing a new industrial revolution. It has also launched an ambitious space exploration plan, including the building of a space station by 2020. Currently, being one of the largest exporters in the world, China is attracting massive foreign investment Meanwhile, it has invested billions of dollars overseas as well. In 2011, China surpassed Japan, largest economic entity in the world. 为了促进教育公平，中国已投入360亿元，用于改造农村地区教育设施和加强中西部地区农村义务教育(compulsory education)。这些资金用于改善教学设施、购买书籍，使16万多所中小学受益。资金还用购置音乐和绘画器材。现在农村和山区的儿童可以与沿海城市的儿童一样上音乐和绘画课。一些为接受更好教育而转往城市上学的学生如今又回到了本地农村学校就读。 In order to promote education equity, China has invested 36 billion yuan to improve the education facilities in rural areas and strengthen rural compulsory education in the central and western regions. The funds is used to better the school's teaching facilities and purchase books, from which more than 160,000 middle and primary schools have gained benefits. The money is also spent on acquiring musical and painting instruments. Nowadays, children in rural and mountainous areas can have access to music and drawing lessons just like children in coastal cities. Some students who had once transferred to urban schools for better education now return to the local rural schools.
英语四六级写作万能句式大汇总 1、开头： Everything has a good side and a bad side, and ....is no exception。 万事万物有其两面性，而________也是如此。 As the proverb goes: "every coin has its two sides", ....is no exception。 俗语有云："万事万物都有两面性。" ________也不例外。 The discussion as to whether the ... is a blessing or a curse arouses most people's interests。 __________是好坏利弊问题引起了很多人的兴趣。 ..plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world。 ______ 尤为重要而引起当今社会的关注。 There comes a question: is it a blessing or a curse。 问题是：____是福是祸？ There is no denying that everything has one more face and ... is no exception。 不可否认，每一件事物都有其两面性，其实，______也不例外。 Everything in the world has its own two sides.Without exception, A has both advantages and disadvantages。 任何事情都有两面性，A也不例外，有其优势和劣势(利与弊)。 ....undoubtedly plays an increasing significant role in modern life。 不容置疑，_______在现代生活中不断显示出起重要性。 With the development of the society, ... Is increasingly important。 随着社会的发展，_______变得越来越重要。 The merits of this is obvious.。。 其好处显而易见。 2、原因： And I would like to present two explanations for this:
2013年6月大学英语四级作文范文 图画的内容和构图不难：父亲和男孩子的对话，孩子说“ Dad，I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon. （爸爸，我有点担心清除核武器这个问题）”，父亲则回答“ If you can empty the dustbin, you can do anything. (如果你能把垃圾桶倒掉，你就能坐好任何事情)” ，说话间，手指着垃圾桶。 这幅图画和2012年6月的六级漫画作文非常相似，当时的图中，也是两人对话，女儿和父亲。父亲问女儿：“ Hi, sweetie, how was your school today ? (嘿，小甜心，你在今天在学校过得怎么样？)” 女儿非常冷漠的回答：“Dad, you can read all about it on my blogs. (爹哋，你自己可以在我的博客上读到所有内容)”，然后呢，女儿拔腿出门，留下父亲一脸惊愕。 We can see from the illustration there is a father talking to his son. Having heard his son’s words “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him. Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking the big. Unquestionably, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other words, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesn’t know how to empty the dustbin? From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.” Aristotle once said. 范文1
关于英语四六级写作技巧之规范使用标点 冒号的用法 冒号表示停顿，其停顿时间比分号长比句号短。它可用逗号，有时也可用句号代替。尽管现在冒号的使用不如50到75年前频繁，但现在它使用仍很方便，因为它告诉读者其后仍是对上文进一步的陈述。冒号还能产生轻微的戏剧效果。 冒号常用于引出一个词、短语、或完整的句子(子句)来强调，举例解释，或证明刚才所说过的内容。 注意：冒号之后的词可用大写也可用小写字母开头。如果冒号之后的词是另一个完整句子的开始，则用大写字母开头。反之，如果冒号之后的词只是句子的一部分，则用小写字母开头。 例 May I offer you a suggestion: dont drive without your seat belts fastened. The thought continued to perplex him: Where will I go next? 用于引出一连串用来解释或强调已叙述过的内容。如： In the basement, he kept some equipment for his experiments: the test tubes, some chemical agents, three sun-lamps, and the drill. 冒号后常为缩排且不用引号、与全文分离的长引文。 President Jiang Zemin enjoys quoting the first line of
Lincolns Gettysburg address: Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in liberty and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
1-1 对立法: 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, 适用于有争议性的主题. 例如(e.g) [1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently. [2]. When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguments /statements , but (I tend to the former/latter ...) [3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They clai m/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether..... 1-2 现象法引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 . e.g [1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popul ar/wide/ worldwide concern. [2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into f ocus. ( has been brought to public attention) [3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly. ----- To be continued !! 1-3 观点法----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法. e.g: [1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/Chi na has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/popular than... [2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/ (be aware) that... [3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to......Now people be come increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ...... [4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that....... 1-4 引用法----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点! e.g: [1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon. This remark has been s hared by more and more people .
