Score: 70

It Is Never Too Old To Learn

作文要求:In modern society, you may find that the old people over 70 are still learning English or computer. So what do you think of education? Is it a lifelong process or it stops when one graduates from school? Now write your composition according to the following topic and the outline: It Is Never Too Old To Learn 1. State the meaning of this saying 2. Explain it with examples 3. Draw a conclusion 截止日期:11-11-2013

It is never too old to learn

As the saying goes, we can continue to learn something when we graduated from school, such as studying language, musical instruments. If we are still learning over graduated from school, it can borden our horizon and rich life. In school, we only study limited knowledge, so we should learn something which we like in the future. "It is never too old to learn." I still love this saying. Just think of the matter of a over 60 women, Cindy, in beijing, she are stilling studying oral English and often communicated with foreigners. In the past, Cindy is not spoke English because she didn't study in the school. She descided to learn English in 40 year old when she couldn't communicate with the American by chance.

According to the saying and example, no matter how old we, we can go on learning something. It is a lifelong process when we graduates from school.

Professor's comments and suggestions:

1. This effort(努力)is just all right.

2. Your essay was right on target for this assignment.

3. Looking at the total words in the essay I have from you confirms my

forecast that the length would be somewhat shy of the mark(注意). You should strengthen the depth of this issue.

4. You have included some misspelled words. Always aim to have no more

than one misspelled word on each page.

5. Your work has exhibited scattered grammatical problems. Next time go

back over your work and correct your mistakes.

6. I have now observed some spelling and grammatical errors in your

6. I have now observed some spelling and grammatical errors in your

composition. Please consider these next time.

7. You solidified your grade(巩固成绩)by sending this in ahead of the

scheduled time.

Usage:

●Right on target:击中要害;命中目标。"On target" means something

meeting the objectives or requirements. Your research here was right on target.

●fool:作为动词,表示“戏弄;捉弄”的意思。调侃说法,说明作文写得有

问题,不是太长就是太短了,近似糊弄。