英语专业四级写作讲解第二讲问题解决 型作文专项训练 英语专业四级写作讲解 (共5讲)第二讲问题解决型作文专项训练.txt 时尚，就是让年薪八千的人看上去像年薪十万。我们总是要求男人有孩子一样的眼神，父亲一样的能力。一分钟就可以遇见一个人，一小时喜欢上一个人，一天爱上一个人，但需要花尽一生的时间去忘记一个人。本文由shadow081010贡献 doc文档可能在wap端浏览体验不佳。建议您优先选择txt，或下载源文件到本机查看。作业范文解析 is failure a bad thing different people hold different attitudes toward failure. someone regards failure as a heavy strike, after which he or she may lose heart and give up all efforts. others could never take failure seriously. they just ignore it as if nothing had happened. in my opinion, both attitudes are wrong.( 引出论点) first of all, people who regard failure as a heavy blow can hardly become successful.(提出第一分论点，指出那些视失败为大敌的人很难成功)those people are more likely to give up all efforts once encountering difficulties. in other words, they will give up all hopes and endeavors to pursue
大学英语四六级作文写作技巧 在大学英语教学中，教师必须要制定完善的教学方案，制定针对性的教学方案，尤其在四六级英语教学中，教师必须重视学生作文写作技巧的掌握，提升学生作文写作水平，使其可以在英语四六级考试中，得到更高的分数，以此提升大学英语专业学生的自信心。 目前，大学生在就业的时候，各个单位对于大学生英语四六级成绩的要求较高，甚至将其作为人才衡量标准之一，因此，大学英语教师必须重视学生英语四六级的考试成绩，引导学生掌握四六级作文写作技巧，提升学生的就业竞争能力。 一、大学生英语四六级作文写作问题与原因 目前我国部分大学生受心理因素的影响，不重视四六级作文写作，在写作的时候没有足够的词汇，虽然一些学生所掌握的英语词汇量较多，但是，无法将词汇或是句子正确应用在英语作文写作中，难以快速梳理语言，导致出现英语四六级作文写作问题。同时，部分大学生没有形成正確的认知，不配合教师英语作文知识的讲解，无法提升自身学习质量。 对于我国英语四六级考试而言，作文评分标准就是：学生所写的作文除了要符合题意之外，还要具有条理清楚、词汇运用灵活、作文结构丰富等特征，英语作文的字数必须要在125个单词左右，同时，教师还会将学生字迹工整程度作为评分标准，保证四六级考试的公平性。 二、大写英语四六级作文写作技巧 在大学英语教学中，教师必须重视学生作文写作技巧的掌握，提升学生的考试能力与应变能力。 第一，教师要全面分析大学生对于英语四六级写作知识的掌握情况，制定针对性的教学方案，帮助每一位大学生克服心理困难，树立正确的观念意识，提升大学生的自信心。同时，大学英语教师还要重视学生写作技巧的掌握，积极开展实践活动，改变自身的教学方式[1]。 第二，增加英语词汇量。大学英语四六级考试中，学生要想提升作文考试成绩，就要掌握丰富的词汇量，此时，教师需要引导学生掌握英语作文中普遍应用的词汇，也就是高级词汇，使学生可以简单的应对英语作文考试。例如：在2016年六月份英语四六级考试的时候，作文中出现了较多的短词汇，因此，在实际教学中，教师可以引导学生积累一些英语高级词汇，像是“如今”、“现在”等，为学生讲解两个词语的替换技巧。在传统的大学英语教学中，学生作文写作中英语的句型“为了....，应该....”为“In order to ，should”但是，此类词汇学生难以更好的应用作文写作中，因此，教师可以引导学生利用高级词汇表达，像是“For th e sake of”等高级词汇，使大学生可以全面了解英语词汇的英语方式，提升其作文写作